1. Del's Hard (3,34 stars, 253 notes)
2. Easy (1,59 stars, 84 notes)
3. Insane (4,87 stars, 322 notes)
4. Laurier's Insane (3,63 stars, 228 notes)
5. Meg's Insane (5,08 stars, 320 notes)
6. Yuii-'s Normal (2,22 stars, 145 notes)

Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/kO95s/1772c99b89.osu

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

[Yuii's normal]
00:03:235 (4) - What do you think of changing its shape a little to compliment slider (2) - That'd break with the ds, but isn't a bad idea, I'll think of something else later on.
00:21:905 (1) - spacing? if this was meant to be 'just a bit out of stacking' nvm - My custom stacking, is intentional.

Enjoy wrote:

nice mappu owo//

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

[Yuii's normal][hard]
00:45:522 (3,1) - move a slight touch so that they dont touch

• Insane

-soramaru- wrote:

• Insane

01:04:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -There is close Notes after the slider . So it looks difficult rhythm . You should release a little.
I'm sorry in rough words

Zectro wrote:

m4m queue

[Laurier's Insane]
00:12:011 (2,3) - Align blanket better
00:42:171 (4,1) - ^

Can't really find anything else here, seems like a very well mapped and polished diff

[Insane]
00:19:352 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest using the same spacing as you did for 00:16:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
00:23:182 (1,2) - Use same amount of spacing between these as used for 00:23:660 (2,3) -
01:12:650 (6,1) - use same blanket distance between these as used for 01:11:692 (3,4) - ( difference, look at aproach circle: http://puu.sh/kYukC/e345169b3c.jpg = 01:11:692 (3,4) - and http://puu.sh/kYukC/e345169b3c.jpg = 01:12:650 (6,1) - )

Would recheck if all blankets are aligned correctly in general
Can't find anything else from this either

[Meg's Insane]
00:03:714 (3) - this one feels weird O.o
00:13:767 (3,1) - Fix blanket a tiny bit
00:18:554 (4) - Slider looks a bit meh
00:51:267 (1,3) - Blanket, fix it
01:11:692 (1,3) - Fix this blanket
01:12:969 (1,3) - ^
01:15:203 (3,1) - this could be positioned to look way better imo


This seems like a really well made mapset!
That's also the reason I couldn't find much, so I'll shoot a star at this mapset to make up for it

sodarose wrote:

M4M

[Meg's Insane]
00:46:160 (1,2) - Exchange http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3873955

[Insane]
00:12:011 (2,3) - Bad Blanket. 00:12:490 (3) - a little down
01:11:692 (3,4) - Bad Blanket.

[Laurier's Insane]
00:18:075 00:19:352 00:20:628 (1) - 00:21:905 00:23:182 00:24:458 00:25:735 Whistle

[Del's Hard]
00:18:075 00:19:352 00:20:628 (1) - 00:21:905 00:23:182 00:24:458 00:25:735 Whistle
00:16:799 (1) - Finish

[Yuii-'s Normal]
00:03:075 (3,4) - Rhythm error http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3874000
00:05:948 (1,2) - Bad flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3874008
00:05:948 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Your Distance snap is Confused
00:16:799 (1,2,3) - ^ DS?
00:18:873 (6,1) - Stack
00:21:905 (1) - Bad DS
00:25:575 (1,2) - ^
00:44:884 (1,2) - ^
01:02:118 (2,1) - ^
01:14:245 (1,2,1) - ^

[Easy]
00:29:565 (2) - Bad blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3874046

Nice map
GL

Strategas wrote:

sup

[Meg]

00:02:597 (3) - I don't like this , I prefer if you made 00:02:756 - clickable
00:03:394 (1,2,3,4) - If you followed this why not start the patern from this note? 00:03:235 -
00:27:011 (1) - I can see you're following vocals int this part, but I think the drums are much better thing to follow here, they come pretty impactful here too and you already followed the vocals before that part
00:30:682 (1) - increase spacing on this note to match 00:31:320 (4) - or decrease the later one

seems like a very well built map, good job

[Insane]

00:56:214 (7,1) - if blanket intended it's really off lol

[Laurier]

01:00:203 (1,2) - blanket fix
just saying but not a fan of paterns like 01:12:331 (3,4,5,6) - 00:54:458 (2,3,4,5) -

well atleast this diff doesn't have the SS destroying note at the end

[Del]

