1. Inner Oni (4.33 stars, 703 notes)
2. Muzukashii (2.96 stars, 463 notes)
3. Oni (3.72 stars, 594 notes)
4. Volt's Futsuu (2.15 stars, 288 notes)
5. Volt's Kantan (1.39 stars, 169 notes)

Quizmaegi wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue

Modding

[Inner Oni]

00:29:311 - k

00:29:609 ~ 00:30:205 - kkddkkk

00:42:921 ~ 00:44:510 - dddkdddkddkkdkdkd (1/4)

00:52:060 - d

00:52:258 - d

00:53:848 - d

00:56:828 - d

01:08:351 ~ 01:09:940 - d ddk d kdd kdddd

01:12:523 ~ 01:12:921 - kkddd

01:13:517 - k

01:18:583 - d

01:19:477 - d

01:19:676 ~ 01:19:874 - k d

01:20:868 - d

01:33:980 - d

01:40:437 - d

01:40:636 - d

01:59:113 - d

02:15:106 - D ?

Queue request

1. Uncheck "Enable Countdown" and "Widescreen support " from all diffs (Actually Inner Oni has both checked, Oni and Muzu has Countdown checked.
2. Make Inner Oni HP 6 OD 6, Oni HP 6 OD 5 and Muzu HP 5 OD 5.

-Anhedonia- wrote:

Queue request

General

1. Uncheck "Enable Countdown" and "Widescreen support " from all diffs (Actually Inner Oni has both checked, Oni and Muzu has Countdown checked.
2. Make Inner Oni HP 6 OD 6, Oni HP 6 OD 5 and Muzu HP 5 OD 5.

Inner Oni

1. 00:07:954 (3) - change to d so it sticks better to the "d d " done by the drums
2. 00:09:344 - add d for that ↑ reason
3. 00:10:934 - ↑
4. 00:12:523 (15,16,17) - change to ddd there are drums sounding there and contrasts with the k before there
5. 00:14:113 - same as before
6. 00:15:702 (25,26,27) - ↑
7. 00:17:291 - ↑
8. 00:26:530 - add d, so it flows better into the following note and also makes consistency with 00:25:238 - . Then, delete 00:26:629 (81,82,83) - and leave them as regular k k k (There isnt reasons to make them Finishers)
9. 00:28:815 (98,99,100,101) - leave that as ddk, there isnt any reason in the whole song to map 1/6 so dont force them just to make the diff look "harder"
10. 00:35:967 (7,8,9,10) - ↑
11. *strong suggestion* 00:34:974 - ~ 00:38:947 - map that section with the same rhythm you can hear in the spinner (d k ddk d kd dk)
12. 00:54:642 (99,100,101,102,103) - change those to ddd d k, so it flows better and stick to that japanese instrument sounding at the last note
13. 01:01:000 (130,131,132,133) - same as before, better remap all those notes ( 01:00:801 (129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - ) into k ddk dkd d K
14. 01:12:523 - from here on, add kkkkd so you follow the drums
15. 01:13:715 (183,184,185,186) - same as before, change to dkd
16. 01:32:987 (306,307,308,309) - delete those, remap into kkdkd
17. 01:36:762 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - delete, make these as regular ddd ddk
18. 01:46:695 (423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434) - delete x_x
19. 02:01:000 (508,509,510,511) - delete ..
20. 02:01:596 (513,514,515,516,517,518) - kkk kkk → dkd k d , so it flows better and stick to the japanese instrument

Oni

1. 01:01:993 - ~ 01:14:709 - This section is harder than it is in the Inner Oni diff xD make it easier (Or make Inner Oni harder...)
2. 01:31:993 (405,406) - there isnt reason to make them finishers, leave them as d d.
3. 01:43:318 (488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495,496) - same as before x_x
4. 01:50:073 (529,530,531,532,533,534) - ↑
5. 02:05:570 (621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629) - ↑
6. Very clean diff, its enjoyable to play, well done ♥

