Jona wrote:

Mod as requested through ingame PM :3

Awesome map, really fun to play GL! Also, mod ended up a lot shorter than I thought, sorry about that

[General]

1. If this song is in beatmania IIDX aswell, shouldn't it be in the tags? Also, I think you should add DDR as a tag.

[Kantan]

1. I'm sorry, but I suck at modding kantan and futsuu, I couldn't find anything that needs to be fixed

[Futsuu]

1. I'm sorry, but I suck at modding kantan and futsuu, I couldn't find anything that needs to be fixed.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:19:079 - k no~
2. 00:56:963(253,254,255) - ddk ok!
3. 00:57:540(257,258,259) - kkd ok!
4. 01:06:194 - Is it allowed to have an x5 circle stream right next to a triple in a muzukashii? Sure it's ddddd
5. 01:22:925 add single, and 01:23:213 remove hmm no here sounds fine
6. 01:30:906 - Is this off-beat or am I wrong? Maybe u r wrong! xD

[Oni]

1. In general, your oni has alot of ddd triples that would fit the song better if you added some kats in them. It's not a problem, and I understand if this is your mappingstyle, but I would change some of them if I were you to make the map less ''repetitive'' (also, I'm too lazy to point them out :p) ok I'll consider about it, maybe I'll add more "kats" and the map would be more fun??~ :3
2. 00:03:021 - Feels akward when playing, add d? hmm I think it's fine here
3. 00:08:406 - Add d? no~ the space is fine
4. 00:29:848 - add single, the gap between this double and the other doubles ( 00:30:040 ) feels wierd hmm I change the rhythm here!
5. 01:13:983 - k hmm sorry no

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:04:463(32,33) - k d? not bad~
2. 00:07:444 - k no
3. 00:09:752(72,73) - Make 72 k and remove 73? It fits the music better imo, but it makes the flow worse, so it might not be a good change, but worth considering I guess. Hmm I think the dkdddk fit the music although the electronic sound is not at 73 is 72, but dkddkk or dkddkd or dkddk .... Sound not that good IMO :3
4. 00:42:348 - k ok!
5. 00:48:117 - add single? hmm mo, I think 4-hit stream x2 are more fit the music here~
6. 01:03:502(286,287,288,289,290) - kkkkd sorry I prefer now!
7. 01:29:976 - d no xD "ddkk" is fine here

1. OD3 is better. Difficulty appropriate gameplay elements
2. 00:14:656 put note here. this break is so long, so i think 4/1 pattern is better.
3. 00:17:733 ^
4. 00:39:271 (29) - Add Finish for emphasis.
5. 00:45:425 (41) - ^, i hear cymbal.

1. OD4 is better. see above.
2. 00:37:733 (47) - K is better imo. can make enough break by changing for beginner players.
3. 00:45:425 (64) - add Finish? Cymbal sounds here.
4. 01:03:886 (111) -, 01:13:117 (135) -, ^
5. 01:30:906 (180) - move to 01:31:002 -, to follow the cymbal.

1. OD5 is better.
2. 00:04:656 why don't you put d here? i think it fits to the kick well.
3. 00:06:963 (28) - Finish. Cymbal sounds here.
4. 00:08:694 (37) - This pattern is bit hard on Muzu, so i recommend delete this note.
5. 00:19:271 (86) - Finish.
6. 00:48:886 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221) - This pattern is so hard on Muzu. consider to change to easier pattern. (high recommended.)
7. 01:06:771 (294,295) - Del for break.
8. 01:23:213 (374) - delete. ddkkd pattern is not recommended on Muzu.
9. 01:25:425 (385) - Finsih?
10. 01:27:156 (394) - see above.
11. 01:28:502 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411) - See above.
12. 01:30:906 (415) - same as Futsuu.?

1. 00:20:809 (116,117,118,119) - These finishers are not needed imo. bit noisy.

1. 00:37:540 (105,106,107,108,109) - 1/8 is not fit well, also 1/8 doesn't sound here. consider to change to other pattern.

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. M4M.
[ Kantan]

1. OD3 is better. Sure! Difficulty appropriate gameplay elements
2. 00:14:656 put note here. this break is so long, so i think 4/1 pattern is better. ok!
3. 00:17:733 ^ ok!
4. 00:39:271 (29) - Add Finish for emphasis. sure
5. 00:45:425 (41) - ^, i hear cymbal.

ya me too
[ Futsuu]

1. OD4 is better. see above. ok I understand :3
2. 00:37:733 (47) - K is better imo. can make enough break by changing for beginner players. hmm I change the slider 00:37:733 (47) - end at 00:37:733 (47) - so that beginners will have a little break here!
   
3. 00:45:425 (64) - add Finish? Cymbal sounds here. ok~
4. 01:03:886 (111) -, 01:13:117 (135) -, ^ lol ok
5. 01:30:906 (180) - move to 01:31:002 -, to follow the cymbal. Uhh.. As a hear the cymbal is at 01:30:906, I think it's fine here. I'm going to ask more people about this to see if ti is really off-beat :3

[ Muzukashii]

1. OD5 is better. ok
2. 00:04:656 why don't you put d here? i think it fits to the kick well. I put a k here~ ddk sounds better xD
3. 00:06:963 (28) - Finish. Cymbal sounds here. ok
4. 00:08:694 (37) - This pattern is bit hard on Muzu, so i recommend delete this note. hmm bpm is not high I think it's fine!
5. 00:19:271 (86) - Finish. sure
6. 00:48:886 (213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221) - This pattern is so hard on Muzu. consider to change to easier pattern. (high recommended.) ok I make it easier
   
7. 01:06:771 (294,295) - Del for break. hmm sorry no
8. 01:23:213 (374) - delete. ddkkd pattern is not recommended on Muzu. hmm the bpm isn't high... ddkk d is fine I think, actually it sounds dkkd but I think it would be a bit hard, so I think ddkk is fine!
9. 01:25:425 (385) - Finsih? ok
10. 01:27:156 (394) - see above. sorry no~ If it is bpm 180 I would definitely delete xD
11. 01:28:502 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411) - See above. hmm it fits the music, and it's basic ddd kkk ddd kkk, I think it's ok.... alright I will get more opinion from other!! o_oa
    
12. 01:30:906 (415) - same as Futsuu.?

[ Oni]

1. 00:20:809 (116,117,118,119) - These finishers are not needed imo. bit noisy. I wanna emphasize the voice xDD it plays well, I don't wanna delete the finish sorry orz

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:37:540 (105,106,107,108,109) - 1/8 is not fit well, also 1/8 doesn't sound here. consider to change to other pattern. ok fixed~~

Good luck!