00:02:118 (2,1) - these are touching weirdly
00:12:011 (2,3,1) - these need a bit of polishing now it doesn't look very even
00:37:384 (2,3) - you overlaped everywhere else but not here for some reason

[Yuii]

Holy mother of amount of green lines in a normal

00:03:235 (4) - imo start slider on white tick
00:11:852 (1,2,3) - all of these have sliderends as quite strong beats I think you should consider making the slider start on those beats instead
00:14:565 (2,3) - ^
00:16:799 (1,2) - the angle from 1 to 2 is strange
00:18:394 (4,5,6,1) - this patern might be difficult to read for new players

um I think overall better note placement can be used, now it feels quite random to me

[Easy]

00:06:426 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:07:703 (3,4) - ^
00:10:256 (6,7) - ^
00:18:075 (2,3) - ^
00:21:107 (2,3) - ^ if that's what you intended there ofc
00:24:458 (3,4) - ^
00:38:501 (2,3) - ^
00:39:777 (3,1) - yeah this one idk
00:49:990 (1,2) - you should perfect this one, now it looks really strange
01:00:203 (2,3) - overlaps in easy are to be avoided, but I think it's not a big deal this one
01:05:309 (1) - slider ends needs to be pulled a bit up for better blanket

well you might want to recheck all of your blankets here

Thats all I guess, good luck!

T-Mac wrote:

hi, noob here

[Meg's Insane]

as the highest diff with 188bpm, maybe AR9.2 is better?

00:01:480 - this part can be a little lighter? the same volume as 00:06:426 - this part, but i think 00:01:480 - this part's music is lighter than 00:06:426 - this, add strong drum beat since 00:06:426 - , obviously

00:16:799 - and why still 60% volume here...this part even lighter than 00:01:480 - , lighter vocal, lighter piano, no drum beats, so i think you can use 30% this part and keep 60% 00:25:735 - here

00:29:086 - 00:31:639 - add a circle here? more continuity for piano

01:21:999 - here shouldn't be 60%, too noisy obviously, so light here,30% is enough i think

[Insane]

00:38:501 - 00:39:777 - NC should be here, two obviously strong guitar beats in this place, and long white line here, 00:37:224 (1,2) - 00:38:501 (6,7) - 00:39:777 (4,5) - 00:41:054 (1,2) - both use whistle and clap hirsounds here? very strong this guitar beats

00:47:437 (1,2) - this part ditto

00:46:639 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 00:52:543 (1,2,3,4,5) - unperfect pentagon

[Laurier's Insane]

find nothing

[Del's Hard]

00:28:288 (1,2,3,4) - can you 00:28:288 (1,2) - 00:28:607 (3,4) - overlap?

00:31:958 (4) - overlap with 00:32:118 (1) - like you did at 00:38:660 (2,3) - 00:39:937 (2,3) - and so on, i think that's similar so keep the same pattern plz

[Yuii-'s Normal]

this green line

00:23:501 (2) - 00:51:586 (1) - this slider so light...

GL~

Graphite Edge wrote:

[Laurier's Insane]

00:38:501 (1,2,3) - This one feels a bit weird, 00:38:501 (1) - to x:92 y:160 better positioned this way, maybe.

[Insane]

00:42:011 (5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest this position: 00:42:331 (1) - x:56 y:220 see https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3878610

That's all i find for now, gl Tomi!

Aguante Kano y Laurier vieja! I AGREE!

Salu2

1. 00:01:480 (1,2) - Bigger spacing would be nice..
2. 00:55:097 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ok wow man, that's amazing.

1. 01:11:373 (2) - This one doesn't really fit in the whole pattern, mainly because there's a syllable on both slider head and end. Unlike 01:10:416 (2,2) - which both have one strong vocal at the slider head and it goes along well.

1. 00:02:118 (2,1) - The slight overlap looks meh.. either avoid it completely or cover more area.
2. 01:06:267 (4) - I'd prefer having 2 circles here, much more satisfying with the vocals.

