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Kurai

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Kurai 2010-10-05T15:54:00+00:00

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
00:41:513 (2) - Add clap

[Normal]
00:19:562 (1) - Reduce the lenght of this slider by half and add a reverse
00:22:977 (x) - Add note or add a reverse at the previous slider
00:30:294 (6) - Reduce the lenght of this slider by half and add a reverse
00:47:367 (2) - Sounds a bit off, remove it ?
00:48:830 (1,2) - Better if you do something like http://puu.sh/gfS

[Hard]
00:21:513 (6) - New combo
00:22:977 (x) - Add note
00:27:367 (5) - New combo
01:13:220 (7) - The ends sounds wrong, Extand by 1/4

[Insane]
01:34:196 (3) - Too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar

Star~

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-05T22:46:51+00:00

Nice mod!

KuraiPettan wrote:
[Easy]
00:41:513 (2) - Add clap ~It has one

[Normal]
00:19:562 (1) - Reduce the lenght of this slider by half and add a reverse ~Eh.. nah
00:30:294 (6) - Reduce the lenght of this slider by half and add a reverse ~I like these
00:47:367 (2) - Sounds a bit off, remove it ? ~Speeds things up for the next combo

[Hard]
00:22:977 (x) - Add note ~Oh fine. I don't like it but if everybody else does, it shall be done.

When I mapped this, I unfortunately kept it mostly linear.
I will go through and mix things up.
In the mean time, the only major problem is the hitsound.

EDIT: Difficulties have been mixed up (except for Insane, I like it like that)

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2010-10-06T18:01:51+00:00

General

You should add one more combo color, Not "Grey" but "Blue" or "White".
SB might be confusing for [Easy].

Easy

Maybe too boring , But perfect.

Normal

00:40:538 (2) - This slider should end here: 00:41:025 & then add a circle here: 00:41:269
00:42:489 (2) - ^
00:47:367 (2) - This note is off rythm, Delete it.
00:47:611 (X) - Add a circle here.
00:50:781 (1) - You should map this section and delete the spinner.
01:43:464 (1) - End this spinner here: 01:44:928 and then:
01:45:416 (X) - Add a spinner here and end it here: 01:46:879

Hard

01:19:562 (2) - Remove New Combo?

Insane

00:28:586 (5) - New Combo, then:
00:29:318 (1) - Remove New Combo and then:
00:29:806 (1) - Remove New Combo
Blank~
00:31:757 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:32:733 (1) - ^
00:34:196 (1) - ^
00:43:221 (1) - ^
00:45:172 (2) - ^

Nice Map, Nice SB, Star.

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-06T22:30:08+00:00

Nice mod.

Gonzvlo wrote:
General
You should add one more combo color, Not "Grey" but "Blue" or "White". ~Experimenting
SB might be confusing for [Easy]. ~Perhaps, but changing it to difficulty specific may prove frustrating. I may do it.

Easy
Maybe too boring , But perfect. ~Unfortunately-fortunately

Normal
00:40:538 (2) - This slider should end here: 00:41:025 & then add a circle here: 00:41:269 ~This part adds some complexion
00:42:489 (2) - ^ ~^
01:43:464 (1) - End this spinner here: 01:44:928 and then:
01:45:416 (X) - Add a spinner here and end it here: 01:46:879 ~Interesting. I'll try it.

Insane
00:28:586 (5) - New Combo, then:
00:29:318 (1) - Remove New Combo and then:
00:29:806 (1) - Remove New Combo ~It was like that before. I personally think 123 123 looks much better.
00:43:221 (1) - ^ ~This part is tough on HP Drain, so I made these new combos.
00:45:172 (2) - ^

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-10-07T09:15:52+00:00

The first beat I've heard was at 00:00:050,so Offset should be 50,isn't it?

[Easy]
00:32:733 (2) - I'd like you to remove this note,cause the whole pattern(with spinner) sounds better w/o it.
Claps are fine to me,I was trying to suggest to place it between 2 long white ticks,but your choice seems to fit better.

