1. Homura (4.26 stars, 135 notes)
2. Kazehana (4.86 stars, 205 notes)
3. Matsu (1.54 stars, 75 notes)

Fight69 wrote:

Hi there o/

[Easy]

There is a lot of spacing errors, you should replace everything with the distance snap.

00:55:276 (3,4,5) - You should maybe avoid something like that in a Easy

[Hard]

Same here about the spacing errors

Small circle, noooooo ! x_x
I suggest you to make them bigger

00:15:059 (2) - Move this circle to 00:15:168 (Beatsnap Divisor : 1/4)
00:15:928 (5) - Move this circle to 00:16:037 (Beatsnap Divisor : 1/4)
00:17:668 (2) - Move this circle to 00:17:776
00:20:059 (7) - Extend this slider by 1/4 (blue tick)
00:54:189 (3) - Move this circle to 00:54:298
00:54:842 (5) - Extend this slider by 1/4 (blue tick)
00:57:450 (10) - New combo ?
01:00:928 (2) - Extend this slider by 1/4 (blue tick)
01:01:798 (4) - ^
01:03:537 (2) - ^

With all these Spacing error, I can only mod the Timeline :/

No star for the moment

Try to fix everything, and when everything will be ok, catch me IG, I'll recheck it.

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

Much of this map has incorrect, horrible note placement on the timeline. In other words, it's off and doesn't play well.

Using 1/4 snap, go through this map on 25% speed. Note the vocals. On places like 00:14:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should notice that some hit objects are slightly off. In that particular combo both 2 and 5 are off. They should be 1/4 later.

Look through the map for situations like that. As it is it doesn't play well. Also, consider increasing the spacing.

Easy:

Plays more like a Normal to me.

00:12:885 (4,5) - Hit circles under slider ends are hard for newbs to catch.
00:30:494 (3) - ^
00:37:450 (3) - ^
01:02:450 (3,4) - ^
01:08:755 (3) - ^
01:16:363 (3,4) - ^

And, due to the new patch, keep the Approach Rate as it is. However, increase the Overall Difficulty to 4 or 5. An OD of 1 is a joke, even to a newbie. It's just way too big of a hit window.

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

Hello~
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General:
Could you get a higher quality mp3 for this? It sounds like you went up to your speakers with a tape recorder and just let the song play.

Easy-
Seems fine, but the sliders are a bit fast for an easy, could you slow them down a bit?

Hard-
00:24:407 (10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Loosen this up just a bit, it looks like a giant knot.
Also, Please increase the Circle size, I think they're a bit too small, it's almost nerve wracking since you gotta hit the note dead center.
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With that, here's a star and I wish you good fortune!

Combo1 : 139,61,173
Combo2 : 255,62,62
Combo3 : 121,186,251
Combo4 : 255,45,150
Combo5 : 252,224,141

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

Skin;
- I made this ~ Hope you like it :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?cveheuzg4eybmcq

General;
- Your mp3 is low...try this one http://www.mediafire.com/?545gfkrpcwr47c1 ??
- Try this colors ??

Combo1 : 139,61,173
Combo2 : 255,62,62
Combo3 : 121,186,251
Combo4 : 255,45,150
Combo5 : 252,224,141

- Add more diffs.

Easy;
- Umm, slider verlocity is kind of high for easy
- 00:09:624 >> remove whistle
- Umm, to make things easier, remove the whistles you have on all slider
- 00:53:102 >> kiai time starts here
- 01:06:146 >> kiai time ends here
- 01:07:015 >> start other kiai time here
- 01:27:885 >> end it here
- You placed the beats well in the timeline but not very much on the playfield, make it more appealing also fix the spacing errors.

Hard;
- Increase circle size.
- Use the kiai time I put in Easy
- You placed the beats well in the timeline but not very much on the playfield, make it more appealing.

Star ~

Ashikabi wrote:

done! however this mp3 seems kinda offbeat. as color I like the color I am using. spacing is fine too cuz 2 BAT had check it they said its ok. thx for the skin I think I can use it as my osu game playing skin as well

also small circle is my style for hard map, its not in an option for no reason so I will stick with it

1. Offset: 900. All other timing sections should inherit. Remember to resnap them to the new timing.
2. The spinner is mostly transparent, so it's hard to see your spinning.

1. 00:20:059 (5,1) - AR0 makes this overlap hard to read.
2. 00:21:798 (2) - Symmetryfail. More like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25754 ? =P
3. 00:23:537 (4) - ^ etc.
4. 00:48:755 (1,2) - There were many 1-grid overlaps like this which could be made to look nicer by moving them apart just a bit so they don't overlap.
5. New combo markers go at: 00:07:856 (1) - 00:11:334 (3) - 00:14:813 (1) - 00:17:421 (2) - 00:21:552 (1) - 00:25:030 (5) - 00:31:334 (4) - 00:35:682 (2) - 00:39:160 (1) - 00:42:639 (1) - 00:48:726 (1) - 00:53:102 (1) - 01:00:059 (1) - 01:03:320 (5) - 01:07:015 (1) - 01:13:972 (1) - 01:17:233 (5) -

1. The small circles lead to a very squished beatmap which doesn't make effective use of the screen space. Something to consider for future maps is to use larger circles with wider spacing to help use all the screen and make more structured maps.
2. 00:12:421 (5) - Move forward by a 1/4.
3. 00:28:726 (1) - Shorten by a 1/4.
4. 00:30:030 (4) - Move back by a 1/4.
5. 00:53:972 (2,3,4) - Consider unstacking? It's confusing to read.
6. 00:54:842 (5) - Right click the red endpoint.
7. 00:56:581 (10) - Move the new combo back one to here.
8. 01:10:928 (7) - Add a new combo.

MetalMario201 wrote:

* The spinner is mostly transparent, so it's hard to see your spinning.

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