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_yoc feat. Sara Matsumoto - Moonlight Windia

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ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, December 02, 2010 at 6:07:32 PM

Artist: _yoc feat. Sara Matsumoto
Title: Moonlight Windia
Source: Touhou
Tags: Riverside Emotional Skyscraper Cosmic Mind Rokodo happy30 Roko-don
BPM: 153
Filesize: 5142kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. happy30 (4.98 stars, 620 notes)
  2. Hard (4.26 stars, 349 notes)
  3. Insane (4.88 stars, 541 notes)
  4. Normal (2.05 stars, 148 notes)
  5. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 556 notes)
Download: _yoc feat. Sara Matsumoto - Moonlight Windia
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Rusty
cooool map! :)
subarasikibuta
star :)
James2250
Most of this you were prob going to do after the other difficulties were done but I will mention them anyway!!!

At the moment this isn't called anything under the song setup, name it something (Insane)
You need hitcircle overlay and apporach circle in folder
Max width for a combo burst is 500 (yours is 538), resize~
Needs a Preview point
Remove countdown
Add tags

Only comment about the map is:
00:11:462 (1) - sounds better if extended 1/2

Even if it isn't complete I will still give you a star :P
Niper
star!
miccoliasms
8-)
Krisom
Look at me, modding your stuff :v..

Normal-
00:03:030 (1) - Why a new combo?
00:06:168 (1) - ^?
00:09:305 (1) - ^?
(I mean, there are no jumps and no custom sldierspeeds :/)
00:13:815 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:41:070 (1,2,3,1) - The first (1) should not be a new combo. Then, add a new combo at (3) and remove a new combo from the last (1).
00:50:285 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:53:227 (1) - ^?
00:56:364 (1,2) - Switch new combos
00:58:325 (1,2) - ^
01:18:325 (1) - remove new combo?
01:24:599 (1,2) - Switch new combos
01:45:776 (1) - remove new combo? (and the finishes here are completely out of place, use whistles)
01:48:913 (1) - ^
02:30:481 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:43:030 (1) - ^?
02:50:089 (1) - ^?

Insane-
I'll be much shorter here
00:30:481 (1) - Why the new combo?
03:40:481 (1,1) - Why the new combo spam?

You know I don't mod touhou, I just came here to do that combo mod I promised, so I'm leaving here :v

Oh yeah, it's dangerous to go alone, take this o/
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Krisom wrote:

Look at me, modding your stuff :v..

Normal-
00:03:030 (1) - Why a new combo?
00:06:168 (1) - ^?
00:09:305 (1) - ^?
(I mean, there are no jumps and no custom sldierspeeds :/)
00:13:815 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:41:070 (1,2,3,1) - The first (1) should not be a new combo. Then, add a new combo at (3) and remove a new combo from the last (1).
00:50:285 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:53:227 (1) - ^?
00:56:364 (1,2) - Switch new combos
00:58:325 (1,2) - ^
01:18:325 (1) - remove new combo?
01:24:599 (1,2) - Switch new combos
01:45:776 (1) - remove new combo? (and the finishes here are completely out of place, use whistles)
01:48:913 (1) - ^
02:30:481 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:43:030 (1) - ^?
02:50:089 (1) - ^?

Insane-
I'll be much shorter here
00:30:481 (1) - Why the new combo?
03:40:481 (1,1) - Why the new combo spam?

You know I don't mod touhou, I just came here to do that combo mod I promised, so I'm leaving here :v

Oh yeah, it's dangerous to go alone, take this o/
thx
Natteke
what's up
Sander-Don
<3 star~
swish
star~ :oops:
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

swish wrote:

star~ :oops:
thx
Heatherfield
star
wonderful song :)
Verdisphena
~~(ºyº)/~~
arien666
Seems good except there is osb file orz
;_;...
eXseeD
Good song and good map!!!
star! :)
lovhin456
Hey ~

Info of the Song;
- Source; Umm, maybe just Touhou ?? Though I guess you want to be specific which is good too ~
- Tags; Add Hijiri Byakuren ??

General;
- Remove countdown from all diffs.
- Remove osb. file and full sub

Skin;
- Nice hitcircle
- Add a approach circle
- Comboburst is of bad quality, maybe take this one instead ??

Looks;
- BG is not 1024x768, resize
- Use this colors ??
Combo1 : 156,133,188
Combo2 : 239,199,143
Combo3 : 147,236,169
Combo4 : 128,164,193

Normal;
- 02:03:030 >> align with (1)

Hard;
- Is okk ~

Insane;
- Is okk ~

* Star :3
Sakura
Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, but if I point something out it's because I believe it will help your map!
[General]
Source: Touhou
Tags: add Undefined Fantastic Object th12
Disable countdown as it doesn't even fit.
Combo burst width must be below 500 px, reduce it please.

