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Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint)

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wasin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3 กุมภาพันธ์ 2559 at 2:02:37

Artist: Taeyeon
Title: I (feat. Verbal Jint)
Tags: Sm.entertainment kpop Girls' Generation SNSD 김태연 The 1st Mini Album
BPM: 90
Filesize: 28440kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 160 notes)
  2. Hard (2.22 stars, 295 notes)
  3. Normal (1.72 stars, 247 notes)
Download: Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint)
Download: Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) (no video)
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빛을 쏟는 Sky 새로워진 Eyes 새로워진 Eyes 저멀리로 Fly Fly High Fly High 난 나만의 Beauty

This song is perfect
Video by : Norman

EASY - Done
NORMAL - Done
HARD - Done



I - English and Korean lyrics

Marianna
Title : Taeyeon (태연)
Song Title : I (feat. Verbal Jint)

:)
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WOW THAI PEOPLE ARE MADE IT THANKS GUY //ขอบคุณมากค๊าบบบ
Marianna
My live is so beauty
2015-11-19 17:10 Hoen: You have time to one IRC  Mod?
2015-11-19 17:11 wasinkingspeedq: whats IRC ?
2015-11-19 17:11 Hoen: Chat mod >w<
2015-11-19 17:13 wasinkingspeedq: ok i have =w=
2015-11-19 17:13 Hoen: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/816348 Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) [Easy]]
2015-11-19 17:13 Hoen: :3
2015-11-19 17:15 wasinkingspeedq: :D what should i do first ?
2015-11-19 17:15 Hoen: Well ... AiMod says there is a note far
2015-11-19 17:15 Hoen: 02:49:192 (2,3) -
2015-11-19 17:16 Hoen: 02:49:192 (2) - Try put this in x:160 y:48
2015-11-19 17:16 wasinkingspeedq: oh i saw it
2015-11-19 17:17 Hoen: This is unrankeable
2015-11-19 17:17 wasinkingspeedq: i will fix it all
2015-11-19 17:17 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:17 Hoen: Next
2015-11-19 17:18 Hoen: 01:03:859 (1,1) - Normal / Easy, Spins must be a white tick away another note
2015-11-19 17:18 Hoen: 01:07:192 (1,2) - I advise delete these notes
2015-11-19 17:20 wasinkingspeedq: Ok
2015-11-19 17:20 Hoen: 01:09:192 (1) - Remove NC
2015-11-19 17:20 Hoen: 01:11:859 (4,1) - Remove the NC on the (1) and put in the (4)
2015-11-19 17:21 wasinkingspeedq: q ok i made it
2015-11-19 17:22 wasinkingspeedq: fixed
2015-11-19 17:22 Hoen: 02:37:192 (1,1) - The Spin
2015-11-19 17:23 wasinkingspeedq: what happen here ?
2015-11-19 17:24 Hoen: 02:43:192 (1,2,3) - I Advise dele these notes
2015-11-19 17:24 Hoen: Fixed?
2015-11-19 17:25 wasinkingspeedq: Ok and then ?
2015-11-19 17:25 wasinkingspeedq: yes i fixed
2015-11-19 17:25 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:25 Hoen: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/817048 Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) [Normal]]
2015-11-19 17:25 wasinkingspeedq: ty for easy
2015-11-19 17:25 Hoen: ^^
2015-11-19 17:26 wasinkingspeedq: let's start :D
2015-11-19 17:26 Hoen: 00:37:192 (1,2) - Try to fix this blanket >w<
2015-11-19 17:27 wasinkingspeedq: hahah isnot balance i think so.
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: 01:01:192 (1,1) - Unrankeable
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: 01:07:192 (1,2) - Delete this
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: 01:07:859 - And put a note here
2015-11-19 17:28 wasinkingspeedq: ok why cant be the spin ?
2015-11-19 17:28 wasinkingspeedq: can i add the spin 01:03:859 - ??
2015-11-19 17:29 Hoen: Its unrankeable, beginners fail
2015-11-19 17:29 Hoen: 01:07:859 - Circle >w<
2015-11-19 17:29 wasinkingspeedq: ok
2015-11-19 17:30 Hoen: 01:18:526 (3) - Put in x:184 y:116
2015-11-19 17:30 Hoen: 01:29:192 (3) - x:412 y:212 >w<
2015-11-19 17:31 wasinkingspeedq: fixed it ^^
2015-11-19 17:33 wasinkingspeedq: i have some question at 02:15:192 - more curve ?
2015-11-19 17:34 Hoen: Yeah to fix the blanket
2015-11-19 17:34 Hoen: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/800620 Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) [Hard]]
2015-11-19 17:34 Hoen: >w<
2015-11-19 17:35 wasinkingspeedq: ty for normal diff
2015-11-19 17:35 Hoen: 00:27:859 (3,4) - This dont have rhythm >w<
2015-11-19 17:35 wasinkingspeedq: ok let's start
2015-11-19 17:36 wasinkingspeedq: ok
2015-11-19 17:36 Hoen: 00:52:359 (6) - Delete this note (Stream unnecessary)
2015-11-19 17:37 Hoen: 01:03:859 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is not allowed in hard
2015-11-19 17:37 wasinkingspeedq: fixed
2015-11-19 17:38 Hoen: 01:25:526 (5) - CTRL+G?
2015-11-19 17:38 wasinkingspeedq: oh ok i'll delete these later
2015-11-19 17:38 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:39 Hoen: 01:54:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ~
2015-11-19 17:39 wasinkingspeedq: 01:25:526 (5) - if i dont ctrl + g ? i think it better for me.
2015-11-19 17:40 wasinkingspeedq: 01:54:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - fixed
2015-11-19 17:40 Hoen: 01:25:526 (5) - CTRL + G 01:25:859 (1) - Because this note
2015-11-19 17:40 Hoen: 02:37:859 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ~
2015-11-19 17:41 wasinkingspeedq: ok :D
2015-11-19 17:41 Hoen: >w<
2015-11-19 17:41 Hoen: Is this
2015-11-19 17:41 wasinkingspeedq: the spaces can i add the same thing 02:37:192 (1) - ?
2015-11-19 17:41 Hoen: Yup
2015-11-19 17:41 wasinkingspeedq: ok ^^
2015-11-19 17:42 Hoen: :D
2015-11-19 17:42 Hoen: I'll post this ok?
Topic Starter
wasin

Hoen wrote:

