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Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-13T22:45:50+00:00

The mp3 is missing.
Full submit again?

-Xero-

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-Xero- 2010-10-14T07:41:14+00:00

mp3 missing. I will skip it for now. Just post again when you fixed it.

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-10-14T16:07:17+00:00

Fixed , ty for saying!

-Xero-

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-Xero- 2010-10-16T21:36:23+00:00

Since you are new to mapping i will give you some short overview and not a full detailed mod that wouldn't help you now anyway.

Easy
Combos are random/don't follow a specific order.
Until 00:45:880 - its all 1/1. Boring + it does not follow anything but the main beat which sux.
After that it's getting nice actually, but try not to place your patterns like from the left to the right and back. Be more creative. Also: Overlaps are not nice :/.
Try to avoid using the same slider over and over again...
Map to the end of the song.

Hard
Combos are random here as well.
It seems like you think you have to map it as hard as possible (these:00:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - don't make much sense)
Don't try to focus to much on the vocals. Especially for this song it's not easy to follow/ it's hard to read.
Map to the end.

That is all for the moment.
Have a star!

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-10-17T22:27:05+00:00

Thank you for the review , but , i did only some litlle changes D:

Tatsuo

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Tatsuo 2010-10-26T11:22:29+00:00

Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Map both difficulties to the same length.
Only two difficulties? =(
You should consider making a [Normal]

[Easy]
02:08:680 (1) - Too many rebounds for a new player. Should consider reducing that.
While this difficulty is fine, aside from it being way too short and not mapped to the same length as [Hard], I found this to be rather boring. As with -Xero- I will have to agree that there are quite a few 1/1 notes that make it boring as such, with much linear mapping. You should somehow put interesting patterns into this difficulty and stray away from how everything is in a line so much. It will bring it out of it's boring linear pattern, and make it more interesting. However, I don't agree with -Xero- about how overlaps are not nice. It's fine to me, as far as I can see. Anyway, you really need to come up with patterns for this difficulty. I highly suggest it.
I pretty much repeated what -Xero- said, now that I look at his post. Bah.

[Hard]
01:45:640 (1) - Move down two grids. Looks better.
02:44:680 (4) - Why is this note silenced? Move your inherited section 1/2 forward on the timeline.
Okay, in this difficulty, I suggest you stop mapping at around 03:34:840, since the song gets a bit too long, and drags on. Plus it gets rid of all those horrible tiny breaks you have after this. Although, you should consider mapping in those three smaller breaks before this time. I have to agree with -Xero- here again. It seems as though you placed random 1/4 streams in this difficulty to just make it harder for no reason. You focus too much on vocals, and should concentrate on the background music too. Unlike -Xero- though, I highly suggest you DO NOT map to the end, since the song is too long by then. Mapping to 03:34:840 will suffice. As with your previous difficulty, you should also create some sort of beatmapping pattern here too. Most of your hit objects are, again, in a linear fashion, and cause it to be boring. Add some spice by adding patterns.
Once again, I have pretty much repeated what -Xero- is saying.

I can't star your map in the state that it's currently in. I want to see some improvements on your beatmap, with some patterns to make it more interesting. I also want to see [Easy] mapped to the same length as [Hard], which, if you took my advice, should be at 03:34:840. Please PM me when you have improved your map a bit more. I await to recheck this.

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-10-26T17:02:36+00:00

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Map both difficulties to the same length. to the end? lol
Only two difficulties? =( waiting guest diffs
You should consider making a [Normal] misja056 is mapping one.

[Easy]
02:08:680 (1) - Too many rebounds for a new player. Should consider reducing that.
While this difficulty is fine, aside from it being way too short and not mapped to the same length as [Hard], I found this to be rather boring. As with -Xero- I will have to agree that there are quite a few 1/1 notes that make it boring as such, with much linear mapping. You should somehow put interesting patterns into this difficulty and stray away from how everything is in a line so much. It will bring it out of it's boring linear pattern, and make it more interesting. However, I don't agree with -Xero- about how overlaps are not nice. It's fine to me, as far as I can see. Anyway, you really need to come up with patterns for this difficulty. I highly suggest it.
I pretty much repeated what -Xero- said, now that I look at his post. Bah. I am very new to mapping, so if my easy get really bad I'll delete it

[Hard]
01:45:640 (1) - Move down two grids. Looks better.
02:44:680 (4) - Why is this note silenced? Move your inherited section 1/2 forward on the timeline.
Okay, in this difficulty, I suggest you stop mapping at around 03:34:840 , since the song gets a bit too long, and drags on. Plus it gets rid of all those horrible tiny breaks you have after this. Although, you should consider mapping in those three smaller breaks before this time. I have to agree with -Xero- here again. It seems as though you placed random 1/4 streams in this difficulty to just make it harder for no reason. You focus too much on vocals, and should concentrate on the background music too. Unlike -Xero- though, I highly suggest you DO NOT map to the end, since the song is too long by then. Mapping to 03:34:840 will suffice. As with your previous difficulty, you should also create some sort of beatmapping pattern here too. Most of your hit objects are, again, in a linear fashion, and cause it to be boring. Add some spice by adding patterns.
Once again, I have pretty much repeated what -Xero- is saying.

I can't star your map in the state that it's currently in. I want to see some improvements on your beatmap, with some patterns to make it more interesting. I also want to see [Easy] mapped to the same length as [Hard], which, if you took my advice, should be at 03:34:840. Please PM me when you have improved your map a bit more. I await to recheck this.

also , i mapped easy to 02:49:000

NotShinta

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NotShinta 2010-10-26T18:03:31+00:00

I really like this map. Please don't be turned off by my massive mod post, I think all of them can turn a good map into a great one.

General:
Don't use pure black or white combo colours. It messes up some skins.
Kiai? Wouldn't usually specifically suggest it but I feel it could be used well in this song.

Dragvon wrote:
Meh a diff nã ta pronta, mas fique com o bg no tamanho certo :3

http://puu.sh/h97

Use this! Right now, you get ugly white bars in the thumbnail and both 'Black Eyed Peas' and 'Rock That Body' are cut off uglily when playing.

Hard
Hmm, I wouldn't suggest using such low spacing for most of the map
00:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, sudden difficulty jump from the previous repeats.
00:29:800 (4,5,6,7) - What's this mapped to?
00:36:520 (1,2,3) - Dunno, I think it might be the skin I'm using, but finishes may be more effective here.
00:44:200 (1,2,3) - ^
02:01:480 (2,3) - Confusing spacing.
02:11:080 - Hitcircle.
02:13:000 - ^
02:14:920 - ^
02:19:960 (2) - Delete, fix spacing.
02:28:960 (5) - Huh, a bit random.
02:35:560 (1,2,3) - Move back 1/2, fix spacing.
02:36:520 (1,2,3,4) - ^, delete 4
02:39:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What.
03:04:600 - Map this break.
03:12:520 - ^
03:10:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Then delete this.
03:23:560 - Continue those repeating sliders, it breaks the flow to have breaks like this in such an insane diff.

Easy
Map to the end.
00:36:520 (5) - Uneven.
00:51:400 (4) - Move back 1/2, then add a beat at 00:51:640.
00:51:880 (5) - Again, uneven.
00:53:800 (1) - Kind of right spacing, but it looks ugly overlapping with 5 of the previous combo.
00:55:240 (4) - Move back 1/2, then add a beat at 00:55:480. And all similar patterns.
01:40:360 - emptttty
02:35:560 (5,6) - Spacing

Surprisingly good song. So yeah, already said I liked the map. Starred.

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-10-27T18:15:57+00:00

NotShinta wrote:
I really like this map. Please don't be turned off by my massive mod post, I think all of them can turn a good map into a great one. ty :3

General:
Don't use pure black or white combo colours. It messes up some skins. did
Kiai? Wouldn't usually specifically suggest it but I feel it could be used well in this song.

Dragvon wrote:
Meh a diff nã ta pronta, mas fique com o bg no tamanho certo :3

http://puu.sh/h97
Use this! Right now, you get ugly white bars in the thumbnail and both 'Black Eyed Peas' and 'Rock That Body' are cut off uglily when playing. i tried to rename it , but it stays the same , what i have to do?

Hard
Hmm, I wouldn't suggest using such low spacing for most of the map
00:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, sudden difficulty jump from the previous repeats. fix'd
00:29:800 (4,5,6,7) - What's this mapped to? What do you mean by that?
00:36:520 (1,2,3) - Dunno, I think it might be the skin I'm using, but finishes may be more effective here.
00:44:200 (1,2,3) - ^
02:01:480 (2,3) - Confusing spacing.
02:11:080 - Hitcircle.
02:13:000 - ^
02:14:920 - ^
02:19:960 (2) - Delete, fix spacing.
02:28:960 (5) - Huh, a bit random.
02:35:560 (1,2,3) - Move back 1/2, fix spacing.
02:36:520 (1,2,3,4) - ^, delete 4
02:39:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What.
03:04:600 - Map this break. NO
03:12:520 - ^
03:10:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Then delete this.
03:23:560 - Continue those repeating sliders, it breaks the flow to have breaks like this in such an insane diff.

Easy
Map to the end.
00:36:520 (5) - Uneven. What do you mean by uneven?
00:51:400 (4) - Move back 1/2, then add a beat at 00:51:640.
00:51:880 (5) - Again, uneven.
00:53:800 (1) - Kind of right spacing, but it looks ugly overlapping with 5 of the previous combo.
00:55:240 (4) - Move back 1/2, then add a beat at 00:55:480. And all similar patterns.
01:40:360 - emptttty
02:35:560 (5,6) - Spacing

Surprisingly good song. So yeah, already said I liked the map. Starred.

fixed almost all things , thank you!

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2010-10-29T01:08:39+00:00

General:

The mp3 is 320kbps, You need to get a 256kbps > version or re-encode the one you have.
Preview Time must be the same for all the diffs.
The combo colours of the 2 diffs are similar but not the same, make sure that both diffs have the same combo colours.

