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Billy Talent - Fallen Leaves

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Topic Starter
Jagang
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 21. Dezember 2010 at 17:22:50

Artist: Billy Talent
Title: Fallen Leaves
Tags: La Cataline Aqua92
BPM: 123
Filesize: 4728kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aqua92's Insane (4,91 stars, 442 notes)
  2. Easy (2,31 stars, 119 notes)
  3. Hard (4,38 stars, 273 notes)
  4. Insane (4,92 stars, 440 notes)
Download: Billy Talent - Fallen Leaves
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st serious map

La Cataline's easy: 100% (Thx :D)
Normal +: 100%
Aqua92's Insane: 100% (Thx :D)
Insane: 100%

IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE OCT 10, PLS REDOWNLOAD

pls help to mod
La Cataline
hi (:
1st map? better then I expected...

[overall]
  1. timing is a bit off, I suggest you to use offset 4 967 (I am not like the best in finding the offset, but using mine is better anyway)
  2. when you change the offset, resnap all notes(Timing>resnap all notes), then you will probably have to place the notes in time again
  3. delete the .osb file from the song folder and full submit
  4. also, consider adding an easy diff here.
    quote from Official Ranking Submission Criteria
    Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
  5. the BG dimension should be 800x600/1024x768 etc
  6. set a preview point for the song(Timing>Set current position as Preview point)
I will mod the map as soon as you fix this


EDIT:
  1. you forgot to resnap all notes
  2. 'Billy Talent Fallen Leaves' in the tags is not nesessary
  3. i will make an easy diff here :3
Topic Starter
Jagang

La Cataline wrote:

[overall]
  1. timing is a bit off, I suggest you to use offset 4 967 (I am not like the best in finding the offset, but using mine is better anyway) done
  2. when you change the offset, resnap all notes(Timing>resnap all notes), then you will probably have to place the notes in time again done
  3. delete the .osb file from the song folder and full submit done
  4. also, consider adding an easy diff here.
    quote from Official Ranking Submission Criteria
    Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
  5. the BG dimension should be 800x600/1024x768 etc done
  6. set a preview point for the song(Timing>Set current position as Preview point) done
I will mod the map as soon as you fix this


EDIT:
  1. you forgot to resnap all notes done
  2. 'Billy Talent Fallen Leaves' in the tags is not nesessary done
  3. i will make an easy diff here :3 thx :)
Thx :)
La Cataline
+
[overall]
  1. i'm afraid you will have to cut the mp3 a bit, then search for offset again.
[normal]

  • GET RID IF THE NOTES PLACED AT BLUE TICKS PLEASE
    00:11:791 (3,1,2,3) - 1 grid right
    00:14:230 (2,3,4) - 1 right and 1 up
    00:16:669 (1,2,3) - place them correctly holding Shift
    00:33:133 (5) - move this slider to white tick, then shorten it a bit.
    00:38:133 (4) - shorten/extend this slider(that it would stop at white/red tick)
    00:48:255 (5) - do something about this
    00:52:645 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    01:17:157 (4) - shorten/extend this slider(that it would stop at white/red tick)
    01:25:328 (4) - do something about this
    01:31:669 (1,2,3,4) - ^
well, star this time, yep

Download: Billy Talent - Fallen Leaves (Jagang) [LCataline's easy].osu
Topic Starter
Jagang

La Cataline wrote:

+
[overall]
  1. i'm afraid you will have to cut the mp3 a bit, then search for offset again. done
[normal]

  • GET RID IF THE NOTES PLACED AT BLUE TICKS PLEASE
    00:11:791 (3,1,2,3) - 1 grid right done
    00:14:230 (2,3,4) - 1 right and 1 up done
    00:16:669 (1,2,3) - place them correctly holding Shift done
    00:33:133 (5) - move this slider to white tick, then shorten it a bit. done
    00:38:133 (4) - shorten/extend this slider(that it would stop at white/red tick) done
    00:48:255 (5) - do something about this done
    00:52:645 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
    01:17:157 (4) - shorten/extend this slider(that it would stop at white/red tick) done
    01:25:328 (4) - do something about this done
    01:31:669 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
well, star this time, yep thx ;)
insane will be ready soon ;)

Edit:
Insane is ready :)
Magicphoenix
Nice map, you got my star :D
OsuChamp22
Great Map, u got my Star too :)
Sakura
Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file detected, please delete and full submit.
mp3 is barely passable on the ranking guidelines if you can find a 192 bitrate one it is recommended, if not, this one's still ok.

