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Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny

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qinche
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月30日 at 22:30:42

Artist: Sheryl Nome starring May'n
Title: Universal Bunny
Source: Macross Frontier
Tags: false songstress Aakiha Rokodo Roko-Don wanhyrzh Alace
BPM: 157
Filesize: 10463kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Black Bunny (5 stars, 734 notes)
  2. Blue Bunny (4.7 stars, 473 notes)
  3. Pink Bunny (2.97 stars, 237 notes)
  4. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 557 notes)
  5. White Bunny (4.91 stars, 640 notes)
Download: Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From Macross Frontier Movie - The False Songstress. Best Sheryl Nome live ever.


Pink Bunny - wanhyrzh

Blue Bunny - Alace

White Bunny - Aakiha

Black Bunny - qinche

and Rokodo's taiko <3


Enjoy.
Aakiha
Cyril Scarlet
\(^o^)/ Good jumpy Aakiha & 呆呆
ignorethis
jumps kill me :o
Rokodo
Taikorz

Mapped up until end of first chorus as if song was "taiko cut".

http://puu.sh/hVB 555 notes, 1 spinner

Includes background image so please, Full Submission.
Licnect
:D
wanhyrzh
wanhyrzh
Other Skins NEW
Download: new srction.rar

EDIT SOME MORE

Download: others.rar
KanbeKotori
This song makes me laugh :D

SPOILER
itai itai itai....
(dai dai dai....)
skranger
nice map,star
suneko
Great BeatMaps!!!!
めっちゃ好みの譜面でした。
ランク譜面化応援post!
eveless
:)May'n 最高

阿澈做真好:D
wmfchris
eats qinche's curry rice.

I'll let aabc to mod taiko diff
LirsRosso
star
aabc271
After a quick check at the Taiko diff ( Mod request by Wmf ), i can't find anything~
So just have a star :)
Selee
[Skin]

I think the spinner-approachcircle.png supposed to be spinner-circle.png, so that it would spin normally rather than only lessen. And the size should be 666x666


[Grey Bunny]

The hitsound feels too random...maybe try to keep a pattern?
00:52:278 (4) - Add whistle at the end?
00:58:010 (3) - Whistle at the beginning?
01:29:348 (4) - Whistle?
02:36:609 (1) - Remove new combo?


[White Bunny]

00:46:163 (1) - I don't think this part fit the rhythm, remove?
00:58:392 (1,2) - Stacking?
01:05:080 (4) - Slider kinda ugly, maybe...↓?

01:13:854 (T) - Use C1?
02:36:609 (7) - New combo?
03:22:278 (5,7) - Move 1 grid right
03:36:609 (5) - Add finish at the beginning of slider?


[Black Bunny]

00:42:341 (T) - hmm, I feel better to use soft sample here, and add whistle for 00:42:341 (2) 00:42:915 (2) and 00:43:679 (3) ?
00:56:099 (12,1) - Increase the spacing between these or stacking? It really confused me.
00:59:730 (5,6) - Stacking?
01:41:004 (T) - End kiai here?
02:08:329 (9) - New combo?
02:14:061 (T) - same with 00:42:341 one
02:24:762 (9) - New combo? and remove next note's?
04:02:978 (3,4) - Stacking?

Sigh, I can't find any solid points here. Nice job. 槑

and ~star
Pokie
:)
Topic Starter
qinche

KanbeKotori wrote:

This song makes me laugh :D

SPOILER
itai itai itai....
(dai dai dai....)
im gonna find a song that says "kotori baka" one day >A<+

suneko wrote:

Great BeatMaps!!!!
めっちゃ好みの譜面でした。
ランク譜面化応援post!
ありがとう~頑張ります

eveless wrote:

:)May'n 最高

阿澈做真好:D
:D

[Skin]

I think the spinner-approachcircle.png supposed to be spinner-circle.png, so that it would spin normally rather than only lessen. And the size should be 666x666
mehhh... i was thinking 'bout that but then it covers face so nahh... i wish i can set it to spinning + size decreasing