Normal:

00:15:400 (1) - Add "Finish"
00:18:760 (6) - Use New Combo to keep consistency.
00:38:200 (6) - Delete this note? Sound better w/o it imo.
00:57:640 (1,2,3) - This looks bad, try making something like this:
SPOILER
01:01:480 (1) - Use New Combo and Add "Finish".
01:31:240 (1) - New Combo
01:32:200 (1) - Add "Finish"
01:56:440 (X) - Add a note here.
01:56:680 (4) - Move this to 01:56:800, So the notes are placed on the same ticks as the previous chorus.
02:00:280 (X) - Add a circle.
02:00:520 (3) - Move it to: 02:00:640.
02:04:120 (2) - Add a circle.
02:04:360 (2) - Move it to: 02:04:480.
02:07:960 (4) - Add a circle.
02:08:200 (4) - Move it to 02:08:320.

Hard:

00:15:400 (1) - Add "Finish"
00:23:800 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:28:840 (1,2) - Swap New Combo. (New Combo goes on (2))
00:35:800 (5) - New Combo.
01:06:280 (7) - ^
01:12:040 (11,1) - Swap New combo. (Place New Combo on (11))
01:31:960 (2) - Place a "Finish" on the end of this slider.
03:35:080 (X) - Add a note and use "Finish"

GREAT!, I like this map <3 Star~

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-10-29T22:36:59+00:00

Gonzvlo wrote:
General:
The mp3 is 320kbps, You need to get a 256kbps > version or re-encode the one you have.
Preview Time must be the same for all the diffs.
The combo colours of the 2 diffs are similar but not the same, make sure that both diffs have the same combo colours.
Normal:
00:15:400 (1) - Add "Finish"
00:18:760 (6) - Use New Combo to keep consistency.
00:38:200 (6) - Delete this note? Sound better w/o it imo.
00:57:640 (1,2,3) - This looks bad, try making something like this:
SPOILER
01:01:480 (1) - Use New Combo and Add "Finish".
01:31:240 (1) - New Combo
01:32:200 (1) - Add "Finish"
01:56:440 (X) - Add a note here.
01:56:680 (4) - Move this to 01:56:800, So the notes are placed on the same ticks as the previous chorus.
02:00:280 (X) - Add a circle.
02:00:520 (3) - Move it to: 02:00:640.
02:04:120 (2) - Add a circle.
02:04:360 (2) - Move it to: 02:04:480.
02:07:960 (4) - Add a circle.
02:08:200 (4) - Move it to 02:08:320.
Hard:
00:15:400 (1) - Add "Finish"
00:23:800 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:28:840 (1,2) - Swap New Combo. (New Combo goes on (2))
00:35:800 (5) - New Combo.
01:06:280 (7) - ^
01:12:040 (11,1) - Swap New combo. (Place New Combo on (11))
01:31:960 (2) - Place a "Finish" on the end of this slider.
03:35:080 (X) - Add a note and use "Finish"
GREAT!, I like this map <3 Star~

Fixed all , thank you for the mod and for the star *~*
Also , i'm trying to re-encode the mp3

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2010-10-29T22:54:01+00:00

Fixed all , thank you for the mod and for the star *~*
Also , i'm trying to re-encode the mp3

Oh, If you need help re-encoding the Mp3 click Here.

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-11-02T16:17:08+00:00

192 kbps is okay?
also , thank you again.

Misja

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Misja 2010-11-02T20:51:03+00:00

Here Like it Or don't

Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [Misja's body].osu

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-11-02T21:24:25+00:00

misja056 wrote:
Here Like it Or don't

done , also , i'm trying to make a taiko diff:Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [Taiko].osu

AdRon Zh3Ro

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-11-04T16:35:50+00:00

Hmm, some parts seems out of the beat, let's see...
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

Misja's Body
>1:05:320 Remove the return arrow, seems better wtihout it. Start and end at the same time.
>1:08:920-1:10:480 Remoev everything here ad to this:
{
Slider 1:09:160 to 1:09:640
Slider 1:10:120 to 1:10:480
}
>1:13:360 Delete and add a circle at 1:13:480
>1:13:840 make it start at 1:13:960 and end at 1:14:440
>1:14:680 Delete it
>1:31:720 Add a circle
>1:32:920 move to 1;32:680
*1:47:800 Try not to hidden circles in easiers diffs
*2:00:400 maybe add a circle?
*2:33:280(1,2) This is hard for easier players, try to avoid that.
>2:37:000 Continue?
>Remove some claps or make a better order, they are not good as they are now.
>Try to avoid jumps in easiers diffs, beginer players are not familiar with them

Normal:
*47:440 and 47:800[Add circles] I think this is possible for normal players, or make it sliders (if you do this, put in every other parts).
>1:18:760(3,4,5) Sounds dificult to play because it don't follow the sounds corectly. Try this:
{
Slider 1:18:760 to 1:19:120
Circle 1:19:240
}
Do this in every other parts too.
>1:24:280 Remove circle
>1:25:480 end at 1:25:840
>1:26:200 start at 1:26:440 end at 1:26:800
>1:26:320 add circle
>1:31:240 and 1:31:720 delete circles
>1:30:280 end at 1;30:760
>1:30:760 start at 1:31:240 end at 1:31:720
*3:00:760 progresive sound?

Hard:
>1:07:480 Move to 1:07:600
*1:24:160 and 1:24:280 Remove?
>1:26:440 Move to 1:26:800

Keep improving it.

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-11-04T17:25:03+00:00

did almost all changes , waiting misja's reply.

Misja

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Misja 2010-11-08T14:13:53+00:00

Thx for deleting

I think this map's now waiting for Let it be ranked

Misja

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Misja 2010-11-23T20:19:34+00:00

Here is the easy version for the beatmap. err the normal suxx ;p

Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [Misja's body].osu

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-11-24T22:24:15+00:00

HI .sorry for my poor English

[easy]

:maybe move it to the end of the last slider is better.
00:55:240 (2) - 1 grid right>< to keep straight
00:58:840 (7,8,1,2,3) - ^ same problem
some problems happen in the rest of the map,or you can hold SHIFT and move the note.
It's important that maintain a neat shape in easy diff

[normal]
hmm,I think you dont need to set a such easy map set because you already hava a easy diff.
00:44:200 (5) - why use 1/8 beat snap ><?
00:47:320 (3,4,5) - ^
01:45:640 (1) -
02:41:920 (3,4,5) - 1 grid left(also has some similar problems in the rest of the map,try to find it out and fix it by yourself><)
maybe someone will tell you that you have to map something to remove the last 2 breaks.

[insane]
00:52:120 (2) - put it at 00:52:360 sounds better
01:07:480 (4,5) - 1 grid up
01:13:480 (4,5,1,2) - you can use grid level 0 or 1 to adjust the note.
02:06:520 (4) 02:07:240 (3) - 1grid right
also has 2 short break here><

well done.star

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-11-24T22:54:19+00:00

Tonoko wrote:
[normal]
hmm,I think you dont need to set a such easy map set because you already hava a easy diff.
00:44:200 (5) - why use 1/8 beat snap ><? fixed
00:47:320 (3,4,5) - ^ it's 1/4 >:C
01:45:640 (1) - fix'd
02:41:920 (3,4,5) - 1 grid left(also has some similar problems in the rest of the map,try to find it out and fix it by yourself><) did spacing on all notes
maybe someone will tell you that you have to map something to remove the last 2 breaks. no.

[insane]
00:52:120 (2) - put it at 00:52:360 sounds better no.
01:07:480 (4,5) - 1 grid up kay
01:13:480 (4,5,1,2) - you can use grid level 0 or 1 to adjust the note. what?
02:06:520 (4) 02:07:240 (3) - 1grid right distance snap ><'
also has 2 short break here><will keep then

well done.star

ty for the star <3
waiting misja's reply

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-11-26T17:07:39+00:00

Taiko map finished. About Taiko Oni lvl. 7, I assume.
I used some 1/3 so do not snap to 1/4. If you change timing, please contact me though forum PM or something.

Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Mashley

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Mashley 2010-12-04T09:37:41+00:00

What's with that red section? It isn't changing the timing?

misja056's body
Add more hitsounds in the second verse
00:34:600 (6) - New combo
00:36:040 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:920 (7) - New combo
00:46:120 (5) - ^
00:57:640 (5) - ^
01:06:280 (6) - ^
01:19:240 (3) - ^
01:21:160 (5) - ^
01:23:080 (7) - ^
01:27:880 (4) - ^
01:30:760 (7) - ^
01:43:720 (6) - ^
01:45:160 (1) - Remove new combo
01:48:040 (4) - New combo
02:06:760 (5) - ^
02:22:600 (6) - ^
02:28:360 (3) - ^
02:30:280 (5) - ^
02:32:200 (7) - ^
02:37:000 (4) - ^
02:39:880 (7) - ^

Normal
You need to move the notes on slider ends around so they are directly under the slider end. Turn off grid snap and spacing to do this.

Insane
00:19:240 (2) - I don't like how this reverses more times than the previous slider, I don't think the player will see that coming.
02:01:000 (1,2,3) - Woah, I don't like this spacing change, it looks like 1/4s. Stack them?

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-12-05T16:32:36+00:00

02:01:000 (1,2,3) - Woah, I don't like this spacing change, it looks like 1/4s. Stack them?

as stack , do you mean this?

waiting misja056's reply

Misja

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Misja 2010-12-05T17:01:45+00:00

Here after mashley's mod, hitsounds added

Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [misja056's body].osu

JeSsYkA_old

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JeSsYkA_old 2010-12-05T17:11:42+00:00

Good Map ^-^ !!