[Insane]
02:21:070 (1) - I dont like how this note is flying off, makes like no sense to me other than the fact that a voice starts here, maybe delete this note and start the spinner here instead?
02:50:089 (1,2) - The flow here feels a little awkward, maybe center this slider and make it go wavy (like ~) and stack the next note at the end?
03:04:991 (9) - Considering how good your sliders are so far consider making this one have a less sharp corner on the inner side?

[Normal]
Please avoid using different slider speeds on the easiest difficulty, although you could try a not so slow one instead so the change isn't too much, but they are also screwing up your sliders making them have invisible ticks.
Can you please finish mapping this diff until the end? ._.
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~

Info of the Song;
- Source; Umm, maybe just Touhou ?? Though I guess you want to be specific which is good too ~
- Tags; Add Hijiri Byakuren ??

General;
- Remove countdown from all diffs. done
- Remove osb. file and full sub done

Skin;
- Nice hitcircle 8-)
- Add a approach circle done
- Comboburst is of bad quality, maybe take this one instead ??thank you
SPOILER
[attachment=0:d8eb7]comboburst.png[/attachment:d8eb7]

Looks;
- BG is not 1024x768, resize
- Use this colors ??nty
Combo1 : 156,133,188
Combo2 : 239,199,143
Combo3 : 147,236,169
Combo4 : 128,164,193

Normal;
- 02:03:030 >> align with (1) no

Hard;
- Is okk ~

Insane;
- Is okk ~

* Star :3
thank you for modding
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, but if I point something out it's because I believe it will help your map!
[General]
Source: Touhounah its fine
Tags: add Undefined Fantastic Object th12nah
Disable countdown as it doesn't even fit.done
Combo burst width must be below 500 px, reduce it please.fixed

[Insane]
02:21:070 (1) - I dont like how this note is flying off, makes like no sense to me other than the fact that a voice starts here, maybe delete this note and start the spinner here instead????
02:50:089 (1,2) - The flow here feels a little awkward, maybe center this slider and make it go wavy (like ~) and stack the next note at the end?nah
03:04:991 (9) - Considering how good your sliders are so far consider making this one have a less sharp corner on the inner side?fixed

[Normal]this is fine
Please avoid using different slider speeds on the easiest difficulty, although you could try a not so slow one instead so the change isn't too much, but they are also screwing up your sliders making them have invisible ticks.
Can you please finish mapping this diff until the end? ._.
Roddie
Hello :P

Blue:Suggestions.
Violet: I Really think you should fix this in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed.

Normal:

00:13:227 (1)-Add a finish?
00:16:364 (2)-^?
00:49:305 (2)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
01:44:207 (2)-Add a finish????


Hard:

00:53:619 (3)-Move one grid up.
01:06:560 (3)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:31:658 (3)-^
01:44:207 (3)-^????
03:13:423 (4)-Add a finish???


Insane:

01:06:560 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:19:109 (1)-^
01:22:246 (2)-Add a finish.
01:31:658 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:44:207 (3)-^????
01:56:756-^

03:52:050 (3)-Spacing???? D:

Cool. 8-)

Star!
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
thank you
Rokodo
Last minute taiko!

http://puu.sh/gZt

Remember to Full Submit + add my tags to the other diffs - Rokodo Roko-Don
Preview point might need changing? Up to you.
Frill
umm..If Hijiri Byakuren Tags is added, might be good though are good.

[Normal]

02:50:874 (1) -I think that the last volume disappears. but okayy

[Hard]

01:05:972 -(X) mm..Why don't you add circle? beats according to the sound.

[Insane]

Looks good^^


That's only suggestions >.<
Nice map~
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Frill wrote:

umm..If Hijiri Byakuren Tags is added, might be good though are good.

[Normal]

02:50:874 (1) -I think that the last volume disappears. but okayy

[Hard]

01:05:972 -(X) mm..Why don't you add circle? beats according to the sound.done

[Insane]

Looks good^^


That's only suggestions >.<
Nice map~
Inozuma
Everything seems fine, it's a good map :D
Star~
wmfchris
aabc will take the mod.

star~
Eirene
[Insane] :
00:13:227 (1,2,1) - I don't understand why there is a new combo here *.*
00:24:011 (1,2) - here too ...
etc...
too many small combos imo

you should not use combo for "artistic" reasons ><
yet ... maybe you've done that for a good reason...

nothing to change anyway, it's already great while you don't have a new combo on each beat xD


I don't mod easy and normal diffs anymore 'cause I don't play both of them ... I hope you'll understand this *.*
( btw, Lunatic instead of Insane ?? ... yeah yeah touhou :| )
xierbaliti
Custom clap is a bit noisy in Hard diff :<

-Hard-
01:06:168 (3) - remove it
01:05:972 (2) - +whistle
01:12:834 (1) - remove clap from slider's start and add finish like 01:19:109 (3) -
01:14:403 (2) - ^
02:39:109 (1,2,3) - remove clap?
03:24:599 (2) - >_> remove clap from slider's start and add finish
03:32:442 (3) - add finish at slider's start

-Insane-
01:30:285 (1) - add a circle here?