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Hi~ from PM
this mod is simple modding ,,,,sorry

General

1,your BG is over size so,,,I change your BG
→http://puu.sh/jcXfW.jpg Oh the size is fine!! 1366x768 don't worry^^

2,I thought Muzukashii and Oni's total notes is closs
so I suggest Muzukashii's note cut back about 20 combo (400 or less) I don't think the Muzu is too hard... orz and it's only a 1:30 song, the muzu and oni 's total notes is not close~

Kantan

00:07:733 - add note hmm no
00:16:002 (1) - move to 00:15:809 - and change k too hard... and I think dd sounds better~
00:55:809 (57) - move to 00:56:194 - and change d,,,,this point same pattern　so your map should put in a change oh sounds nice!
01:02:733 (67) - move to 01:02:348 - and change d ,,,this mod is strong point!!!! in consideration of vocal pitch ok I change the rhythm here!! sounds better to me
01:08:309 (74) - move to 01:08:117 - and change k ok

Futsuu

00:18:309 (3) - move to 00:18:117 - It's certainly match the vocal voice,but this part should be given priority back music lool hmm I change the rhythm here q.q

Muzukashii

It is cut back modding ,,,,,sorry
00:04:559 (17) - delete ,,,,,it is so difficult for Muzu player hmm It's ok because the bpm isn't that fast, Muzu can have ddk or kkd I think :3
00:06:675 (27) - ^ and 00:06:579 (26) - K it's fine here sorry..
00:08:694 (36) - delete it's extra note No it fits the music >.<
00:09:271 (38) - ^ no
00:09:752 - add note no
00:14:848 (64) - move to 00:14:656 - ,,,this mod is strong point!!!! in consideration of vocal pitch Yes it is but I wanna follow singer's vocal here @@
00:27:636 (121) - move to 00:27:733 - and change d ,,,sounds better this pattern sorry here is the same pattern as 00:25:713 (114,115,116,117,118,119) - I think it's ok
00:45:329 (198) - delete no kkd is fits the music~
00:54:656 (239) - move to 00:54:463 -and change k ,,,this mod is strong point!!!! in consideration of vocal pitch no if I add it sounds not that good IMO... orz
00:57:636 (254) - delete
01:06:483 (288) - delete!!! 1/4 of5 notes soooooo difficult no it's not~ >.<"a
01:23:213 (369) - delete no q.q
01:27:733 (391) - ^
01:27:156 (388) - ^

umm~ last kiai time so diificult

finsih~！
I think this map will be still better 　
Good Luck

Sorry no change at Muzu.... >.< But I'll get more opinion from other to see if it's really too hard, I think it's not that hard... ddd kkk ddd kkk is a easy pattern! hmm...... maybe I'm wrong~~~ But if the bpm is up to 170 I promise I won't use that pattern and something like ddk or kkd~~

shionelove wrote:

from PM
[Kantan]
00:16:002 (1,2) - 1/2 not allowed in Kantan(especially this BPM,if BPM were about 60~80 it would be accepted)
01:08:309 (74,75) - ^
01:14:463 (82,83) - ^

other diffs later

Jona wrote:

[General]

1. If this song is in beatmania IIDX aswell, shouldn't it be in the tags? Also, I think you should add DDR as a tag.

Nyan wrote:

[General]

Actually, this 1:34 MOON is DDR version so don't change the source. ok

But first appearance of this song is pop'n music 13 Carnival, so add pop'n music to tags. Added!

[Kantan]

Slider Velocity can be reduced to 1.20 Sure~

Pattern is good. Thanks!

[Futsuu]

Futsuu usually not use 1/2 with different colors. You can keep this, but always notice this is hard Futsuu diff. No It's not hard :3 I think it's fine~

00:10:809 - add a don ok

01:12:348 - add a don ok!

01:18:886 (150) - can be a kat It already a kat =w=b

01:24:656 - add a don sure~

[Muzukashii]

Using 1/4 with different colors means it is super hard on Muzukashii. Even 65% of Muzukashii 8 level songs don't use those patterns. Hmm... no it's totally ok as a Muzu, I remember there are many songs have ddk or kkd in some 5 or 6 level songs, and this song's BPM is 156~ Those 8 level songs maybe have a high BPM so that would be a bit hard.

You need to reduce the amount of those patterns. I think it's fine sorry :3

[Oni]

00:25:233 (137) - Remove Finish ok!!

00:42:059 (224) - can be kat kdd sounds better to me

00:51:386 (280) - Remove Finish ok!

00:57:733 (316) - add Finish No it is in the middle of notes~ Hmm I don't like finish here..

01:25:425 (490) - add Finish ok

[Inner Oni]

00:18:309 - add a don Sorry no, only "kd" sounds more fit the music to me!

00:19:271 (139) - add Finish no it's in the middle of notes :3

00:25:233 (16) - Remove Finish ok!!

00:50:040 (193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - kdddkd / kdddkd / kddkd Not bad!!~ but I think kddkddkddkddkddkd is really fit that part although they are not follow the cymbal, I'll consider about this!! ww

01:23:406 (474) - don sorry kkdkkdkkdkkdk is ok here~

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  Good?

• 
  
  00:16:002 (1) - delete.I think no need this notes.& for consistecy.
  
  01:14:453 - delete.for Kantan player.

• 
  
  00:01:101 - delete.this note is sounds good.but,blue tick is hard.
  
  00:02:625 - ^ & other
  
  00:46:186 - delete.I think no need this notes.& add little break time?

• 
  
  I think should some remove notes.
  
  00:06:671 - delete.I think ddd kk is little hard.so ddd k is good.
  
  00:13:795 - delete.this diff is Muzukashii...so I think no need this notes. It makes more clear for pure sounds.
  
  00:16:862 - ^
  
  01:23:021 (357,358,359,360) - this pattern is Oni.so think again.

Charlotte wrote:

Hi.from PM req

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Good?

[ Kantan]

• 
  
  00:16:002 (1) - delete.I think no need this notes.& for consistecy. ok!
  
  01:14:453 - delete.for Kantan player. ok!

[ Futsuu]

• 
  
  00:01:101 - delete.this note is sounds good.but,blue tick is hard. Hmm no.. it's ok as a Futsuu IMO
  
  00:02:625 - ^ & other If I do it would be too Easy!
  
  00:46:186 - delete.I think no need this notes.& add little break time? ok!!

[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  I think should some remove notes. Ok I'll try :3
  
  00:06:671 - delete.I think ddd kk is little hard.so ddd k is good. Hmm it's okay if the bpm is 156 :3
  
  00:13:795 - delete.this diff is Muzukashii...so I think no need this notes. It makes more clear for pure sounds. Ok!
  
  00:16:862 - ^
  
  01:23:021 (357,358,359,360) - this pattern is Oni.so think again. Alright~ But I'm pretty sure there are Official Taiko Muzukashii maps have some pattrens harder than this :3

Good luck

shionelove wrote:

from PM
[Kantan]
00:16:002 (1,2) - 1/2 not allowed in Kantan(especially this BPM,if BPM were about 60~80 it would be accepted) OK fixed!!
01:08:309 (74,75) - ^ fixed
01:14:463 (82,83) - ^ fixed

[Futsuu]
00:39:656 (50) - delete finish Sure!

[Muzukashii]
00:09:271 (41,42,43) - i recommend change pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3453090 Changed to another pattern o_oa
00:12:540 (56,57) - add finish 1st one delete finish 2nd one ok!!
01:23:021 (358,359,360,361) - i think this is quite hard for Muzukashii diff,make another easier pattern don't use 4stream(QAT may DQ) OK I understand~ I deleted the 4-hit stream although it fits the music pretty well IMO q.q
01:27:540 (380,381,382,383) - ^^^ Ya all fixed
01:28:502 (384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395) - same,too hard OK changed to d d kkk d d kkk
01:30:906 (399) - wrong timing haha... really... My miss o_o"

[Oni]
00:12:444 (71) - wrong timing fixed
01:06:290 - add d Sure sounds good

[Inner Oni]
00:08:598 (63) - delete or move to 00:08:694 No, The 2-hit stream fits the music :3
00:11:386 (88,89,90,91) - no 1/6 sound=DQable sry blame osu!rule plz Hmm most of my testplayer said the 1/6 work pretty well....... And I think the sound is 1/6, u can hear the electronic from the music!! plz I don't wanna delete the 1/6, only 1/4 can't fit this song enough...... I think all 1/4 is BORING :/
00:12:733 (98,99,100,101) - ^ same...i don't recommend use 1/6 for this song hmm sorry :/
00:18:309 - add d no the pause is fine to me q.q
00:23:502 (5,6,7) - 1/4,next is ok like 00:35:809 (95,96,97,98,99,100) - ok fixed!!
00:49:848 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) - there're so many ghost notes i'm afraid it's DQable lol Inner Oni can always have some ghost notes \:3/ also it sounds nice as the trans-point to the second part of Kial time www

end

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Taiko mod

About

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

General

1. delete this kiai 01:19:271 - is not necessary.