I creating my diff :3 (Staaaaar)

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-12-05T17:19:54+00:00

updated misja's and ty for the star jessyka

nimi

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nimi 2010-12-05T23:50:45+00:00

Ohi. Mod em português nas suas diffs porque tu é brasileiro e eu to com preguiça e_ê
Não sei nada sobre taiko >/<

misja056's body
Spacing problems~

00:46:120 (1) - the placement of this slider makes it finish in such so high place >_< maybe do something like this http://puu.sh/vXG
00:53:800 (1) - put it in the same place of 00:52:840 (6)
01:09:160 (1) - for the shape of this slider i guess it was supposed to "fit" in the 01:08:680 (3) beat. looks ugly right now >_<
01:45:640 (4) - spacing again. place this slider in the position that 01:44:200 (2) ends
01:55:240 (1) - same problem of 00:46:120 (1)
02:02:920 (1) - ^
02:09:640 (2) - one grid to the right
02:18:280 (1) - same of 01:09:160 (1)
02:39:880 (1,2) - spacing

Normal

00:19:720 (3) - spacing >_>
00:47:320 (3) - uma grid pra cima
01:50:440 (6) - pura viadagem minha acho que tá muito pra baixo.. ficaria melhor colocar do lado da beat anterior
01:55:240 (1,2) - ficaria melhor deixar elas assim http://puu.sh/vXL
02:02:920 (1) - tá muito comprido esse slider, soa meio estranho.. encurta ele fazendo ele terminar em 02:03:520
02:03:640 (x) - uma beat aqui talvez? D:
03:00:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - não fica meio.. 'hard', levando em consideração que é pra ser uma diff normal?
03:19:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
03:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^

Insane

Olha.. A diff em si não tá ruim. O timing tá certo e tal. Mas o spacing tá muuito asburdo imo >_< E o mapa tá meio.. quadrado. Tenta dar um jeito nisso :T

Star.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-12-06T00:45:50+00:00

- Why there have "Download without video" option and you haven't video file. open diffs in notepad and find "Video,0,"Black Eyed Peas Rock That Body.avi"" delete it and save. or if you have video please do a "full submition" again.
- add "lepidopodus" to tag all difficulties.
- black combo color a bit hard to see, could you make it lighter?

[misja056's body]
- Delete 2nd offset at 02:49:000
00:37:960 (5) - a bit far from (4)?
01:13:480 (6,7) - fix them down a bit, dont let hem touch the HP bar
02:02:920 (1) - last silder is a bit off screen
02:37:000 (1) - dont let it touch the HP bar

[Normal]
01:18:760 (3) - end this silder at red tick? @_@ a bit fast to click to next note for normal, imo. it's like click with 1/4 on normal?
01:20:680 (3) - ^
01:25:480 (4) - ^
01:26:440 (6) - ^
01:30:280 (6) - ^
01:31:240 (8) - ^
01:47:560 (2) - fix it a bit, dont let it touch the HP bar
03:00:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit hard to click for normal, imo. fix some of them to silder or something.
03:19:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Insane]
- [suggestion] spacing is a bit hug, +1 cieclr size?
00:26:440 (1) - fix it a bit, dont let it touch the HP bar
00:55:360 (3,4) - move them a bit farther from (1,2)
01:01:480 (1) - move it a bit closer to 01:00:880 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:24:040 (3,4,5,6) - they're same spacing as (2), so move them a bit closer to (2)
01:24:520 (1) - move it a bit closer to (6)
01:30:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move them a bit closer to (3)
01:34:600 (1) - move it a bit closer to 01:34:120 (1,2,3,4)
02:11:560 (6) - new combo?
02:13:960 (2) - wrong spacing, too close to (1)
02:44:440 (3,4) - move them to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39736 look better
fix what you feel like about spacing on this diff.

good luck!

edit: lol fix confused words

Last edited by orioncomet 2010-12-06T01:24:34+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2010-12-06T01:00:09+00:00

Wiinter wrote:
Ohi. Mod em português nas suas diffs porque tu é brasileiro e eu to com preguiça e_ê
Não sei nada sobre taiko >/<

Normal

00:19:720 (3) - spacing >_> a spacing está certa lol
00:47:320 (3) - uma grid pra cima feito
01:50:440 (6) - pura viadagem minha acho que tá muito pra baixo.. ficaria melhor colocar do lado da beat anterior achei um jeito que fica foda
01:55:240 (1,2) - ficaria melhor deixar elas assim http://puu.sh/vXL k
02:02:920 (1) - tá muito comprido esse slider, soa meio estranho.. encurta ele fazendo ele terminar em 02:03:520 vc quis dizer 02:03:400? feito
02:03:640 (x) - uma beat aqui talvez? D: não
03:00:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - não fica meio.. 'hard', levando em consideração que é pra ser uma diff normal? tem razão , então... feito?
03:19:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ feito
03:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ ^

Star.

~~orion , i will fix your issues tomorrow , uploading with Wiinter's opnion 2~~

EDIT: fixed some. updating now

Misja

193 posts

Joined August 2010

Misja 2010-12-06T14:39:32+00:00

Updated :
Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [misja056's body].osu
Thx all for you mods

DJ Angel

4,420 posts

Joined June 2010

DJ Angel 2010-12-07T00:13:58+00:00

star :3

Faust

osu! Alumni

4,785 posts

Joined January 2009

Faust 2010-12-07T22:20:37+00:00

Easy: I quite like this difficulty. And..why is there a stand-alone bookmark at the end?

- 01:18:760 - Hm, you could add a note here to continue the flow.

- 01:20:680 - Same here. Applies to similar parts. I strongly suggest it.

Normal: Sound difficulty.

Personally, why set the OD so low? Here's my suggestion:

SPOILER

Previously it was rather slow and dry. Perhaps you could try to invoke a more steady movement throughout the map, let the player go at a good pace without feeling a little held back.

- 00:59:560 - The reverse slider seems to go into a bit of the HP bar. Consider flipping it around, or shifting it
somewhere.

Insane: Not much to write here.

- 01:12:040 - Haha, a combo of 14 isn't a good idea. Split that up somewhere, or at 7 perhaps.

And remove the unused bookmarks at the end.

In general, it's pretty fine. It's not spectacular, but it's not a bad map either. Keep working !

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2010-12-08T15:56:08+00:00

ty for the mod.
mod comments V

SPOILER

Faust wrote:
Easy: I quite like this difficulty. And..why is there a stand-alone bookmark at the end?

- 01:18:760 - Hm, you could add a note here to continue the flow.

- 01:20:680 - Same here. Applies to similar parts. I strongly suggest it.

Normal: Sound difficulty.

Personally, why set the OD so low? Here's my suggestion: No ,it's an normalk , not an hard,

[spoilerbox]

Previously it was rather slow and dry. Perhaps you could try to invoke a more steady movement throughout the map, let the player go at a good pace without feeling a little held back.

- 00:59:560 - The reverse slider seems to go into a bit of the HP bar. Consider flipping it around, or shifting it
somewhere. Okay

Insane: Not much to write here.

- 01:12:040 - Haha, a combo of 14 isn't a good idea. Split that up somewhere, or at 7 perhaps. fix'd

And remove the unused bookmarks at the end. did

In general, it's pretty fine. It's not spectacular, but it's not a bad map either. Keep working ! Okay if you say [/spoilerbox]

Misja

193 posts

Joined August 2010

Misja 2010-12-11T13:45:54+00:00

Dumdumdum dadidoo

Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [misja056's body].osu

Saten

Global Moderator

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Saten 2010-12-15T21:57:59+00:00

SB:
04:28:720 What is this? O.o

Star ★

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-12-16T00:57:54+00:00

removed .osb.

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

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wmfchris 2010-12-16T12:51:31+00:00

thanks for mod4mod

[Taiko]
My hand's frozen so I can't test play, but fine for me through auto play

[Insane]
0:31:480 (2,3) try (2) left 2 grid, (3) up 3+ left 1 grid
0:34:120 (2,3) right 1 grid
1:02:560 (5) up 1 grid
1:19:120 (3,4) spacing
2:09:160 (3,6) down 1 grid
2:24:040 (1) up 2 grids
clap clap clap clap....
*_*

[Normal]
1:01:960 (2,3,4) try right 1 grid

[misja056'body] and [Normal] seems fine...

star.

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-12-16T15:47:13+00:00

fix'd all >:D

gyt

405 posts

Here since the beginning

gyt 2010-12-16T23:06:19+00:00

lol mod
[Insane]
01:00:880 (1) - move to 01:00:760, delete new combo
01:01:000 (2) - add new combo
02:01:000 (1,2,3) - enlarge spacing?

star

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2010-12-17T03:52:48+00:00

gyt wrote:
lol mod
[Insane]
01:00:880 (1) - move to 01:00:760 Never., delete new combo ok
01:01:000 (2) - add new combo no
02:01:000 (1,2,3) - enlarge spacing? :3
:3
star thx

Tatsuo

575 posts

Joined January 2009

Tatsuo 2010-12-17T12:15:30+00:00

How did I not see your PM the last time? I'm sorry

Here's your remod that should have been done ages ago.

[Overall]
04:28:720 (SB) - I do not understand this at all. Remove.

[misja056's body]
This should be mapped to the same length as the other difficulties. Otherwise great difficulty. Nice and fun.

[Normal]
00:47:320 (3,4 and all others like this) - Personally to me, this sounds ugly, but it's fine. It's just me not liking it.
02:03:880 (2,3) - You broke the pattern that you were doing. (What I mentioned above that I didn't like)
Solid difficulty.

[Taiko]
Skip. Don't like Taiko and I don't mod it.

[Insane]
Dear god, your overall difficulty is so low for an insane. Raise by at least 3. Raise AR by 2. HP by 1.
Honestly, there could be more effort put into this difficulty. I expected... more insane. I know you have some parts that have 1/4's but it just doesn't cut it for me. Though it is mapped correctly and everything and I didn't find any mistakes worth noting. I just expected more. Now that I think about it, my changes for the OD, AR, and HP, don't seem worth it for the little amount of notes you put into this difficulty. But personally, I liked it better the way I suggested. Especially the OD/AR. (This difficulty is technically fine the way it is though.)
This difficulty is ok.

Debating...
Yeah, here you can have a star.

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2010-12-17T15:58:49+00:00

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:
How did I not see your PM the last time? I'm sorry
Here's your remod that should have been done ages ago.

