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Hirano Aya - Mezamenai Wish... (Full Ver.)

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N I R O J I S A
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 กุมภาพันธ์ 2554 at 14:35:37

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: Mezamenai Wish... (Full Ver.)
Source: Akane-Iro ni Somaru Saka
Tags: minato nagase character theme song
BPM: 80
Filesize: 3786kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.45 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (4.37 stars, 381 notes)
  3. Insane (4.63 stars, 480 notes)
  4. Normal (2.03 stars, 192 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - Mezamenai Wish... (Full Ver.)
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Theme Character Song By Minato Nagase

My 4th Beatmap
Last edited by N I R O J I S A , edited 13 times in total.
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- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Add a preview point?
    No hitsounds at all? D:
    There are two .osb files. Since you didn't storyboard anything remove both of them (and full resubmit when you get a chance)
- Easy:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Approach Circles are really fast (5/10), the map feels empty because of that (and because there aren't many beats :P ), how about trying 4 or less?
    Slidertick rate 2 feels better imho :3
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:57:310 (5) - kinda ugly... Try making it more "circle-like" and try not to overlap beginning and edding too much.
    01:49:435 (8) - make it like this, maybe. v
    SPOILER
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Sorry, ending the map at 2:03:685 feels really weird, try mapping it until 2:18:685 (or 2:42:685) at least D:
- Normal:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:11:185 (1) - really short spinner, someone will complain about this.
    02:20:935 (3) - move at the centre of the grid?
- Hard:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    02:20:185 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really like this part, but i can't find abything to suggest... I think it's playable anyway.
    Someone will complain about 1/4 beats after spinners, but i don't mind that.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:36:685 (3) - new combo
    00:48:310 (1) - remove new combo; 00:48:685 (2) - add new combo
    01:42:685 (4) - new combo; 01:45:310 (8) - new combo; 01:46:060 (1) - remove new combo
    02:56:935 (5) - new combo; 03:00:685 (1) - remove new combo
    03:17:935 (4) - new combo; 03:18:685 (1) - remove new combo
- Insane's Nonstop:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    "Insane's Nonstop"? Is Nonstop a user? In that Case it should be "Nonstop's Insane". If it's not like that, then remove the 's and use just "Insane Nonstop".
    HP Drain 9. That way it seems more like a "StopRightNow Insane" xDD
    SMALL CIRCLES YAY.
    As for Hard: someone will complain about 1/4 beats after spinners, but i don't mind that.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    02:38:185 (4,5,6,7) - they seem "crowded" in there... try palcing them in another way?
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:32:935 (5,6,7,8,9) - did you want to map these in 1/3 maybe? Make them this way:
    SPOILER
Nice nice :)
Try asking people to see your map and get more feedback, i think you have potential for becoming a good mapper.
But add some hitsounds :P
N I R O J I S A
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Joined March 2009
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เพิ่งเห็นว่า นานแล้ว พอดีไปเจอใน pending
มือใหม่หัด ม๊อด :p / ขอ mod ไทย ปน eng นะ พิม eng ไม่เก่ง ฮ่าๆ

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เพิ่มความไวสไลดีมะ มันเท่ากับ easy
00:08:185 : remove this note ?
00:09:685 : this slider end to 00:10:810
00:11:560 : remove this note ?
00:13:810 : ^
00:14:185 : move this silder to 00:13:810 and end 00:14:560
00:16:435 : remove slider
00:16:810 : add note here
00:24:685 : move this silder to 00:24:310 and end 00:25:435
00:30:310 : add note
00:30:685 : this silder end to 00:31:435 / ทำให้วนกลับอีกรอบ end at 00:32:185

ว่างแล้วจะกลับมาต่อ
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