SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

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[Easy]

perfect ♥

[Normal]

00:00:322 (1,2) - These can blanket better; make their curves steeper
00:48:321 (1) - Move the middle point up a tiny bit to make a better blanket
00:58:099 (2) - Again move the middle point a tiny bit left to make a better blanket
01:11:433 (1,2) - Move (2) so that it's in a perfect line with (1)
01:21:210 (3) - Move this up so it's in a perfect line with (1) and (2)
01:22:988 (2) - Turn off grid snap and move this around a bit so it is perfectly blanketed

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Most of my mod was Nazi, this map is ready for ranking. Just go bug some BNs.

-SMIC

1. 00:21:210 (3) - try make like (00:17:655 (4,1) - ) this? cuz, same rhythm.
2. 00:37:655 (1) - increase slider end 00:38:099 - ?
3. 00:39:210 (3) - 00:38:988 - here have more strong rhythm. try move it?
4. 00:55:433 (1) - keep ds 0.8?
5. 01:14:099 (2,3,4) - change more easier, uhh, maybe.. make slider 1 repeat. looks like 01:00:766 (1) - ?
6. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo.
7. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 -
8. 01:54:099 - ^

1. 00:14:099 (5,1) - avoid kind of this pattern. i think that difficult in easy diff. try slider increase 00:13:655 - ?
2. 00:25:210 (1) - keep ds 1.0
3. 00:39:433 (2) - ^
4. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo
5. 01:39:877 - hmm move break time here like normal diff?
6. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 -
7. 01:54:099 - ^
8. 01:56:169 (1) - spinner unsnapped check AImod(Ctrl+Shift+A)

Hello- wrote:

hi o/
sorry my modding low qual. but, this map is seems good just my suggestion. if you don't want fix, just skip it please :3

[General]
fine to me.

[Normal]

1. 00:21:210 (3) - try make like (00:17:655 (4,1) - ) this? cuz, same rhythm. no
2. 00:37:655 (1) - increase slider end 00:38:099 - ?
3. 00:39:210 (3) - 00:38:988 - here have more strong rhythm. try move it? no
4. 00:55:433 (1) - keep ds 0.8?
5. 01:14:099 (2,3,4) - change more easier, uhh, maybe.. make slider 1 repeat. looks like 01:00:766 (1) - ? kiai time can be harder then other part of mapset
6. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo. no
7. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 - same
8. 01:54:099 - ^

[Easy]

1. 00:14:099 (5,1) - avoid kind of this pattern. i think that difficult in easy diff. try slider increase 00:13:655 - ? no
2. 00:25:210 (1) - keep ds 1.0
3. 00:39:433 (2) - ^
4. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo
5. 01:39:877 - hmm move break time here like normal diff?
6. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 -
7. 01:54:099 - ^
8. 01:56:169 (1) - spinner unsnapped check AImod(Ctrl+Shift+A)

looks good song :3
good luck~

wajinshu wrote:

Nice Priority

1. Some hitsound file soft-hitfinish.wav and soft-hitfinish4.wav have possible delay > 5ms

1. 00:00:322 (1) - Try to ctrl+g that for better flow
2. 00:11:433 (2) - That 2/1 slider not really well on cover strong piano sound on here 00:11:877 - , imo yo can use a 1/1 slider + circle instead or any similiar rhythm
3. 00:28:544 (4,1,2,3,1) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, furthermore the reverse on 00:28:766 (1,2) - make the movement a bit confusing and make the whole thing complicated
4. 00:36:766 (2,1) - Spacing too far
5. 00:38:321 (2) - Spacig too closer, take a look closer on your spacing it's sometimes larger or shorter then it should be
6. 00:52:988 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, try to use more simple rhythm there like 1/1 + 1/2 slider or something that fit to the music. I know the 1/2 spam really fit with the whole piano sound there, but remember you try to make a Normal diff here, so try to use more simple rhythm
7. 01:42:988 (3,1) - Spacing again
   
   I know you are try not to make a hard diff, but some of the 1/2 spam rhythm like I mention above kinda overmapped for a Normal. I think they more fit if used on a Hard diff instead a Normal diff

