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Topic Starter
[Emiria]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2021年8月11日 at 20:15:15

Artist: nora2r
Title: B.B.K.K.B.K.K. (Extended Mix)
Tags: Comiket 86 C86 BOF THE BMS OF FIGHTERS 2013 SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS SDVX 3 BEMANI KONAMI maimai ORANGE CHUNITHM SEGA GROOVE COASTER 4 STARLIGHT ROAD 太鼓の達人 グリーンVer. Green Ver Version YATSUZAKI HARDCORE VOLUME 4 ヤツコアV4 UK FA Featured Artist Electronic Instrumental victorica_db BBKKBKK
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9143kb
Play Time: 05:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bass Kick - 8Key (4.71 stars, 4176 notes)
Download: nora2r - B.B.K.K.B.K.K. (Extended Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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bg edit by MeowPaz
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=49045892
B.B.K.K.B.K.K

.........................
虽然不知道发生了什么 但是我搞了个新BG。。被干掉了
NEW BG BY Murumoo
老BG https://mega.nz/file/4AhzCCJI#mgGCqO29xJmYWapq63NvcQ_zOA6VzCewdp8RfvQnKLE
Taiwan-NAK

DBDBDBDBDB
01:18:774 - ghost

01:20:980 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850698

01:31:921 (91921|2) - 右移1格
01:32:098 (92098|3) - 左移1格

01:32:451 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850681

01:34:480 (94480|6,94568|5) - Ctrl+J

01:35:451 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850670

[其實這類的音不適合階梯 打起來沒感覺 單純會順手 建議後面同音的階梯都修]

01:40:833 (100833|3) - 刪

01:41:186 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850663

02:32:098 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850759
02:37:745 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850764
這樣比較符合音樂 後面同part建議照這類型調整

03:58:568 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850783
03:59:804 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850780
這幾個和後面的part千萬不要階梯

04:11:098 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850791

04:40:039 (280039|2) - Move to 7 [ Line : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ]

論文就這麼誕生了 8-)
richardfeder
啊 我好危险
Sky_Demon
BBBBBKKKKKK
paperlens

richardfeder wrote:

啊 我好危险
D.D.B.B.D.B.B
我还是觉得offset505左右 我打小x的图就不会打不出彩300 不如回头让小学生帮你听听

00:20:274 - 或许双键

00:33:157 (33157|0) - delete或放到其他位置(?)

00:43:039 - 这里double 00:43:127 - 这里单键

01:10:921 - 漏音?

01:40:833 (100833|3) - 没音
01:41:539 (101539|6) - 没音

其实想说从01:30:862 - 到01:52:039 - 我都没太搞清楚double是在抓什么音 打起来也有点怪 你自己有准就好

中间没问题的样子

04:30:686 - 这里开始就有鼓音了 感觉是三键

05:21:245 - 双键?
水完

Dick.Dick.Bass.Bass.Dick.Bass.Bass
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Taiwan-NAK wrote:


DBDBDBDBDB
01:18:774 - ghost

01:20:980 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850698

01:31:921 (91921|2) - 右移1格
01:32:098 (92098|3) - 左移1格

01:32:451 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850681

01:34:480 (94480|6,94568|5) - Ctrl+J

01:35:451 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850670

[其實這類的音不適合階梯 打起來沒感覺 單純會順手 建議後面同音的階梯都修]

01:40:833 (100833|3) - 刪

01:41:186 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850663

02:32:098 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850759
02:37:745 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850764
這樣比較符合音樂 後面同part建議照這類型調整

03:58:568 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850783
03:59:804 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850780
這幾個和後面的part千萬不要階梯

04:11:098 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3850791

04:40:039 (280039|2) - Move to 7 [ Line : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ]

論文就這麼誕生了 8-)

你摸的时候吧特殊键放左边 不然的话谱面是错误的。。
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

paperlens wrote:

richardfeder wrote:

啊 我好危险
D.D.B.B.D.B.B
我还是觉得offset505左右 我打小x的图就不会打不出彩300 不如回头让小学生帮你听听

00:20:274 - 或许双键

00:33:157 (33157|0) - delete或放到其他位置(?)

00:43:039 - 这里double 00:43:127 - 这里单键

01:10:921 - 漏音?

