lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~

Info of the Song;
- Source; Umm, maybe just Touhou ?? Though I guess you want to be specific which is good too ~
- Tags; Add Hijiri Byakuren ??

General;
- Remove countdown from all diffs. done
- Remove osb. file and full sub done

Skin;
- Nice hitcircle
- Add a approach circle done
- Comboburst is of bad quality, maybe take this one instead ??thank you

SPOILER

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Looks;
- BG is not 1024x768, resize
- Use this colors ??nty

Combo1 : 156,133,188
Combo2 : 239,199,143
Combo3 : 147,236,169
Combo4 : 128,164,193

Normal;
- 02:03:030 >> align with (1) no

Hard;
- Is okk ~

Insane;
- Is okk ~

* Star :3

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, but if I point something out it's because I believe it will help your map!
[General]
Source: Touhounah its fine
Tags: add Undefined Fantastic Object th12nah
Disable countdown as it doesn't even fit.done
Combo burst width must be below 500 px, reduce it please.fixed

[Insane]
02:21:070 (1) - I dont like how this note is flying off, makes like no sense to me other than the fact that a voice starts here, maybe delete this note and start the spinner here instead????
02:50:089 (1,2) - The flow here feels a little awkward, maybe center this slider and make it go wavy (like ~) and stack the next note at the end?nah
03:04:991 (9) - Considering how good your sliders are so far consider making this one have a less sharp corner on the inner side?fixed

[Normal]this is fine
Please avoid using different slider speeds on the easiest difficulty, although you could try a not so slow one instead so the change isn't too much, but they are also screwing up your sliders making them have invisible ticks.
Can you please finish mapping this diff until the end? ._.

Frill wrote:

umm..If Hijiri Byakuren Tags is added, might be good though are good.

[Normal]

02:50:874 (1) -I think that the last volume disappears. but okayy

[Hard]

01:05:972 -(X) mm..Why don't you add circle? beats according to the sound.done

[Insane]

Looks good^^


That's only suggestions >.<
Nice map~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Oh cool! can i pop it over inconsistent diff lengths now? *runs*

James2250 wrote:

Don't really mind if easiest difficulty isn't mapped all the way to the end
Ouran isn't waiting for guest difficulty anymore it seems
Can you get someone to double check timing? I get around 678 offset but might just be me...wait what that was old offset...yeah need double check

Normal:
Tick rate 0,5 sounds better to me done
00:10:097 (1,1) - would be nice if you made this into 1 spinner for a Normaldone
01:05:980 (2) - add note?nah

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
Looks good

Taiko:
Looks good (not rly taiko modder though)

Larto wrote:

Take this as the background image for a pretty thumbnail.

SPOILER

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Insane could use another break, but it works either way.

Hard:
03:05:199 (7) - Move 1/2 forward, or place another note on 03:05:395 -. Sounds better. (it's fine)

Normal makes me sad because you didn't map to the end.>_>

orioncomet wrote:

[happy30] has different offset, fix it and resnap all note and green line.
remove audio lead in from [happy30]?fixed

[happy30]
00:43:042 (1) - a bit off screen? last silder touched a HP bar ;w;!fixed, it touches a bit less now

other diffs look fine 0.0

orioncomet wrote:

Rebubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Insane]

01:05:199 (1,1,2,1) - I really don't like this. Remove 01:05:788 (1) and extend 01:05:199 (1) by 1/4. Much better to me.[/color]

[happy30]

02:52:846 (x) - This sudden volume change is a bit weird. Remove it or try something else.i like it the way it is, but i will check with happy
EDIT: happy likes it the way it is
And since you're here add "Roko-Don" into the tags on every difficulty and I'll rank this.

Verdisphena wrote:

OMG CONGRATZ!