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paraoka - monolithize phases

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happy30
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happy30
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vrijdag 29 oktober 2010 at 18:52:05

Artist: paraoka
Title: monolithize phases
Tags: c78 story haru*nya
BPM: 73
Filesize: 14734kb
Play Time: 06:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Monolithic (5 stars, 1053 notes)
Download: paraoka - monolithize phases
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Map for approval

I felt bad for the BG so I decided to make a little story behind it, it's the text in the SB
it got a good and bad end ^^


The text is hard to read while you are playing, here are the lines:

SPOILER
What... are you doing here?

- Please buy me... ...I need money...

But why?

Hey Satomi come here...

...



They are late!
They should've picked me up already...
I wonder what's keeping them busy?


- Buy me

- You better give me some money.
- Dunno If I can survive another night without food...
- So, wanna buy me for the day?

No...
Why don't you come with us...
We will take care of you.

[now there is a good and bad ending, find out yourself :D ]
Last edited by happy30 , edited 15 times in total.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Awesome map.

Well let's see

Suggestion
Should
Must
Strange

[Insane]
Just "Insane" is not cool =/
put somthing special please
Delete osb file :3

00:45:001 (1,2,3) - make a distance please there
00:48:289 (1,2,3) - ^
02:33:288 - make it gradually silent
03:00:752 - ^
03:57:754 - one grid right
04:05:562 - ^
04:34:840 - new combo
06:02:992 - hmm, may be gradually increase the sound? but silence end of spinner.

Added as a Favourite ~
happy30
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happy30
ty for the mod :)

I will change insane into something better when I come up with something xD
niedz
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niedz
nishishishishi :3
GladiOol
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GladiOol
Don't kudosu, I only have suggestions~

td.png -> Make 'Dunno' -> 'Don't know'? I think dunno sounds a bit dull.
tn3.png -> I ain't to sell forever. ~ I don't get the sentence really ^^
happy30
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happy30

GladiOol wrote:

Don't kudosu, I only have suggestions~

td.png -> Make 'Dunno' -> 'Don't know'? I think dunno sounds a bit dull. Because that girl is very dull :(
tn3.png -> I ain't to sell forever. ~ I don't get the sentence really ^^ Ok, changed :)
ty for the stars :3
gogodr
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gogodr
nice map :3
Natteke
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Natteke
damn im slow
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
Oh good I can make a novel out of it :P <<jk
star~~
nante
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nante
<3
Kite
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Kite
gl~
Gabi
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Gabi
Any source for this awesome song? :?

very cool ^^
happy30
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happy30

Gabi wrote:

Any source for this awesome song? :?

very cool ^^
Well, it's from C78
circle: 麹町養蚕館 album: バベリズム, album HP: http://homepage1.nifty.com/paraoka/cd/ky_bb.html
i found this song on youtube while searching for C78 releases

that's all there is for source i think :)
Real_Imouto
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Real_Imouto
:twisted:
xBubu
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xBubu
:)
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
Great job with the storyboard and jumps, everything comes together and makes it a blast to play <3
wiedz
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wiedz
:<
Natteke
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Natteke
Where's the fucking bubble? YOU MAD GUYS THIS IS THE TOP SHIT DON'T LET THIS BE GRAVED kthx
happy30
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happy30
shall I make a normal diff? or shall I just go for approval now :P
Natteke
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Natteke
I prefer second option D:
tieff
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tieff
WOW. Just... wow.

Bit rate is 320kbps. It's unrankable, sorry.

Fix and I'll bubble.
happy30
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happy30
changed mp3 to 256kbps
changed artist to "paraoka" (circle)
added haru*nya to tags

thnx tieff :)
tieff
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tieff
Bubble 1.
James2250
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James2250
Just here for the sake of it, not going to pop or anything (not getting into MAT and approved map thing)

-2 osb files with storyboarding? Yes one is fine and I can't complain even if it is empty, but you aren't meant to have 2 full ones. Looks like because of title change
-As far as I know you can delete both the "thumbs" files in the folder?
-Some of the lyrics could have alot of the unnecessary transparency cut off
-No spinner-approachcircle when you have the rest? Might as well include it just to complete the set and to make sure nothing conflicts with other skins

Monolithic:
No going to comment on spacing as it's approved but there are some jumps I don't see a reason for really
02:59:956 (4) - unsnapped, but it follows music so is it designed like this?
03:00:033 (5) - ^

Kind of anti climatic end but it is quiet there so ok I guess
tieff
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tieff
Rebubbled.
Bubble №1.
Pimpi
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Pimpi
awesome song and map! also the sb is great :)
good luck with approval :3
Larto
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Larto
Timing:
Please don't use timing sections that do not reflect the actual BPM of the song. Even if you can MAP to them, the pulsing of the osu! cookie on the main menu will be screwed. If you want to have different slider speeds, just use the recently implemented option.
Adjust the BPM on the following sections.
00:00:490 -
00:18:222 -
02:34:386 -

04:40:304 (3) - Move on the next red tick?

Awesome shit though.
happy30
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happy30
Ok, I hope it's alright now :)

(i mapped this before that update so that's why)
Larto
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Larto
Awesome! Great job, happy30! Rebubbled.


Bubble #1 for approval.
tieff
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tieff
Bubble #2 for approval.
rustbell
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rustbell
:)
sisiJiang
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sisiJiang
:)
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
gooooooood job~
loli_milk
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loli_milk
神mappar :)
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
wow
Faust
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Faust
This is amazing. Excellent work on this, happy.
Alace
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Alace
perfect
Andrea
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Andrea
I always say "Heart fixed" but here I should say...

Fire fixed~
-Xero-
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-Xero-
This map is awesome, maybe the best approved ever.

The song is about prostitution? :?
happy30
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happy30
I actually don't know what any of the lyrics mean.

i just got the info from the BG (which is the CD image) :(
-Xero-
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-Xero-
haha lol, anyway great job!
Faust
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Faust

happy30 wrote:

I actually don't know what any of the lyrics mean.

i just got the info from the BG (which is the CD image) :(
I lol'd. I can infer from the title of the song though. The music just sweeps through you with that conviction.
Sup A Noob
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Sup A Noob
It's been a long time since I've heard music like this. Good job happy30.

Love the map as well.

Ah yes, can I have the YouTube link? I can't seem to find it there.
Lemon Water_old
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Lemon Water_old
I got the Bad End heehee
Sup A Noob
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Sup A Noob

Lemon Water wrote:

I got the Bad End heehee
Tell me, how'd you get it?

And @ OP, I still can't find the YouTube link to the song. Mind sharing? Thanks in advance.
happy30
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happy30
the video got removed from youtube ._.
Lemon Water_old
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Lemon Water_old

happy30 wrote:

the video got removed from youtube ._.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IduMlvzrWmU&feature=player_embedded
Isn't right here? You even commented on it. I guess it's because that this video is unlisted so you can't find it with a regular Youtube search.
Heatherfield
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Heatherfield
This one is epic, gotta favorite it.
Sup A Noob
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Sup A Noob
Yes! Thanks for the link. Really appreciate it!
Sure
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Sure
Really wonderful map! :)
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