[Overall]
04:28:720 (SB) - I do not understand this at all. Remove. i deleted .osb lol . you don't redownloaded it.:3

[Normal]
00:47:320 (3,4 and all others like this) - Personally to me, this sounds ugly, but it's fine. It's just me not liking it. i will keep
02:03:880 (2,3) - You broke the pattern that you were doing. (What I mentioned above that I didn't like) k
Solid difficulty. [b]FFFFF-[/b]

[Taiko]
Skip. Don't like Taiko and I don't mod it. ;_;

[Insane]
Dear god, your overall difficulty is so low for an insane. Raise by at least 3 k. Raise AR by 2 k. HP by 1 k .
Honestly, there could be more effort put into this difficulty. I expected... more insane. I know you have some parts that have 1/4's but it just doesn't cut it for me. Though it is mapped correctly and everything and I didn't find any mistakes worth noting. I just expected more. Now that I think about it, my changes for the OD, AR, and HP, don't seem worth it for the little amount of notes you put into this difficulty. But personally, I liked it better the way I suggested. Especially the OD/AR. (This difficulty is technically fine the way it is though.)
This difficulty is ok.

Debating...
Yeah, here you can have a star.

Slowmotion_old

112 posts

Joined May 2010

Slowmotion_old 2010-12-18T16:29:58+00:00

^^

Mok

1,226 posts

Joined August 2009

Mok 2010-12-20T21:04:03+00:00

Hi!

[General]
lepidopodus is absent from tags, add him.
Damn, volume is so fucking loud, make it lower x.x

[misja]
I shouldn't be the first one saying this, but using too many 1/4 circles in the easiest difficulty isn't good.
00:40:840 (4) - Ugly to see, move them in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42386;
01:30:760 (1) - Remove New Combo;
01:49:960 (4) - As above.

[Normal]
00:40:360 (5) - Why haven't you made it like 00:36:520 (5)?
00:56:680 (6) - ^ but with the previous slider;

[Insane]
The decreasing of the volume is way too crazy, raise a bit where you lowed the volumes

Good Job

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2010-12-20T21:25:21+00:00

Mok wrote:
Hi! Hi!

[General]
lepidodupos is absent from tags, add him. kkk
Damn, volume is so fucking loud, make it lower x.x no it's ok

[Normal]
00:40:360 (5) - Why haven't you made it like 00:36:520 (5)? what do you mean by that
00:56:680 (6) - ^ but with the previous slider;

[Insane]
The decreasing of the volume is way too crazy, raise a bit where you lowed the volumes what?

Good Job thx

Fight69

1,639 posts

Joined January 2010

Fight69 2010-12-22T09:47:51+00:00

Hello there Hyguys ! o/

[General]

Your mp3 is not rankable (320kbps), so, here is a new one for you !

http://www.mediafire.com/?kd75wx93npj5qpb
The new offset is : 7766

Oh, and btw
Why Insane don't have the same timing than the other diffs ? o.o
The timing should be the same on each diff

[Insane]

01:15:400 (1) - What about finishing this spinner at 01:16:840 ? (and then add some circles like that : http://puu.sh/AuC )

[misja056's body]

This diff have an higher slider velocity than Normal, a bit weird but well

00:51:206 (3,4) - I think you should avoid this pattern on a Easy
01:08:726 (1) - A jump ? o.o
01:27:926 (1) - The end of this slider is a bit hidden by the previous one

Meh, copy-paste...

02:17:846 (1) - This jump again
02:37:046 (1) - The end of this slider is a bit hidden by the previous one too
02:44:246 (5) - ^

Here is a star for you /o/
~Starz'd !

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2010-12-23T02:16:50+00:00

Fight69 wrote:
Hello there Hyguys ! o/ Hi

[General]

Your mp3 is not rankable (320kbps), so, here is a new one for you ! thx
http://www.mediafire.com/?kd75wx93npj5qpb
The new offset is : 7766

Oh, and btw
Why Insane don't have the same timing than the other diffs ? o.o fix'd
The timing should be the same on each diff

[Insane]

01:15:400 (1) - What about finishing this spinner at 01:16:840 ? (and then add some circles like that : http://puu.sh/AuC ) k

Here is a star for you /o/
~Starz'd !

PhyProductions

35 posts

Joined February 2010

PhyProductions 2010-12-23T16:30:28+00:00

Now I can't get this song out of my head, lol.

One thing though, with this new mp3:
Offset NEEDS to be reduced 25ms. Then Scale to new timing.

Good Luck getting this ranked.
Star~

Hyguys

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Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Hyguys 2010-12-23T21:14:10+00:00

nickopet2007 wrote:
Now I can't get this song out of my head, lol.

One thing though, with this new mp3:
Offset NEEDS to be reduced 25ms. Then Scale to new timing. why? who cares , did

Good Luck getting this ranked.
Star~

REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE THIS POST.
EDIT: very strange with this offset , rolling back to 7766

Arusha Shuna

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Joined August 2009

Arusha Shuna 2010-12-26T04:25:26+00:00

offset 7710 (manage to do some 0ms late/early when testing)
i don't see why would you need that .osb/SB in the end, delete the .osb

i can't find any problems with the map though, except some nazi
STAR!

EDIT : also don't tell me about REDOWNLOAD THIS MAP BEFORE THIS POST again, i modded this map right after i download it. There's a .osb in the mapset and a pointless SB (i still don't get it why would you need that SB), delete it, full submit it

Last edited by Arusha Shuna 2010-12-26T13:34:26+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

nimi

978 posts

Joined April 2010

nimi 2010-12-26T11:40:41+00:00

SPOILER

Hyguys wrote:
REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE THIS POST.

Não é todo mundo que vai ler a thread do mapa x_x Da próxima vez que for dar update edite a descrição. ._.'

Arusha Shuna wrote:
i don't see why would you need that .osb/SB in the end, delete the .osb

Even peppy said there was no need of deleting .osb file, so.. why doing it? >_>

Pooois bem. Offset T^T Tem que arrumar isso

laport

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Joined June 2010

laport 2010-12-26T15:23:59+00:00

nice map

star

Revengexsoyah

652 posts

Joined June 2009

Revengexsoyah 2011-01-05T20:36:19+00:00

HI

~misja056's Body~
01:05:842 (5) : move one grid right
02:22:642 (2) : move one grid up

~Normal~
00:18:802 : try this

http://puu.sh/F87
really that sounds better is not it ? D:
03:04:402 : Finish ?
03:12:082 : ^ ?

~Insane~
03:04:402 : Finish AGAIN ? Xd
03:12:082 : ^ ¿ xD

Very Very Fine map

star and good luck

laport

1,240 posts

Joined June 2010

laport 2011-01-08T16:12:12+00:00

about timing offset, i liked it better increasing offset to around 25 ms @ [insane]

i mean D: all we are getting is 100's this can't be right, did you change the mp3 or something?

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-01-11T15:12:12+00:00

nono i didn't change.
dunno about offset D: i'm trying to find a mat to find it

gogoyugi100

1 post

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gogoyugi100 2011-01-14T15:27:02+00:00

[google:82208][/google:82208][/color]

Hyguys

1,272 posts

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-01-20T17:32:57+00:00

Revengexsoyah wrote:
HI

~Normal~
00:18:802 : try this http://puu.sh/F87 no
really that sounds better is not it ? D:
03:04:402 : Finish ? k
03:12:082 : ^ ? k

~Insane~
03:04:402 : Finish AGAIN ? Xd K
03:12:082 : ^ ¿ xD K

Very Very Fine map thx

star and good luck thx

i think i fixed offset

Misja

193 posts

Joined August 2010

Misja 2011-01-20T17:52:48+00:00

Updated version + soon newer version

Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [misja056's body].osu

Aleks719

osu! Alumni

2,436 posts

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Aleks719 2011-02-07T03:53:25+00:00

General
Imo, offset - 15ms (7705). Resnap all notes, if you agree.

Insane
01:27:400 (1,3) - may be make it symmetrically?
01:29:640 - add note (1/3 divisor)
01:58:840 (x) - add note?
03:22:600 (3) - remove 1 reverse
03:23:080 (x) - add note + clap
03:23:320 (4) - remove whistle, add clap

Normal
Difficulty here as in easy. Fix please (HP drain +4, AR +3, OD +3 )
01:23:560 (1) - fix slider points

[misja056's body]
Sliders here is too fast oO
1.66x for easy
00:40:360 (3,4) - hard to readable for novices, fix please
01:07:240 (2,1) - spacing
01:49:480 (3,4) - hard to readable for novices, fix please
02:01:480 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - ^ avoid overlap, please

Raimon

295 posts

Joined December 2010

Raimon 2011-03-02T20:02:57+00:00

Star

(some strange parts in normal & insane mod but its ok)

Hyguys

1,272 posts

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-03-03T22:31:32+00:00

i'm reedoning normal and offset. no mods until i finish. >:x

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-03-15T16:38:05+00:00

did. GOGOMODS O

Hamuko

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Hamuko 2011-03-16T00:39:19+00:00

IRC Mod

Hyguys

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Hyguys 2011-03-16T00:44:04+00:00

que se foda. toma dois kudo

Hamuko

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Hamuko 2011-03-16T01:07:28+00:00

Acho que offset eh 39 btw. nao da kd. porque devo tar errado.

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2011-03-16T06:57:57+00:00

This mod may make you a bit annoyed, but I think these modifications are for the better.