No it is the last part of outro and fit the music so I wanna keep it~ also here I use x1.15 speed at the Inner Oni!

Kantan

SV: 1.40 In my personal opinion I hate the rule about 1.40 in all taiko diffs, I talked with Nardo and he said that 1.20 of SV at kantan is only available when BPM is more than 180. ok fixed

1. 00:03:886 (5,6) - first of all, this couple don't have the same sound as 00:02:348 (3,4) -, second, kantan should be more simple, try moving 00:04:271 (6) - to 00:04:656 - and them delete 00:05:040 (7) - OK sounds good~~
2. 00:15:809 (21,22) - it can be more simple, 00:15:809 (21) - move to 00:15:425 -, follow voice better ok~
3. 00:22:733 (6,7) - why? It's not necessary. hmm it sounds fine here
4. 00:24:656 (9) - if you follow my previous advice, move to 00:24:463 - and change to D hmm sorry here is the second part of the song, I want make some different and follow the clap~~
5. 00:25:809 (11) - delete, after finish you should add a little break, something like: 00:13:117 (19,20) - 00:19:271 (2,3) - 00:31:579 (19,20) - except when is really needed like previous point Sorry but I think here is fine to me :/
6. 00:32:733 (20) - remove this note, 00:34:271 (22) - move to 00:33:886 -, 00:35:040 (24,25) - delete these notes, them move 00:36:963 (27) - to 00:36:771 - and change to D no~
7. 01:08:117 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - it can be more simple, it feels that you want to follow all kind of sounds, 01:08:117 (2) - delete this note, 01:10:425 (6) - move to 01:10:809 - and 01:11:194 (7) - move to 01:11:579 - no I like the d k, d k and it doesn't have any problem :3
8. 01:19:271 (18,19) - keep consistency with previous patterns ( 1:06:963 (1) - ), delete 01:18:886 (17) - and 01:19:656 (19) - OK I changed some
9. 01:20:425 (20,21) - Idk why you forgot to add a note at 01:20:809 - , delete 01:20:425 (20,21) - I' don't forget, It is intentiionally..
10. 01:21:963 (22) - delete this one no
11. move 01:22:733 (24) - 01:23:117 - and 01:23:502 (25) - to 01:23:886 -

=3=a the part is fine

Futsuu

1. add a note at 00:30:425 - no
2. 00:31:002 (32) - move to 00:31:194 - no
3. 00:31:963 (34) - delete, a little break will be better because before 00:31:963 (34) - you have a D ( 00:31:579 (33) - ) ok fixed
4. 00:37:733 (50) - why slider? there is an important beat at 00:37:733 - , you should change to D ok fixed
5. 01:26:963 (174,175,176,177) - feels off, 01:27:156 (175) - move to 01:27:348 -,add a note at 01:27:540 -, them 01:27:733 (176,177) - move to 01:27:925 - keep consistency with 01:15:040 (143,144,145,146) - OK I changed the rhythm~

Muzukashii

1. 00:18:598 (79) - unnecessary triplet here. Triplets on Muzukashii are available only at Kiai Time and maybe 2 triplets on normal part only when is really necessary, this is not the case Here is fine
2. 00:19:175 (83) - same as above because you can't forget to add finish at 00:19:271 (84) - ok removed a note here
3. 00:37:733 (163) - same as Futsuu, at 00:37:733 - there is an important beat that should be D fixed
4. 00:44:175 (192) - don't necessary, remove It is NECESSARY.
5. 00:45:425 (199) - add finish, D no here is a triplet I don't wanna add finish
6. 00:56:483 (249) - remove this note no because it sounds awesome
7. 00:57:636 (255) - same as above, and them add finish at 00:57:733 (256) - no ddk, d k k kkd is fine

Oni

1. 00:15:521 (86) - is it really necessary? it feels overmapped, you should delete imo. Hmm it is ok IMO
2. 00:18:598 (102) - move to 00:18:406 - hmm no
3. 00:19:079 (105,106,107) - should be ddk no kkd is better

GL

EDIT: ughhhh I remapped some part of the Kantan~~

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via ... Delay PM

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General:

Snap Point preview in 00:38:552 [b]Oh I'm intentional..... it's on 1/16 beat.... xDD


don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Kantan:

GOOD Thx!

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Futsuu:

01:31:725 - No have spinner and is correct. I don't wanna add Spinner so fast after a note as a Futsuu~

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Muzukashii:

00:33:167 - Change to d (variety) sorry it's better now for me

00:42:398 - Delete (no sound) Hmm no u can hear the small drum here, and if I delete it would be a weird pause <.>

00:44:149 - Triple with a single color (focusing this Guideline/Rule -> Stick to simple 1/4 patterns like ddd/kkk, ddk/kkd and do not overuse them) No ddk and kkd are very simple... It's a Muzu and bpm 156, so it's totally ok and fit the music!!
00:45:283 - Same No one said Muzu should only use ddd/kkk, or many maps should have been DQ... And I don't overuse them.

00:54:706 - Move to 00:54:513 Hmm sorry but here sounds better now for me
00.54:898 - Delete (is better to follow imo)

00:56:436 - Same situacion about triples in 00:44:149
00:57:590 - Same
01:01:244 - Same

01:14:898 - Delete no it's fine with the 2-hit here

01:22:975 - Delete (a mini break pls) OK I'll consider make a pasue here, but not delete that note~~

01:31:725 - Delete spinner (no have notable fade-out for this) Hmm maybe only a bit fade but it's ok to keep that~ :3

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Oni:

00:03:648 - add k (or is intentional?) Yaaaaaay~ I think 4-hit stream sounds more fit the music!! :3
00:08:456 - Same hmm I add on at 00:08:744 -

00:15:283 - ddddd -> ddkdk (follow vocal and variety) Sorry but I think ddddd is better lol

00:31:533 - Move to 00:31:436- and... No it sounds not that good IMO
00:31:629 - Change to D

01:11:052 - Move to 01:11:148- (is better follow high sound) hmm kkd kkd is better

01:22:975 - add note (have sound) orz no~ how to say... I just think if I use 5-hit stream here sounds less... Rhythmic??

01:25:283 - add note (have sound too) lol I prefer add one at 01:24:994 - to be a 6 hit-stream

01:31:725 - Delete spinner (no have notable fade-out for this) Same as Muzu~ It is both ok to remove or keep IMO

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Inner:

00:06:629 (45,46) - ctrl+g (follow high sounds) 00:06:725 (46) - This one is the highest sound as a hear ovoa "dddddk" is fine
00:09:513 (69,71) - ctrl+g (same) Hmm ya but the rhythm sounds fine here, I don't wanna follow that sound here..

00:24:321 - Change to K (same cymbal sound) no D K is better >.<

00:31:148 - add note (or is intentional?) Intentional... ddk k kkd is a nice beat here

00:33:456 - add note (have notable sound for a triple) Sorry no~ if I add one here sounds a bit weird for me..

