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Aoi Eir - IGNITE (Piano Ver.) [OsuMania]

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FelipeLink
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 29 de outubro de 2015 at 05:17:56

Artist: Aoi Eir
Title: IGNITE (Piano Ver.)
Tags: piano feels SAO sword art online 7K
BPM: 172
Filesize: 16597kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Depression - 7Key (3,97 stars, 956 notes)
  2. Feels - 7Key (1,91 stars, 375 notes)
  3. Sadness - 7Key (3,02 stars, 735 notes)
Download: Aoi Eir - IGNITE (Piano Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first 7K map
feel free to mod
!!!
100% complete
KEYSOUND!!!!!
Feels 0%
Sadness 0%
Depression 100%
Trying to Rank yay!!!
Nivrad00
Heyo link

Check the ranking criteria: "A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set." You have to use "Normal" and "Hard," or "NM" and "HD," or w/e system you prefer.

You can always do something like "Feels - Normal" and "Sadness - Hard" and "Depression - Insane"

I decided not to do a full mod, because you'll probably need more mapping experience before ranking this map. It would help if you made some 7k maps for graveyard. But anyways, here's a couple tips on Feels, so i hope that helps!
[Feels]
00:01:272 - the left hand here is empty, while the right hand is doing a rather uncomfortable pattern for this difficulty level (pressing down a LN and immediately pressing a single note without letting go of the LN). Balance between hands is pretty important in 7k. Try moving 00:01:447 (1447|4) - to the left hand.
00:02:842 - here, the right hand is empty, so the balance is pretty bad also. Try to move some notes to the right hand.
Also, in the same part, notice how there are three different layers. A bass layer, a medium layer, and the melody. for the most part you ignored the medium layer (which is fine), but at 00:04:412 (4412|2,4586|1,4761|0) - you charted it. Try to be consistent and make a specific decision about what layer you want to chart. You should either chart ALL of the middle layer, or none of it. Of course, you can change which layer you're charting when the music changes, or at the end of a section, or something. But you shouldn't switch between layers so quickly.
00:05:110 - here's another example of layer consistency. This sound is the same sound as 00:05:284 - and 00:05:458 - , but you only charted one of the three. that makes it seem kind of random, which is always bad in a map. Should probably delete this note
00:06:331 -, 00:07:028 -, 00:08:424 - this looks is a consistency problem with the LN. Since all these sounds are the same length, all the LN should be the same length too. Try making these three longer.
00:06:854 - and 00:08:947 - these are also a consistency problem, same as 00:05:110 -
00:07:028 - this sound is the same as 00:07:377 -, but the way you mapped it makes it look like they're different (cus the first has one single note, and the second has two single notes). chord density isn't consistent, basically. try adding a note here.
00:09:819 - this section sounds more intense than 00:07:028 - , but the notes are a lot easier. Try making your note density more consistent with the song
00:12:610 - here's another balance-between-hands thing
00:16:621 - here's another improvement you can make about chord density
00:18:191 - the single notes next to the LN again, and the right hand is empty.
00:23:424 - this LN looks like it shoudl be at 00:23:772 - instead, so it follows the bass notes.
00:28:569 (28569|3,28743|2) - I don't hear a sound fhere... maybe you heard an echo or something. try making 00:28:482 (28482|4,28656|6) - chords instead, since they're loud.
00:30:488 - also no sound here
00:35:284 - there IS a sound here, but it's not part of the melody. Because everything around this note is part of the melody, this note will feel out-of-place to the player. Should probably delete

please PM me again if you want a full mod, but that would be really long :?

gl mapping 7k ^^
roko100789
sup

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Will mod the "hard" one, becoz I can

