This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 13, 2010 at 3:41:12 PM

Artist: SYNC.ART'S
Title: Gravity of Love
Source: Touhou
Tags: Sayuri Oozora Majutsu Magical Astronomy NYO Comiket 74 Djnn EvianBubble
BPM: 150
Filesize: 4577kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:

1. Djnn's Normal+ (4.52 stars, 353 notes)
2. Evian's Epic Easy (2.68 stars, 223 notes)
3. Hard (4.84 stars, 503 notes)

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sayuri <3

Please redownload if downloaded before: 9/13 3:30 PM PST (added some new SB scripting)

[Hard]: Done
[Djnn's Normal+]: Done
[Evian's Epic Easy]: Done

Very nice song. <3

[general]
Put the guest diff makers in the tags

[hard]
0:08:665 (1) remove new combo?
0:27:765 (1) make this symmetrical
0:46:965 (5) left 1 grid
1:18:965 (1) make this symmetrical
1:30:165 (1,2) suggestion: 4 1/4 streams after the slider?1/8 is a bit weird
1:40:165 (5,6,7) spacing differs from the previous 1/4 spacings
1:45:365 (1) make this symmetrical
1:56:965 (10,11,12) uneven spacing

[normal+]kiai fountain at the end, not a long kiai period : >
0:47:965 (1,2,3) uneven spacing
0:57:565 (3,4,5,6) spacing different from last combo's (3,4,5,6)
3:08:565 (1,2) right 1 grid

For your first map within a short time playing this game I can only say you're a genius...

wmfchris wrote:

For your first map within a short time playing this game I can only say you're a genius...

Ahh, I got help from Djnn, I know him in RL and he taught me the basics :3
and modding fixed. thank you for your time~

Oh wow, very nice mapset :3

Maybe a few suggestions - take or pass as you please~
Easy
00:30:965 (1,2,3) - I would suggest making this a repeating slider since it's an easy? Just maybe~
00:42:165 (3) - Consider this:
01:11:765 (3,4) - Perhaps consider this?
01:27:365 (3) - Would suggest moving it so it would flow 2~3 in a more direct fashion~
01:30:165 (2) - ^
(ie as suc:
01:34:165 (4) - Shorten by 1/4?
01:47:265 (5,6) - Consider following the lyrics?
03:12:165 (2,3,4,5,6) - Consider this placement?

Normal+
00:37:165 (1) - Consider adding a note at the start of this spinner, and then starting the spinner right after.
01:15:565 (1) - ^ + extend to white tick?
01:28:365 (1) - ^ (without the extension)
02:45:365 (1) - ^
02:57:965 (1) - ^
03:10:765 (1) - ^

01:10:365 (2) - Move down to align with (3)?
01:23:165 (2) - ^

Hard
00:10:165 (1) - With the new custom slider speeds, consider making this slider slightly faster (ie .7x?) The stream -> slow slider leads to break~
Similar spinner comments as in Normal+

Again, great job~!

The maximum allowed size for a background is 1024x768, yours is 1600x1200, resize it

Easy:
Last timing section isn't doing anything
Preview point is different than the other 2 difficulties, make them all the same
Map is nice, I actually don't see any major flaws

Normal+
Rename this Djnn's Hard, it doesn't feel like any type of Normal
00:12:765 (2) - move to 00:12:865
00:13:065 (3) - move to 00:13:165
01:10:965 (4) - make this straight, it looks odd
01:18:965 (4) - new combo
01:23:165 (2,3) - align
01:42:965 (3) - looks strange not being straight
End the final kiai time somewhere soon after the end of the map

Hard:
I would prob rename this Insane
00:11:765 (4) - new combo
00:19:165 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:365 (10) - new combo
00:21:765 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:965 (9) - move this so it isn't under the previous ones
01:34:965 (1,1,1,1) - could be stacked slightly better
02:14:365 (1) - remove new combo
02:16:565 (10) - new combo
02:16:965 (1) - remove new combo
02:51:665 (1) - auto can only get 1000, so I would say unrankable, you might just get away with it, but I would recommend you change it
02:54:865 (1) - ^
03:17:265 (1) - ^
03:20:465 (1) - ^
03:23:665 (1) - ^

*star*

Hi there AeoN, I look forward to working with you

thepianist wrote:

Oh wow, very nice mapset :3

Maybe a few suggestions - take or pass as you please~
Easy
00:30:965 (1,2,3) - I would suggest making this a repeating slider since it's an easy? Just maybe~ I think it feels better as separate notes
00:42:165 (3) - Consider this: I wanted to get away from the last slider pattern since I used it a lot in the previous part

SPOILER

01:11:765 (3,4) - Perhaps consider this? For this part I'm being kinda more "liberal" I suppose, I'm not following the lyrics exactly, and I want both (3) and (4) from the last combo to end on the tall white tick

SPOILER

01:27:365 (3) - Would suggest moving it so it would flow 2~3 in a more direct fashion~ Ermm, what exactly do you mean here? :S
01:30:165 (2) - ^ Okay, I re - arranged the notes, hope it's better now
(ie as suc:

SPOILER

01:34:165 (4) - Shorten by 1/4? No, same reason as before lol
01:47:265 (5,6) - Consider following the lyrics? I don't want to use too many sixteenth beats since it is an "easy" after all :S
03:12:165 (2,3,4,5,6) - Consider this placement? I don't want to cross back over from where it comes from, so I'd like to keep to the left / middle here

SPOILER

Again, great job~!

Thank you very much!

James2250 wrote:

The maximum allowed size for a background is 1024x768, yours is 1600x1200, resize it

Easy:
Last timing section isn't doing anything It's ending Kiai time o_O
Preview point is different than the other 2 difficulties, make them all the same Derp
Map is nice, I actually don't see any major flaws
*star*

Thanks!

AeoN, could you set / fix preview point please? I don't know where you put it lol XD

BTW, +1 star XD

EDIT: Lolfail, forgot to attatch the difficulty ahahahahaha -_-"

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love (AeoNRivaS) [Evian's Epic Easy].osu

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi there AeoN, I look forward to working with you

thepianist wrote:

Oh wow, very nice mapset :3
01:27:365 (3) - Would suggest moving it so it would flow 2~3 in a more direct fashion~ Ermm, what exactly do you mean here? :S
01:30:165 (2) - ^ Okay, I re - arranged the notes, hope it's better now
(ie as suc:

SPOILER

Again, great job~!

Thank you very much!

I meant that if you draw a smooth curve, 2~3 should fall on it~ ie:


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As per your request:

[General]
Remove Comiket and 74 from tags. Searching for a convention is a rather broad way of searching for a song. >>

[Evian's Epic Easy]
Epic easy eh? My expectations are now heightened. >:D
Why is stack leniency so low?
00:26:965 (5) - Maybe reposition this set so the 5 doesn't overlap with that 2 slider before it?
00:30:965 (1,2,3) - These may work better as a slider instead.
01:31:365 (4,5,1) - I dunno about this in an easy difficulty. It's not even really following anything in the music.
01:40:165 (3,4) - ^ Though I can see what you were following there. I still wouldn't recommend it.
02:06:365 (7,8,1) - I can see a lot of problems for new players with this too. Try to simplify it a bit.
02:09:365 (5,6,7,8,9) - Yeah, going beyond the easy difficulty range here.
02:24:565 (2) - Every single note in this section is using soft whistle. :/ Try to vary it up a bit please. I'm also not a fan of .5 sections in the easiest difficulty of the set, but it's not required to change this.

[Djnn's Normal+]
00:11:765 (1,2,3) - The rhythm here is hard to discern on the first play through. I'd space it out a bit more, and maybe try to reduce overlap while you're at it (1 slider covering the 2 more than it could)
01:34:165 (7) - Can you move this elsewhere so it's not covered so much by the slider?
02:10:565 (1) - Remove new combo
02:20:165 - Why did you stop mapping here? Kind of kills the pacing considering you just got out of a long break not long ago...
02:33:565 (1) - Can you position this for less overlap with previous slider?
02:59:765 - This doesn't feel like a good spot to break again, to be honest. You get enough of a momentary rest at 02:47:165.
End your kiai, please.

[Hard]
Maybe reduce HP drain by 1? It's really hard to recover lost health.
01:18:165 (7) - This is unrankable due to the repeat being covered. Please arrange it so it is visible.
01:34:965 (1,1,1,1) - So many new combos... why?
02:51:665 (1) - Auto only gets 1000 on this spinner. Just map through it or something. Way short. :/
02:54:865 (1) - ^
03:17:265 (1) - ^
03:20:465 (1) - ^
03:23:665 (1) - ^

There you go.

