Dono027 wrote:

Je me permets le français car tu n'as pas de gd en standart

MDR La diff insane "Dépréssion" xD Mais bon, je trouve pas que la musique est dépréssive. (Personnellement je l'aurais nommée "Cri" ou "Crier tout haut" pour faire allusion au titre (je sais pas écrire allusion))

Facile

01:49:580 (1) - Mets ce slider en face de la fin du précédent

Moyen

00:33:791 (1) - Fais tourner un peu le slider

01:53:054 (7) - OMG Non, remonte ca x) + tourne le slider précédent dans l'autre sens (la fin allant vers le haut) Je n'ai que remonter le cercle. J'aime bien le flow qui s'est crée avec le silder parce que ça fait un autre type de flow.

01:53:054 (7) - J'i vu que c'est symétrique avec le (1) mais tourne un peu le slider pour que ca passe mieux avec la suite. Eh?

02:28:738 (7) - Même chose sauf que c'est pas symétrique. Qu'est-ce qui n'est pas symmétrique avec?

Difficile

00:06:949 - Mets toi ici et tu verras une blanket non fix

01:16:738 (1,2) - C'est quoi cette blanket ? hé oui j'ai de bons yeux :p JC'est un blanket... mais j'ai décidé de changer le pattern.

Voila, bon bah, si tu as d'autres maps francophones, retourne dans notre modding queue & poste, j'accepterai avec plaisir !

1. http://puu.sh/ma5iy/3b9354a029.png
2. 00:12:949 (2) - Move this to x:240 y:40 ? Flows better that way imo.
3. 00:22:738 (2) - I don't think this matches anything. Kinda hard to grasp the rhythm because the vocal started here 00:22:896 . And there's no drum here, unlike what you did on 00:08:527 (3,4,5) - 00:18:633 (3,4,5) .
4. 01:07:896 (2,3) - The flow could be improved here, maybe tweak the tail/rotate a bit?

1. There are some spacing errors. > 02:09:159 (6,7) - 02:28:738 (7,8) - 03:27:475 (4,5) - 03:50:212 (7,8) . I might missed some though.
2. http://puu.sh/ma6fr/3cb6896927.png
3. 01:32:843 (4) - How about moving this to x:164 y:324 for a balanced spacing?
4. 02:11:370 (3) - Maybe rotate this a bit to the right for a better flow?
5. 03:22:738 (4,5,6) - Maybe it's just me, but I think the flow here's kinda weird.

1. http://puu.sh/ma6H2/556b8b7ee7.png
2. 00:59:054 (1,2,3) - A small overlap here. Same applies to 01:19:264 (1,2,3) .
3. 03:39:475 (4,5,6) - Not a fan off the linear flow here though.
4. 03:58:896 (2) - Move this down a bit? (It's not touched tho, but very close) > http://puu.sh/ma76d/c3583577c3.jpg

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ Okay, I gonna treat those diffs as an ENH spread. Because I translated the diff name with google translate to ensure that. Sry if my English screws up btw. loooooool yeah it's E / N / H / I

[Facile]

1. http://puu.sh/ma5iy/3b9354a029.png Fixed.
2. 00:12:949 (2) - Move this to x:240 y:40 ? Flows better that way imo. I instead rotate 00:13:580 (3) to make the flow better, so that 00:11:054 (1,2) remains still.
3. 00:22:738 (2) - I don't think this matches anything. Kinda hard to grasp the rhythm because the vocal started here 00:22:896 . And there's no drum here, unlike what you did on 00:08:527 (3,4,5) - 00:18:633 (3,4,5) . Removed the circle.
4. 01:07:896 (2,3) - The flow could be improved here, maybe tweak the tail/rotate a bit? I turned the slider straight.

[Moven]

1. There are some spacing errors. > 02:09:159 (6,7) - 02:28:738 (7,8) - 03:27:475 (4,5) - 03:50:212 (7,8) . I might missed some though. Ye, good catch.
2. http://puu.sh/ma6fr/3cb6896927.png Fixed.
3. 01:32:843 (4) - How about moving this to x:164 y:324 for a balanced spacing? Yes, the current was ugly lel.
4. 02:11:370 (3) - Maybe rotate this a bit to the right for a better flow? Yep.
5. 03:22:738 (4,5,6) - Maybe it's just me, but I think the flow here's kinda weird. Not so much of a natural flow, but it doesn't have to and I think it's a nice flow, so I'll keep it.

[Difficile]

1. http://puu.sh/ma6H2/556b8b7ee7.png Fixed.
2. 00:59:054 (1,2,3) - A small overlap here. Same applies to 01:19:264 (1,2,3) . Fixed.
3. 03:39:475 (4,5,6) - Not a fan off the linear flow here though. Alright, I hope the new flow is good.
4. 03:58:896 (2) - Move this down a bit? (It's not touched tho, but very close) > http://puu.sh/ma76d/c3583577c3.jpg Alright.

Hope my mod helped somehow, good luck~

1. Can you change BG file : .png -> .jpg to reduce filesize of map?

1. I prefer to decrease AR and OD to 2, because it's only 1,30 star, 95 BPM and this is a calm song.
2. 00:06:001 - This greenline is unnessesary. Better to delete it, i guess.
3. 00:38:843 (1) - How about ctrl H this slider to have a better transision with 00:38:212 (5) - and doesn't ruin it in 00:40:106 (2) - tho.
4. 01:39:475 (1) - Idk, but i think this should be on 40|300 to have a better blanket imo.
5. 03:45:791 (1) - 416|144 for nicer flow sense?