My live is so beauty
2015-11-19 17:10 Hoen: You have time to one IRC  Mod?
2015-11-19 17:11 wasinkingspeedq: whats IRC ?
2015-11-19 17:11 Hoen: Chat mod >w<
2015-11-19 17:13 wasinkingspeedq: ok i have =w=
2015-11-19 17:13 Hoen: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/816348 Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) [Easy]]
2015-11-19 17:13 Hoen: :3
2015-11-19 17:15 wasinkingspeedq: :D what should i do first ?
2015-11-19 17:15 Hoen: Well ... AiMod says there is a note far
2015-11-19 17:15 Hoen: 02:49:192 (2,3) -
2015-11-19 17:16 Hoen: 02:49:192 (2) - Try put this in x:160 y:48
2015-11-19 17:16 wasinkingspeedq: oh i saw it
2015-11-19 17:17 Hoen: This is unrankeable
2015-11-19 17:17 wasinkingspeedq: i will fix it all
2015-11-19 17:17 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:17 Hoen: Next
2015-11-19 17:18 Hoen: 01:03:859 (1,1) - Normal / Easy, Spins must be a white tick away another note
2015-11-19 17:18 Hoen: 01:07:192 (1,2) - I advise delete these notes
2015-11-19 17:20 wasinkingspeedq: Ok
2015-11-19 17:20 Hoen: 01:09:192 (1) - Remove NC
2015-11-19 17:20 Hoen: 01:11:859 (4,1) - Remove the NC on the (1) and put in the (4)
2015-11-19 17:21 wasinkingspeedq: q ok i made it
2015-11-19 17:22 wasinkingspeedq: fixed
2015-11-19 17:22 Hoen: 02:37:192 (1,1) - The Spin
2015-11-19 17:23 wasinkingspeedq: what happen here ?
2015-11-19 17:24 Hoen: 02:43:192 (1,2,3) - I Advise dele these notes
2015-11-19 17:24 Hoen: Fixed?
2015-11-19 17:25 wasinkingspeedq: Ok and then ?
2015-11-19 17:25 wasinkingspeedq: yes i fixed
2015-11-19 17:25 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:25 Hoen: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/817048 Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) [Normal]]
2015-11-19 17:25 wasinkingspeedq: ty for easy
2015-11-19 17:25 Hoen: ^^
2015-11-19 17:26 wasinkingspeedq: let's start :D
2015-11-19 17:26 Hoen: 00:37:192 (1,2) - Try to fix this blanket >w<
2015-11-19 17:27 wasinkingspeedq: hahah isnot balance i think so.
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: 01:01:192 (1,1) - Unrankeable
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: 01:07:192 (1,2) - Delete this
2015-11-19 17:27 Hoen: 01:07:859 - And put a note here
2015-11-19 17:28 wasinkingspeedq: ok why cant be the spin ?
2015-11-19 17:28 wasinkingspeedq: can i add the spin 01:03:859 - ??
2015-11-19 17:29 Hoen: Its unrankeable, beginners fail
2015-11-19 17:29 Hoen: 01:07:859 - Circle >w<
2015-11-19 17:29 wasinkingspeedq: ok
2015-11-19 17:30 Hoen: 01:18:526 (3) - Put in x:184 y:116
2015-11-19 17:30 Hoen: 01:29:192 (3) - x:412 y:212 >w<
2015-11-19 17:31 wasinkingspeedq: fixed it ^^
2015-11-19 17:33 wasinkingspeedq: i have some question at 02:15:192 - more curve ?
2015-11-19 17:34 Hoen: Yeah to fix the blanket
2015-11-19 17:34 Hoen: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/800620 Taeyeon - I (feat. Verbal Jint) [Hard]]
2015-11-19 17:34 Hoen: >w<
2015-11-19 17:35 wasinkingspeedq: ty for normal diff
2015-11-19 17:35 Hoen: 00:27:859 (3,4) - This dont have rhythm >w<
2015-11-19 17:35 wasinkingspeedq: ok let's start
2015-11-19 17:36 wasinkingspeedq: ok
2015-11-19 17:36 Hoen: 00:52:359 (6) - Delete this note (Stream unnecessary)
2015-11-19 17:37 Hoen: 01:03:859 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is not allowed in hard
2015-11-19 17:37 wasinkingspeedq: fixed
2015-11-19 17:38 Hoen: 01:25:526 (5) - CTRL+G?
2015-11-19 17:38 wasinkingspeedq: oh ok i'll delete these later
2015-11-19 17:38 Hoen: Ok
2015-11-19 17:39 Hoen: 01:54:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ~
2015-11-19 17:39 wasinkingspeedq: 01:25:526 (5) - if i dont ctrl + g ? i think it better for me.
2015-11-19 17:40 wasinkingspeedq: 01:54:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - fixed
2015-11-19 17:40 Hoen: 01:25:526 (5) - CTRL + G 01:25:859 (1) - Because this note
2015-11-19 17:40 Hoen: 02:37:859 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ~
2015-11-19 17:41 wasinkingspeedq: ok :D
2015-11-19 17:41 Hoen: >w<
2015-11-19 17:41 Hoen: Is this
2015-11-19 17:41 wasinkingspeedq: the spaces can i add the same thing 02:37:192 (1) - ?
2015-11-19 17:41 Hoen: Yup
2015-11-19 17:41 wasinkingspeedq: ok ^^
2015-11-19 17:42 Hoen: :D
2015-11-19 17:42 Hoen: I'll post this ok?
updated :D
Electoz
NM reqฯ~

General
- BG ควรจะเป็น 1366*768 (ถ้าเป็นไปได้)
- ลองเปลี่ยนสี Combo ให้ต่างกันในแต่ละดิฟป่ะ? เพราะแต่ละดิฟใช้คนละ bg กัน << อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ

Easy
- AR เยอะไปป่ะ? ปกติ ไม่แทบไม่มีเลยนะ Easy AR5 << ปรับมาหน่อยก็ได้ เหลือซัก 4
01:27:192 (6,1) – diff easy ไม่ควรมี Stack แบบนี้นะ มันอ่านยาก
01:53:192 (5,1) – Blanket ไม่เป๊ะป่ะ? ไม่แน่ใจคิดไปเองรึเปล่า
02:43:859 – ตรงนี้มันว่างอยู่ อาจจะใส่ slider ได้อีกนะ
02:46:526 (2,3,1) – flow มันดูแปลกๆนะ

Normal
00:06:526 (3,4) – Blanket?
00:07:859 (1,2) - ^
01:24:526 (5,1) - ^
02:09:859 (5,1) - ^
02:12:192 (2,3) - ^
02:12:192 (2,3) – เป็นผมผมใส่ NC ตรงนี้นะ แล้วแต่ละกัน
02:51:526 (4,5,6) – ตรงนี้ลองทำอย่างนี้มะ? เพราะ 02:52:859 (6) จะได้ stack กับ 02:53:859 (2) ด้วย
02:55:192 (4,5) – Blanket
02:58:526 (1,2) – เหมือนตรงนี้ตั้งใจให้มัน overlap ป่ะ? แต่มันดูไม่สวยน่ะ

Hard
- AR เยอะไปนะ ลองปรับลงเหลือซัก 7 (คือ Hard มันก็มี AR8 แหละ แต่ส่วนใหญ่ 3*+ ทั้งนั้น)
- “Widescreen Support” ไม่ได้ติ๊กไว้
- จริงๆ ไม่ควรจะมี 1/4 stream นะ ใน Hard น่ะ แต่ BPM มันแค่ 90 ก็ ปล่อยไปก่อนละกัน (สรุปคือบอกเผื่อไว้เฉยๆ)
00:34:526 (1,2) – Blanket
01:13:859 (5) – flow ตรงนี้มันแหม่งๆป่ะ? แบบ พอหัวมันเบี้ยวไปทางขวามันก็เลยดูแหม่งๆน่ะ
01:39:526 (3,4) – Jump ห่างไปป่ะ? แล้วลองขยับ pattern ที่ jump ให้ 01:40:859 (7) มา stack กับ 01:41:859 (2) ก็ได้นะ
01:41:859 (2) – เห้ยอ่านยากมาก ตรงนี้ เชื่อว่า 90% ของมือใหม่น่าจะ miss เลย
02:33:526 (6,7,8) – น่าจะเว้น jump ให้เท่ากับตัวก่อนๆหน้านะ
02:43:192 (2) – มัน overlap กับ 02:44:026 (4) แล้วมันดูไม่สวย
02:44:026 (4) – ลอง Blanket ตรงนี้มั้ย?