01:40:833 (100833|3) - 没音
01:41:539 (101539|6) - 没音

其实想说从01:30:862 - 到01:52:039 - 我都没太搞清楚double是在抓什么音 打起来也有点怪 你自己有准就好

中间没问题的样子

04:30:686 - 这里开始就有鼓音了 感觉是三键

05:21:245 - 双键?
水完

Dick.Dick.Bass.Bass.Dick.Bass.Bass
ok 改的大部分
Taiwan-NAK
DB我的Editor 最左邊那排是盤 右邊那七列都是一般 你照著看就好
pocket-Gao
woc 这BG真的大丈夫?
so god how to mod 只能给建议和灵感 真不会摸

D.D.B.B.D.B.B.
Column: | S | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | 7 |

不知为啥 00:28:745 - 这白线要摆4个note 没有多的音呀 00:23:098- 这里也是
00:41:274 (41274|3) - 建议保持和后面的摆位一样在|2|
00:43:127 (43127|2,43127|4) - 为什么这里是两个note....
00:47:098 (47098|5,47451|1,47804|5,48157|1,48509|5) - 这一段推荐和前面一样 按音阶高低来摆
01:09:862 (69862|4,69951|5,70039|6) - 建议和前面 01:08:451 (68451|2,68539|3,68627|4) - 的摆列位置一样 毕竟洗脑(不要担心某些玩家嫌没变化
01:16:039 - 到 01:16:745 - 建议摆出对称的摆法,01:27:333 - 同
01:18:774 (78774|4) - 慢放来听可以听得出,但打的时候根本就没听不出来 不要好点

01:37:657 (97657|2) - 建议|3|
01:40:833 (100833|3) - 这里的音与后面|3|道的音明显不一样呀,改一下位置
01:41:539 (101539|6) - ^ 总感觉这两段交替很奇怪的感觉 你再听一听音?

01:53:451 - 开始 woc 盘抓Bass.Kick 简直打得爽飞 赞

01:57:862 - 这里故意1note吗... 这一段音和后面1/2是重复的 可以考虑摆位一样
03:25:039 (205039|6,205039|4,205039|2) - 为啥3note
03:26:715 (206715|3,206804|4,206892|5) - 和前面一样 没必要太多变化 弄成楼梯的话难度不一感觉更不好
先是 03:29:715 (209715|3) - 这音摆了一个note 那为何 03:31:127 (211127|3,211127|5) - 又多出一个,后面这类 03:32:539 (212539|3) - 电音(没错是叫电音吧) 都只选择摆1note 2个没
03:34:215 (214215|1,214304|3,214480|5) - 建议|4|→|2|→|3|

03:48:333 (228333|4,228333|2,228333|6) - 我还是不知道抓了哪3个音 :o vocal吗
03:55:833 - 这里故意空的吗
04:01:392 - 加1note 毕竟两种电音
04:07:745 - ^

04:02:627 (242627|2,242627|5,242715|4,242804|6,242804|2,242892|4,242980|7,242980|3,243068|5,243157|7,243157|2,243245|5) - 和前面一样,像这种摆位光看上去就爽爆了

04:05:186 (245186|6,245274|5) - 建议轨道换过来
04:18:598 (258598|4,258686|5) - 对应音, |7|→|5|→|6| 有转折的感觉
04:28:392 - 这前后可以考虑前面那样的摆法
04:47:804 (287804|7,287804|1,287804|4) - 为啥是3note 没听到多的音

漏音:
01:35:627 -
01:39:598 -
01:46:657 -
01:49:480 -
03:42:421 -
03:43:480 -

又是论文(坏笑),不过摸得爽啊 所以全程各种洗脑到吐 耳朵疼死,整个认真摸了一把

真心赞啊 good luck
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

pocket-Gao wrote:

woc 这BG真的大丈夫?
so god how to mod 只能给建议和灵感 真不会摸

D.D.B.B.D.B.B.
Column: | S | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | 7 |

