1. 00:22:807 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ou can make a 6-pointed star with these sliders like the example > http://puu.sh/lV3MZ.jpg?
2. 00:25:040 (1) - move to x480 y112
3. 00:42:900 (1,2,3,4,5,3,4,5,6) - these sliders are all with an irregular position, it causes bad flow over the gameplay, you could set for example to 2 inversely proportional sliders as in the example > http://puu.sh/lV484.jpg
4. 01:09:691 (1) - move to x236 y276
5. 01:41:923 (2) - centralizes this note
6. 01:40:109 (7) - move to x304 y256
7. 01:40:249 (8) - move to x464 y240
8. 01:53:505 (1,2,3) - move to x304 y288
9. 02:13:319 (3,4) - slider iregular position fix.
10. 03:11:365 (1,2) - 1/8 ooo 03:11:365 (1) - > 03:11:330 - , 03:11:505 (2) - > 03:11:470 -
11. 04:09:551 (2,3) - fix distance between 2 and 3
12. 04:42:900 (1) - give some distance.And remember inversely proportional sliders 04:43:179 (2) -
13. 04:44:574 (3,4,5,6,7) - blanket with 04:43:876 (7) -
14. 04:47:783 (7) - more distance.
15. 04:51:830 (1,2,3,1,2) - , 04:54:063 (1,2,3,4) - about slider, same as .
16. 05:01:876 (6) - blanket with 05:01:318 (3) -

iHuenchun wrote:

How it is a Dragonforce's song,you should put in the clap hitsound in the red stick.(Except from 02:54:621 (1) - until 03:31:458 (1) )
Use slider tick rate in 2 and add clap hitsound( copying the normal-hitclap.wav and rename like normal-slidertick.wav but don't delete the your actual normal-slidertick.wav) inside the sliders tick only the red stick(inside the fast part)

DaniilLillifag wrote:

yo!!! mod as promised

discusting language incoming

[box=215 bpm dragonforce? not canonical]00:05:923 (6,3) - сделай здесь бланкет

00:09:133 (1,2) - пофикси бланкет (слайдер чуть выше-левее подними)

00:14:714 (5,3) - мб стакнуть ноту с концом кикслайдера?

00:16:109 (1,2) - вот на этих слайдерах мне почему кажется что надо бы сделать такие же стримчики/кикслайдеры/репиты как на 00:15:202 (2,3,4) -

00:15:551 (5) - 00:16:388 (2) - если тебе не нравится идея выше, фиксани этот плохой оверлап

00:15:830 (1,3) - ^

00:31:458 (1) - подвинь конец слайдера правее для большей симметрии со следующим слайдером

00:35:086 (1,1) - наци стак

00:38:435 (1) - подвинь конец слайдера на 282 145 чтобы точно было видно что он стакается с нотой 00:38:226 (5) - (стак ломанный просто)

00:40:109 (3) - подвинь на 126 95 для большей симметрии с 00:39:551 (1) -

00:41:784 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - такие стримы (два репита+стрим) к концу почти шестиминутной карты начнут надоедать имо. Думаю ты можешь можешь юзать и обратный метод: сначала стримы а потом репиты. Но ТОЛЬКО НА НЕКОТОРЫХ (половину тех что есть на примере выделенного можешь оставить)

00:43:179 (2) - 00:44:016 (1) - слишком близко, подвинь последний слайдер пониже

00:54:900 (4,4) - проблемы со стаком?

01:09:691 (1) - конец слайдера за пределами поля, переделай его чтобы такого не было

01:23:086 (1,4) - наци стак

01:23:923 (4,2) - ^

01:41:505 (1,2) - вот об этом я тебе уже говорил раньше

01:59:155 (6,3) - стак слетел?

02:17:783 (3,1) - ^

02:17:225 (1,4) - ^

02:20:574 (1,4) - ^

02:24:760 (5) - стакни с 02:25:736 (3) -

02:26:574 (2,1) - стак (альзо сохрани стак с 02:27:830 (3) - )

02:29:504 (1) - подвинь красную точку на слайдере на 125 83 для большей симметрии с 02:28:946 (1) -