หมดละมั้ง โทดทีถ้าแสปมเรื่อง Blanket เยอะไปหน่อย
เอาล่ะ mod เสร็จแล้วก็...
เผ่น~
Topic Starter
wasin

Electoz wrote:

NM reqฯ~

General
- BG ควรจะเป็น 1366*768 (ถ้าเป็นไปได้) / อันนี้ บริษัทเค้าปล่อยรูปมาแค่ 1200x800 เลยหาไม่ได้แล้ว
- ลองเปลี่ยนสี Combo ให้ต่างกันในแต่ละดิฟป่ะ? เพราะแต่ละดิฟใช้คนละ bg กัน << อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ / ขอผ่านละกัน เน้น pattern เดียวกันดีกว่า

Easy
- AR เยอะไปป่ะ? ปกติ ไม่แทบไม่มีเลยนะ Easy AR5 << ปรับมาหน่อยก็ได้ เหลือซัก 4 / fixed
01:27:192 (6,1) – diff easy ไม่ควรมี Stack แบบนี้นะ มันอ่านยาก / ฺอันนี้ น่าจะพอไหว เพลงช้า AR ช้า
01:53:192 (5,1) – Blanket ไม่เป๊ะป่ะ? ไม่แน่ใจคิดไปเองรึเปล่า / fixed
02:43:859 – ตรงนี้มันว่างอยู่ อาจจะใส่ slider ได้อีกนะ / ใส่เป็น circle 2 จุดแทนละกัน
02:46:526 (2,3,1) – flow มันดูแปลกๆนะ / fixed

Normal
00:06:526 (3,4) – Blanket? / fixed
00:07:859 (1,2) - ^ / รู้สึกว่าโอเคแล้ว
01:24:526 (5,1) - ^ / ^
02:09:859 (5,1) - ^ / ^
02:12:192 (2,3) - ^ / ^
02:12:192 (2,3) – เป็นผมผมใส่ NC ตรงนี้นะ แล้วแต่ละกัน / แลดูไม่เวิร์ค ขอผ่านละกัน
02:51:526 (4,5,6) – ตรงนี้ลองทำอย่างนี้มะ? เพราะ 02:52:859 (6) จะได้ stack กับ 02:53:859 (2) ด้วย / ดูดีเหมือนกันนะแต่ขอเน้น flow ดีกว่าดิฟนี้ไม่เน้นสวย
02:55:192 (4,5) – Blanket / เห็นด้วยอย่างยิ่ง fixed
02:58:526 (1,2) – เหมือนตรงนี้ตั้งใจให้มัน overlap ป่ะ? แต่มันดูไม่สวยน่ะ / เน้น flow

Hard
- AR เยอะไปนะ ลองปรับลงเหลือซัก 7 (คือ Hard มันก็มี AR8 แหละ แต่ส่วนใหญ่ 3*+ ทั้งนั้น) / ขอเป็น 7.5 ละกัน อยากไห้มันมีความยากอยู่เพราะเพลงก็ช้าละ
- “Widescreen Support” ไม่ได้ติ๊กไว้ / ติ๊กด้วยหรอ แมพ นี้ไม่มี SB นะ ไม่แน่ใจเหมือนกัน
- จริงๆ ไม่ควรจะมี 1/4 stream นะ ใน Hard น่ะ แต่ BPM มันแค่ 90 ก็ ปล่อยไปก่อนละกัน (สรุปคือบอกเผื่อไว้เฉยๆ) / :D
00:34:526 (1,2) – Blanket / fixed
01:13:859 (5) – flow ตรงนี้มันแหม่งๆป่ะ? แบบ พอหัวมันเบี้ยวไปทางขวามันก็เลยดูแหม่งๆน่ะ / โอเคแล้วหละ flow ด้วยจะได้ไม่ติด
01:39:526 (3,4) – Jump ห่างไปป่ะ? แล้วลองขยับ pattern ที่ jump ให้ 01:40:859 (7) มา stack กับ 01:41:859 (2) ก็ได้นะ / อันนี้ว่าจะแก้ใหม่ มันแปลกจิงๆ
01:41:859 (2) – เห้ยอ่านยากมาก ตรงนี้ เชื่อว่า 90% ของมือใหม่น่าจะ miss เลย / ^
02:33:526 (6,7,8) – น่าจะเว้น jump ให้เท่ากับตัวก่อนๆหน้านะ / ^
02:43:192 (2) – มัน overlap กับ 02:44:026 (4) แล้วมันดูไม่สวย / ตั้งใจไห้เป็นแบบนั้นอยู้แล้ว มันจะได้ไหลไปด้วยกันด้วย
02:44:026 (4) – ลอง Blanket ตรงนี้มั้ย? / ^

หมดละมั้ง โทดทีถ้าแสปมเรื่อง Blanket เยอะไปหน่อย / no problem
เอาล่ะ mod เสร็จแล้วก็...
เผ่น~
TY SO MUCH :D
Nekomata
randomly passing by

00:23:192 (5) - it will feel more natural to stack this where the circles are example

don't need kudos
good luck
Topic Starter
wasin

Nekomata wrote:

randomly passing by

00:23:192 (5) - it will feel more natural to stack this where the circles are example

don't need kudos
good luck
TY nekomata :)
Aihuro
Hey~ NM request from my queue!
Well, here goes nothing~

  1. Please enable "Widescreen Support" since you don't have a SB. Also enable "Letterbox during beaks" since it's really unnecessary.
  2. The BG sizes is incorrect and I think it's unrankable. The BG size must be 1366X768. Please fix this as soon as possible.
  3. I suggest you add a soft-sliderslide to get rid of those annoying noise, just add this file to your song folder:

    Easy:
    1. 00:58:526 (4) - You add a clap here but then you didn't add anymore. . so this feels a little bit odd. Please remove this or add more claps.
    2. 01:28:526 (2,4) - These two sliders are too close to each other, please move them away a bit please.
    3. 01:12:526 (2,3,4) - This triangle is a little bit off, move this slider: 01:14:526 (4) - a bit upwards so that it's in-line with this one: 01:12:526 (2) - . I will look much better and neater.
    4. 01:29:859 (4,6) - Instead of placing this slider: 01:31:859 (6) - on this one: 01:29:859 (4) - just move them away from each other to prevent from overlapping.
    5. Overall, pretty nice diff!


    Normal:
    1. 01:43:859 (1) - Same here, this clap feels a little bit awkward.
    2. Looks very good~!

    I didn't find anything in hard diff. This mapset looks really good!
    Good Luck with ranking :)
Topic Starter
wasin

Aihuro wrote:

Hey~ NM request from my queue!
Well, here goes nothing~

  1. Please enable "Widescreen Support" since you don't have a SB. Also enable "Letterbox during beaks" since it's really unnecessary.
  2. The BG sizes is incorrect and I think it's unrankable. The BG size must be 1366X768. Please fix this as soon as possible.
  3. I suggest you add a soft-sliderslide to get rid of those annoying noise, just add this file to your song folder:

    Easy:
    1. 00:58:526 (4) - You add a clap here but then you didn't add anymore. . so this feels a little bit odd. Please remove this or add more claps.
    2. 01:28:526 (2,4) - These two sliders are too close to each other, please move them away a bit please.
    3. 01:12:526 (2,3,4) - This triangle is a little bit off, move this slider: 01:14:526 (4) - a bit upwards so that it's in-line with this one: 01:12:526 (2) - . I will look much better and neater.
    4. 01:29:859 (4,6) - Instead of placing this slider: 01:31:859 (6) - on this one: 01:29:859 (4) - just move them away from each other to prevent from overlapping.
    5. Overall, pretty nice diff!


    Normal:
    1. 01:43:859 (1) - Same here, this clap feels a little bit awkward.
    2. Looks very good~!