1. 00:02:437 (2,3) - Blanket should be improved here.
2. 00:03:075 (3,4) - Overlap is pretty ugly and why is 4's head volume that low? It sounds wrong.
3. 00:04:033 (1,2,3) - Try blanketing again please.
4. 00:05:948 (1,2) - That movement and flow would be nice in higher difficulties but it is counter-intuitive for beginners, you should probably avoid stuff like that
5. 00:16:160 (3,1) - I don't think stacking them is a good idea, especially with such low AR, really confusing.
6. 00:21:107 (1,2,3,1) - Movement between sliders is awkward..
7. 00:29:564 (1,2) - Blanket.
8. 00:30:841 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:32:118 (1,2) - ^
10. 00:33:394 (1) - Would probably want to make them identical and CTRL+H, J to something like this: http://puu.sh/l4LLU/496b3a997e.jpg (The curves are one infront another)
11. 00:37:224 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know.. that looks really wrong http://puu.sh/l4LPl/2f74afa4de.jpg Could you use CTRL+SHIFT+D to create a proper square?
12. 00:42:331 - Placing a circle here and starting the break here is preferable imo.
13. 00:49:033 (1) - Spacing?
14. 01:01:480 (1,2) - Blanket.
15. 01:02:756 (1,2) - ^

Avishay wrote:

Hi.

[Meg's Insane]

1. 00:01:480 (1,2) - Bigger spacing would be nice..
2. 00:55:097 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ok wow man, that's amazing.

[Insane]

1. 01:11:373 (2) - This one doesn't really fit in the whole pattern, mainly because there's a syllable on both slider head and end. Unlike 01:10:416 (2,2) - which both have one strong vocal at the slider head and it goes along well.

[Del's Hard]

1. 00:02:118 (2,1) - The slight overlap looks meh.. either avoid it completely or cover more area.
2. 01:06:267 (4) - I'd prefer having 2 circles here, much more satisfying with the vocals.

[Yuii-'s Normal]

1. 00:02:437 (2,3) - Blanket should be improved here.
2. 00:03:075 (3,4) - Overlap is pretty ugly and why is 4's head volume that low? It sounds wrong.
3. 00:04:033 (1,2,3) - Try blanketing again please.
4. 00:05:948 (1,2) - That movement and flow would be nice in higher difficulties but it is counter-intuitive for beginners, you should probably avoid stuff like that
5. 00:16:160 (3,1) - I don't think stacking them is a good idea, especially with such low AR, really confusing.
6. 00:21:107 (1,2,3,1) - Movement between sliders is awkward..
7. 00:29:564 (1,2) - Blanket.
8. 00:30:841 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:32:118 (1,2) - ^
10. 00:33:394 (1) - Would probably want to make them identical and CTRL+H, J to something like this: http://puu.sh/l4LLU/496b3a997e.jpg (The curves are one infront another)
11. 00:37:224 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know.. that looks really wrong http://puu.sh/l4LPl/2f74afa4de.jpg Could you use CTRL+SHIFT+D to create a proper square?
12. 00:42:331 - Placing a circle here and starting the break here is preferable imo.
13. 00:49:033 (1) - Spacing?
14. 01:01:480 (1,2) - Blanket.
15. 01:02:756 (1,2) - ^

Everything else is just fine

I'd recommend getting some bigger attention into the normal difficulty, I think it lacks some proper visuals with movement that is a big thing in beginner's difficulties.

TotoiZn wrote:

Hi chucentry, just a little mod cuz im boring

Easy

00:14:245 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/lc95m/f46fcfa7b4.jpg Creo que algo asi quedaria mejor
00:28:288 (3,1,2) - el blanket podria mejorar si el slider lo hicieras curvo en ves de usar el punto rojo para que se doble completamente (no se como se llama)

Yuii-´s Normal

creo que hay 2 overlaps que son muy dificiles de leer debido al ritmo de la canción que son estos
00:16:799 (1) -
00:26:692 (2) -

fuera de eso: 00:18:394 (4,5,6,1) - no le veo el ritmo, quiza soy solo yo, pero podria mejorar asi: http://puu.sh/lcdzn/532e61895d.jpg

Del's Hard

01:12:331 (2) - maybe change for 2 circles ?
01:25:591 (6) - i think that hs at the end of the slider its not necesary

Laurier's Insane

cant find anything wrong here (maybe change the Laurier's Insane to Laurier's Hard ?)

