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mp3 is barely passable on the ranking guidelines if you can find a 192 bitrate one it is recommended, if not, this one's still ok.
[General]
I recommend you use a different preview point, like at the start of a kiai to add more spice to the people listening to the preview of the song.
Inconsistent mapping, map all your diffs until the same point please.
[Timing]
00:52:767 - Kiai should start here on the long white tick
01:31:791 - ^
[Insane]Approach Rate +1
Yay box mapping... well you are new i guess that's expected.
00:06:059 (4,8) - This doesnt seem to be following anything,
On the next stream for example 00:08:377 (4,7) I'm not even hearing anything voice/instrument ANYTHING on here, why do theese 2 notes exist?.
00:09:474 (1) - Mapping to silence? only thing i hear here is your note's hitsound, no music/beat/lyric/instrument.
00:10:450 (2) - ^
00:11:425 (2) - ^
00:21:791 (4) - New combo
00:33:255 (8) - Doesnt look very appealing with all the linear slidering in here, instead try a spinner? it's long enough. if you do keep, remove hitsound whistle from the body of the slider and from the end, if you change for spinner use hitsound finish on it.
00:40:084 (7) - Decrescendo from 00:40:694 - 00:40:937 then back to normal at slider end?
00:42:035 (7) - Shorten until 00:42:523, the lyric its supposed to be following stops there
00:48:864 (1) - Add hitsound finish
01:00:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It's a very evil move to switch from doubles to singles in a death stream.
01:19:108 (7) - I thought the slider was (6)
01:28:011 (1) - Add hitsound finish
02:12:767 (8) - New combo like you did with the rest of this section?
02:14:718 (1) - Add hitsound finish.
[Normal]If not for the difficulty settings this feels more like a Hard, i recommend you adjust difficulty settings for a Hard instead and rename it to Hard.
Approach Rate +3, Overall Difficulty +2, HP Drain +3
00:33:255 (5) - Like on [Insane] I recommend you switch this for a spinner with hitsound finish, a long linear slider like this is not really appealing, if you do keep, make it consistent with [Insane] and use hitsound Finish at the end of the slider.
01:19:108 (4,1) - Mini-jump? either jump or not, but this is weird.
00:49:108 (1) - Add hitsound Finish at the end. However i recommend you use a spinner instead, this slider repeats so many times it's boring coz you kinda just stay there.
01:27:889 (1) - Add hitsound Finish.
02:03:011 (1,2) - Sounds weird, i recommend you remove (1) even if it is following something, this whole combo is following the Lyrics.
02:04:962 (1,2) - ^ Except here you can swap the new combo from (2) to (1) to fix.
02:06:913 (1,2) - ^
02:08:864 (1,2) - ^
02:10:816 (1,2) - ^
02:12:767 (1,2) - ^ this time for consistency if you do those changes.
02:14:718 (1) - Add hitsound finish.
[Easy]Easy should be renamed to La Cataline's Easy since he/she made that diff.
Preview point is not set.
00:33:259 (1) - Change into a spinner? it's more fitting, if you decide to keep at least make the slider look more pretty like:
00:48:869 (1) - ^
Map it until the end?