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21:50 Hyguys: it that a good thing? :3
21:50 Gonzvlo: yeah
21:50 Hyguys: okay
21:50 Gonzvlo: 01:17:937 -
21:51 Gonzvlo: you need one here, i think
21:51 Hyguys: okay
21:52 Gonzvlo: hold on}
21:53 Gonzvlo: i think the timing is a little off at this part
21:53 Gonzvlo: or something
21:53 Gonzvlo: 01:16:817 -
21:53 Gonzvlo: might wanna re-check with somebody else
21:53 Hyguys: too early?
21:54 Gonzvlo: hmm there's something off, i can't tell what :P
21:54 Hyguys: hey.. you're right
21:54 Hyguys: the latest modder
21:54 Hyguys: told me to change the offset from 29 to 15
21:54 Hyguys: revert it back to 29
21:55 Hyguys: and tell me your thoughts
21:55 Gonzvlo: 02:03:857 (3,4) - this is good but it's the only place you've used sliders like these, might wanna repeat here 02:07:937 - for consistency
21:56 Gonzvlo: 02:37:217 - maybe add notes in 1/4 for consistency with the 2 previous patterns
21:56 Gonzvlo: 02:43:097 - ^
21:56 Gonzvlo: hold on gotta put my headphones to check the timing really quick
21:57 Hyguys: ok
22:01 Gonzvlo: hmm the offset needs about +5ms
22:02 Gonzvlo: buut i'm still not sure, might the bpm aswell
22:02 Gonzvlo: but i'm not suure
22:02 Hyguys: that's all?!
22:02 Hyguys: i agree
22:02 Gonzvlo: i guees :3
22:02 Hyguys: however... that raises me a question
22:02 Hyguys: this beatmap has 5 years
22:02 Hyguys: thousands of mods
22:03 Hyguys: ...none of them said something about that
22:03 Gonzvlo: hmm let me check
22:03 Gonzvlo: omg 5 pages of mods
22:03 Hyguys: yeah dude
22:03 Gonzvlo: lol, i don't know, that's what I'm getting perhaps my universal offset is bad
22:03 Hyguys: i still ~feel~ it
22:03 Hyguys: to be honest
22:04 Hyguys: i guess I'll add 5 ms to the offset
22:04 Hyguys: that won't be a problem
22:04 Gonzvlo: use Doomsday timing
22:04 Gonzvlo: he said 29, use that
22:04 Hyguys: yes , Your Honor.
22:04 Hyguys: haha
22:04 Gonzvlo: e.e
22:04 Hyguys: :c
22:04 Hyguys: i actually... forgot
22:04 Hyguys: that the one that gave me the offset was doomsday
22:05 Gonzvlo: he's good with timing, 29 should be fine
22:05 Hyguys: ok
22:05 Hyguys: what do you think about this bm now?
22:06 Hyguys: should I start asking for BN or still normal mods?
22:06 Hyguys: because I guess 90% of the things will be opinion
22:06 Gonzvlo: well you've remapped right?
22:06 Gonzvlo: but you've obviously improved a lot
22:06 Gonzvlo: asks bns
22:07 Hyguys: yes
22:07 Hyguys: a couple of times
22:07 Hyguys: thanks for all the advices man
22:07 Hyguys: i want to reward you somehow
22:08 Gonzvlo: np :3
22:08 Gonzvlo: kudos plx
22:09 Hyguys: ok
22:09 Hyguys: post on the forum
22:09 Hyguys: i'll give you
22:09 Gonzvlo: lol really?
22:09 Gonzvlo: i was kidding :3
22:09 Hyguys: but you helped me a lot!