[Normal]
03:14:165 - End this Kiai, it has no end.
02:20:765 - shot break, please add notes.

[Insane]
02:47:365 - too short break.
02:58:365 - ^

Nice, not bad, star

thepianist wrote:

I meant that if you draw a smooth curve, 2~3 should fall on it~ ie:


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Ah I see. All right, (3) moved more to the left, hope it looks OK now

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Remove Comiket and 74 from tags. Searching for a convention is a rather broad way of searching for a song. >> Done on Easy

[Evian's Epic Easy]
Epic easy eh? My expectations are now heightened. >:D Oh crap D:
Why is stack leniency so low? Wow, I have no idea O_O Fixed
00:26:965 (5) - Maybe reposition this set so the 5 doesn't overlap with that 2 slider before it? Done
00:30:965 (1,2,3) - These may work better as a slider instead. Meh, these feel more like separate beats to me, but I'll consider changing it if other people think so as well
01:31:365 (4,5,1) - I dunno about this in an easy difficulty. It's not even really following anything in the music. I like this D: I see your point though ... ehmm, same thing as above then
01:40:165 (3,4) - ^ Though I can see what you were following there. I still wouldn't recommend it. I thought about making (3, 4) a slider but it just felt wrong to me :S
02:06:365 (7,8,1) - I can see a lot of problems for new players with this too. Try to simplify it a bit. I really can't feel (7, 8) as a single slider D:
02:09:365 (5,6,7,8,9) - Yeah, going beyond the easy difficulty range here. (5 - 8) combined into a slider
02:24:565 (2) - Every single note in this section is using soft whistle. :/ Try to vary it up a bit please. I'm also not a fan of .5 sections in the easiest difficulty of the set, but it's not required to change this. Yea I probably went a bit overboard there lol. Fixed

There you go.

All right, thanks!

Also er, the 0.5xBPM section has changed to slider tick rate 2?! I didn't change anything though ... anyone know why this is happening? >_<

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love (AeoNRivaS) [Evian's Epic Easy].osu

Easy

00:16:165 (3) - Move right1 unit?

00:17:365 (4,1) - I'm not so sure about half notes like this in an easy. They are sort of tricky to hit.
00:20:565 (4,1) - ^

Eh I see you have a lot of them in your difficulty. Please reduce as many as possible if you can.

00:34:165 (1) - Move right 1 unit and down 2 units? If you do that, reapply distance snap to 00:34:965 (2,3,4,1) -. After apply the snap to the last note mentioned the spacing will completely even out.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25112

00:53:165 (5,6) - Stack?

01:14:965 (4) - Reduce by 1/4th

01:27:765 - Please add a note here for the rhythms sake.

This plays so much better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25113

01:30:165 (2,3) - Move left 1 unit with distance snap on. It looks a lot better. After that the distance snap will allow these 01:31:365 (4,5,1) - to be centered.

Look at the symmetry in these screenshots.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25114
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25115

01:37:365 (4) - Move down 1 unit (Fixes spacing with both the note before and after it)

01:47:365 (5,6) - How about following the vocals in this section? I keep hitting the notes early. You can keep it if you want.

02:02:965 (5,1,2) - Doesn't play right for me. I think it would be easier for the newbies if you deleted 02:03:965 (2) - and moved 02:03:765 (1) - 1/4th tick forward to 02:03:865 -, because that's where the piano starts.

02:05:365 (5,6) - Turn these notes into a slider instead to make it easier.

02:22:965 - Please don't hide inherited lines with bookmarks.

02:24:965 - If you want to keep that 0.5 section, a note must go here. This anti jump breaks the flow way too much. I think it plays well with a nice slope.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25117

02:25:965 (5,2) - This is awkward to play. I don't think the newbies will like it. I suggest you fix it by stacking the notes and making note 5 the start of the next combo. It plays really nice that way.

