Don't randomly give kudosu to people >=o
Also, my queue requests that people post a number in ther request and you didn't do it, but im forgiving it because its german and i like the song >=o
And you neither have to be sorry about it being german, in fact, teach me german! Lol.

Also, this is just a personal taste, but i hate the skin that have the combo burst almost the same colour, making it harder to differnciate between a 100 and 300

The mp3 has a bitrate of 320 kbps when the max allowed for rank is only 192 kbps, re encode your mp3, if you don't know what i'm talking about, just ask.

SB:

Replace your code with this one, this one fits better with the timing


Also, I can see that this SB was not made for all the difficulties? Seeing as the spinners covers the 3 effects in easy.
And this sb just doesnt fit with Hard neither, so give a little more thought with the sb.

Easy:

00:15:606 (3,4) - I kind of fear that this 1/2 looks too sudden. Anyways, an option that you have is to delete 00:16:584 (4), and then add circle at 00:16:584 and 00:16:910. Again, let me remind you that it just looks to sudden... and thus making it not flow so well.

Normal:

00:25:389 (5) - I don't recommend having this stacked, may be confusive because of 00:23:921 (1,2) -
01:31:095 (4) - New combo
01:34:845 (4,5) - The ending point of (4) could have been better :T
02:02:259 (2,1) - Too close. Put them farther away.
02:05:520 (3) - Make this slider symmetric please, everything in this part is already symmetric.
02:07:803 (2) - Ermm... i guess I'm starting to being a nazi now, but... this is not symmetric, just look at the height of the starting and end point. Lol :T

Hard:

00:18:867 (1,2) - Use 1.2x distance snap?
00:27:019 (3,4) - Consider moving these 1/4 ealier
00:37:454 - Take out clap.
01:00:443 - I believe that this slider tick was not suppose to sound like this?
Sighs alright i'll stop with hitsounds, i'm not great at them so i shouldn't be saying abything about them :T
01:10:878 - - Really expected a circle to be here
01:59:954 - I really recommend you to map this empty
AHHH WHY??? WHY THE HITSOUNDS IN THE SECOND AND THIRD CHORUSES ARE FINE AND THE FIRST ONE NOT?? AHH WHY??? - Okay i'll stop :T
Rest is fine.

Collab:

00:10:389 (1,2,3) - Consider turning grid snap off, and stack the end perfectly.
I'm against this empty spot 03:04:541. Map it, or end the map at 03:03:888. Hopefully it is still a wip this diff.

You give wrong kd..lol

ErufenRito wrote:

I'm against this empty spot 03:04:541. Map it, or end the map at 03:03:888. Hopefully it is still a wip this diff.

It was. Now it's mapped. :3

I only mod Easy and the Collab for now...

General:
- Impressive Style
- Nice Sliders
- Only place one hitsound per circle/sliderpoint (in general)
- The only thing i've to say is that the hitsounds are sometimes placed too randomly at some parts, their not bad or anything, but try out my suggestions to that

[Easy] (example for placing hitsounds)
00:24:736 (2) - at the end: add whistle
00:29:302 (2) - replace clap with whistle
00:31:910 (5) - whistle at the beginning of the slider
00:33:215 (1) - usualy only one hitsound per note, would stick to clap there
00:36:476 (5) - whistle (beginning of the slider)
00:37:780 (7) - ^
00:39:084 (1) - ^
00:42:345 (5) - i would delete whistle here
00:42:997 (6) - ^ (at the end of the slider)
00:50:171 (6) - whistle (beginning)
00:51:802 (1) - start spinner at 00:52:128
00:59:302 (3) - clap at reverse arrow, remove clap at the end
01:01:258 (1) - whistle at the end
01:03:867 (1) - remove clap
01:05:171 (1) - clap at beginning and end
01:08:432 (2) - clap
01:09:084 (3) - whistle at the beginning
01:12:345 (2) - remove finish, add whistle
01:14:301 (4) - remove clap, add whistle to beginning, normal sound at the end
...

[Collab]
- too few hitsounds in jagang's parts imo, use more whistle sounds
00:54:573 (1,2) - I don't think they are necessary

If you liked my mod, I could mod all diffs in regard of hitsounds and send it to you, but only if you wish to have them and liked them!
Like I said, they are no major issues i think, just small improvements to do on some parts.
Good luck with your map :3

Star~

Easy ~


00:49:519 (5) - new combo
01:36:475 (7) - new combo
02:07:127 (6) - add new combo
02:07:453 (1) - remove new combo


Normal+ ~


02:07:453 (1) - new combo?
01:09:736 (5) - ^
02:16:281 (11) - ^
02:46:606 (6) - new combo?
02:51:823 (6) - ^
02:57:041 (5) - ^
03:07:475 (5) - ^
03:12:693 (6) - ^


Magicphoenix's Life ~


00:19:519 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:171 (5) - add new combo
00:20:497 (2) - remove new combo
00:27:997 (1) - remove new combo
00:29:139 (2) - this slidertick sounds weird,I think it might sound better if you 00:29:302 - add note, 00:29:628 - you make this slider last up to 00:30:280 - (red tick)
00:40:389 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:802 (2,3) -remove the claps and move these notes to the next white tick to the right.
00:53:106 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:041 (1) - ^
01:06:476 (3) - new combo
01:52:128 (8) - ^
01:52:454 (1) - remove new combo
02:13:672 (1) - ^


Jagang's & Musicbox' Collab ~


00:15:606 (1) - remove new combo
00:15:932 (8) - add new combo
00:18:541 (2) - Kinda boring just sitting there for so long...
00:56:041 (7) - new combo?
01:03:541 (8) - ^
01:14:139 (9) - ^
01:38:758 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:878 (10) - add new combo
02:57:041 (1) - remove new combo



Add. in tag Jagang, Magicphoenix.

Nice song ^_~

Star

Hi!

[General]

Pretty good job! I like it
Nice timing too~~

Just a general suggestion: I like kiais a lot, and I think that they can be more exploited than they currently are in most of the songs on osu!
So, you could try (in all the diffs) adding an inherited timing section at 3:03:539, with no kiai, and then, right after it, at 3:03:865, add another one, this time with kiai. I believe it increases the epic factor a little xD


And before I go on, sorry for the massive combo mod xD


[Easy]

36:476 (5) - New combo here?
41:693 (4) - ^
1:33:867 (1,3) - Why don't you try moving 1 one grid up, and then move 3 one grid up and one grid right? That way you keep exactly the same triangle pattern, and it looks prettier
1:55:389 (3) - Move this one grid left?
2:57:344 (6) - New combo here?
3:03:865 (8) - I'd start the new combo here, and remove it from the next slider.
3:07:778 (3) - Umm.. new combo here?


[Normal+]

15:932 (7) - New combo?
26:041 (6) - ^
31:095 (5) - ^
37:128 (5) - ^
42:671 (6) - ^
57:997 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider? (Not the reverse arrow)
1:09:736 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to the next slider.
1:36:802 (6) - ...New combo here?
1:41:693 (2) - I'd like it better if the end of the sliders were stacked. To do this, you might have to set Grid Snap off.
2:04:867 (4) - New combo here?
2:18:237 (1) - To keep it consistent with 1:11:693, you could remove the new combo and add it to the next slider, but, anyway, this combo chande isn't that bad.
2:47:583 (4) - That would look nicer like... Half grid to the right.
3:17:910 (5) - New combo here.


[Magicphoenix's Life]

1:18:215 (7) - Maybe align this with 5 and 6?

This one isn't bad n.n


[Collab]

05:171 (1) - The following triangle patterns seem to random xD I'd try to do equilateral triangles.
1:01:584 (3) - I'd suggest to use first a slider, and then a circle, because as it is now, you can't see if there's a repetition (reverse arrow)
2:35:780 (1) - Same triangle thingy xD


Pretty good job, as I said earlier

narakucrimson wrote:

1:01:584 (3) - I'd suggest to use first a slider, and then a circle, because as it is now, you can't see if there's a repetition (reverse arrow)

I guess the next slider comes fast enough to notice, that there is no reverse arrow. ^^

Hi~

General
add cursortrail.png

Easy
00:18:215 (1) - 2 grids down
00:36:476 (1,3), 00:39:084 (1,3) - sliders are different, make sliders same in each combo
01:05:171 (1) - do it more simmetrical
01:26:040 (4) - new combo
01:29:627 (2) - don't stack it (hard for easy)
01:57:345 (1) - turn off new combo
02:07:453 (2) - 1 grid down
02:09:736 (5) - spacing
02:22:453 (3) - don't stack
Easy+ i think...

Normal+
01:02:888 (3,4) - 1 grid up
01:16:258 - add break
03:19:377 (4) - 1 grid up
03:20:519 (1) - ehh why spinner is toooo long? do it shorter =.=

Magicphoenix's Life
00:29:302 (2,3) - mb 1 timing section right? sounds better..
01:46:584 (6) - 1 grid down

Jagang's & MusicBox' Collab
seems good

Nise song and maps, star

turn on flashy warning

[Collab]
0:07:780 (1) remove finish
*I think adding claps in the beginning part is a good idea, but you can make those claps more regular.
0:28:649 (1,2,3,4) stack the sliders property
1:01:802 (6) down 1 grid
1:25:389 (6) left 1 grid
1:30:932 (1,2,3,4) stack properly
1:42:182 (4) up 1 grid
2:10:281 (9) weird position
2:47:095 (4) right 1 grid

[Megaphonix's life]
0:46:910 (1) stack on (4)?
0:49:356 (2,3,6,7) (2,3) and (6,7) are not on the same horizontal level
1:03:541 (4,5,^) uneven spacing
3:14:160 (7,8) stack properly

[Normal life]
0:23:106 (2) up 1 grid?
1:36:802 (1) stack on last (4)


star~

moep moep i love your map ;3 hope it will be ranked soon :3 star~

ich schließ mich jox an

star

DJ Lightning wrote:

ich schließ mich jox an

star

Danke an Beide. :3

I like it star

laport wrote:

I like it star

Thanks. :3

Keksi's Mod:

Grün:Request
Blau:Wäre nett wenn du das änderst
Rot:Ändern!

[Easy Life]
01:15:711- Mach (5) weg Und mach ihn so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49105

[Normal Life]
Ganz gut .
Aber nicht ein bisschen Hard für ein [Normal]?

[Magicphoenix's Life]

Ändern in [Magic's Life]
00:17:073- Mach die (5) so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49112
00:41:530- (1) (2) (3) so vllt? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49115

[Jagang's & Musicbox's Collab]

Nenn die Diff einfach : Collab. Schreib einfach als Info das du und Jagang die Collab gemacht hast.
00:18:704- Slider (2) bisschen verkürzen der ist zu lang
00:44:139- (1) am ende des sliders machen : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49117
00:54:573. Was ist das ? Der Stream muss weg . Passt nicht zum takt und überhaupt )

So kriegst trotzdem nen Sternchen~

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Overall]
00:54:736 - Add Kiai Time

[Easy Life]
nice ^^

[Normal Life]
n1 ;D

[Magic's Life]
01:11:856 (3) - Move directly over (4)
02:05:193 (7) - New Combo
03:01:932 (5) - move under the end of (4)
03:39:758 (8) - 1 Grid left

[Collab]
Fantastic~


Have a Star~

[Custom hitsounds]
Maybe use the custom hitsound I have attached to take away the annoying slider noises, making it much more appealing to listen too.
Remember to enable custom hitsound override 1.

[Easy Life]
01:15:280 (5) - Spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49730 (Try this maybe)

[Normal Life]
02:49:378 (1) - Whistle
02:49:541 (2) - Start of slider add whistle
02:50:519 (4) - Add Whistle
02:50:682 (5) - Start & End add whistle

03:10:247 (1) - Whistle
03:10:410 (2) - Start of slider add whistle
03:11:388 (4) - Add Whistle
03:11:551 (5) - Start & End add whistle

Very nice!

[Magic's Life]
00:31:258 (3) - Start of Slider add Finish (Hightlights the finish on (4)

Claps hitsounds seems random.

01:15:932 (4) - Make it more round :>

01:41:041 (2) - Add Clap
01:44:954 (1) - ^
01:46:258 (5) - ^
01:48:867 (7) - add clap at start of slider.
02:00:280 (1,2,3) - Add Finish ( fits music )

Lots of overlaps I'm not to fond off.

[Collab]
(MusicBoX)
00:05:497 (3,6,9,12) - Add whisle's

(Jagang)
02:21:824 (5) - Add Finish
02:22:150 (6) - replace with slider that ends at 02:23:454 with a finish at end/start

Overall, very nice diff.

Download: blank-sliderslide.zip

o hi~
Easy
AImod spuckt einige Spacing Fehlera aus. Die sollte nicht in einem Easy sein.

00:44:302 (1) - Ein Finish am Anfang klingt gut.
00:59:302 (3) - clap am repeat
01:05:171 (1) - clap am repeat und ende
01:12:997 (3) - clap am anfang
01:14:301 (4) - beide claps weg, vllt durch whistles ersetzen

Normal
00:55:715 (4) - clap
00:57:345 (1) - clap am repeat
01:01:258 (2) - der tick könnte nen clap brauchen. custom hitsounds?
01:05:171 (1) - ^ und warscheinlich noch mehr
01:10:388 (1) - clap anfang + ende
01:18:214 (1) - whistle weg, finish
01:19:519 (4) - whistle
01:36:801 (1) - (Nazi) Grid level 4: 1 grid links
02:16:933 (2) - claps

Kiai hat zu viele whistles IMO ._.

Magic
Hitsounds finde ich müll.Die map selber ist gut. Irgendwie kommt da kein Rythmus zu stande. Randomness³ Kann hier 100 Sachen schreiben, hab aber kein Bock drauf. Deswegen nur ein paar Sachen...

00:44:302 (1) - alle sounds weg, hier mussn finish hin
00:57:997 (1) - clap
00:58:323 (2) - finish passt net
00:59:465 (4) - ^
00:59:791 (5) - hier aber. aber net am ende. da reicht ein clap.
01:07:780 (5) - claps
01:10:389 (7) - ^
01:48:867 (7) - finish am ende
01:50:171 (2) - clap
01:53:432 (5) - baaah, finish passt net. normal clap am anfang + soft zum ende
02:01:258 bis zur break: Hier fehlen offensichtlich claps. 1 clap/ 2 white lines D: Und zu viele Finishs.
Das selbe für die Kiai parts.


Collab
00:09:410 (6) - stacking
01:18:215 , Jagangs part. zu wenig hitsounds, klingt zu trocken.
01:33:541 (1) - finish weg
01:33:867 (2) - der gehört hierhin
02:13:019 (x) add note
03:02:584 (2) - Grid level 4: 3 nach links

So, hab nochn Star und dat wars...

Mods done yet. :3

Easy Life
01:15:280 (5) - Move this nearer to 4
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Then add a spinner at 03:25:084

Normal Life
The slider velocity is too high for a normal
00:30:389 (2,3,4) - Make these closer to each other
02:06:172 (3) - Make this slider face the opposite
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Add a spinner at 03:25:084

Magic's Life
00:49:256 (2,3) - The notes are too far apart
00:50:497 (6,7) - ^

Collab
00:22:254 (1) - Remove NC
Fine~
_________________________________
Star~

DragonSparta wrote:

Easy Life
01:15:280 (5) - Move this nearer to 4
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Then add a spinner at 03:25:084

Normal Life
The slider velocity is too high for a normal
00:30:389 (2,3,4) - Make these closer to each other
02:06:172 (3) - Make this slider face the opposite
03:21:104 (1) - Remove this and add more notes. Add a spinner at 03:25:084

Magic's Life
00:49:256 (2,3) - The notes are too far apart
00:50:497 (6,7) - ^

Collab
00:22:254 (1) - Remove NC
Fine~
_________________________________
Star~

Done.

About timing, only 1 timing is enough
BPM: 92.000
Offset: 2,563
don't forget to resnap all notes, green lines stuff.

[Easy Life]
- make sure your preview point is same as other diffs

[Normal+ Life]
02:06:172 (3) - spacing, too far from (2)
02:40:247 (1) - start at white tick and end it at 02:42:367
look a bit too hard for normal, i don't care if it's normal + or - but it'd be just like a normal. some time spacing look weird etc, i'm not fan of kind of normal like this. not bad though.

[Magic's Life]
- nothing really that wrong, but spacing look a bit random, maybe because spacing is too hugs
- suggest you to +1 to Aooroach Rate

[Collab]
- well done

have my star

Done.

haha hab ja noch gar keinen stern dagelassen :O

Star schönes Lied
Viel Glück!

Beide, danke. ^-^

warum hast du sie sterben lassen D:

Ich mach wann anders wieder weiter und lass sie vom Graveyard machen.

Revived by the mapper`s request................................... enjoy

[General]
why has Easy less breaks as the others?

[Easy Life]
7 objects are unsnapped, open aimod to check ^^
sometimes spacing is wrong
00:50:823 (2) at the end whistle

[Normal+ Life]
22 objects aren't snapped
it's too hard for an Normal+, because 00:23:921 is a stream, and streams in normal? no
sometimes spacing wrong

[Magic's Life]
45 unsnapped objects
too often finish >.< it's annoying after some time...
01:06:312 (2,1) stack correctly under 1
01:10:878 (7,8,9) ^
01:51:802 (6,7,1) ^

[Collab]
51 unsnapped objects
im not good in modding collabs >.< but it looked good (only the unsnapped objects...)

check spacing in all diffs, it's a bit inconsistent

if you have questions, PM or in-game ^^

star ^^

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