1. Extra Stage (6,01 stars, 2231 notes)

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Im bad at modding Extras, so im sorry if this mod just sucks No worries :3 every mod helps anyways

Extra Stage

00:11:263 (3) I think this one placed like here 00:08:627 (2,3) would look way better youre right :3 thanks~
00:49:292 (7,8) Stacked maybe? Actually doing this for the strong cymbal sound (Crash) in the bg
01:00:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) I know something like this is used kinda often, but its never fun to play ( imo ) Maybe something else which is better to play? Hmm, cant seem to come up with anything yet D: but Ill have it in mind c:
01:47:913 (1,2,3) A perfect stack would look better here Actually yeah, since this also has stack 01:47:265 (6,7,1) -
03:11:021 (1,1) I know its an Extra an so on. But im always shaking when there a circle directly after a spinner. Its not bad, i just want to point it out oh yeah, noone has so much problems with this, so ill have it there c: makes it more difficult to play, and I like that :^)
03:34:130 (1,1) I dont know about this since you cant see the end of 03:35:589 (1) hmm, did something but not sure how it fits tho D:
04:16:697 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Same as 01:00:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) not this one tho, this plays nice
04:20:670 (1) Theres no need for a NC here youre right
04:22:697 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) ^ 01:00:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) this is fine tho

Best Streammap ive ever played in my life. Really good job on this one. Thank you :3

Leorda wrote:

Hei, hvordan har du det? Hei, jeg har det bra hva med deg?

[General]
* There are 3 useless osb files in map folder. Please remove all of them oh..oops xD
* drum-sliderslide5.wav and drum-slidertick5.wav are useless. Remove it again oops xD

[Extra Stage]
00:48:824 - Unsnapped green timing line how did that get there o.o anyways fixed
01:58:878 - ^ welp, seems like I was tired when doing it. Fixed
02:42:724 - Duplicate timing points. Remove one yep definetly tired. Fixed
02:45:094 - Unsnapped green timing line nice xD

I can't find something wrong... lykke til~ Takk skal du ha

Smoothie World wrote:

[General]

http://i.imgur.com/0oZlGzm.jpg I see none? :S

I don't like the red combo color with the 2 very similar blues. Too harsh of a change on the eyes. changed it a bit

00:00:378 - It appears too fast... try to fade it in over a long period of time. Fixed this one

[Extra Stage]

00:07:970 (3,1) - There should be a jump here similar to 00:15:883 (3,1) as they are similar parts. The small spacing feels underwhelming. Similar to this:
00:23:782 (3,1) - Fixed most of it

00:32:761 - Unmapped beat. I'd map this beat instead of 00:33:023 Did something else

01:55:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Consider the following: http://i.imgur.com/AvbNw3v.jpg (Totally optional but take it into consideration) Not gonna do this D: , I changed the spacing of the slider there to have more yeah feel to the jump feel note or something

02:33:075 (6,1,4) - You can up the spacing here a bit. This is a pretty intense measure so higher spacing would fit better.oh youre totally right, done.

03:10:940 (1) - This can be positioned better. Try one of these: http://i.imgur.com/QkFqhDn.jpg http://i.imgur.com/O1YvChG.jpg Fits better, nice

Nailed the guitar solo, nice work Thank you :3

05:08:670 (7,8) - This is very misleading compared to 05:08:103 (2,3) just before it. Consider making this a jump instead of an anti-jump. okay fixed it

FCL wrote:

M4M from your queue

• [Extra Stage]

1. 00:33:317 (2) - This slider does not correspond to the music it is, if you listen closely
2. 00:45:643 (1,2,3) - hmm, maybe blanket? its already blanketed but improved just a bit
3. 00:47:913 (5,4,5,6) - stack its already stacked? :S
4. 01:00:562 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Music here is changing, may be worthwhile to increase the flow of DC okay fixed this stream now
5. 02:42:400 (1,2,3) - distance from (1) to (2) is very large for 1/4, due to which it may seem that this 1/2. I think that the map has a lot of similar models, and they are not very good impact on the game hmm yeah, but it plays nicely, I just fixed this one
6. 04:45:481 (1,2,3,4) - spaced stream is good, but you do not use them much. I advise you diversify the map, because it is well affect the gameplay this is fine tho
7. 04:49:616 (6,1) - DS feels awkward there not sure what to do here then, but ill have it in mind
8. 05:49:940 (4,1) - ^ again ^

Fun fact. Today I wrote two mods on Demetori and both mods shit. I'm sorry, but I really could not find anything serious. Good luck!
no worries and thank you