1. 00:14:099 (5) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, try to use single circle here 00:14:099 -
2. 00:19:877 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/n3Twq/4870f3b03a.jpg ? so beginner easier to distinguish the beat on red tick here 00:20:544 -
3. 00:21:210 (3) - Try to avoid stacking on lowest diff, there's several stacking like that 00:25:877 (2) - 01:19:877 (3) -
4. 01:00:766 (1) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, maybe you should try to use 1/1 slider there
   
   Check your spacing

Mako Sakata wrote:

As requested
Small sugestion,

General

1. Some hitsound file soft-hitfinish.wav and soft-hitfinish4.wav have possible delay > 5ms

Normal

1. 00:00:322 (1) - Try to ctrl+g that for better flow
2. 00:11:433 (2) - That 2/1 slider not really well on cover strong piano sound on here 00:11:877 - , imo yo can use a 1/1 slider + circle instead or any similiar rhythm
3. 00:28:544 (4,1,2,3,1) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, furthermore the reverse on 00:28:766 (1,2) - make the movement a bit confusing and make the whole thing complicated
4. 00:36:766 (2,1) - Spacing too far
5. 00:38:321 (2) - Spacig too closer, take a look closer on your spacing it's sometimes larger or shorter then it should be
6. 00:52:988 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, try to use more simple rhythm there like 1/1 + 1/2 slider or something that fit to the music. I know the 1/2 spam really fit with the whole piano sound there, but remember you try to make a Normal diff here, so try to use more simple rhythm
7. 01:42:988 (3,1) - Spacing again
   
   I know you are try not to make a hard diff, but some of the 1/2 spam rhythm like I mention above kinda overmapped for a Normal. I think they more fit if used on a Hard diff instead a Normal diff

Easy

1. 00:14:099 (5) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, try to use single circle here 00:14:099 -
2. 00:19:877 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/n3Twq/4870f3b03a.jpg ? so beginner easier to distinguish the beat on red tick here 00:20:544 -
3. 00:21:210 (3) - Try to avoid stacking on lowest diff, there's several stacking like that 00:25:877 (2) - 01:19:877 (3) -
4. 01:00:766 (1) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, maybe you should try to use 1/1 slider there
   
   Check your spacing

Nice storyboard, but I highly sugest that you add a Hard diff and reduce the usement of 1/2 rhythm on Normal, so they can be played more appropriate, but it's back to you want to add Hard diff or not, after all that just my sugestion

Goodluck

Zerss wrote:

Now that you've added the hard, there's a huge gap between Normal and Hard. (between E and N it's like 0,3* and between N and H it's like 1,5*)
What I recommend is to make the E simplier (just cs->2), the N harder (add more rhythm like at 01:04:099 -), and the current H simplier (lower the AR->8 and, make it simplier lol).
You may need to add another hard diff, since the current hard is like a light insane diff. It should be 2.5* approximatively, and then, the map would be fine.
Don't put kds since you already gave me some.

Bragador wrote:

Эт короч слегка запоздавший мод.
[Easy]
00:37:655 (1,2) - поправь дистанцию.
[Normal]
00:00:322 (1,2) - поправь бланкед.
00:02:544 (2) - ^
00:12:321 (3) - next снап сильно уехал, почти 0,9
00:36:988 (2) - бланкед
00:50:099 (1) - ^ совсем капелюшечку
00:57:544 (1) - ^

Инсейн модить не смогу, сорямба.

wajinshu wrote:

Опа новый хард

Janpai wrote:

Took a long time of remapping sorry XD here it is

Janpai's Hard

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DeeMo - Rainy Memory.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58988
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Rainy Memory
TitleUnicode:Rainy Memory
Artist:Rabpit
ArtistUnicode:Rabpit
Creator:Shmiklak
Version:Janpai's Hard
Source:Deemo
Tags:piano Rayark selection Vol. 1 Cytus Janpai
BeatmapID:902698
BeatmapSetID:345296