    I didn't find anything in hard diff. This mapset looks really good!
    Good Luck with ranking :)
Fixed it all guy Thanks you. :D
Deppyforce
hi

from my :std modding queue:

wth is this song

คนไทยแต่ม็อดอังกิด

Easy

  1. hp4 ar4 od4 too high for easy diff fix pls
  2. 00:21:192 (3,4) - blanket
  3. 00:51:859 (2,3,4,5) - this part flows kinda weird imo maybe change pattern
  4. 01:27:192 (6,1) - i think stack like this is unrankable in easy]

Normal

  1. 00:11:526 (2,3,4) - stack like this could be hard to read for beginners maybe change pattern
  2. 00:28:526 (4) - curve this would flow better
  3. 00:33:859 (4) - ^
  4. 01:24:526 (5,1) - fix blanket
  5. 01:45:859 (4) - ctrl+h
  6. 01:47:526 (4,5,6) - 1st suggestion of this diff
  7. 02:03:526 (2,3,4) - make a triangle
  8. 02:21:192 (7) - nc
  9. 02:39:859 (1,1) - note appear too fast after spinner
  10. 02:55:192 (4,5,6) - 1st suggestion of this diff
didnt mod hard cuz lazy

thats it gl :3
Topic Starter
wasin

Deppyforce wrote:

hi

from my :std modding queue:

wth is this song

คนไทยแต่ม็อดอังกิด

Easy

  1. hp4 ar4 od4 too high for easy diff fix pls Fixed
  2. 00:21:192 (3,4) - blanket Passed
  3. 00:51:859 (2,3,4,5) - this part flows kinda weird imo maybe change pattern Fixed
  4. 01:27:192 (6,1) - i think stack like this is unrankable in easy Fixed

Normal

  1. 00:11:526 (2,3,4) - stack like this could be hard to read for beginners maybe change pattern It's ok cuz the song too slow
  2. 00:28:526 (4) - curve this would flow better Fixed
  3. 00:33:859 (4) - ^ Passed
  4. 01:24:526 (5,1) - fix blanket Fixed
  5. 01:45:859 (4) - ctrl+h Passed
  6. 01:47:526 (4,5,6) - 1st suggestion of this diff ???
  7. 02:03:526 (2,3,4) - make a triangle Cant made a triangle, but I changed The slider to be a straight.
  8. 02:21:192 (7) - nc Fixed
  9. 02:39:859 (1,1) - note appear too fast after spinner Fixed
  10. 02:55:192 (4,5,6) - 1st suggestion of this diff ???
didnt mod hard cuz lazy It's OK

thats it gl :3
Fixed some point TY for modding :D
Arf
From Pulse Modding Queue!



Hello hello! Well, it's not Japanese (pretty close though, eh) so let's have a look.

[General]

  • • I believe the first timing section sounds better at 2534 offset, could be just me though

Easy

  • • 00:25:526 (3,4) - this blanket is very slightly off as seen here.
    • 00:47:526 (3,4) - ^
    • 00:51:859 (2,3) - The triple drum noise is very strong here, so strong that this undermapping stands out hard. Since it is an Easy diff, mapping the middle drum would be too much, so consider starting the "3" slider where the "2" currently is.
    • 01:10:526 (4) - From the section that starts here to the next kiai, every single repeat slider is straight. This isn't a bad thing, but why not curve some of them? It looks nicer in some of the areas
Normal

  • • 00:07:859 (1,2) - Blanket - right side is slightly more overlapped than the left
    • 00:49:859 (4,1) - This blanket is also a bit off on the left
    • 00:52:526 (4,1) - As seen here, this blanket is slightly off
    • 01:56:192 (4) - Sliders which start on a less strong beat and end on a strong beat (red tick to white tick for example) are highly discouraged. I would suggest changing this to 2 circles.
    • 02:43:192 (1) - In Easy, not having a note here for spinner recovery is ok I guess (still don't like the gap tbh) but in Normal having this unmapped feels very strange.
    • 02:53:192 (1,2) - This blanket is off, left side is farther away than right
    • 02:55:192 (4,5) - As seen here, this blanket needs an adjustment
    • 02:58:526 (1,2) - This isn't really blanketed on the left side, if you Ctrl-G the "1" to check the blanket you will see
Hard

  • • 00:10:526 (1,2) - Changing these two into a single repeat slider allows for more emphasis on the three notes after it since there is no vocal on the current "2"
    • 00:39:859 (1) - I'm not the biggest fan of sliders which curve this hard, I would suggest lightening up more, like 00:40:859 (2) - for example. You've got a few of these scattered throughout the map so I assume you like them, but hmm.
    • 00:47:026 (4) - Ending a slider on a white tick when it starts on a blue is undesirable and sounds strange. I would suggest either change this to two circles (not recommended), or do something like have two 1/4 sliders here, one that starts at 00:46:526 (3) - and ends at 00:46:692 (3) - , and a second one that starts at 00:46:859 (4) - and ends at 00:47:026 (4) - . Then you can have the single note at 00:47:192 (4) - with a clap.
    • 01:28:859 (2,3) - The red to white tick slider sounds a bit odd to me, I would suggest a circle at 01:28:859 (2) - and a quick repeat slider starting at 01:29:192 (3) - and ending where the current "3" slider ends.
    • 01:31:692 (3) - Consider placing a note here
    • 01:34:359 (3) - ^
    • 01:41:192 (1,2) - This blanket is a bit off, more overlapped on the bottom than the top
    • 01:49:526 (2,3) - I don't know if this was meant to be a blanket or not, but might as well make it one
    • 01:51:192 (5,1) - ^
    •02:54:692 (4) - This feels too close to the previous note spacing-wise, since it is as close to "3" as "2" is, but is on a different rhythm. See how 02:55:526 (6,1) - has the same spacing just a few notes later but is closer rhythm-wise?
    • 03:01:526 (2) - this feels...sudden. I'm unsure about the mix of repeat sliders and "streams" you have employed so far in the map, as it feels kind of random as to whether you use a repeat slider or a stream, but this repeat slider feels very sudden at least.

Overall a very well-made mapset, almost nothing to point out in Easy/Normal, there were some questionable flow choices but I saw the geometry you were trying to make with notes and sliderheads so hmm. Having a straight repeat slider is fine, but having it completely vertical/horizontal instead of slightly tilted at an angle makes the map feel rigid. If anything I would suggest a bit more variation in the slider shapes for the first two diffs, the same curve slider and double pointed zigzag slider can get a bit tedious. Some more waves would be nice, or a single-red-pointed slider for example.

In Hard, the only thing that seemed questionable to me was the repeat slider vs. stream dilemma you had going on, I wasn't sure which one to expect at any given drumroll and it felt random. Even though it is a very slow song, something to think about.

Not a bad mapset! Good Luck!
Topic Starter
wasin

Arf wrote:

From Pulse Modding Queue!



Hello hello! Well, it's not Japanese (pretty close though, eh) so let's have a look.