Djnn's Normal +

00:35:165 (4,5,6,7) - I recommend you make this curve better. Note 7 doesn't go along with the curve of the other notes. distance snap isn't helping. I suggest turning both distance and grid snap off and replace the notes in a more conformal curve.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25118

01:52:565 (4) - Tweak the position of this note up a little bit so it more aligns with the curve of the notes before it. (Distance snap on Grid snap off)

You would want it about here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25119

01:54:965 (1) - Instead of trying to place this note early to a vocal tone, why not place it on the last beat and reapply distance snap. I feel it plays a lot better here 01:54:765 - .

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25120

02:38:765 (5,6) - Stack? Although the way you have currently a unique feel. If you stacked it, there is a beat reversal into note 7 and it would be easier to read. (Eh but I never reapplied distance snap to note 7. It felt good spaced differently)

Hard

02:49:865 (4) - Please delete this. It looks so much nicer and it interferes with the vocals.

03:02:365 - Why do you not have a note here? Placing one stacked on 03:02:565 (2) - plays a lot better than the anti jump that not having one there makes.

I didn't find much wrong with this difficulty.


Star.

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

00:16:165 (3) - Move right1 unit? Done

00:17:365 (4,1) - I'm not so sure about half notes like this in an easy. They are sort of tricky to hit.
00:20:565 (4,1) - ^

Eh I see you have a lot of them in your difficulty. Please reduce as many as possible if you can. Derp D: Okay I'm on it!

00:34:165 (1) - Move right 1 unit and down 2 units? If you do that, reapply distance snap to 00:34:965 (2,3,4,1) -. After apply the snap to the last note mentioned the spacing will completely even out. I think this spacing is good as is

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25112

00:53:165 (5,6) - Stack? Hmm, I can see that, but I think it plays better unstacked. Will consider if other people mention this, though

01:14:965 (4) - Reduce by 1/4th It doesn't sound good to me on the blue tick :S I'm leaving this for now, but I will consider reducing by 1/2 a beat

01:27:765 - Please add a note here for the rhythms sake. Aweh, but then it wrecks the pattern thing I have going on! D: It feels better to me without this beat ... but as always, if someone else mentions this ... >_<

This plays so much better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25113

01:30:165 (2,3) - Move left 1 unit with distance snap on. It looks a lot better. After that the distance snap will allow these 01:31:365 (4,5,1) - to be centered. OK, done

Look at the symmetry in these screenshots.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25114
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25115

01:37:365 (4) - Move down 1 unit (Fixes spacing with both the note before and after it) Fixed

01:47:365 (5,6) - How about following the vocals in this section? I keep hitting the notes early. You can keep it if you want. No because then we'd get into 1/4 beats and then ... X_X

02:02:965 (5,1,2) - Doesn't play right for me. I think it would be easier for the newbies if you deleted 02:03:965 (2) - and moved 02:03:765 (1) - 1/4th tick forward to 02:03:865 -, because that's where the piano starts. That's confusing for me D: I did deleted (2) though, re - arranged (5, 1)

02:05:365 (5,6) - Turn these notes into a slider instead to make it easier. Urgh, these really feel like different circles though ... D:

02:22:965 - Please don't hide inherited lines with bookmarks. Er, it’s not hidden … the green line is on the top and the bookmark on the bottom, it’s pretty obvious o_O

02:24:965 - If you want to keep that 0.5 section, a note must go here. This anti jump breaks the flow way too much. I think it plays well with a nice slope. What do you mean? Wouldn’t it make sense that in 0.5x BPM sections the spacing gets smaller?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25117

02:25:965 (5,2) - This is awkward to play. I don't think the newbies will like it. I suggest you fix it by stacking the notes and making note 5 the start of the next combo. It plays really nice that way. These feel like separate notes to me, and (4) feels still part of the previous phrase D:

All right, thanks for your time!

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love (AeoNRivaS) [Evian's Epic Easy].osu

EvianBubble wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy


01:14:965 (4) - Reduce by 1/4th It doesn't sound good to me on the blue tick :S I'm leaving this for now, but I will consider reducing by 1/2 a beat Please reconsider. It plays a lot better and is on blue tick in the other two difficulties.

01:27:765 - Please add a note here for the rhythms sake. Aweh, but then it wrecks the pattern thing I have going on! D: It feels better to me without this beat ... but as always, if someone else mentions this ... >_< You have to learn that flow should always trump awkward. Patterns should be broken if there exists a better alternative. Why make your beatmap less playable just to maintain a pattern and I found that area different than the other cases you had that pattern.

