不過我在別的地方看過會變UNRANKABLE的...
所以暫時不敢改.

所以應該是可以的...

[General]
為什麼沒有kiai呢?這首歌聽起來是應該要有kiai的

[Easy]
00:15:823 (1) - 結尾對齊
00:43:515 (1) - finish 還有這邊該加個kiai
01:51:208 - kiai
02:12:746 (2,4) - stack

[Normal]
00:28:515 - 不要break time!
01:20:631 - 少了什麼的感覺
01:23:323 - ^
01:32:939 - ^

[CHAS' Hard]
kiai照Easy
00:21:015 (6,7) -別用finish阿
01:36:015 - 應該用note. spinner加在後面

[vincerio's Insane]
kiai照Easy
00:18:708 (1,2) - 2連不適合 (用3連?)
01:04:285 (5,7) - stack
02:12:746 (1,4) - 讓他堆疊起來吧

star~

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
為什麼沒有kiai呢?這首歌聽起來是應該要有kiai的

[Easy]
00:15:823 (1) - 結尾對齊
00:43:515 (1) - finish 還有這邊該加個kiai
01:51:208 - kiai
02:12:746 (2,4) - stack

[Normal]
00:28:515 - 不要break time!
01:20:631 - 少了什麼的感覺
01:23:323 - ^
01:32:939 - ^

star~

應該all fixed了.
insane在本人來以前我可不會亂碰(除了kiai或unrankable的問題)

還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.

from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
01:22:746 (2,4) - 这里叠起来有点不好看
01:47:746 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了，换成slider
02:02:746 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:22:746 (3,4) - 这里只有一组，不算太难，不过还是建议叠起来简单点
02:28:900 (3,4,2,3) - 这两个就换成slider吧，免得让人结束的时候miss

[Normal]
00:18:708 (1) - 少一次折返，然后在00:18:900开始
00:19:477 (2,4) - 最好别这样挡住
00:22:554 (2,4) - ^
00:25:246 (5) - 试试弄个好玩的shape然后结束在00:26:400？

[CHAS' Hard]
00:12:939 (5) - change to 3 sliders is better imo , back too many times is counfusing
00:16:016 (9) - ^
00:38:132 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this : http://puu.sh/3HnX
01:25:055 (1) - too far from the spinner
01:27:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - pentagon?
02:21:401 (1) - too far

[vincerio's Insane]
00:18:900 - add circle
00:49:862 (3) - seem it is not vertical
00:57:939 (12,13) - this spacing is confusing , make it 1.5x?
01:02:169 (4) - vertical
02:21:400 (7) - repeat 1 time less , follow the sliders before it , and circle at 02:21:977

nice song

I love this song

\wcx/

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
01:22:746 (2,4) - 这里叠起来有点不好看
01:47:746 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里太难了，换成slider
02:02:746 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:22:746 (3,4) - 这里只有一组，不算太难，不过还是建议叠起来简单点
02:28:900 (3,4,2,3) - 这两个就换成slider吧，免得让人结束的时候miss
因為N個post前garven說過1/2 slider很不好所以還是算了.
我把1/2都stack了.
其他明天再搞了.
[Normal]
00:18:708 (1) - 少一次折返，然后在00:18:900开始
00:19:477 (2,4) - 最好别这样挡住
00:22:554 (2,4) - ^
00:25:246 (5) - 试试弄个好玩的shape然后结束在00:26:400？我明天再想...
其他fixed.
nice song

多謝wcx粉星&指導+妮姆芙的star.

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
[CHAS' Hard]
kiai照Easy 能不裝kiai嗎
00:21:015 (6,7) -別用finish阿 換成whistle怎麼樣lol
01:36:015 - 應該用note. spinner加在後面 完成.

thank you

wcx19911123 wrote:

[CHAS' Hard]
00:12:939 (5) - change to 3 sliders is better imo , back too many times is counfusing 改良了
00:16:016 (9) - ^ ^
00:38:132 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this : http://puu.sh/3HnX 改良了~部分完成
01:25:055 (1) - too far from the spinner 這樣就好了...
01:27:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - pentagon? 就現在這樣吧
02:21:401 (1) - too far 這樣就好了...

抱歉 我不太會英文 (所以使用中文)
thank you!

更新~
Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.) (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu

justnobody wrote:

還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.

咦咦!????
是指2:36:785~2:37:362這裡麼 囧

CHAS wrote:

justnobody wrote:
還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.

咦咦!????
是指2:36:785~2:37:362這裡麼 囧

好像而已
因為看見別的map因為這種slider而被攔住了
不過還是等下一位mat/bat到來時才算吧...

justnobody wrote:

CHAS wrote:

justnobody wrote:
還有...
hard結尾的那個slider現在好像不能rank了.