Muzukashii

1. 00:37:358 (72,73,74) - this triplet feels forced, please make it 1/2 d d
2. 00:38:947 (78,79,80) - ↑
3. 01:22:457 (103,104,105) - although this isnt hard at all, try keeping all 1/4 monocolor (ddd or kkk)
4. 01:27:424 - ~ 01:33:782 - avoid vocal mapping as the drums are taking the lead here (d k ddd k could be fine for this section)
5. 01:42:722 (187,188) - delete those two notes so you have a break (you have like 7 seconds full of notes without any break, thats too much lol)
6. 01:56:232 (10) - Uhm, well, it doesnt affect taiko gameplay but maaaaybe you should make that slider so it fits inside the screen xD

Volta wrote:

hi, i decided to mod this. But to get it ranked, you should add easier diffs (kantan & futsuu) because this set don't have standard diffs. i can GD if you can't make it tho

aside from that, there are many issues in the map. i'll point out later.

Volta wrote:

[General]
Background
do you have larger BG? 1366x768 is best. or 1024x768 is also ok. your bg resolution is 1023x767 and some people might complaint about that.

Metadata
the correct title is: ハジマリノトキ , put Hajimari no Toki in Romanised Title instead.
this song is from visual novel onimari. pls put in the source: 鬼まり。～鬼が夢見し常の世に、至る幼き恋のはじまり～
and put in the tag: OniMari, Oni ga Yumemishi Tsune no Yo ni Itaru Osanaki Koi no Hajimari
might aswell add to tag: 130cm (game publisher)

Spread
Oni is too close with Inner, while Muzu is too easy. and the structure is quite inconsistent, i would suggest to remap Muzu and Oni. Because your mapset features a Muzukashii and an Inner / Ura, make sure your Oni map is a reasonable stepping stone between them. Maybe i'll give some clue in my specific diff mod, but first make sure you read some useful link for taiko mapping here and here! you might as well try to modding other people's map to gain some insight about well-structured map and that is definitely will increase your mapping skill. you can learn how to mod here

[Muzukashii]
00:06:364 ~ 00:19:080
you can add d for the drum sound in a place like 00:07:755 - and 00:10:934 - it's ok for muzu player and above

00:19:080 ~ 00:22:258 - pls make up what you want to follow here: drum, instrument, beat, background sound, or others. and usually Muzu don't use triplet with different colors. some suggestions:
00:19:477 - the song don't have noticable sound here, delete.
it's better to add d at 00:20:073 - and 00:20:172 - to make triplet d for the sake of spread and to fits the drum better.
00:20:470 - add d
00:20:669 - change to k, then delete 00:20:868 and 00:21:066 -
00:21:662 (21) - change to k and move to 00:21:464 - this way will fits the instrument better
here's what it'll look like:


00:22:258 ~ 00:46:099 (kiai) - you stick to the beat for the kiai. the problem is it will hurts the spread a lot and might be quite boring. it's ok to make the kiai denser and make some 1/4 triplet. but you also need to create a 2/1 rest moment (basically currently there is no break in the kiai). and at least create some consistencies with the second kiai and maybe with some variation. i'll give some example in the 2nd kiai.

00:49:278 ~ 01:01:993 - quite good. just minor things in this section.
00:56:232 - add d here for consistency with 00:49:874 -
00:59:212 (23) - move to 00:57:623 -
01:01:795 - delete this and give finisher to 01:01:993 -

01:01:993 ~ 01:14:709
01:06:960 - probably not needed. delete?
01:12:523 - make k triplet here to fits the drum
01:13:318 - pls delete this for longer break.

01:14:709 ~ 01:27:424
hmmm better move 01:15:503 - to 01:15:305 - to follow the drum. and move 01:16:298 - to 01:16:099 - again, make sure what you want to follow to the entire section. beat or drum.
01:26:629 - delete this pls. no have sound

01:27:424 ~ 01:56:033 - (2nd kiai)
avoid too long 1/2 such as 01:31:795 (143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - and the so very long 01:42:920 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - use some 1/4 triplet and rest moment instead. example:
- 01:29:411 - change to k and add k at 01:29:311 - that will give contrast feeling with 01:27:921 -
- 01:30:404 (138) - move to 01:31:596 - , add k at 01:31:695 - , and delete 01:32:391 -
and try to be consistent with similar stanzas unless the music is really different.
01:52:457 - can make triplet kkk here

ending
01:56:232 (10) - this is slider is mappable. actually you better map it to make better spread with oni
02:08:848 (1) - well, better start this spinner at 02:08:947 -