不知为啥 00:28:745 - 这白线要摆4个note 没有多的音呀 00:23:098- 这里也是
00:41:274 (41274|3) - 建议保持和后面的摆位一样在|2|
00:43:127 (43127|2,43127|4) - 为什么这里是两个note....
00:47:098 (47098|5,47451|1,47804|5,48157|1,48509|5) - 这一段推荐和前面一样 按音阶高低来摆
01:09:862 (69862|4,69951|5,70039|6) - 建议和前面 01:08:451 (68451|2,68539|3,68627|4) - 的摆列位置一样 毕竟洗脑(不要担心某些玩家嫌没变化
01:16:039 - 到 01:16:745 - 建议摆出对称的摆法,01:27:333 - 同
01:18:774 (78774|4) - 慢放来听可以听得出,但打的时候根本就没听不出来 不要好点

01:37:657 (97657|2) - 建议|3|
01:40:833 (100833|3) - 这里的音与后面|3|道的音明显不一样呀,改一下位置
01:41:539 (101539|6) - ^ 总感觉这两段交替很奇怪的感觉 你再听一听音?

01:53:451 - 开始 woc 盘抓Bass.Kick 简直打得爽飞 赞

01:57:862 - 这里故意1note吗... 这一段音和后面1/2是重复的 可以考虑摆位一样
03:25:039 (205039|6,205039|4,205039|2) - 为啥3note
03:26:715 (206715|3,206804|4,206892|5) - 和前面一样 没必要太多变化 弄成楼梯的话难度不一感觉更不好
先是 03:29:715 (209715|3) - 这音摆了一个note 那为何 03:31:127 (211127|3,211127|5) - 又多出一个,后面这类 03:32:539 (212539|3) - 电音(没错是叫电音吧) 都只选择摆1note 2个没
03:34:215 (214215|1,214304|3,214480|5) - 建议|4|→|2|→|3|

03:48:333 (228333|4,228333|2,228333|6) - 我还是不知道抓了哪3个音 :o vocal吗
03:55:833 - 这里故意空的吗
04:01:392 - 加1note 毕竟两种电音
04:07:745 - ^

04:02:627 (242627|2,242627|5,242715|4,242804|6,242804|2,242892|4,242980|7,242980|3,243068|5,243157|7,243157|2,243245|5) - 和前面一样,像这种摆位光看上去就爽爆了

04:05:186 (245186|6,245274|5) - 建议轨道换过来
04:18:598 (258598|4,258686|5) - 对应音, |7|→|5|→|6| 有转折的感觉
04:28:392 - 这前后可以考虑前面那样的摆法
04:47:804 (287804|7,287804|1,287804|4) - 为啥是3note 没听到多的音

漏音:
01:35:627 -
01:39:598 -
01:46:657 -
01:49:480 -
03:42:421 -
03:43:480 -

又是论文(坏笑),不过摸得爽啊 所以全程各种洗脑到吐 耳朵疼死,整个认真摸了一把

真心赞啊 good luck
感谢摸图 莫得太认真了 我基本都做了修改
shionelove
S1234567

[the diff]
00:00:510 -
00:14:627 -
00:20:274 -
00:45:598 (45598|4) - delete
00:55:392 (55392|1) - delete
01:18:686 (78686|4,78774|4) - wrong note
01:45:509 (105509|1) - 5
02:31:568 (151568|7) - delete 3
03:09:686 -
03:22:039 (202039|3) - 1
03:52:039 (232039|6,232039|7,232039|4,232039|1) - add or move for S plz
03:56:274 -
05:17:098 (317098|0) - delete
05:28:039 (328039|5,328039|3) - delete

good luck
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

shionelove wrote:

S1234567

[the diff]
00:00:510 -
00:14:627 -
00:20:274 -
00:45:598 (45598|4) - delete
00:55:392 (55392|1) - delete
01:18:686 (78686|4,78774|4) - wrong note
01:45:509 (105509|1) - 5
02:31:568 (151568|7) - delete 3
03:09:686 -
03:22:039 (202039|3) - 1
03:52:039 (232039|6,232039|7,232039|4,232039|1) - add or move for S plzk
03:56:274 -
05:17:098 (317098|0) - delete
05:28:039 (328039|5,328039|3) - delete