00:36:629 - Remove finish all these 4 notes (no have hit sound for finish) I think it's ok to keep them because I follow the vocal and the sound here~

00:50:956 - ctrl+g with next note (Your sequence is obvious but this part is a bit bad ...) hmm ok I'll consider about this.. ya maybe this stream isn't that good :/

00:51:629 - Change to k (or ctrl+g with previous note)

01:12:783 - Change to k (high sound) ya high sound but I think kddddk sounds better than kdddkk :3

01:22:302 - Change to d (low sound) no it is still a high sound lol

01:22:590 - Move to 01:22:494- (focusing in a good sequence change) Sorry but here the rhythm sounds really cool now to me <.>a

01:26:052 - This -> This (more variety in inner please) hahaha I know but I just wanna a easier stream here.. xDD as u can see this map is full of crazy and complicated stream lol

01:31:725 - Delete spinner (no have notable fade-out for this)

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1. 00:13:167 - I guess you wanted to change volume here. But the thing is that you forgot to turn off kiai. Besides, if you want to change volume you should put the inherit 1/4th before. So move it to 00:13:071 - instead and don't forget to uncheck kiai!
2. 01:06:917 - 01:07:109 - Remove these inherits as they provide no use whatsoever
3. I know you said it's intentional, but why preview point on 1/16 z.z

1. HP should be higher considering the length of the song. Refer to this for more in-depth information!
2. 00:18:936 (27) - Consider removing this to maintain consistency with previous patterns
3. 00:32:398 (47) - Remove to provide a break after the previous pattern
4. 01:16:629 (17) - I'd say to remove this to provide a break before the next pattern starts

1. 00:03:552 (8) - Maybe do something with this note (remove, move idk) to make the rhythm transition smoother
2. 00:09:321 - Should add a note here to keep rhythm consistency until you change it
3. 00:30:090 (29) - I'd even move to 00:29:898 - , since you provide a break right after

1. I'd say to keep the alternating doublets out of non-kiai times (I was told this by a QAT): 00:01:152 (2,3) - 00:02:690 (8,9) - and such. I'd make them monocolour.
2. 00:06:633 (27,28) - Highly suggest tuning this down to provide a break
3. 00:35:671 (153) - Suggest deleting to provide a break
4. 01:01:248 (269,270,271) - I'd suggest staying away from this and sticking to monocolour patterns until you get to Oni.
5. 01:21:436 - 01:23:936 - This pattern is a bit long and doesn't provide breaks. I'd say deleting some note in between
6. 01:31:729 (1) - Move it one 1/4 tick later, since it is recommended to have 1/2 spacing between notes and rolls/shakers. *THIS GOES FOR ONI AND INNER AS WELL*

1. 00:08:263 (47) - Maybe turn this one to k to contrast with the end of the pattern?
2. 00:29:513 - You suddenly change rhythm here and it makes it sound a bit awkward. Why is it?
3. 01:25:283 - I think you missed a mappable sound here
4. 01:26:725 (502) - I'd say k to contrast with rest of notes

1. 00:06:821 - Missed mappable sound?
2. 00:49:898 (189,190,191,192) - Keeps the flow better as a kddk here I think
3. 01:13:071 (376) - Shouldn't this be on 01:12:975 - ?

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[ General]

1. 00:13:167 - I guess you wanted to change volume here. But the thing is that you forgot to turn off kiai. Besides, if you want to change volume you should put the inherit 1/4th before. So move it to 00:13:071 - instead and don't forget to uncheck kiai!
   Actually...I wanna the "fountain effect" (Quick Flash) by Kiai Time!! xDD So I think it's ok to keep that??
2. 01:06:917 - 01:07:109 - Remove these inherits as they provide no use whatsoever Same, The effect lol
3. I know you said it's intentional, but why preview point on 1/16 z.z oh Because if I set it on the next white line, the first voice of the singer would be cut half... o_oa.... So I decide to set it earlier~

[ Kantan]

1. HP should be higher considering the length of the song. Refer to this for more in-depth information!
   Hmm I've seen other ranked maps and most of them use HP 3~5 too, so I think it's fine!!
2. 00:18:936 (27) - Consider removing this to maintain consistency with previous patterns Hmm wanna make a bit difference here, k d d is fine~
3. 00:32:398 (47) - Remove to provide a break after the previous pattern No the k is necessary <w>a
4. 01:16:629 (17) - I'd say to remove this to provide a break before the next pattern starts Ughh it's not too difficult here so.... owo

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:03:552 (8) - Maybe do something with this note (remove, move idk) to make the rhythm transition smoother I think it's ok here ww
2. 00:09:321 - Should add a note here to keep rhythm consistency until you change it Sorry but I think it's fine :3
3. 00:30:090 (29) - I'd even move to 00:29:898 - , since you provide a break right after Sure!!

Other than, that this seems pretty cool already Glad to hear that~~ because Normal is not that good IMO loool

[ Muzukashii]

1. I'd say to keep the alternating doublets out of non-kiai times (I was told this by a QAT): 00:01:152 (2,3) - 00:02:690 (8,9) - and such. I'd make them monocolour. lol What a bad rule.. No I don't accept that, non-Kiai time sometimes harder than Kiai... and this song is bpm 156 as a Muzu have such as "dk" and "kd" iss totally ok IMO, I'll ask QAT about that~ thx for telling anyway!! ^^
2. 00:06:633 (27,28) - Highly suggest tuning this down to provide a break hmm Sorry but I think it's not too hard here!
3. 00:35:671 (153) - Suggest deleting to provide a break no If I delete sounds weird lol
4. 01:01:248 (269,270,271) - I'd suggest staying away from this and sticking to monocolour patterns until you get to Oni. I won't accept that, ddk and kkd is basic taiko triplet! I don't think it would be too hard or like Oni <w>
5. 01:21:436 - 01:23:936 - This pattern is a bit long and doesn't provide breaks. I'd say deleting some note in between Ok I delete one note to make a pause :3
6. 01:31:729 (1) - Move it one 1/4 tick later, since it is recommended to have 1/2 spacing between notes and rolls/shakers. *THIS GOES FOR ONI AND INNER AS WELL* Oh I'll consider it for a while... maybe just remove the spinner directly..

[ Oni]

1. 00:08:263 (47) - Maybe turn this one to k to contrast with the end of the pattern? no xD They are far away~~ It's ok now and the pattern is different with the last part
2. 00:29:513 - You suddenly change rhythm here and it makes it sound a bit awkward. Why is it? oh just like follow the Inner Oni~ and I think the beat sounds not bad~ >.< Maybe follow the vocal
3. 01:25:283 - I think you missed a mappable sound here no here is 6-hit stream not 7-hit~
4. 01:26:725 (502) - I'd say k to contrast with rest of notes Well a bit difference is ok!!

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:06:821 - Missed mappable sound? Same as I said~ U can hear the electronic sound and it is a 6-hit stream~
2. 00:49:898 (189,190,191,192) - Keeps the flow better as a kddk here I think Hmm I'll consider about the 1/6
3. 01:13:071 (376) - Shouldn't this be on 01:12:975 - ? Nooooooooooo

Nothing else to add. Map is very polished already. Great job!

I also have to add that I fancy a lot the rhythm you used in Inner Oni. So I'm giving you a star (>^_^)>


Good luck on the rank!

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Nofool wrote:

o/ m4m (thanks for your mod already)
cool song Glad you like ^^

my suggestions about HP changes might look weird just now but rules have recently changed about it, the lower the difficulty the higher the HP (that's just logic in fact). OK I understand~ <.>
wiki article : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode
new qualified map example : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/676252&m=1

About the set, futsuu/muzukashii spread might be too big. Also imo Oni/Inner Oni still need more improvement. Yet that's a fine set

[Kantan]
HP 8 ? fixed
main point : keeping the 5 1/2 notes in a row only for kiai ? v hmm?
- 00:31:244 (45) - i would prefer to remove this one, just to keep the usual structures (x x xxx). OK!
- 00:52:013 - i think k here then move - 00:52:398 (81) - to - 00:52:783 - as k is fine, the kiai starts this way. Hmm no I want a bit difference here~ or it would be too repeatitive IMO... T.T
- maybe move - 01:03:552 (101) - to - 01:03:167 - ? might plays better. Hmm no I think it sounds better now!
- i would still prefer to remove - 01:16:629 (17) - and - 01:18:936 (22) - and change - 01:18:167 (20) - to k for cinsistency with earlier same part in the song (+ what i suggested first). No I wanna make a bit different(harder) here~ Sorry lol
pretty well done tho. Thx!