This plays so much better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25113


02:05:365 (5,6) - Turn these notes into a slider instead to make it easier. Urgh, these really feel like different circles though ... D:

02:24:965 - If you want to keep that 0.5 section, a note must go here. This anti jump breaks the flow way too much. I think it plays well with a nice slope. What do you mean? Wouldn’t it make sense that in 0.5x BPM sections the spacing gets smaller? I REALLY suggest that you add a note there. It does NOT play well with the anti jump and you're skipping over a very strong beat. Trust me I was hitting 100s through that section, it was that bad. For an easy player, I doubt it's even playable.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25117

02:25:965 (5,2) - This is awkward to play. I don't think the newbies will like it. I suggest you fix it by stacking the notes and making note 5 the start of the next combo. It plays really nice that way. These feel like separate notes to me, and (4) feels still part of the previous phrase D:

OMG it seems you just ignore all the things I really thought break flow. There are times when you should stack and times when you shouldn't stack. These really need to be stacked and since they don't look right as different combos, I suggested you change it. Besides the only reason you want note 5 as part of that combo is that you want to maintain a pattern of combos like that. It's the beginning of a phrase, so it definitely does sound like a start of a new combo to me.

Eh that's my thoughts. Don't take them hard please.

Easy
02:25:365 (3) - Move this further away from the other notes, the spacing is too similar to the notes that are 1/2 shorter apart.
02:25:965 (4) - This note messed me up, it's a little tough to catch when you don't know the song (the spacing confused me too). I would recommend simply deleting it, it plays fine without.
02:31:765 (4) - I think it plays better if you extend this to where 1 is, deleting 1.

Normal+
01:18:965 (4) - New combo
02:59:565 - Kind of a pointless break? You could at least start mapping at 03:01:365..

Hard
00:59:765 (7,1) - Swap new combos? For consistency.
01:33:365 (2,3) - These jumps kind of come out of nowhere, I don't think they fit very well personally.
01:53:065 (5,6,7) - With the overlap combined with the flashing kiai, this is very hard to see and really confusing. I would consider making this a bit more readable.
02:21:965 (8,9,10) - Space these further apart, going from the slider jumps to regular spacing in the same combo threw me off.
03:13:165 (2,3,4) - Maybe move these away from the centre a bit? The hitburst from the spinner obscures the view a bit.
I don't really like the spinner spam/dead space in the last 30 seconds or so; I think it would be more fun if you made some of the spinners, as well as hitcircles like 03:29:965 (8) and 03:33:165 (7) into sliders.

Fairly solid map overall, *

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy


01:14:965 (4) - Reduce by 1/4th It doesn't sound good to me on the blue tick :S I'm leaving this for now, but I will consider reducing by 1/2 a beat Please reconsider. It plays a lot better and is on blue tick in the other two difficulties.

01:27:765 - Please add a note here for the rhythms sake. Aweh, but then it wrecks the pattern thing I have going on! D: It feels better to me without this beat ... but as always, if someone else mentions this ... >_< You have to learn that flow should always trump awkward. Patterns should be broken if there exists a better alternative. Why make your beatmap less playable just to maintain a pattern and I found that area different than the other cases you had that pattern. All right, fine. Note added

This plays so much better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25113


02:05:365 (5,6) - Turn these notes into a slider instead to make it easier. Urgh, these really feel like different circles though ... D:

02:24:965 - If you want to keep that 0.5 section, a note must go here. This anti jump breaks the flow way too much. I think it plays well with a nice slope. What do you mean? Wouldn’t it make sense that in 0.5x BPM sections the spacing gets smaller? I REALLY suggest that you add a note there. It does NOT play well with the anti jump and you're skipping over a very strong beat. Trust me I was hitting 100s through that section, it was that bad. For an easy player, I doubt it's even playable. Still don't know what an anti - jump is, but note added

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25117

02:25:965 (5,2) - This is awkward to play. I don't think the newbies will like it. I suggest you fix it by stacking the notes and making note 5 the start of the next combo. It plays really nice that way. These feel like separate notes to me, and (4) feels still part of the previous phrase D: OMG it seems you just ignore all the things I really thought break flow. There are times when you should stack and times when you shouldn't stack. These really need to be stacked and since they don't look right as different combos, I suggested you change it. Besides the only reason you want note 5 as part of that combo is that you want to maintain a pattern of combos like that. It's the beginning of a phrase, so it definitely does sound like a start of a new combo to me. Meh, I suppose this is just us thinking of different things o_O

Eh that's my thoughts. Don't take them hard please.