1. 00:04:738 - 00:06:001 - are unnessesary greenlines. Delete it !!
2. 01:06:633 (1) - Why you don't end this slider on white line? I want to map this sound buddy.
3. 01:52:106 (6) - I highly recommend to ctrl J this slider just for da gameplay.
4. 03:28:106 (6) - Just proposition -> Maybe do a similar curve as you have in 03:29:370 (7,8) - ?

1. 00:05:370 - and 00:06:001 - are unnessesary greenlines, prefer to delete it.
2. 01:00:949 (6) - Curve this a little? Weird proposition from me, but it makes sense with flow to 01:01:422 (7) - so maybe?
3. 02:22:422 (1,2) - Blanket is not perfect at all. Fix it.
4. 02:40:738 (3) - Try to avoid overlap? I just made this thingy to avoid it.

Kalibe wrote:

Idk what she singing, but i like it :3

1. Can you change BG file : .png -> .jpg to reduce filesize of map? lel ok

Facile :

1. I prefer to decrease AR and OD to 2, because it's only 1,30 star, 95 BPM and this is a calm song. Alright, I decreased the settings. And this song is not "calm" to me lel
2. 00:06:001 - This greenline is unnessesary. Better to delete it, i guess. Nothing unrankable, but I'll delete it for tidiness.
3. 00:38:843 (1) - How about ctrl H this slider to have a better transision with 00:38:212 (5) - and doesn't ruin it in 00:40:106 (2) - tho. Alright.
4. 01:39:475 (1) - Idk, but i think this should be on 40|300 to have a better blanket imo. Nazi, but okay.
5. 03:45:791 (1) - 416|144 for nicer flow sense? Alright.

Moyen :

1. 00:04:738 - 00:06:001 - are unnessesary greenlines. Delete it !! Fine.
2. 01:06:633 (1) - Why you don't end this slider on white line? I want to map this sound buddy. Applied.
3. 01:52:106 (6) - I highly recommend to ctrl J this slider just for da gameplay. Fine.
4. 03:28:106 (6) - Just proposition -> Maybe do a similar curve as you have in 03:29:370 (7,8) - ? I don't mind.

Difficile :

1. 00:05:370 - and 00:06:001 - are unnessesary greenlines, prefer to delete it. Yep.
2. 01:00:949 (6) - Curve this a little? Weird proposition from me, but it makes sense with flow to 01:01:422 (7) - so maybe? I agree with that.
3. 02:22:422 (1,2) - Blanket is not perfect at all. Fix it. I tried.
4. 02:40:738 (3) - Try to avoid overlap? I just made this thingy to avoid it I changed the pattern..

Ok, that's all. GL !!~

• General
  03:25:264 - The kiai time stops for a mere second. Why does it stop there at all?

• Moyen
  03:02:843 (1) - I would increase the length of the spinner

• Depression
  I would suggest adding the "clap" hitsound to 00:02:527 (4,5,6,7); 00:07:580 (4,5,6,7); 00:12:633 (4,5,6,7); 00:17:685 (4,5,6,7) and maybe 00:22:738 (4,5,6)

TurtleStuffs wrote:

Love the music! Good map, barely found anything on facile or difficile From my modding queue:

• General
  03:25:264 - The kiai time stops for a mere second. Why does it stop there at all? This part sang two times the chorus, so having the kiai time separated in-between instead of a full long kiai will make an emphasis on both parts.

• Moyen
  03:02:843 (1) - I would increase the length of the spinner Pretty short to me too. Extended.

• Depression
  I would suggest adding the "clap" hitsound to 00:02:527 (4,5,6,7); 00:07:580 (4,5,6,7); 00:12:633 (4,5,6,7); 00:17:685 (4,5,6,7) and maybe 00:22:738 (4,5,6) I'd rather not. The clap doesn't fit very well for this soft part, and they're quite loud. Also, the drum sounds are basically the same throughout this part, like 00:00:949 (1,2) - 00:06:001 (1,2) - and etc.

Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello sheela901! Thank you for Requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Wow first time Modding a France Song. Let's see if i can help you!

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: --
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: For what are all these Inherited Timing Points? Volume? It's okay when you use these to Hitsound in Mania but its way more comfortable when you use the Sample Menu. You can Open the Sample Window with CTRL + SHIFT + I. Then just select a Note, select the Hitsounds you would like to add, adjust the Volume and klick on "Apply" Oh cool! I didn't know this. Maybe I'll use it in the future, haha.

Just in case you don't know that you can use this

NM

00:46:422 (46422|2) - Suggest to move this to 4. To avoid the Jack Pattern with 00:46:106 (46106|2) - that doesn't fit here. I decided to instead move 00:46:106 (46106|3) to 4 as it was going high.
00:48:475 - I think you have here a note missing. According to 00:53:527 (53527|1) - etc. All right.
01:00:317 (60317|0) - Move to 3 and 01:00:633 (60633|2) - to 2. The 3-2-3 trill really nice emphasize the drum here and you also break the repeating 3-2-1 pattern that you use here. Ah yes! You're right, it does fit very well like this.
01:07:580 (67580|1) - would move this to 3. More comfortable play also removes the Jack Pattern here that doesn't fit. Yup.
01:21:791 - Add a note? According to 01:11:685 - etc . Also it has Drum + LN sound. Also you have here 01:24:317 - a extra note Yes, that's true.
02:00:317 (120317|0) - Move to 2 to Avoid 01:59:685 (119685|0,120001|0,120317|0) - Yes.
02:21:791 (141791|0,144317|0,146843|1) - These LN's doesn't fit here. They are just to Long. In Mania is it important that LN's are not to long Mapped as there sound. We can hear clearly that the LN's should be 1/2 beat long. Something that would fit more is this:

Screen

It makes it different to the previous Part and fit also to the Music.
If you accept my Suggestion, what i highly recommend, please check also the Next LN's. They are to long too. Oh, I see. All right, the next LNs have been taken care of.
02:42:633 - Why not add here a note? I know it has not the drum's you follow. But this one is on a Mainbeat, also it has a nice piano. With a note on 3 or 4 you could really nice emphasize this. Lel, I don't remember what was the reason, but I'll add it because I also think it's needed.
02:52:106 (172106|2,172738|1) - CTRL + H for better Pitch catch.
02:57:159 (177159|1,177791|0) - CTRL + G for Pitch.
02:59:054 (179054|1) - Move to 3 and 02:59:685 (179685|2) - to 1 for Piano Pitch.
03:41:685 (221685|3) - Move maybe to 1? To avoid 03:41:054 (221054|3,221370|3,221685|3) - Not this one, but 03:41:370 (221370|3) - I want to converse the note 03:41:685 (221685|3) on the fourth column because in the part, the clap are mostly on that column, so it's best for consistency here.

HD

1st: for a 2,4* Map you use way to many 3 Noted-Chords also you have a lot unnecessary Jack Pattern here what makes the song unneded harder abd worser to play. Let me Point some out:
00:59:054 (59054|1,59054|3,59054|2) -
01:01:580 (61580|0,61580|2,61580|1) -
01:09:159 (69159|2,69159|1,69159|3) -
01:11:685 (71685|1,71685|0,71685|2) -

It's more then enough to Map the really loud Crash here with the 3 Noted Chords like here 00:56:527 - . That fit well. emphasize very good the crash.
But these i pointed out for you are just not needed. They emphasize nothing. Yes there is a deep Piano on it but its not loud enough to get Emphasized by 3-Noted Chords. Also it makes this really cool and Calm song unneded hard.

Now lets go over to the Jack Pattern. I know its low BPM and its not that hard to play, but still You Jackpattern in this Song emphasize nothing. Really nothing. Let me Point some out:
00:56:527 (56527|3,56843|3,57159|3,57475|3) -
00:58:422 (58422|3,58738|3,59054|3,59370|3,59685|3) -
01:00:949 (60949|2,61264|2,61580|2,61896|2,62212|2) -
01:05:685 (65685|3,66001|3,66317|3,66633|3,66949|3,67264|3) -
And many more. Should you accept my Suggestion to remove the unnecessary 3-Noted Chords its way easier to get here better Balance. Let me give you some suggestions how you could map this way better:

Let's try it here: 00:58:422 -

Screen

By removing that one unnecessary 3-Noted Chord we see you can arrange the pattern way more comfortable to play. The 3-Noted Stairs emphasize the Drums very well and play really nice.


Then we go over this this: 01:00:633 -
We have here a really evil 01:00:633 (60633|2,60949|2,61264|2,61580|2,61896|2,62212|2) - 6 Noted 1/2 Jack that emphasize nothing. A good way to rearrange the Pattern here is like this:

Screen

You see it? There is no change in the Pattern. There is not even need to move them because they are Mapped very well. All i have do is remove 01:01:580 (61580|2) - from the Unneded 3-Noted Chord.
Your Chords here 01:00:949 (60949|2,60949|3,61264|1,61264|2,61580|1,61580|0) - are way enough for this Part. They Emphasize the strong Drums here very well and are also comfortable placed. It was perfect and got destroyed by the 3-Noted Chord :c


Last but not least we have this: 01:05:685 -
The problem here is. Both 3-Noted Chords are well placed. We have Bells and we have a Crash. But the Pattern could be better arranged here for more comfortable play. Let's try this:

Screen

This fits more and is way better to play. The two 3-Noted Chords emphasize the Crash and the Bells really well also the two Noted Chords are well placed and give's a very good Handbalance.


Alright. Thats all to this. Please check the Whole song by yourself. To point out every one would be just to much now and would take the whole night.
I highly recommend to change this. It don't destroy your song. Makes it better to play. Gives better Feeling to the Song and don't reduce the Starrating too much.

Wow! This is really good! Okay, now I understand much, but I might still have flaws when I check and fix this type of issue lel. Let's see.

Let's continue with the Mod

01:14:527 (74527|3) - Move to 3. You know why.
01:25:896 - :

Screen

This fits good here. You had only one note placed here 01:26:527 - but its same sound like the other Chords. This Pattern now Emphasize the drum really good. Also it keeps consistency.

01:59:685 - You probably know what to do here in the Whole kiai part
02:21:633 (141633|0) - Move to 3. The 1/4 Jack here doesn't fit with the LN but if you want to keep it as 1/4 jack move 02:21:475 (141475|1) - to 3 too or move both notes to 2. Up to you I even think on 2 they would fit better. Yes, I also think that both on 2 fits better.

02:30:001 - I highly recommend to rearrange here a bit. Many notes at the same hand like a Hold are just awkward to hit.
How about this:

Screen

It fit very well to the song, removes the Notes from the Same hand like the Hold, that makes it way more comfortable to play c:

02:42:633 - Same like i say'd in the normal. It's sad that you doesn't Map the Piano here on the Main Beat. I would add at least one note.
02:50:212 - Add here one? According to the NM because in the Normal you have here a Note with Hold together. Or remove the Note in the NM. It's up to you but keep it consistency.
02:55:264 - Same like above. In the NM you have here a Note with LN.
03:58:422 (238422|3) - Remove. No need for a 3-Noted Chord. There is no Loud sound on this. At least not that loud that would justify a 3-Noted chord

Phew that was a really long Mod. Like i say'd you need more work in the HD. The diff is good Mapped but for a 2.4* diff just overmapped. You have to many 3-Noted Chords that are just unnecessary. They make the Song so uncomfrotable to play :c Even when it's low BPM.