[Oni]
try to make the oni a reasonable stepstone between Muzu and Inner. that being said, avoid longish 1/4 pattern such as 00:28:020 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - 00:31:199 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - , 00:35:967 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - , 00:44:510 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - , etc.
it's ok to have 2 or 3, but don't overused it and give some rest moment after using it. i would suggest the longest 1/4 pattern is just quintuplet.

the amount of note used for this oni should be between Muzukashii and Inner Oni. currently Oni use 641 notes and inner 699 note. but Muzukashii only use 389 notes. so try to use only around 500~550 notes for the oni.

well, my suggestion is just try to make this easier.

[Inner Oni]
00:21:861 - map the drum? (make kkkkd)
00:27:027 (87) - change to d will flow better here
00:29:411 - remove finisher.
00:33:384 - change to d can accentuate the end of vocal. same thing with 01:51:265 (456) -
00:42:921 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - i don't hear anything in 1/3 beat here... this is incorrect snapping. change pattern pls. use 1/4 snap divisor
01:10:735 (168,169,170,171) - this is so awkward. move 01:10:834 - to 01:10:934 - ?
02:08:848 (1) - start spinner at 02:08:947 -


this still needs a lot of work. but good luck there! i hope my mod is helpful (i'm bad at explaining things). for kantan and futsuu, i'll try to make them and tell you how to put it in your map later. have some loli first.

loli

Jerry wrote:

weyheyehyeyeey sorry about the severe delay in modding this!

[General]

• Repeating what Volta pointed out about the Background resolution. Your current background resolution is at 1023x767, which will most likely cause your map to be disqualified. Change the size to 1366x768. Here, I resized it for you. Just replaced this BG with your current one.

1. There are two unnecessary OSB files in your map's folder. Delete them.
   

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:20:470 (98,99) - Swap these two notes, it matches the music better
   
   
2. 01:23:649 - You're missing a note here. Add a don here to keep it consistent with the similar part before this at 01:22:060 -
   
   
3. 01:40:139 - From here all the way to 01:44:907 -, there's several triplets and a continuous 1/2 d k d k pattern with no breaks. I suggest you add some breaks in between the notes of this long pattern because in Muzukashii diffs, continuous patterns are a bit hard for the level. Try deleting
   01:41:530 - and 01:43:119 -
   
   
4. 01:55:238 - ^Same applies for this. I recommend adding some breaks here by deleting 01:57:424 - and 01:59:013 -
   
   
5. 02:07:656 - kkk here sounds unnatural with the music. Move this kat over to 02:07:457 -, it flows more naturally
   
   
6. 02:08:450 - ^Same, move this over to 02:08:252 -

[Oni]

1. 00:37:159 (120) - Change this to kat, gotta keep the consistent kat rhythm with 00:33:980 (99,100) -, 00:34:775 (104,105) - and 00:35:570 (109,110) -
   
   
2. 01:25:437 - I suggest adding a kat here to accompany the vocal note in the music here so that the pattern flows better
   
   The slider velocity is at 2.74, which is unrankable. Change it to 1.40

[Inner Oni]

1. 01:19:676 (218,219) - Swap these so that it follows the same consistency of the kat rhythm with 01:18:881 -
   
   
2. 01:43:020 (389) - Delete this so that the flow of the note structure follows the vocal notes of the music better

That's all from me~
You should be able to get this ranked with a few more mods because overall, it's quite well mapped. Good luck!

Chocola_2287 wrote:

Hi from queue

General

As other modder said, the BG resolution is weird, plz resize it.
I don't know if it is rankable with Muzu - inner oni... (It is rankable with futsuu - inner oni)
Red line should be placed at the 1st note of the map
2nd kiai end at 01:52:854 ? (all 3 diffs)

Muzu

OD4?
00:22:060 k? fit the vocal
00:28:616 ~ 00:30:205 too easy, add some 1/4 plz (the 1/2s are awkward for me)
I think 1st kiai can stop at 00:34:974
spinner start at 00:46:099 , end at 00:47:689
01:01:497 and 01:01:795 k ?
01:07:556 d
01:12:523 & 01:12:623 k (follow SE)
01:19:477 (95) - move to 01:19:278
01:19:676 d
01:27:225 & 01:28:616 k (1st is vocal , 2nd is pitch)
01:29:808 d
2ns kiai note spread is very bad... partly easy and partly insane
spinner should start from 02:08:748 (78) -