General
You spelled lepidopodus wrong in the tags!
This map was pending before the 192 bitrate rule so it can pass.
640x480 background? Awfully low resolution

misja056's body
Capitalize Body in the name of the difficulty.
AR +2 or +3
02:45:149 (1) - This spinner needs a new combo
Bleh

Medium Body

SPOILER

AR +1 or +2
00:17:309 - New combo
00:17:789 - Remove new combo
00:19:709 - New combo
00:21:149 - New combo
00:22:589 - Remove new combo
00:23:069 - New combo
00:27:389 - New combo
00:27:389 (4,5) - I'd put the finish not on the 5 but on the end of the 4 slider
00:42:269 - New combo
00:42:749 - Remove new combo
00:44:189 - New combo
00:44:669 - Remove new combo
00:51:869 - Remove new combo
01:23:869 - That really doesn't seem right.
01:30:749 - Remove new combo
01:37:949 - Wowowow why is there a 3 on the spinner?!
01:53:309 - Remove new combo
01:57:149 - Remove new combo
02:00:989 - Remove new combo
02:02:909 - New combo
02:04:829 - Remove new combo
02:06:749 - New combo
02:07:229 - Remove new combo
02:09:149 - Remove new combo
02:10:589 - New combo
02:11:549 - Remove new combo
02:16:349 - Remove new combo

Insane Body

SPOILER

00:27:869 (4,5) - I'd flip the finish on these
00:31:949 - Remove new combo
00:35:789 - Remove new combo
00:39:629 - Remove new combo
00:47:309 - Remove new combo
00:48:029 - New combo
00:48:989 - Remove new combo
00:51:149 - Remove new combo
00:54:989 - Remove new combo
00:56:669 - Remove new combo
00:56:669 - Remove new combo
01:02:429 (4) - Visibly too far from the 5, move it to the left once
01:03:229 (1) - Move left twice, down twice
01:06:749 (4) - Move up once
01:07:549 (7) - Move up once
01:07:709 (8) - Move right once
01:10:589 (8) - Move up once
01:10:909 - New Combo
01:12:349 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this http://puu.sh/1eeH
01:17:309 (2) - That's misleadingly close
01:19:229 (8) - Move left twice
01:20:029 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this http://puu.sh/1ef6
01:20:669 - Remove new combo
01:22:589 - Remove new combo
01:24:509 - Remove new combo
01:26:269 - Remove new combo
01:26:269 (4,5,6,7) - Make these parallel
01:29:789 - New combo
01:30:269 - Remove new combo
01:30:269 (4,5,1) - That spacing is really bad
01:30:749 - New combo
01:30:869 - Remove new combo
01:31:709 - New combo
01:31:829 - Remove new combo
01:34:109 - Remove new combo
01:34:589 - Remove new combo
01:41:069 - Remove new combo
01:44:669 - Remove new combo
01:48:749 - Remove new combo
01:56:429 - Remove new combo
01:58:109 - Remove new combo
02:00:269 - Remove new combo
02:04:109 - Remove new combo
02:05:789 - Remove new combo
02:07:949 - Remove new combo
02:17:789 - Remove new combo
02:18:269 - New combo
02:19:709 - Remove new combo
02:20:189 - New combo
02:26:909 - Remove new combo
02:31:229 - Remove new combo
02:31:709 - New combo
02:34:349 - Remove new combo
02:42:869 - Remove new combo
02:43:229 - New combo
02:43:829 - Remove new combo
02:43:829 (3,4) - Bad spacing
02:48:989 - I woulda ended the map right here, lol
03:04:870 - Get creative, map this break
03:13:470 - ^^
03:19:709 - New combo
03:21:629 (1,2,3,4) - This entire combo has bad bad spacing
03:28:589 - Remove new combo
03:30:989 - Remove new combo
03:31:229 - New combo

The 08 team_Bourdon

710 posts

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The 08 team_Bourdon 2011-03-16T16:47:26+00:00

star!

Hyguys

1,272 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-03-17T00:55:37+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
This mod may make you a bit annoyed, but I think these modifications are for the better.

General
You spelled lepidopodus wrong in the tags!
This map was pending before the 192 bitrate rule so it can pass.
640x480 background? Awfully low resolution

misja056's body
Capitalize Body in the name of the difficulty. k
AR +2 or +3
02:45:149 (1) - This spinner needs a new combo
Bleh
done
Medium Body
SPOILER
AR +1 or +2 [b]bleh[/b]
00:17:309 - New combo
00:17:789 - Remove new combo
00:19:709 - New combo
00:21:149 - New combo
00:22:589 - Remove new combo
00:23:069 - New combo
00:27:389 - New combo
00:27:389 (4,5) - I'd put the finish not on the 5 but on the end of the 4 slider
00:42:269 - New combo
00:42:749 - Remove new combo
00:44:189 - New combo
00:44:669 - Remove new combo
00:51:869 - Remove new combo
01:23:869 - That really doesn't seem right. that's called 1/3.
01:30:749 - Remove new combo
01:37:949 - Wowowow why is there a 3 on the spinner?! :<
01:53:309 - Remove new combo
01:57:149 - Remove new combo
02:00:989 - Remove new combo
02:02:909 - New combo
02:04:829 - Remove new combo
02:06:749 - New combo
02:07:229 - Remove new combo
02:09:149 - Remove new combo
02:10:589 - New combo
02:11:549 - Remove new combo
02:16:349 - Remove new combo god what an new combo mod

Insane Body i will continue mod tomorrow i'm gonna sleep :<
SPOILER
00:27:869 (4,5) - I'd flip the finish on these wats flip
00:31:949 - Remove new comb k
00:35:789 - Remove new combo k
00:39:629 - Remove new combo k
00:47:309 - Remove new combo
00:48:029 - New combo
00:48:989 - Remove new combo
00:51:149 - Remove new combo
00:54:989 - Remove new combo
00:56:669 - Remove new combo
00:56:669 - Remove new combo
01:02:429 (4) - Visibly too far from the 5, move it to the left once thx i didnt notice
01:03:229 (1) - Move left twice, down twice
01:06:749 (4) - Move up once
01:07:549 (7) - Move up once
01:07:709 (8) - Move right once
01:10:589 (8) - Move up once
01:10:909 - New Combo
01:12:349 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this http://puu.sh/1eeH
01:17:309 (2) - That's misleadingly close
01:19:229 (8) - Move left twice
01:20:029 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this http://puu.sh/1ef6
01:20:669 - Remove new combo
01:22:589 - Remove new combo
01:24:509 - Remove new combo
01:26:269 - Remove new combo
01:26:269 (4,5,6,7) - Make these parallel
01:29:789 - New combo
01:30:269 - Remove new combo
01:30:269 (4,5,1) - That spacing is really bad
01:30:749 - New combo
01:30:869 - Remove new combo
01:31:709 - New combo
01:31:829 - Remove new combo
01:34:109 - Remove new combo
01:34:589 - Remove new combo
01:41:069 - Remove new combo
01:44:669 - Remove new combo
01:48:749 - Remove new combo
01:56:429 - Remove new combo
01:58:109 - Remove new combo
02:00:269 - Remove new combo
02:04:109 - Remove new combo
02:05:789 - Remove new combo
02:07:949 - Remove new combo
02:17:789 - Remove new combo
02:18:269 - New combo
02:19:709 - Remove new combo
02:20:189 - New combo
02:26:909 - Remove new combo
02:31:229 - Remove new combo
02:31:709 - New combo
02:34:349 - Remove new combo
02:42:869 - Remove new combo
02:43:229 - New combo
02:43:829 - Remove new combo
02:43:829 (3,4) - Bad spacing
02:48:989 - I woulda ended the map right here, lol
03:04:870 - Get creative, map this break
03:13:470 - ^^
03:19:709 - New combo
03:21:629 (1,2,3,4) - This entire combo has bad bad spacing
03:28:589 - Remove new combo
03:30:989 - Remove new combo
03:31:229 - New combo

fixed almost all.

Genkishi

566 posts

Joined September 2010

Genkishi 2011-03-20T01:28:21+00:00

Hi.....The Insane Mode

so first this map is pretty nice but in my suggestions here you need to add these hitsounds:

00:16:109 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3
00:16:829 - add a whistle on the start of the slider number 1
00:17:309 - add a whistle on the start of the slider number 2
00:18:269 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5
00:18:749 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 1 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow
00:19:229 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 2 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow
00:19:709 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3
00:19:949 - add a clap on hit circle number 4
00:20:189 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5
00:21:509 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3
00:22:589 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 1 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow
00:23:069 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 2 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow
00:23:549 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3
00:24:029 - add a whistle at the end of the slider number 4
00:24:749 - add a whistle at the end of the slider number 1
00:25:229 - add a whistle at the end of the slider number 2
00:25:709 - add a whistle at the end of the slider number 4
00:26:429 - add a whistle at the start of the slider number 1
00:26:909 - add a whistle at the start of the slider number 2
00:27:389 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3
00:29:309 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 1
00:29:789 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3
00:30:149 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5
00:30:269 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 6
00:30:629 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 9

Sooooo,this part is the intro....

Nice Beatmap

LuPiiTa

371 posts

Joined June 2010

LuPiiTa 2011-03-22T23:14:45+00:00

star!

Hyguys

1,272 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-03-25T00:42:30+00:00

Genkishi wrote:
Hi.....The Insane Mode

so first this map is pretty nice but in my suggestions here you need to add these hitsounds:
*= no
/= k

00:16:109 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3 *
00:16:829 - add a whistle on the start of the slider number 1 *
00:17:309 - add a whistle on the start of the slider number 2 *
00:18:269 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5 *
00:18:749 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 1 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow *
00:19:229 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 2 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow *
00:19:709 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3 *
00:19:949 - add a clap on hit circle number 4 /
00:20:189 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5 *
00:21:509 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3 * (..)

Sooooo,this part is the intro....

Nice Beatmap

bleh i did only ONE thing on the mod but ... k
thx for the star , lupiita

Hyguys

1,272 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-04-06T16:54:13+00:00

bump

Katsuri

1,075 posts

Joined February 2011

Katsuri 2011-04-17T01:18:29+00:00

Para de overmappear.

agora me da 2 kudos

brinkz

PotsBreaker

129 posts

Joined January 2011

PotsBreaker 2011-04-27T04:05:27+00:00

Last edited by Andrea 2011-05-06T02:39:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Screenagers

42 posts

Joined May 2011

Screenagers 2011-05-08T08:03:00+00:00

gustjr1997

51 posts

Joined April 2011

gustjr1997 2011-05-09T09:20:58+00:00

star

Doomsday

Featured Artist

1,961 posts

Joined July 2008

Doomsday 2011-05-15T22:57:27+00:00

Yo o/

In the tags, you mispelled lepidopodus, "lepidodupos".
For some reason, the BG image is in the storyboard as well, comes in at the end and doesn't do anything. Guess you put that in accidentally? I would delete it.

[MISJA056'S BODY]

This plays well, and has some nice hitsounds going, even though it suffers from a bland layout. Lots of straight sliders, pointing straight down or across. Even in an easy it's good to mix up the layout. Using different slider shapes and beat patterns can make a map so much better to play.