At least the Song is cool and i'm pretty sure with more Mods and players Feedback you can make the HD really nice to play!

Good luck furterway with your Mapset!

Shad0w1and wrote:

STD only
m4m
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/390619

[De]
00:34:738 (2,3,4) - spacing between these objects is confusing, if you do not fix the spacing, you should try nc 00:35:370 (3) - , because this is where you switched from vocal to drum.
00:40:422 (3,4,5) - ^ For noth points, I arranged the rhythms to follow the piano instead of the vocals. After hearing them more and more, it sounds weird honestly because they start and end on a 1/8 tick, but fortunately, I hear some piano sounds, so I decided to follow these instead.
02:31:580 (5,6,7) - i suggest use this pattern, it flows better for me, but up to you i guess Cooool.

SPOILER

00:55:264 (2) - NC suggested, also latter patterns 01:58:422 (2) - Okay.
really nice diff, nice hs, nice sliders, one star just for the diff yeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
oh sb is also good yeeeeee

[Diff]
00:40:422 (3,1) - kind of too close compare to your previous patterns I don't see the problem here. The pattern is pretty much clear to me.

SPOILER

00:55:264 (3) - nc suggested Alright.
00:57:791 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - DS lock on plz Hmm... The spacing is constant here.
01:20:527 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed.
01:36:317 (4,1) - blanket
01:49:580 (1,2) - maybe blanket
02:24:948 (1,2,3) - ^ Honestly, I don't want to ruin this pattern.
02:29:370 (6) - ^
02:32:527 (1,2,3) - make them same spacing But they are...
02:33:791 (5,6,7) - ^ Same thing goes to this one...
well, i will stop here, you might review your spacing for the hard, these little fixes make this diff looks much better(maybe next time you want DS lock on for eash section, especially for the clam part of the song lol) Some of your points don't have any flaws in the spacing, but I did fix a fe.
01:58:422 - suggest a hit obj here and NC Agreed.
03:20:212 - this is a red stick slider and does not deserve a high DS imo, 03:19:896 (6) - could have larger DS The large distance is following the build up on 03:19:896 because the drum slowly gets stronger and louder, so it made an emphasis. But I'm nerfing it due to inconsistency.

[Moyen]
01:19:264 (5) - blanket This is intended, so no fix for this point.
good

[Fe]
01:57:159 (1,1) - ^ Okay.
good

Zerss wrote:

Don't name the diff "Dépression", it causes problems while downloading call it "Depression" instead.



no kds

Log Off Now wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue!

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may not be useful! If this is the case feel free to ignore this mod, although feedback would be much appreciated! All mods are my opinion

[General]

Looks ok to me!

[Easy]

There are some things that I would do differently in this difficulty, for example there are lots of overlaps that in easy difficulties should really be avoided, but at such a slow bpm i'm not sure if these things are that big of an issue, i'd suggest calling a BN for things like this. Distance snapping is fine for this difficulty so apart from the overlaps which i'm not really sure on this diff looks pretty clean except for a few things.

00:11:212 (1,2,3) - I'm pretty sure this overlap/stack isn't allowed in easy difficulties as per ranking criteria, please correct me if i'm wrong though I believe this is perfectly fine and readable. But if this is pointed out by the others, I would change.

00:13:580 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved Alright.

00:24:948 (2,3) - Double check these are parallel (although if this is intentional, I would suggest making it more obvious (e.g a sharper angle)) This is intentional, and I don't know how should I make it obvious.

00:30:633 (2,3,4) - 3 hits in a row can be challenging to people who are really new to the game, I'd suggest using a slider to replace 2/3 Yep, I agree.

Kiai Time - There are some really nice hitsounds in this ^^ yyyey

01:36:317 (2,3,4) - Same comment as 00:30:633 (2,3,4) Alright.

02:11:685 (2,3) - Blanket can be slightly improved lol oky.

03:22:422 (3,4,5) - Same comment as 01:36:317 (2,3,4) + 00:30:633 (2,3,4)

03:43:264 (4,5) - Blanket can be slightly improved

Most of the above are applied.

[Moyen]

Only aesthetic changes here, flow is really nice ^^

00:40:738 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved

01:18:001 (3) - I would consider angling the tail of this slider further to the left since at the moment it looks sort of like a half blanket I actually like the current.

01:19:264 (5,7) - Blanket can be improved

01:34:106 (6,1) - ^

01:39:475 (1,2) - ^

02:38:843 (6,7) - ^

03:02:843 (1,1) - This is a pretty short recovery time for the slider Yeah, I thought that "this is a slow BPM, so it shouldn't be problem lel", but I decided to change to make the recovery time longer.

03:07:896 (7) - NC?

03:23:054 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved

03:43:264 (5) - NC? For the NCs, I respect a pattern, so no changes are made.

[Difficile]

00:02:527 (3,4) - I found this hard to read on first playthrough and the downbeat here isn't clickable. I'd suggest doing something like this? Here, the clickable object is on 00:03:001 instead of the the upbeat. This is because the beat is higher than what 00:02:527 (3) is hitting on. So, having 00:03:001 (4) clickable will emphasize that beat.

00:07:580 (3,4) - ^ Same reason as above.

00:12:633 (3,4) - ^ (Won't point these out anymore since you know what they look like Still the same reason above lel.

00:16:106 (1,3) - Double check these are parallel looool ok.