1. 01:18:886 (7,8) - The gap here should be smaller, reason being, after a steady paced stream it would be a bit hard to make a really sudden jump like that
2. 01:54:562 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not sure if this stream should accelerate the way it does, the music doesnt build uo in any way for the stream to be like that. Maybe a less sudden acceleration is better
3. 02:48:400 (6,7,8) - Here I would say flip the slider and angle the 2 notes after it towards 02:48:400 (6,7,8) - thses 3 notes that way the player has a better means to get to (9, 10, 1) just adds a small ease of flow
4. 02:49:048 (1,2) - This jump might be too big
5. 02:59:265 (10,11,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again this stream accelerates for no real reason, maybe you mapped the acceleration according to the guitar? idk but if anything lower the DS as its a bit too much for what the song plays
6. 03:00:400 (5,1) - This jump is way too big for a 1/4th tick
7. 04:44:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Again with the acceleration it's too much
8. 05:12:886 (9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above^
9. 05:18:724 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good example of a good time to accelerate a stream since the drum picks up from base to snare and you can really here it pop out

Overall very nice map! Very fun and pretty I hope you found my mod to be helpful, this is only my second mod. Good luck!

1. I think it would be better to exchange combo colors 2 and 3, to alternate between hot and cold colors evenly, now you have "hot, hot, cold, cold, hot, cold", try to alternate them
2. This is just my opinion but I think AR 9.4 or 9.3 would fit this map better, but that's up to you sir mapper
3. 00:49:292 (7,8) - curve this a bit to the left or stack, they feel a bit weird to play
4. 01:22:616 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket
5. 01:29:102 (5,1) - a bit overkill jump for the stream speed we're going
6. 01:29:589 (5,1) - this one can also be improved
7. 01:53:751 (4,5,6) - blanket the triple around 01:53:102 (1) - ? imo it would look better and would also improve flow
8. 02:15:967 (6,7,8,9) - this comes so out of nowhere (the 1/6 burst) it might become the most hated part of the map (I might have missed some other parts like this one >.<), would just be best to make it like 01:08:670 (8) -
9. 02:21:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ it's just so fast and hard to hit perfectly with that OD9 :c
10. 02:34:940 (2,3,5,6) - I think these should be highlighted with bigger jumps, instead of keeping the same spacing (bigger spacing into the stacks)
11. 02:47:265 (7,8,1) - this doesn't flow very well, imo 02:47:589 (1) - should be moved a lot more to the left
12. 04:46:292 (5) - ctrl+h and reposition? flows best
13. 05:12:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - I know this is meant to be hard to play and read, but it just feels weird to play lol regardless of difficulty
14. 05:26:994 (1,2,3,4) - replace by kicksliders? because the main beat restarts on 05:27:318 (5) - and it would feel better to start the stream there again

Reclaimer wrote:

Hello! M4M From your queue here

Extra stage

1. 01:18:886 (7,8) - The gap here should be smaller, reason being, after a steady paced stream it would be a bit hard to make a really sudden jump like that yeah, changed it a bit
2. 01:54:562 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not sure if this stream should accelerate the way it does, the music doesnt build uo in any way for the stream to be like that. Maybe a less sudden acceleration is better these accelerations is fine, the drums gets more intense when I listen to it and its a build up to the next part
3. 02:48:400 (6,7,8) - Here I would say flip the slider and angle the 2 notes after it towards 02:48:400 (6,7,8) - thses 3 notes that way the player has a better means to get to (9, 10, 1) just adds a small ease of flow nah I think this is fine
4. 02:49:048 (1,2) - This jump might be too big not really xD this jump is normal for extra diffs
5. 02:59:265 (10,11,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again this stream accelerates for no real reason, maybe you mapped the acceleration according to the guitar? idk but if anything lower the DS as its a bit too much for what the song plays same as I said above
6. 03:00:400 (5,1) - This jump is way too big for a 1/4th tick its following the stream acceleration so its not
7. 04:44:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Again with the acceleration it's too much same as above ^
8. 05:12:886 (9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above^ ^
9. 05:18:724 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good example of a good time to accelerate a stream since the drum picks up from base to snare and you can really here it pop out here its the same melody so yeah

That's all I could find! Mostly I would just reconsider some of the accelerating streams you have, if you have reason for them being the way they are then by all means keep them that way but for some the DS is too much between the notes.

Overall very nice map! Very fun and pretty I hope you found my mod to be helpful, this is only my second mod. Good luck!