Also, a lot of it is on white ticks (on 1/1 beats). Yeah, in this song that is how the rhythm goes, but you can still using red ticks to mix the rhythms up a bit, even in an easy

01:44:189 (2,4) - Maybe move (4) to the left a bit? so the slider start is on the slider end of (2)? for the sake of prettiness.

[MEDIUM BODY]

Kinda like in Misja056's difficulty, it's stuck on 1/1 beats a little too much, but again, that's how the rhythm goes, and you do try to mix things up at times, and have some nice patterns too.

01:23:869 (1) - maybe just make this a 1/1 slider? (start: 01:24:029, finish: 01:24:509) This does go with the rhythm, but feels a little odd to play, so many a 1/1 slider might actually work better here.
01:44:189 (2,4) - Maybe reverse the slider ends here? (Edit < Reverse Selection). In a normal, after the other spacing before this, this bit could confuse some.
02:36:509 (4) - Maybe use a copy of (1) here instead, flipped horizontally so it is all symmetrical? (Again, just for prettiness)

[INSANE BODY]

I quite like this difficulty. It's simple, and the layout is a little dull with much of the map stuck on straight horizontal/vertical lines. However, the rhythms are good though, and fun to play, while the patterns are nice. A nice little map to play

Quite a big difficulty jump between this and medium. Maybe a hard difficulty would fit in well here.

01:30:749 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Maybe stack these beats instead of having a stream, so it is clearer? This confused me, since the other streams like this were 1/3, but this was 1/4. Stacking them would help differentiate them. (Other ones like this after did not have the same issue, so they seem okay)
01:34:589 (9) - Move this into that stream? Feels odd with it away from the stream, like it is.

[LEPIDON'S TAIKO ONI BODY]

The timing for this is different to the other difficulties. Other diffs have Offset: 29, and this has Offset: 26. change the offset for this to offset: 29? that one sounds the better of the two to me anyway.

Looks and plays well to me. Another like Lepidon taiko map

Just one bit irked me though:
01:24:386 (32,1) - why not just make this 1/3 like the rest of the stream? it plays a little odd I think, or either way, would work better if this was 1/3 personally.

On the whole, this is a nice little map. It's simple, and looks a little bland to be honest, with it's straight sliders and it's constant 1/1 beats in the easier difficulties, it plays nicely and is quite fun, more fun than it looks. I quite like it

I'll just drop this star here

Antu Villegas

242 posts

Joined December 2009

Antu Villegas 2011-05-23T21:14:06+00:00

Star ^^

Misja

193 posts

Joined August 2010

Misja 2011-05-24T13:10:04+00:00

Now It is time for ranking?
Download: Black Eyed Peas - Rock That Body (Hyguys) [misja056's Body].osu

Hyguys

1,272 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Hyguys 2011-05-29T23:23:29+00:00

fail , i was planning this to grave , but since doomsy posted ~ here it goes lol

DanielDiaz_old

233 posts

Joined February 2011

DanielDiaz_old 2011-06-25T18:10:46+00:00

star

Maddinho

7 posts

Joined June 2011

Maddinho 2011-06-29T14:07:13+00:00

Hey you.
I got some suggestions.
Medium Body:
Isnt it a bit short?

Misja056's Body:
At 0:33:149 In my eyes this slider is ugly. Dont see it in any kind of a blame. Change?
At 0:51:869 This hitcircle is very hard to see at the first times you play it. Delete?
At 0:59:549 This hitcircle is very hard to see at the first times you play it. Delete?
At 1:42:269 In my eyes this slider is ugly. Dont see it in any kind of a blame. Change?
At 2:08:669 This hitcircle is very hard to see at the first times you play it. Delete?

Sorry but the other difficulties are too hard for me.

Without this little mistakes (in my eyes) I really like your map. The Image is awesome the colours you use fit very good with this background and the song is epic aswell.

Very Goodjob at doing this map. Star.

Katsuri

1,075 posts

Joined February 2011

Katsuri 2011-07-19T21:48:07+00:00

RANK THIS ARIARIARIARIA

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

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Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2012-09-13T21:33:50+00:00

hi~~ sorry later

hoo is WIP

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if witouht " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[Sweet Body]

Hitsound:

00:15:389 (1) - Add whistle in begin slider because the Hard have it whistle so you need keep it consistency hitsound also that sense lot too so is good if you add begin slider
00:17:789 (4) - add clap on begin slider look like you did patterns after and this not so i guess you missing add here
00:18:749 (5) - add clap
00:19:229 (1) - add whistle in begin slider is same explained at 00:15:389 (1)
00:23:069 (1) - ^ same also add clap in end slider
00:24:509 (3) - add clap in begin sldier and add whistle in end slider
00:25:469 (1) - add clap
00:25:949 (2) - add whistle in end slider
00:28:829 (1) - add finish if you keep it consistency with anothe diff "Expert body"
00:31:229 at 00:45:629 - is sooo lack hitsound you should really add hitsound clap in whit tick 2nd and 4nd
00:32:669 (2) - add finish that lot sense because lyrics and drums
00:36:509 (3) - ^ same
00:40:349 (3) - ^ same
00:44:189 (3) - ^ same
00:46:109 (1) - Add whislte ? that really sense becayse the lyrics is women and drums is strong that lot sense imo
00:47:069 (2) - add clap in end slider i guess you forget add
00:49:949 (1) - add whistle in begin slider same explained at 00:46:109 (1)
00:53:789 (1) - ^
00:57:629 (1) - ^
01:01:469 at 01:30:749 - add clap 1nd and 3nd white tick? like you did in Expert body that sense lot imo
01:39:869 (1) - add finish in begin slider that sense lot same explained at 00:32:669 (2)
01:41:789 (1) - ^ same
01:45:629 (3) - ^ same
01:49:469 (4) - ^ same
01:39:869 at 01:54:749 - again lack hitsound you should really add hitsound clap in whit tick 2nd and 4nd
01:55:709 (2) - you forget add clap in end slider

another hitsound need more work hitsound because is important fix consistency i know this is old but need more work

Gameplay:

00:32:669 (2) - I feel this need New combo because the Lyrics and drums are too strong that sense lot
00:36:509 (3) - ^ same
00:40:349 (3) - ^ same
00:44:189 (3) - ^ same
01:41:789 (3) -new combo and at 01:43:229 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:43:709 (2) - put new combo like this http://puu.sh/14Jut
01:45:629 (3) - at 01:47:549 (2) ^ same
01:49:469 (4) - at 01:51:389 (2) ^ same
01:53:309 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/14Jwr that sense lot because the lyrics is still continue
01:39:869 at 01:54:749 (2) - that 100% copy-paste with 00:31:229 at 00:46:109 ? the copy-paste is fine but you can't same place pleasse try get another place or remap this part
01:54:749 at 02:10:589 - again 100% copy-past same place try get another past

good gameplay the problem copy-paste is fine but can't do that same place again

[Expert body]

Hitsound:

00:20:189 (5) - add clap the repeat ? because is sense lot
00:27:389 (2) - add clap in end slider that sense lot
00:32:669 (2) - add finish in begin slider is same explained in "Sweet body"
00:36:509 (3) - ^ same
00:40:349 (3) - ^ same
00:56:909 (4) - you forget add clap here if you keep it consistency
01:08:189 (3,4) - the finish is don't sense for me remove it?
01:41:789 (1) - ^ same add finish in begin slider that sense lot same explained at 00:32:669 (2)
01:45:629 (3) - ^ same
01:49:469 (4) - ^ same

good but more hitsound finish and consistency

Gameplay:

00:32:429 (5) - need stack with 00:33:389 (2) - start slider
01:07:709 (2) - this slider is not same shape at 01:08:669 (4) try same shape
01:41:549 (5) - again stack with 01:42:509 (2)

pretty funny

[]
sorry big mod, but only problem is hitsound should be consistency and sweet body copy-paste is fine but same place no
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
best of luck and bye bye

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2012-10-01T17:00:08+00:00

Hey

so lets start xD
btw, these are only suggestions, no need to really implement these :d

Sweet Body
i can't find something really bad in it, so i think its ok

maybe there are some confusing parts (overlapping cirlces)

Hard Body
01:59:069 (1) - maybe make this a bit rounder

Expert Body
00:55:109 (4) - http://puu.sh/1apCm
01:00:749 (3) - add a circle
01:05:309 (1) - make it end at the blue line and
01:05:789 (2) - add a circle
01:10:589 (6) - ^ same
02:03:869 (3) - same as http://puu.sh/1apCm
02:11:309 (7) - add a circle
02:13:229 (5) - add a circle
02:15:149 (5) - add a cricle
03:19:709 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - in this parts (there are other which are like this too) you could make some bigger distance snap, because its kinda obvious (ask me if you don't know what i mean XD)

I really like the beatmap

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,422 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2012-10-08T13:40:31+00:00

General

Your mp3 is 205 kbps, which is a bit higher than 192 kbps (ranking criteria). However, it's VBR (variable bitrate), so decline any requests to reencode it and full submit, since it's allowed for VBR.
Your light gray colour is way too pale and blends with background, consider changing it.

All diffs

Add pop and/or punk to the tags
Make everything more quiet. Lower 100% volume down to 80, the same goes for 89%.
02:44:920 - 0% volume is unrankable. If you need it for a reason, use 5% — it won't hurt.
03:35:069 — add a kiai fountain?