00:36:001 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved

00:53:685 - Missing note? Theres a pretty audible sound here It is audible, but what I'm following here is the piano.

00:59:054 (1,3) - Blanket can be improved

01:23:054 (4,6) - Double check these are parallel lol they should,

01:49:580 (1,2) - Unsure if this is a blanket, if so it can be improved if not I would suggest making this slider angular instead of curved to fit the next following straight slider Make a blanket pattern instead,

02:28:896 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved (ok so theres quiet a lot of these so I won't keep pointing them out, i'd suggest going over this difficulty though and checking them) seems minor though.

02:31:264 (4,5,6) - I would keep the distance between each of these sliders the same for a nice shape The distance is now constant, but I arranged the pattern.

03:48:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This idea is done so well ^^ nice job! Thank you!

[Depression]

You capture the flow and feel of the song extremely well in this difficulty, with the jump pattern when the 4 snares come in the chorus you get a sharp flow but during the rest of the music it is a really nice curved flow with interesting patterns, very well done here Only blankets need fixing imo for this difficulty Thank you again!

00:30:633 (5,1) - Blanket can be improved

01:04:106 (1,2) - ^

01:51:475 (5,1) - ^ (again this happens relatively often so I won't point these out anymore)

[]

Hope this helped you out! Sorry for so many blanket changes but it's all I could really find q.q

1. seems nice to me

1. 00:45:159 (2,3) - maybe can flow this?
2. 01:16:738 (1,2,3) - move 2 3 a little above may flow better imo (or a triangle
3. 02:00:633 (2,3) - seems to be the only stack in this diff, and I didn't find special reason to do this....

1. 00:13:580 (1) - 00:18:633 (1) - I guess the rhythms are similar but they have different ds
2. 00:24:948 (2,3) - maybe no need to change ds( just suggest, look fine as well currently
3. 00:30:317 (3,4,5,6) - 6 change ds a lot and in similar place like 00:38:527 have no note
4. 00:52:738 (3,4,5) - similar click have ds 1.5x(a slider then two clicks
   some tiny suggestions and i noticed that you change a lot in the rest, so i do not check that careful in the rest. It looks fine to me generally. Just some suggestion about pattern hope can help

cHelli wrote:

Hi Sheela,
I saw the link in your queue and I guess if I can m4m with you? Unfortunately, no. Any mod / M4M requests are handled in the queue, which is not open, so you can't request anytime.
hope below can be helpful lol

STD only ofc

[Facile]

1. seems nice to me

[Moyen]

1. 00:45:159 (2,3) - maybe can flow this? Unless you have a suggestion, the current looks and plays fine to me.
2. 01:16:738 (1,2,3) - move 2 3 a little above may flow better imo (or a triangle Alright.
3. 02:00:633 (2,3) - seems to be the only stack in this diff, and I didn't find special reason to do this.... True. I unstacked the objects.

[Difficile]

1. 00:13:580 (1) - 00:18:633 (1) - I guess the rhythms are similar but they have different ds Alright.
2. 00:24:948 (2,3) - maybe no need to change ds( just suggest, look fine as well currently Pretty distinguishable.
3. 00:30:317 (3,4,5,6) - 6 change ds a lot and in similar place like 00:38:527 have no note Changed.
4. 00:52:738 (3,4,5) - similar click have ds 1.5x(a slider then two clicks They look fine, like the one before.
   some tiny suggestions and i noticed that you change a lot in the rest, so i do not check that careful in the rest. It looks fine to me generally. Just some suggestion about pattern hope can help From my view, I'm not sure what to change. I think everything is here.

it's late at night so i give up here....cool map anyway, amazing storyboard and hitsound as well

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/395781

here my map, it's kinda short that have drain time about 2 min all diffs totally....
I will be really appreciate if you accept it
thx in advance!

sheela901 wrote:

Thank you for the check, cHelli! Unfortunately, I don't like your song. I actually dislike those type of songs, they're rather annoying and it is not a song for me. Besides, if you want to M4M with me, you should advise me first. I will see your map and song, and I will accept or not. Otherwise, this happens. Again, sorry.

Reditum wrote:

oh my god roasted bahhahahahaha

anyways

Insane:
00:01:896 (3) - So the repeat isn't actually mapped to anything that I can actively hear, so you might not want that. Apply to all similar patterns.
00:42:317 (3) - this overlap is a bit much lol.
01:11:527 (4) - This combocolor is hard to see because it's a very similar color with the background, consider using a different combocolor for this part (and possibly just remove this combocolor since I'm sure this isn't the only time it happens). Apply to all similar patterns and diffs
Not gonna waste your time with pointing out a bunch of specifics, but just make sure that your claps are always on the red ticks. there's some claps missing sporadically thoughtout the kiais

Hard:
Fine

Normal:
01:55:896 (2,3) - While there's no overlaps here technically, this is just like kind of a really boring pattern. You have so much space to work with, you don't need to recycle the space you were previously using.

Easy:
Consider making your combos at the beginning of every measure instead of every 2 measures. It'll make for really small combos, but it makes sense with the phrasing of the music.
00:36:001 (3) - Remove this so it isn't so dense?
00:41:054 (3) - ^ Mostly just because this is the easiest diff and lots of notes can be a little overwhelming, especially in the softer sections. In the kiai, it's okay to go a little harder.

Really short mod, sorry ;w;. It's technically a solid map. Kudosu stars

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

Hi! From my queue

Muzukashii

02:19:738 - d
02:24:633 - add k
02:27:159 - add d
02:34:738 - add k
03:45:791 - d
03:50:212 - d
03:50:527 - add k

Oni

01:11:527 - k
02:09:633 - ^
03:15:159 - d

This map is great

Good Luck!