Thanks for the recheck

0_o wrote:

Easy
02:25:365 (3) - Move this further away from the other notes, the spacing is too similar to the notes that are 1/2 shorter apart. I added a note before this, so I hope this is fixed
02:25:965 (4) - This note messed me up, it's a little tough to catch when you don't know the song (the spacing confused me too). I would recommend simply deleting it, it plays fine without. It sounds funny to me without this. Tried to fix up spacing
02:31:765 (4) - I think it plays better if you extend this to where 1 is, deleting 1. Okay. (5) made new combo

Fairly solid map overall, *

Thanks for such a quick mod

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love (AeoNRivaS) [Evian's Epic Easy].osu

Ahoy

[Evian's Epic Easy]
Don't place the object near slider, because if the circle near slider, the new player will difficult to play it. Example 00:17:365 (4,1), If 00:17:365 (4) is end at 00:17:965 but circle at 00:18:165 (1), it's really horrid because of that, unless you keep the rhythm. If you want to keep the rhythm, try delete the circle and extend the slider at the place where the circle has been delete. Example you delete at 00:18:165, after delete, 00:17:365 (4) must extend at 00:18:165. Sorry if this is too long

00:52:565 (3,4,5) - Replace like this (look Timeline) ? So the begginer player can easier to play? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25462
01:14:965 (4) - End at 01:15:365
03:13:765 (6) - This slider are too short, and please get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's not good for easy diff

[Djnn's Normal+]
00:17:365 (7) - New combo? Since the pattern change?
00:20:565 (6) - ^
02:48:565 (1) - Make symetric?

[Hard]
00:11:765 (4) - New combo?
02:51:665 (1) - Unrankable Spinner (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, current 1000. If you can't extend this, try replace with slider)
02:54:865 (1) - ^
03:20:465 (1) - ^

Nice song
STAR

Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit

[osz File Scan!]
Everything looks ok in here

[General]
Since you already added Comiket 74 to tags might as well also add C74
Preview times are different, preview time on Evian's Epic Easy is 91765 and the other diffs is 194165, make sure the preview times are the same.
Inconsistent mapping, your diffs have different lengths.

[Storyboard]
02:35:765 - Storyboard overload

[Hard]
01:02:465 (9,10) - Could use a less awkward movement, how about something like this for example:
Also this way (1) is aligned with the (2) at the bottom.
01:21:365 (6,7,8) - Would be better if the triangle was more equilateral and not rotated, but up to you if you want to change (this would need you to move the other notes too a few grids as well)
01:22:165 (1) - Correct me if im wrong, but apprently you want this slider to go around the next note's outline perfectly if so, you can disable grid snap to get a more perfect curve like this:

[Djnn's Normal]
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[Evian's Epic Easy]
This diff isn't complete.
01:14:965 (4) - Has a slidertick right at the end which makes it sound awkward, alter or reduce slider tickrate to 0.5 to fix
01:22:165 (1,2) - Swap new combo
02:54:965 (1,2) - Swap new combo

[Overall]
Map all the diffs to the end, dont be lazy =/

Evian's Epic Easy
01:14:965 (4) - Shortern this by 2/4 and move 01:15:565 (1) - 1/2 earlier. It fits the music more.
Why'd you stop just before the last chorus? Finish it!

Djnn's Normal
Normal+ is a terrible difficulty name.
Stopping before the last chorus again

Hard
Fine

[Evian's Epic Easy]
[Djinn's Normal+]
[Hard]
Very good map!