[Futsuu]
HP 7 ? Sure~~
- move - 00:19:129 (46) - to - 00:18:744 - ? ddd d cooler and to emphasize - 00:19:321 (1) -. Yes sounds nice~ But I should follow the drum sound here... As u can hear 00:18:936 (45,46,1) - All have the drum sound
- 01:10:859 - 01:19:321 - as suggested in the kantan, here i would rather prefer you to do the same that you had at - 00:40:706 - 00:13:167 -. Hmm Sorry but I like to make some difference! I'm actually not that focus on the Consistency
- 01:29:513 - maybe d here ? ok!!
the main structure was a bit harder to get in this one but looks prety consistent once i get it. OK~ thx ^^

[Muzukashii]
HP 6 ? Ya alright~~
- move - 00:18:648 (79) - to - 00:18:456 - ? plays better imo. It's fine now too~
- move - 00:28:744 (124) - to - 00:29:321 - ? consistency with - 00:26:244 -. Hmm The two part is different~ so I wanna make them different rhythm here~ and I think it fit the music now~ sorry
- 00:33:167 (142) - d ? plays better overall imo. Hmm no~ k k kdk sounds better IMO <.>
- remove - 00:41:436 (177) - ? to reduce a bit the density + this one isnt particularily needed. Oh it's ok here~ It won't be too hard~
- huu well you know this kiai is like 2 times the same part, but from what you mapped i prefer the first half of the first part and the second half of the second part lol, so i would've prefered a mix with - 00:39:321 - 00:45:475 - and - 00:58:167 - 01:02:398 - and kinda repeat it two times lol (my personnal pref for consistency here again). I prefer make a bit different sorry ><a
- 01:14:898 (322) - mm i think i would pref to remove this one and use the same structure at - 00:07:398 - :c ? I don't really like a map too repeatitive~ So I prefer make them a bit different~ sorry.. :c
might be a big difficulty jump from futsuu here, any BN should point it out if that's an issue. Hmm I think it's fine~
-- Futsuu 2.08 and -- Muzu 3.17, Only 1.1 gap not too big... and actually my Futsuu is a "Hard Futsuu"!! :3
But I'll ask BN/QAT about that~

[Oni]
- 00:01:436 (5) - k ? sounds like it. no
- 00:08:648 (50) -, - 00:08:936 (52) - imo you could remove both, not really needed. Hmm it's ok to me!
- 00:18:648 (104) - might play better as d. Sounds great!!
- 00:29:994 (165) - ^, alternate with previous ddk dk. Hmm the rhythm is fine here!
- 00:46:821 - dkd 1/4 here and remove - 00:47:206 (254) - ? flow consistency with - 00:45:763 -. No~
- 01:14:802 (418,420,422) - remove ? explained earlier, and then you can add k at - 01:15:956 - toavoid a bit that break. OK fixed!!
lack of consistency here imo, there are a lot of sound to follow in the song but you should try to focus on some main ones and keep them for the whole diff instead of switching (basically reworking a little bit your break spot and structures).
I'm not that care about the consistency ><" I prefer make the map more creativer!! Sorry~

[Inner Oni]
HP 5 ? hmm 6 is ok IMO~
- 00:21:725 (154) - d ? nope~ dkk is better than ddk here
- 00:28:552 - 00:31:052 -try something like that : No I like my rhythm now xD

basically tour structure from - 00:25:475 - 00:28:167 - but with the colors you used after.
- 00:32:975 - kkd instead of d k ? d k d k feels empty. You are right ^^
- 00:59:513 (260) - remove ? consistency with - 00:57:975 -. no I wanna make some difference and the two part should have different rhythm IMO~
- 01:15:475 (393) - move to - 01:15:667 - ? No The two 4-hit stream fit the music here!
i would still say the same about consistency but Inners are more free tho. Yes!! I just don't wanna use the same rhythm too many times!
It would be a bit Easy and.... maybe Boring to me~~ <.>a
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Good luck'

S a n d wrote:

Taiko mod request from: 12BARRY21
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: Oni, Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*


- 00:01:436 - 改k? 這邊高音 ok
- 00:03:936 ~ 00:04:898 - 這邊改成這樣? 跟歌曲比較合 嗯我改了一些!! 我怕那樣連續三個4連有點太難=w=a
- 00:07:398 - 改k? 這邊高音 ok!
- 00:09:129 - ^ 玩起來也比較順 ok!!
- 00:12:494 - 加個k? 因為這邊也有聲音 嗯嗯
- 00:13:167 - 只閃一下的kiai會被DQ 必須刪 這樣阿xD 我不知道啦~~ 刪摟
- 00:15:379 - 改k? 比較配vocal+上多變化 我改dkdkd
- 00:20:859 ~ 00:21:436 - 這邊的重音沒有強到需要用大圓lol 或是用少一點 我想留著耶... 覺得打起來有fu~ 如果可以留的話不想改~
- 00:30:859 ~ 00:31:629 - 改成這樣? (最後一顆是D) 這樣比較配 再加上可以放大圓 恩 不錯!!
- 01:00:859 - 這邊改為d? 沒高音啊 又是收尾 恩~
- 01:07:013 - 跟之前一樣 只閃一下的kiai會被DQ 必須刪 嗚嗚
- 01:08:456 - 加d? 因為這邊有聲音啊 ok~
- 01:10:571 - 加k? 原因同上 我怕有點太難~ 這樣就好啦
- 01:15:090 - 改為k? 層次感 不要~
- 01:18:167 - 改為k? 明顯高音 ddkkd我覺得比較好耶
- 01:20:763 - 加d? 因為這邊有聲音 ok~


- 00:01:533 - 這邊改為k? 原因跟Oni一樣 高音 00:01:436 (5) - 這邊巴 改了
- 00:05:475 - 這邊改為D? 因為聲音和00:05:859 一樣 可是00:05:859有大圓 這邊卻沒有 怪怪ㄉ 恩~ 本來是想強調最高音就好啦~
- 00:06:244 - dddddk -> dkkddk 聲音的感覺比較不一樣 再加上是Inner oni可以弄複雜點的串 還有這樣玩家比較好讀譜 不會需要猜換手換哪邊 6連而已不會難讀拉哈哈~ 我覺得dddddk比較好耶 拍謝摟
- 00:09:802 - 這邊應該要是dkddkd 因為k的聲音在這個點上 不是在00:09:898. 之後 00:09:898 就可以刪掉了 因為本來就多餘的 我改成dkddkk了
- 00:10:475 - kkdkk配得很好 強調那個k的聲音很讚owob 謝謝w
- 00:13:167 - 閃一下的kiai刪掉 第三次了 原因不用再說 .....
- 00:19:321 - 這邊改為D? 明顯的敲鑼聲啊 ok
- 00:30:283 - kddkk -> kkddk? 因為這邊的聲音跟00:29:129 不一樣啊 用同樣的串怪怪的 (也多變化) 我考慮一下~ 我覺得聽起來很順~
- 00:38:552 - 為什麼這邊Oni有東西 這邊卻沒有www? Inner比較特別阿~~ www
- 00:42:783 - kkkdd -> kkdkd? 比較合歌曲 不要~
- 00:50:186 和 00:50:763 - 刪掉? 雖然會變簡單 可是我覺得這樣比較能強調代替大圓的 k, 留白也是一種藝術 我喜歡現在這樣~ 抱歉
- 00:55:571 - 改為k? 比較合vocal ok!!
- 01:03:648 - kdddd -> kkddd? 這樣比較配合你前面的風格 kk dd kk dd kk 恩~
- 01:07:013 - 閃一下kiai (ry.... xxxxxxxxx
- 01:07:398 - 這邊改為k? 原因跟Oni一樣 多變化的層次感 ok
- 01:09:129 - dk -> kk? 這邊的聲音和前面的dk明顯的有差 多變化也好 我改kd
- 01:11:629 - 這邊改為D? 和一開始的原因一樣 恩
- 01:12:590 - 改為k? 看譜比較方便 聽起來比較好 不要~ 想強調頭尾就好
- 01:18:648 - 改為k? 多變化 單純個人喜好 不要~ 覺得現在比較好聽
- 01:20:090 - 改為d? 看譜比較方便 比較配音樂 這邊也本來就是串的起始點 我喜歡現在這樣.. 抱歉摟~
- 01:20:859 ~ 01:21:725 - 改為? 節奏配合音樂多了 囧.. 我覺得現在的還ok阿~
- 01:23:936 - 這邊改為D? 和一開始跟之前的原因一樣 嗯嗯
- 01:28:359 - 刪掉? 這邊沒聲音啊 手改不錯阿 都2連2連 就接偶數連打~ 我不想改摟ww