good luck
thanks for mod
ZZHBOY
o.o
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |
[Bass Kick]
  1. 是不是应该设一个预览点啊?
  2. 00:17:009 (17009|1,17009|3) - 其他类似的音你都没跟 这个也去了吧
  3. 00:37:039 (37039|3,37039|6) - 这两个是不是可以删掉一个? 两个我觉得多了
  4. 00:38:098 (38098|3,38274|3) - 这两个感觉可以不用放一栏 移开?
  5. 00:40:392 - 为啥这里这些音不用4个note了?
  6. 00:44:804 (44804|0) - 01:07:392 (67392|0) - 这个我觉得也可以不放note的
  7. 01:09:157 - 和01:09:509 - 是不是应该放两个note啊 后面这个音都是两个也
  8. 01:18:686 (78686|4,78774|4) - 这啥jb 01:18:774 - 这没任何音啊 是不是overmap了
  9. 01:19:215 (79215|4,79392|4) - 放到6如何啊 我听这里三个音一样的
  10. 01:19:745 - 后面这个音都是一个 我觉得要么都两个要么都一个比较好
  11. 01:52:392 (112392|0) - 01:52:480 - 应该从这里开始吧
  12. 02:03:862 (123862|5) - 放8然后02:04:039 (124039|1) - 放4?感觉那几个音差不多
  13. 02:07:568 - 02:10:392 - 02:11:804 - 这里不再加个note?
  14. 02:19:745 (139745|0,139833|0,139921|0,140009|0,140098|0,140186|0,140274|0) - 会不会过于几把了 考虑移开?
  15. 03:10:392 - 这里不再加个note?
  16. 03:12:686 (192686|5,192686|3) - 和03:13:480 (193480|5,193480|7) - 我觉得一个note就可以了 后面类似的音都一个note 统一点比较好
  17. 03:26:715 (206715|3) - 这里放note干嘛 删了
  18. 03:29:539 (209539|3) - 03:32:362 (212362|3) - 03:33:068 (213068|2) - ^这种我听不到什么明显的音 感觉overmap不好
  19. 03:55:745 - 这里为啥空了 明明你03:55:039 - 这里有跟
几把
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

ZZHBOY wrote:

o.o
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |
[Bass Kick]
  1. 是不是应该设一个预览点啊?
  2. 00:17:009 (17009|1,17009|3) - 其他类似的音你都没跟 这个也去了吧
  3. 00:37:039 (37039|3,37039|6) - 这两个是不是可以删掉一个? 两个我觉得多了
  4. 00:38:098 (38098|3,38274|3) - 这两个感觉可以不用放一栏 移开?
  5. 00:40:392 - 为啥这里这些音不用4个note了?
  6. 00:44:804 (44804|0) - 01:07:392 (67392|0) - 这个我觉得也可以不放note的
  7. 01:09:157 - 和01:09:509 - 是不是应该放两个note啊 后面这个音都是两个也
  8. 01:18:686 (78686|4,78774|4) - 这啥jb 01:18:774 - 这没任何音啊 是不是overmap了
  9. 01:19:215 (79215|4,79392|4) - 放到6如何啊 我听这里三个音一样的
  10. 01:19:745 - 后面这个音都是一个 我觉得要么都两个要么都一个比较好
  11. 01:52:392 (112392|0) - 01:52:480 - 应该从这里开始吧
  12. 02:03:862 (123862|5) - 放8然后02:04:039 (124039|1) - 放4?感觉那几个音差不多
  13. 02:07:568 - 02:10:392 - 02:11:804 - 这里不再加个note?
  14. 02:19:745 (139745|0,139833|0,139921|0,140009|0,140098|0,140186|0,140274|0) - 会不会过于几把了 考虑移开?
  15. 03:10:392 - 这里不再加个note?
  16. 03:12:686 (192686|5,192686|3) - 和03:13:480 (193480|5,193480|7) - 我觉得一个note就可以了 后面类似的音都一个note 统一点比较好
  17. 03:26:715 (206715|3) - 这里放note干嘛 删了
  18. 03:29:539 (209539|3) - 03:32:362 (212362|3) - 03:33:068 (213068|2) - ^这种我听不到什么明显的音 感觉overmap不好
  19. 03:55:745 - 这里为啥空了 明明你03:55:039 - 这里有跟
几把
鸡巴三小 我改了3条
k1suke
打不动8k,不挑键位了,意识流摸图,反正你们都不理