[General]
I recommend you use a different preview point, like at the start of a kiai to add more spice to the people listening to the preview of the song.
Inconsistent mapping, map all your diffs until the same point please.

[Timing]
00:52:767 - Kiai should start here on the long white tick
01:31:791 - ^

[Insane]
Approach Rate +1
Yay box mapping... well you are new i guess that's expected.
00:06:059 (4,8) - This doesnt seem to be following anything,
On the next stream for example 00:08:377 (4,7) I'm not even hearing anything voice/instrument ANYTHING on here, why do theese 2 notes exist?.
00:09:474 (1) - Mapping to silence? only thing i hear here is your note's hitsound, no music/beat/lyric/instrument.
00:10:450 (2) - ^
00:11:425 (2) - ^
00:21:791 (4) - New combo
00:33:255 (8) - Doesnt look very appealing with all the linear slidering in here, instead try a spinner? it's long enough. if you do keep, remove hitsound whistle from the body of the slider and from the end, if you change for spinner use hitsound finish on it.
00:40:084 (7) - Decrescendo from 00:40:694 - 00:40:937 then back to normal at slider end?
00:42:035 (7) - Shorten until 00:42:523, the lyric its supposed to be following stops there
00:48:864 (1) - Add hitsound finish
01:00:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It's a very evil move to switch from doubles to singles in a death stream.
01:19:108 (7) - I thought the slider was (6)
01:28:011 (1) - Add hitsound finish
02:12:767 (8) - New combo like you did with the rest of this section?
02:14:718 (1) - Add hitsound finish.

[Normal]
If not for the difficulty settings this feels more like a Hard, i recommend you adjust difficulty settings for a Hard instead and rename it to Hard.
Approach Rate +3, Overall Difficulty +2, HP Drain +3
00:33:255 (5) - Like on [Insane] I recommend you switch this for a spinner with hitsound finish, a long linear slider like this is not really appealing, if you do keep, make it consistent with [Insane] and use hitsound Finish at the end of the slider.
01:19:108 (4,1) - Mini-jump? either jump or not, but this is weird.
00:49:108 (1) - Add hitsound Finish at the end. However i recommend you use a spinner instead, this slider repeats so many times it's boring coz you kinda just stay there.
01:27:889 (1) - Add hitsound Finish.
02:03:011 (1,2) - Sounds weird, i recommend you remove (1) even if it is following something, this whole combo is following the Lyrics.
02:04:962 (1,2) - ^ Except here you can swap the new combo from (2) to (1) to fix.
02:06:913 (1,2) - ^
02:08:864 (1,2) - ^
02:10:816 (1,2) - ^
02:12:767 (1,2) - ^ this time for consistency if you do those changes.
02:14:718 (1) - Add hitsound finish.

[Easy]
Easy should be renamed to La Cataline's Easy since he/she made that diff.
Preview point is not set.
00:33:259 (1) - Change into a spinner? it's more fitting, if you decide to keep at least make the slider look more pretty like:
00:48:869 (1) - ^
Map it until the end?
Topic Starter
Jagang

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file detected, please delete and full submit.
mp3 is barely passable on the ranking guidelines if you can find a 192 bitrate one it is recommended, if not, this one's still ok.

[General]
I recommend you use a different preview point, like at the start of a kiai to add more spice to the people listening to the preview of the song.
Inconsistent mapping, map all your diffs until the same point please.

[Timing]
00:52:767 - Kiai should start here on the long white tick
01:31:791 - ^

[Insane]
Approach Rate +1
Yay box mapping... well you are new i guess that's expected.
00:06:059 (4,8) - This doesnt seem to be following anything,
On the next stream for example 00:08:377 (4,7) I'm not even hearing anything voice/instrument ANYTHING on here, why do theese 2 notes exist?.
00:09:474 (1) - Mapping to silence? only thing i hear here is your note's hitsound, no music/beat/lyric/instrument.
00:10:450 (2) - ^
00:11:425 (2) - ^
00:21:791 (4) - New combo
00:33:255 (8) - Doesnt look very appealing with all the linear slidering in here, instead try a spinner? it's long enough. if you do keep, remove hitsound whistle from the body of the slider and from the end, if you change for spinner use hitsound finish on it.
00:40:084 (7) - Decrescendo from 00:40:694 - 00:40:937 then back to normal at slider end?
00:42:035 (7) - Shorten until 00:42:523, the lyric its supposed to be following stops there
00:48:864 (1) - Add hitsound finish
01:00:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It's a very evil move to switch from doubles to singles in a death stream.
01:19:108 (7) - I thought the slider was (6)
01:28:011 (1) - Add hitsound finish
02:12:767 (8) - New combo like you did with the rest of this section?
02:14:718 (1) - Add hitsound finish.