[Normal]
00:23:464 (1) - Finish.
01:18:099 (1) - ^
01:39:562 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:46:879 (1) - Finish?
00:54:684 (1) - ^
Awesome work with beats.I like how it sounds.

[Insane]
Hard was brilliantly mapped,however seems like you overmapped this one a little.
But technically seems fine to me.

Good luck to you~

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-10-07T14:15:13+00:00

[Hard]

I think you should add some new combos in the kiai section and shortly after. Some combos are really stretching.
00:54:684 (1) - I'd go with a finish on the start of this slider, too.

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-07T23:08:33+00:00

IceBeam wrote:
[Normal]
00:23:464 (1) - Finish. ~Finishes are strategically placed to emphasize a sound in the background.
01:18:099 (1) - ^ ~Like this one! Thanks for pointing it out.
01:39:562 (1) - ^ ~^-^

[Hard]
00:46:879 (1) - Finish? ~Nah
Awesome work with beats.I like how it sounds. ~Very good to hear

[Insane]
Hard was brilliantly mapped,however seems like you overmapped this one a little. ~Uhoh.
But technically seems fine to me. ~Technically only gets you so far. I'll see what others think.

Dangaard wrote:
[Hard]
I think you should add some new combos in the kiai section and shortly after. Some combos are really stretching. ~Not sure.

Nice mod IceKang

I'll give kudos to Dangaard if I follow through with the combo adding.

As for current issues:
Insane might be overmapped
Hitclap sound is hardly noticeable

Firo Prochainezo

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Firo Prochainezo 2010-10-08T23:01:31+00:00

Easy:
I don't see anything wrong with this.

Normal:
00:30:294: (6) Maybe move this slider a little bit up?
01:35:660: In my opinion, this spinner is useless.

Hard:
Brilliant.

Insane:
Brilliant.

I think this map is perfect.

Good job! You really didn't need my help here.
Star'd

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-08T23:54:11+00:00

Firo Prochainezo wrote:
Easy:
00:30:294: (6) Maybe move this slider a little bit up? ~See below image
01:35:660: In my opinion, this spinner is useless. ~Remapped this spinner

For the slider, I used grid 3 with distance snap, and no grid with distance snap to check how off it was.
Left side is 3 grid, right side is no grid.

It's technically farther than it should be, but it's an extremely insignificant difference.

Bass

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Bass 2010-10-11T00:26:17+00:00

[Insane]
00:45:172 (1) - move 1 tick right

Easy, Normal, Hard are fine

Star

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-11T00:56:58+00:00

Thanks for the helpful nazi

I spaced those out to mimic the other one (other one is 16.97, the next is now 16 instead of 4)

EDIT: I forgot to give kudosu. Here you go.

sasini

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sasini 2010-10-14T13:10:32+00:00

> < love this song very much~~

rank rank rank~~@_@

NotShinta

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NotShinta 2010-10-14T15:32:55+00:00

Superb map. My only complaint is that the red combo colour can sometimes blend with the BG, and Insane's streaminess. But neither can really be fixed.

Starred, definitely. Sorry I couldn't be more helpful.

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-14T22:53:04+00:00

NotShinta wrote:
Superb map. My only complaint is that the red combo colour can sometimes blend with the BG, and Insane's streaminess. But neither can really be fixed.

Insanes are tough because you have to please the professional crowd.
If you're a top ranker, you can't just ignore Insane.

It's very good to hear about stream dislikes, as it's not the first time it came to light as an issue. (SadBeam/IceKangaroo mentioned it)

If some super pro player comes in here and goes "fuck these streams" I'll most definitely change it.

As for the red combo color, that's the first time I heard about it as a problem. I'll think about it.

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-16T00:00:59+00:00

The more that I think about this, the more I feel that Insane is unnecessary.

Hard sounds right. It goes to the beat and plays relatively tough. It's 4.8 stars - that's not low.