Nitsches wrote:

Heyo ! As we talk in PM, i make your CTB rain diff :3
That was a bit long, sorry ;-;

Nitsch's Rain

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Mia_Rose wrote:

For OsuMania maps

NM - Difficulty

In general it´s very well made, can be played really smoothly and doesn´t need any major changes to get ranked.

The storyboard causes input laggs for me, I modded with a toaster laptop though, it could be that people with a slower computer might have the same issue. Yeah, my SB makes osu! to memory leak, so I would suggest to remove it when modding.

AiMod says that the tags don´t fit with the ones of the difficulty "Oni", better check that out Oops! Forgot to add something here. Done!

HD - Difficulty

1. Since it´s more difficult than the NM version, you can increase the HP-Drain to 7,5 instead of keeping it at 7 just like the NM version
2. Tags aren´t the same like the difficulty "Oni" again
3. 00:20:212 (20212|1,20370|0,20527|0) - you could change that triplet pattern to a stair, it would be way smoother Applied.
4. 00:37:896 (37896|1,38054|1,38212|0) - same here
5. 00:42:949 (42949|1,43106|1,43264|2) - same here, but to have a better variety, instead of a stair you can make a 2-3-2 instead of 2-2-3
6. 01:09:159 (69159|2,69159|1,69159|3) - you use this chord 2 times very close from each other, instead of placing this one on the column 2-3-4, place it 1,2,3 to have mire variety
7. 01:41:054 (101054|0,101212|0) - I recommend to place this one 2-3 so it completes a stair with the upcoming hold and make it a comfortable pattern
8. 02:25:264 (145264|3) - placing this note on the 3th column would make it more smooth
9. 02:27:791 (147791|3) - also here
10. 03:18:633 (198633|1,198633|3,198633|2) - here is that triplet chord on the right side that never appears on the left side, you can place it on the column 1-2-3 once more to have a better variety
11. 03:41:370 (221370|2,221370|1,221370|3) - also here

As conclusion, I really love the song and the beat, especially with the snare drum, NM is really nice for beginners and HD a nice gap filler between 1,8 and 2 star difficulty, really hope this one will get ranked very soon

CometicRush wrote:

Hello sheela! (from modding queue!)

Feel free to reject my suggestion, but please explain me the reason!

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Mods

NM

Whoa, it's pretty difficult to throw mods -- awesome work!

- 00:46:106 (46106|2) - Add note to 3. Same part as 01:50:527 (110527|0) ~ 01:52:106 (112106|1) Instead of 3, I added on 4 for balancing the hand movement.
- 00:46:264 (46264|0) - Consider moving to 4, to follow the flow of notes. Some edits were made here. And I don't want to follow the same flow as 00:44:843 (44843|2,45001|3,45159|2) and 00:45:475 (45475|1,45633|0,45791|1) . If I do something else, the vocals and instruments will be a little bit more emphasized.
- 00:59:370 (59370|2,59527|1) - Ctrl + H
- 01:17:370 (77370|3) - Consider making LN end to 01:18:001 (78001|3). To make it similar like this ; 01:22:422 (82422|1)
- 01:37:422 (97422|1) - Move to 3
- 02:07:580 (127580|2) - Move to 1
- 02:19:422 (139422|1,139580|2) - Ctrl + H
- 03:22:264 (202264|0,202422|2) - Repetition of similar patterns. Consider Ctrl + J (*need to adjust volumn again)


HD

- 00:18:159 (18159|1) - Move to 3
- 00:18:633 (18633|2) - Move to 2 -- 00:19:106 (19106|0) - Move to 3
- 00:27:317 (27317|2) - Move to 1
- 01:22:738 (82738|2) - Add note to 3, drumkick here.
- 01:23:054 (83054|2) - Move to 1, to avoid unnecessary jack with 01:22:738 (82738|2).
- 01:51:791 (111791|1) - Move to 1
- 02:14:370 (134370|0) - Move to 2, -- 02:14:527 (134527|1,134527|2) - Move to look like [1][4] -- 02:14:685 (134685|3) - Move to 3
- 03:30:475 (210475|3) - Move to 1, -- 03:30:633 (210633|1,210633|0) - Move to look like [3][4] ; to ensure diversity of the similar parts :p (03:30:948 (210948|0) - Move to 1 for smoothier fingermoves)

Others look awesome to me! Good mapset

Great song with adequate hitsounds & patterns!

I hope this mod become helpful to you.

Good luck with your beatmap!

Milan- wrote:

depression is using a better black color combo than the other diff tbh, pure blank doesnt look too nice lol I didn't know the colors are different. Applied.

facile
-03:20:527 (1) - 03:30:633 (1) - vocals and instruments are so clear at 03:21:159 - and 03:31:264 - tho. 3/2 can work on places like 03:31:896 (2,3) - if you wanted to change the rhythm a bit I reduced the length by 1/2 a beat.
-hitsounds before 00:23:685 - are a bit too loud imo, less -10%~ may work better. same for the rest of the diffs True.
-04:13:580 (1) - i'd try to make the last part, less 'edgy' and more readable for any kind of player uh All right.