Sweet Body

00:46:109 (1) - add finish?
01:01:469 (1) and such — claps on the big white ticks don't go well with vocal, consider removing/replacing with something
01:32:189 - either start break here by dragging its beginning forward (to emphasize vocals), or add a note
01:39:869 (1) - please no. I hear these claps again, better place them at 2nd and 4th ticks where possible because it really fits the song better
03:35:309 (1) - I don't think you need to keep this spinner since main part of the music ends at 03:35:069

Hard Body

AR +1, because it's Hard and I can't see a thing. +2, even (if you are okay with it)

00:30:509 (3) - add finish to the end
00:34:349 (2) - make a better beat blanket
00:37:949 — you seem to stop hitsounding objects at all. Please, bring clap rhythm back
01:03:869 — and again, stop leaving things unarranged
01:43:469 (2) - make a better beat blanket
01:47:069 — continue clapping. Again
02:05:309 (2,3,4) - fix spacing, it should be plain 0.1 to avoid random amound of free space between the elements
02:09:629 (2) - ^
02:34:109 — clap reminder

lepidon's Taiko Body

Increase SV a bit? The current one seems to be kind of low for me

Expert Body

01:00:869 (3) - there is no note in music, therefore, it's hard to get it right. Better remove it
01:32:189 (1) - add finish. Also, remember what I've said about claps on 1st tick before. Consider changing them to 2-4 scheme ("default" one)
02:10:589 — no. By putting a repeating slider, you skip the big white tick here, which means a new part of music. osu! is a rhythm-based game, so I guess you need to add a new object appearing here or right after that tick (read as "remove repeating slider and make another kind of thing")
02:45:389 (1) - start it on the blue tick after previous slider
03:00:509 — add a note
03:11:069 (3) - add finish to the end?

I love that 1/3 part. Also, I'd like to see your responce on every thing you reject from my mod — just to be sure you don't drop it for no reason.

Bonus

I was going to post a short loose mod, as you did to my map, but then I remembered I love this music. Moral: spend more than 15 mins on modding and don't post for the sake of post.

Crimmi

1,947 posts

Joined June 2009

Crimmi 2015-06-10T00:02:12+00:00

Placeholder, mod coming soon~

EDIT: 2010~ And I thought my maps we're old.

Ahem~

Personal Thoughts. (You can ignore these as it's just my personal take on that issue.)
Recommended.
Suggestion. (You can take this advice or leave it, it's up to you~)

[General]

I suggest you make the hitsound volume to at least 75% or 80%.
You have "misja056" & "lepidopodus" in the tags even though their difficulties are no longer in your mapset, please remove them in each diff unless you're re-adding them.
Try Offset 15, if not you can ignore this one.
Considering removing the countdown on "Insane".
There are some unused bookmarks in all diffs, just click the reset button below in Editor to resolve this.
That BG is 640x480, at least find one that is 800x600.
There is some unsnapped inherited points on this mapset, i'll point them out for you:
Kiai

[Easy]

This feels more like a Normal than an Easy, but that is just me xD

00:32:669 (1) - Remove new combo because the next verse starts here at 00:34:589 (1) - .
00:33:149 (3) - This could blanket 00:34:589 (1) - a bit better.
00:36:509 (1) - Remove new combo, you're following the vocal here until the new combo started here at 00:38:429 (1) - .
00:38:909 (2) - A blanket around 00:40:349 (1) - would be nice.
00:40:349 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:829 (2) - ^
00:44:189 (1) - ^
01:28:829 (2) - My suggestion:
01:32:189 (x) - Maybe add a note with a finish here to signal the break?
01:42:269 (1) - Remove new combo. Also this can blanket 01:43:709 (2) - a bit better.
01:43:709 (1) - Add new combo here.
01:44:189 (1) - Remove new combo here.
01:46:109 (1) - ^
01:49:949 (1) - Like before, you should clean up on some of these sliders and blanket them neatly~
01:53:789 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:269 (x) - A note with a finish here.

[Medium]

00:17:535 (1) - Remove New combo.
00:17:775 (2) - My suggestion
00:17:789 (3) - Make this slider curving around 00:19:229 (1)- .
00:21:855 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:975 (1) - ^
00:32:175 (4) - This slider could use a curving around 00:33:375 (1)- .
00:34:335 (2) - ^ But for the slider end.
00:37:695 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:935 (2) - This should blanket (1) a bit better.
00:40:335 (1) - Remove NC.
00:42:015 (5) - Remove clap.
00:48:015 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:495 (2) - This should move a bit to the left.
01:03:375 (1) - Remove NC.
01:34:335 (1) - ^
01:41:295 (4) - Curve this around (1) for a better blanket.
01:42:495 (1) - Remove NC.
01:43:455 (2) - Remove clap, also a new combo should go here
01:47:775 (1) - Remove NC.

[Insane]

00:56:189 (2) - My suggestion
01:02:589 (4) - Snap this back to 1/6, it sounded offbeat a bit.
01:08:189 (3) - Suggestion.
01:08:669 (2) - Blanket this around (1) a bit better~
01:15:309 (6) - Snap this 1/6th back.
01:23:869 (4,5) - (4) & (5) are overlapping each other (see here), get rid of one of them and set it forward 1/6th.
01:24:149 (6,7) - These should be a 1/6th forward for each of these two notes.
01:24:509 (1) - This should blanket (2).
01:26:429 (6) - This should blanket the slider-end of (4).
02:15:389 (1) - This looks better pointed upwards.

Phew~ Took me a while, but I have done it! The map is old yes, it's just needs some tuning up, before you can get a BN.

Gonzvlo

osu! Alumni

2,896 posts

Joined January 2010

Gonzvlo 2015-06-10T03:10:59+00:00

SPOILER

21:50 Hyguys: it that a good thing? :3
21:50 Gonzvlo: yeah
21:50 Hyguys: okay
21:50 Gonzvlo: 01:17:937 - 
21:51 Gonzvlo: you need one here, i think
21:51 Hyguys: okay
21:52 Gonzvlo: hold on}
21:53 Gonzvlo: i think the timing is a little off at this part
21:53 Gonzvlo: or something
21:53 Gonzvlo: 01:16:817 - 
21:53 Gonzvlo: might wanna re-check with somebody else
21:53 Hyguys: too early?
21:54 Gonzvlo: hmm there's something off, i can't tell what :P
21:54 Hyguys: hey.. you're right
21:54 Hyguys: the latest modder
21:54 Hyguys: told me to change the offset from 29 to 15
21:54 Hyguys: revert it back to 29
21:55 Hyguys: and tell me your thoughts
21:55 Gonzvlo: 02:03:857 (3,4) - this is good but it's the only place you've used sliders like these, might wanna repeat here 02:07:937 -  for consistency
21:56 Gonzvlo: 02:37:217 - maybe add notes in 1/4 for consistency with the 2 previous patterns
21:56 Gonzvlo: 02:43:097 -  ^
21:56 Gonzvlo: hold on gotta put my headphones to check the timing really quick
21:57 Hyguys: ok
22:01 Gonzvlo: hmm the offset needs about +5ms
22:02 Gonzvlo: buut i'm still not sure, might the bpm aswell
22:02 Gonzvlo: but i'm not suure
22:02 Hyguys: that's all?!
22:02 Hyguys: i agree
22:02 Gonzvlo: i guees :3
22:02 Hyguys: however... that raises me a question
22:02 Hyguys: this beatmap has 5 years
22:02 Hyguys: thousands of mods
22:03 Hyguys: ...none of them said something about that
22:03 Gonzvlo: hmm let me check
22:03 Gonzvlo: omg 5 pages of mods
22:03 Hyguys: yeah dude
22:03 Gonzvlo: lol, i don't know, that's what I'm getting perhaps my universal offset is bad
22:03 Hyguys: i still ~feel~ it
22:03 Hyguys: to be honest
22:04 Hyguys: i guess I'll add 5 ms to the offset
22:04 Hyguys: that won't be a problem
22:04 Gonzvlo: use Doomsday timing
22:04 Gonzvlo: he said 29, use that
22:04 Hyguys: yes , Your Honor.
22:04 Hyguys: haha
22:04 Gonzvlo: e.e
22:04 Hyguys: :c
22:04 Hyguys: i actually... forgot
22:04 Hyguys: that the one that gave me the offset was doomsday
22:05 Gonzvlo: he's good with timing, 29 should be fine
22:05 Hyguys: ok
22:05 Hyguys: what do you think about this bm now?
22:06 Hyguys: should I start asking for BN or still normal mods?
22:06 Hyguys: because I guess 90% of the things will be opinion
22:06 Gonzvlo: well you've remapped right?
22:06 Gonzvlo: but you've obviously improved a lot
22:06 Gonzvlo: asks bns
22:07 Hyguys: yes
22:07 Hyguys: a couple of times
22:07 Hyguys: thanks for all the advices man
22:07 Hyguys: i want to reward you somehow
22:08 Gonzvlo: np :3
22:08 Gonzvlo: kudos plx
22:09 Hyguys: ok
22:09 Hyguys: post on the forum
22:09 Hyguys: i'll give you
22:09 Gonzvlo: lol really?
22:09 Gonzvlo: i was kidding :3
22:09 Hyguys: but you helped me a lot!
22:10 Gonzvlo: i'll just post it counts a mod more for your map :d

George

George 2015-06-11T05:26:48+00:00

---General---
Make a normal plz
Keep in mind I'm going off of 2015 guidelines, although maps that are made from years prior to 2013 or 2012 are fun and look good, they may use things that arent rankable in todays standards

---Easy---
00:17:789 (4,1) - Eventually someone will condemn you for overlapping here
00:51:869 (3,4) - Make these a straight line
01:22:589 (4,5) - think looks kind of odd, I don't think you should change it just yet though until someone with higher authority (such as a BN) says so
01:39:869 (1,2) - fix stack
02:34:109 (2) - move this left more

---Medium---
Rename this to hard
00:27:869 (3,1) - make these symmetrical
00:49:469 (6,1) - I'd fix this blanket
01:50:429 (3,4,5) - the DS here looks screwed up
01:57:869 (2,3) - fix blanket

---Insane---
00:55:709 (1,2) - fix symmetry
02:04:829 (1,2) - ^
02:45:389 (1) - start on red

glhf

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2015-06-11T16:38:38+00:00

George wrote:
---General---
Make a normal plz
Keep in mind I'm going off of 2015 guidelines, although maps that are made from years prior to 2013 or 2012 are fun and look good, they may use things that arent rankable in todays standards Okay

---Easy---
00:17:789 (4,1) - Eventually someone will condemn you for overlapping here If someone say this again I'm going to change it , but not now
00:51:869 (3,4) - Make these a straight line applied
01:22:589 (4,5) - think looks kind of odd, I don't think you should change it just yet though until someone with higher authority (such as a BN) says so applied
01:39:869 (1,2) - fix stack changed
02:34:109 (2) - move this left more fixed it but by moving the (1)