Depression
• wtf is this diff name? plz, Lunk
• 00:06:331 (6331|4) - This ln could end in 00:07:028 -
• 00:07:028 (7028|5) - ^ 00:07:726 -
• 00:08:424 (8424|5) - ^ 00:09:121 -
• 00:09:121 (9121|6) - ^ 00:09:645 -
• 00:09:296 (9296|3) - u sure this note should be there?
• 00:09:470 - You can add a note in 1
• 00:09:645 - You can add a note in 3
• 00:10:168 - You can add a note in 2
• 00:10:517 (10517|1) - I'm not sure if that note should be there
• You can add notes in 2 and 4 at 00:10:865 - and 00:11:040 - tho' the last two could be ln, and they could end at 00:11:214 -
• 00:10:691 - You can add a ln in 3. If you do it, the ln should end in 00:11:040 - and you should also add a ln in 5, which should end in 00:11:389 -
Also, if you do it all, delete 00:11:040 (11040|2,11040|4) - and 00:10:865 (10865|6) -
• You can add notes in 5 and 7 at 00:11:912 - and 00:12:086 -
• 00:13:133 (13133|5) - Move to 5
• 00:13:482 (13482|6) - Move to 6
• 00:13:656 (13656|4) - Move to 7
• 00:14:179 (14179|6) - Ghost note?
• 00:14:528 (14528|6) - ^
• 00:14:877 (14877|5) - ^
• 00:15:052 (15052|6) - Move to 6
• 00:15:575 - until 00:16:272 - You could move all that jack section one "slot" to the right (you got it, please no mimimi)
• 00:16:447 (16447|4,16447|2) - Could move to 4 and 6
• 00:16:621 (16621|4) - Move to 7, 00:16:621 (16621|3) - move to 5 and 00:16:621 (16621|1) - move to 1
• 00:16:970 (16970|4,17145|4,17319|4) - Move to 6
• 00:17:493 (17493|1,17668|1) - Ghost?
• 00:17:493 (17493|6) - It could be a ln, which should end in 00:17:842 -
• 00:17:668 (17668|4) - Ghost?
• 00:17:842 (17842|6) - Move to 5
• 00:18:017 (18017|4) - Move to 4
• 00:20:458 (20458|3,20458|1) - Move to 5 and 7
• 00:24:121 (24121|4) - Delete
• 00:24:296 (24296|3) - ^
• 00:23:772 (23772|6) - Move to 6
• 00:23:947 - Add a note in 5
• 00:24:296 - Add a note in 6
• 00:23:947 - Add a note in 3
• 00:24:121 - ^ 4
• 00:24:296 - ^ 5
• If you do it all, add a note in 6 at 00:24:993 -
• 00:25:342 - Add a note in 5
• 00:25:691 - ^ 7
• 00:25:865 (25865|4) - Move to 6
• 00:26:214 (26214|5) - Move to 5
• 00:26:389 (26389|1) - Move to 1. If you do it, 00:25:168 (25168|1) - It shall end in 00:26:401 - and you shall add notes at 3 and 4 in 00:26:563 -
• 00:26:912 - Add a note in 4
• 00:27:261 (27261|3) - Move to 5
• 00:29:005 (29005|4) - Move to 6
• 00:29:179 (29179|5) - Move to 5
• You can add a note in 5 at 00:27:958 - If you do it, add notes in 4 and 6 at 00:28:133 -
• 00:30:400 (30400|5) - Move to 5
• 00:38:685 (38685|4) - Should be in 00:38:598 -
• 00:39:645 (39645|4,39645|6) - Those shouldn't be there. If you want to make double stairs, move them to anywhere else, and the stairs should start in 00:39:819 -
• You can add a note in 2 at 00:40:517 - and 00:40:691 -
• aaaaaa, it will be hard. Uhh... Try something like 7 6 5 4 5 4 5 4 3 7 6 5 4 5 6 5. This can be pretty wrong, but I don't have all that time to think about how those patterns should be, though definitely they shouldn't be like you did.
• 01:04:412 (64412|5,64761|4,65110|3) - Delete
• 01:04:238 - - aaaaaasdsasdsasdsasdsa. Try something like http://puu.sh/kO3KS/87054cb3f5.png



I would give you a full mod, but I don't have time right now. Can mod something more in game later, if you want me to.
roko100789
Oh fuq, Niv modded it before me. Rip mah kudos
Topic Starter
FelipeLink

Nivrad00 wrote:

Heyo link

Check the ranking criteria: "A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set." You have to use "Normal" and "Hard," or "NM" and "HD," or w/e system you prefer.

You can always do something like "Feels - Normal" and "Sadness - Hard" and "Depression - Insane"

I decided not to do a full mod, because you'll probably need more mapping experience before ranking this map. It would help if you made some 7k maps for graveyard. But anyways, here's a couple tips on Feels, so i hope that helps!
[Feels]
00:01:272 - the left hand here is empty, while the right hand is doing a rather uncomfortable pattern for this difficulty level (pressing down a LN and immediately pressing a single note without letting go of the LN). Balance between hands is pretty important in 7k. Try moving 00:01:447 (1447|4) - to the left hand.
00:02:842 - here, the right hand is empty, so the balance is pretty bad also. Try to move some notes to the right hand.
Also, in the same part, notice how there are three different layers. A bass layer, a medium layer, and the melody. for the most part you ignored the medium layer (which is fine), but at 00:04:412 (4412|2,4586|1,4761|0) - you charted it. Try to be consistent and make a specific decision about what layer you want to chart. You should either chart ALL of the middle layer, or none of it. Of course, you can change which layer you're charting when the music changes, or at the end of a section, or something. But you shouldn't switch between layers so quickly.
00:05:110 - here's another example of layer consistency. This sound is the same sound as 00:05:284 - and 00:05:458 - , but you only charted one of the three. that makes it seem kind of random, which is always bad in a map. Should probably delete this note
00:06:331 -, 00:07:028 -, 00:08:424 - this looks is a consistency problem with the LN. Since all these sounds are the same length, all the LN should be the same length too. Try making these three longer.
00:06:854 - and 00:08:947 - these are also a consistency problem, same as 00:05:110 -
00:07:028 - this sound is the same as 00:07:377 -, but the way you mapped it makes it look like they're different (cus the first has one single note, and the second has two single notes). chord density isn't consistent, basically. try adding a note here.
00:09:819 - this section sounds more intense than 00:07:028 - , but the notes are a lot easier. Try making your note density more consistent with the song
00:12:610 - here's another balance-between-hands thing
00:16:621 - here's another improvement you can make about chord density
00:18:191 - the single notes next to the LN again, and the right hand is empty.
00:23:424 - this LN looks like it shoudl be at 00:23:772 - instead, so it follows the bass notes.
00:28:569 (28569|3,28743|2) - I don't hear a sound fhere... maybe you heard an echo or something. try making 00:28:482 (28482|4,28656|6) - chords instead, since they're loud.
00:30:488 - also no sound here
00:35:284 - there IS a sound here, but it's not part of the melody. Because everything around this note is part of the melody, this note will feel out-of-place to the player. Should probably delete

please PM me again if you want a full mod, but that would be really long :?

