M4M
[General]
TATOE HYPE
In all seriousness though, the flow is somewhat janky throughout the song
It's probably just me, but most of the slider shapes just look awkward most of the time ;-;
[Marathon]
00:00:265 (1,2) - You should probably make these sliders the same shape at the very least
00:01:122 (3,4,5) - The spacing is inconsistent, making it look awkward
00:01:979 (1,3) - If you do decide to keep 4 the way it is, you may want to consider curving 1 more so that the end is on top of 4, and 3 overlapping with 1 doesn't look very nice in my opinion. By the way, 1 curves awkwardly when moved, so you might want to remove the anchor and place it again
00:03:693 (6,7,8) - Maybe consider stacking 8 on the end of 6
00:04:550 (8) - The shape doesn't look very nice, maybe consider changing it to something smoother?
00:23:836 (5,6,1,2) - You can see these things overlapping on each other so it doesn't look very clean
00:33:693 (4,5) - Consider making these the same shape
00:34:550 (1) - This slider doesn't look very nice
00:45:693 (3,4) - The 4 leading into 00:46:550 (1) - doesn't flow well, maybe make a copy of 3 and just ctrl + j it and move it toward the end of 3
01:01:765 (3,1) - Overlap doesn't look very good
01:08:836 (1) - maybe make the anchor after the red one more to the right so it's curvier?
01:10:550 (1) - I prefer to have the red anchor in the middle of the white ones but it's your choice
01:20:407 (6,1) - Consider making these the same?
01:27:693 (1) - like 01:10:550 (1)
01:49:979 (1,4) - Consider making 4 a mirrored version of 1?
02:17:836 (3,1) - Overlap doesn't look very nice
02:31:122 (1) - 01:10:550 (1)
03:13:238 (2) - I don't see the point of having this as a four point slider when it looks nicer as a three point one
03:22:127 (1) - I guess I'm mostly bugged how a lot of the long sliders are only slightly curved throughout the map, and it really doesn't look very nice if it's repeated as many times as it is
03:39:460 (6,1) - I think it would be better if 1 was blanketed by 6
03:55:016 (1,2,3) - 1 into 2 really doesn't flow
04:21:238 (3,1) - I think it would be better if 3 blanketed 1
04:21:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you set up 2 to be somewhat of an anti-jump, you can make the star pattern afterwards less awkward and flow smoother
04:23:460 (1,2) - bad flow
04:26:794 (6,7,8,9) - ^
04:36:794 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing for no reason
05:06:127 - I don't see a reason why this inherited point section has the same multiplier as the previous section, you may want to consider putting a lower multiplier such as .8x for this part
05:07:460 (3,1) - Overlap looks bad
05:22:127 (1,3) - Make these blanket maybe?
05:50:127 (3) - This slider doesn't look very good
05:57:238 (1) - when playing through this map, it made me combo break .3. Usually people don't have this many repeats
06:01:238 (5,1,1,1) - These shapes don't look very appealing
06:41:889 (1) - ^
06:42:626 (1) - ^
06:44:282 (2,1) - Overlapping, doesn't flow well
06:51:828 (3,1) - Make these blanket
07:04:527 (1) - Not a very appealing shape
07:05:448 (1,1,1,1) - Awkward amount of NCs
07:23:116 (3,5) - Blanket these better
07:23:853 (5,1,1) - Looks real awkward
07:48:331 (1,2) - Shapes don't look very appealing
07:49:619 (1,3) - Blanket better
07:55:877 (1) - Shape doesn't look very appealing
09:38:761 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hitsounding sounds off
09:40:049 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - If you're going to do something like this, use something like This as a reference
Overall, blanket better and make slider art better :v
[General]
TATOE HYPE
In all seriousness though, the flow is somewhat janky throughout the song
It's probably just me, but most of the slider shapes just look awkward most of the time ;-;
[Marathon]
00:00:265 (1,2) - You should probably make these sliders the same shape at the very least
00:01:122 (3,4,5) - The spacing is inconsistent, making it look awkward
00:01:979 (1,3) - If you do decide to keep 4 the way it is, you may want to consider curving 1 more so that the end is on top of 4, and 3 overlapping with 1 doesn't look very nice in my opinion. By the way, 1 curves awkwardly when moved, so you might want to remove the anchor and place it again
00:03:693 (6,7,8) - Maybe consider stacking 8 on the end of 6
00:04:550 (8) - The shape doesn't look very nice, maybe consider changing it to something smoother?
00:23:836 (5,6,1,2) - You can see these things overlapping on each other so it doesn't look very clean
00:33:693 (4,5) - Consider making these the same shape
00:34:550 (1) - This slider doesn't look very nice
00:45:693 (3,4) - The 4 leading into 00:46:550 (1) - doesn't flow well, maybe make a copy of 3 and just ctrl + j it and move it toward the end of 3
01:01:765 (3,1) - Overlap doesn't look very good
01:08:836 (1) - maybe make the anchor after the red one more to the right so it's curvier?
01:10:550 (1) - I prefer to have the red anchor in the middle of the white ones but it's your choice
01:20:407 (6,1) - Consider making these the same?
01:27:693 (1) - like 01:10:550 (1)
01:49:979 (1,4) - Consider making 4 a mirrored version of 1?
02:17:836 (3,1) - Overlap doesn't look very nice
02:31:122 (1) - 01:10:550 (1)
03:13:238 (2) - I don't see the point of having this as a four point slider when it looks nicer as a three point one
03:22:127 (1) - I guess I'm mostly bugged how a lot of the long sliders are only slightly curved throughout the map, and it really doesn't look very nice if it's repeated as many times as it is
03:39:460 (6,1) - I think it would be better if 1 was blanketed by 6
03:55:016 (1,2,3) - 1 into 2 really doesn't flow
04:21:238 (3,1) - I think it would be better if 3 blanketed 1
04:21:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you set up 2 to be somewhat of an anti-jump, you can make the star pattern afterwards less awkward and flow smoother
04:23:460 (1,2) - bad flow
04:26:794 (6,7,8,9) - ^
04:36:794 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing for no reason
05:06:127 - I don't see a reason why this inherited point section has the same multiplier as the previous section, you may want to consider putting a lower multiplier such as .8x for this part
05:07:460 (3,1) - Overlap looks bad
05:22:127 (1,3) - Make these blanket maybe?
05:50:127 (3) - This slider doesn't look very good
05:57:238 (1) - when playing through this map, it made me combo break .3. Usually people don't have this many repeats
06:01:238 (5,1,1,1) - These shapes don't look very appealing
06:41:889 (1) - ^
06:42:626 (1) - ^
06:44:282 (2,1) - Overlapping, doesn't flow well
06:51:828 (3,1) - Make these blanket
07:04:527 (1) - Not a very appealing shape
07:05:448 (1,1,1,1) - Awkward amount of NCs
07:23:116 (3,5) - Blanket these better
07:23:853 (5,1,1) - Looks real awkward
07:48:331 (1,2) - Shapes don't look very appealing
07:49:619 (1,3) - Blanket better
07:55:877 (1) - Shape doesn't look very appealing
09:38:761 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hitsounding sounds off
09:40:049 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - If you're going to do something like this, use something like This as a reference
Overall, blanket better and make slider art better :v