DiamondCrash wrote:

I think you could do with making an easy, your normal is pretty borderline. ~Yeah. I <3 me some 2.99
Remove that grey combo colour ~What would be a good replacement for it? Blue like in that AM-3P map?

Hard;
01:10:781 (1) - 1/4 earlier. ~I...
01:12:245 (5) - Shorten by 1/4. ~... love it

James2250 wrote:

Include a hitcircle apporach circle from the template skin in the folder ~Alright.
Make the slider velocity different on Easy/Normal/Hard (start lower on Easy) ~Hmm. This I'm not so sure about.
I agree remove gray, not sure what to replace it with ~I'll try orange for now.
Last timing section doesn't seem to be used on any difficulty ~Originally was soft hitsounds. Forgot to delete it.

Custom clap sounds so close to the song I can't tell when there are hitsounds or not..oh well?
~Unfortunately, other beats I experimented with cancelled out the beat of the song. No kidding.
~I used this one as it adds a very slight hint of a beat. It IS noticeable when played with and without.
~I'll keep it for now, unless I can find any other beats that sound good.

Easy:
You can check these hitsounds over for the other difficulties too ~I didn't even notice that sound in the background.

Hard:
00:22:977 (11) - add note ~No, I like how it goes with the music like this.
00:27:367 (5) - new combo ~No, this and below make ooglay combo
00:29:318 (1) - remove new combo ~No

Mustaash wrote:

[Hard]
00:36:147 (2) - Flip That :p likes :http://puu.sh/fCq ~Uh... no

[Insane]
Change Circle Size *.* (Left 1 Grid) ~If two other people agree.

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

- Slider velocity
~Ok Fine. Changed now.
~1.2,1.5,1.8,2.1 Heyy, that aint so bad.

- I don't like the custom override sound...
~Once I find a better one, it will be replaced.

[Easy]
01:41:025 (4) - switch the clap for a finish ~Hell no
01:42:977 (4) - ^ ~No


[Hard]
00:22:977 (x) - add a note here (with clap)
~You're the second person to point it out, yet I really like it like this.
~Fine, I'll change it if one more person agrees.

[Insane]
Circle Size: -1
~Each difficulty is descending in circle size. This would make Hard and Insane the same.
~Since it was suggested before... I will change it.

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
00:41:513 (2) - Add clap ~It has one

[Normal]
00:19:562 (1) - Reduce the lenght of this slider by half and add a reverse ~Eh.. nah
00:30:294 (6) - Reduce the lenght of this slider by half and add a reverse ~I like these
00:47:367 (2) - Sounds a bit off, remove it ? ~Speeds things up for the next combo

[Hard]
00:22:977 (x) - Add note ~Oh fine. I don't like it but if everybody else does, it shall be done.

1. You should add one more combo color, Not "Grey" but "Blue" or "White".
2. SB might be confusing for [Easy].

1. Maybe too boring , But perfect.

1. 00:40:538 (2) - This slider should end here: 00:41:025 & then add a circle here: 00:41:269
2. 00:42:489 (2) - ^
3. 00:47:367 (2) - This note is off rythm, Delete it.
4. 00:47:611 (X) - Add a circle here.
5. 00:50:781 (1) - You should map this section and delete the spinner.
6. 01:43:464 (1) - End this spinner here: 01:44:928 and then:
7. 01:45:416 (X) - Add a spinner here and end it here: 01:46:879

1. 01:19:562 (2) - Remove New Combo?

1. 00:28:586 (5) - New Combo, then:
2. 00:29:318 (1) - Remove New Combo and then:
3. 00:29:806 (1) - Remove New Combo
4. Blank~
5. 00:31:757 (1) - Remove New Combo.
6. 00:32:733 (1) - ^
7. 00:34:196 (1) - ^
8. 00:43:221 (1) - ^
9. 00:45:172 (2) - ^

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
You should add one more combo color, Not "Grey" but "Blue" or "White". ~Experimenting
SB might be confusing for [Easy]. ~Perhaps, but changing it to difficulty specific may prove frustrating. I may do it.

Easy
Maybe too boring , But perfect. ~Unfortunately-fortunately

Normal
00:40:538 (2) - This slider should end here: 00:41:025 & then add a circle here: 00:41:269 ~This part adds some complexion
00:42:489 (2) - ^ ~^
01:43:464 (1) - End this spinner here: 01:44:928 and then:
01:45:416 (X) - Add a spinner here and end it here: 01:46:879 ~Interesting. I'll try it.