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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304,297,85655,69,0,0:0:0:0:
234,241,85877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,314,86099,2,0,P|151:308|113:314,1,70
51,248,86544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,248,86766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,189,86988,2,0,P|120:156|111:121,1,70
50,78,87433,38,0,P|120:89|184:69,1,125.999996154785
237,182,88321,2,0,L|236:308,1,125.999996154785
338,183,89210,2,0,B|329:136|351:99|351:99|329:80|330:41,1,125.999996154785
244,33,89877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,102,90099,2,0,L|112:102,2,62.9999980773926
251,159,90766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,159,90877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,159,90988,70,0,P|221:192|253:265,1,125.999996154785
383,201,91877,2,0,P|370:148|381:75,1,125.999996154785
302,45,92544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,102,92766,6,0,P|183:90|108:114,1,125.999996154785
51,168,93433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,227,93655,2,0,P|125:261|130:294,1,62.9999980773926
215,324,94099,2,0,P|214:290|209:257,1,62.9999980773926
271,201,94544,70,0,P|231:176|260:110,1,125.999996154785
306,276,95433,2,0,B|269:288|240:275|240:275|215:288|225:332,2,125.999996154785
432,177,96766,6,0,P|424:140|439:47,1,125.999996154785
280,132,97655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98099,12,0,99877,0:0:0:0:
114,182,100321,54,0,L|104:118,1,62.9999980773926
196,128,100766,2,0,P|223:192|212:254,1,125.999996154785
315,326,101655,70,0,P|386:337|453:296,1,140
368,230,102321,2,0,B|373:176|366:128|366:128|390:152|419:146,1,140
414,62,102988,2,0,P|377:47|330:50,1,70
274,107,103433,6,0,P|285:141|278:177,1,70
217,254,103877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,275,104099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,253,104321,2,0,P|182:246|148:248,1,70
90,302,104766,2,0,P|70:267|68:227,1,70
128,176,105210,70,0,B|120:100|120:100|151:88|164:54,1,140
287,99,106099,2,0,B|316:180|279:179|302:248,1,140
243,323,106988,6,0,P|177:325|151:264,1,140
84,222,107655,2,0,P|132:186|213:210,1,140
342,87,108544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,87,108766,70,0,P|349:45|337:11,1,70
257,65,109210,2,0,L|261:136,1,70
178,100,109655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,149,109877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,236,110099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,290,110321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,319,110544,6,0,P|246:284|238:251,1,70
293,186,110988,2,0,L|373:188,1,70
326,108,111433,2,0,L|246:110,1,70
138,95,111877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,36,112099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,165,112321,70,0,P|211:202|204:244,1,70
137,300,112766,2,0,P|104:293|60:297,2,70
209,356,113433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,303,113655,2,0,L|286:225,1,70
384,136,114099,6,0,B|346:149|346:149|312:136|312:136|235:161|198:90,1,210
127,139,115036,2,0,B|142:179|142:179|127:232|127:232|147:281,1,140
256,192,116036,12,0,122464,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:04:321 (2) - Change this into a 2/1 slider+circle because the strong beat landed on 00:05:655 and that should be clickable.
2. 00:55:433 - At least you should map until here, that break doesn't look fit with the song at all.
3. 01:02:099 - Add sth here pls.
4. Not a fan of the first part until 00:19:433 because it's the calmest part and yet you put so much object that it became so dense compared to kiai or the other parts.
5. Try bump up the volume in the last kiai a bit, it deserves more imo.

General

1. bg-green.jpg и bg-yelow.jpg унюзед, моддинг ассистант врать не может!
2. soft-hitfinish.wav и soft-hitfinish4.wav — дилей больше пяти мс.

Хитсаунды

1. 00:19:877 (1) - где клеп, ну или финиш, как угодно.
2. 00:46:544 (2) - глупо сюда ставить финиш, когда звук в музыке не очень сильный, вистл будет лучше.
3. 00:58:099 (2) - та давай вистл, заебись же звучит!
4. 01:07:877 (1) - вот тут финиш тоже звучит очень ненатурально, вистл лучше.
5. А ты сравни 01:22:099 (2) - и 01:20:321 (1) - , видишь разницу? Да, 01:22:099 (2) - финиш тут не нужен.

Easy

1. ок, мне не нравится, что у тебя при 1/1 есть оверлапы, но это лишь на мой взгляд.
2. 00:04:321 (2) - анкликабл даунбит, укороти-ка лучше слайдер и начни 1/1 слайдер 00:05:655 - от сюда.
3. 00:34:099 (1,2,1) - ужаснейший оверлап, настаиваю, чтобы ты убрал его во имя красивых паттернов.
4. 00:51:877 (3) - ну не очень сюда НК идет.
5. В киайной части мне не нравится комбо по два, делай по четыре, т.е. убрать тут — 01:00:766 (1) - , 01:04:321 (1) - , 01:13:210 (1) - и так далее.
6. 01:56:169 (1) - слииишком длинный, ну укороти до сюда 02:00:321 - .

