tyom wrote:

03:39:481 the direction the streams go here are pretty much unplayable, it would be luck rather than skill to pass them. Reading the change in positions of the stream would be pretty difficult even for a good HR player (somebody prove me wrong?).
The stream movements are highlighted in these images:

http://puu.sh/lL7Wd/e95e5ebc24.jpg I can`t really see any difference :/

http://puu.sh/lL7VG/e962e2fab5.jpg oh boy! that`s look unplayable

03:41:505 i'd change the slider directions here to flow a little better What is wrong with it?
03:45:970 i'd make the streams here line up end to end better, but still keep the spaces. Okay.
03:51:551 these triplets are okay in my opinion, make them a bit further apart. Okay.
04:13:737 the jump between the streams here doesn't flow well Don`t worry, it`s fine. Slider in the end makes it much easier.
05:26:714 this part is a bit too sharp on the stream imo, try to make this part flow better Fixed it a bit.
05:35:365 i'd make the stream line up a little with the '8' circle That`s actually a good idea.

I'm not an experienced modder or mapper by any means, but these are changes I would make. Otherwise, great effort on the map man! I like it.
Confirm my thoughts with somebody more experienced, however i think these changes are right. Request a mod from Jenny since shes made a few DF maps.

1. 00:17:505 (1) - umm why NC?
2. 00:50:714 (7) - symmetry please.
3. 01:22:946 (1,2) - switch NC.
4. 01:28:388 (1) - ah no need NC.
5. 01:40:598 (2,3) - really hard to read imo.
6. 00:49:598 (5) - NC
7. 02:14:993 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - make them consistent with 00:49:598 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)? or if you don't want, remove NC on 02:15:272 (1)
8. 02:23:295 (1,2) - switch NC.
9. 02:27:273 (5,1) - switch NC.
10. 02:53:784 (1) - remove NC.
11. 03:39:481 (4,1,4,1) - are you sure? players are like carry 2k combo already here.
12. 03:41:784 (1,2) - switch NC.
13. 04:32:016 (1) - remove NC.
14. 04:58:528 (6,1) - switch NC.
15. 05:00:760 - oh my, I noticed something ctrl+something the whole part?

P A N wrote:

1. 00:17:505 (1) - umm why NC? Missclick, fixed :p
2. 00:50:714 (7) - symmetry please. Okay.
3. 01:22:946 (1,2) - switch NC. Done.
4. 01:28:388 (1) - ah no need NC. I`ll keep it, seems fine to me.
5. 01:40:598 (2,3) - really hard to read imo. I`ll keep that too.
6. 00:49:598 (5) - NC Okay.
7. 02:14:993 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - make them consistent with 00:49:598 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)? or if you don't want, remove NC on 02:15:272 (1)
8. 02:23:295 (1,2) - switch NC. Done.
9. 02:27:273 (5,1) - switch NC. Done.
10. 02:53:784 (1) - remove NC. It`s fine for me too.
11. 03:39:481 (4,1,4,1) - are you sure? players are like carry already here. Yes, I am evil
12. 03:41:784 (1,2) - switch NC. Done.
13. 04:32:016 (1) - remove NC. Okay.
14. 04:58:528 (6,1) - switch NC. Okay.
15. 05:00:760 - oh my, I noticed something ctrl+something the whole part? Actually yes. Remaped.

good luck

Thank you for mod!

Battle wrote:

m4m z

[General]
Why isn't your background a re-colored w/e like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/316050 .3. Because i love ruin stereotypes :p

[I lost my mod halfway through the song and now I'm starting over]
00:07:179 (1,2,3) - overlap doesn't look good, you do this nowhere else in the beginning so change Fixed.
00:19:179 (5,6) - You stack here while you stack nowhere else in beginning, change for consistency Fixed.
00:42:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix curve, it doesn't really look round and looks more blob-y Fixed.
00:52:946 (6,7) - Blanket improve Improved.
00:58:249 (5,1) - Overlap doesn't look clean enough, reposition 1 to overlap better or just not overlap Fixed.
01:08:295 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda awkward since it's like, a sharp-ish angle n stuff, you should make it more smoother Fixed.
01:30:900 (4,5) - Things like this is basically identical to the thing before kiai, why are you putting 3/4 sliders now? doesn't really make sense, this applies to this section It`s for variation. Seems fine to me.
01:55:876 (7,1) - Blanket can improve Improved.
02:07:458 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream becomes pretty meh after 5 because what you're trying to do after it Fixed.
02:26:575 (2,1) - There's like, no way to make this overlap look good lol Fixed.
02:43:250 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pretty sharp, maybe make little smoother Fixed.
04:11:016 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda became ugly all of a sudden .-. Seem fine to me
04:20:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make a little smoother looking or sth Okay.
04:34:249 (3,4) - What rhythm are you following .-. vocals start on red tick, yet this isn't done since you're on a 1/8 for the repeat for whatever reason Fixed.