[General]

  • • I believe the first timing section sounds better at 2534 offset, could be just me though

Easy

  • • 00:25:526 (3,4) - this blanket is very slightly off as seen here.
    • 00:47:526 (3,4) - ^
    • 00:51:859 (2,3) - The triple drum noise is very strong here, so strong that this undermapping stands out hard. Since it is an Easy diff, mapping the middle drum would be too much, so consider starting the "3" slider where the "2" currently is.
    • 01:10:526 (4) - From the section that starts here to the next kiai, every single repeat slider is straight. This isn't a bad thing, but why not curve some of them? It looks nicer in some of the areas
Normal

  • • 00:07:859 (1,2) - Blanket - right side is slightly more overlapped than the left
    • 00:49:859 (4,1) - This blanket is also a bit off on the left
    • 00:52:526 (4,1) - As seen here, this blanket is slightly off
    • 01:56:192 (4) - Sliders which start on a less strong beat and end on a strong beat (red tick to white tick for example) are highly discouraged. I would suggest changing this to 2 circles.
    • 02:43:192 (1) - In Easy, not having a note here for spinner recovery is ok I guess (still don't like the gap tbh) but in Normal having this unmapped feels very strange.
    • 02:53:192 (1,2) - This blanket is off, left side is farther away than right
    • 02:55:192 (4,5) - As seen here, this blanket needs an adjustment
    • 02:58:526 (1,2) - This isn't really blanketed on the left side, if you Ctrl-G the "1" to check the blanket you will see
Hard

  • • 00:10:526 (1,2) - Changing these two into a single repeat slider allows for more emphasis on the three notes after it since there is no vocal on the current "2"
    • 00:39:859 (1) - I'm not the biggest fan of sliders which curve this hard, I would suggest lightening up more, like 00:40:859 (2) - for example. You've got a few of these scattered throughout the map so I assume you like them, but hmm.
    • 00:47:026 (4) - Ending a slider on a white tick when it starts on a blue is undesirable and sounds strange. I would suggest either change this to two circles (not recommended), or do something like have two 1/4 sliders here, one that starts at 00:46:526 (3) - and ends at 00:46:692 (3) - , and a second one that starts at 00:46:859 (4) - and ends at 00:47:026 (4) - . Then you can have the single note at 00:47:192 (4) - with a clap.
    • 01:28:859 (2,3) - The red to white tick slider sounds a bit odd to me, I would suggest a circle at 01:28:859 (2) - and a quick repeat slider starting at 01:29:192 (3) - and ending where the current "3" slider ends.
    • 01:31:692 (3) - Consider placing a note here
    • 01:34:359 (3) - ^
    • 01:41:192 (1,2) - This blanket is a bit off, more overlapped on the bottom than the top
    • 01:49:526 (2,3) - I don't know if this was meant to be a blanket or not, but might as well make it one
    • 01:51:192 (5,1) - ^
    •02:54:692 (4) - This feels too close to the previous note spacing-wise, since it is as close to "3" as "2" is, but is on a different rhythm. See how 02:55:526 (6,1) - has the same spacing just a few notes later but is closer rhythm-wise?
    • 03:01:526 (2) - this feels...sudden. I'm unsure about the mix of repeat sliders and "streams" you have employed so far in the map, as it feels kind of random as to whether you use a repeat slider or a stream, but this repeat slider feels very sudden at least.

Overall a very well-made mapset, almost nothing to point out in Easy/Normal, there were some questionable flow choices but I saw the geometry you were trying to make with notes and sliderheads so hmm. Having a straight repeat slider is fine, but having it completely vertical/horizontal instead of slightly tilted at an angle makes the map feel rigid. If anything I would suggest a bit more variation in the slider shapes for the first two diffs, the same curve slider and double pointed zigzag slider can get a bit tedious. Some more waves would be nice, or a single-red-pointed slider for example.

In Hard, the only thing that seemed questionable to me was the repeat slider vs. stream dilemma you had going on, I wasn't sure which one to expect at any given drumroll and it felt random. Even though it is a very slow song, something to think about.

Not a bad mapset! Good Luck!
Thanks a lot, I fixed some point, but I didn't understand some consider that you told me why it can not be that. I now looking for next modder and I'll be back to look the mistakes from you suggestion again when the next modder modding the map. :D
BoatKrab
MOD MOD MODDDDDD

[Genaral]
  1. ปิด WideScreen Support ซะเพราะแมพนี้ไม่มี Storyboard เพราะงั้นก็ปิดไป

    [Easy]

    Song Setup - Difficulty
    HP - 2
    CS - 3
    AR - 2
    OD - 1
    น่าจะโอกว่านะ
  2. เอาจริงๆ มีความคิดว่าดิฟนี้ Gap ห่างแปลกๆ
  3. 00:02:526 - 00:23:859 - ใส่ Whistle เยอะๆหน่อยก็ดีนะ มันเหมือนขาดหายไป ;w;
  4. 00:11:192 (1) - NC ตรงนี้แทน 00:09:859 (4) - น่าจะดีกว่านะ
  5. 00:25:859 (4) - - ย้าย End Point มาที่ x:88 y:156 ดีกว่านะ จะได้ Blanket กับ 00:25:526 (3) - (แต่เอาจริงๆ ไม่ควร Blanket มากกว่ามันชิดกันเกินไป)
  6. 01:15:859 (5) - ย้ายมาที่ x:312 y:48 ดีกว่าไหม เพราะจะได้ให้ 01:17:192 (1) - อยู่กลางพอดี
  7. 01:19:859 (4) - NC?
  8. 01:38:526 - 01:59:859 - เรามีความคิดว่าท่อนนี้ใส่ Clap แล้วแมพดูห่วยเลย ใส่แต่ Whistle อ่ะ Ok แล้ว
  9. 02:12:526 (3,5) - ไม่แน่ใจม่า 2 ตัวนี้ Blanket กันหรือเปล่าลองเช็คนะ
  10. 02:17:192 (2,3) - ยากไปไหม เกรงว่ามือใหม่จะเล่นไม่ได้
  11. 00:48:859 (2) - ย้ายมาไว้ที่ x:104 y:152 จะดีกว่า จะได้เป็นสามเหลี่ยมกับ 00:47:026 (4,1,2) -

    [Normal]
  12. 00:02:526 - 00:23:859 - เหมือน Easy เลย
  13. 00:02:526 (1,2) - Blanket ดีกว่านะ .-.
  14. 00:07:859 (1,2) - ^
  15. 00:30:526 (3) - ทำไมไม่เอาตัวนี้ทับกับ 00:29:192 (1) - หัวตัวนี้ล่ะ
  16. 01:07:859 (3,5) - Blanket จ้า
  17. 01:11:859 (1) - ให้มันทับกับ 01:09:859 (2) - ดีกว่านะ
  18. 02:20:192 (4,5,6) - ทำ 3 ตัวนี้ให้มันเป็นสามเหลี่ยมแบบเป๊ะๆนะ มันเบี๊ยว
  19. 02:44:192 (2) - น่าจะย้ายมาที่ 02:43:859 - มากกว่านะคับ 02:43:192 (1) - แล้วก็ลองลบตัวนี้ดู น่าจะโอกว่า

    [Hard]
  20. 00:02:526 (1) - 00:04:526 (4) - ตรงนี้เป็นโน๊ตตามเสียงร้องถูกไหม แล้ว 00:04:526 (4) - ทำไมไม่ตามล่ะ มีอีกเยอะเลย ไล่แก้ด้วย .-.
  21. 00:20:526 (8,2,4) - ?
  22. 00:34:192 (5) - ใส่ drum-clap ไปทั้งหัว-ท้ายเลย
  23. 01:16:859 (5) - ^
  24. 00:39:859 (1) - โค้งเกินไปมั้ง
  25. 00:47:526 (5,1) - Blanket
  26. 01:19:859 (1) - NC ตัวนี้แล้วเอา NC 01:20:526 (1) - ตัวนี้ออก
  27. 01:25:192 (1) - NC ตัวนี้แล้วเอา NC 01:25:859 (1) - ตัวนี้ออก
  28. 01:27:859 - 01:38:526 - Clap เยอะเกินไป ฟังแล้วปวดหู ลดหน่อยนะ
  29. 01:49:192 - เพิ่ม Timing Section แล้วเปลี่ยนเป็น Drum ดีกว่าไหม มันเข้ากว่าน่ะ
  30. 02:44:526 (1,2,3,4) - ลองเรียงดีๆใหม่ดีกว่า เบี๊ยวมาก
  31. 02:55:526 (6,1) - จากตรงนี้แล้ว ควรทำให้ชิดกันกว่านี้เพราะว่า 02:54:192 (3,4) - มี DS เท่ากับ 02:55:526 (6,1) เลย ใส่ Mod HD คง Miss ไปแล้ว
หมดแล้ว หวังว่าแมพนี้จะแรงค์ในเร็ววันนะ :D
Good Luck 8-)
ถือว่าเป็น M4M จากแมพเราละกันนะ อิอิ
Topic Starter
wasin