Normal

1. Ну почему в нижнем левом углу ниодного объекта?
2. 00:07:433 (1,2,3) - такое флоу странно играется на медленной скорости, сделай его выгнутым.
3. Опять какие-то проблемы с НК.
4. 01:50:321 - серкл тут удали, ибо, если он там будет стоят, то надо будет поставить и сюда 01:50:766 - , а это уже тяжело.
5. Да, укороти последний спиннер.

Hard

1. 00:01:877 (3,4,1) - this triple is so quiet, deleting this circle 00:01:988 - may cause pattern improvement imo.
2. 00:16:099 (3,4,1) - ye, same here.
3. 00:31:433 (3,4) - make those the same, example.
4. 00:49:655 (4) - ctrl+g, because 00:50:099 (1) - this is quite strong and it would be better if you do jump here.
5. 01:45:877 - I can hear the sound here, so place a circle.

Namki wrote:

Привет.

General

1. bg-green.jpg и bg-yelow.jpg унюзед, моддинг ассистант врать не может!
2. soft-hitfinish.wav и soft-hitfinish4.wav — дилей больше пяти мс.

Хитсаунды

1. 00:19:877 (1) - где клеп, ну или финиш, как угодно.
2. 00:46:544 (2) - глупо сюда ставить финиш, когда звук в музыке не очень сильный, вистл будет лучше.
3. 00:58:099 (2) - та давай вистл, заебись же звучит!
4. 01:07:877 (1) - вот тут финиш тоже звучит очень ненатурально, вистл лучше.
5. А ты сравни 01:22:099 (2) - и 01:20:321 (1) - , видишь разницу? Да, 01:22:099 (2) - финиш тут не нужен.

Easy

1. ок, мне не нравится, что у тебя при 1/1 есть оверлапы, но это лишь на мой взгляд.
2. 00:04:321 (2) - анкликабл даунбит, укороти-ка лучше слайдер и начни 1/1 слайдер 00:05:655 - от сюда.
3. 00:34:099 (1,2,1) - ужаснейший оверлап, настаиваю, чтобы ты убрал его во имя красивых паттернов.
4. 00:51:877 (3) - ну не очень сюда НК идет.
5. В киайной части мне не нравится комбо по два, делай по четыре, т.е. убрать тут — 01:00:766 (1) - , 01:04:321 (1) - , 01:13:210 (1) - и так далее.
6. 01:56:169 (1) - слииишком длинный, ну укороти до сюда 02:00:321 - .

Normal

1. Ну почему в нижнем левом углу ниодного объекта?
2. 00:07:433 (1,2,3) - такое флоу странно играется на медленной скорости, сделай его выгнутым.
3. Опять какие-то проблемы с НК.
4. 01:50:321 - серкл тут удали, ибо, если он там будет стоят, то надо будет поставить и сюда 01:50:766 - , а это уже тяжело.
5. Да, укороти последний спиннер.

Hard

1. 00:01:877 (3,4,1) - this triple is so quiet, deleting this circle 00:01:988 - may cause pattern improvement imo.
2. 00:16:099 (3,4,1) - ye, same here.
3. 00:31:433 (3,4) - make those the same, example.
4. 00:49:655 (4) - ctrl+g, because 00:50:099 (1) - this is quite strong and it would be better if you do jump here.
5. 01:45:877 - I can hear the sound here, so place a circle.

good luck

Chiyuyu wrote:

[Janpai's Hard]

00:13:655 (4) - x348 y192 for best triangle
01:22:210 (1) - Correct.
01:46:099 (2) - right node x312 y164
01:45:877 - put a note here
01:49:655 (3,4,5,6) - correct distance

[Normal]

00:04:321 (2) - Красный узел x280 y292
00:34:099 (1) - ну шо это такое? узел после начального узла x388 y280, красный узел x420 y200, узел перед конечным узлом x456 y124, последний узел x408 y40
00:36:766 (2) - конец слайдера x56 y124
00:37:655 (1) - если применено верхнее, то x128y160 для лучшего бланкета

а изи не хочу