MondoKuma wrote:

Squish! Squish! What's That? What am I doing?
I'm Squishing the circles of your beatmap!

What do you think I would be doing?

Snowy

00:42:054 (2) - I think this should be 1/4 Tick later I'm following the instrumentals here, not vocals.


01:24:267 (3) - I think this should *START* 1/4 Tick Later (^_^) The lyrics begin where the slider already is, putting it later would make it wrong.


02:41:258 (8,9) - I think You should remove these two circles Every kiai is using a 5-note stream before that the chorus begins again.


03:08:470 (2,3,4,5,6) - I Think there should be a stream up until the 6th circle I got your point but I'm following the instrumentals here instead of the guitar, that's why it's like this.


03:09:399 (7) - Remove This Circle. Removing this circle would block the emphasis that was created by the previous doubles, that's why I would like to keep it.


03:05:816 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There Should be a stream leading to 03:06:877 (9) - And there should be a circle @03:06:635 - I wanted to make a pause in the middle to not make a too long stream, also a note at 03:06:635 would be random honestly.


04:03:691 (2,3,4,5,6) - Turn this stream into a slider I don't see why it should be made as slider, other parts which are the same are always been 5 circles.


05:08:459 - Add a Spinner here? I wanted to end the map with a small jump, that's why I didn't add any spinner here.

Squish! Squish! Now that my first analysis of this map is done time for the second one!


Tsk. I like this one more than that bagel loving moron


02:14:311 (1,2) - Turn this into 1 Slider that goes back The next slider already does this, doing it twice would make this part too boring to play.


02:32:365 (5,6,7,8,9) - Turn this into one slider! No change, already explained that I'll keep the 5 circles as they are.







That's All I have for this map! Good Luck on getting it ranked!

Gaia wrote:

[bakai]
00:41:656 (1,2,3,4) - what is this rhythm pls =3= Nice suggestion, changed.
01:14:842 (1,2,3) - weird spacing imo As I already explained to Yui, I'm emphasizing the vocals here with this small jump.
01:27:320 (7,1,2) - 3/4 spacing looks the same as 1/2 umm *slaps That's why I added a new combo here.
02:10:063 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - try this!!! Nice suggestion again, changed.

just stalking passing by because i havent slapped in a long time!!! ;w;

Owntrolf wrote:

I be hating for all those circle+sliders because they feel like they dont fit to me

-Starting from around here 00:30:240 - you begin to go away from white ticks
00:30:240 (1,2) - This is really awkward Sekai made it this way on purpose, if more people complains about it she will change it.
00:38:072 (6) - Maybe make this parallel with red5 (im somewhat bothered with skipping that white tick) Should be okay now.
00:41:656 (1,2,3,4) - To me I find that its better to just follow the beats on white ticks I changed it with Gaia's mod, so it's okay now.
00:44:045 (4) - Maybe change this to one circle I prefer to keep it as a slider for now.
00:44:444 (5) - This is probably fine to change to 2 circles Since I'm keeping the previous one, I'll also keep this as well.
00:50:948 (8) - Maybe change this to 2 circles because I find its better to make the sliderend clickable It would ruin completely my pattern, so I won't change it, it's fine already imo.
00:57:983 (2) - This doesnt feel like it fits here, maybe delete the yellow 1 and make it into a 3/4 slider Rearranged completely this pattern.
01:12:718 (1,2) - Swap positions in timing, the slider should start first then the circle I think it's fine like it is as well.
01:33:028 (4) - This slider skips over the guitar on the red tick, (make it a triplet to 01:33:426 (5) - This part isn't following the guitar but the main beat, that's why it is like that.
01:48:824 (1) - Maybe add whistle here (also I dont understand how its so quiet compared to other whistles after it even though there isnt a green bar) Don't wanna add it there, same reason as I didn't add it at the beginning of the song, which has a similiar part.
02:44:045 (1,2,3) - Maybe change to something like this

SPOILER

Rearranged whole pattern completely.
02:55:860 (4,5) - Blanket eachother so yellow1 wont overlap the slider edge Fixed.
04:18:028 (2,3) - Betterblanket Fixed.
05:06:612 (2) - Maybe move this near the middle for symmetry It would destroy my previous square pattern if I do that, so not gonna change it.