[Black Bunny]

00:42:341 (T) - hmm, I feel better to use soft sample here, and add whistle for 00:42:341 (2) 00:42:915 (2) and 00:43:679 (3) ?
tried, not so great, i like the hitting feeeeelllll
00:56:099 (12,1) - Increase the spacing between these or stacking? It really confused me.
then it served as what i want :D
00:59:730 (5,6) - Stacking?
it is stacked?
01:41:004 (T) - End kiai here?
dont see the difference but ok
02:08:329 (9) - New combo?
ok
02:14:061 (T) - same with 00:42:341 one
no
02:24:762 (9) - New combo? and remove next note's?
yada~
04:02:978 (3,4) - Stacking?
that's a slowdown, so maybe not.
Selee
00:59:730 (5,6) - Stacking?
04:02:978 (3,4) - Stacking?

... these are not perfectly stacked, and you can see the gap between these while playing.
Use 0.0x distance spacing and cancel the grid snap, then distance snap, you'll see what I mean...
Topic Starter
qinche

Selee wrote:

00:59:730 (5,6) - Stacking?
04:02:978 (3,4) - Stacking?

... these are not perfectly stacked, and you can see the gap between these while playing.
Use 0.0x distance spacing and cancel the grid snap, then distance snap, you'll see what I mean...

thats because of the stack leniency that made them stack that way, theres nothing i can do to fix that.
Selee

qinche wrote:

Selee wrote:

00:59:730 (5,6) - Stacking?
04:02:978 (3,4) - Stacking?

... these are not perfectly stacked, and you can see the gap between these while playing.
Use 0.0x distance spacing and cancel the grid snap, then distance snap, you'll see what I mean...

thats because of the stack leniency that made them stack that way, theres nothing i can do to fix that.
Sigh, I don't agree. stack leniency won't change anything in Edit mode..unless you start testing. Not stacking in edit mode would worsen the appearance...w/e...only a minor thing...
Topic Starter
qinche

Selee wrote:

Sigh, I don't agree. stack leniency won't change anything in Edit mode..unless you start testing. Not stacking in edit mode would worsen the appearance...w/e...only a minor thing...
i seriously tried ur method, no it still looks the same.
it's because they r 1/4, theres no way u can stack 1/4 to be perfectly under slider. have u tried and worked?
Selee
Edit mode before changing and after changing


Osu mode after changing

I didn't change the stack leniency

3 jpg max..@_@ Idk y my puush doesn't work...Anyway, I don't want to argue about this anymore...Nazi and minor...If you don't want to, just ignore this plz.

btw, 03:22:660 (7) - 1 grid left for symmetry



Topic Starter
qinche
ahh i see what you mean, i thought u want me to stack those stacks...thats no way

right, fixed, my apologies.


waiting for guest diff ppl to respond
Lovely Crab
好图 :)
不过为什么不把04:25:717-04:26:864这段做出来呢?..感觉那一段很神..
因为分数的关系么?试着从其他地方削下来?或者单独一个难度APP?..
只是建议 :)
STAR~
wanhyrzh
Sorry for my laziness at hitsounds.
I had modded it and added some hitsounds.
Thank you for pointing out the problem, Selee.
Download: Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny (qinche) [Grey Bunny].osu

PS: I agree with Lovely Crab. Since you want to APP Black Bunny, score is not a problem XD.
Asagiri Mai
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Topic Starter
qinche

Lovely Crab wrote:

好图 :)
不过为什么不把04:25:717-04:26:864这段做出来呢?..感觉那一段很神..
因为分数的关系么?试着从其他地方削下来?或者单独一个难度APP?..
只是建议 :)
STAR~
@_@那是一段人声说话……我不是很明白这个有什么map的价值……顶多不过是几个note几个slider

而且就算不map大家也能听到那一段啊:D正好配合score出现

黑兔子是APP的~

wanhyrzh wrote:

Sorry for my laziness at hitsounds.
I had modded it and added some hitsounds.
Thank you for pointing out the problem, Selee.
[attachment=0:c2faa]Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny (qinche) [Grey Bunny].osu[/attachment:c2faa]

PS: I agree with Lovely Crab. Since you want to APP Black Bunny, score is not a problem XD.
>3< darling thank u
wanhyrzh
Aakiha
IceBeam
[Black Bunny]
01:34:698 (4,5) - That's just unbeatable.Change it to the better way please.
02:19:985 (4) - Yes,stack with (2).
03:49:603 (5,1,2) - Spacing makes no sense,stack (1) with (2) at least.

[White Bunny]
Delete all unused Timing Sections.
03:56:290~

[Grey Bunny]
00:34:698 (1) - Finish.
01:02:214 (3) - ^
01:05:271 (1) - Ah,no,not for Normal,really.
01:20:558 - Finish.
02:12:532 (4) - ^
02:33:934 (2) - ^
02:40:048 (1) - ^

Good job,star~
xipan_old
black Bunny 没有刚开始好玩了
Topic Starter
qinche

IceBeam wrote:

[Black Bunny]
01:34:698 (4,5) - That's just unbeatable.Change it to the better way please.
well... its playable, so no.
02:19:985 (4) - Yes,stack with (2).
ehh... not really necessary since the pattern follows note 5 and 6
03:49:603 (5,1,2) - Spacing makes no sense,stack (1) with (2) at least.
no. thats the way it should be.

[White Bunny]
Delete all unused Timing Sections.
03:56:290~
ill take care of this (baka aakiha), thx~

[Grey Bunny]
00:34:698 (1) - Finish.
01:02:214 (3) - ^
01:05:271 (1) - Ah,no,not for Normal,really.
01:20:558 - Finish.
02:12:532 (4) - ^
02:33:934 (2) - ^
02:40:048 (1) - ^

ill leave this to darling.

Good job,star~

thannnnk you >.<

xipan wrote:

black Bunny 没有刚开始好玩了
D: sorry to hear that

i tried my best to rank this but it just seems impossible so changes are wasted (in a sense)

i hope theres still enough fun with the map
wanhyrzh
Selee
简介的black拼错了 :P
No kds







玩笑 XDD

Edit: 真的拼错了啊 就是Black bunny for app那里...~~好 槑 呀~~~
Topic Starter
qinche

wanhyrzh wrote:

Some fixxing~
Thank you IceBeam~
[attachment=0:54d41]Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny (qinche) [Grey Bunny].osu[/attachment:54d41]
>3<

Selee wrote:

简介的black拼错了 :P
No kds






玩笑 XDD
我靠!差点信以为真!你这混蛋还我的KDS来!!
vincerio
sheryl :shock:

:)
James2250
-Your spinner isn't rankable at the moment, you need to see something in the middle that you are spinning around (spinner circle)
-You might as well resize spinner-spin etc to 1x1 if you aren't going to use them
-Difficulty spread isn't good at the moment, would be nice if you could make an actual Easy (or make yours easier)

Grey Bunny:
Don't really like this being the easiest difficulty
AR -1?
01:05:271 (1) - don't have this on easiest difficulty
01:54:189 (7) - sounds much better at 01:53:997
02:36:800 (1) - don't have this on easiest difficulty

White Bunny:
Add some hitsounds?
More than 3 unique slider speeds isn't recommended
00:30:685 (5,6) - don't like this stacked
01:13:870 (1,2) - decrease distance of jump seeing as it is straight after slow part?
01:21:896 (4,5) - might be nice if you didn't overlap these so much (same for any others)
02:22:278 (4,5) - ^