Leorda wrote:

Ahoy

[Evian's Epic Easy]
Don't place the object near slider, because if the circle near slider, the new player will difficult to play it. Example 00:17:365 (4,1), If 00:17:365 (4) is end at 00:17:965 but circle at 00:18:165 (1), it's really horrid because of that, unless you keep the rhythm. If you want to keep the rhythm, try delete the circle and extend the slider at the place where the circle has been delete. Example you delete at 00:18:165, after delete, 00:17:365 (4) must extend at 00:18:165. Sorry if this is too long

00:52:565 (3,4,5) - Replace like this (look Timeline) ? So the begginer player can easier to play? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25462 I didn't want to use so many sliders for this pattern, and it fits better as circles to me
01:14:965 (4) - End at 01:15:365 Fixed, don't know how that happened
03:13:765 (6) - This slider are too short, and please get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's not good for easy diff I think this is fine since there aren't any notes after it, it's clear enough

Nice song
STAR

Thanks for your time

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit

[General]
Since you already added Comiket 74 to tags might as well also add C74
Preview times are different, preview time on Evian's Epic Easy is 91765 and the other diffs is 194165, make sure the preview times are the same. AeoN, maybe you should change yours to the first chorus? I think it's better since that part is actually mapped ...
Inconsistent mapping, your diffs have different lengths.

[Evian's Epic Easy]
This diff isn't complete. I'll map the chorus to where Insane ends if you want AeoN, but it's your call
01:14:965 (4) - Has a slidertick right at the end which makes it sound awkward, alter or reduce slider tickrate to 0.5 to fix Extended to the red tick so it should sound better now
01:22:165 (1,2) - Swap new combo I think it's better as it is, so leaving this
02:54:965 (1,2) - Swap new combo

[Overall]
Map all the diffs to the end, dont be lazy =/

Lol, thank you

Mashley wrote:

Evian's Epic Easy
01:14:965 (4) - Shortern this by 2/4 and move 01:15:565 (1) - 1/2 earlier. It fits the music more. I extended (4) as per previous mods, hope it is still OK?
Why'd you stop just before the last chorus? Finish it! :S

All right already! D< AeoN, should I map the chorus? Tell me so I can start on it if you want!

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love (AeoNRivaS) [Evian's Epic Easy].osu

EvianBubble wrote:

Leorda wrote:

Ahoy

[Evian's Epic Easy]
Don't place the object near slider, because if the circle near slider, the new player will difficult to play it. Example 00:17:365 (4,1), If 00:17:365 (4) is end at 00:17:965 but circle at 00:18:165 (1), it's really horrid because of that, unless you keep the rhythm. If you want to keep the rhythm, try delete the circle and extend the slider at the place where the circle has been delete. Example you delete at 00:18:165, after delete, 00:17:365 (4) must extend at 00:18:165. Sorry if this is too long

00:52:565 (3,4,5) - Replace like this (look Timeline) ? So the begginer player can easier to play? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25462 I didn't want to use so many sliders for this pattern, and it fits better as circles to me
01:14:965 (4) - End at 01:15:365 Fixed, don't know how that happened
03:13:765 (6) - This slider are too short, and please get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's not good for easy diff I think this is fine since there aren't any notes after it, it's clear enough

Nice song
STAR

Thanks for your time

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit

[General]
Since you already added Comiket 74 to tags might as well also add C74
Preview times are different, preview time on Evian's Epic Easy is 91765 and the other diffs is 194165, make sure the preview times are the same. AeoN, maybe you should change yours to the first chorus? I think it's better since that part is actually mapped ...
Inconsistent mapping, your diffs have different lengths.

[Evian's Epic Easy]
This diff isn't complete. I'll map the chorus to where Insane ends if you want AeoN, but it's your call
01:14:965 (4) - Has a slidertick right at the end which makes it sound awkward, alter or reduce slider tickrate to 0.5 to fix Extended to the red tick so it should sound better now
01:22:165 (1,2) - Swap new combo I think it's better as it is, so leaving this
02:54:965 (1,2) - Swap new combo

[Overall]
Map all the diffs to the end, dont be lazy =/

Lol, thank you

Mashley wrote:

Evian's Epic Easy
01:14:965 (4) - Shortern this by 2/4 and move 01:15:565 (1) - 1/2 earlier. It fits the music more. I extended (4) as per previous mods, hope it is still OK?
Why'd you stop just before the last chorus? Finish it! :S

All right already! D< AeoN, should I map the chorus? Tell me so I can start on it if you want!

I think so. it'd be better since mine and djnn's are at the end.[google:f756a][/google:f756a]

I finished my mod. Just sayin'

[Evian]
00:43:565 (4) - Move to 00:43:365.
01:14:965 (4) - That's confusing to me.Maybe make a reverse slider instead? Notes:(01:14:965,01:15:265,01:15:565)
02:25:965 (5) - - This is hard to read,moreover it goes with 0.5x spacing.How about making a reverse-slider?Notes:(02:25:365,02:25:665,02:25:965)

[Djnn]
01:46:165 (6) - Wrong place for repeat.
02:42:165 (4) - Maybe you could finish it at 02:42:565?