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hey, from your queue

[Extra Stage]

1. I think it would be better to exchange combo colors 2 and 3, to alternate between hot and cold colors evenly, now you have "hot, hot, cold, cold, hot, cold", try to alternate them okay ill work on that then
2. This is just my opinion but I think AR 9.4 or 9.3 would fit this map better, but that's up to you sir mapper 9.4 actually fits nice
3. 00:49:292 (7,8) - curve this a bit to the left or stack, they feel a bit weird to play okaay fixed
4. 01:22:616 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket fixed
5. 01:29:102 (5,1) - a bit overkill jump for the stream speed we're going I think this is fine tho
6. 01:29:589 (5,1) - this one can also be improved fixed
7. 01:53:751 (4,5,6) - blanket the triple around 01:53:102 (1) - ? imo it would look better and would also improve flow didnt fit very well imo D:
8. 02:15:967 (6,7,8,9) - this comes so out of nowhere (the 1/6 burst) it might become the most hated part of the map (I might have missed some other parts like this one >.<), would just be best to make it like 01:08:670 (8) - okay Ill fix it D:
9. 02:21:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ it's just so fast and hard to hit perfectly with that OD9 :c ^ ._.
10. 02:34:940 (2,3,5,6) - I think these should be highlighted with bigger jumps, instead of keeping the same spacing (bigger spacing into the stacks) fixed
11. 02:47:265 (7,8,1) - this doesn't flow very well, imo 02:47:589 (1) - should be moved a lot more to the left sound good
12. 04:46:292 (5) - ctrl+h and reposition? flows best ayy nice
13. 05:12:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - I know this is meant to be hard to play and read, but it just feels weird to play lol regardless of difficulty okay moved them closer
14. 05:26:994 (1,2,3,4) - replace by kicksliders? because the main beat restarts on 05:27:318 (5) - and it would feel better to start the stream there again replaced (1,2) with kicksliders

Couldn't find much else besides personal opinion things, I wasn't properly warmed up when modding so I died on the big streamy part, but flow seems fine c: as my mod was a bit lacking feel free to mod just 1 or 2 diffs from my map, anyway, good luck really nice map, have a star

1. the slowderr, should be inscreassing size I do understand you wanna "move" but this thing http://puu.sh/klPGT/3b461f828d.jpg and http://puu.sh/klPIa/9383f78223.jpg is kindy look bad, you can see in-game. try increassing size

1. 01:23:751 (3) - when the beat change, must be put NC IMO because this part the song is change
2. 01:32:184 (5) - this slider look unsymentric for me, why don't make symentric like this http://puu.sh/klQ7K/d8f189998a.jpg ?
3. 01:47:913 (1) - this slider could improve blanket with 01:48:562 (4,5,6), in my view still off
4. 01:49:373 (1) - same happen as 01:32:184 (5)
5. 01:57:643 (1) - isn't should be remove NC, if not then in 01:56:346 (4) - should be NC because this part song change, also should consistency by you style
6. 02:12:238 (1) - why grey ? use blue like other, you use Grey only Speed slider change
7. 02:14:832 (1) - ^ same
8. 02:28:616 (T) - isn't add green line with D:C4 ? Look like you missing, you did other parts like in 01:23:751 (3)
9. 02:28:616 (3) - also NC, same happen before
10. 02:46:292 (1) - could blanket with 02:46:697 (2,3)
11. 02:51:643 (3) - same happen 01:32:184 (5)
12. 03:03:157 (1) - could change place to clean overlap with 03:02:832 (8) or do something
13. 03:04:616 (3) - same happen 01:32:184 (5)
14. 03:22:616 (1) - why don't use same shape with 03:22:130 (4) then blanket body ? this could look good in gameplay IMO
15. 04:19:643 (5,6,1) - Sorry can't approve this 1/12, prefer use kicksliders only
16. 04:31:211 (4) - missing NC
17. 05:22:616 (4) - missing NC
18. 05:55:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - jump 7.00x ? better if 5.00x IMO

1. you can delete the drum-sliderslide3.wav if you're not planning to use it

1. 01:48:562 (4,5,6) - enable the stacking on view tab and fix the blanket here
2. 02:43:048 (4,5,6) - same here
3. 01:50:508 (1) - this slider kinda plain to me. just a suggestion, make this slider like this?
4. 01:52:778 (7,8) - widen the distance like this 01:51:481 (7,8) -
5. 01:56:102 (2,3) - too far from the previous slider ;w;
6. 02:59:751 (1,1) - blanket
7. 03:34:130 (1) - this slider can be improve
8. 03:46:778 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you clearly follow the guitar here which is confusing because on this section 03:40:778 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you followed the drums.

Keada wrote:

You're on the wrong map haha look at last post https://osu.ppy.sh/s/495676