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00:46:422 (46422|2) - Suggest to move this to 4. To avoid the Jack Pattern with 00:46:106 (46106|2) - that doesn't fit here.
I decided to instead move 00:46:106 (46106|3) to 4 as it was going high. 00:48:475 - I think you have here a note missing. According to 00:53:527 (53527|1) - etc.
All right.01:00:317 (60317|0) - Move to 3 and 01:00:633 (60633|2) - to 2. The 3-2-3 trill really nice emphasize the drum here and you also break the repeating 3-2-1 pattern that you use here.
Ah yes! You're right, it does fit very well like this.01:07:580 (67580|1) - would move this to 3. More comfortable play also removes the Jack Pattern here that doesn't fit.
Yup.01:21:791 - Add a note? According to 01:11:685 - etc . Also it has Drum + LN sound. Also you have here 01:24:317 - a extra note
Yes, that's true.02:00:317 (120317|0) - Move to 2 to Avoid 01:59:685 (119685|0,120001|0,120317|0) -
Yes.02:21:791 (141791|0,144317|0,146843|1) - These LN's doesn't fit here. They are just to Long. In Mania is it important that LN's are not to long Mapped as there sound. We can hear clearly that the LN's should be 1/2 beat long. Something that would fit more is this:
It makes it different to the previous Part and fit also to the Music.
If you accept my Suggestion, what i highly recommend, please check also the Next LN's. They are to long too.
Oh, I see. All right, the next LNs have been taken care of.02:42:633 - Why not add here a note? I know it has not the drum's you follow. But this one is on a Mainbeat, also it has a nice piano. With a note on 3 or 4 you could really nice emphasize this.
Lel, I don't remember what was the reason, but I'll add it because I also think it's needed.02:52:106 (172106|2,172738|1) - CTRL + H for better Pitch catch.
02:57:159 (177159|1,177791|0) - CTRL + G for Pitch.
02:59:054 (179054|1) - Move to 3 and 02:59:685 (179685|2) - to 1 for Piano Pitch.
03:41:685 (221685|3) - Move maybe to 1? To avoid 03:41:054 (221054|3,221370|3,221685|3) -
Not this one, but 03:41:370 (221370|3) - I want to converse the note 03:41:685 (221685|3) on the fourth column because in the part, the clap are mostly on that column, so it's best for consistency here. HD
1st: for a 2,4* Map you use way to many 3 Noted-Chords also you have a lot unnecessary Jack Pattern here what makes the song unneded harder abd worser to play. Let me Point some out:
00:59:054 (59054|1,59054|3,59054|2) -
01:01:580 (61580|0,61580|2,61580|1) -
01:09:159 (69159|2,69159|1,69159|3) -
01:11:685 (71685|1,71685|0,71685|2) -
It's more then enough to Map the really loud Crash here with the 3 Noted Chords like here 00:56:527 - . That fit well. emphasize very good the crash.
But these i pointed out for you are just not needed. They emphasize nothing. Yes there is a deep Piano on it but its not loud enough to get Emphasized by 3-Noted Chords. Also it makes this really cool and Calm song unneded hard.
Now lets go over to the Jack Pattern. I know its low BPM and its not that hard to play, but still You Jackpattern in this Song emphasize nothing. Really nothing. Let me Point some out:
00:56:527 (56527|3,56843|3,57159|3,57475|3) -
00:58:422 (58422|3,58738|3,59054|3,59370|3,59685|3) -
01:00:949 (60949|2,61264|2,61580|2,61896|2,62212|2) -
01:05:685 (65685|3,66001|3,66317|3,66633|3,66949|3,67264|3) -
And many more. Should you accept my Suggestion to remove the unnecessary 3-Noted Chords its
way easier to get here better Balance. Let me give you some suggestions how you could map this way better:
Let's try it here: 00:58:422 -
By removing that one unnecessary 3-Noted Chord we see you can arrange the pattern
way more comfortable to play. The 3-Noted Stairs emphasize the Drums very well and play really nice.
Then we go over this this: 01:00:633 -
We have here a really evil 01:00:633 (60633|2,60949|2,61264|2,61580|2,61896|2,62212|2) - 6 Noted 1/2 Jack that emphasize nothing. A good way to rearrange the Pattern here is like this:
You see it? There is no change in the Pattern. There is not even need to move them because they are Mapped very well. All i have do is remove 01:01:580 (61580|2) - from the Unneded 3-Noted Chord.
Your Chords here 01:00:949 (60949|2,60949|3,61264|1,61264|2,61580|1,61580|0) - are way enough for this Part. They Emphasize the strong Drums here very well and are also comfortable placed. It was perfect and got destroyed by the 3-Noted Chord :c
Last but not least we have this: 01:05:685 -
The problem here is. Both 3-Noted Chords are well placed. We have Bells and we have a Crash. But the Pattern could be better arranged here for more comfortable play. Let's try this:
This fits more and is way better to play. The two 3-Noted Chords emphasize the Crash and the Bells really well also the two Noted Chords are well placed and give's a very good Handbalance.
Alright. Thats all to this. Please check the Whole song by yourself. To point out every one would be just to much now and would take the whole night.
I highly recommend to change this. It don't destroy your song. Makes it better to play. Gives better Feeling to the Song and don't reduce the Starrating too much.
Wow! This is really good! Okay, now I understand much, but I might still have flaws when I check and fix this type of issue lel. Let's see.Let's continue with the Mod
01:14:527 (74527|3) - Move to 3. You know why.
01:25:896 - :
This fits good here. You had only one note placed here 01:26:527 - but its same sound like the other Chords. This Pattern now Emphasize the drum really good. Also it keeps consistency.
01:59:685 - You probably know what to do here in the Whole kiai part
02:21:633 (141633|0) - Move to 3. The 1/4 Jack here doesn't fit with the LN but if you want to keep it as 1/4 jack move 02:21:475 (141475|1) - to 3 too or move both notes to 2. Up to you
I even think on 2 they would fit better.
Yes, I also think that both on 2 fits better.02:30:001 - I highly recommend to rearrange here a bit. Many notes at the same hand like a Hold are just awkward to hit.
How about this:
It fit very well to the song, removes the Notes from the Same hand like the Hold, that makes it way more comfortable to play c:
02:42:633 - Same like i say'd in the normal. It's sad that you doesn't Map the Piano here on the Main Beat. I would add at least one note.
02:50:212 - Add here one? According to the NM because in the Normal you have here a Note with Hold together. Or remove the Note in the NM. It's up to you but keep it consistency.
02:55:264 - Same like above. In the NM you have here a Note with LN.
03:58:422 (238422|3) - Remove. No need for a 3-Noted Chord. There is no Loud sound on this. At least not that loud that would justify a 3-Noted chord