jericho2442 wrote:

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Beginner

(suggestion) 00:26:100 (1,2,3,4) - your current pattern looks abit out of place in the map and kinda makes it look abit ugly, to suit your map more i advise this
01:05:528 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking the pattern you are following
01:14:100 (4) - new combo, this feels too long to suit the map style you are using, by putting a new combo here it breaks it up and feels much better
01:38:100 (5) - new combo, your breaking the pattern your following

nice map overall

Hyper

(suggestion) 00:24:814 (1,2) - put the newcombo on (2) insted
01:21:814 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking the pattern you are following

Another

00:08:957 (1,2,3) - i dont like how these are the same spacing but have different timing, make (2,3) closer, or make (1,2) wider please
00:58:778 (1) - this note plays BAD, just feels out of place, i advise to remove this note
01:05:635 (1) - same here too


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well not bad maps, i will star once the reds are fixed

Revengexsoyah wrote:

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ONLY SUGGESTIONS


~Easy~
01:48:814 : try this use the slider , ending in 01:49:671
~Hyper~
Fine.
~Another~
fine


fucking SHAWTY mooding


star for your map very very nice
i love the background.

orioncomet wrote:

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hihi
[Hyper]
- those notes look a bit overlapped [suggestion] +1 to approach rate

[Another]
00:19:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - srsly hard to read spacing between streams, Ex: between 00:19:457 (3) and 00:19:671 (4), may be move (4) a bit farther from (3) then this.
00:20:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:25:457 (4) - feel like a bit too close to 00:24:814 (3), try move (3) to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39616
00:29:528 (1) - move this note farther from 00:29:314 (7) a bit
00:32:957 (1,2,3) - move them farther from 00:32:636 (5) a bit
00:36:385 (1) - move them farther from 00:36:171 (13) a bit

other diffs look good

lepidopodus wrote:

Took request from #modreqs

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Beginner
00:34:671 (3) - If you want exact symmetry with 1, how about moving this one grid down?

Hyper
00:25:778 (2) - Move one grid right, if you want exact symmetry with 1?
00:30:171 (4,5,6) - Just a suggestion, but how about this formation? (4 is stacked under 3.)
01:07:671 (2,4) - If you want exact symetry, how about moving these one grid right? (or moving 1,3 one grid right.)
01:49:028 (4) - If you want exact symetry, how about moving these one grid up?

31's Taiko
00:12:385 (17~32) - D ddddd D ddddd D k D k or D ddddd D ddddd K d K d?
00:32:957 (137) - d?
00:39:814 (188) - ^
01:07:135 (320) - delete?

Another
00:40:778 (4) - Move one grid up, if you want exact symmetry?
01:44:957 (1) - Finish in the start of the slider?

Well, that's all. Maybe helpful, maybe not.

theMikeAG wrote:

Very good! I'm loving this! This is a really awesome beatmap!

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Here are my suggestions.
Beginner: 00:12:385 (1,2) - Maybe place a Clap or Cymbal on the ends of these sliders? Other than that, this is great. XP
I added whistles instead.

Hyper: The HP drain rate is pretty low for "Hyper" difficulty. You might want to raise it.
Done.

00:02:100 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1) - This isn't a big problem, but you might want to consider making a new intro section. It's kind of silly that all three difficulties start with the same intro.
Yep, I've changed all the intros somewhat.

00:53:528 (1,1) - Two spinners? Kind of odd if you ask me.
I'd rather keep them, I think.

Another: 00:02:100 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - You took the same intro and made it easier?
See above.

00:34:457 (13,1) - Spacing!
It's not meant to be easy!

00:53:528 (1,1) - The return of the double spinner!
See above.

01:10:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This section really sticks out like a sore thumb. It's like you just slapped beats all over the place.
I've made this a bit neater.

The rest of the map is too hard for me. XP

This is really good. Starred.

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~thanks for your modding
and now i will try my best to mod this map

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general
- nice BG!
- maybe louder hitsounds will make the map better - Agreed.
- excuse me but i'm not sure about why there is a osb. file - It doesn't really matter.

beginner
looks fine, but
- it's a diff for the beginners so may be make circle size larger? - I tried making them bigger but they started overlapping and it looked ugly.

hyper
00:53:528 - the spinner ends on 00:54:814 - Done.
00:55:350 - the spinner starts on 00:55:243, ends on 00:56:528 - ^
00:59:314 (3) - why the slider starts here? maybe a little confusing...how about make it same as the 00:57:814(3)? - I'd rather keep that rhythm.