Black Bunny:
18 mil...going for ranked? Might need to get that nearer to 16 mil
00:27:055 (1,1,1) - don't have the slider like this, they cover each other too much
00:33:360 (3,4,5,6,7) - kind of odd spacing
00:54:571 (5,6) - random jump
00:56:482 (2) - slightly hidden slider by previous hit burst
02:06:800 (3) - slightly hidden by previous notes
03:38:711 (1,2,3) - random jump
03:49:411 (4,5) - ^
03:59:157 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
In general there were quite a few jumps that I don't see a reason for, and just seem to be in a middle of a combo with no major music change

Taiko:
All checks out

Have a star~
wanhyrzh
Grey Bunny:
Don't really like this being the easiest difficulty XD I know it's somehow a little bit hard for the new players
AR -1? k.
01:05:271 (1) - don't have this on easiest difficulty k.
01:54:189 (7) - sounds much better at 01:53:997 k.
02:36:800 (1) - don't have this on easiest difficulty k.
Here we go~
Download: Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny (qinche) [Grey Bunny].osu

EDIT:
Download: skin.rar

Topic Starter
qinche

James2250 wrote:

-Your spinner isn't rankable at the moment, you need to see something in the middle that you are spinning around (spinner circle)
@_@i will add a point in the center then, thx :3
-You might as well resize spinner-spin etc to 1x1 if you aren't going to use them
ok, will do
-Difficulty spread isn't good at the moment, would be nice if you could make an actual Easy (or make yours easier)
I dont know... im not good at making easy, i think grey bunny will do the job. besides, this song is too high, not fit.

Black Bunny:
18 mil...going for ranked? Might need to get that nearer to 16 mil
lol not for rank, app.
00:27:055 (1,1,1) - don't have the slider like this, they cover each other too much
well... umm its insane and it is readable so maybe not
00:33:360 (3,4,5,6,7) - kind of odd spacing
her vocal went up, so i think a jump is reasonable
00:54:571 (5,6) - random jump
again, vocal
00:56:482 (2) - slightly hidden slider by previous hit burst
that was on purpose, unless all the modders want me to change, i would most likely say no to this
02:06:800 (3) - slightly hidden by previous notes
its readable so maybe not
03:38:711 (1,2,3) - random jump
kinda shortened it
03:49:411 (4,5) - ^
no definitely not this one Q_Q
03:59:157 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
ehhh maybe not thats how it is, it went quiet so not good for a jump or large spacing
In general there were quite a few jumps that I don't see a reason for, and just seem to be in a middle of a combo with no major music change
vocal
Taiko:
All checks out

Have a star~
=3=thanx a lot
wanhyrzh
Kurai
[General]
Slider Tick Rate : 2 in all diff

[Grey Bunny]
00:28:583 (1) - Whistle at end
00:31:641 (1) - ^
00:33:552 (3) - Whistle
00:39:666 (4) - ^
00:47:310 (2) - Remove whistle at end and add whistle at the beginning of 00:48:074 (3)
00:48:838 (4) - ^
01:34:698 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and at the end
01:36:227 (5) - Remove whistle at the end and add whistle at the beginning
02:00:303 (1) - Add whistle at the end
02:03:743 (2) - Add whistle
02:06:800 (1) - Add whistle on the reverse
02:11:004 (2) - Add whistle at the end
02:26:290 (3) - Add whistle on the reverse

[White Bunny]

00:51:322 (6,7,8) - Sounds better like
01:51:322 (2) - Insert break time
01:51:322 (2) - ^

[Black Bunny]
00:33:743 (5) - New combo
00:39:475 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:061 (1) - ^
01:19:794 (9) - New combo
01:19:985 (10) - Move 6 grid right ?
01:40:431 (4) - New combo
02:02:405 (7) - New combo
02:45:781 (1) - Remove new combo
03:49:603 (5,1,2) - Weird spacing


:)
wanhyrzh
[Grey Bunny]
00:28:583 (1) - Whistle at end k
00:31:641 (1) - ^
00:33:552 (3) - Whistle
00:39:666 (4) - ^
00:47:310 (2) - Remove whistle at end and add whistle at the beginning of 00:48:074 (3)k
00:48:838 (4) - ^
01:34:698 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and at the endk
01:36:227 (5) - Remove whistle at the end and add whistle at the beginningk
02:00:303 (1) - Add whistle at the end
02:03:743 (2) - Add whistle
02:06:800 (1) - Add whistle on the reverse
02:11:004 (2) - Add whistle at the end
02:26:290 (3) - Add whistle on the reverse
Thank you~

