m4m (obv not grinding kd too xddd)
just picking random things that I find
01:57:867 (6,1) - little too far apart for a 1/4 jump
02:00:267 (2,3) - ^
02:08:267 (3,4,5,6,7) - rotate this a bit more towards 02:08:667 (8) - , improves flow a little
02:26:267 (5,6,7) - let this spread a little more (its only 150bpm and easier to read this way), same goes for 02:39:067 (5,6,7) -
02:34:267 (5,6,7,8) - jumps suit the situation better imo
02:42:667 (6) - maybe there is a better option for this? (maybe bend it a little like 02:43:067 (1) - )
02:47:467 (4) - NC?
03:44:215 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the close spacing makes it very misleading, jumps may happen here :^)
04:16:041 (5) - NC?
04:24:389 (5) - ^
05:02:051 (1,2,3) - little too incosistent spacing
05:04:889 (4,5) - too much of a good thing (1/4 jump)
05:46:240 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe decrease spacing just a little, this is a bit too extreme, same for 05:59:213 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
06:19:483 (5) - idk is this rankable?
09:27:809 (5) - this slider is heading the wrong way :v
09:52:440 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - wouldnt it be better to go jump vertically first?
10:27:809 (1) - not really creative anymore with the triples, they dont all have to be triangles right
10:32:072 (3,5,7) - and 10:37:125 (3,5,7) - incosistent spacing?
maybe make the ending of the flowey theme a little jumpier
the rest is too perfect for me to complain about, other than saying that the end of megalovania is undermapped :>