[Normal]
If not for the difficulty settings this feels more like a Hard, i recommend you adjust difficulty settings for a Hard instead and rename it to Hard.
Approach Rate +3, Overall Difficulty +2, HP Drain +3
00:33:255 (5) - Like on [Insane] I recommend you switch this for a spinner with hitsound finish, a long linear slider like this is not really appealing, if you do keep, make it consistent with [Insane] and use hitsound Finish at the end of the slider.
01:19:108 (4,1) - Mini-jump? either jump or not, but this is weird.
00:49:108 (1) - Add hitsound Finish at the end. However i recommend you use a spinner instead, this slider repeats so many times it's boring coz you kinda just stay there.
01:27:889 (1) - Add hitsound Finish.
02:03:011 (1,2) - Sounds weird, i recommend you remove (1) even if it is following something, this whole combo is following the Lyrics.
02:04:962 (1,2) - ^ Except here you can swap the new combo from (2) to (1) to fix.
02:06:913 (1,2) - ^
02:08:864 (1,2) - ^
02:10:816 (1,2) - ^
02:12:767 (1,2) - ^ this time for consistency if you do those changes.
02:14:718 (1) - Add hitsound finish.

[Easy]
Easy should be renamed to La Cataline's Easy since he/she made that diff.
Preview point is not set.
00:33:259 (1) - Change into a spinner? it's more fitting, if you decide to keep at least make the slider look more pretty like:
00:48:869 (1) - ^
Map it until the end?
everything is done,thx for help :)
La Cataline

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Easy]
Easy should be renamed to La Cataline's Easy since he/she made that diff.
just [easy], thanks
00:33:259 (1) - Change into a spinner? it's more fitting, if you decide to keep at least make the slider look more pretty like:
I remember how I hated spinners when I was a beginner :D so I just changed the shape of this slider
00:48:869 (1) - ^
^
Map it until the end?
there's nothing wrong with [easy] not mapped until the end
Download: Billy Talent - Fallen Leaves (Jagang) [Easy].osu
Leorda
Hej

The song at end is cutted suddenly ><

[La Cataline's Easy]
00:39:600 (5) - Should new combo, because this combo is very long
00:43:503 (5) - ^
00:46:918 (3) - Should new combo, since the pattern are change

01:18:381 (4) - New combo?

[Hard]
00:26:425 (4) - Weird slider
00:45:450 (2) - A little hidden, because this object are overlapped by previous slider
00:53:499 (5,6) - Spacing error
01:24:962 (3,4) - ^
01:26:913 (4) - Repeating slider at blue tick it's has a wrong sound
01:27:889 (1) - Extend to 01:31:303
01:32:523 (5,6) - Spacing error


[Insane]
00:08:133 (2,3,4,5) - I think this is not following vocal or rhythm
00:48:255 (7) - Move forward to white tick and end at 00:48:620
00:54:962 (2,3,4,5) - Same concept as 00:08:133 (2,3,4,5)
01:02:767 (2,3,4,5) - ^

01:16:425 (x) - Add note, because it's confusing when test
01:25:937 (x) - ^


Some pattern are lots of linear, try find the pattern something beautiful like star, curve, and etc.
Nice song
STAR
flame1221
Gute 1. map^^
Kotone
I am late?...sorry

[General]
remove countdown?