咦咦!????
是指2:36:785~2:37:362這裡麼 囧

好像而已
因為看見別的map因為這種slider而被攔住了
不過還是等下一位mat/bat到來時才算吧...

這種還是能Rank的..如果怕的話還是改改好了

Modding your map as your request. Hope it helps :3

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion.

[Easy]
00:06:592 (2) - New combo ?
00:18:515 (1) - Remove this note ? (I don't feel much sense on it, once that doesn't follow the rhythm nor the vocal)
00:31:208 (1) - Start this slider at: 00:31:015, to follow the vocal
00:32:746 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:823 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:285 (1) - Remove new combo ?
02:00:438 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:592 (2) - New combo.
02:15:054 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]
00:06:208 (1) - New combo ?
00:44:862 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:439 (7) - New combo.
01:13:900 (1) - New combo.
01:29:285 (1) - New combo ?
01:35:631 (5) - New combo.
01:36:208 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:43:515 (4) - New combo.
01:44:092 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:515 (5) - New combo.
01:58:900 (1) - Remove new combo

[CHAS's Hard]
00:06:208 (1) - New combo ?
00:24:668 (1,2) - Consider unstacking it, once that the combo looks kind blind and force an anti-jump.

Opinion:Too many forced jumps, consider changing it.

[vincerio's Insane]
00:18:804 (2) - This beat in the blue tick sounds really weird, move it to: 00:18:900.
00:21:785 (10) - I can't see the meaning of this note. Remove it cause it doesn't follow the rhythm, makes the flow odd and the spacing is also weird.
00:31:592 (6) - New combo.
00:31:785 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:900 (7) - New combo.
00:34:285 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:669 (1,2,3,4) - Change the spacing? (2) is hidden because of the overlap on the previous slider, looks odd. Blind pattern.
00:40:631 (5) - New combo.
00:41:785 (9) - New combo ?
01:34:285 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:669 (2) - New combo.
01:39:284 (6) - New combo.
01:39:477 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:592 (7) - New combo.

Opinion:Too many forced jumps, consider changing it. Also, you change in a weird way from the voice to the beats. It can make the map confusing. Still, it's a good map.

pchan's mod:
i can't remember which new combo i have done but should be about 90%...

@vincerio: that's so late...

poisonchan wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:06:208 (1) - New combo ?
00:24:668 (1,2) - Consider unstacking it, once that the combo looks kind blind and force an anti-jump.

Opinion:Too many forced jumps, consider changing it.

Thank you.


就現在這樣就好了

Colin Hou wrote:

[vincerio's Insane]:

• 00:31:208 (5) - normal-hitnormal here

1. 01:38:900 (5) - ^
2. 00:40:246 (4) - finish
3. 00:41:785 (9) - ^
4. 01:08:227 ~ 01:09:669 (T) - spinner here, mute the end
5. 01:25:246 (1,1,1,1) - finish
6. 01:47:938 (4) - ^
7. 01:49:477 (5) - ^
8. 01:56:977 (2,3) - spacing
9. hitsounds are nicely done, use more soft sliders instead of liner ones could fit the song much better imo, current spacing is fun to play btw

[

All fixed!

Thank you so much Colin Hou~

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.) (justnobody) [vincerio's Insane].osu

now late update.
it's difficult to get mod now.
...words.
it's difficult to post now.

Easy:

00:13:131 (1) - Remove NC?
00:21:977 (1) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130485
00:52:746 (4) - New combo?
02:00:438 (5) - New combo, then put one on 02:01:592 (1) and remove NC from 02:02:746 (4)?
02:12:362 (1) - Add clap
02:12:746 (2,3,4,1) - Add claps on the end
02:18:131 (2,3,4) - (nazi) Move 1 level 3 grid down?

Normal:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:50:823 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
00:52:746 (5) - New combo?
00:53:515 (1) - Remove NC?
00:54:285 (5) - New combo?
01:04:669 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
01:06:977 (7) - New combo?
01:23:515 (5) - New combo?
01:23:708 (6) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130487
02:23:900 (7) - New combo?