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1. 00:03:936 (26,28) - ctrl+g these notes makes it more fitting.
2. 00:07:686 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - d k k d k k d d d k k? Fits high notes more, and still flows nice.
3. 00:11:244 (86,87,88,89,90,91) - Just kkkkk? Feels nice, but QAT don't like unfitting 1/6 (they say it's overmap)
4. 00:29:706 (48,49,50,51,52) - kkdkk? kddkd doesn't flow very well
5. 00:30:571 (56) - d? kdddk makes for good flow here
6. 00:35:859 (96) - d? Flows nicer after a pattern like 00:35:283 (91,92,93,94,95) -
7. 00:37:783 (109) - d? Since this seems to be a descending sound.
8. 00:48:455 (179) - k? Nicer flow.
9. 00:49:898 (191,192,193,194) - Maybe just kdk? Another overmap.
10. 01:00:283 (274,277) - k for both? Since 00:59:513 (267,268,269,270,271,272) - is already a similar pattern.
11. 01:01:725 (286) - k? So not another kdd pattern.
12. 01:02:975 (296,297,298,299) - kkdkd instead of doubles? Fits much better I think.
13. 01:05:956 (321,322,323,324,325,326) - d k d d k (no 1/6)? Another overmap.
14. 01:07:783 - Stream starts here. Maybe move 01:07:686 (337) - to 01:07:783 ? After you do that, make the stream d k k k d k d d k k? (starts at
15. 01:07:783 and ends at 01:08:648 )
16. 01:19:225 - Delete the note here so the speed-up isn't part of the stream?
17. 01:15:283 (397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404) - These don't fit the song too well
18. 01:19:898 (441,442,443,444,445,446) - ddkkdd? To fit music more.
19. 01:22:590 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - Doesn't fit music too well
20. 01:22:590 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - k d k k d k k k d k k d k? You can also have a note at 01:22:494 if you want to be crazy :3
21. 01:26:533 (498) - k? To differentiate the stream a little.
    
    Fun diff :3

1. 00:19:609 (111) - Delete? I think 00:20:090 (114,115,116,117) - is enough doubles.
2. 00:26:148 (143) - Move to 00:26:244 ? Seems weird with just double.
3. 00:29:225 (162) - ^ to 00:29:321
4. 00:33:840 (186) - ^ delete?
5. 00:38:552 (206,207,208,209) - Delete like in Inner Oni?
6. 00:48:359 (264,265) - delete? Doesn't flow good with kdddk imo. Or just 00:48:456 (265) - .
7. 00:49:898 (274) - d? Instead of more ddk
8. 00:59:321 (326) - delete? For a small break and emphasize long note in vocals
9. 01:02:206 (341,342) - ctrl+g? Fits nice I think.
10. 01:04:513 (352,353,354,355,356) - d ddd k?
11. 01:05:667 (361,363) - Delete so the player can hit the 1/6 easier? This part is much harder than muzu...
12. 01:06:340 (365) - Delete this note to simplify the stream?
13. 01:10:186 (393) - Delete to simplify this dense part? 01:11:244 (399,400,401) - then this just k k?
14. 01:15:379 (422) - Delete? Doesn't fit very well.
15. 01:16:244 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439) - nerf to ddd kkk for both?
16. 01:18:552 (445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453) - k ddkkddd to make it easier?
17. 01:22:206 (471,472) - Delete to make easier? Then make 01:23:071 (478,479,480,481) - ddkkd?
18. 01:24:802 (487) - delete to make less confusing?
    
    Some stuff needs a bit of breaks to be easier, but it's ok.

1. I do recommend you take out ddk and kkd patterns. They are fine as ddd or kkk.
   
   
2. 00:18:648 (79) - delete? This part isn't that hard in Oni. Also, 00:19:129 (82) - k here sounds good.
3. 00:38:552 (163,164,165,166) - Same as Oni.
4. 00:27:686 (119) - delete? It doesn't change spread that much.
5. 00:34:705 (147) - d? There's a lot of k.
6. 00:35:667 (153,154,155) - d k k? Fits nice
7. 00:44:129 (186,187,188) - d k? Instead of triplet.
8. 00:48:744 (209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - d k d k k d k k? I like how it follows vocals.
9. 00:56:436 (243,244,245) - d d? Instead of triplet.
10. 01:01:244 (265,266,267,268,269) - ddd? Though, this part isn't that complicated in Oni.
11. 01:06:244 - ddd here? It's hard in Oni.

1. 00:59:898 - k here?
2. 01:31:052 (186,187) - Remove big notes?
   
   I'm bad at modding futsuu, but I think this is good >~<

1. 00:07:783 (12) - Delete for a long break?
2. 00:12:783 (20) - I think you can delete this. The less big notes the better.
3. 01:31:244 (45) - ^
4. 00:30:475 (43,44) - Delete these two for a long break?
5. 00:50:475 (77,78) - Delete these for a long break? Middle of the kiai usually has one.
6. 01:04:321 (1) - End spinner at 01:05:475 ?
7. 01:18:167 (20,21,22) - Delete these for a long break into kiai? One is neeeded.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hi BARRY! :3