Insane is messy. Almost every beat is a hit or stream, and it doesn't flow well with the song.
I'm going to remove Insane for the time being. I'll still have it backed up in case it is needed again.

eveless

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eveless 2010-10-16T02:45:44+00:00

awesome sb..

[Hard]
00:31:269 (8) - how about to move it on the top of the 6?
00:40:050 (4,5) -i think move them to 00:39:928 will hear better , and you can do a comparison with 00:42:001 (3,4,5) , just a suggestion
00:45:538 (3,4) - ^
01:05:172 (4) - how about to move it on 01:05:294 ?
01:10:781 (x) - add note
01:12:733 (x) - ^
01:15:781 (x) -add note?

yeah i like this diff

[Normal]
00:58:342 (6) - spacing(nazi)
01:34:684 (4) - align it to 2's end
01:40:538 (2) - add finish in the end

[Easy]
00:22:977 (4) - add note
nothing else

good

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-16T16:47:28+00:00

Thanks for the mod.

eveless wrote:
[Hard]
00:31:269 (8) - how about to move it on the top of the 6? ~Don't really like it
00:40:050 (4,5) -i think move them to 00:39:928 will hear better ~I don't
00:45:538 (3,4) - ^ ~^^
01:05:172 (4) - how about to move it on 01:05:294 ? ~Doesn't quite work
01:10:781 (x) - add note ~Now THAT sounds good.
01:12:733 (x) - ^ ~^^
01:15:781 (x) -add note? ~^^

[Normal]
00:58:342 (6) - spacing(nazi) ~I see no error.
01:34:684 (4) - align it to 2's end ~Not a fan of those
01:40:538 (2) - add finish in the end ~Doesn't go with music

[Easy]
00:22:977 (4) - add note ~Yes

EDIT:
Redownload if downloaded before 10/16/2010 12:21PM Central
I just changed how the sound works in the map. The custom hitsound is much more noticeable now.

Kiddo-Kun

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Kiddo-Kun 2010-10-16T18:56:43+00:00

Nothing wrong here ^_^
I just think there is no point in having a custom clap.

Star~

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-16T19:00:37+00:00

Thanks for the star.
Without the custom clap, it'd seem a bit dull, as the claps and whistles would NOT fit in this song.

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-10-16T21:33:50+00:00

Haii ~~

Hard :

Approach Rate +1

00:21:513 (1) - New combo?
00:29:318 (1) - New combo?
00:31:269 (12) - New combo where
00:31:757 (1) - Remove new combo

Normal :
Nice ~~

Easy :

Maybe Overall Difficulty -1
00:54:440 (3) - Delete this note
01:33:220 (1) - Remove new combo

Nice song and sb ~~

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-16T21:48:20+00:00

Thanks.

Verdisphena wrote:
Hard :
Approach Rate +1 ~Sure.
00:21:513 (1) - New combo? ~No
00:29:318 (1) - New combo? ~There already is one
00:31:269 (12) - New combo where ~That's nice.
00:31:757 (1) - Remove new combo ~Combo goes to the beat.

Easy :
Maybe Overall Difficulty -1 ~Nah
00:54:440 (3) - Delete this note ~This makes things interesting, but I'll think about it
01:33:220 (1) - Remove new combo ~Switched around combo

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-10-16T22:10:51+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
Thanks.
Verdisphena wrote:
Hard :
Approach Rate +1 ~Sure.
00:21:513 (1) - New combo? ~No
00:29:318 (1) - New combo? ~There already is one
00:31:269 (12) - New combo where ~That's nice.
00:31:757 (1) - Remove new combo ~Combo goes to the beat.

Easy :
Maybe Overall Difficulty -1 ~Nah
00:54:440 (3) - Delete this note ~This makes things interesting, but I'll think about it
01:33:220 (1) - Remove new combo ~Switched around combo

ಠ_ಠ

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-17T04:12:54+00:00

Verdisphena wrote:
ಠ_ಠ

<(^o^)>

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-10-21T14:07:37+00:00

Aloha!