moyen
-isnt there something like "normale" or something easier to know whether or not it's a normal?xd right now im guessing cuz star rating, but that's not how naming should work Well, okay. The word "moyen" in French basically means "normal" in English. But whatever, since it confused you, I will go with "Normal"

dificileli
-00:55:264 (1,2) - i'd increase the sv a bit more, it's so slow for how strong the drums are here xd. also helps to make the transition 1x to 1.5x less sudden. same for the rest ye Okay, I did a 1.25x -> 1.35x -> 1.50x transition.
-03:48:317 (1,2,3) - sounds more like http://puu.sh/niVu8/c96f45b28d.jpg tbh. 03:53:370 (1,2,3) - sounds better here cuz the melody isnt too clear, but before it's clearly upbeat ;; Ooh okk sounds better that way.
-04:05:685 (2,1) - jump is like doubling the max distance you use during kiai, dont you think it's a bit exaggerated? lel I didn't realized that. I reduced the spacing.

depression
-01:16:264 (2) - my ocd tells me that it should be like this http://puu.sh/niX5U/adc102d2bc.jpg Oook.
-01:38:527 (5,6,7,8) - this is the only part where you use higher distance for constant circles in these sections.. if you say it's for emphasisng something, i'd argue why dont you do the same for 01:58:422 (1,2,3,4) - too? ;; Okay, I changed the spacing here because it looked ugly. But if you say that, 01:58:422 (1,2,3,4) - have less noticeable drum beats compared to 01:38:527 (5,6,7,8) - where you can hear the drums clearly. So yeah, I altered the spacing for 01:38:527 (5,6,7,8) - to emphasize the drums but it is not the same reason to have a compact spacing for 01:58:422 (1,2,3,4) -.

weird spread, didnt like much how short reverse sliders are in normal, reverse arrow is barely visible uh To reduce the density of triplets, I decided to add repeat sliders instead.
but good maps. whenever others modes and lyrics are checked, i can icon if you need me

Aldwych wrote:

CC Sheela

M4M Requested in PM.

[General]

Je me pose la question si la diff normal devrait s’appeler "Normale" à la place. Si on parle de diff (donc une), Normal prendrait un e. Ouais ok, c'est vrai.
Attention aux SV, normalement tu est censé utiliser 1.40 comme base et à la rigueur jouer avec des modificateurs. J'ai un peu checké et je trouve (notamment pour la Oni que tu pourrais accélérer la vitesse lors du kiai (1.20 pourrais suffire (tu peux un peu plus tant que ca reste lisible, j'ai essayé avec 1.30 et je trouve ça pas mal du tout)) Je vais voir ça après.

[Muzukashii]

00:32:212 : Ce genre de son tu ne la pas mappé auparavant dans cette section, j'accepte l'idée d'avoir un peu de changements mais le fait que tu n'as pas mappé 00:33:475 me laisse a désirer qu'il y a un petit problème. Je pense qu'un choix est a faire, sois changer ce k et le mettre à l'endroit prévu pour avoir une structure de pattern cohérente sois avoir un k similaire dans un pattern ailleur (comme at 00:22:106 par exemple). Je me suis un peu dans tes mots lel, mais je l'ai déplacé à 00:33:475 -.

00:42:106 : De ce que j'ai pu voir tu utilise des k a cet endroit pour le vocal, je pense que c'est plutôt légit pour en mettre un ici au vu des vocals. Je ne vois pas ce que tu veux dire ici. La voix ne s'entend plus ici et si je mettrais un k, je ne crois pas qu'il va suivre quelque chose.

00:47:685 : Je comprends pas trop ce triple d en 1/1 voir à la rigueur l'utilisation d'un d ici. En avoir un a 00:48:159 serait plus en accord avec ce que tu as fait dans l'ensemble de la diff. Ah oui, c'est vrai.

00:50:054 : C'est dommage que les patterns que tu as mis en place on peux pas avoir un dk dkk ici. Ca passerais bien avec les vocals mais moi avec la structure courante. Uh... là, je confus avec cette phrase. Si je suis la voix, ça sonnera bizarre parce que tout dans cet map est basé sur les sounds et non pas les voix.

00:52:738 : Ici je trouve pas ton pattern logic, j'aurais personellement supprimé ce k et fait un dkd a 00:53:054. Au lieu de faire dkd, j'ai fait ddk à cause du piano sur le upbeat. J'ai aussi supprimé le k.

00:54:001 : c'est propre à toi mais tu peux aussi k en vu du piano vu qu'il y a le même son a 00:54:949, maintenant c'est toi qui voit si tu préfère suivre les beats ou le piano. Ouais, ça sonne mieux avec k.

00:55:896 : Je trouve pas que le son est assez fort pour mettre un d imo. Je vois ce que tu veux dire, mais avec cet d, ça introduit le build-up et 00:56:212 (123,124,125) -. Ça ne va pas bien si je le supprime.

01:28:580 : Je comprends pas trop ce triple k, il y des parties plus importantes comme à 01:26:212 qui mettraient plus d'être mappées que ici. J'ai enlevé le k dans le milieu.

01:48:317 : Idem, restons simple et enlevons ce k. Ok.

02:09:791 : T'as la musique et le storyboard qui te le disent clairement : Met un finisher! Ca donnera tellement plus d'impact au play et aux k! J'ai pas tilté plutôt pour ca, donc n'hésites pas a en rajouter au kiai précédent. (Idem pour 02:19:896 par exemple). Oui ouui.

02:19:738 : Je te conseille de le passer en k, c'est plus cohérent avec les précédent patterns, et ca portera moins a confusion bêtement les joueurs. Ok.

02:22:896 : Si on regarde la précédente partie similaire (post 1st kiai), on est censé avoir un k ici. Ouais.
02:24:159 : A contrario, ici on a rien, sois on reste logique et on part sur un k sois on diffère avec un d a 02:23:843 vu la batterie. Je vais avec le k.

Ces deux lignes au dessus sont valables pour 02:33:001. Je les appliqué pour eux aussi.