31's taiko
@_@ sorry but i could not mod the taiko diff - I can't even play it.

another
00:20:421 (8) - move it to 00:20:314 - Doesn't fit the rhythm.
00:20:528 - add a note - ^
00:22:135 (8) - move it to 00:22:028 - ^
00:22:243 - add a note - ^
00:27:064 (8) - the slider ends on 00:27:171 - ^
00:27:385 - add a note - ^
00:33:921 (8) - new combo - Hmm... normally I like to start combos by time rather than grouping, but ok.
00:35:635 (8) - new combo - ^
00:53:528 - same as the hyper diff - Done.
aaaand, why the second spinner ends on 00:56:957? i think you can add some other things here like the hyper diff - I made the spinner longer here to make it a bit more difficult.
01:08:100 (7) - new combo - Done.
01:17:314 (4) - add a clap sound here - ^
01:23:957 (8) - new combo - Not in the middle of a stream. I made the entire stream one combo though.
i really think that the hitsounds in this diff could be better - Yeah I realised there were some sections I hadn't fleshed out as much as I'd like. Done.

btw, the song is AWESOME!
so star

Zelos wrote:

Hyper:

00:53:528 (1) - end this spinner on the closest red tick

Another:

00:53:528 (1) - same as above in Hyper

01:03:600 (7) - add a clap here for some clap epicness.

Zelos wrote:

atfer this mod. GET THIS BUBBLED! it is ready.

John12346 wrote:

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Beginner
No visible problems.

Hyper
00:10:243 (4,1) - This is nitpicky, but super large distance, I guess? Flipped the previous combo.
00:59:100 (2,3) - A half beat spaced like a full beat. Kinda unintuitive. >.> Uhhh... no it's not. :/

Another
00:22:135 (8,9) - That's some big distance there, but I might be nitpicking again... I want to have a big jump there, but I've moved the stack slightly closer.
01:17:100 (3,4,1) - The time between 3 and 4 is smaller than the time between 4 and 1, yet you have them evenly spaced? Hmm.. didn't notice that. Stacked 4 on the end of 3.
01:48:814 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There might be nothing wrong with this, but it seems odd how you go from 5 beats to 4... I originally had 3 groups of 4, but it was suggested to add the extra note so it starts on a white tick.

Cool job with the map. Hope it gets approved soon.
Starred.

_LRJ_ wrote:

Heya o/

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(i don't mod Taiko , sorry~) I don't play Taiko.

[Beginner]

00:26:100 (1) - Try like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/46485 Done.
00:27:814 (3) - Try like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/46486 Done, but had to rearrange to keep spacing.

[Hyper]

Fine~

[Another]
00:08:849 (4,5) - 1 grid in right? Done.
01:36:385 - Why timing section here? Change this to inherited section or delete this timing section. This was meant to be inherited to reset the hitsound volume. Fixed.
01:38:100 - ^ How the hell did these get here???? o_O
01:42:171 - ^
01:51:814 - ^

That's all.

Star !

jericho2442 wrote:

do arien666's taiko mod since i requested him to mod it <3

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Beginner
all fine

Hyper
spinner bug on this map, put a new combo on all your spinners

Another
00:08:957 (5,1) - put the new combo on the (5) follows the music and pattern better
00:19:028 (7,1) - the (7) needs moving a little bit more away from the (1) so its the same spacing as you have at 00:19:457 (3,4)
00:26:850 (7,8,9) - same here, the (8) needs moving abit so that its spacing between (7) and (9) is the same
00:31:457 (1,2,3) - pattern wise it makes more sense to stack (2) on top of the (3) since thats how you do it on the combo before
00:38:314 (1,2,3) - same
00:58:885 (1,2,3) - same
01:03:814 (1,2) - the (2) really dont play good stacked, i advise to move i to the right side of (1)
01:04:350 - add a note here and stack it on top of the next note, this way it keeps your current flow going, rather than breaking it
01:05:742 (1,2,3) - pattern wise it makes more sense to stack (2) on top of the (3)
01:17:100 (3,4) - same as the other time, the (4) really dont play good stacked, i advise to move i to the bottom of (2). then you want to space 01:17:528 (1) - more away from the combo before, since the timing on the notes is really confusing to follow with this spacing
01:40:028 (2,3,4) - pattern wise it makes more sense to stack (3) on top of the (4) this also helps with the timing because of the stacking notes before it

obv you dont have to do these changes at all, but to me when i did them it flows MUCH better and becomes a lot more epic

All done! Just waiting on samiljul for the taiko changes.

Odaril wrote:

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General
Is there a diff name between Beginner and Hyper ? The jump gap is way too big. You need another diff in between.
I really don't like the fact all osu! difficulties have the same slider speed. It kind of breaks the purpose of slider speed themselves.
The lighter blue blends with the background.

Beginner
Too hard for the easier diff of the mapset. The sliders are too fast, and the spacing too low compared to the slider speed, which makes it hard to read and confusing. All the stacks make some of the rhythms hard to read as well.

Hyper
00:25:457 (1,2,1) - This spacing is not easy to read. I thought they were 1/1.
00:59:100 (2,3) - This confused me because I thought (3) was 1/1 apart from (2).
01:48:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - As nice as this is, the placement of (7) and (8) confused me. I thought (8) was before. Fixing the approach circle colours might fix this.