BoatKrab wrote:

MOD MOD MODDDDDD

[Genaral]
  1. ปิด WideScreen Support ซะเพราะแมพนี้ไม่มี Storyboard เพราะงั้นก็ปิดไป fixed ตอนแรกก็ปิดแล้วหละ mod ก่อนหน้าเขาบอกไห้เปิด =w=

    [Easy]

    Song Setup - Difficulty
    HP - 2 OK
    CS - 3 OK
    AR - 2 ขอ3เหมือนเดิม
    OD - 1 อันนี้ก็2แทนละกัน

    น่าจะโอกว่านะ
  2. เอาจริงๆ มีความคิดว่าดิฟนี้ Gap ห่างแปลกๆ กรรม
  3. 00:02:526 - 00:23:859 - ใส่ Whistle เยอะๆหน่อยก็ดีนะ มันเหมือนขาดหายไป ;w; fixed พยายามเพิ่มเข้ามาแล้ว
  4. 00:11:192 (1) - NC ตรงนี้แทน 00:09:859 (4) - น่าจะดีกว่านะ fixed
  5. 00:25:859 (4) - - ย้าย End Point มาที่ x:88 y:156 ดีกว่านะ จะได้ Blanket กับ 00:25:526 (3) - (แต่เอาจริงๆ ไม่ควร Blanket มากกว่ามันชิดกันเกินไป) fixed
  6. 01:15:859 (5) - ย้ายมาที่ x:312 y:48 ดีกว่าไหม เพราะจะได้ให้ 01:17:192 (1) - อยู่กลางพอดี fixed
  7. 01:19:859 (4) - NC? fixed
  8. 01:38:526 - 01:59:859 - เรามีความคิดว่าท่อนนี้ใส่ Clap แล้วแมพดูห่วยเลย ใส่แต่ Whistle อ่ะ Ok แล้ว เพิ่ม clap มาบางที่เพราะ whistle มันก็เงียบไปบางที
  9. 02:12:526 (3,5) - ไม่แน่ใจม่า 2 ตัวนี้ Blanket กันหรือเปล่าลองเช็คนะ อันนี้ไม่ได้ตั้งใจไห้ blanket
  10. 02:17:192 (2,3) - ยากไปไหม เกรงว่ามือใหม่จะเล่นไม่ได้ โอเคแล้วหละ รอดู ม็อดคนต่อไปก่อนละกัน ตรงนี้ยังไม่เคยมีปัญหา
  11. 00:48:859 (2) - ย้ายมาไว้ที่ x:104 y:152 จะดีกว่า จะได้เป็นสามเหลี่ยมกับ 00:47:026 (4,1,2) - passed รู้สึกโอเคแล้วอ่ะ

    [Normal]
  12. 00:02:526 - 00:23:859 - เหมือน Easy เลย fixed
  13. 00:02:526 (1,2) - Blanket ดีกว่านะ .-. passed ตอนแรกก็ว่าจะ ทำละ แต่ diff นี้ไม่เน้นสวยอ่ะ
  14. 00:07:859 (1,2) - ^ ^
  15. 00:30:526 (3) - ทำไมไม่เอาตัวนี้ทับกับ 00:29:192 (1) - หัวตัวนี้ล่ะ ตรงนี้ทับไม่ได้ เคยลองแก้แล้ว note ก่อนหน้ามันเลื่อน
  16. 01:07:859 (3,5) - Blanket จ้า มันโอเคอยู่แล้วหละ
  17. 01:11:859 (1) - ให้มันทับกับ 01:09:859 (2) - ดีกว่านะ fixed
  18. 02:20:192 (4,5,6) - ทำ 3 ตัวนี้ให้มันเป็นสามเหลี่ยมแบบเป๊ะๆนะ มันเบี๊ยว fixed
  19. 02:44:192 (2) - น่าจะย้ายมาที่ 02:43:859 - มากกว่านะคับ 02:43:192 (1) - แล้วก็ลองลบตัวนี้ดู น่าจะโอกว่า fixedแต่เพิ่ม circle มาตัวหนึ่ง

    [Hard]
  20. 00:02:526 (1) - 00:04:526 (4) - ตรงนี้เป็นโน๊ตตามเสียงร้องถูกไหม แล้ว 00:04:526 (4) - ทำไมไม่ตามล่ะ มีอีกเยอะเลย ไล่แก้ด้วย .-. มันตามจังหวะแล้วอ่ะเราว่า แก้ยาว ด้วย =w=
  21. 00:20:526 (8,2,4) - ? ทำแบบนี้ไม่ได้หรอ ? รอดู mod คนต่อไปละกัน
  22. 00:34:192 (5) - ใส่ drum-clap ไปทั้งหัว-ท้ายเลย อันนี้ถ้าเปลี่ยน เป็น drum ตอนไปเล่นโหมด taiko สงสารคนเล่น เสียง จะหายกดยากมาก ถึงกับ miss เลย เอาแบบเดิมดีกว่า
  23. 01:16:859 (5) - ^ ^
  24. 00:39:859 (1) - โค้งเกินไปมั้ง ว่าจะแก้เหมือนกันนะ แต่รู้สึกมันโอเคอ่ะ เด๋วรอดูคนต่อไปละกัน
  25. 00:47:526 (5,1) - Blanket ขอผ่านเนอะ เด๋ว จัด DS ยาก
  26. 01:19:859 (1) - NC ตัวนี้แล้วเอา NC 01:20:526 (1) - ตัวนี้ออก fixed
  27. 01:25:192 (1) - NC ตัวนี้แล้วเอา NC 01:25:859 (1) - ตัวนี้ออก fixed
  28. 01:27:859 - 01:38:526 - Clap เยอะเกินไป ฟังแล้วปวดหู ลดหน่อยนะ fixed ลดไปบางส่วนละ
  29. 01:49:192 - เพิ่ม Timing Section แล้วเปลี่ยนเป็น Drum ดีกว่าไหม มันเข้ากว่าน่ะ เหมือนด้านบน มันยากสำหรับ taiko player
  30. 02:44:526 (1,2,3,4) - ลองเรียงดีๆใหม่ดีกว่า เบี๊ยวมาก fixed
  31. 02:55:526 (6,1) - จากตรงนี้แล้ว ควรทำให้ชิดกันกว่านี้เพราะว่า 02:54:192 (3,4) - มี DS เท่ากับ 02:55:526 (6,1) เลย ใส่ Mod HD คง Miss ไปแล้ว fixed
หมดแล้ว หวังว่าแมพนี้จะแรงค์ในเร็ววันนะ :D คุณคร๊าบบบบบบ
Good Luck 8-)
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Sarawatlism
เจิมแมพใหม่ๆ :)
Topic Starter
wasin

[ Lost ] wrote:

เจิมแมพใหม่ๆ :)
อิอิ_อิอิ
Zarthbenn
Hello! From queue~

[Easy]
00:34:526 (1,2) - This could probably be blanketed
01:19:859 (1,2) - The middle of the slider isnt directly under the circle(if that was intended)
01:31:192 (5) - I suggest having this circle be directly over end of 4 and beginning of 6 01:29:859 (4,6) - , currently looks kinda weird
01:43:859 (1,2) - You can move slider 2 a little higher so its inline of slider 1 middle (y 136), should look better

[Normal]
00:02:526 (1,2) - 2 should be a little more to the right to be under middle of slider 1 00:05:192 (1) - should be a bit higher to blanket slider 2 nicer. If you do this it will look much better imo
00:29:192 (1,3) - You should change your stack leniency down more to have the beginning of 1 and 3 stack
01:26:526 (3,4) - Fix blanket
01:40:526 (4,2) - I think you should move the end of 4 down a bit so it does not awkwardly touch 2

Hard looks good, nothing really stood out to me.