22:10 Gonzvlo: i'll just post it counts a mod more for your map :d
Good mod , and thanks for it (y)George wrote:
---General---
Make a normal plz
Keep in mind I'm going off of 2015 guidelines, although maps that are made from years prior to 2013 or 2012 are fun and look good, they may use things that arent rankable in todays standards Okay
---Easy---
00:17:789 (4,1) - Eventually someone will condemn you for overlapping here If someone say this again I'm going to change it , but not now
00:51:869 (3,4) - Make these a straight line applied
01:22:589 (4,5) - think looks kind of odd, I don't think you should change it just yet though until someone with higher authority (such as a BN) says so applied
01:39:869 (1,2) - fix stack changed
02:34:109 (2) - move this left more fixed it but by moving the (1)
---Medium---
Rename this to hard
00:27:869 (3,1) - make these symmetrical ok
00:49:469 (6,1) - I'd fix this blanket ok
01:50:429 (3,4,5) - the DS here looks screwed up what's that?if it's distance snap ,it's completely perfect
01:57:869 (2,3) - fix blanket ok
---Insane---
00:55:709 (1,2) - fix symmetry applied
02:04:829 (1,2) - ^ applied
02:45:389 (1) - start on red applied
glhf
The ones that were wrote nothing , I applied.Peachtrees wrote:
M4M as arranged via pm c:Easy
00:17:789 (4,5,1) - atleast try arranging this in a way that 4 is in the middle of 1 for the overlap? currently just looks a bit messy
00:21:149 (3,4) - watch your spacing
00:25:949 (2,1) - blanket could look much, much neater I think
00:31:229 (1,2,3) - would honestly play nicer if the movement between these was a bit smoother/curvier, meaning less sharp angles give me an example , like a pic
00:38:909 (2,3,4) - again, watch your spacing
00:48:509 (4,1,2) - spacing. I'm going to stop pointing this kinda stuff out. I REALLY REALLY think that this should be fixed though, makes the map look messy
01:13:949 (3,4) - not sure if doing this kinda thing in an Easy Diff is a good thing to do, as this might end up confusing newer players wat
01:16:349 (6,1) - ^ wat
01:39:869 (1,2) - no reason not to have this blanket 100% perfect as it requires little to no re-arrangement
02:11:549 (3,4,1) - really not sure if this kinda rythm is appropriate to use in an Easy, especially since you didn't use this after the first refrain
I'm going to be blunt here: Lots of sloppy/weird slidershapes, messy spacing and overall just not very nice to look at I think :c :(
Normal
00:16:349 (3) - feels like the second 'I' this repeat is covering should be clickable to me ok [?]
00:17:789 (5) - why not just use a normally curved slider here?
00:24:989 (5) - why not make the 'rock' clickable here? would just have to shorten the slider
00:38:669 (1,3) - stack these properly?
00:43:709 (3) - really unfitting. This downbeat should be clickable
00:56:189 (2,3) - these two look waaaayy to close ;w; the two sliderbodies are almost touching
00:59:549 (1) - why is the white beat being skipped? it REALLY feels like this should be clickable
01:15:229 (1,2,3,4) - would probably just keep it simple and map white ticks only here. not even sure what the extra circles are following here
01:22:109 (3) - downbeat should be clickable. Same goes for the next two instances this happens
01:34:589 (5,6,1) - this just looks really messy :c
01:36:989 (3,2) - try avoiding this overlap
welp these things honestly just keep repeating. Spacing ALSO feels rather messy at times, same goes for the slidershapes :c
Insane
00:21:869 (2,3) - really awkward flow here. should rotate 3 in a way that makes it easier to catch itnah
00:40:349 (1) - lower this a bit, it'll improve the flow
00:55:109 (4) - kinda weird to have this cover the third 'come on' nah
00:58:949 (5) - ^
01:01:469 (1) - this really calls for a slider imo, going along with the vocals here nah
01:05:309 (1,2) - should improve the blanket
01:31:949 (6,2,3,4) - overlap here honestly just looks messy :c
02:15:389 (1,2,3) - PLEASE have this blanket properly
It's probably because of how old this set is, but this style just looks really messy and unpolished to me. Sorry, but I'm not a fan :/
I still wish you the best of luck!
XeroiZi HD wrote:
Hi
I'm not an expert so please reply my mod properly so I can see your feedbacks :3Mod Legends
| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Always watch for it
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy[Easy][Medium]
Nothing to say[Insane]
- 00:23:069 (1,2) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other
- 00:34:349 (2,3) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
- 00:49:949 (1) - Here's how to make a good slider nah
- 01:12:029 (4) - Move it to x:200 y:256 so it'll be blanketed by 01:10:589 (3)
- 01:20:669 (1,3) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other wat
- 01:50:429 (3,4) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
- 02:08:669 (1,2) - Avoid these two touching
- 02:35:069 (4) - Tweak it a bit to the right so it won't touching the 02:34:589 (3)
- 02:40:829 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? If no, ignore this. If yes, make it like this
- 00:24:989 (1) - Make the slider try to spooning/blanketing the tail of 00:24:029 (6) . Make it like this
- 00:51:869 (1) - Move it to x:88 y:172 or so to make it blanketing 00:51:509 (5,6)
- 01:11:389 (1,2) - Use DS here, it's hard to decide when to tap in 1/3 part song.
- 01:13:469 (2,3,4) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect
- 01:15:469 (1) - The spinner start should be at 01:15:469
- 01:23:869 (4,5,6) - Whoa watch the spacing here, dude. make it like this. This is use 1/6 beat so make sure they're keep stacking each other since it's pretty fast and some people won't know what's next if it's 1/4 or 1/6
- 02:00:989 (1) - Same problem as 00:51:869 (1) but move it to x:416y:176
- 02:16:109 (3) - Here's how to make a good slider
- 02:37:469 (1,2,3) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect