As per your request:
[General]
Remove Comiket and 74 from tags. Searching for a convention is a rather broad way of searching for a song. >>
[Evian's Epic Easy]
Epic easy eh? My expectations are now heightened. >:D
Why is stack leniency so low?
00:26:965 (5) - Maybe reposition this set so the 5 doesn't overlap with that 2 slider before it?
00:30:965 (1,2,3) - These may work better as a slider instead.
01:31:365 (4,5,1) - I dunno about this in an easy difficulty. It's not even really following anything in the music.
01:40:165 (3,4) - ^ Though I can see what you were following there. I still wouldn't recommend it.
02:06:365 (7,8,1) - I can see a lot of problems for new players with this too. Try to simplify it a bit.
02:09:365 (5,6,7,8,9) - Yeah, going beyond the easy difficulty range here.
02:24:565 (2) - Every single note in this section is using soft whistle. :/ Try to vary it up a bit please. I'm also not a fan of .5 sections in the easiest difficulty of the set, but it's not required to change this.
[Djnn's Normal+]
00:11:765 (1,2,3) - The rhythm here is hard to discern on the first play through. I'd space it out a bit more, and maybe try to reduce overlap while you're at it (1 slider covering the 2 more than it could)
01:34:165 (7) - Can you move this elsewhere so it's not covered so much by the slider?
02:10:565 (1) - Remove new combo
02:20:165 - Why did you stop mapping here? Kind of kills the pacing considering you just got out of a long break not long ago...
02:33:565 (1) - Can you position this for less overlap with previous slider?
02:59:765 - This doesn't feel like a good spot to break again, to be honest. You get enough of a momentary rest at 02:47:165.
End your kiai, please.
[Hard]
Maybe reduce HP drain by 1? It's really hard to recover lost health.
01:18:165 (7) - This is unrankable due to the repeat being covered. Please arrange it so it is visible.
01:34:965 (1,1,1,1) - So many new combos... why?
02:51:665 (1) - Auto only gets 1000 on this spinner. Just map through it or something. Way short. :/
02:54:865 (1) - ^
03:17:265 (1) - ^
03:20:465 (1) - ^
03:23:665 (1) - ^
There you go.
[General]
Remove Comiket and 74 from tags. Searching for a convention is a rather broad way of searching for a song. >>
[Evian's Epic Easy]
Epic easy eh? My expectations are now heightened. >:D
Why is stack leniency so low?
00:26:965 (5) - Maybe reposition this set so the 5 doesn't overlap with that 2 slider before it?
00:30:965 (1,2,3) - These may work better as a slider instead.
01:31:365 (4,5,1) - I dunno about this in an easy difficulty. It's not even really following anything in the music.
01:40:165 (3,4) - ^ Though I can see what you were following there. I still wouldn't recommend it.
02:06:365 (7,8,1) - I can see a lot of problems for new players with this too. Try to simplify it a bit.
02:09:365 (5,6,7,8,9) - Yeah, going beyond the easy difficulty range here.
02:24:565 (2) - Every single note in this section is using soft whistle. :/ Try to vary it up a bit please. I'm also not a fan of .5 sections in the easiest difficulty of the set, but it's not required to change this.
[Djnn's Normal+]
00:11:765 (1,2,3) - The rhythm here is hard to discern on the first play through. I'd space it out a bit more, and maybe try to reduce overlap while you're at it (1 slider covering the 2 more than it could)
01:34:165 (7) - Can you move this elsewhere so it's not covered so much by the slider?
02:10:565 (1) - Remove new combo
02:20:165 - Why did you stop mapping here? Kind of kills the pacing considering you just got out of a long break not long ago...
02:33:565 (1) - Can you position this for less overlap with previous slider?
02:59:765 - This doesn't feel like a good spot to break again, to be honest. You get enough of a momentary rest at 02:47:165.
End your kiai, please.
[Hard]
Maybe reduce HP drain by 1? It's really hard to recover lost health.
01:18:165 (7) - This is unrankable due to the repeat being covered. Please arrange it so it is visible.
01:34:965 (1,1,1,1) - So many new combos... why?
02:51:665 (1) - Auto only gets 1000 on this spinner. Just map through it or something. Way short. :/
02:54:865 (1) - ^
03:17:265 (1) - ^
03:20:465 (1) - ^
03:23:665 (1) - ^
There you go.