---Medium---
Rename this to hard
00:27:869 (3,1) - make these symmetrical ok
00:49:469 (6,1) - I'd fix this blanket ok
01:50:429 (3,4,5) - the DS here looks screwed up what's that?if it's distance snap ,it's completely perfect
01:57:869 (2,3) - fix blanket ok

---Insane---
00:55:709 (1,2) - fix symmetry applied
02:04:829 (1,2) - ^ applied
02:45:389 (1) - start on red applied

glhf

Good mod , and thanks for it (y)

Peachtrees

815 posts

Joined May 2013

Peachtrees 2015-06-11T18:48:49+00:00

M4M as arranged via pm c:

Easy

00:17:789 (4,5,1) - atleast try arranging this in a way that 4 is in the middle of 1 for the overlap? currently just looks a bit messy

00:21:149 (3,4) - watch your spacing

00:25:949 (2,1) - blanket could look much, much neater I think

00:31:229 (1,2,3) - would honestly play nicer if the movement between these was a bit smoother/curvier, meaning less sharp angles

00:38:909 (2,3,4) - again, watch your spacing

00:48:509 (4,1,2) - spacing. I'm going to stop pointing this kinda stuff out. I REALLY REALLY think that this should be fixed though, makes the map look messy

01:13:949 (3,4) - not sure if doing this kinda thing in an Easy Diff is a good thing to do, as this might end up confusing newer players

01:16:349 (6,1) - ^

01:39:869 (1,2) - no reason not to have this blanket 100% perfect as it requires little to no re-arrangement

02:11:549 (3,4,1) - really not sure if this kinda rythm is appropriate to use in an Easy, especially since you didn't use this after the first refrain

I'm going to be blunt here: Lots of sloppy/weird slidershapes, messy spacing and overall just not very nice to look at I think :c

Normal

00:16:349 (3) - feels like the second 'I' this repeat is covering should be clickable to me

00:17:789 (5) - why not just use a normally curved slider here?

00:24:989 (5) - why not make the 'rock' clickable here? would just have to shorten the slider

00:38:669 (1,3) - stack these properly?

00:43:709 (3) - really unfitting. This downbeat should be clickable

00:56:189 (2,3) - these two look waaaayy to close ;w; the two sliderbodies are almost touching

00:59:549 (1) - why is the white beat being skipped? it REALLY feels like this should be clickable

01:15:229 (1,2,3,4) - would probably just keep it simple and map white ticks only here. not even sure what the extra circles are following here

01:22:109 (3) - downbeat should be clickable. Same goes for the next two instances this happens

01:34:589 (5,6,1) - this just looks really messy :c

01:36:989 (3,2) - try avoiding this overlap

welp these things honestly just keep repeating. Spacing ALSO feels rather messy at times, same goes for the slidershapes :c

Insane

00:21:869 (2,3) - really awkward flow here. should rotate 3 in a way that makes it easier to catch it

00:40:349 (1) - lower this a bit, it'll improve the flow

00:55:109 (4) - kinda weird to have this cover the third 'come on'

00:58:949 (5) - ^

01:01:469 (1) - this really calls for a slider imo, going along with the vocals here

01:05:309 (1,2) - should improve the blanket

01:31:949 (6,2,3,4) - overlap here honestly just looks messy :c

02:15:389 (1,2,3) - PLEASE have this blanket properly

It's probably because of how old this set is, but this style just looks really messy and unpolished to me. Sorry, but I'm not a fan :/

I still wish you the best of luck!

Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2015-06-11T22:28:18+00:00

Peachtrees wrote:
M4M as arranged via pm c:

Easy

00:17:789 (4,5,1) - atleast try arranging this in a way that 4 is in the middle of 1 for the overlap? currently just looks a bit messy

00:21:149 (3,4) - watch your spacing

00:25:949 (2,1) - blanket could look much, much neater I think

00:31:229 (1,2,3) - would honestly play nicer if the movement between these was a bit smoother/curvier, meaning less sharp angles give me an example , like a pic

00:38:909 (2,3,4) - again, watch your spacing

00:48:509 (4,1,2) - spacing. I'm going to stop pointing this kinda stuff out. I REALLY REALLY think that this should be fixed though, makes the map look messy

01:13:949 (3,4) - not sure if doing this kinda thing in an Easy Diff is a good thing to do, as this might end up confusing newer players wat

01:16:349 (6,1) - ^ wat

01:39:869 (1,2) - no reason not to have this blanket 100% perfect as it requires little to no re-arrangement

02:11:549 (3,4,1) - really not sure if this kinda rythm is appropriate to use in an Easy, especially since you didn't use this after the first refrain

I'm going to be blunt here: Lots of sloppy/weird slidershapes, messy spacing and overall just not very nice to look at I think :c :(

Normal

00:16:349 (3) - feels like the second 'I' this repeat is covering should be clickable to me ok [?]

00:17:789 (5) - why not just use a normally curved slider here?

00:24:989 (5) - why not make the 'rock' clickable here? would just have to shorten the slider

00:38:669 (1,3) - stack these properly?

00:43:709 (3) - really unfitting. This downbeat should be clickable

00:56:189 (2,3) - these two look waaaayy to close ;w; the two sliderbodies are almost touching

00:59:549 (1) - why is the white beat being skipped? it REALLY feels like this should be clickable

01:15:229 (1,2,3,4) - would probably just keep it simple and map white ticks only here. not even sure what the extra circles are following here

01:22:109 (3) - downbeat should be clickable. Same goes for the next two instances this happens

01:34:589 (5,6,1) - this just looks really messy :c

01:36:989 (3,2) - try avoiding this overlap

welp these things honestly just keep repeating. Spacing ALSO feels rather messy at times, same goes for the slidershapes :c

Insane

00:21:869 (2,3) - really awkward flow here. should rotate 3 in a way that makes it easier to catch itnah

00:40:349 (1) - lower this a bit, it'll improve the flow

00:55:109 (4) - kinda weird to have this cover the third 'come on' nah

00:58:949 (5) - ^

01:01:469 (1) - this really calls for a slider imo, going along with the vocals here nah

01:05:309 (1,2) - should improve the blanket

01:31:949 (6,2,3,4) - overlap here honestly just looks messy :c

02:15:389 (1,2,3) - PLEASE have this blanket properly

It's probably because of how old this set is, but this style just looks really messy and unpolished to me. Sorry, but I'm not a fan :/

I still wish you the best of luck!

The ones that were wrote nothing , I applied.
Thanks!

Alarido

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Alarido 2015-06-12T00:35:23+00:00

Que legaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal (^_^)

Primeira vez q vejo um mapa com uma estrela dourada (e é do Doomsday)

Logo logo moddando, tem outros tb na fila... inté^^

________________

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Hyguys

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Topic Starter

Hyguys 2015-06-12T01:24:42+00:00

Btw , já dei o kudos. Quando tu der o mod , não dou o kudos , ok ?XD

NVAN

268 posts

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NVAN 2015-06-12T19:22:57+00:00

Hi

I'm not an expert so please reply my mod properly so I can see your feedbacks :3

Mod Legends

| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Always watch for it
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy

[Easy]

Nothing to say

[Medium]

00:23:069 (1,2) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other
00:34:349 (2,3) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
00:49:949 (1) - Here's how to make a good slider
01:12:029 (4) - Move it to x:200 y:256 so it'll be blanketed by 01:10:589 (3)
01:20:669 (1,3) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other
01:50:429 (3,4) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
02:08:669 (1,2) - Avoid these two touching
02:35:069 (4) - Tweak it a bit to the right so it won't touching the 02:34:589 (3)
02:40:829 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? If no, ignore this. If yes, make it like this

[Insane]

00:24:989 (1) - Make the slider try to spooning/blanketing the tail of 00:24:029 (6) . Make it like this
00:51:869 (1) - Move it to x:88 y:172 or so to make it blanketing 00:51:509 (5,6)
01:11:389 (1,2) - Use DS here, it's hard to decide when to tap in 1/3 part song.
01:13:469 (2,3,4) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect
01:15:469 (1) - The spinner start should be at 01:15:469
01:23:869 (4,5,6) - Whoa watch the spacing here, dude. make it like this. This is use 1/6 beat so make sure they're keep stacking each other since it's pretty fast and some people won't know what's next if it's 1/4 or 1/6
02:00:989 (1) - Same problem as 00:51:869 (1) but move it to x:416y:176
02:16:109 (3) - Here's how to make a good slider
02:37:469 (1,2,3) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect

Hyguys

1,272 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Hyguys 2015-06-13T02:59:25+00:00

XeroiZi HD wrote:
Hi
I'm not an expert so please reply my mod properly so I can see your feedbacks :3

Mod Legends
| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Always watch for it
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy

[Easy]

Nothing to say
[Medium]
00:23:069 (1,2) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other
00:34:349 (2,3) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
00:49:949 (1) - Here's how to make a good slider nah
01:12:029 (4) - Move it to x:200 y:256 so it'll be blanketed by 01:10:589 (3)
01:20:669 (1,3) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other wat
01:50:429 (3,4) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
02:08:669 (1,2) - Avoid these two touching
02:35:069 (4) - Tweak it a bit to the right so it won't touching the 02:34:589 (3)
02:40:829 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? If no, ignore this. If yes, make it like this
[Insane]
00:24:989 (1) - Make the slider try to spooning/blanketing the tail of 00:24:029 (6) . Make it like this
00:51:869 (1) - Move it to x:88 y:172 or so to make it blanketing 00:51:509 (5,6)
01:11:389 (1,2) - Use DS here, it's hard to decide when to tap in 1/3 part song.
01:13:469 (2,3,4) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect
01:15:469 (1) - The spinner start should be at 01:15:469
01:23:869 (4,5,6) - Whoa watch the spacing here, dude. make it like this. This is use 1/6 beat so make sure they're keep stacking each other since it's pretty fast and some people won't know what's next if it's 1/4 or 1/6
02:00:989 (1) - Same problem as 00:51:869 (1) but move it to x:416y:176
02:16:109 (3) - Here's how to make a good slider
02:37:469 (1,2,3) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect

applied

good mod , thanks xD

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