[Bass Kick]
01:32:804 - 红线的音。你前面有抓,这里的别忘了。
01:41:451 - 加一个note
01:51:157 - 加一个note
02:05:098 - 这里鼓点有加重,建议考虑加一个note。
02:11:009 - 加个note,感觉更好。
02:13:921 - 这边打乱排列会舒服一点。
03:35:098 - 从这里开始好像有漏VOCAL,建议复查一下。
03:46:745 - 重鼓点,加个note。
03:58:039 - 加一个note
04:22:657 - 鼓音应该是漏了。
04:37:568 - 加一个note

Good Luck
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

k1suke wrote:

打不动8k,不挑键位了,意识流摸图,反正你们都不理

[Bass Kick]
01:32:804 - 红线的音。你前面有抓,这里的别忘了。
01:41:451 - 加一个note
01:51:157 - 加一个note
02:05:098 - 这里鼓点有加重,建议考虑加一个note。
02:11:009 - 加个note,感觉更好。
02:13:921 - 这边打乱排列会舒服一点。
03:35:098 - 从这里开始好像有漏VOCAL,建议复查一下。
03:46:745 - 重鼓点,加个note。
03:58:039 - 加一个note
04:22:657 - 鼓音应该是漏了。
04:37:568 - 加一个note

Good Luck
fix some
MeowPaz
Yahalo.victorica
Column: | S | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
Open
[Bass Kick]
00:20:627 (20627|4,21333|1) - 全部移到7
01:02:627 - 这边开始已经可以双键了
03:09:686 - http://puu.sh/n2Gtn/af35d3922d.jpg 增加难度
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.victorica
Column: | S | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
Open
[Bass Kick]
00:20:627 (20627|4,21333|1) - 全部移到7
01:02:627 - 这边开始已经可以双键了
03:09:686 - http://puu.sh/n2Gtn/af35d3922d.jpg 增加难度
ZZHBOY
#1
Sandalphon
???
MeowPaz
!!!
Akasha-
who will take #2 and qualify?
btw mark me in one slot too
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

who will take #2 and qualify?
btw mark me in one slot too
lol #2 is good
Akasha-


nora2r - B.B.K.K.B.K.K. (Extended Mix) [OsuMania Modding]

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Beatmap Nominator Modding / Iconning

Mod Requested by victorica_db


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 505 is more fit then
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Fine
- Hitsound: soft-hitwhistle.wav is delayed, here is your fixer: http://puu.sh/noty4/6564d7d1b6.wav
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

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| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[Bass Kick]

SPOILER
  • how about change name to: BASS KICK
    cap will be more fit with the title
    Hitsound is quite hard to hearing well, increase it to 50%
    00:00:862 (862|1,1568|1,2274|1,2980|1,3686|1,4392|1,5098|1,5804|1,6157|1,6862|1,7568|1,8274|1,8980|1,9686|1,10392|1,11098|1) - how about move this to 8th column, as it's only for kick sound, no other sound than this on 1/1 here, only have hihat but it's on 1/2
    01:30:421 (90421|4,90686|4) - it's higher pitch than 01:29:715 (89715|4,89980|4) - , move this to another column to make it fit with music
    02:03:686 - making this will be more fit with music: http://puu.sh/notbJ/f69ededc2a.jpg
    02:11:362 - low kick, you also mapped two kickes on here 02:11:627 - so on there add one more note
    02:14:980 - from to 02:20:274 - are unsnapped, make it blank is the best resolution then
    04:13:921 - my suggestion is http://puu.sh/noton/3ea1448706.jpg for patterns and also pitch

[Overall]

man, i love this song, also your map constructed so well, i'm very love it
call me back soon
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



nora2r - B.B.K.K.B.K.K. (Extended Mix) [OsuMania Modding]

===

Beatmap Nominator Modding / Iconning

Mod Requested by victorica_db


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 505 is more fit then
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Fine
- Hitsound: soft-hitwhistle.wav is delayed, here is your fixer: http://puu.sh/noty4/6564d7d1b6.wav
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[Bass Kick]

