AAA - Ashita no Hikari · forum

Rave-up

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-10-31T06:08:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 27, 2015 at 6:54:32 PM

Artist: AAA
Title: Ashita no Hikari
Source: ワールドトリガー
Tags: World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica Marianna estellia~ tv size
BPM: 120
Filesize: 15550kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Estellia-'s Hikari (3.81 stars, 260 notes)
Hard (2.94 stars, 210 notes)
Mari's Easy (1.41 stars, 88 notes)
Normal (1.81 stars, 129 notes)

Download: AAA - Ashita no Hikari
Download: AAA - Ashita no Hikari (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

R.I.P?

Hoen's Easy by: Hoen
Normal by: Me
Hard by: Me
Estellia's Hikari by: Estellia

not even an opening

⇩⇩ Mah boi ⇩⇩

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-12-20T05:29:08+00:00, edited 61 times in total.

lemountain

516 posts

Joined February 2015

lemountain 2015-11-02T13:52:51+00:00

Normal
In my opinion, these notes 00:05:624 (2,3) - Should be closer to each other, optional

Approach rate on 7 is too harsh for normal players, I recommend using 5.

Hard
Overall Difficulty should be at least 6

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-02T22:44:27+00:00

LittlePigRMX wrote:
Normal
In my opinion, these notes 00:05:624 (2,3) - Should be closer to each other, optional

Approach rate on 7 is too harsh for normal players, I recommend using 5.

Hard
Overall Difficulty should be at least 6

Thanks for the help! Kinda inexperienced at mapping so I'm not really sure how the difficulty settings of the map should work.

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,257 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2015-11-03T08:16:33+00:00

Your timing is wrong

offset must be ~851
Dissable leterboxing and countdown
________________
I will back when you correct timing

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-03T21:20:40+00:00

shmiklak wrote:
Your timing is wrong

offset must be ~851
Dissable leterboxing and countdown
________________
I will back when you correct timing

hold this L offset is 883 lmao

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-20T00:23:43+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2015-11-03T23:31:44+00:00

Heya! :3

Normal

- use distance snap: press alt, choose a spacing at the top left, and then space all your notes equally, that makes it easier to play and other players can calculate the timing
- make the Circle Size a bit bigger (hold shift for smaller adjustments)
00:15:601 (5,6,7) - don't stack, it's confusing
00:16:851 (1,2,3,4) - follow the vocal here
00:27:101 (6) - new combo
00:37:851 (5) - ^
00:54:351 (5) - ^
00:29:101 - circle?? idk.. xD

Nice song!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-04T00:12:00+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Normal
- use distance snap: press alt, choose a spacing at the top left, and then space all your notes equally, that makes it easier to play and other players can calculate the timing
- make the Circle Size a bit bigger (hold shift for smaller adjustments)
00:15:601 (5,6,7) - don't stack, it's confusing
00:16:851 (1,2,3,4) - follow the vocal here
00:27:101 (6) - new combo
00:37:851 (5) - ^
00:54:351 (5) - ^
00:29:101 - circle?? idk.. xD

Nice song!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3

Thanks a lot for the mod!

[ Argon ]

106 posts

Joined September 2013

[ Argon ] 2015-11-04T02:46:49+00:00

heys~ just came across randomly :p
anyways heres my mod x3

Normal

General
-Try using a larger circle size (cs) 2 or 3, not smaller than that. Because larger size are easier to hit and aim, since its your first difficulty in the set, make it easier to play even for newer people.
-Approach rate (ar) too high, use 4 or 5. Same reason as above~
-Use a fixed distance snap (ds) throughout the map. Because flow reasons, and consistency and lower difficulty players cant teleport their cursors xD
-disable count down in design section of song setup well, its just my personal preference anyways, and besides, its not used very often now a days (except when the music doesnt have much intro time or it starts very complexly) mostly just used as a warning.

Timings
-kindda off, use offset 910
-Inherit point needs to be fixed These are used when the song has some changes in music patterns, or when you want to put some emphasis on the notes, or when you want to adjust hit sound volumes/sample sets.
try keeping points at these timings- (after fixing offset)
00:00:910 - 00:08:910 - 00:16:910 - 00:32:910 - 00:48:910 - 01:08:910 -
notice the music pattern changes!~

Mapping
Well, first off you will need to remap the whole set using distance snap (sorry for the bad news

)
Second off, 00:01:910 (2,3) - you are using these kindda beat placement through almost 80% of the song, change it and add up some variance. (ill leave it up to you to decide how to do it, I've got no idea...)
third, end spinner here 00:48:410 - there should be a decent amount of time (in lower difficulties) for the player to recover from spinning.

Hard

General
-ar 6-7, 8 is kindda alot, and it isnt too hard anyways.
-ds through the whole song, but disable when you feel like the music tell you to place jumps (still, dont make jumps too hard, no cursor teleports lol)

Timings fixed in easy diffculty, use in all difficulties~

everything else looks okay to me, well kindda, you need to learn how to make better patterns and flows...

Rave

General
-Eh meh gawd that hp drain....pls reduce to 6 or 7
-ar 8 would be more suitable, ar 9 is usually 4 star+
distance snap in places of constant rhythm

timings fixed in previous sections~

much flow needed tho~
flows are basically smooth progressions of movement from one note to other, it may or may not exist depending on music type (but usually its always good to put em anyways). Flows can make your map look nice and clean, while making the plays comfortable and usually helps avoid low visibility notes.

Well thats all i have for my mod :3 hope it helped ^^

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-04T04:27:40+00:00

[ Argon ] wrote:
heys~ just came across randomly :p
anyways heres my mod x3
Normal
General
-Try using a larger circle size (cs) 2 or 3, not smaller than that. Because larger size are easier to hit and aim, since its your first difficulty in the set, make it easier to play even for newer people.
-Approach rate (ar) too high, use 4 or 5. Same reason as above~
-Use a fixed distance snap (ds) throughout the map. Because flow reasons, and consistency and lower difficulty players cant teleport their cursors xD
-disable count down in design section of song setup well, its just my personal preference anyways, and besides, its not used very often now a days (except when the music doesnt have much intro time or it starts very complexly) mostly just used as a warning.

Timings
-kindda off, use offset 910
-Inherit point needs to be fixed These are used when the song has some changes in music patterns, or when you want to put some emphasis on the notes, or when you want to adjust hit sound volumes/sample sets.
try keeping points at these timings- (after fixing offset)
00:00:910 - 00:08:910 - 00:16:910 - 00:32:910 - 00:48:910 - 01:08:910 -
notice the music pattern changes!~

Mapping
Well, first off you will need to remap the whole set using distance snap (sorry for the bad news )
Second off, 00:01:910 (2,3) - you are using these kindda beat placement through almost 80% of the song, change it and add up some variance. (ill leave it up to you to decide how to do it, I've got no idea...)
third, end spinner here 00:48:410 - there should be a decent amount of time (in lower difficulties) for the player to recover from spinning.
Hard
General
-ar 6-7, 8 is kindda alot, and it isnt too hard anyways.
-ds through the whole song, but disable when you feel like the music tell you to place jumps (still, dont make jumps too hard, no cursor teleports lol)

Timings fixed in easy diffculty, use in all difficulties~

everything else looks okay to me, well kindda, you need to learn how to make better patterns and flows...
Rave
General
-Eh meh gawd that hp drain....pls reduce to 6 or 7
-ar 8 would be more suitable, ar 9 is usually 4 star+
distance snap in places of constant rhythm

timings fixed in previous sections~

much flow needed tho~
flows are basically smooth progressions of movement from one note to other, it may or may not exist depending on music type (but usually its always good to put em anyways). Flows can make your map look nice and clean, while making the plays comfortable and usually helps avoid low visibility notes.

Well thats all i have for my mod :3 hope it helped ^^

Thanks for the feedback! Will take a while but it'll eventually get done.

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,257 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2015-11-04T06:21:07+00:00

Hi again! Fast looking

Genaral

Background must be 1366x768

Normal

DS in Easy/Normal diffs must be fixed (ranking criteria)
Try not use blue lines at Easy/Normal diffs
00:01:851 (2,3,1) - Make it like this:

SPOILER

00:14:101 (1,2,3) - Remove because it unrakable
00:15:601 (2) - Make blancket
00:16:101 (3,4) - Better remove it
00:17:601 (3) - End it at 00:17:851 - and add reverse
00:18:601 (5) - Remove
00:25:601 (3) - End it at 00:25:851
I thing you understand what do next

Hard

00:05:976 (3) - Maybe remove?
00:06:601 - If you remove add here circle at x=72 y=300
00:25:851 - Missed sound. Make like normal
00:17:851 - ^
00:19:851 - ^
00:27:851 - ^
00:31:726 (1) - Move to 00:31:851 - and end it at 00:32:351
00:32:601 - Add circle
00:32:851 (3) - NC
I thing you understand what do next

Rave

You allow same errors in all diffs
____________________________________________________________________________
You must many work with beatmap. I recomend you read:
Ranking Criteria
Music Theory
Difficulty appropriate gameplay elements

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-04T16:49:06+00:00

Thanks for the mods everyone! I'll be a bit busy this week because of school but will eventually fix the map.

BigEarsMau

786 posts

Joined June 2015

BigEarsMau 2015-11-07T11:13:18+00:00

Hi there, Rave
Just want to help you with the metadata :3

[Metadata]

Artist : AAA
Romanized Artist : AAA
Title : アシタノヒカリ
Romanized Title : Ashita no Hikari (Remove "TV Size" in here. It was discouraged by most mappers these days)
Source : ワールドトリガー
Tags : Delete one of the "2" since you've typed a "2" already

All info are taken from the anime's MyAnimeList page and it's Wikipedia article

Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-11-07T15:33:33+00:00

GD Request

Hoen's Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: World_Trigger_OP_2[www.MP3Fiber.com] (1).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Hoen's Easy
Source:ワールドトリガー
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:372157

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Kuga mah boi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Colours]
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Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2015-11-08T04:15:20+00:00

Good job if it is your first map for rank. I like your usage of hitsound and the beats in your higher diffs. I will try to finish the mod tomorrow or next week. Not guranteed though.

Edit: At least change a BG. It looks streched now lol.
Try this?
http://puu.sh/ldw0n/3363440ebf.jpg

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-08T04:24:56+00:00

Atrue wrote:
Good job if it is your first map for rank. I like your usage of hitsound and the beats in your higher diffs. I will try to finish the mod tomorrow or next week. Not guranteed though.

Edit: At least change a BG. It looks streched now lol.

Yeah i know lol. I was going to save that for later but thanks for pointing it out.

Looking forward to your mod

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2015-11-12T03:00:16+00:00

[Metadata]
clear.

[Easy]
good job!

[Normal]
00:54:383 (4,6) - unrankable issue: All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria)
please move them away.

01:10:883 (2,1) - ^

a big issue in your Normal diff is that, your objects are not Distance Snapped. Usually it's not good with Normal diff. I suggest you to adjust them.
you can have a AI DScheck.

how to have a AI DS check

http://image17-c.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20150909/20/17820113020150909202428053.png?638x715_130

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Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-12T03:23:07+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
[Metadata]
clear.

[Easy]
good job!

[Normal]
00:54:383 (4,6) - unrankable issue: All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria)
please move them away.

01:10:883 (2,1) - ^

a big issue in your Normal diff is that, your objects are not Distance Snapped. Usually it's not good with Normal diff. I suggest you to adjust them.
you can have a AI DScheck.
how to have a AI DS check
http://image17-c.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20150909/20/17820113020150909202428053.png?638x715_130

========

Thanks! will re-map normal diff with distance snap and clear up any unrankable issues.

EDIT: Normal mode re-mapped!

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-12T21:25:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Chibi Maruko 2015-11-12T05:33:26+00:00

Ok, Random please
Im here for give a video for u (TV Size better to put video)
http://puu.sh/liwff/fa079e0ec9.mp4
So, I hope for ur map will rank soon!

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-12T21:26:19+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Ok, Random please
Im here for give a video for u (TV Size better to put video)
http://puu.sh/liwff/fa079e0ec9.mp4
So, I hope for ur map will rank soon!

Thanks for the video!

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2015-11-13T00:01:01+00:00

[General]
Unrankable background, bg should be sized 1366x768 or 1024x768 (sugeested, untick widescreen support).

SPOILER

[Easy]
will SV a little bit high? usuallt mapper will set 0.8~1.0
00:01:883 (2) - this flowing, a little bit hard for new player? maybe try this? also better look.

SPOILER

00:09:883 (2,3) - blanket, check all the blanket by yourself
00:04:883 - 00:10:883 - prevent slider end at big tick, some Easy diff dq becasue of it.
00:05:383 (4) - nc
00:06:883 (1) - del nc
00:12:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
00:14:883 (1) - del nc
00:16:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
00:18:883 (1) - del nc
00:20:883 (3) - nc
00:24:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
00:28:883 - ^
00:48:883 - ^ I think 00:46:883 (1) - can be end at 00:47:883 -
01:07:633 - is skipping beat sound good? I don't think so. it is better to map it.
01:08:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
01:10:883 (1) - del nc
01:14:883 (1) - ^
01:16:883 (3) - nc here
01:18:883 (1) - del nc
01:20:883 (3) - nc
01:22:883 (1) - del nc
01:24:883 (3) - nc
slider pattern is okay for me

[Normal]
00:00:883 (1,3) - poor overlap, you should avoid poor overlapping in any diff, as poor overlapping sometimes hard to read, and make a poor looking
00:04:883 (3) - curve to another side, better flowing
00:08:883 (3) - 00:10:883 (4) - I don't know if 1/4 spacing is okay here, please ask BN/ QAT by yourself. becasue basically Normal need to space 1/2 beat at least
00:17:883 (2,3) - poor overlapping
00:18:883 (3,4) - this flowing is too hard, also, poor overlap
00:19:883 (4,1) - poor overlap
00:25:258 (3) - I think 1/4 should not appear in Normal diff.
00:29:883 (4) - seldom do slider reverse twice in mapping nowadays, please fix it for convention.
00:31:633 (3) - 1/4 slider? if you use 1/4 slider, then you will miss the strong beat 00:31:883 - , I think you better follow beats instead of vocal sound.
I think most of the problem I have pointed out, same problem appear in the following part, then please fix it on your own.
I will stop here. If you have any question, please ask me through forum or in game.

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-13T01:34:39+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
[General]
Unrankable background, bg should be sized 1366x768 or 1024x768 (sugeested, untick widescreen support).
SPOILER

[Easy]
will SV a little bit high? usuallt mapper will set 0.8~1.0
00:01:883 (2) - this flowing, a little bit hard for new player? maybe try this? also better look.
SPOILER
00:09:883 (2,3) - blanket, check all the blanket by yourself
00:04:883 - 00:10:883 - prevent slider end at big tick, some Easy diff dq becasue of it.
00:05:383 (4) - nc
00:06:883 (1) - del nc
00:12:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
00:14:883 (1) - del nc
00:16:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
00:18:883 (1) - del nc
00:20:883 (3) - nc
00:24:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
00:28:883 - ^
00:48:883 - ^ I think 00:46:883 (1) - can be end at 00:47:883 -
01:07:633 - is skipping beat sound good? I don't think so. it is better to map it.
01:08:883 - nc should be here, just see how you fix slider end problem.
01:10:883 (1) - del nc
01:14:883 (1) - ^
01:16:883 (3) - nc here
01:18:883 (1) - del nc
01:20:883 (3) - nc
01:22:883 (1) - del nc
01:24:883 (3) - nc
slider pattern is okay for me

[Normal]
00:00:883 (1,3) - poor overlap, you should avoid poor overlapping in any diff, as poor overlapping sometimes hard to read, and make a poor looking
00:04:883 (3) - curve to another side, better flowing
00:08:883 (3) - 00:10:883 (4) - I don't know if 1/4 spacing is okay here, please ask BN/ QAT by yourself. becasue basically Normal need to space 1/2 beat at least
00:17:883 (2,3) - poor overlapping
00:18:883 (3,4) - this flowing is too hard, also, poor overlap
00:19:883 (4,1) - poor overlap
00:25:258 (3) - I think 1/4 should not appear in Normal diff.
00:29:883 (4) - seldom do slider reverse twice in mapping nowadays, please fix it for convention.
00:31:633 (3) - 1/4 slider? if you use 1/4 slider, then you will miss the strong beat 00:31:883 - , I think you better follow beats instead of vocal sound.
I think most of the problem I have pointed out, same problem appear in the following part, then please fix it on your own.
I will stop here. If you have any question, please ask me through forum or in game.

Thanks for the mod!

Fixed Normal and Easy diff.

iateyourlemons

3 posts

Joined September 2015

iateyourlemons 2015-11-14T08:30:50+00:00

Hard
00:09:633 (2) - This circle is not necessary, and prevents the flow of the map
00:30:883 (5) - Needs to be shortened by 1/4 tick

For the HP Drain, it should be set at 6-7
The AR should probably be set at 5

Normal
00:14:883 (3) - Doesn't need a repeat, but instead could be a longer slider starting at 00:14:883 and ending at 00:15:758
00:21:883 (2) - Once again, does not need a repeat. If you decide to change this, it should start at 00:21:883 and end at 00:22:258 Along with that a circle should be added at 00:22:633
00:47:383 - This circle is not needed
00:48:008 A circle is needed here
00:48:258 A circle is needed here
00:48:508 A circle is needed here

Easy
I could not find anything in this difficulty that needed changing

Overall, it's a great map!

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-14T16:42:16+00:00

Thanks for the mod lemons!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-11-14T17:26:27+00:00

We made some fixies let's say

08:20 ByBy13: hi :D
08:21 Rave-up: yo! :)
08:21 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815699 AAA - Ashita no Hikari [Normal]]
08:21 ByBy13: so let's go no?
08:21 Rave-up: ok
08:21 Rave-up: let's go
08:22 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815699 AAA - Ashita no Hikari [Normal]]
08:22 Rave-up: oh yeah
08:22 Rave-up: i was in the middle of checking out someone's mod
08:22 ByBy13: oh
08:22 Rave-up: for my normal diff so this is perfect
08:23 ByBy13: o_o
08:23 Rave-up: for the record tho
08:23 ByBy13: oh
08:23 Rave-up: are 1/4 sliders bad fo this diff?
08:23 ByBy13: wait a min
08:23 ByBy13: 00:13:883 (1)- like this one?
08:25 Rave-up: 00:14:883 (3) - maybe like this
08:25 Rave-up: those kind of repeaters
08:25 ByBy13: there are not bad
08:26 ByBy13: and also this is a 3/4 slider with a repeat if you ask me =w=)
08:26 Rave-up: oh
08:26 Rave-up: lol
08:26 Rave-up: but sliders that end off on blue ticks aren't allowed in normal or easy modes right?
08:26 ByBy13: end off? yes
08:26 ByBy13: it means they aren't fitting the song if they end off
08:27 ByBy13: and are wrongly snapped
08:27 Rave-up: i mean if they have a note after that
08:27 ByBy13: oh
08:27 ByBy13: yes
08:27 ByBy13: I think
08:27 Rave-up: oh
08:28 Rave-up: yeah cuz i thought it would be too challenging
08:28 Rave-up: for that kind of diff
08:28 ByBy13: just saying that don't use you know too much polarity in easy diffs for example
08:28 ByBy13: but you can polarity in normal
08:29 ByBy13: in normal the notes on blue tick are accepted but not in easy diffs
08:29 Rave-up: but dont overuse them?
08:29 ByBy13: Easy diffs are supposed to be the diffs special for low-skilled players
08:29 ByBy13: no
08:30 ByBy13: just don't put the notes where there's no any beat or sound
08:30 ByBy13: the notes placed where's no sound or beat are called 'overmapped notes' let's say
08:31 Rave-up: i see
08:31 Rave-up: but it is allowed to an extent in higher diffs
08:32 ByBy13: I think yes
08:32 Rave-up: ok nice!
08:32 Rave-up: one more thing
08:32 Rave-up: you like the map? ;)
08:33 ByBy13: nearly
08:33 ByBy13: but let's concern on map's issues
08:33 ByBy13: ok?
08:33 Rave-up: yep
08:34 ByBy13: okay
08:34 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815699 AAA - Ashita no Hikari [Normal]]
08:34 Rave-up: oh yea is the background okay
08:34 ByBy13: no :C
08:34 Rave-up: its unrankable right?
08:34 ByBy13: kind of
08:34 Rave-up: is there any way i can fix that
08:35 ByBy13: if it have really low quality
08:35 Rave-up: so its not too big
08:35 Rave-up: but the quality is low
08:36 ByBy13: its size is 1024x576
08:36 ByBy13: the preferable size would be 1024x768 or 1366x768
08:36 Rave-up: ah
08:37 Rave-up: ill try to edit it soon
08:37 ByBy13: okay
08:37 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815699 AAA - Ashita no Hikari [Normal]]
08:37 ByBy13: oh wait
08:37 ByBy13: the video have audio which is not acceptable for rank :(
08:37 ByBy13: you have to mute the video
08:38 Rave-up: oh
08:38 Rave-up: ok
08:38 Rave-up: that i will also get to
08:38 ByBy13: ok
08:43 ByBy13: 00:01:883 (2)- I suggest to move it to 187|280 for making it symmetric with the previous slider
08:44 ByBy13: 00:02:633 (3,4)- spacing issue.you have to fix it 
08:44 ByBy13: in normal and easy diffs you're not allowed to make spacing changes
08:45 ByBy13: 00:02:883 (4)- the NC is supposed to be here not on 00:03:883 (1)- if you're listening the music carefully
08:46 Rave-up: ok
08:47 ByBy13: 00:04:883 (3)- NC due to reset of the instruments
08:48 ByBy13: 00:07:883 (2)- A slider which feels unpleasant and forced to play.You must replace it with a curved slider or wave slider or what kind of slider do you want but not this kind of the slider
08:55 Rave-up: ok
08:55 Rave-up: fixed most of that stuff was forced to re-map a bit
08:55 Rave-up: but i got it
08:56 ByBy13:  that's good :)
08:56 Rave-up: if you want you can check out the changed to the beginning
08:56 Rave-up: changes*
08:56 ByBy13: okay

Good Luck!

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2015-11-14T21:53:58+00:00

From our modding queue~

[General]

-Add GD's name to tags

[Estellia-'s Hikari]

00:29:883 (3) - blanket
00:32:883 (1) - ^
00:53:383 (2,3,4) - unreadable spacing,
00:58:383 (5,6,7,1) - ^
00:55:758 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this sudden change of tempo is unreadable
00:48:508 (3,4,5) - ^
00:02:258 (4) - blanket is a bit off
01:00:383 (5) - blanket
01:00:383 (5) - I dont like this flow, especially with overlap at 01:03:383 (2,5) -

[Insane]

00:23:883 (5,6,7,1) - This doesnt look good
00:26:883 (1,3) - overlap
00:27:633 (3) - blanket
00:27:258 (2,4) - these should be stacked
00:58:883 (3,4) - more space between these, otherwise players will get confused at 00:59:383 (4,5) -
01:04:383 (9) - Rotate clockwise without changing the position
01:07:633 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, you can stack 01:08:008 (4) - to 01:07:633 (3) - and place 01:08:133 (5) - on DS

[Hard]

-Use distance snap
i would suggest you to remap whole map and use DS. Same to normal.
-Increase SV
00:00:883 (1) - blanket
00:23:883 (6) - ^
00:03:883 (2,3) - shouldnt touch each other
00:31:258 - delete note here and place it here 00:31:383 - instead
00:38:258 (3,4) - blanket
00:51:383 (6,7) - ^
00:59:383 (6,7,8) - constant spacing please
01:01:383 (4,5) - blanket
01:08:008 (1,2,3) - unreadable spacing, use DS here
01:15:258 (4) - blanket

[Normal]

01:21:383 (1,3) - Overlap, blanket
01:24:883 (1,3) - blanket
00:02:883 (1) - ^
00:05:883 (2) - ^
00:08:883 (1,2) - should be parallel
00:14:883 (3) - blanket
00:18:883 (3,4) - overlap
00:19:883 (4,1) - ^
00:26:883 (2,2) - Stack them
00:30:883 (2) - blanket
00:35:883 (3,4) - Make them parallel
00:36:883 (1) - blanket
00:36:883 (1,3,5) - ^
00:56:883 (3) - ^
01:00:883 (1,3) - Make them symmetrical

[Hoen's Easy]

This diff is actually really good! Great jop ^^

00:08:883 (1) - blanket
00:23:883 (4) - ^
01:22:883 (3,4) - ^

Good luck~

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-15T01:58:37+00:00

Hanczer wrote:
From our modding queue~

[General]

-Add GD's name to tags

[Estellia-'s Hikari]

00:29:883 (3) - blanket
00:32:883 (1) - ^
00:53:383 (2,3,4) - unreadable spacing,
00:58:383 (5,6,7,1) - ^
00:55:758 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this sudden change of tempo is unreadable
00:48:508 (3,4,5) - ^
00:02:258 (4) - blanket is a bit off
01:00:383 (5) - blanket
01:00:383 (5) - I dont like this flow, especially with overlap at 01:03:383 (2,5) -

~~[Insane]~~ Removed insane because hard became too similar

00:23:883 (5,6,7,1) - This doesnt look good
00:26:883 (1,3) - overlap
00:27:633 (3) - blanket
00:27:258 (2,4) - these should be stacked
00:58:883 (3,4) - more space between these, otherwise players will get confused at 00:59:383 (4,5) -
01:04:383 (9) - Rotate clockwise without changing the position
01:07:633 (3,4,5) - this spacing is wrong, you can stack 01:08:008 (4) - to 01:07:633 (3) - and place 01:08:133 (5) - on DS

~~[Hard]~~ Re-mapped hard

-Use distance snap
i would suggest you to remap whole map and use DS. Same to normal.
-Increase SV
00:00:883 (1) - blanket
00:23:883 (6) - ^
00:03:883 (2,3) - shouldnt touch each other
00:31:258 - delete note here and place it here 00:31:383 - instead
00:38:258 (3,4) - blanket
00:51:383 (6,7) - ^
00:59:383 (6,7,8) - constant spacing please
01:01:383 (4,5) - blanket
01:08:008 (1,2,3) - unreadable spacing, use DS here
01:15:258 (4) - blanket

[Normal]

01:21:383 (1,3) - Overlap, blanket done
01:24:883 (1,3) - blanket done
00:02:883 (1) - ^ done
00:05:883 (2) - ^ done
00:08:883 (1,2) - ~~should be parallel~~ I thinks it's fine
00:14:883 (3) - blanket done
00:18:883 (3,4) - overlap re-mapped and fixed
00:19:883 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:26:883 (2,2) - Stack them ^
00:30:883 (2) - blanket ^
00:35:883 (3,4) - ~~Make them parallel~~ It's ok
00:36:883 (1) - blanket done
00:36:883 (1,3,5) - ^ re-mapped
00:56:883 (3) - ^ done
01:00:883 (1,3) - Make them symmetrical done

[Hoen's Easy]

This diff is actually really good! Great jop ^^

00:08:883 (1) - blanket done
00:23:883 (4) - ^ done
01:22:883 (3,4) - ^ done

Good luck~

Thanks for the mod!

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-17T00:30:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-15T06:16:14+00:00

dude did you change my difficulty without my permission

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-15T07:17:53+00:00

^Gotchu fam^

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-15T15:54:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Histoire

482 posts

Joined December 2013

Histoire 2015-11-15T09:15:51+00:00

Rave-up wrote:
Just fixed blankets and made minor changes to patterns for flow. If you want, I can change it back. Sorry about that.

dude u should never do that

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-15T09:16:16+00:00

change it back lmao I'll look at the mods myself

ceLy

148 posts

Joined November 2014

ceLy 2015-11-15T11:29:02+00:00

I wonder if you still need an insane GD?

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-15T15:56:00+00:00

cHelli wrote:
I wonder if you still need an insane GD?

nah but mod would help

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-16T05:26:53+00:00

Hanczer wrote:
From our modding queue~

[Estellia-'s Hikari]

00:29:883 (3) - blanket fix
00:32:883 (1) - ^ ^
00:53:383 (2,3,4) - unreadable spacing, ^
00:58:383 (5,6,7,1) - ^ ^
00:55:758 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this sudden change of tempo is unreadable ^
00:48:508 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:02:258 (4) - blanket is a bit off ^
01:00:383 (5) - blanket ^
01:00:383 (5) - I dont like this flow, especially with overlap at 01:03:383 (2,5) - i dont understand this sentence, but i fixed the 2nd and kept the first, because flow similar to first is consistent in my map

tq xd

dude fix your metadata please jesus

diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: World_Trigger_OP_2[www.MP3Fiber.com] (1).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999992

[Metadata]
Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:Ã£â€šÂ¢Ã£â€šÂ·Ã£â€šÂ¿Ã£Æ’Å½Ã£Æ’â€™Ã£â€šÂ«Ã£Æ’Âª
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:Ã£Æ’Â¯Ã£Æ’Â¼Ã£Æ’Â«Ã£Æ’â€°Ã£Æ’Ë†Ã£Æ’ÂªÃ£â€šÂ¬Ã£Æ’Â¼
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica
BeatmapID:823437
BeatmapSetID:372157

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"world-trigger-characters-anime-fall-2014-yuichi-jin-chika-amatori-yuma-kuga-osamu-mikumo-1366x768.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
883,500,4,2,0,5,1,0
883,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
8883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,30,0,0
16883,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
32883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,45,0,0
46883,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,45,0,0
47883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,45,0,0
48883,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,1
68883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,0
86383,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,51,51
Combo4 : 128,0,255
Combo5 : 255,128,0
Combo6 : 64,128,128

[HitObjects]
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193,233,1383,2,0,P|179:287|153:348,1,95
150,150,1883,2,0,P|200:136|266:135,1,95
318,181,2258,2,0,P|385:191|447:132,1,142.5
371,15,2883,6,0,L|365:110,1,95
220,248,3383,2,0,L|213:153,1,95
146,314,3883,2,0,P|192:323|237:338,1,95
318,366,4258,2,0,L|336:201,1,142.5
469,130,4883,6,0,B|404:120|404:120|346:138|346:138|283:128,1,190
194,222,5633,2,0,P|237:199|272:179,1,47.5
149,144,5883,2,0,L|143:344,1,190
55,230,6633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,230,6883,6,0,P|39:157|25:117,1,95
3,53,7258,2,0,P|81:58|135:14,1,142.5
284,120,7883,2,0,P|222:103|180:101,1,95
315,213,8383,2,0,P|360:167|383:132,1,95
216,194,8883,6,0,L|224:328,1,104.500003189087
79,361,9258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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55,80,9883,2,0,P|122:62|164:43,1,104.500003189087
291,38,10258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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407,252,11258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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323,361,11883,2,0,P|262:331|203:309,1,104.500003189087
100,247,12258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-16T05:42:58+00:00

estellia- wrote:

Hanczer wrote:
From our modding queue~

[Estellia-'s Hikari]

00:29:883 (3) - blanket fix
00:32:883 (1) - ^ ^
00:53:383 (2,3,4) - unreadable spacing, ^
00:58:383 (5,6,7,1) - ^ ^
00:55:758 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this sudden change of tempo is unreadable ^
00:48:508 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:02:258 (4) - blanket is a bit off ^
01:00:383 (5) - blanket ^
01:00:383 (5) - I dont like this flow, especially with overlap at 01:03:383 (2,5) - i dont understand this sentence, but i fixed the 2nd and kept the first, because flow similar to first is consistent in my map

tq xd

dude fix your metadata please jesus

diff

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done bih

Originality

102 posts

Joined October 2014

Originality 2015-11-17T04:23:54+00:00

A lot of these changes are personal preference things, across the board the timing on these look nearly perfect, and I didn't find anything that would cause these maps to be disqualified. That being said, here you go!

[Easy]

This difficulty looks great, these are a few little things I'd change to mix it up a little bit (given the difficulty is easy)...

01:00:883 (1,2,3,4) - It'd be neat if you put a single in there instead of just 4 consecutive sliders, maybe singles on 2 and 4?

01:06:883 (3) - I like that a LOT.

01:12:883 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as first one, some way you could mix this up, maybe? Or add singles to one of these but leave the other the same?

[Normal]

00:07:883 (2) - I think this slider would sound better if you ended earlier, it's kind of weird where it's ending right now.

00:21:883 (2) - There's an offbeat note here that doesn't match up with the end of the slider, I'd change this to two singles, one for each beat.

00:24:883 (2) - Same thing with this one.

Okay, this happens a couple of times. It's not something that absolutely needs changed, but I think you should look into it. Turn your speed down to 50% and listen to the background drumbeat on those two times. If you like it as you can leave it, it's just a personal thing.

01:15:133 (1,2,3) - Mmm. I like this section.

01:06:883 (1) - It'd be kind of cool if you ended this a little earlier, and then made single notes for the end of that phrase.

01:25:883 (3) - That slider just doesn't feel right at the end. A shorter slider with more hits in-between might sound neat. Experiment around with it.

[Hard]

Wow. This looks really good, the streams are super clean too. This was really nice to play and read through.

00:35:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This series of notes was the only part I though was a little wacky. I slowed it down and the beat was on, but something just doesn't sound right. Maybe doing the first 4 (or 6) as a pattern and then last bit as a slider? Mess around with it.

[Hikari]

AR 9 seems a little fast, when I turned down to AR 8 and played through it felt a LOT better for the difficulty it's at.

00:05:633 (2,3) - I really like this kickslider setup -- along with the other ones you have placed later on.

00:06:633 (4,1) - 1
00:10:258 (5,6) - 2
00:11:258 (2,3) - 3
00:12:258 (5,6) - 4
00:17:258 (2,3) - 5

While playing, I felt like the patterning was fairly repetitive, specifically the pattern I've highlighted above, and not just in that particular section.
Possible ways to mix this up?
-stack the notes next to each other instead of directly on top
http://postimg.org/image/9fdrt0c65/4362e9d2/
-change up the pattern and make it into a triple <--- personal recommendation
-use your imagination!

00:48:508 (3,4) - I like this double, but it's the only one like it in the song, and there are a lot of single kick sliders -- some more would be interesting! (just kidding I found one more, this might be fine since you're in Kiai at this point, it makes a nice emphasis)

01:06:883 (1) - I feel like this note comes too fast after this spinner -- although that could just be AR9.

01:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section seemed really difficult for this difficulty -- but that could be how it's meant to be!

A spinner at the end would fit nicely, I think.

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-17T04:56:41+00:00

Originality wrote:
A lot of these changes are personal preference things, across the board the timing on these look nearly perfect, and I didn't find anything that would cause these maps to be disqualified. That being said, here you go!

[Easy]

This difficulty looks great, these are a few little things I'd change to mix it up a little bit (given the difficulty is easy)...

01:00:883 (1,2,3,4) - It'd be neat if you put a single in there instead of just 4 consecutive sliders, maybe singles on 2 and 4?

01:06:883 (3) - I like that a LOT.

01:12:883 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as first one, some way you could mix this up, maybe? Or add singles to one of these but leave the other the same?

[Normal]

00:07:883 (2) - I think this slider would sound better if you ended earlier, it's kind of weird where it's ending right now.

00:21:883 (2) - There's an offbeat note here that doesn't match up with the end of the slider, I'd change this to two singles, one for each beat.

00:24:883 (2) - Same thing with this one.

Okay, this happens a couple of times. It's not something that absolutely needs changed, but I think you should look into it. Turn your speed down to 50% and listen to the background drumbeat on those two times. If you like it as you can leave it, it's just a personal thing.

01:15:133 (1,2,3) - Mmm. I like this section.

01:06:883 (1) - It'd be kind of cool if you ended this a little earlier, and then made single notes for the end of that phrase.

01:25:883 (3) - That slider just doesn't feel right at the end. A shorter slider with more hits in-between might sound neat. Experiment around with it.

[Hard]

Wow. This looks really good, the streams are super clean too. This was really nice to play and read through.

00:35:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This series of notes was the only part I though was a little wacky. I slowed it down and the beat was on, but something just doesn't sound right. Maybe doing the first 4 (or 6) as a pattern and then last bit as a slider? Mess around with it.

[Hikari]

AR 9 seems a little fast, when I turned down to AR 8 and played through it felt a LOT better for the difficulty it's at.

00:05:633 (2,3) - I really like this kickslider setup -- along with the other ones you have placed later on.

00:06:633 (4,1) - 1
00:10:258 (5,6) - 2
00:11:258 (2,3) - 3
00:12:258 (5,6) - 4
00:17:258 (2,3) - 5

While playing, I felt like the patterning was fairly repetitive, specifically the pattern I've highlighted above, and not just in that particular section.
Possible ways to mix this up?
-stack the notes next to each other instead of directly on top
http://postimg.org/image/9fdrt0c65/4362e9d2/
-change up the pattern and make it into a triple <--- personal recommendation
-use your imagination!

00:48:508 (3,4) - I like this double, but it's the only one like it in the song, and there are a lot of single kick sliders -- some more would be interesting! (just kidding I found one more, this might be fine since you're in Kiai at this point, it makes a nice emphasis)

01:06:883 (1) - I feel like this note comes too fast after this spinner -- although that could just be AR9.

01:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section seemed really difficult for this difficulty -- but that could be how it's meant to be!

A spinner at the end would fit nicely, I think.

Thanks for the mod! Will update tmrw cuz sleep n stuff

EDIT: Fixed but couldn't really find anything better for the offbeat problem on normal sorry

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-17T22:15:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-17T05:05:59+00:00

Originality wrote:
[Hikari]

AR 9 seems a little fast, when I turned down to AR 8 and played through it felt a LOT better for the difficulty it's at. fix

00:05:633 (2,3) - I really like this kickslider setup -- along with the other ones you have placed later on. thanks! i liked it too~

00:06:633 (4,1) - 1
00:10:258 (5,6) - 2
00:11:258 (2,3) - 3
00:12:258 (5,6) - 4
00:17:258 (2,3) - 5

While playing, I felt like the patterning was fairly repetitive, specifically the pattern I've highlighted above, and not just in that particular section.
Possible ways to mix this up?
-stack the notes next to each other instead of directly on top
http://postimg.org/image/9fdrt0c65/4362e9d2/
-change up the pattern and make it into a triple <--- personal recommendation
-use your imagination!
preferred the idea of having this pattern as the core structure of my map, will think about changing up if i get more mods about this

00:48:508 (3,4) - I like this double, but it's the only one like it in the song, and there are a lot of single kick sliders -- some more would be interesting! (just kidding I found one more, this might be fine since you're in Kiai at this point, it makes a nice emphasis) will think about this, but i can't really find opportunities to add more kicks

01:06:883 (1) - I feel like this note comes too fast after this spinner -- although that could just be AR9. shortened spinner

01:18:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section seemed really difficult for this difficulty -- but that could be how it's meant to be! its kinda the structure of the rap to have kicks everywhere, will think about changing

A spinner at the end would fit nicely, I think. i didnt replace the slider, just added a spinner at the back

thanks for the mod!

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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2015-11-17T09:19:35+00:00

Hoen's Easy

00:49:383 (1) - How about NC here?

Easy is fine

Normal

00:27:883 (3) - Fix blanket

01:02:883 (3) - x160 y160

01:17:883 (3) - Decrease the distance
01:21:383 (1,2,3) - Rhythm looks oddly. please consider for change
01:25:883 (3) - x264 y332

Hard

00:29:633 (2) - Stack this on 00:27:883 (4)
00:30:883 (1) - Fix blacket
00:34:258 (5) - Copy/paste 00:33:883 (4)

00:53:383 (1,2) - I recommend you fix flow
00:55:758 (7) - Is DS right? I suggest you increase note's distance
00:59:383 (2) - copy/paste and ctrl+HJ 00:58:883 (1)

Estellia-'s Hikari

I think AR is little fast. I recommend AR8~AR8.5

00:14:133 (4) - Stack this on 00:12:383 (6)'s tail
00:29:883 (3) - How about ctrl+G here
00:46:883 (1) - Fix blanket

i love this song~

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-17T22:14:56+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
Hoen's Easy
00:49:383 (1) - How about NC here?

Easy is fine

Normal
00:27:883 (3) - Fix blanket

01:02:883 (3) - x160 y160

01:17:883 (3) - Decrease the distance
01:21:383 (1,2,3) - Rhythm looks oddly. please consider for change
01:25:883 (3) - x264 y332

Hard
00:29:633 (2) - Stack this on 00:27:883 (4)
00:30:883 (1) - Fix blacket
00:34:258 (5) - Copy/paste 00:33:883 (4)

00:53:383 (1,2) - I recommend you fix flow
00:55:758 (7) - Is DS right? I suggest you increase note's distance
00:59:383 (2) - copy/paste and ctrl+HJ 00:58:883 (1)

Estellia-'s Hikari
I think AR is little fast. I recommend AR8~AR8.5

00:14:133 (4) - Stack this on 00:12:383 (6)'s tail
00:29:883 (3) - How about ctrl+G here
00:46:883 (1) - Fix blanket

i love this song~

Thanks for the mod! Will try for BN check soon

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-18T02:22:09+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
I think AR is little fast. I recommend AR8~AR8.5 sry i think raveup didnt update the map i swear i swapped it to ar 8

00:14:133 (4) - Stack this on 00:12:383 (6)'s tail no reason to
00:29:883 (3) - How about ctrl+G here then the distance change is too great
00:46:883 (1) - Fix blanket fix

pls update regularly thanks

thank

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Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2015-11-18T09:01:23+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

General

- Please remove [www.MP3Fiber.com] from your mp3. file name.
- You should set here as a preview point 00:48:883

Easy

00:02:883 (3) - Rotate this a bit? So it will become blanket with 00:01:883 (2)
00:21:883 (2) - Feels weird to end this slider on a downbeat imo.
00:46:883 (1) - ^

Normal

- OD should be at least 4.
00:12:883 (4) - Make this stack with the end of 00:11:383 (2) ,maybe?
00:34:383 (4,1) - These don't look symmetrical somehow.
01:16:883 (4) - Maybe add some hitsound here?

Hard

00:01:883 (2) - This slider looks weird since the reverse is on the blue tick.
00:28:883 (1) - Maybe curve the end of this slider a bit more so it will become more symmetrical with 00:29:633 (2) ?
00:34:633 (6) - You can stack the end of this slider on 00:36:133 (4)
01:26:883 (4) - I would put an NC here but it's up to you.

That's all, I hope my mod is useful!
Good luck!

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-18T22:34:52+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

General
- Please remove [www.MP3Fiber.com] from your mp3. file name.doing so messes with the song so meh
- You should set here as a preview point 00:48:883i like the one i got now
idk about easy, i like it how it is now
Easy
00:02:883 (3) - Rotate this a bit? So it will become blanket with 00:01:883 (2)
00:21:883 (2) - Feels weird to end this slider on a downbeat imo.
00:46:883 (1) - ^

Normal
- OD should be at least 4. done
00:12:883 (4) - Make this stack with the end of 00:11:383 (2) ,maybe? done
00:34:383 (4,1) - These don't look symmetrical somehow. they are now
01:16:883 (4) - Maybe add some hitsound here? oops forgot to add finish here (done)

Hard
00:01:883 (2) - This slider looks weird since the reverse is on the blue tick. couldnt really find anything better but made some positional changes
00:28:883 (1) - Maybe curve the end of this slider a bit more so it will become more symmetrical with 00:29:633 (2) ? done
00:34:633 (6) - You can stack the end of this slider on 00:36:133 (4) done
01:26:883 (4) - I would put an NC here but it's up to you. sure i guess

That's all, I hope my mod is useful!
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod! Helped me fix some mistakes I probably wouldn't have found myself

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-11-19T02:04:25+00:00

[general]

add 1000 AudioLeadIn ? open the xxx.osu file , the second

[Normal]

00:01:883 (1) - remove NC

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla

i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T02:10:27+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[general]
add 1000 AudioLeadIn ? open the xxx.osu file , the second

[Normal]

00:01:883 (1) - remove NC

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla
i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

you already know finding one is the struggle. meh

Last edited by Rave-up 2015-11-20T01:41:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-11-19T02:25:42+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[general]

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ? so?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary pp isn't necessary, and i can read it just fine
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla
sry i'll get raveup to copy

i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

no fix

raveup can u copy hitsounds thank

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/131540

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: World_Trigger_OP_2[www.MP3Fiber.com] (1).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999992

[Metadata]
Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:ワールドトリガー
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica Hoen estellia
BeatmapID:823437
BeatmapSetID:372157

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"world-trigger-characters-anime-fall-2014-yuichi-jin-chika-amatori-yuma-kuga-osamu-mikumo-1366x768.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
883,500,4,2,0,5,1,0
883,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
8883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,30,0,0
16883,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
32883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,45,0,0
46883,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,45,0,0
47883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,45,0,0
48883,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,1
68883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,0
86383,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,0
89883,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,51,51
Combo4 : 128,0,255
Combo5 : 255,128,0
Combo6 : 64,128,128

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Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T02:39:02+00:00

estellia- wrote:

Narcissu wrote:
[general]

[Estellia-'s Hikari]
01:26:883 - other diff end here , are you like ? so?
the diff too hard to read for 3.8 star lol , as far as i'm concerned …… comfort and PP is necessary pp isn't necessary, and i can read it just fine
you should be add Hitsound , if you wish rank …… simple example ↓↓↓

00:49:383 - 00:50:383 - 00:51:383 - 00:52:383 - clap , follow drum

00:48:883 - 00:56:883 - finish , every 4bar

00:49:133 - 00:49:383 - 00:49:633 - 00:49:758 - 00:50:008 - whistle , follow vocla
sry i'll get raveup to copy

i had intended to write more …… since there are already 12sp + , you need BN not me lol

good song , good luck

no fix

raveup can u copy hitsounds thank

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/131540

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Ashita no Hikari
TitleUnicode:アシタノヒカリ
Artist:AAA
ArtistUnicode:AAA
Creator:Rave-up
Version:Estellia-'s Hikari
Source:ワールドトリガー
Tags:World Trigger Mikumo Osamu Kuga Yuma OP 2 Opening Replica Hoen estellia
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Hitsounds fixed

pkhg

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Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-11-19T03:08:48+00:00

yo

[General]

the volume is so low that it doesnt give enough feedback to the players, use 20% at least (5% is kinda unrankable)

[Hoen's Easy]

00:09:883 (2,4) - its much better if they dont overlap
00:15:883 (5,1) - wheres the flow. having a more flowy path between notes will make everything easier for beginners
00:23:883 (4,1) - ^
01:06:883 (3) - pls not on an easy, more than 1 repeat is confusing for beginners so make it a 3/2 with 1 repeat

[Normal]

00:07:883 (2,1) - spacing
00:32:383 (5) - i think 1/4 is too much for this diff, also the head and tail overlap a lot so its hard to see the reverse arrow, kinda risky so better to not use it
01:13:383 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:883 (3,1) - ^
01:24:883 (1,2) - ^
i guess youre using 1.2 spacing so keep it around 1.18 ~ 1.22
sometimes you reach 1.13 and even 1.3 so check the spacing~

Hard's spacing seems too high but maybe its just me

gl

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T04:26:08+00:00

pkhg wrote:
yo

[General]

the volume is so low that it doesnt give enough feedback to the players, use 20% at least (5% is kinda unrankable)

[Hoen's Easy]
00:09:883 (2,4) - its much better if they dont overlap
00:15:883 (5,1) - wheres the flow. having a more flowy path between notes will make everything easier for beginners
00:23:883 (4,1) - ^
01:06:883 (3) - pls not on an easy, more than 1 repeat is confusing for beginners so make it a 3/2 with 1 repeat
[Normal]
00:07:883 (2,1) - spacing
00:32:383 (5) - i think 1/4 is too much for this diff, also the head and tail overlap a lot so its hard to see the reverse arrow, kinda risky so better to not use it
01:13:383 (2,3) - spacing
01:17:883 (3,1) - ^
01:24:883 (1,2) - ^
i guess youre using 1.2 spacing so keep it around 1.18 ~ 1.22
sometimes you reach 1.13 and even 1.3 so check the spacing~
Hard's spacing seems too high but maybe its just me

gl

Thanks for the mod! Fixed volume on all diffs and fixed spacing issue on normal.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,811 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-11-19T21:39:32+00:00

the volume changes on insane and hard diffs seem to make more sense than what the others are using. increasing at 00:08:883 - then decreasing at 00:16:883 - matches what the song does more than what you've got (which is the opposite)

estellia is missing video

your only hitsound file is unused lol

hoen
00:32:883 (1,1) - start of a new section doesnt really justify the double new combo thing too well
00:40:883 (5) - and um assuming you forgot a new combo here
01:06:383 (2,3,1) - rip aesthetics. considering the rest of the diff looks good and this is the only place that's gross you probably know what would work to make this better
01:10:883 (3,1) - spacing tho

normal
i dont wanna point out blankets but like take a look at 00:28:633 (1,2) - if there's no chance a blanket will work, don't even try. similar stuff happens a few other places. choose something that works better instead of forcing weird placement lolz
00:09:383 - dunno what you were thinking with this gap, but it's pretty weird. melody is the guitar on white ticks so this whole 3/2 gap is what
00:43:883 (4,2) - avoid these sort of crowded object placements. 2 is fading in as you're finishing 4 so like having them on top of each otehr = woah lots of objects on screen scary
01:04:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 2 beats between the spinner and the next object. that's just a rule for normals p much
01:09:883 (3) - 01:11:883 (3) - not exactly sure what you're trying to follow with the blue tick stuff here. sure, there are sounds on them, but white ticks are being prioritized way more in the section
for spread reasons you'll probably need to include some 1/1 gaps in your long 1/2 object chains. like your last chain of objects is 4 measures long, 2 of which are constant 1/2 sliders. try to at least get one 1/1 gap in every 2 measures and you'll be fine

hard
your kiai should start 1/2 beat later
00:02:883 (1,2) - if you're gonna introduce 00:00:883 (1,2) - as using large spacing, making this repetition of it an antijump is kind of nonsense. keep things consistent to some degree
00:22:883 (1,2) - for the entire section you prioritized the vocal thing, but this one instance you decided nope and ignored it. not understanding what's making it stand out over the other stuff and if it's nothing, should just continue with mapping the 3/4 thing
00:29:633 (2) - yea vocal and instrumental emphasis on the tail while there's nothing on the head isn't a good thing to do. converting it to 2 circles would work
00:32:633 (1,2,3) - and for any other stuff like this, new combos on the beat the triple is leading into works way better. you managed to do it right with 00:42:633 (4,5,1) - so i probably don't have to explain why
01:05:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 1 beat between these. similar to the spinner to object gap on normal, there isn't really a workaround for it
the way you lower spacing for your streams like 00:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - is good, but it would be even better if you did the same for stuff like 00:54:383 (3,4,5) - and other places with multiple consecutive 1/4. would be nice on stuff like 00:20:883 (1,2) - too, but it's not quite as necessary because of sliderleniency stuff

Rave-up

302 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Rave-up 2015-11-19T22:54:56+00:00

Honestly, some of these mistakes were a dead tired me trying some new shit at 2 in the morn (As you can see, it didn't work)

pishifat wrote:
the volume changes on insane and hard diffs seem to make more sense than what the others are using. increasing at 00:08:883 - then decreasing at 00:16:883 - matches what the song does more than what you've got (which is the opposite) idk why i didnt change that lol

estellia is missing video its always missing video somehow (fixed tho)

your only hitsound file is unused lol was trying some new shit, not anymore (deleted)

hoen
00:32:883 (1,1) - start of a new section doesnt really justify the double new combo thing too well
00:40:883 (5) - and um assuming you forgot a new combo here
01:06:383 (2,3,1) - rip aesthetics. considering the rest of the diff looks good and this is the only place that's gross you probably know what would work to make this better
01:10:883 (3,1) - spacing tho
bruh i fell asleep doing the easy diff and left it unfinished smh (fixed all tho)
normal
i dont wanna point out blankets but like take a look at 00:28:633 (1,2) - if there's no chance a blanket will work, don't even try. similar stuff happens a few other places. choose something that works better instead of forcing weird placement lolz changed dat
00:09:383 - dunno what you were thinking with this gap, but it's pretty weird. melody is the guitar on white ticks so this whole 3/2 gap is what was supposed to be 2 ticks longer lol (My tired self could not comprehend that apparently)
00:43:883 (4,2) - avoid these sort of crowded object placements. 2 is fading in as you're finishing 4 so like having them on top of each otehr = woah lots of objects on screen scary fixed and it looks more spacious
01:04:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 2 beats between the spinner and the next object. that's just a rule for normals p much done
01:09:883 (3) - 01:11:883 (3) - not exactly sure what you're trying to follow with the blue tick stuff here. sure, there are sounds on them, but white ticks are being prioritized way more in the section i guess i was trying to make some next beat, but ending off on the white tick is way better as you said
for spread reasons you'll probably need to include some 1/1 gaps in your long 1/2 object chains. like your last chain of objects is 4 measures long, 2 of which are constant 1/2 sliders. try to at least get one 1/1 gap in every 2 measures and you'll be fine fixed that last part (bless the 1/1 sliders)

hard
your kiai should start 1/2 beat later done
00:02:883 (1,2) - if you're gonna introduce 00:00:883 (1,2) - as using large spacing, making this repetition of it an antijump is kind of nonsense. keep things consistent to some degree fixed
00:22:883 (1,2) - for the entire section you prioritized the vocal thing, but this one instance you decided nope and ignored it. not understanding what's making it stand out over the other stuff and if it's nothing, should just continue with mapping the 3/4 thing i actually had this fixed in an earlier update but forgot to save fixed now
00:29:633 (2) - yea vocal and instrumental emphasis on the tail while there's nothing on the head isn't a good thing to do. converting it to 2 circles would work done
00:32:633 (1,2,3) - and for any other stuff like this, new combos on the beat the triple is leading into works way better. you managed to do it right with 00:42:633 (4,5,1) - so i probably don't have to explain why i prob just overlooked it
01:05:133 (1,1) - gonna need at least 1 beat between these. similar to the spinner to object gap on normal, there isn't really a workaround for it done
the way you lower spacing for your streams like 00:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - is good, but it would be even better if you did the same for stuff like 00:54:383 (3,4,5) - and other places with multiple consecutive 1/4. would be nice on stuff like 00:20:883 (1,2) - too, but it's not quite as necessary because of sliderleniency stuff fixed

Thanks for the mod! Really helped to clean up and fix stupid mistakes on the map

ayylmaoz

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