gl with your map Thank you! :3

shurito1sao wrote:

Hey m4m Hey o/


00:28:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesn't really goes well with the flow u made. maybe this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4126083 I`ll keep it stacked.


Same 01:22:528 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - make those triple like -> like these 01:25:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - u did here. Why? That looks fine to me :c

02:23:784 (6,1) - the long slider is off flow try something like -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4126118

i think the hp drain is a bit to low maybe on 7 ? I am evil, but that`s is too much, even for me

and try to use AiMod it has 6 things to tell you. one thing isnt really needed. and that is the 2nd diff cause your map is already 5 minutes or higher.

but it has sometimes good things to tell you Okay.

04:39:830 - you have here 2 sv on one line delete one. Thanks, deleted.


thats all

Great map. good luck getting it ranked.

1. 00:12:342 (4,5) - really unexpected big jump here coming from the previous similar sections and a harder to aim pattern, would reduce this a bit
2. 00:12:760 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - maybe add a custom drum hitsound or something in the diff aswell? Kinda stood out when playing when you get these drum focused parts like here it still sounds the same as the rest of the map and makes it kinda harder to get into the rythm, but might be just me like 00:21:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here aswell it would make it easier to stream since you kinda hear the drums a lot better and when to switch
3. 00:14:993 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - not gonna be played the way you intented it to be played with smooth curves and all because of the slider leniency, basicly plays like 3 linear lines which kinda bad currently, replacing 4 so it blankets 3 already helpls a lot but would look into this pattern a bit more
4. 00:19:040 (4) - maybe place a bit to the right so its more in the flow and it reduces that sudden huge jump a bit
5. 00:22:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe soft hitsounds for these? kinda loud af atm for just a piano with the normals :/
6. 00:37:598 (3,4,1,2,3) - really insane to hit 1-2-3 here because like 00:37:877 (1) - is a huge flow break from the previous combo already and the movent of 1-2-3 is another one seems a bit too much since theres noting really that stands out in the song to warrent it imo, would maybe place 00:37:877 (1) - more to the left to reduce the distance a bit so it makes it a bit easier to hit
7. 00:46:807 (1) - ,00:50:714 (1) - maybe hitsound it (could do something with the drum since it has a louder drum then the rest)
8. 01:21:970 (1,1) - damn thought this was gonna be 1/2 with the huge spacing, maybe control + g 01:22:528 (1,2) - ?
9. 01:31:598 (2) - maybe move this a bit to 4 so its mirrored with 01:31:458 (1,3) - kinda like you did here 00:14:435 (3,4,5,6) - looks a bit nicer
10. 02:03:132 (4,1,2,3) - same as previous mentioned pattern here the double adjustment here from 02:03:132 (4,1,2,3) - is a bit too much, bit smoother flow/direction of 123 would help alot
11. Rest irc

Wishkey wrote:

Sup man been a long time! Hello!
Saw this in modreq so here it goes Yay \o/

Call of Bravery

1. 00:12:342 (4,5) - really unexpected big jump here coming from the previous similar sections and a harder to aim pattern, would reduce this a bit Reduced!
2. 00:12:760 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - maybe add a custom drum hitsound or something in the diff aswell? Kinda stood out when playing when you get these drum focused parts like here it still sounds the same as the rest of the map and makes it kinda harder to get into the rythm, but might be just me like 00:21:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here aswell it would make it easier to stream since you kinda hear the drums a lot better and when to switch No drum sounds :p
3. 00:14:993 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - not gonna be played the way you intented it to be played with smooth curves and all because of the slider leniency, basicly plays like 3 linear lines which kinda bad currently, replacing 4 so it blankets 3 already helpls a lot but would look into this pattern a bit more I changed that in a bit different way.
4. 00:19:040 (4) - maybe place a bit to the right so its more in the flow and it reduces that sudden huge jump a bit I`ll keep this pattern here
5. 00:22:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe soft hitsounds for these? kinda loud af atm for just a piano with the normals :/ Nah, my custom normal sounds better xd
6. 00:37:598 (3,4,1,2,3) - really insane to hit 1-2-3 here because like 00:37:877 (1) - is a huge flow break from the previous combo already and the movent of 1-2-3 is another one seems a bit too much since theres noting really that stands out in the song to warrent it imo, would maybe place 00:37:877 (1) - more to the left to reduce the distance a bit so it makes it a bit easier to hit It`s completly fine. Not that much of a distance anyway.
7. 00:46:807 (1) - ,00:50:714 (1) - maybe hitsound it (could do something with the drum since it has a louder drum then the rest) Seems fine to me.
8. 01:21:970 (1,1) - damn thought this was gonna be 1/2 with the huge spacing, maybe control + g 01:22:528 (1,2) - ? I changed everything here, looks better now imo.
9. 01:31:598 (2) - maybe move this a bit to 4 so its mirrored with 01:31:458 (1,3) - kinda like you did here 00:14:435 (3,4,5,6) - looks a bit nicer No, because sounds are different.
10. 02:03:132 (4,1,2,3) - same as previous mentioned pattern here the double adjustment here from 02:03:132 (4,1,2,3) - is a bit too much, bit smoother flow/direction of 123 would help alot I changed flow here, looks better now \o/
11. Rest irc

GL man! Thank you senpai!

1. dragonforce drums are fast, having the claps on the red ticks would match the song, having them in a slower rhythm than the song feels a bit off - you get triples of snares between the hitounded claps and the snares in the song which is just weird. pretty much the only major problem as far as i'm concerned.
2. 00:35:086 (1) - slider shape seems a bit out of place in the middle of almost only simple curves, either use more of this type of slider or make this a simpler shape
3. 01:02:993 (1,1) - clean up the blanketing/interaction between these two
4. 01:05:226 (1) - remove the white node in between the two red ones, just makes it look worse and the sliderball path looks weird too when it goes back for a bit
5. 02:29:504 (1) - clean up that loop, it's not even symmetrical
6. 02:46:807 (1) - not a big fan of that little wiggle at the end, maybe something more like this idk i suck at sliders ok why am i only pointing out sliders
7. 03:37:458 (4) - having these as circles would be cool since the staccato sounds a lot different to 03:36:342 (4) - (if you can find a way to make it easily readable, but since it's the same rhythm as before that should be doable)
8. 03:43:737 (1,2,3,7,8,9) - i think you could distinguish these more from the other triple patterns since the slide on the lead guitar really stands out, space them out or something. also i think making 03:44:016 (4,5,6) - parallel would look nicer
9. 04:19:458 (1) - as with one of the othes before i don't really like the wiggle at the end

Osuology wrote:

ayy it mah boi back at it again with the dragonforce maps Yay, hai


00:04:947 (1,2,5,6) - You do an overlap thing that you proceed never to do again consistently. I would recommend either to keep in mind where these overlaps were in the structure of the measure and repeat those throughout the map, or do the opposite and remove them. Yay, fixed.

00:06:342 (2,1,1) - As above, this is a little different but the same should really apply. I don`t know what you mean, but i fixed something lol

00:06:621 (3) - Why different slider shape? Doesn't really belong here... It does, there is a different sound.

00:09:133 (1) - Lasse slider TM lasse will now proceed to sue you for using trademarked property. wut?

00:13:877 (1) - This section kinda comes off as a surprise like "oh now the map's about blankets everywhere?" Why is this a problem? xd

00:31:737 (1) - Starting from this section all sliders end on the wrong location so... RIP LOL WTF, THANKS!

00:38:156 (4,5,6,7) - Stuff like this doesn't really belong in the respective aesthetic style you have established so far. huh, why? it looks nice :p

00:42:900 (1) - This section is WAY too calm for what the song shows. Your map makes this out to be an extremely easy section, which goes hard on any structure shown in the map. Yay, remapped!

00:53:365 (2,1) - Again, not consistent with your current aesthetic style. it is -.-

I can tell the same error is repeated throughout the map, try to polish all these issues out throughout the entire map, and if I successfully make it into BNG I will recheck. :O Good luck with BN test :3