BeatofIke wrote:

The current timing is correct so you're good there. Anywyays, I would polish 00:09:001 (7) like this (optional):

198,228,9001,2,0,B|242:236|270:208|270:208|328:208,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Changed, thanks a lot!
No kudosu for this one o3o

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from your modding queue

[snowy]
00:32:364 (1) - I feel liek the slider should come first then the circle, matches the vocals and feels alot better when playing

SPOILER

This is a great suggestion, fixed.
01:24:267 (3) - would look better as a blanket

SPOILER

I see your idea but I would like to not make a blanket here.
01:53:470 (2) - no distinguishable sound on the blue tick so end it on the red

SPOILER

Following the piano here, that's why it's on blue tick.
01:59:842 (7) - curve it so it flows with slider (6) ?

SPOILER

Next slider is also curve, don't wanna make this as well or otherwise it looks all the same.
02:22:806 (1,2) - nazi mod inc - they arent completly parallel. fix it? Fixed.
03:49:886 (1) - curve it? Same as I answered before, I don't want all the sliders to be curved.
04:09:001 (1,2) - these arent completely either. They look okay to me.

Thats all I could find. I hope this mod was useful, GL

Aldwych wrote:

Mister Andrea!
M4M from queue Placeholded.

[General]

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[Snowy]

00:04:753 (7) : This overlapp felt a bit odd and weird imo, how abut making a curved blanked slider around 6? It's like this on purpose, would like to keep it.
00:10:063 (8) : Same this as above, also because you did this kind of thing on the next combo, it's make the whole pattern a bit more consistent. It got polished now, thanks BeatofIke!
00:18:559 : In terms of rythm it's legit and it's ok, however... imo it's worth addind a circle here, that sounds better and make the pattern as same as previously. Already denied this on Yui's mod, I'm following piano here.
00:28:647 (2,3) : Maybe make this 2 sliders parallel? (Is it english? xD) Fixed.
00:36:479 (6) : I didn't checked all the circle, but this kind are really shy, we cannot really hear them, on the end of sliders it's fine imo, on some circles maybe because of vocals, but here this is too shy for me, maybe consider adding a clap? There is already a clap there, I won't add more.
00:37:408 (3,4) : Again that's quite shy, maybe you should find a soft whistle sound for this kind of note, it seems that you follow the piano melody (i guess), so it could makes it cooler to have a whistle sound and help people while playing your map. I'm hitsounding the main beat only here though, so it would ruin my hitsounding pattern if I do, if more people complains about it, I'll see what to do.
00:47:099 (2) : Why stacking these 2 circles? Why not making a complete line instead? I can understand that it's following your mapping style on this map, but that weird for 2 stacked circles instead of 2 sliders or 1 slider / 1 circle. Because I'm making a square pattern here.
00:48:824 (8) : Imo the DS is quite unballanced here go change from 2.1X to 1.2X, that's a bit rude. How about rotating / making a blanket with previous slider in order to reduce the DS, that would also makes the flow better not only between (7) and (8) but also with previous circles. A small jump won't hurt players I guess, since it's a low BPM song after all.
00:57:983 (2) : I completely disagree with this 1/4, the vocals are on the 1/2 and there's nothing here. You should reduce this slider imo. Fixed with the previous mods already.
01:47:497 (4) : Not really sure if it's a good stack imo, right now, you go with full 1/4 + jump and here you have 1/2 stack, maybe the player will be confuse and instant tap this note and break. Yeah you're right, unstacked that note and spaced it normally.
02:09:011 (1,2) : You're so close of a blanket D:, but that sould be hard to correct it. Yup it's quite hard to do it better.
03:00:771 (7,8,9) : I'm ok for having spacing between 1/4 sliders, quite less with circles. Why don't you group them? It's a really small jump so it should be fine.
03:05:284 (1) : I'm not sure if ppl really appreciate this kind of stack, If it's ok too. I used it quite often through the map, hope it's fine for everyone to play.
04:09:532 (1,2) : They aren't not perfectly parallel (yea Nazi stuff) :p Fixed.
04:18:426 (2,3) : Hanw, obvious blanket. Fixed.


And... that's all! Well overall i really really like your mapping, the rythm you used, the hitsound are really great too but yea sometimes it's too shy D:
Anyway gl hf for rank and take my star.