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:936 (26,28) - ctrl+g these notes makes it more fitting. Nice~
2. 00:07:686 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - d k k d k k d d d k k? Fits high notes more, and still flows nice.
   OK I changed to dkkdkkdkdkk
3. 00:11:244 (86,87,88,89,90,91) - Just kkkkk? Feels nice, but QAT don't like unfitting 1/6 (they say it's overmap)
   Hmm I asked MM to check it, he said it's ok maybe >.> and I just make what the song provide... it is 1/6 here! Here is the chat~ :3 ---> http://puu.sh/juCv8/eac27c8675.jpg
4. 00:29:706 (48,49,50,51,52) - kkdkk? kddkd doesn't flow very well Hmm your idea is not bad~ but I think the beat is really fit the music now.... Sorry I don't wanna chane the rhythm here! orz
5. 00:30:571 (56) - d? kdddk makes for good flow here no ><
6. 00:35:859 (96) - d? Flows nicer after a pattern like 00:35:283 (91,92,93,94,95) - ...The bad flow is a challenge for those pro players (like you <w>) so I think it's fine here! The k sounds better than d IMO~
7. 00:37:783 (109) - d? Since this seems to be a descending sound. ok~~
8. 00:48:455 (179) - k? Nicer flow. OK~~
9. 00:49:898 (191,192,193,194) - Maybe just kdk? Another overmap. Hmm.... I follow the electronic sound here!! If you listen carefully you can hear that.... It's not Overmap! Q.Q 1/6 is reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly fit the sound x.xa But I changed it to kddk~~~~~~
10. 01:00:283 (274,277) - k for both? Since 00:59:513 (267,268,269,270,271,272) - is already a similar pattern. I wanna fit 00:59:513 (267,268,269,270,271,272) hahaha, and I think kdd sounds better than kkd =3=a
11. 01:01:725 (286) - k? So not another kdd pattern. I think kdd is fit the music, I like kkd too, but I have tested it for many times and kdd is better IMO... So here are some kdd pattern :3
12. 01:02:975 (296,297,298,299) - kkdkd instead of doubles? Fits much better I think. No I like the doubles here!! omg >o<a
13. 01:05:956 (321,322,323,324,325,326) - d k d d k (no 1/6)? Another overmap. Hmm it's not overmap~ if you listen carefully you can hear that orz ...1/6 really fit the sounds, but I'll consider about this one!!
    Deleted the 1/6!!~
14. 01:07:783 - Stream starts here. Maybe move 01:07:686 (337) - to 01:07:783 ? After you do that, make the stream d k k k d k d d k k? (starts at
15. 01:07:783 and ends at 01:08:648 ) Ya you are right~ :3 I add a note here 01:07:783 - and no delete any notes!! xDD ~~Changed the pattern
16. 01:19:225 - Delete the note here so the speed-up isn't part of the stream? OK~~
17. 01:15:283 (397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404) - These don't fit the song too well Hmm Let me consider for a while!! I think it's not that good but sounds ok.. I wanna make some special rhythm as a Inner Oni.. <.>a
18. 01:19:898 (441,442,443,444,445,446) - ddkkdd? To fit music more. ugh... I think the dkkkkdkkkd--- is better here :3
19. 01:22:590 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - Doesn't fit music too well
20. 01:22:590 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - k d k k d k k k d k k d k? You can also have a note at 01:22:494 if you want to be crazy :3 I like the kkdkkdkkdkkdk <w>a It sounds really good to me! Sorry...
21. 01:26:533 (498) - k? To differentiate the stream a little. Hmm change 01:27:109 (505) - to d~
    
    Fun diff :3 thx~ >.>/

[Oni]

1. 00:19:609 (111) - Delete? I think 00:20:090 (114,115,116,117) - is enough doubles. ok!!~
2. 00:26:148 (143) - Move to 00:26:244 ? Seems weird with just double. Hmm I think it sounds fine here :/
3. 00:29:225 (162) - ^ to 00:29:321 no I like the beat >~<" The repetitive ddk-dk is fit the music well IMO!!
4. 00:33:840 (186) - ^ delete? ^
5. 00:38:552 (206,207,208,209) - Delete like in Inner Oni? Hmm~ Sorry but I wanna my Inner Oni to be more special~ (I said the reason on Muzu!! :3)
6. 00:48:359 (264,265) - delete? Doesn't flow good with kdddk imo. Or just 00:48:456 (265) - . Ummm.... It really sounds fine to me.......... kdddk-kkd is better than kdddk-k-d IMO.. I don't wanna delete these two notes here sorry XoX
7. 00:49:898 (274) - d? Instead of more ddk =w= it's ok here~ d-k-ddk-d-k-ddk sounds good~
8. 00:59:321 (326) - delete? For a small break and emphasize long note in vocals I know your idea and try it but I still feel it's better now~~ This part 00:57:783 - to 01:00:859 - sounds really nice to me <.>
9. 01:02:206 (341,342) - ctrl+g? Fits nice I think. ok~
10. 01:04:513 (352,353,354,355,356) - d ddd k? Hmm no~ The beat is fine here!!
11. 01:05:667 (361,363) - Delete so the player can hit the 1/6 easier? This part is much harder than muzu... OK~ although dddk--dk-dk is really fit the music here lol
12. 01:06:340 (365) - Delete this note to simplify the stream? OK~~
13. 01:10:186 (393) - Delete to simplify this dense part? 01:11:244 (399,400,401) - then this just k k? Hmm But the Inner is pretty Hard here... Because the 4-hit stream is really fit the music IMO... Let me consider for a while Q________Q...
14. 01:15:379 (422) - Delete? Doesn't fit very well. Sure~~
15. 01:16:244 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439) - nerf to ddd kkk for both?
    I only delete 01:16:533 - Because it would be the same pattern with the intro part~ ovo
    Ok I nerf to ddd kkk for both!! It is really a bit too crowded here~~
16. 01:18:552 (445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453) - k ddkkddd to make it easier? I changed the pattern and it's more easier now lol
17. 01:22:206 (471,472) - Delete to make easier? Then make 01:23:071 (478,479,480,481) - ddkkd? Sorry but I don't like the pause.......... it's not too hard here as a Oni and the Inner Oni is pretty Hard~ I prefer 4-hit stream here... more rhythmic orz
18. 01:24:802 (487) - delete to make less confusing? Hmm the 6-hit stream is fine here IMO <.> I wanna make it a bit harder at the last part of Outro...
    
    Some stuff needs a bit of breaks to be easier, but it's ok. I'll consider that if I should remove some notes, I wanna make the diff be the middle of Muzu and Inner~ maybe it's really a bit too hard... I feel so upset ummmmmmmmmm >~<aaaaaaa

[Muzukashii]

1. I do recommend you take out ddk and kkd patterns. They are fine as ddd or kkk. No no >~< it's not that Hard friend!!
   
2. 00:18:648 (79) - delete? This part isn't that hard in Oni. Also, 00:19:129 (82) - k here sounds good. Hmm I think the triplet sounds fine here lol and I wanna follow the drum 00:19:129 (82) - here. So I think k-d-d is better~ :3
3. 00:38:552 (163,164,165,166) - Same as Oni. Hmm no I only wanna do that in Inner Oni, It would be special and like a "Inner Oni" (Sometimes some parts are easier than Muzu!! Focus on the Main beat!! owob)
4. 00:27:686 (119) - delete? It doesn't change spread that much. It sounds fine here lol and I wanna make a bit harder (different) than (with) 00:15:282 (63,64) -
5. 00:34:705 (147) - d? There's a lot of k. Ok~~
6. 00:35:667 (153,154,155) - d k k? Fits nice Hmm I prefer now, k-d-k-d sounds better to me <w>
7. 00:44:129 (186,187,188) - d k? Instead of triplet. no it really really fit the music and it's "single", no any beat around it, so it won't be too Hard Definitely >~< P.S: I changed to ddd here!
8. 00:48:744 (209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - d k d k k d k k? I like how it follows vocals. Ok I changed to k-k-d-k-k-d-k-k!!
9. 00:56:436 (243,244,245) - d d? Instead of triplet. Sorry I don't think it sounds bad or too hard~~ :3
10. 01:01:244 (265,266,267,268,269) - ddd? Though, this part isn't that complicated in Oni. Hmm let me consider for a while here!!
11. 01:06:244 - ddd here? It's hard in Oni. OK~ I wanna make a short break here but it sounds better with ddd~~ ww

[Futsuu]

1. 00:59:898 - k here? Nice~ follow the vocal
2. 01:31:052 (186,187) - Remove big notes? Sure I remove the finish of these two~ 01:31:052 (187,188) - or you mean delete the note?? hmm I think it's fine here~ I wanna follow the Cymbal and it won't get too hard as a Futsuu! :3
   
   I'm bad at modding futsuu, but I think this is good >~< Glad to hear that!

