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Unheilig - Geboren Um Zu Leben

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Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
add cursortrail.png

Easy
00:18:215 (1) - 2 grids down
00:36:476 (1,3), 00:39:084 (1,3) - sliders are different, make sliders same in each combo
01:05:171 (1) - do it more simmetrical
01:26:040 (4) - new combo
01:29:627 (2) - don't stack it (hard for easy)
01:57:345 (1) - turn off new combo
02:07:453 (2) - 1 grid down
02:09:736 (5) - spacing
02:22:453 (3) - don't stack
Easy+ i think...

Normal+
01:02:888 (3,4) - 1 grid up
01:16:258 - add break
03:19:377 (4) - 1 grid up
03:20:519 (1) - ehh why spinner is toooo long? do it shorter =.=

Magicphoenix's Life
00:29:302 (2,3) - mb 1 timing section right? sounds better..
01:46:584 (6) - 1 grid down

Jagang's & MusicBox' Collab
seems good

Nise song and maps, star
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
turn on flashy warning

[Collab]
0:07:780 (1) remove finish
*I think adding claps in the beginning part is a good idea, but you can make those claps more regular.
0:28:649 (1,2,3,4) stack the sliders property
1:01:802 (6) down 1 grid
1:25:389 (6) left 1 grid
1:30:932 (1,2,3,4) stack properly
1:42:182 (4) up 1 grid
2:10:281 (9) weird position
2:47:095 (4) right 1 grid

[Megaphonix's life]
0:46:910 (1) stack on (4)?
0:49:356 (2,3,6,7) (2,3) and (6,7) are not on the same horizontal level
1:03:541 (4,5,^) uneven spacing
3:14:160 (7,8) stack properly

[Normal life]
0:23:106 (2) up 1 grid?
1:36:802 (1) stack on last (4)


star~
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
moep moep :D i love your map ;3 hope it will be ranked soon :3 star~
DJ Lightning
90 posts
Joined January 2010
DJ Lightning
ich schließ mich jox an

star
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX

DJ Lightning wrote:

ich schließ mich jox an

star
Danke an Beide. :3
laport
1,239 posts
Joined June 2010
laport
I like it star 8-)
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX

laport wrote:

I like it star 8-)
Thanks. :3
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Keksi
Keksi's Mod:

Grün:Request
Blau:Wäre nett wenn du das änderst
Rot:Ändern!

[Easy Life]
01:15:711- Mach (5) weg :)Und mach ihn so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49105

[Normal Life]
Ganz gut .
Aber nicht ein bisschen Hard für ein [Normal]?

[Magicphoenix's Life]

Ändern in [Magic's Life]
00:17:073- Mach die (5) so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49112
00:41:530- (1) (2) (3) so vllt? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49115

[Jagang's & Musicbox's Collab]

Nenn die Diff einfach : Collab. Schreib einfach als Info das du und Jagang die Collab gemacht hast.
00:18:704- Slider (2) bisschen verkürzen der ist zu lang :)
00:44:139- (1) am ende des sliders machen : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49117
00:54:573. Was ist das ? Der Stream muss weg . Passt nicht zum takt und überhaupt :))

So kriegst trotzdem nen Sternchen~
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Overall]
00:54:736 - Add Kiai Time

[Easy Life]
nice ^^

[Normal Life]
n1 ;D

[Magic's Life]
01:11:856 (3) - Move directly over (4)
02:05:193 (7) - New Combo
03:01:932 (5) - move under the end of (4)
03:39:758 (8) - 1 Grid left

[Collab]
Fantastic~


Have a Star~
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
[Custom hitsounds]
Maybe use the custom hitsound I have attached to take away the annoying slider noises, making it much more appealing to listen too.
Remember to enable custom hitsound override 1.

[Easy Life]
01:15:280 (5) - Spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49730 (Try this maybe)

[Normal Life]
02:49:378 (1) - Whistle
02:49:541 (2) - Start of slider add whistle
02:50:519 (4) - Add Whistle
02:50:682 (5) - Start & End add whistle

03:10:247 (1) - Whistle
03:10:410 (2) - Start of slider add whistle
03:11:388 (4) - Add Whistle
03:11:551 (5) - Start & End add whistle

Very nice!

[Magic's Life]
00:31:258 (3) - Start of Slider add Finish (Hightlights the finish on (4)

Claps hitsounds seems random.

01:15:932 (4) - Make it more round :>

01:41:041 (2) - Add Clap
01:44:954 (1) - ^
01:46:258 (5) - ^
01:48:867 (7) - add clap at start of slider.
02:00:280 (1,2,3) - Add Finish ( fits music )

Lots of overlaps I'm not to fond off.

[Collab]
(MusicBoX)
00:05:497 (3,6,9,12) - Add whisle's

(Jagang)
02:21:824 (5) - Add Finish
02:22:150 (6) - replace with slider that ends at 02:23:454 with a finish at end/start

Overall, very nice diff.

Download: blank-sliderslide.zip
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
o hi~
Easy
AImod spuckt einige Spacing Fehlera aus. Die sollte nicht in einem Easy sein.

00:44:302 (1) - Ein Finish am Anfang klingt gut.
00:59:302 (3) - clap am repeat
01:05:171 (1) - clap am repeat und ende
01:12:997 (3) - clap am anfang
01:14:301 (4) - beide claps weg, vllt durch whistles ersetzen

Normal
00:55:715 (4) - clap
00:57:345 (1) - clap am repeat
01:01:258 (2) - der tick könnte nen clap brauchen. custom hitsounds?
01:05:171 (1) - ^ und warscheinlich noch mehr
01:10:388 (1) - clap anfang + ende
01:18:214 (1) - whistle weg, finish
01:19:519 (4) - whistle
01:36:801 (1) - (Nazi) Grid level 4: 1 grid links
02:16:933 (2) - claps

Kiai hat zu viele whistles IMO ._.

Magic
Hitsounds finde ich müll.Die map selber ist gut. Irgendwie kommt da kein Rythmus zu stande. Randomness³ Kann hier 100 Sachen schreiben, hab aber kein Bock drauf. Deswegen nur ein paar Sachen...

00:44:302 (1) - alle sounds weg, hier mussn finish hin
00:57:997 (1) - clap
00:58:323 (2) - finish passt net
00:59:465 (4) - ^
00:59:791 (5) - hier aber. aber net am ende. da reicht ein clap.
01:07:780 (5) - claps
01:10:389 (7) - ^
01:48:867 (7) - finish am ende
01:50:171 (2) - clap
01:53:432 (5) - baaah, finish passt net. normal clap am anfang + soft zum ende
02:01:258 bis zur break: Hier fehlen offensichtlich claps. 1 clap/ 2 white lines D: Und zu viele Finishs.
Das selbe für die Kiai parts.


Collab
00:09:410 (6) - stacking
01:18:215 , Jagangs part. zu wenig hitsounds, klingt zu trocken.
01:33:541 (1) - finish weg
01:33:867 (2) - der gehört hierhin
02:13:019 (x) add note
03:02:584 (2) - Grid level 4: 3 nach links

So, hab nochn Star und dat wars...
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX
Mods done yet. :3
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Easy Life
01:15:280 (5) - Move this nearer to 4
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Then add a spinner at 03:25:084

Normal Life
The slider velocity is too high for a normal
00:30:389 (2,3,4) - Make these closer to each other
02:06:172 (3) - Make this slider face the opposite
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Add a spinner at 03:25:084

Magic's Life
00:49:256 (2,3) - The notes are too far apart
00:50:497 (6,7) - ^

Collab
00:22:254 (1) - Remove NC
Fine~
_________________________________
Star~
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX

DragonSparta wrote:

Easy Life
01:15:280 (5) - Move this nearer to 4
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Then add a spinner at 03:25:084

Normal Life
The slider velocity is too high for a normal
00:30:389 (2,3,4) - Make these closer to each other
02:06:172 (3) - Make this slider face the opposite
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Add a spinner at 03:25:084

Magic's Life
00:49:256 (2,3) - The notes are too far apart
00:50:497 (6,7) - ^

Collab
00:22:254 (1) - Remove NC
Fine~
_________________________________
Star~
Done.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
About timing, only 1 timing is enough
BPM: 92.000
Offset: 2,563
don't forget to resnap all notes, green lines stuff.

[Easy Life]
- make sure your preview point is same as other diffs

[Normal+ Life]
02:06:172 (3) - spacing, too far from (2)
02:40:247 (1) - start at white tick and end it at 02:42:367
look a bit too hard for normal, i don't care if it's normal + or - but it'd be just like a normal. some time spacing look weird etc, i'm not fan of kind of normal like this. not bad though.

[Magic's Life]
- nothing really that wrong, but spacing look a bit random, maybe because spacing is too hugs
- suggest you to +1 to Aooroach Rate

[Collab]
- well done

have my star
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX
Done.
Jagang
89 posts
Joined May 2010
Jagang
haha hab ja noch gar keinen stern dagelassen :O
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Star ;) schönes Lied
Viel Glück!
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX
Beide, danke. ^-^
Jagang
89 posts
Joined May 2010
Jagang
warum hast du sie sterben lassen D:
MusicBoX
182 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MusicBoX
Ich mach wann anders wieder weiter und lass sie vom Graveyard machen.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Revived by the mapper`s request................................... enjoy
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
[General]
why has Easy less breaks as the others?

[Easy Life]
7 objects are unsnapped, open aimod to check ^^
sometimes spacing is wrong
00:50:823 (2) at the end whistle

[Normal+ Life]
22 objects aren't snapped
it's too hard for an Normal+, because 00:23:921 is a stream, and streams in normal? no
sometimes spacing wrong

[Magic's Life]
45 unsnapped objects
too often finish >.< it's annoying after some time...
01:06:312 (2,1) stack correctly under 1
01:10:878 (7,8,9) ^
01:51:802 (6,7,1) ^

[Collab]
51 unsnapped objects
im not good in modding collabs >.< but it looked good (only the unsnapped objects...)

check spacing in all diffs, it's a bit inconsistent

if you have questions, PM or in-game ^^

star ^^
Jagang
89 posts
Joined May 2010
Jagang
es lebt wieder :D hurra

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

D:
Factorial
691 posts
Joined August 2013
Factorial
Modding from my queue:
General:
  1. Check AIMod on every difficulties, you'll see why.
Easy Life:
  1. If you open this diff on notepad, you'll see 'Video,-3457,"Unheilig.flv"' on the [Events] section. Since you don't use a video for this beatmap, you sould remove the entire video line.
  2. 01:58:649 (1) - End of spinner is unsnapped here.
  3. 00:23:433 (1) - Rotate this slider 180 degrees and Ctrl+G for a better (circular) flow.
  4. 02:08:432 (4,5) - Placement of sliders here affects visibility. With the "300" hit, player will be confused whether there's a reverse slider on 02:09:737 (5) or not. https://s31.postimg.org/5x90pokln/screenshot001.jpg
  5. 02:20:497 (2) - There should a hitsound on this part, something like this: https://s31.postimg.org/62gv6cnwr/screenshot002.jpg . I wouldn't suggest a hold here.
Normal+ Life:
  1. If you open this diff on notepad, you'll see 'Video,-1700,"Unheilig.flv"' on the [Events] section. Since you don't use a video for this beatmap, you sould remove the entire video line.
  2. 00:54:760 - Snap green timing line to 00:54:736
  3. 02:43:812 (2,3) - Unstack
  4. 02:54:248 (1,2) - ^
  5. 03:04:682 (1,2) - ^
  6. 03:15:117 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:41:366 (1,2) - Not stacked properly
  8. 02:50:172 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't recommend stacking with different ti ming, this would counfuse some players and with Hidden mod.
Collab:
  1. This diff would be Hard Collab, I guess?
Good luck for your EBA-styled map! hehe 5 yrs ago..
Remember my M4M btw
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