Insane
00:28:586 (5) - New Combo, then:
00:29:318 (1) - Remove New Combo and then:
00:29:806 (1) - Remove New Combo ~It was like that before. I personally think 123 123 looks much better.
00:43:221 (1) - ^ ~This part is tough on HP Drain, so I made these new combos.
00:45:172 (2) - ^

1. I think you should add some new combos in the kiai section and shortly after. Some combos are really stretching.
2. 00:54:684 (1) - I'd go with a finish on the start of this slider, too.

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
00:23:464 (1) - Finish. ~Finishes are strategically placed to emphasize a sound in the background.
01:18:099 (1) - ^ ~Like this one! Thanks for pointing it out.
01:39:562 (1) - ^ ~^-^

[Hard]
00:46:879 (1) - Finish? ~Nah
Awesome work with beats.I like how it sounds. ~Very good to hear

[Insane]
Hard was brilliantly mapped,however seems like you overmapped this one a little. ~Uhoh.
But technically seems fine to me. ~Technically only gets you so far. I'll see what others think.

Dangaard wrote:

[Hard]
I think you should add some new combos in the kiai section and shortly after. Some combos are really stretching. ~Not sure.

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Easy:
00:30:294: (6) Maybe move this slider a little bit up? ~See below image
01:35:660: In my opinion, this spinner is useless. ~Remapped this spinner

NotShinta wrote:

Superb map. My only complaint is that the red combo colour can sometimes blend with the BG, and Insane's streaminess. But neither can really be fixed.

eveless wrote:

[Hard]
00:31:269 (8) - how about to move it on the top of the 6? ~Don't really like it
00:40:050 (4,5) -i think move them to 00:39:928 will hear better ~I don't
00:45:538 (3,4) - ^ ~^^
01:05:172 (4) - how about to move it on 01:05:294 ? ~Doesn't quite work
01:10:781 (x) - add note ~Now THAT sounds good.
01:12:733 (x) - ^ ~^^
01:15:781 (x) -add note? ~^^

[Normal]
00:58:342 (6) - spacing(nazi) ~I see no error.
01:34:684 (4) - align it to 2's end ~Not a fan of those
01:40:538 (2) - add finish in the end ~Doesn't go with music

[Easy]
00:22:977 (4) - add note ~Yes

Verdisphena wrote:

Hard :
Approach Rate +1 ~Sure.
00:21:513 (1) - New combo? ~No
00:29:318 (1) - New combo? ~There already is one
00:31:269 (12) - New combo where ~That's nice.
00:31:757 (1) - Remove new combo ~Combo goes to the beat.

Easy :
Maybe Overall Difficulty -1 ~Nah
00:54:440 (3) - Delete this note ~This makes things interesting, but I'll think about it
01:33:220 (1) - Remove new combo ~Switched around combo

Charles445 wrote:

Thanks.

Verdisphena wrote:

Hard :
Approach Rate +1 ~Sure.
00:21:513 (1) - New combo? ~No
00:29:318 (1) - New combo? ~There already is one
00:31:269 (12) - New combo where ~That's nice.
00:31:757 (1) - Remove new combo ~Combo goes to the beat.

Easy :
Maybe Overall Difficulty -1 ~Nah
00:54:440 (3) - Delete this note ~This makes things interesting, but I'll think about it
01:33:220 (1) - Remove new combo ~Switched around combo

Verdisphena wrote:

ಠ_ಠ

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) Your keyframe in SB Design are not in the ticks ~They are meant to be full scale when a beat is hit.
2) Remove black space in logo.png and bionicbackground.png. ~That hardly saves any file space.

[Normal]
00:37:123 (4) - New combo? ~Nah
00:47:855 (3) - Move 1 grid left? So the 00:46:879 (1,2,3) looks linear? ~It's pretty linear already

Disoy wrote:

[Easy]
00:54:440 (3) - remove this circle ~You're the second person to say it. Alright then.

[Normal]
00:21:513 (4) - this silder cycle frequency toomuch ~I'll think about it.
00:30:294 (6) - this silder is so hard.. this diff is a Normal ~It's really not a hard slider...

[Hard]
00:50:538 (5) - remove this circle? ~Nah

darck360 wrote:

[General]
Add more tags, for example, that musical genre. ~The musical genre gets added when the map is ranked. (I have high hopes)

[Easy]
00:45:903 : Download this circle a tick below, that is on the same line of the previous ~Modified the 2 and 3 to be correct

Fight69 wrote:

[Easy]
Everything looks cool, even if it's a bit too "square" IMO ~Perhaps. It's not horrible at least.

[Hard]
01:22:001 (X) - Add a circle here ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32721 ~Eh, I don't like how that sounds

Roddie wrote:

You forgot to add Capcom is the tags.