Hard
00:12:279(1) - little spacing
Other like Insane↓

Insane
00:13:620(timing section) - move this timing section to the front blue line (offset:13,742 > 13,620)
01:08:498(timing section) - kiai end at 01:08:377, move this timing section to the front white line (offset:68,498 > 68,377)
01:47:645(break) - someone tell me 20 seconds break time is unrankble
lisha14_DELETED
star~ :D
thekillerhjkhjk
[insane]

for a 1st time mapper (or mapping virgin as i like to say) this is pretty good

few issues though,

it seems a little overmapped... in the verses, you seem to have a lot of 1/4's. i suggest only mapping for the voice. you'll still have some triads there. some BAT's don't really like overmapping

00:06:913 (8,1) - this would sound better if you:
1. shortened the first slider to end on the blue tick (on the timeline on the top)
2. moved the second slider to the white tick the first slider used to end on
3. extended the second slider to end on the next white tick

repeat on the following areas

00:53:742 (8,1) -
01:01:547 (8,1) -
01:32:767 (8,1) -
01:40:572 (8,1) -

01:26:059 (1) - delete this note, it will throw people off, and is unnecessary.

02:03:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i love the way these notes are placed, but it is very repetitive. i suggest replacing some notes with sliders and repeats

[hard]
00:06:913 (6,1) - do the same with these notes as you did with the ones in [insane] and repeat for all the rest
00:39:352 (1,2) - add a note in between
00:52:523 (1,2) - ^
01:00:328 (1,2) - ^
01:31:547 (1,2) - ^
01:39:352 (1,2) - ^

[easy]
00:42:040 (2) - move right one tiny square
00:56:186 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - no newcombo spam please. make the stacks all ONE combo each
01:03:991 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:36:186 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:40:576 (2) - stack properly with (1)


you're a good mapper for a virgin ;D

star~
Timerider122
This map is not bad, really. ;)
Bekommst sogar nen stern
NoteKuroi
wow~ Very nice^^

Star~
Dark_Ai
great 1st Map. :D
You have my Star ^^
LesTrucsRoses
[Hard]
SPOILER
00:06:913 (6) - Shorten this slider by 2 ticks on 1/4 beatsnap.
00:07:401 (1) - Move this slider back by 1 tick, then extend by 1 tick on 1/4 beatsnap.
00:53:742 (7) - Shorten this slider by 2 ticks on 1/4 beatsnap.
00:54:230 (1) - Move this slider back by 1 tick, then extend by 1 tick on 1/4 beatsnap.
01:01:547 (7) - Shorten this slider by 2 ticks on 1/4 beatsnap.
01:02:157 (1) - Move this slider back by 1 tick, then extend by 1 tick on 1/4 beatsnap.
01:32:767 (7,1) - ^
01:39:352 (1,2,3) - Don't overlap like this.

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:14:230 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move all of these beats one gridspace to the left, so that the 6 overlaps the previous 1.
00:41:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't overlap beats like this.
00:45:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't overlap beats like this.

nice song and map. sorry for all the red.
rEdo
hello there, i've got some suggestions:

[Easy]
0:07:893 (1) - delete combo
0:27:406 (1) - delete combo
0:56:186 - 0:58:625 (1, 1, (...huh), 1, 1) - delete those new combos, spamming with them like that is a no-no, i suggest you leaving the combo in the third circle, like (1, 2, 3, 1).
1:03:991 - 1:06:430 (1, 1, (...), 1, 1) - just like before
1:24:479 (1) - delete combo
1:35:698 (1) - just like before
1:36:186 - 1:38:625 (1, 1, (...), 1 ,1) - and again! new combo spam :)


[Hard]
0:07:523 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 0:07:645.
0:54:352 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 0:54:474.
1:33:377 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 1:33:498.
1:39:352 - 1:39:596 (1, 2, 3) - hard to read, please try to rearrange this part.
1:41:181 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 1:41:303.

[Insane]
0:07:523 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 0:07:645.
0:12:279 (4) - new combo
0:19:108 - 0:20:572 (1, 2, (...), 10, 11) - that would be hard to aim for some players, especially for me :p suggestion: rearrange like this?
0:31:547 - 0:32:279 (1, 2, (...), 6, 7) - hard to read, suggestion: rearrange like this?
0:41:303 - 0:42:035 (1, 2, (...), 6, 7) - also hard to read, suggestion: rearrange like this?
0:42:035 (7) - also, imho this slider should end at white tick, 0:43:011.
0:45:206 - 0:42:694 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - hard to read, again. suggestion: rearrange like this? (5) is on the same spot as (1).
0:54:352 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 0:54:474.
0:59:108 (4) - new combo
1:02:157 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 1:02:279.
1:16:425 (x) - definetely add a circle in that point
1:18:377 - 1:19:108 (1, 2, (...), 6, 7) - hard to aim, again. suggestion: rearrange like this?
1:33:377 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 1:33:498.
1:38:133 (4) - new combo
1:41:181 (1) - this slider should start at the red tick, at 1:41:303.
1:44:004 (2) - i dont think putting that circle at the same spot as (1) was necessary, place it somewhere else
1:45:937 (4) - new combo
2:08:864 (6) - new combo