*star*
aabc271
Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Roko-Don's Taiko]

01:17:540 (456~462) The dddkkkd scared me a bit at my first play, but it is fine~

01:31:266 (552~553) Change these 2 notes to k ?

Actually i found nothing in this diff. Great job~ :)
I like both the patterns ( eg: 00:38:325~00:44:599, really nice patterns ) and the song~
Star and good luck~ ;)
No kudosu for this post please~
Garven
As per your request:

[Normal]
There are a bunch of unused timing sections after you end the map. Delete them please.
Difficulty settings are really high for the easiest difficulty of the set. Lower HP drain by 2 and maybe AR/OD by 1.
00:50:874 (1) - Remove whistle from the slider slide.
Instead of using .5 sections, I found .7 to feel much better.
01:44:207 (2) - Normal finish on the start of this?
01:45:776 (1) - Remove whistle from the slider slide. Geh, there are a few others including in other difficulties. Take 'em out if you want.

[Hard]
01:05:776 (1) - I found this to sound better with just a regular soft set and remove the whistle from the 3.
02:24:207 (1) - ^
02:48:913 - Should switch to soft hit sounds here
03:05:187 - Really awkward spot to have a break.
Might be better if you removed the spinner at 03:13:619 - and used a single note and used that gap until the vocals kick in again as the break.
03:16:756 - Make the fountain start here.
03:54:403 (1) - Remove that finish from the end of this. Doesn't fit at all. Actually, it might be because the slider is going one repeat too long.

[Insane]
02:10:481 (2) - This slider's kinda lop-sided lookin'
03:16:658 - Make the fountain start on the beat please
03:54:403 (1) - Same as from hard.

[Rokodon]
00:32:050 (176) - These quasi-triplets felt kinda weird against the song's style. Geh, you use 'em quite a bit.

Good set of maps here~
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
updated.
kioukiou
Modded in irc.

Timing : offset +8 ms , 678 -> 686

looks good now. :)

bubble.
Sakura
Oh cool! can i pop it over inconsistent diff lengths now? *runs*
happy30
I guess i can delete my WIP guest diff?
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
whoops
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Sakura Hana wrote:

Oh cool! can i pop it over inconsistent diff lengths now? *runs*
go ahead and walk away
Xgor
Source changed bla bla, and as you wanted it I will not rebubble it until Happy30's diff is done and stuff.

(I could go on with a mayor mod on taiko but my taste when it comes to taiko difficulites is different of what "authentic taiko map" is so it's no idea.)
Verdisphena
Go ouranhshc, GO
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
01:05:784 (1) - It'd be sexy if this was quiet, and then the large hit happens at the beginning of the kiai.

That's about it.
Musty
Starred ;)
Sakura
You will really won't like me at all if you dont finish mapping that Normal
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
the normal diff is finished
Cheery
;)
Raikal
star!!!!!! :)
James2250
Don't really mind if easiest difficulty isn't mapped all the way to the end
Ouran isn't waiting for guest difficulty anymore it seems
Can you get someone to double check timing? I get around 678 offset but might just be me...wait what that was old offset...yeah need double check

Normal:
Tick rate 0,5 sounds better to me
00:10:097 (1,1) - would be nice if you made this into 1 spinner for a Normal
01:05:980 (2) - add note?

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
Looks good

Taiko:
Looks good (not rly taiko modder though)
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

James2250 wrote:

Don't really mind if easiest difficulty isn't mapped all the way to the end
Ouran isn't waiting for guest difficulty anymore it seems
Can you get someone to double check timing? I get around 678 offset but might just be me...wait what that was old offset...yeah need double check

Normal:
Tick rate 0,5 sounds better to me done
00:10:097 (1,1) - would be nice if you made this into 1 spinner for a Normaldone
01:05:980 (2) - add note?nah

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
Looks good

Taiko:
Looks good (not rly taiko modder though)
James2250
Ok timing fixed - thanks Lybydose (ahem shows how far off I was)

Rebubbled~
Sakura
Whatever happened to the creator's words?
Larto
Take this as the background image for a pretty thumbnail.


Insane could use another break, but it works either way.

Hard:
03:05:199 (7) - Move 1/2 forward, or place another note on 03:05:395 -. Sounds better.

Normal makes me sad because you didn't map to the end.
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