Okay
Decided to mod it
[Koigokoro]
First of all, the NC's here seems incredibly random, please redo them. One every big white tick is best, unless you're doing it for readability
As you can see, this map needs a lot of work IMO
However, it's mainly just small issues, or other things, the flow itself is quite decnet
Good luck!
Decided to mod it
[Koigokoro]
- 00:00:265 (1,2) - What are you aiming at with these sliders? They look rather ugly, please make them regular curves (Shapes such as these only work on longer sliders)
- 00:03:693 (1,2) - Personally, I hate such curved sliders, they look really cluttered and kinda bad
- 00:03:693 (1,3) - Why not stack these?
- 00:12:693 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks pretty bad, but here are some tips to improve the looks of it. Place 2 notes, copy paste them, rotate (120 degrees for triangle, 90 for rectangle, 72 for star etc.) This way they'll get better
You can also use the "Create Polygonal Circles"-tool (Ctrl shift D) - 00:16:765 (4,1) - Bad stack
- 00:17:407 (1,2) - Has pretty bad flow IMO, Ctrl G 1 to fix it (will also help in improving ^^)
- 00:20:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, use the copy + 72 degrees, or use Polygonal Circles
- 00:30:693 (4) - NC for an SV change
- 00:33:693 (4,5) - Red noded sliders don't fit here, make them grey noded
- 00:40:550 (1) - What's the point of this NC? Remove it, and NC 00:41:836 (2) - instead
- 01:08:836 (1) - This slider is very messed up, please make it look better
- 01:13:550 (4) - NC fo SV change
- 01:29:407 (1) - So curvy ;w;
- There are much more issues with this, but then I'll be really nitpicky and I don't really like doing it. Make sure all "wrong stars-triangles" and such are fixed, incorrect stacks are gone etc.
First of all, the NC's here seems incredibly random, please redo them. One every big white tick is best, unless you're doing it for readability
- 03:11:905 (1,1,1) - Remove NC
- 03:13:238 (2) - NC, big white tick
- 03:14:127 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part plays really bad, due to the sliders. Please, make them less curvy
- 03:18:571 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Again, all those NCs, are they neccessary?
- 03:32:349 (1,2,3,1) - Improve looking (Polygonal circles or rotate 90)
- 03:52:349 (1,2,3) - Low distance here feels really weird, as it's still quite powerful make them approx 1.5 ds
- 03:53:016 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I miss the claps here
- 04:38:349 (6,1) - Incorrect stack
- 04:58:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - Improve looking (rotate 72)
- 05:07:683 (4,1) - Blanket
- 05:13:238 (1,2) - ^^
- 05:20:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Improve looking (Rotate 60)
- 05:44:349 (1,5) - Stack
- 05:44:349 (1,3) - Blanket
- 05:50:571 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The NCs here are too much and make little to no sense
- 06:01:238 (5,1,1,1) - Please snap them correctly
- 06:03:238 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - And more weird NC
- This too needs a lot of work
As you can see, this map needs a lot of work IMO
However, it's mainly just small issues, or other things, the flow itself is quite decnet
Good luck!