[General]
few repeating mistakes, but still you did a great job, as it's your first map :3
+1 SP from me, good luck with it!
James2250
Note: I started this mod and then left for a while, so I might have repeated stuff from the previous mods

-Offset is different on Easy than Hard and Insane, make sure they are all the same and resnap
-Countdown doesn't really fit
-Make sure the kiai time ends at exactly the same time on every difficulty, on Easy the second kiai times ends on the white tick which is good, on the other 2 it ends on the blue tick after it

Easy:
00:19:601 (5,6) - looks odd being slanted
00:37:406 (1,2,3) - make into a slider to make it easier
00:42:040 (2,4,1) - stack these
00:44:966 (1,3) - ^ (note and start-point)
00:53:747 (2,4) - stack
00:52:771 (1,5) - ^
00:56:186 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - at least space these out so it isn't so confusing to new players
01:00:576 (2) - new combo
01:02:040 (3,4) - spacing
01:03:991 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - same comment as earlier (I would make some of these in the map sliders, too many triplets for an easy)
01:18:137 (3,4,5) - spacing (look at distance apart on timeline, then look at distance on grid)
01:38:137 (1,1,1) - space out

Hard:
00:05:694 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd pattern
00:07:523 (1) - start on red tick (same end point)
00:54:352 (1) - ^
00:56:669 (2) - stack under endpoint of 5 (respace other notes around it)
01:02:157 (1) - start on red tick
01:07:401 (3) - I would align this with 1 and 2
01:20:816 (3,4) - don't overlay these
01:33:377 (1) - start on red tick
01:39:352 (1,2,3) - confusing spacing
01:41:181 (1) - start on red tick
02:03:255 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - add hitsounds

Insane:
Same HP Drain as Hard? I would change them
00:06:181 (4,6) - align
00:07:523 (1) - start on red tick
00:12:279 (4) - new combo
00:13:742 (1,6) - redo spacing so these are stacked
00:28:377 (7) - make start and end point align?
00:41:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't really like this spacing
00:54:352 (1) - start on red tick
00:57:401 (2,3) - align
00:59:108 (4) - new combo
01:02:157 (1) - start on red tick
01:16:425 (1) - add note
01:33:377 (1) - start on red tick
01:35:450 (1,2) - don't space like this
01:38:133 (4) - new combo
01:41:181 (1) - start on red tick
01:45:937 (4) - new combo
02:03:255 (2) - add note
02:05:328 (2) - start on red tick and add a repeat
02:07:279 (2) - start on red tick
02:09:108 (7) - add note
02:11:059 (2) - ^
02:13:011 (2) - ^

Fairly Nice maps just some sliders placed on blue ticks when not needed
*star*
noneed
Billy Talent.. nice ^^

Mod later.. star for now
EDIT MOD:

Easy:
00:37:406 (1,2,3,4) - you know that beginner will fail hard at that part?
00:46:918 (3) - 1 left and up.this looks good when it is in the beginning of slider (1) in the prev combo..
01:45:942 (1) - hmm that's to short for a beginner..
01:42:040 (4,5) - (4) 1 grid up and (5) 1 grid right..

Hard:
00:41:791 (3,4) - 1 grid right
00:48:986 (1) - I think I somewhere heard on a bats mod that spinners shouldn't be started on a blue tick.Start it on the red..
01:28:011 (1) - ^
aand lol that's not the complete version ._. I think I can remember that on chorus follows.. Is that on purpose?Please get the right mp3 and map it to the end..

Insane:
00:17:645 (10) - 1 grid down

Very 'stabil' mapset you have there.Nothing world changing but neither bad.And for your first map it is awesome ^^
La Cataline
brikel
Hi

[Easy]
00:54:723 (3,4) - use clap?
00:55:698 (5) - use finish?
01:02:040 (2) - use clap?
01:02:527 (3) - remove whistle. that's noisy :o
01:41:552 (3,4) - use clap?
01:42:527 (5) - use finish?