SPOILER
  • how about change name to: BASS KICK
    cap will be more fit with the title
    Hitsound is quite hard to hearing well, increase it to 50%
    00:00:862 (862|1,1568|1,2274|1,2980|1,3686|1,4392|1,5098|1,5804|1,6157|1,6862|1,7568|1,8274|1,8980|1,9686|1,10392|1,11098|1) - how about move this to 8th column, as it's only for kick sound, no other sound than this on 1/1 here, only have hihat but it's on 1/2
    01:30:421 (90421|4,90686|4) - it's higher pitch than 01:29:715 (89715|4,89980|4) - , move this to another column to make it fit with music i prefer now
    02:03:686 - making this will be more fit with music: http://puu.sh/notbJ/f69ededc2a.jpg
    02:11:362 - low kick, you also mapped two kickes on here 02:11:627 - so on there add one more note
    02:14:980 - from to 02:20:274 - are unsnapped, make it blank is the best resolution thenbut i dont want to blank it i i check the snap
    04:13:921 - my suggestion is http://puu.sh/noton/3ea1448706.jpg for patterns and also pitch

[Overall]

man, i love this song, also your map constructed so well, i'm very love itfix all thanks
call me back soon
Akasha-
nora2r - B.B.K.K.B.K.K. (Extended Mix)[OsuMania Modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled #2
(LET THE BASS KICK)

Congratulations! Good luck on the qualification
Feerum
Requested Check



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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello victorica_db
Check as requested

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Two hitsounds have some delay. I cut it for you. | click
Other: -

Bass Kick

00:38:093 (38093|3) - Move this to 3 to avoid here 00:38:093 (38093|3,38269|3) - a 1/2 beat Jack. You don't have any 1/2 jack in this part so.. this shouldn't be one too.
00:45:593 (45593|4) - You really want to have this note here? I mean sure there is a sound but it's really not audible on 100% playback, what is Normal while playing. Please Consider to remove it because it doesn't feel like a 1/4 note should be here.
00:55:387 (55387|1) - I highly recommend to remove this. The tripple is not a bad idea but you started it on the wrong place. This Triple here is fine 00:56:622 (56622|1,56799|3,56975|5) - since you emphasize the ending of a Part or rather a part where the music starts to get louder.
01:25:210 (85210|0) - Missing Finish Hitsound?
02:10:916 (130916|2,130916|7,131004|6,131004|4) - -> 02:12:328 (132328|7,132328|4,132416|6) - are same but you have different amount of notes. Add or Remove a note.
03:07:563 (187563|5,187563|7,187563|2) - Why here three notes? It's the only triple in this part.
03:30:857 (210857|1) - Why has this kick only single note? pretty sure it's same like 03:25:210 (205210|7,205210|1) - .
03:42:152 (222152|4,222328|4,222504|4,222681|4) - Please try to arrange here a bit the notes. This is just uagh.
03:51:328 (231328|3,231504|3,231681|3,231857|3) - Same thing here, recommend to CTRL + G these 03:51:857 (231857|3,231946|2) - .
03:53:269 (233269|3) - Move to 5, better playability.
03:54:681 (234681|3,234857|4,235034|3) - CTRL + H here.
04:12:681 - Missing note? You used always doubles on the red beats.
04:04:563 - Here too?
03:57:857 - Too?
04:03:504 - Here too?
04:07:740 - ?
04:14:093 (254093|7,254093|3) - Either you have here a Note too much or 04:14:446 - is a missing note, see 03:59:975 (239975|5,240328|5) - .
04:28:299 (268299|4) - -> 04:22:652 (262652|6,262652|4) - ?_? They are absolute same.
04:41:093 (281093|3,281181|2,281269|4,281357|3) - I'm pretty sure you should remove here the "finish" hitsound.
04:56:799 (296799|5) - move to 7 to avoid 04:56:269 (296269|5,296446|5,296622|5,296799|5) - .
05:03:857 (303857|0) - Uh for what this scratch here. Seems kinda random placed.
05:17:093 (317093|0) - Also this one, the previous one i understand because of the cymbal but for what this one?
05:17:004 (317004|4,318416|4,319828|4) - When you mapped all these only with single note you should keep consistency and remove 05:21:240 (321240|4) - ?

Ok that's all.
Maybe recheck the kiai 2-3 Times after apply my mod, it seems pretty inconsistent for me.
Call me back then
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