Oni

SV is bugged
00:20:967 & 00:21:265 k ? (SE)
00:21:464 d ? (^)
this fits much more than current map
00:30:503 k
00:31:199 (82,83,84,85,86) - ? I think it does not fit the song with these note, delete 82,83,86?
01:40:238 ~ 01:51:265 suddenly so easy? So weird
spinner should start from 02:08:748

Inner Oni

00:33:285 (143) - d
00:33:384 (144) - spinner start
00:46:099 (80) - spinner?
01:19:278 d
01:19:378 + 01:19:477 - delete
01:19:676 (217,218) - swap
01:51:066 (454) d
01:51:265 (455) - start slider
01:53:649 (458) - k? (high pitch)
01:59:808 (492) - k?
spinner should start from 02:08:748

The mapset has a lot of improvement can be made, probably will recheck later.
Hope the mod can help u.

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Sorry for being late ;w;
Just few points
Nice song

[General]
Nice

[Muzukashii]
00:17:489 - why not d?

00:20:668 - high pitch,change to k

00:26:827 - a bit empty here,but this is just muzukashii,nvm

00:32:986 - change to kkk?(drum sound)

00:52:456 - a bit high pitch,change to k

01:24:840 - add d here

01:30:403 - ^

01:44:907 - this bar is so empty ;w;

[Oni]
00:27:622 - here I suggest change to ddd

00:33:085 - add d

00:53:847 - high pitch,change to k

00:58:814 - ^

01:14:708 - Nice hitsound in this part

01:20:171 - drum sound?

01:25:337 - add d

01:31:198 - maybe change to k

01:32:191 - this bar again so empty

01:49:675 - high pitch,change to k

02:07:158 - 1/4 drum sound again

[Inner Oni]
00:26:132 - remove this,no sound here

00:55:238 - high pitch,change to k

01:14:211 - drum sound here

01:16:993 - according to the bgm,it's high pitch,so change to k

01:37:754 - change to k

02:01:893 - drum sound here

02:08:549 - 1/6 sound here may make the map more challenging?

Good Luck
Nice map

Ppuskalin wrote:

From My Queue

[General]
Nothing

[Volt's Kantan]
00:55:635 (42) - Change This To k

01:06:363 (55,56) - Ctrl+G

01:31:794 (27) - Change This To d

[Volt's Futsuu]
00:32:986 (36) - k Here

01:01:993 (90) - Add Finish Here

01:27:423 (149) - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:45:503 (140,141,142) - dkd

01:14:311 (86) - d

[Oni]
00:45:999 (182) - Delete And 00:46:099 (182) - Add Finish

01:01:993 (224) - Add Finish Here

01:27:324 (347) - Delete And 01:27:423 (347) - Add Finish

[Inner Oni]
00:33:384 (145) - Add Finish Here

01:13:714 (187) - Change This To k

02:15:105 (1) - Delete This

Good Luck With Rank

Ppuskalin wrote:

From My Queue

[General]
Nothing

[Volt's Kantan]
00:55:635 (42) - Change This To k

01:06:363 (55,56) - Ctrl+G

01:31:794 (27) - Change This To d

[Volt's Futsuu]
00:32:986 (36) - k Here

01:01:993 (90) - Add Finish Here ups forgotten

01:27:423 (149) - ^

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hajimari no Toki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 20669
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Hajimari No Toki
TitleUnicode:ハジマリノトキ
Artist:Rita
ArtistUnicode:Rita
Creator:Sharkyy
Version:Volt's Futsuu
Source:鬼まり。～鬼が夢見し常の世に、至る幼き恋のはじまり～
Tags:OniMari, Oni ga Yumemishi Tsune no Yo ni Itaru Osanaki Koi no Hajimari, 130cm, Volta
BeatmapID:878510
BeatmapSetID:382117

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Traditional anime.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Volt's Kantan]
00:11:926 - keep it smooth and nice by remove this note and all note will be fine just simply remove this note because this part don't really need this note. well it will be too plain 4/1 don.
00:53:251 - you may remove this note as well it's like ^ it's fine to give an accent to the vocal
00:58:019 - same ^ ^

[Volt's Futsuu]
00:56:827 (80,81) - Ctrl+G sounds good
01:58:019 (239,240) - ^ it's fine coz (240) has high pitch

Nepuri wrote:

From Queue!