CHAS' Hard:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:12:939 (5) - I'm not sure I like this slider, I think you could do something more interesting here
00:16:016 (9) - ^
00:49:862 (1,1,1) - I think you could do something more interesting instead of these spinners~ (This one plays all right though, so if you want you can keep it)
01:02:170 (1,1) - ^
01:20:631 (2) - Same as 00:12:939 (5)
01:29:285 (7) - This note seems confusing, I thought it was 1/2 earlier. Perhaps move it 1/2 earlier and add a note at 01:29:477? Alternatively, you could unstack it~
01:32:939 (5) - Same as 00:12:939 (5)
01:29:285 (7) - Unstack it?
01:57:555 (4) - This slider plays all right, but I think you could make this part more interesting instead of putting just a slider
01:59:092 (4) - ^
02:00:631 (4) - ^

vincerio's Insane:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:25:054 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit the music and I think you could make this part a bit more interesting, instead of putting this slider
00:42:746 (4) - (nazi) move 1 level 4 grid right?
00:57:362 (10) - New combo
01:27:939 (7) - New combo? (Also, I'm not really sure this jump fits, but maybe it's just me )
01:41:977 (8) - New combo? (Then, remove it from (1))
02:05:054 (10) - New combo
02:14:669 (3) - Move 1 level 4 grid down
02:15:054 (6) - Move 1 level 4 grid left
02:21:208 (6) - New combo? (Then remove it from 02:22:169 (1)~)
02:35:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps space this evenly? It plays fine either way so

Nice map~ (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ☆

fast mod fast mod!
and 2kds!!

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:13:131 (1) - Remove NC?
00:21:977 (1) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130485
00:52:746 (4) - New combo?
02:00:438 (5) - New combo, then put one on 02:01:592 (1) and remove NC from 02:02:746 (4)? can't get this...but i re-placed the new combo here
02:12:362 (1) - Add clap
02:12:746 (2,3,4,1) - Add claps on the end
02:18:131 (2,3,4) - (nazi) Move 1 level 3 grid down?

Normal:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:50:823 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
00:52:746 (5) - New combo?
00:53:515 (1) - Remove NC?
00:54:285 (5) - New combo?
01:04:669 (1,2,3) - Not evenly spaced
01:06:977 (7) - New combo?
01:23:515 (5) - New combo?
01:23:708 (6) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130487
02:23:900 (7) - New combo?

Nice map~ (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ☆

should be all fixed except that one in easy.
thank you so much!

pieguy1372 wrote:

SPOILER

CHAS' Hard:

00:43:515 ~ 01:10:823 - Add Kiai?
01:51:208 ~ 02:03:515 - ^

00:12:939 (5) - I'm not sure I like this slider, I think you could do something more interesting here
00:16:016 (9) - ^
00:49:862 (1,1,1) - I think you could do something more interesting instead of these spinners~ (This one plays all right though, so if you want you can keep it)
01:02:170 (1,1) - ^
01:20:631 (2) - Same as 00:12:939 (5)
01:29:285 (7) - This note seems confusing, I thought it was 1/2 earlier. Perhaps move it 1/2 earlier and add a note at 01:29:477? Alternatively, you could unstack it~
01:32:939 (5) - Same as 00:12:939 (5)
01:29:285 (7) - Unstack it?
01:57:555 (4) - This slider plays all right, but I think you could make this part more interesting instead of putting just a slider
01:59:092 (4) - ^
02:00:631 (4) - ^

thank you~
--------------------------

Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.) (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu

突然覺得還是把1:36:015的circle拆掉比較好

你好~

Easy
00:15:823 (4) - make it more beautiful~
00:28:323 (1) - this spinner start form 00:28:131 - ?
00:37:362 (3,4) - make it more beautiful
02:23:323 (5) - ^

Normal
00:14:669 (2,3,4) - make it more beautiful
00:25:246 (x) - add a slider to 00:26:208 - ?
00:28:131 (4) - end at 00:29:285 - ?
00:57:362 (5) - ugly slider = = make it more beautiful
01:12:554 - here got a Drag Break. please fix it o.o
01:20:439 (4) - left 6 grid? x:80 y:248
01:52:746 (4) - ugly slider... make it more beautiful
02:03:323 (7) - why dont start the New Combo at here?
why i dont feel it is 'NORMAL'? i feel this is 'Hard' xD, try to make easier a bit~

CHAS's Hard

1. why your difficulty dont have KIAI time?? are you forget to add it?

00:12:939 (5) - too much of this repeating.. try to make some circle or a straight slider?
00:15:439 (6,7) - change to a slider?
00:15:824 (8) - the next slider start from here? and too much of this repeating.. try to make some circle or a straight slider?
00:23:132 (5) - add a New Combo
00:24:670 (1) - cannot see very clearly of this slider.. move out to other place...
00:28:132 (5) - add a New Combo
01:20:631 (2) - again... too much of this slider repeating.. very boring
01:32:939 (5) - ^
01:52:555 (7) - add a New Combo
02:16:978 (7) - ^
02:17:555 (1) - change to a slider...