Nice set, GL on rank~!
Topic Starter
wasin

Zarthbenn wrote:

Hello! From queue~

[Easy]
00:34:526 (1,2) - This could probably be blanketed / passed if I changed this I would have a new problem with DS between 00:35:859 (2,3) - , so I wasn't changed it.
01:19:859 (1,2) - The middle of the slider isnt directly under the circle(if that was intended) / passed
01:31:192 (5) - I suggest having this circle be directly over end of 4 and beginning of 6 01:29:859 (4,6) - , currently looks kinda weird / it's ok
01:43:859 (1,2) - You can move slider 2 a little higher so its inline of slider 1 middle (y 136), should look better / I moved Y : to 140 and I moved the end of this 01:43:859 (1) - a bit higher. So look nice and match together.

[Normal]
00:02:526 (1,2) - 2 should be a little more to the right to be under middle of slider 1 00:05:192 (1) - should be a bit higher to blanket slider 2 nicer. If you do this it will look much better imo / fixed it all
00:29:192 (1,3) - You should change your stack leniency down more to have the beginning of 1 and 3 stack / many modder told it, so I changed to a new pattern because when I moved it a note before will escape I don't know why ?
01:26:526 (3,4) - Fix blanket / fixed
01:40:526 (4,2) - I think you should move the end of 4 down a bit so it does not awkwardly touch 2 / fixed

Hard looks good, nothing really stood out to me. / Thanks very much guy :D

Nice set, GL on rank~!
BoatKrab
Re-Mod
อีกรอบ อิอิอิอิอิ

[Normal]
01:08:526 (5) - เอา End Point ย้ายไปที่ x:176 y:48 นะ มันไม่ Blanket กันจริงๆตอนแรกอ่ะ O.O

No kds ~
Topic Starter
wasin

BoatKrab wrote:

Re-Mod
อีกรอบ อิอิอิอิอิ

[Normal]
01:08:526 (5) - เอา End Point ย้ายไปที่ x:176 y:48 นะ มันไม่ Blanket กันจริงๆตอนแรกอ่ะ O.O / fixed แจ้ เหมือนมันจะ ตรงๆยังไงไม่รู้ weww

No kds ~ TY again
-[Seon]-
Hello, from m4m
do reply to the mod as I'm trying to learn

mod
Easy
00:11:859 (3,2) - the sliders are slightly different, ctrl+h

Normal
00:17:859 (7,1) - blanket
00:27:859 (3,4) - ^
00:45:192 (1) - remove NC and put NC at 00:44:859 (4)
02:52:859 (6,2) - I don't think overlapping is a good idea

Hard
00:24:859 (2,3) - I don't think changing the DS here is a good idea
00:47:526 (5,1) - blanket
01:08:859 (5) - put this slider at x=208,y=160
01:26:192 (3) - put this slider at x=248,y=248
01:49:526 (2,3) - blanket

this is a good map overall, good luck for rank :)
Topic Starter
wasin

XxSeonxX wrote:

Hello, from m4m
do reply to the mod as I'm trying to learn

mod
Easy
00:11:859 (3,2) - the sliders are slightly different, ctrl+h / Fixed

Normal
00:17:859 (7,1) - blanket / Fixed
00:27:859 (3,4) - ^ / Fixed
00:45:192 (1) - remove NC and put NC at 00:44:859 (4) / No I think it's fine
02:52:859 (6,2) - I don't think overlapping is a good idea / I didn't do the point for overlap

Hard
00:24:859 (2,3) - I don't think changing the DS here is a good idea / Passed
00:47:526 (5,1) - blanket / The blanket at the point I don't care
01:08:859 (5) - put this slider at x=208,y=160 / Passed
01:26:192 (3) - put this slider at x=248,y=248 / Passed
01:49:526 (2,3) - blanket / Fixed

this is a good map overall, good luck for rank :)

Thank you
:D
- Frontier -
빛을 쏟는 Sky ~ 그 아래 선 아이 ~ 꿈꾸듯이 Fly ~ My Life is a Beauty ~~
From My Queue

ไทยคำสลับคำ

[General]
  1. Put "김태연" (Kim Tae-yeon) On tags
  2. 03:03:859 - 03:25:192 - ความจริงพี่ทำต่อได้นะ
  3. Add soft-hitclap ด้วยนะ
  4. Add soft-hitwhistle ด้วยนะ
[Easy]
  1. 02:21:192 (1) - Move to x 444 y 68
  2. 02:42:526 - Spinner should ห่างออกจาก note 4 ช่องนะจา
  3. 02:49:192 (2) - ความจริง 1/2 slider is UNRANKABLE นะ
  4. 02:50:859 - 02:52:859 - โน๊ตเส้นแดงก็ไม่ควรจะมีนะ
โพสแค่ EZ ก่อยเดี๋ยวมาต่อ //เล่นเทลแปป

M4M ได้มั้ยอ่ะ
Topic Starter
wasin

- Frontier - wrote:

빛을 쏟는 Sky ~ 그 아래 선 아이 ~ 꿈꾸듯이 Fly ~ My Life is a Beauty ~~
From My Queue

ไทยคำสลับคำ

[General]
  1. Put "김태연" (Kim Tae-yeon) On tags
  2. 03:03:859 - 03:25:192 - ความจริงพี่ทำต่อได้นะ
  3. Add soft-hitclap ด้วยนะ
  4. Add soft-hitwhistle ด้วยนะ
[Easy]
  1. 02:21:192 (1) - Move to x 444 y 68
  2. 02:42:526 - Spinner should ห่างออกจาก note 4 ช่องนะจา
  3. 02:49:192 (2) - ความจริง 1/2 slider is UNRANKABLE นะ
  4. 02:50:859 - 02:52:859 - โน๊ตเส้นแดงก็ไม่ควรจะมีนะ
โพสแค่ EZ ก่อยเดี๋ยวมาต่อ //เล่นเทลแปป

M4M ได้มั้ยอ่ะ
Waiting for all diffs / รอม็อดเสร็จก่อนเดี่ยวมาแจก KDS :D

M4M ได้ๆวางเพลงเอาไว้เลย I'll mod you first.
Gamu
Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

  1. Artist: 태연
  2. Romanised Artist: TaeYeon
  3. Title: I (feat. 버벌진트)
  4. Romanised Title: I (feat. Verbal Jint)
  5. Tags: Remove "taeyeon" because it is used in Artist field. Also "버벌진트" should be added to Title.
<Reference>
  1. http://puu.sh/lSCdR/9364f7d381.png
  2. http://puu.sh/lSCet/982cb4321d.png
  3. https://www.facebook.com/Taengoogirlsgeneration
  4. http://taeyeon.smtown.com/

I cannot read Korean but I think this is correct metadata.

Good luck~ :3
Topic Starter
wasin

Gamu wrote:

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

  1. Artist: 태연
  2. Romanised Artist: TaeYeon
  3. Title: I (feat. 버벌진트)
  4. Romanised Title: I (feat. Verbal Jint)
  5. Tags: Remove "taeyeon" because it is used in Artist field. Also "버벌진트" should be added to Title.
I think "taeyeon" still should be add in tags because I always see the mappers who makes K-POP songs add the artists in tags.
<Reference>
  1. http://puu.sh/lSCdR/9364f7d381.png
  2. http://puu.sh/lSCet/982cb4321d.png
  3. https://www.facebook.com/Taengoogirlsgeneration
  4. http://taeyeon.smtown.com/

I cannot read Korean but I think this is correct metadata.