Insane

por chat ya hablamos de un par de cosas que te recomende cambiar aca, simplemente las voy a repetir

00:53:980 (2,3,4) - no siento que haya un triple ahi
01:12:331 (5) - eso lo cambiaria por 2 notas
01:21:999 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - y le sacaria el hs a todo eso, le dejaria al primer 1 y al ultimo

Meg's Insane

Same as Laurier diff

no puedo encontrar nada mas, espero que llegue a ranked algun dia, no seas pajero como yo y segui haciendo m4m asi llegas rapido

cya

Del05 wrote:

Hi
sorry for long delay

My update

]Nymph[ wrote:

Hello!
So M4M from #modreq

Easy

Absolutely nothing to mod here purely rank material

Yuii-'s Normal

Well here's a few problems I'd like to take note of
At first ar 6 would suit better this map
00:05:948 (1,2) - Not so nice overlap
00:16:160 (3,1) - Circle 1 comes much later than it is expected, change ar or no stacking
00:54:458 (3) - Rotate this slider with about 40 degrees or something clockwise for smoothiness
01:13:926 (3,1) - Overlap, could be avoided
For map being for newbs, I think that you should avoid this antispacing 00:16:799 (1,2) - like this, confuses players

Del's Hard

Again nothing to mod, rank material
00:25:256 (3,1) - Only thing is that this overlap disturbs me

Laurier's Insane

Almost nothing to complain, pretty smooth map
00:02:118 (2,3) - These notes here, could be remapped or stacked because circle 2 may easily be read as faster than it is, or atleast I read it like that
00:13:288 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hard pattern to play for 3,63 star map, consider remapping

Insane

It felt as if I would have been playing ranked map, no modding needed

Meg's Insane

Again very good mapping, rank material but
00:03:714 (3) - Disturbed by this placing, overlap with 1 is too strong and antispacing
00:34:671 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty hard, consider remapping
00:36:267 (3,4) - Overspacing between these notes even though the music doesn't get stronger
00:46:958 (1) - I don't hear note at the slider end, It sounds more like that blue is being continuum from red note and it confuses players, like it confused me and I got sliderbreak
00:52:543 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This jumping pattern is overall pretty hard and complex for 5.08 star map, in my thoughts. Remapping might not be necessary but consider it, and that spam of NC at the end is little weird for me

Hope this helps!

]Nymph[ wrote:

Hello!
So M4M from #modreq

Meg's Insane

Again very good mapping, rank material but
00:03:714 (3) - Disturbed by this placing, overlap with 1 is too strong and antispacing fixed
00:34:671 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty hard, consider remapping not hard. you can do with LOOKING circles
00:36:267 (3,4) - Overspacing between these notes even though the music doesn't get stronger no changed
00:46:958 (1) - I don't hear note at the slider end, It sounds more like that blue is being continuum from red note and it confuses players, like it confused me and I got sliderbreak Couldn't you hear sound? i can hear sound easily
00:52:543 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This jumping pattern is overall pretty hard and complex for 5.08 star map, in my thoughts. Remapping might not be necessary but consider it, and that spam of NC at the end is little weird for me no changed. snare part becomes harder inevitably

Hope this helps!

walaowey wrote:

As requested by Chuchu (>3<)

Meg's Insane

00:15:841 (2) - the overlapping LOL, try to fix it maybe?
nice diff xD

Insane

00:43:637 (4,1) - swap NC? since the beat is stronger at (4) compare to (1)
00:44:884 (4,1) - ^
00:48:714 (7,8) - maybe place the notes like 00:47:437 (1,2) - bcoz both of them have the same rhythm (i mean dont stack them LOL)
01:22:717 (1,2) - the blanket for both of this can be improve
nice diff too chuuuchuuu ~

Yuii's Normal

Wow, thats a lot of green line LOLL
00:02:437 (2,3) - blanket can be improve
00:20:469 (4,1) - ^
00:29:565 (1,2) - ^
LOL, tbh, most of the blanket dont look that nice..maybe fix them?
00:09:937 (3,1) - stack this properly with 00:08:980 (3) -
00:18:873 (6) - maybe straighten out this slider abit so its slider tail can stack with the slider tail of 00:17:756 (3)
00:26:692 (2) - imo, its not that good to stack this under the slider tail, well, its my opinion only, u can keep them if u want
00:28:288 (1) - stack it with 00:26:692 (2) ? u can move 00:27:969 (3) - abit to fix the DS
00:37:224 (1,1,1,1) - maybe u can make the pattern better for 4 of these notes? .. copy paste for all of them and turn them clockwise 90° for every slider..so that the pattern will be nicer..bcoz it looks very random now.

Easy

00:41:054 (1) - well maybe u can curve the slider body more so it will blanket with 00:42:331 (2)
its nice other than that ><

the diff i didnt mention = i didnt found any problem xd

and thats all from me, good luck with ranking the map
Chuchu