03:11:370 : Je trouve ce k assez inutile et a peu d'impact sur le pattern courant. Imo un d ou k ici serait plus intéréssant au vu de la musique. J'ai enlevé le k.

03:15:475 : Finisherrrrrrr Déjà mis :')

03:18:633 : Passe ce k en d, y'as des beats. Ok.
03:20:527 : Idem mais la c'est plus par cohérence avec les autres patterns et vu qu'il y a un son assez important, un contraste n'est jamais de trop. Ok.

03:25:580 : Ah bah t'as mis un finisher ici \o/ C'est la même partie, juste c'est répété deux fois.

03:35:054 : Pourquoi pas un quint ici? Et finisher à la fin. (Idem pour 03:45:791) Ok.

03:45:791++ : Dans la section finale je me suis posé plusieures questions :
- Pourquoi l'utilisation de doublés? Durant 3:30 minutes, j'en ai vu aucun alors qu'ils auraient pu être legit, mais au final c'est pas cohérent avec le reste du mapping. Et c'est assz surprenant. Je pense pas que s'en servir uniquement à la fin soit une bonne idée imo, surtout que tu pouvais très bien en faire des triples sans aucun problèmes
- L'utilisation de finishers dans des endroit on ne devrais pas en avoir. Pour moi, on doit utiliser un finisher sois parce que le son nous le dit (via la batterie), sois pour donner de l'impact à une note dans un pattern parce que un son est plus important et sort du lot par rapport à ce qu'il entoure, ou ma dernière version est pour donner un meilleur ressenti de jeu au player lorsqu'il joue la musique (si je prends un exemple sur notre 1er beatmap contest sur anti - koi, j'ai utilisé des finishers pour donner l'impréssion au joueur de faire du piano mais la c'est plus subjectif). La ou je veux en venir, c'est que j'y voit pas l'intérêt à tes finishers.
- Le spinner final, en sois je suis pas contre et pourquoi pas, mais je serais plus allé sur un slider à bas volume. Le problème du spinner est que l'on sait pas ou le joueur l'aura fini, peut-être en plein millieu ou vers la fin, et au final, ça représente pas parfaitement ce long son, d'ou mon idée de slider à bas volume à la place.

Les trois points du haut sont tout appliqués.

Au final j'aime bien le mapping style présenté. Je trouve que ca représente bien à l'ambiance de la musique et j'ai beaucoup aimé. Après je pense que y'as encore au peaufiner pour la muzukashii pour qu'elle sois parfaite.

[Oni]

00:44:843 : Je trouve pas que ce double triplé sois logique comparé a ce que tu as mappé aupparavent, honettement, un ddd k a 00:45:745 est suffisant et plus logique. Ok, j'ai enlevé 00:45:001 - et fait le pattern tu m'as dit.

00:54:949 : Sur la muzukasii t'as mis un k ici, missing on Oni. Oh.

01:06:633 : Même chose sur les finishers que la muzukashii, check les tous Tout fait.

01:26:133 : J'ai rien contre les triplés, mais je trouve pas que la musique en mérite, par contre le SV actuel est trop lent et je trouve que les objets sont trop collés ce qui rend la lecture et la compréhension assez difficile, a mon avis je pense pense pas que c'est worth d'avoir un triple dans la map. Et au final c'est le seul 1/8 de la map. Not worth at all. Ouais, j'avoue que ça ne se voir pas si bien en jouant. Je décide de supprimer la note au milieu.

01:32:212++ : Vu que on est sur la Oni, et que le son est plus complet (enfin y'a plus de "contenu auditif" si on veux) que la précédente section similaire, les doublets me vont, cependant je trouve que t'es pas allé assez loin dans ta démarche et au final on se rends compte que c'est le seul doublé de la section ce qui est pas très logique et un peu frustrant. Mon idée est de mettre sur les notes aux 3/4 (comme a 01:35:054 par exemple) une note supplémentaire 1/4 plus loin ou plus tot. Personnellement j'ai essayé 1/4 plus loin et je trouve ca pas mal du tout, n'hésites pas a essayer aussi. Bonne idée. J'ai mis des doubles dans cette partie.

Même chose pour les finishers dans le second et dernier kiai et ca n'est pas fait. Fait.

02:03:159 : Si on regarde l'ensemble du kiai on a que des 1/1 en double mais jamais en triple hormis ici, y'as surement quelque chose a corriger mais comment? Le quintuplé suivant est assez legit vu la batterie et le couper serait un bête. Par contre, rajouter un d a 02:03:949 serait ok et même logique en terme de structure si on regarde a 02:13:896. Lol, c'est la seule que je n'ai pas inclu la note. Je l'ai maintenant ajouté.

03:03:159 : Personnellement j'aurais enlevé ce d ainsi que 03:03:791 aswell, le spam 1/2 donne moins d'impact au pattern 1/4 qui suit, personnal opinion tho. Ok.

La partie finale ont les même remarque que sur la muzukashii, j'ajouterais juste que un finisher a 03:55:896 n'est pas de trop et serait cohérent a un finisher similaire a 02:30:001.

J'ai moins de chose a dire sur la oni en terme de remarques, certaines sont similare à la muzukashii donc j'ai pas d'utilité a me répéter. Mais je la trouve dans l'ensemble pluôt bien faite.

Sinon c'est tout pour moi pour le moment, ca fait longtemps que j'écoute plus de la variété francaise et j'avais un peu oublié coeur de pirate, très bon choix de musique j'adore! Ouaip! Honnêtement, les musiques francophones ne sont pas si boones, à mon goût. Mais Coeur de pirate est unique pour moi et j'aime bien écouter ses musiques.

GL HF for rank.