vincerio's Insane
00:13:131 (1) - delete this New Combo?
00:22:939 (6) - add a New Combo?
00:30:631 - add a circle?
00:44:862 (6) - add a new Combo?
00:56:785 (7) - ^
01:07:362 (4,5,6,7,8) - make them close a bit
01:24:477 (5) - add a New Combo
01:41:015 (5) - ^
01:52:554 (6) - ^
02:04:669 (8) - ^

----
Good Luck~!

general:
1.looks like your mp3 is 256bits ...
here http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5173G8OW
i make it 192 bits xD


normal:
00:18:900 (1,2) - spacing?
00:25:246 (x) - maybe make a slider that ends at 00:26:208 ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135692
00:28:515 (x) - ^ it feels odd to have the gap here
00:59:092 (x) - just...add note here maybe.... it feels...strange without notes here
01:33:131 (5) - - move it to 01:32:939 (5) - ?

hard: (i really can't mod this map because it has solid pattern xD )
kiai.....oh well.... you might be bored to get this mod xD
01:32:170 (1,2,3,4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135706

nothing more that i can find

insane:
00:49:862 (3) - well... this is super nazi xD, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135715 make it straight

can't find anything else only kiai xD

looks like that's it xD

Sorry to late mod.

[Easy]

1. 00:43:515 (1,2) - Extend (1) to 00:44:285. And move (2) to 00:44:669.

[Normal]

1. 00:14:285 (5) - Add new combo.
2. 00:14:477 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:16:592 (1) - Extend it to 00:18:323?
4. 00:28:323 (1) - ^ to 00:29:477? This spinner is a bit short as Normal diff.
5. 00:40:246 (5) - Up 1 grid.
6. 00:53:515 (4) - Add new combo.
7. 00:53:708 (1) - Remove new combo.
8. 00:58:131 (6,1,2) - Too near and random spacing...you must fix them.

[CHAS's Hard]

1. 00:23:132 (5,6,7,8) - This every beat clap doesn't fit the music imo...
2. 00:25:824 (5) - It's kinda hard to read this note because it is hidden by previous slider. However not so hard, you have not to fix it.
3. 01:26:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add clap on some notes.
4. 01:39:478 (1) - Remove clap.
5. 01:39:670 (2) - Add clap.
6. 01:41:016 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:42:555 (1,2) - ^
8. 01:44:093 (1,2) - ^
9. 02:36:978 (2) - Good pattern as END~

[vincerio's Insane]

• 
  OD+1.

1. 00:01:400 (x) - Put a note?
2. 00:02:939 (x) - ^
3. 00:04:477 (x) - ^
4. 00:18:900 (x) - ^
5. 00:57:362 (10) - Combo is too long, add new combo?
6. 01:02:746 (6) - Right 1 grid?
7. 01:14:285 (1,2) - (nazi) Spacing is kinda wide. Down (1) 1 grid?
8. 01:26:977 (4) - Make it one circle and one slider to follow the vocal?
   
9. 01:39:284 (6) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:39:477 (1) - Add new combo.
11. 02:14:861 (4,5,6) - Looks weird for me...left (6) 1 grid?

Cute song<3
Good luck~

Index-San wrote:

hard: (i really can't mod this map because it has solid pattern xD )
kiai.....oh well.... you might be bored to get this mod xD
01:32:170 (1,2,3,4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135706

nothing more that i can find

thank you

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

CHAS's Hard

1. why your difficulty dont have KIAI time?? are you forget to add it?

00:12:939 (5) - too much of this repeating.. try to make some circle or a straight slider?
00:15:439 (6,7) - change to a slider?
00:15:824 (8) - the next slider start from here? and too much of this repeating.. try to make some circle or a straight slider?
00:23:132 (5) - add a New Combo
00:24:670 (1) - cannot see very clearly of this slider.. move out to other place...
00:28:132 (5) - add a New Combo
01:20:631 (2) - again... too much of this slider repeating.. very boring
01:32:939 (5) - ^
01:52:555 (7) - add a New Combo
02:16:978 (7) - ^
02:17:555 (1) - change to a slider...

thank you

Suzully wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]

1. 00:23:132 (5,6,7,8) - This every beat clap doesn't fit the music imo...
2. 00:25:824 (5) - It's kinda hard to read this note because it is hidden by previous slider. However not so hard, you have not to fix it.
3. 01:26:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add clap on some notes.
4. 01:39:478 (1) - Remove clap.
5. 01:39:670 (2) - Add clap.
6. 01:41:016 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:42:555 (1,2) - ^
8. 01:44:093 (1,2) - ^
9. 02:36:978 (2) - Good pattern as END~

thank you


Download: OToGi 8 - Akazukin-chan Goyoujin (i-pop ver.) (justnobody) [CHAS' Hard].osu

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