02:30:621 (1,1) - ещё один классный стак, фикси

02:38:993 (3,1) - сделай здесь бланкет

02:41:086 (2,1) - подними ноту выше для лучшего бланкета

02:48:202 (2,4) - стак слетел, пофикси

02:52:667 (4) - 02:53:504 (1) - стак

02:55:179 (2,1) - плохой оверлап

03:11:365 (1,2,3,4) - 03:12:202 (1,2,3) - 03:12:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - вот из-за ломанного ритма на первом паттерне эти ноты будет сложновато прочитать имо. Лучше здесь слайдеров наделать

03:32:574 (1,1) - наци стак

03:37:457 (4) - сделай этот слайдер кривым чтобы он контрастировал с другим кривым слайдером 03:36:342 (4) -

03:46:528 (1,2,1,2) - тут такие странные звуки что даже не определишь что это, 1/6 это или 1/4. Но по моему даже тот же 1/3 здесь работает куда лучше чем 1/4

03:54:621 (1) - 03:55:318 (1) - плохой оверлап, либо получше его сделай, подвинув 03:55:318 (1,1) - правее, либо анстакай это дело

03:55:877 (3) - стакни с 03:54:900 (1,2,3) - (я понимаю что из-за эдитора стак некрасивым будет выглядить но всё же)

04:38:016 (4) - подвинь ноту левее для лучшего бланкета с 04:38:434 (1) -

05:07:178 (4) - сделай здесь трипл (там и так по барабанам подходит), а то этот трипл 05:08:295 (5,6,7) - одиноко выглядит

05:14:713 (3) - мб вот так здесь сделать? для симметрии

05:15:620 - добавь сюда ноту чтобы трипл 05:16:109 (6,7,8) - не скучал

05:21:202 - ^

05:25:667 - ^

05:36:202 (2) - 05:37:039 (1) - слишком близко, постарайся раздвинуть это

05:37:387 (6,4) - вот очень хочется чтобы ты это стакнул, попробуй как-нибудь приподнять 05:37:666 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -

good luck Спасибо!

DavidEd wrote:

Because I'm nice, and don't have a map for M4M, I'll do this NM for you as requested ;3 Thank you!

• - 00:08:156 (6) - Move this to x:356 y:28 so you don't need to have that off-stacking.
  and after that you can move 00:08:295 (1) - down to x:308 y:184 so it goes along with the two upcoming sliders (since thats what i belive you wanted to do) I really like how it looks now
  
  - 00:12:202 (3,2) - Stack these, makes it look better Done
  
  - 00:13:877 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - I think this is a better structure https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6231746 I did something different :p
  
  - 01:04:667 (1,2) - This flow isn't comfortable. I'd rather have (2) go to the left so it wont overlap with the previous long slider either. I saw you used this flow later on in the map, but here it wont do so good. I`ll keep it
  
  - 01:05:226 (1,1) - Blanket Done
  
  - 01:31:458 (1,2,3,4) - I'd think this would look better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6231804 I`ll keep these too
  
  - 01:43:458 (1,1) - Did you want to blanket this? Not that big of a deal in my book. But I'm assuming others will point it out. Done
  
  - 01:51:551 (1,3) - These two are pretty close. Move (3) down to x:100 y:144 Done
  
  - 01:55:458 (3,1) - Did you want to blanket these? Done
  
  - 02:01:597 (1,2) - ^ Done
  
  - 02:24:481 (3,4) - Nerf this jump as there's no strong beat here Done
  
  - 03:11:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd suggest using a consistent ds for slow parts to clear confusion Okay
  
  - 03:29:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^i`ll keep these ones
  
  - 03:53:086 (1,3) - Did you want to blanket these? Done
  
  - 03:55:737 (2) - Missed clap here Yeah, added

Not bad, can't read ar10 so had edit to ar9 xD
Hope fully this was of any help. GL! Thanks!

Vannyha wrote:

Ну я пытался
𝕯𝕽𝕬𝕲𝕺𝕹𝕱𝕺𝕽𝕮𝕰
01:13:877 (1) - ctrl + G Неа, хуже будет
01:21:412 (1) - Можно немного искривить Я тут всё поправил, теперь лучше
01:25:598 (3,4,5) - Можно попробовать ctrl + g, или эти 01:26:156 (3,4,5) - там всё ок
02:16:179 (1) - Попробуй заменить на какой-нибудь красивый слайдер, а то спиннеры перед киаи как то надоедают. Свободу спинерам!
02:37:318 (1) - Побольше бы таких слайдеров, а то од один угловатый на весь трек. Ну типа заменить некоторые скруглённые на зауглённые.Допустим эти 03:21:411 (1,2) - там есть несколько)
04:32:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - На таких стримах, в начале, можно попробовать заменить на короткие слайдеры, типа такого (Порядок 1-3-2-4) Не пойдёт, я везде использовал другой стиль стримов

ihatedwang wrote:

Well, I said I'll try my best to give some feedback with my limited knowledge (in short, the really pointless details that no one else found problematic), so I apologize if I misread an intention (note placement, pattern choice, etc), or i'm just repeating stuff other's have said. Anyways... how do these codes work.... Your mod is fine, chill
My opinions and crappy ideas :/00:22:807 - I believe someone mentioned this, but the positioning is just a tad off. I think it will look nicer moved a tiny bit to the right. It doesn't have to be directly under the 8, but just a bit closer to it. Okay, fixed

00:33:621 - Did you update this beatmap and put a note here?? I marked this spot off as it was missing a note, and I wasn't sure if it was intended or not, but I just wanted to point it out again. I don`t know, that note always was there

00:46:249 I marked this timing again for a missing note in stream... I guess the map was updated... Same! XD

01:21:272 - This is 100% opinion, but the end of the slider just looks funky to me... I have changed that, thanks

02:36:690 - Personally not a fan of this pattern. I don't know why, maybe cause i suck at this game, but the pattern just feels really awkward to play. Here's this stupid idea I had, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6248991, but if no one else found this to be an issue, then rip me. noob issues Your example is pretty nice, but I love that pattern, so i`ll keep it.

03:51:550 - To me, these triplets don't fit well here. If you're mapping to the guitar, I think a stream will fit much better since the guitar is still playing between those triplets you have. They actually fit, try listening 25% speed.

04:03:550 - I feel like your 1 and 2 sliders are facing the wrong way. But maybe that's common in 6*+ maps. Ye, it is

04:11:643 - Just like that first comment i made, the reverse slider after the steam looks really off to me. A very slight movement to the left might ease my mind... That looks fine.

That was my noob "mod" (if you even want to call it that) and those were my opinions. All in all, I was probably being stupid and said somethings that didn't make sense. But anyways, gl with the map. I can't wait for it to get ranked! Never call yourself "noob" or anything else, just try getting better again and again, everyone does mistakes, noone is an exception! So cheer up! \o/

Ps. I hope to hell my timing points are linked..... or i'll just look even dumber. Everything is fine! Thank you for mod!

Zhuriel wrote:

hi there, from my queue. you were request #28 with a priority of 20, this is mod #8. (those numbers should tell you a bit about how much the song/map matters in my queue xd) HI! Amazing, thanks!

shitty htnf play cos i'm slow Lol, that`s a nice play, cmon.

not too much to say except nitpicking and i'm not too good at that so don't expect too much from this Alrighty :p

1. dragonforce drums are fast, having the claps on the red ticks would match the song, having them in a slower rhythm than the song feels a bit off - you get triples of snares between the hitounded claps and the snares in the song which is just weird. pretty much the only major problem as far as i'm concerned. I am pretty sure it`s fine
2. 00:35:086 (1) - slider shape seems a bit out of place in the middle of almost only simple curves, either use more of this type of slider or make this a simpler shape Seems fine to me
3. 01:02:993 (1,1) - clean up the blanketing/interaction between these two Done!
4. 01:05:226 (1) - remove the white node in between the two red ones, just makes it look worse and the sliderball path looks weird too when it goes back for a bit Okay
5. 02:29:504 (1) - clean up that loop, it's not even symmetrical Fixed a bit (and it`s not supposed to be symetrical XD
6. 02:46:807 (1) - not a big fan of that little wiggle at the end, maybe something more like this idk i suck at sliders ok why am i only pointing out sliders Fixed
7. 03:37:458 (4) - having these as circles would be cool since the staccato sounds a lot different to 03:36:342 (4) - (if you can find a way to make it easily readable, but since it's the same rhythm as before that should be doable) Nah, i like sliders here :p
8. 03:43:737 (1,2,3,7,8,9) - i think you could distinguish these more from the other triple patterns since the slide on the lead guitar really stands out, space them out or something. also i think making 03:44:016 (4,5,6) - parallel would look nicer That seems completly fine to me.
9. 04:19:458 (1) - as with one of the othes before i don't really like the wiggle at the end This one is okay.

can't really find too much except nitpicking sliders so i'll just give you a star cause nice map Thank you!!