[General]
1) Your keyframe in SB Design are not in the ticks, click Design (in top bar) -> "Move all elements in time..." -> type "50" and OK
2) Remove black space in logo.png and bionicbackground.png. If you remove them, the BG will not appear, since there is the fullback.jpg in Background

[Easy]
00:56:635 (3) - New combo?
00:57:611 (4) - Move 1 grid up?
01:14:196 (1) - Sound better if you like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31919

[Normal]
00:37:123 (4) - New combo?
00:47:855 (3) - Move 1 grid left? So the 00:46:879 (1,2,3) looks linear?

[Hard]
00:18:099 (5) - New combo? Since it's jumps?
01:06:879 (x) - I wish you add note here with clap~

GREAT SONG
STAR

Disoy

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Disoy 2010-10-21T15:55:51+00:00

[Easy]
00:54:440 (3) - remove this circle

[Normal]
00:21:513 (4) - this silder cycle frequency toomuch
you can -2 cycle
00:30:294 (6) - this silder is so hard.. this diff is a Normal

[Hard]
00:18:099 (5) - add a new combo
00:50:538 (5) - remove this circle?

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-21T23:33:01+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[General]
1) Your keyframe in SB Design are not in the ticks ~They are meant to be full scale when a beat is hit.
2) Remove black space in logo.png and bionicbackground.png. ~That hardly saves any file space.

[Normal]
00:37:123 (4) - New combo? ~Nah
00:47:855 (3) - Move 1 grid left? So the 00:46:879 (1,2,3) looks linear? ~It's pretty linear already

Great mod Leorda!

Disoy wrote:
[Easy]
00:54:440 (3) - remove this circle ~You're the second person to say it. Alright then.

[Normal]
00:21:513 (4) - this silder cycle frequency toomuch ~I'll think about it.
00:30:294 (6) - this silder is so hard.. this diff is a Normal ~It's really not a hard slider...

[Hard]
00:50:538 (5) - remove this circle? ~Nah

Thanks for the mods you two.

Guzzzzm4n

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Guzzzzm4n 2010-10-23T19:45:31+00:00

Turutururu

Hello~

[General]
Add more tags, for example, that musical genre.

[Easy]
00:45:903 : Download this circle a tick below, that is on the same line of the previous

[Normal]
Nice.

[Hard]
Nice too.

Wow, This map is very nice. I loved

Well, Star !

Good Luck

PD: Sorry if I was not much of your help with the mod, but did not find any problem in the map.

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-23T23:05:25+00:00

darck360 wrote:
[General]
Add more tags, for example, that musical genre. ~The musical genre gets added when the map is ranked. (I have high hopes)

[Easy]
00:45:903 : Download this circle a tick below, that is on the same line of the previous ~Modified the 2 and 3 to be correct

Thanks for the helpful nazi!

Fight69

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Fight69 2010-10-25T18:42:54+00:00

Hey hey, let's go !

[Easy]

Everything looks cool, even if it's a bit too "square" IMO

[Normal]

Cool

[Hard]

01:22:001 (X) - Add a circle here ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32721

Hehe, good job Charles !
You can rank this !

~Star !

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-10-25T22:18:33+00:00

Fight69 wrote:
[Easy]
Everything looks cool, even if it's a bit too "square" IMO ~Perhaps. It's not horrible at least.

[Hard]
01:22:001 (X) - Add a circle here ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32721 ~Eh, I don't like how that sounds

Thanks for the star!

James2250

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James2250 2010-11-04T04:44:41+00:00

Might be way too nazi but why not have the icon beat at 01:39:318 too? It fits the song

Will leave that up to you
Apart from that everything checks out (slightly linear) but it all works

PM me after for bubble

Charles445

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Charles445 2010-11-04T23:06:34+00:00

That should do it.

James2250

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