[Hard]
00:20:576 (7) - add finish?

Um... two hitsound is noisy. but it's rock, so it will be fine.
Star :)
IceBeam
I can't understand why have you choosed these colours,you may find something more pleasant,don't you?

[Hard]
00:07:649 (1) - Allign it.
00:31:796 (2) - You may need to stack it with 00:30:332 (4).
00:54:479 (1) - Allign.
01:33:503 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Overmapped to me,cause there're no beats at blue ticks you following in streams.
02:06:918 (1) - Um,2 grids up?

However,song is nice and technically it's fine.

Nice try on mapping,keep on going,star~
Joon
hi

my modding

[Easy]
00:28:869 (6) - chagne clap
00:43:991 (6) - remove finish
00:47:893 (5,6) - remove whistle? [I like these better]
01:17:649 (2) - change clap
01:18:137 (3) - change whistle

[Hard]
00:29:845 (2) - add clap
00:31:796 (2) - ^
00:45:454 (2) - ^
00:47:406 (2) - ^
00:53:259 (5) - ^
00:53:747 (7) - End Notes add clap
00:55:210 (3) - add clap
01:01:064 (5) - ^
01:01:552 (7) - End Notes add clap
01:03:015 (3) - add clap
01:32:284 (5) - ^
01:32:771 (7) - End Notes add clap
01:34:235 (3) - add clap
01:40:088 (5) - ^
01:40:576 (7) - End Notes add clap
01:42:040 (3) - add clap

[Insane]
00:20:820 (1,2) - add clap
00:29:845 (3) - add clap
00:30:332 (6) - Middle Notes add clap
00:31:918 (4) - add clap
00:32:284 (7) - End Notes add clap
00:45:454 (3) - add clap
00:47:406 (3) - ^
00:53:259 (6) - ^
00:53:747 (8) - End Notes add clap
00:55:210 (4) - add clap
01:01:064 (6) - ^
01:01:552 (8) - End Notes add clap
01:03:015 (4) - add clap
01:32:284 (6) - ^
01:32:771 (8) - End Notes add clap
01:34:235 (4) - add clap
01:40:088 (6) - ^
01:40:576 (8) - End Notes add clap
01:42:040 (4) - add clap
02:03:991 (7) - add finish?
02:05:942 (3) - ^
02:07:893 (5) - ^
02:09:845 (7) - ^


good song~ +star
Aqua
Awesome Song! <3

May i pls pls pls do a Diff? =)


Starred
Kurai
:)

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
Approach Rate +2
00:52:771 (1) - Bad spacing
01:28:381 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was
01:36:186 (2,3,4,5) - Something like http://puu.sh/grV looks better

[Hard]
00:21:552 (x) - Add note
01:47:893 (Break) - This break is too long, 10sec max

[Insane]
00:19:966 (6,8) - Sounds really better if you remove these notes
00:21:552 (x) - Add note
01:47:893 (Break) - Same as [Hard]
02:09:113 (2) - Bad spacing


Star~
Aqua
Fast fertig ~
(Kann nur immer nach der Arbeit Mappen. Deswegen bisschen langsam ._.)
Aqua
Finiiiished :D

If you know a better name for the Diff, feel free to change :)



Download: Billy Talent - Fallen Leaves (Jagang) [Aqua92's MiX ~].osu
Verdisphena
Mai mod:

General :
Add Aqua92 in tags in all diffs

Insane :
01:46:430 (3) - Add a finish at finish of the slider


Aqua92's MiX ~ :

00:27:649 (1) - Ugly slider, change it
00:28:381 (3) - ^
00:51:064 (12) - New combo
00:52:284 (18) - Spacing
00:54:723 (4) - ^
03:02:284 (3) - ^
03:04:479 (x) - Add a timing section with not kiai
Normal+ :

I think that normal+ is an hard, idk
00:19:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That is for a hard, not for a normal

Easy :

I think that easy is an normal ಠ_ಠ

Fine
Guzzzzm4n
Hello~

[Easy]
I would say that the recommendation would have to make the complete song as much left over mp3
Of the rest, so good :D