Download: Sheryl Nome starring May'n - Universal Bunny (qinche) [Grey Bunny].osu
Topic Starter
qinche



[stress]



nevermind it works now
Shulin
Mod Requested by wanhyrzh ^_^

General:

-- N, I, I, I, difficulty spread ~ you might have to change this because [White Bunny] and [Black Bunny] both play like an insane.

Grey Bunny:

01:33:934 (x) - Note? ~ The gap between 01:33:552 (1,2) - sounds odd imo.
03:05:271 (1,2) - Add some notes in the gap? ~ sounds odd.
03:06:800 (2,3) - ^

White Bunny:

00:58:201 (7) - Hidden note.
01:15:017 (2,3) - Hidden notes, the 1/4 is unexpected. I'd change this.
01:58:106 (3) - The number of returns is unexpected here, compare with 01:55:048 (3) - and 01:56:577 (3) -
02:13:297 (1) - Start this spinner earlier? The gap before it is a little weird.
02:18:647 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:23:138 (7) - Sounds weird. Maybe move it to the white tick (02:23:233) so it follows the song?
03:00:494 (1,2) - Partially hidden, it's kinda unexpected.
03:22:851 (1) - Clap the whole slider?
03:23:806 (3) - ^ soft sounds weird.

I'd look into the hidden notes, they are doable but might be unrankable.

Black Bunny:

-- 18 million... is this for approval? If not you will probably have to reduce the score.

00:27:437 (1,1) - Make the ends of the slider visible please.
00:55:908 (11,12) - Confusing, especially when 00:51:322 (7,8,9,10) - were 1/4.
02:06:800 (3) - Slider end is covered by hit300, maybe respace 02:06:227 (6) -
02:55:335 (1) - Hard to see with the overlapping and kiai.
02:55:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The jumps here are unintuitive imo.
03:22:660 (7,1) - Weird jump o_o
03:49:603 (5,1) - Spacing?
03:56:482 (1) - Remove new combo it's not doing anything.
04:10:622 (4,1) - Spacing isn't very intuitive >_>

Some spacing is confusing, it is doable though.

Taiko:

Can't exactly say the near constant streams suit the song. But it's fine.

Star ~ good luck! ^_^
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+4
section-fail和section-pass似乎都不是规定尺寸,不过看起来不伤。

[Grey Bunny]
00:59:165 (1) - finish
01:08:337 (1) - 开头finish
01:10:630 (4) - 把这个与3尾的o ooo节奏拆成oo oo感觉更好。
01:40:439 (1) - 这种地方建议三连1/2 circle,爆破力比折返slider强。
01:47:700 (6,1) - 感觉需要换个new combo,同时现在的4加上。
02:32:986 - 加音建议,在一个规则的o x o x后面连音带入感觉比较好。
03:07:572 (3) - 屏幕边界了。如果无所谓的话大概还是拉回来点。
03:12:158 (4) - 同之前,另外这该和后1交换new combo吧。

[White Bunny]
你用了超过3种自定slider速。。。而且还超了不是一点。。。这个我估计你想rank就要改。不想rank的话反正我觉得玩起来实际效果只能不错ww
00:19:889 (3) - 为了刻意造个变化的话,删?
00:25:335 (1,1) - 不是很明白这两个new combo求解。。
01:11:386 (1) - 这一段,如果加whistle的话的建议:1、2尾、4头,下个135。
01:13:297 (3) - 可以nazi么,左一格。
01:39:766 (4) - 删?
02:43:110 (1) - whistle的话同上段建议,不过这个只是个人兴趣。
03:03:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - 。。这形状击打有难度(距离偏远)
03:41:008 (4) - nazi的话,左一格偏下点
。。好多地方好像看见了pa的排法,这难度真不错啊ww