Volt's Futsuu

01:07:953 (105) ~~ k maybe, because of the markant sound [i]d is fine to make 01:08:350 - more clear
02:00:403 (245,246,247) - dkd because guitar pitch is falling? nice

Sorry for the Scrape-barrel mod >_<

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Title:Hajimari No Toki
TitleUnicode:ハジマリノトキ
Artist:Rita
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Creator:Sharkyy
Version:Volt's Futsuu
Source:鬼まり。～鬼が夢見し常の世に、至る幼き恋のはじまり～
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Raediaufar wrote:

hello ^^ requested from the queue. Let's start

[Oni]

click

00:31:397 (84,85,86,87) - dkkd ?
00:43:218 - add d here, seems it missing something if you not add anything here
00:43:715 (166,167) - ctrl + g this, more balanced to the pitch
00:43:715 (166,167) - this part seems off sync try this:

00:44:510 (171) - this is big K
00:46:297 - add spinner until 00:47:688 -
01:20:072 (313,314,315,316,317) - dkddk is more fit
01:33:483 - add k, I found it more match to the beat
01:36:563 (400,401,402,403,404) - kdkdd more fit to the sound
01:44:708 - add k
02:05:767 (575) - change to k because of snare drum
02:06:562 (580) - ^
02:06:960 (582,583) - ^
02:07:258 - add k here
02:07:655 - add d
02:07:755 (587) - change to d
02:08:649 (594) - just delete this, I found it weird because next 1/4 is spinner so I think a break here is necessary

[Inner Oni]

click

00:25:437 (80) - change to d
00:25:834 (82,83,84) - dkk seems more fit
00:27:921 (99) - delete, I don't think to "death stream" over here, the sound is just uhh like not really continuous and need a break
00:28:020 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - try kdkdkdd here, it's moooore fit to the drum sound
00:28:914 (107) - delete this, seems off from the beat
00:37:159 (14,15,16) - kdd
00:39:841 (35) - delete, I think this is off the beat even tho there are sound but I found it's just sounds weird if there's a note here
00:41:232 (46) - somehow k is better here
00:41:232 (46) - add d
Im guessing you made a small mistake here? ^ (same time, different notes?)
01:18:483 - add d
01:20:171 (226,227,228,229) - kddk, try to follow the drum sound
01:23:251 (244,245,246,247,248) - dkdkd, same reason as above
01:25:138 - add k
01:24:840 - This is imo match to the beat

01:26:827 - add d, there's a drum sound there
01:39:045 (359) - delete, like before this note is make the awkward beat
01:41:231 (378) - delete
01:48:979 (442) - delete
02:08:350 (558,559,560,561,562,563,564) - the music, nor the drum is 1/6 or higher, make it 1/4
I was suggested to make it 1/6, and also 1/4. I can't decide anymore ;w;

for this diff, I really suggest you to check again those long streams. I don't find it "really" match with the song and I consider it as overmap.

[Volt's Futsuu]

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01:00:801 - add k
02:03:185 (254) - change to d

futsuu is ok I guess

good luck

1. Fix the tags on volt's diffs.

1. Both start and end of the 2nd kiai is unsnapped by 1ms lol.
2. 00:25:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 notes patterns in kantan seems a bit too much for me, i'd suggest to remove 00:25:834 (2) - and it sounds an play nice.
   00:32:191 (13) - Same suggestion here and here 00:44:907 (32) - . ( Same for the 2nd kiai ).
3. 02:07:556 (82) - Remove this one too, as is doesn't fit the difficulty of a kantan.

1. 00:27:820 (20) - You can remove this note to make the break a bit longer? The previous part is pretty dense so.
2. 00:36:562 (44) - Maybe change to k to emphasize the guitar here? pretty much sillar as this 00:37:754 (48,49) -
3. 01:32:985 (166) - and 01:45:701 (205) - Same reason as the first suggestion.
4. 01:52:059 (225) - This one can removed too, but it's less important.