gl mapping 7k ^^
Ty! buuut, i will rank this thing c: you will see! , and mod already apply! Thank you so much : D

roko100789 wrote:

sup

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Will mod the "hard" one, becoz I can

Depression
• wtf is this diff name? plz, Lunk
• 00:06:331 (6331|4) - This ln could end in 00:07:028 -
• 00:07:028 (7028|5) - ^ 00:07:726 -
• 00:08:424 (8424|5) - ^ 00:09:121 -
• 00:09:121 (9121|6) - ^ 00:09:645 -
• 00:09:296 (9296|3) - u sure this note should be there?
• 00:09:470 - You can add a note in 1
• 00:09:645 - You can add a note in 3
• 00:10:168 - You can add a note in 2
• 00:10:517 (10517|1) - I'm not sure if that note should be there
• You can add notes in 2 and 4 at 00:10:865 - and 00:11:040 - tho' the last two could be ln, and they could end at 00:11:214 -
• 00:10:691 - You can add a ln in 3. If you do it, the ln should end in 00:11:040 - and you should also add a ln in 5, which should end in 00:11:389 -
Also, if you do it all, delete 00:11:040 (11040|2,11040|4) - and 00:10:865 (10865|6) -
• You can add notes in 5 and 7 at 00:11:912 - and 00:12:086 -
• 00:13:133 (13133|5) - Move to 5
• 00:13:482 (13482|6) - Move to 6
• 00:13:656 (13656|4) - Move to 7
• 00:14:179 (14179|6) - Ghost note?
• 00:14:528 (14528|6) - ^
• 00:14:877 (14877|5) - ^
• 00:15:052 (15052|6) - Move to 6
• 00:15:575 - until 00:16:272 - You could move all that jack section one "slot" to the right (you got it, please no mimimi)
• 00:16:447 (16447|4,16447|2) - Could move to 4 and 6
• 00:16:621 (16621|4) - Move to 7, 00:16:621 (16621|3) - move to 5 and 00:16:621 (16621|1) - move to 1
• 00:16:970 (16970|4,17145|4,17319|4) - Move to 6
• 00:17:493 (17493|1,17668|1) - Ghost?
• 00:17:493 (17493|6) - It could be a ln, which should end in 00:17:842 -
• 00:17:668 (17668|4) - Ghost?
• 00:17:842 (17842|6) - Move to 5
• 00:18:017 (18017|4) - Move to 4
• 00:20:458 (20458|3,20458|1) - Move to 5 and 7
• 00:24:121 (24121|4) - Delete
• 00:24:296 (24296|3) - ^
• 00:23:772 (23772|6) - Move to 6
• 00:23:947 - Add a note in 5
• 00:24:296 - Add a note in 6
• 00:23:947 - Add a note in 3
• 00:24:121 - ^ 4
• 00:24:296 - ^ 5
• If you do it all, add a note in 6 at 00:24:993 -
• 00:25:342 - Add a note in 5
• 00:25:691 - ^ 7
• 00:25:865 (25865|4) - Move to 6
• 00:26:214 (26214|5) - Move to 5
• 00:26:389 (26389|1) - Move to 1. If you do it, 00:25:168 (25168|1) - It shall end in 00:26:401 - and you shall add notes at 3 and 4 in 00:26:563 -
• 00:26:912 - Add a note in 4
• 00:27:261 (27261|3) - Move to 5
• 00:29:005 (29005|4) - Move to 6
• 00:29:179 (29179|5) - Move to 5
• You can add a note in 5 at 00:27:958 - If you do it, add notes in 4 and 6 at 00:28:133 -
• 00:30:400 (30400|5) - Move to 5
• 00:38:685 (38685|4) - Should be in 00:38:598 -
• 00:39:645 (39645|4,39645|6) - Those shouldn't be there. If you want to make double stairs, move them to anywhere else, and the stairs should start in 00:39:819 -
• You can add a note in 2 at 00:40:517 - and 00:40:691 -
• aaaaaa, it will be hard. Uhh... Try something like 7 6 5 4 5 4 5 4 3 7 6 5 4 5 6 5. This can be pretty wrong, but I don't have all that time to think about how those patterns should be, though definitely they shouldn't be like you did.
• 01:04:412 (64412|5,64761|4,65110|3) - Delete
• 01:04:238 - - aaaaaasdsasdsasdsasdsa. Try something like http://puu.sh/kO3KS/87054cb3f5.png



I would give you a full mod, but I don't have time right now. Can mod something more in game later, if you want me to.
Are u jejjin bro?
Ty roko =p , Already apply =p
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