[Black Bunny]
00:34:316 (9,10) - 因为之前在做间距加大,这个容易误读1/2
00:56:099 (12,1) - 建议别。
01:11:386 (1) - whistle频率比我想用的急一点= = 没差,这样也好
01:19:794 (9,10) - 跳到这个距离上可能还是加new combo会好些
01:40:431 (4) - 强烈建议new combo
01:59:730 (1) - 减少个折返换个circle
02:04:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我不反对,只是提醒你这东西很招一分的。。
02:55:335 (1) - 这段建议渐强处理。每两个音+5音量到02:56:864 (1) - 这里时是75。
03:12:150 (10) - new combo建议
03:13:870 (1) - 这后面。break里就别kiai了。
03:24:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串感觉其实是最后两音该跳,参照你之前部分的排法的话,这样?(位置上我只是复制了之前的23456。)

04:13:106 (5) - new combo
04:25:717 - 最后vocal点再加一个这样来收?


[Roko-don's Taiko]
fine with me.


nice mapset.

Topic Starter
qinche

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+4
hmmmm maybe, added
section-fail和section-pass似乎都不是规定尺寸,不过看起来不伤。
ah huh...除非有人挑这个当Unrank reason,不然不管了


[Black Bunny]
00:34:316 (9,10) - 因为之前在做间距加大,这个容易误读1/2
倒也没有,特地把间距加大,(就目前spec到的来说)还算好认吧。如果不行换new combo
00:56:099 (12,1) - 建议别。
fine,之前也有人complain,就叠了
01:11:386 (1) - whistle频率比我想用的急一点= = 没差,这样也好
whistle苦手
01:19:794 (9,10) - 跳到这个距离上可能还是加new combo会好些
再看看吧
01:40:431 (4) - 强烈建议new combo
ok...
01:59:730 (1) - 减少个折返换个circle
超不好读,不知道可不可取,先不换了
02:04:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我不反对,只是提醒你这东西很招一分的。。
这也能中枪……
02:55:335 (1) - 这段建议渐强处理。每两个音+5音量到02:56:864 (1) - 这里时是75。
ok
03:12:150 (10) - new combo建议
ok
03:13:870 (1) - 这后面。break里就别kiai了。
ok
03:24:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串感觉其实是最后两音该跳,参照你之前部分的排法的话,这样?(位置上我只是复制了之前的23456。)
[attachment=1:a9c77]20.png[/attachment:a9c77]
cool
04:13:106 (5) - new combo
ok..
04:25:717 - 最后vocal点再加一个这样来收?
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真的不必,那么静的一句话不想加note
nice mapset.
我本来是想看各种音效吐槽的!!!!
NatsumeRin
太长了。所以只看看特定段而已。
其他地方不伤耳就放过。
wanhyrzh
01:33:934 (x) - Note? ~ The gap between 01:33:552 (1,2) - sounds odd imo. OK I do something to 1 03:05:271 (1,2) - Add some notes in the gap? ~ sounds odd. OK
03:06:800 (2,3) - ^OK
Thank you Shulin~

[Grey Bunny]
00:59:165 (1) - finish k
01:08:337 (1) - 开头finishk
01:10:630 (4) - 把这个与3尾的o ooo节奏拆成oo oo感觉更好。改了一下~
01:40:439 (1) - 这种地方建议三连1/2 circle,爆破力比折返slider强。k
01:47:700 (6,1) - 感觉需要换个new combo,同时现在的4加上。k
02:32:986 - 加音建议,在一个规则的o x o x后面连音带入感觉比较好。长见识了~
03:07:572 (3) - 屏幕边界了。如果无所谓的话大概还是拉回来点。k
03:12:158 (4) - 同之前,另外这该和后1交换new combo吧。我中间加了些东西..所以这里大概还是不用换了~
谢谢RIN大~

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