1. Check AiMod and fix all unsnapped notes and kiai's start and end.
2. 00:22:854 (29,30,31) - 00:25:636 (43,44,45) - 00:26:431 (48,49,50) - Those kind of triplets make it feel like you're playing a oni, it's highly recomended to only use triplets with the same color in muzukashii diffs.
3. 00:30:006 (65) - Add a d? You were following vocals previously, so it's kinda weird. ( If you do add it, i recomend you to delete 00:31:199 (72) - as the pattern would be a bit too long with it.
4. 00:39:642 (113) - move it here 00:39:443 (112) - and change it to a k, 00:39:543 (113) - this one to k too: It will emphasize the sound at 00:39:344
5. 01:03:980 (47) - and 01:11:927 (72) - Remove to make a break.
   Bleh, i hate when there's no consistent pattern.

1. 01:27:423 The start of the kiai is unsnapped...
2. 00:24:344 (39) - move it here 00:24:145 (38) - for a better flow.
3. 00:25:934 (49) - Same with this one, move it here 00:25:734 (48) -
4. 00:54:344 (16) - Remove, this play relly weird, there's nothing that justify this note to be here.
5. 01:17:490 (115,116,117,118,119) - Wtf hitsound? Just set default hitsound like the whole map lol.

-Tenshi- wrote:

Hello~

[General]

1. Fix the tags on volt's diffs.

[Kantan]

1. Both start and end of the 2nd kiai is unsnapped by 1ms lol.
2. 00:25:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 notes patterns in kantan seems a bit too much for me, i'd suggest to remove 00:25:834 (2) - and it sounds an play nice.
   00:32:191 (13) - Same suggestion here and here 00:44:907 (32) - . ( Same for the 2nd kiai ).
3. 02:07:556 (82) - Remove this one too, as is doesn't fit the difficulty of a kantan.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:27:820 (20) - You can remove this note to make the break a bit longer? The previous part is pretty dense so.
2. 00:36:562 (44) - Maybe change to k to emphasize the guitar here? pretty much sillar as this 00:37:754 (48,49) -
3. 01:32:985 (166) - and 01:45:701 (205) - Same reason as the first suggestion.
4. 01:52:059 (225) - This one can removed too, but it's less important.

[Muzukashii]

1. Check AiMod and fix all unsnapped notes and kiai's start and end.
2. 00:22:854 (29,30,31) - 00:25:636 (43,44,45) - 00:26:431 (48,49,50) - Those kind of triplets make it feel like you're playing a oni, it's highly recomended to only use triplets with the same color in muzukashii diffs.
3. 00:30:006 (65) - Add a d? You were following vocals previously, so it's kinda weird. ( If you do add it, i recomend you to delete 00:31:199 (72) - as the pattern would be a bit too long with it.
4. 00:39:642 (113) - move it here 00:39:443 (112) - and change it to a k, 00:39:543 (113) - this one to k too: It will emphasize the sound at 00:39:344
5. 01:03:980 (47) - and 01:11:927 (72) - Remove to make a break.
   Bleh, i hate when there's no consistent pattern.

[Oni]

1. 01:27:423 The start of the kiai is unsnapped...
   I actually do not know how to fix this, it looks perfect .-.
2. 00:24:344 (39) - move it here 00:24:145 (38) - for a better flow.
3. 00:25:934 (49) - Same with this one, move it here 00:25:734 (48) -
4. 00:54:344 (16) - Remove, this play relly weird, there's nothing that justify this note to be here.
5. 01:17:490 (115,116,117,118,119) - Wtf hitsound? Just set default hitsound like the whole map lol.

I'm skipping Inner oni but there is unsnapped objects too, check AiBot.

Good luck for ranking~

IControl wrote:

iControl's Mod

Only 1 thing im not sure about

Inner Oni

02:08:350 (557,558,559,560,561,562,563) - change to a 1/4 pattern? I don't hear 1/6s seems like it was just thrown in to make the stars higher

Muzu

change sv 2 1.4

you could change that kai time problem by clicking here 01:27:423 - then click on timing setup panel. Click on the 2nd kai time part then click use current time
also make sure to use the same tags in the diff
Good Luck