Another
This was... awkwardly difficult and hard to read. The spacing and pattern make the rhythms unreadable, and the rhythms themselves are weird and can't really be guessed.
00:05:528 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - This for instance - first of all, 4 1/4 is a confusing number, and if you add these doubles, it makes the rhythm extremely confusing, and the jumps from the doubles to the 4 notes make the spacing untrustable. So the player has to either guess the rhythm or read the approach circles, which blend with the background.
00:19:993 (7,8,9,10) - This too. The 3/4 rhythm is excessively hard to read under the stack, so if you add a jump from (8) to (9), it will make things even worse.
00:21:707 (7,8,9,10,1) - Same. Add to that the fact that irregular spacings (8,9,10,1) are confusing.
00:28:243 (3,4,1) - Spacing issue: the distance between (3) and (4) is not the same as between (4) and (1). Though it reads fine.
00:40:243 (3,5) - Why do these have 3 repeats ? It doesn't make sense whatsoever and is confusing.
01:03:814 (1,2) - I think that a slider then a circle play really bad in the middle or at the end of such streams - you should maybe make the slider two circles.
01:05:742 (1,2) - Confusing jump. The rhythm expected is not 1/2.
01:06:600 (4,5,1) - These should be spaced evenly.
01:17:100 (3,4) - Replace with three circles ?
01:17:850 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All these jumps were confusing despite the obvious rhythm.
01:44:957 (1,2) - Replace with three circles ?

31's Taiko
The patterns with 4 notes really sound weird to me (and play weird as well).

ziin wrote:

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Everything's a suggestion, no major problems.

[general]
delete osb on next full submit
Is this really necessary? I've seen conflicting views as to whether or not it actually matters.

[easy]
If you want, this slider is perfect: http://puu.sh/Pzv
184,232,385,6,0,B|208:256|256:280|304:256|328:232,1,160,4|2
or this one:
176,124,814,6,0,B|128:164|128:220|176:260,1,160,4|2
other than the nazis which exist because of the imperfect sliders it's good.
Gasp.... that is quite possibly the most beautiful slider I've ever seen.

[another]
00:06:493 - add note?
00:06:600 (1,2,5,1,2,4,5) - there's claps here in the BGM. default clap sound is too loud, but you could add a custom clap.
I'm not quite sure what to do here, because the BGM claps don't line up exactly with the hit circles. They're pretty quiet anyway.
00:29:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - please? http://puu.sh/PAh I hate not hitting accented notes. Pattern repeats a bunch, you can mix up the old version or use this one, doesn't matter.
I've used some repeats here to match the rhythm.
00:55:243 (1) - end slider a beat early and map the melody fully.
Done.
00:57:385 (1) - I don't hear it in the melody.
(Remapped)
01:00:385 - map the piano here
Done.
01:03:707 - add note
Done.
01:44:850 - ^
Done.

okay I'm done.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Could you change source to beatmania IIDX and put IIDX6 and/or IIDX6th Style in the tags please. This is proper

Samah wrote:

Is this really necessary? I've seen conflicting views as to whether or not it actually matters.

Xgor wrote:

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[General]
This might sound silly, but the title should be uncapitalized to fly through the night. (Mr. T is weird when it comes to capitalizing, It's either all caps like "ZERO-ONE" or none at all like with "xenon" and this. <.<)
Also read this before you do that viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

Maybe raise the hitsound volume.

Just a bit of suggestion but I think it would be a good idea to end the breaks at 00:50:100 at the first break and 01:31:671 at the second one.

I'm far from the best timing but the current timing feels a bit wrong and it feels like the map need around 30+ on the offset, you might want to check a timing expert on this though <.<. Screw it, had a bad universal offset.

[Normal]
This normal is very similar difficulty wise to Easy and I think it would be better if you made Normal a bit harder as the jump between Heavy and Hyper is pretty big.

[Taiko]
Not much of a taiko modder but some parts sounds odd here
That being said I find that with most taiko maps so I should probably not comment about this difficulty.

[Another]
All these double claps sounds awful, one clap is enough.
01:42:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would make more sense music wise if you move this 1/2 backwards on the timeline and make (5) into a 1/2 long slider.


Not bad, some stuff could need some checking first though.
*star*

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
This might sound really unimportant but please change your thread title to reflect the song title change as well.
I've tried changing it but it doesn't want to work... I changed it when submitting and also with a manual edit to the post, but it reverts to the original name.

[Another]
00:23:528 (1,2) - I dont know, but you might want to make these sliders look less compressed.
They look a little more interesting now.
00:38:207 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - [Nazi] 2 grids left so the pattern is more centered.
Done.
00:53:528 (1) - Idk but the double spinners in here feel kinda odd, dont you think you can replace this one for some notes? or put them together or something.
I've put a couple of hitcircles in here, let me know what you think.

[Hyper]
00:35:314 (2) - [Nazi] Mode the last slider point 1 grid right (and move the stacked notes 1 grid right as well, this will cause it to hit the middle of the Y axys, since you seem to be going for symmetry i felt like pointing this out.
I moved it down slightly too so that the sliders aren't too close together.
01:10:671 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - You could try to center these a bit more?
Done.

Pretty good map, most of my mod was just nazi/aesthetic stuff since you seem to like symmetry and all that, call me back when changes are done and i'll recheck, for now have a star

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Grats for your first ranked map ^^

Sakura Hana wrote:

Congratulations o/

Samah wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

Congratulations o/

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