Good luck~ :3
THANKS YOU FOR SOME SUGGESTION :D
Qiyana
Hi! From my queue!
As I said earlier, NM's only get 1 mod diff. I chose hard now here we go.
Hard
00:15:859 (1) - This sliders curve doesn't match the regular sliders patterns.
00:19:526 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't overlay like that 3 times.
01:26:192 (3) - Remove the clap.
01:43:859 (5) - NC here.
01:54:526 (1,2,3,4) - Don't use these, stay with the regular pattern.
02:20:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack them like that.
02:37:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't use these, stay with the regular pattern.
That is all! Just add more hitsounds.
Topic Starter
wasin

dylanla12 wrote:

Hi! From my queue!
As I said earlier, NM's only get 1 mod diff. I chose hard now here we go.
Hard
00:15:859 (1) - This sliders curve doesn't match the regular sliders patterns. I think It's fine.
00:19:526 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't overlay like that 3 times. Ok. modders who modding the map always focus The point, so fixed it.
01:26:192 (3) - Remove the clap. Fixed
01:43:859 (5) - NC here. Fixed
01:54:526 (1,2,3,4) - Don't use these, stay with the regular pattern. Passed
02:20:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack them like that. Passed
02:37:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't use these, stay with the regular pattern. Passed
That is all! Just add more hitsounds.
Thanks you so much :D
ColdTooth
Hey there! From my queue, sorry for the wait.

[Easy]

00:52:192 (3) - Last sliderpoint at x332 y252 for better flow

01:51:192 (3) - curved slider looks better~


[Normal]

00:03:859 (2,3,1) - Spacing issue

00:07:859 (1,2) - Blanket isn't perfect

00:41:192 (3,4,1) - Looks unorganized. How about curving 3 and 4 and make them all look like a circle?

02:08:192 (2) - x196 y324 for better flow


[Hard]

00:15:859 (1) - Eh, not a fan of curved sliders, but this one feels out of place of the song

02:15:192 (5) - Remove the red dot, would flow better


Not bad, maybe a few more mods and this might be ready~
Topic Starter
wasin

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey there! From my queue, sorry for the wait. It's ok guy

[Easy]

00:52:192 (3) - Last sliderpoint at x332 y252 for better flow / k I made a new pattern it's better work

01:51:192 (3) - curved slider looks better~ / k


[Normal]

00:03:859 (2,3,1) - Spacing issue / kk~

00:07:859 (1,2) - Blanket isn't perfect / The blanket I just did the same opposite 00:09:192 (2,1)

00:41:192 (3,4,1) - Looks unorganized. How about curving 3 and 4 and make them all look like a circle? / fixed a new pattern looks so cool~

02:08:192 (2) - x196 y324 for better flow / kkkkk


[Hard]

00:15:859 (1) - Eh, not a fan of curved sliders, but this one feels out of place of the song / kkkk

02:15:192 (5) - Remove the red dot, would flow better / I think is fine~


Not bad, maybe a few more mods and this might be ready~ /// now looking for BN to modding this map
Although a few some suggestion, but made the map perfect up. Thanks a lot
:D
impreza0109
The beatmap is good. Keep up the good work. :)

My only recommendation though, is to extend the beatmapping until the absolute end of the song.
Topic Starter
wasin

impreza0109 wrote:

The beatmap is good. Keep up the good work. :)

My only recommendation though, is to extend the beatmapping until the absolute end of the song.
:D
Sangzin
Hello! From my modding queue!

[Hard]

  • 00:27:859 (3) - Don't hide repeat arrow. It can be considered as a unrankable. Ctrl+G will be fine
    00:47:526 (5) - x:272 y:316 to blanket
    01:10:692 (3) - a little bit higher for have a feel of blanket with (4)?
    01:22:526 (6) - NC here
    01:23:192 (1) - Remove NC
    02:20:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try make line stream. It will be nice

[Normal]

  • 00:51:859 (2) - Remove clap
    01:07:859 (3,1) - Blanket this one too?


Cool mapset! Have a star.
GL! :)
Topic Starter
wasin

Sangzin wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue!

[Hard]

  • 00:27:859 (3) - Don't hide repeat arrow. It can be considered as a unrankable. Ctrl+G will be fine / fixed kk
    00:47:526 (5) - x:272 y:316 to blanket / fixed
    01:10:692 (3) - a little bit higher for have a feel of blanket with (4)? / fixed
    01:22:526 (6) - NC here / fixed
    01:23:192 (1) - Remove NC / fixed
    02:20:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try make line stream. It will be nice / I think is fine

[Normal]

  • 00:51:859 (2) - Remove clap / kk
    01:07:859 (3,1) - Blanket this one too? / the slider I made it for straight, no blanket


Cool mapset! Have a star. Thanks a lot
GL! :)
Thank you guy. I think this map is ready to bub now just looking for BN to check
Sonnyc
[Easy]
  1. 00:53:192 - 01:26:526 - 02:17:192 - 02:18:526 - 02:19:859 - Remove Clap.
  2. 02:34:526 (5,1) - Start NC from (5). It fits your symmetry pattern, and the stanza.
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:859 (5) - Missing NC.
  2. 00:18:526 (1,2) - 02:58:526 (1,2) - Can you place (2) in a way not overlapping (1)? Currently both the start and the tail of (2) is getting overlapped with (1), resulting in a low visibility.
  3. 00:27:859 - 00:33:192 - 01:10:526 - 01:15:859 - 01:26:526 - 01:31:859 - 01:37:192 - Remove Clap.
  4. 00:41:192 (3,1) - Slider path of (1) is barely visible due to the overlap. I recommend you to make the path of (1) fully visible.
  5. 01:14:526 (1,3) - Path of (3) this time.
  6. 01:38:526 (1,2) - 01:53:192 (3,4) - 01:56:859 (4,1) - 02:48:859 (2,3) - Spacing.
[Hard]
  1. 00:52:026 (4,5) - Make it 1.2x for consistency.
  2. 01:31:859 (3,4) - 01:43:526 (4,1) - Remove these 1/4 jumps please. These 1/4 slider jumps were pretty random of usage at that period of your map, nor there were anything special in the music. 1/4 jumps appear in the final part of your map. To intensify it's usage, not using at all until that part arrives is what I recommend.
  3. 02:39:859 (1,1) - In my opinion, ending the spinner at 02:41:859 fits better with the overall level of your beatmap. Also giving a short pause can emphasize the strong sound of 02:42:526 better.
  4. 02:51:859 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be better in readability. Your previous 1/4 jump patterns were nice in readability for several reasons, but in here, since (2,3) is having a same spacing with (1,2), it lacks readability. What I suggest is to place (3) far from (2) as you've done at 02:49:859 (1,2,3,4).
Aerous
Hard :
00:13:192 (1) - Increase distance more for the change in music
00:23:859 (1) - Same thing here and also theres finish hitsound
00:41:359 (3,4) - Just stack these
00:44:526 (4) - Tail add drum hitsound
00:47:526 (5) - Use whistle instead
00:51:859 (3,4,5) - Don't change the rhythm up , use the repeat slider like last time.
00:54:359 - Drum sound
02:01:692 - Theres no sound here , remove the repeat slider on here
02:43:859 (3,4,5,6,1) - Overmapped , I can only hear sounds on 02:43:859 - 02:44:192 - 02:44:526 -
02:44:859 (3) - Dont end on big white lines , use something clickable
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