[Hard]
01:17:162 : Fix this slider, it looks a bit ugly?
01:19:113 : ^

And I repeat the same thing about the difficulty unfinished :(

[Aqua92's MiX ~] > That weird name, because not only Aqua92's Easy / Hard / Insane?
00:22:527 : Slider rare, attempts to fix
00:24:479 : ^
If under these mistakes, you do not meet the impact of these sliders called "Waves"
00:27:649 : Again the same error
01:40:576 : ^
01:41:064 : ^
01:43:167 : I do not know if this circle is so by choice, but if they turn it up one more so this is in line with others.
01:44:113 : ^
01:57:649 : ^
02:34:113 : Turn it up two tick
02:34:235 : If you do this, align the orange circle with the number 5
03:06:674 : Kiai ends here

[Insane]
00:24:479 : It looks ugly, fix it :(
00:43:991 : ^
02:51:064 : Kiai cut here
02:53:259 : After that, Start it here
02:58:869 : Kiai cut here
03:01:064 : After that, Start it here

Good Map, Star !
kanpakyin
Mod...request by HKOPS
--------------------------------------
BluE=Just suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this

[Easy]
AR+1?
00:07:893(3)down 1 grid?
00:15:716(2)Remove whistle
00:41:516(1)up 1 grid?
01:20:047(7)New combo?
01:20:567(1)Remove new combo?

[Hard]
00:07:638(1)gemination with (6)
00:05:694(x)In soft sound part,please all use whistle to instead clap
00:20:784(1)spacing
00:25:675(1)^
01:00:348(1)^
01:02:297(1)gemination with(7)
01:21:481(1)^

[Aqua92's MiX ~]
00:50:644(11)New combo
02:33:999(7)add whistle?
02:59:105(3)Remove the note and use the spinner to instead
03:06:949(x)using green line to stop Kiai time?

[Insane]
00:05:694(x)In soft sound part,please all use whistle to instead clap
00:54:480(1)attention to the beat!!
01:18:370(1)spacing
01:20:347(1.2.3.4)^
01:32:169(1)^
02:43:649(x)add a note?
02:50:054(4)spacing
02:54:201(1)spacing but for me ,is okey

[What my suggestion]
~in insane diff,has many needless jump.
~using distance snap
~Aqua92's MiX~is pretty nice,not any big problem
Aqua
Finally some Time to Fix:

Aqua92's MiX ~ :

00:27:649 (1) - Ugly slider, change it - Done
00:28:381 (3) - ^ - Done
00:51:064 (12) - New combo - Done
00:52:284 (18) - Spacing - Don't see any Problems here
00:54:723 (4) - ^ - ^
03:02:284 (3) - ^ - ^
03:04:479 (x) - Add a timing section with not kiai - It's fine like it is
[Aqua92's MiX ~] > That weird name, because not only Aqua92's Easy / Hard / Insane?
00:22:527 : Slider rare, attempts to fix - Sry, what?
00:24:479 : ^ - ^
If under these mistakes, you do not meet the impact of these sliders called "Waves"
00:27:649 : Again the same error - ^
01:40:576 : ^ - ^
01:41:064 : ^ - ^
01:43:167 : I do not know if this circle is so by choice, but if they turn it up one more so this is in line with others. - it's by choice
01:44:113 : ^ - ^
01:57:649 : ^ - ^
02:34:113 : Turn it up two tick - Done
02:34:235 : If you do this, align the orange circle with the number 5 - Done
03:06:674 : Kiai ends here - Done
[Aqua92's MiX ~]
Well, most of your pointed notes don't exist o.o
00:50:644(11)New combo - Already done in previous mod
02:33:999(7)add whistle? - it's fine :)
02:59:105(3)Remove the note and use the spinner to instead - ^
03:06:949(x)using green line to stop Kiai time? - Already done in previous
Changed Name to 'Aqua92's Insane'

Download: Billy Talent - Fallen Leaves (Jagang) [Aqua92's Insane].osu
Lightgazer
Hey

Aqua'92s Insane rename to Aqua´s Insane

Nothing more
Awesome map i love it :)
JoJo
[hard]
02:03:259(1)Spacing?

[Aqua92's insane]
00:07:406(1)No new combo.
01:32:040(1)1 grid left.
02:34:479(10)New combo?

[Insane]
00:17:406(9)New combo

No critical problems.Nice map certainly!
Good luck and merry Xmas!
Yusu Aoi
Nice nice!!:)))
-IBFMV-
good good ! D:
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