Hard is fine,I like it.

Star~

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Evian's Epic Easy]

SPOILER

00:53:165 (5,6) - Instead of using a blue tick on an easy, try to make these two beats into a slider. I think it's pretty clear and obvious enough from the previous patterns
01:14:965 (4) - Shorten by 1 tick. Extended instead

Very good map!

Thanks! Sorry for the delay :S

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Evian]
00:43:565 (4) - Move to 00:43:365. It fits with the lyrics so I'm keeping this, it's not that hard anyway
01:14:965 (4) - That's confusing to me.Maybe make a reverse slider instead? Notes:(01:14:965,01:15:265,01:15:565) Did you get the fixed version? I already extended this slider
02:25:965 (5) - - This is hard to read,moreover it goes with 0.5x spacing.How about making a reverse-slider?Notes:(02:25:365,02:25:665,02:25:965) (4, 5) combined into a slider

Star~

Thank you!

Finally finished mapping

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Gravity of Love (AeoNRivaS) [Evian's Epic Easy].osu

Should be "SYNC.ART'S feat. Sayuri - Gravity of Love"
That's the appropriate title, you could get Sayuri out of the tags then. She isn't part of SYNC.ART'S and is a guest performer. This is a nice track, and I liked what you did with SB at the ending.

Hard: I only have input for this Difficulty.

- 01:56:765 - Looks really weird. Neither-here-nor-there sort of placement.
- 02:57:965 - You could replace this note with a Spinner that ends at the 5'th White tick thereafter.

Evian's Epic Easy
After playing the other two diffs, it seemed weird that the epic easy didn't have the storyboarded sounds that the other diffs have. Is this intentional?

Djnn's Normal+
02:59:765 (break): this feels more like "break to increase break count" than anything. I'd suggest removing it and mapping again starting at 03:01:365.

03:08:565 (1) - maybe remove this? it felt weird that it was mapped here but not in the part before it.

Hard
Was expecting to be similar to Normal+ in difficulty due to the names but was pleasantly surprised. I found nothing wrong here.

Pretty nice mapset you got here. Sorry I was so slow to getting to modding it~

hello~may i have a taiko diff?

Hey

[Evian's Epic Easy]
01:14:965 (4) - this ends on a blue tick...I'd shorten it and add a repeat to make it end at 01:15:365
01:15:765 (1) - move this back to start at 01:15:565
Random Kiai time at the end...
Seems fine.

[Djnn's Normal+]
Seems fine.

[Hard]
00:44:965 (9) - take off grid snap and adjust this slider so that the end of it is lapping 7
01:34:965 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ do the same thing with these notes
Seems fine.

~STAR

Soaprman wrote:

Evian's Epic Easy
After playing the other two diffs, it seemed weird that the epic easy didn't have the storyboarded sounds that the other diffs have. Is this intentional?

Pretty nice mapset you got here. Sorry I was so slow to getting to modding it~

Hey there, well it's just that I didn't think they fit that much, so yea it was intentional. Sorry about that :S

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey

[Evian's Epic Easy]
01:14:965 (4) - this ends on a blue tick...I'd shorten it and add a repeat to make it end at 01:15:365 Lol this has already been fixed
01:15:765 (1) - move this back to start at 01:15:565
Random Kiai time at the end...
Seems fine.

~STAR

No attatchment since nothing was changed. Thank you for your time

To further modders, I encourage you all to download the latest file from me in case AeoN hasn't updated yet :S (it would be my previous post since nothing was changed at this time). Thanks!

P.S. AeoN don't forget to give Kudosu!

general: offset is wrong, try 8577 ms

[hard]
rename insane or lunatic

thats it

[djnn's normal+]
02:10:565 (1) - remove newcombo
03:02:565 awkward place to have a break, end the break at 03:01:365, and map it

[evian's epic easy]

00:52:565 (3,4,5) - this seems a bit offputting for an easy. maybe make this into a slider with a repeat?
01:14:965 (4) - make this slider end on the white tick, not the blue one

thats it

fix up timing and repost for a star

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