[Kantan]

1. 00:07:783 (12) - Delete for a long break? Hmm the pasue is a bit weird to me <.>
2. 00:12:783 (20) - I think you can delete this. The less big notes the better. OK!! I delete 00:12:206 (19) - too~
3. 01:31:244 (45) - ^ Same~
4. 00:30:475 (43,44) - Delete these two for a long break? Hmm Sorry but I don't like the pause here... orz
5. 00:50:475 (77,78) - Delete these for a long break? Middle of the kiai usually has one. But I think it pretty fit the music now, and sometimes here could be hard instead of a break?? TwTa
6. 01:04:321 (1) - End spinner at 01:05:475 ? Nice!!
7. 01:18:167 (20,21,22) - Delete these for a long break into kiai? One is neeeded. Hmm I think it's fine now~ not too hard and fit the music~ You like a break when the song get into another part as a Kantan, but maybe I prefer make some note at the trans-point!! Sorry~ OwOa

Lower diffs are nice! Harder ones are too, but just need to get toned down a little. GL!

• 
  HP 8 looks a bit harsh, consider 6-7?

1. 00:12:206 (19,20) - How about remove (20) and make (19) a big don, it'd feel better to play with the big notes.
2. 00:48:167 (73) - You could remove this note, the pattern isn't bad, but this note doesn't seem that fitting, given you map a bit for vocals.
3. 01:00:475 (95) - ^
4. 01:16:244 - This could be mapped better as I suggest in the screen. The ddk for 01:16:244 (16,17,18) - doesn't fit nicely as it's not the same music as in the previous ddk, and we have the stream in the music beginning here, so a long pattern would feel better. You can change the dkdkd for a ddkkd if you think it looks hard.
   
5. 01:25:090 (33) - Something similar as in 00:48:167 (73) -
6. 01:30:090 (43,44,45,46) - Something similar to what I suggested on 00:12:206 (19,20) - , you can keep the note in 01:31:244 (45) - .

• 
  Consider HP 6 for this.

1. 00:08:936 (23,24) - I'd suggest to move these notes to have the 3/4 rhythm, it'd fit better with the instrument you've been mapping.
2. 00:30:283 - Maybe add a don here and make the next note a kat? It'd fit nicely with vocals.
3. 00:35:475 - A note here is missing for vocals.
4. 00:39:321 - I'll suggest a rhythm for the beginning of the kiai, since it'd fit better with vocals, what you have now it's fine too, so feel free to keep it. If you do it, remember to do something similar for 00:51:629 -
   
5. 01:00:475 (104) - Move to 01:00:283 - for vocals?
6. 01:04:706 (116,117,118) - As it feels you've been focusing on vocals, a break would be better to have here.
7. 01:24:898 (170) - This note would be better being removed, so the emphasis is on the next note alone with the strong beat.

1. 00:04:513 (16) - This note could be removed, so you begin the pattern along with a strong beat in the stream.
2. 00:07:590 (30) - ^
3. 00:08:744 (35) - Shouldn't this note be in 00:08:936 - ?
4. 00:12:590 (52,53,54,55) - How about making all these big notes? It'd create a nice impact as everything is strong here.
5. 00:15:090 (62) - Probably remove to folllow vocals better?
6. 00:18:167 (74) - ^
7. 00:26:244 (110) - ^
8. 00:33:167 (139) - This should be a don. Being a kat breaks a bit how you've been mapping the previous notes.
9. 00:35:667 (151,152) - Try reversing these notes, it'd fit the vocal tone better, imo.
10. 00:38:552 (161,162,163,164) - Probably remove to have consistency with the other diffs?
11. 00:41:436 (175) - Probably remove to folllow vocals better?
12. 00:48:744 (208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - Try d k d k k d d? the last note being don would help to do te d K consistent here.
13. 00:54:898 (235) - Move this note to 00:54:898 (235) - for vocals.
14. 00:55:859 (239) - Move to 00:55:283 - for the same reason.
15. 01:06:244 (281,282,283,284) - I think a break here would be the best, it'd give a greater impact to the K K K before. You could keep 01:06:629 (284) - tho.
16. 01:10:667 (299) - Same as 00:04:513 (16) -
17. 01:14:898 (319) - Shouldn't this note be in 01:15:090 - ?
18. 01:27:206 (372) - Something similar^
19. 01:31:436 - A big don here would complement the pattern nicely.
20. 01:31:725 (1) - This spinner feels really out of place, since the song ends just with a high impact, not a fade out or held note.

1. 00:01:725 (7) - How about moving this note to 00:01:917 - as a kat? I think it'd sound better.
2. 00:30:475 - This is a bit inconsistent with the previous section where you use the oo oo patterns
   
3. 00:38:552 (208,209,210,211) - Probably remove to have consistency with the other diffs?
4. 01:07:879 (376) - If you applied the first suggestion, you should move this to 01:08:071 - as a don and remove 01:08:456 (381) - , it'd give the needed emphasis on 01:08:552 (382) - being alone.
5. 01:09:417 (386) - I'd suggest to move this to 01:09:609 -, it'd sound better while playing. You could make the pattern kkd to make play with the kkdk next. Or something similar to what you did in 00:03:167 - .
6. 01:31:436 - A don here would play cool to lead to the big note.
7. 01:31:725 (1) - Same as Muzukashii.

1. 00:06:917 (47) - You could remove this note, since it's not really in the song itself, it would also allow to put a big note.
2. 00:07:494 (52) - How about moving this to 00:07:590 - and remove 00:07:686 (53) - ? This would allow to begin the stream along with the music.
3. 00:09:898 (73) - This note could be removed too, given you're focusing on the synth.
4. 00:50:090 - I'd suggest to do something similar to 00:36:244 -
5. 01:04:706 (309,314) - The stream here doesn't feel really suitable as the song itself isn't that intense, probably just remove this to fit better the song pace.
6. 01:13:071 (380) - As 00:06:917 (47) -
7. 01:13:840 (385) - Remove this note, similar reason as 00:07:494 (52) -
8. 01:15:283 (398) - A kat would sound nice here.
9. 01:18:263 (427) - This note could be removed so the streams fits better how the song is.
10. 01:20:090 (442) - Same as 01:13:840 (385) -
11. 01:21:629 (456) - ^
12. 01:22:494 - Looks like you're missing a note here.
13. 01:25:283 (486,487,489) - These could be removed too. Similar reason to 00:06:917 (47) -
14. 01:26:148 (493) - Same as 01:13:840 (385) -
15. 01:28:359 (513) - As 00:06:917 (47) -
16. 01:29:898 (528,529,530,531) - I'd suggest you to map this as dddk, as there's a bigger emphasis on the last note in the music, which doesn't feel nice when playing ddkk. Same for the next 1/6 pattern.
    01:31:725 (1) - Same as Muzukashii.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, giving a mod before I get even busier, lol. lol

[ Kantan]

• 
  HP 8 looks a bit harsh, consider 6-7? Sure I adjust to 7!!

1. 00:12:206 (19,20) - How about remove (20) and make (19) a big don, it'd feel better to play with the big notes. OK! I removed (20) but I think (19) should be a big Kat~~
2. 00:48:167 (73) - You could remove this note, the pattern isn't bad, but this note doesn't seem that fitting, given you map a bit for vocals. Sure~~ Deleted!
3. 01:00:475 (95) - ^ Sure~
4. 01:16:244 - This could be mapped better as I suggest in the screen. The ddk for 01:16:244 (16,17,18) - doesn't fit nicely as it's not the same music as in the previous ddk, and we have the stream in the music beginning here, so a long pattern would feel better. You can change the dkdkd for a ddkkd if you think it looks hard. Nice suggestin! Applied~
   
5. 01:25:090 (33) - Something similar as in 00:48:167 (73) - Hmm here I wanna make a bit different from previous pattern! Sorry
6. 01:30:090 (43,44,45,46) - Something similar to what I suggested on 00:12:206 (19,20) - , you can keep the note in 01:31:244 (45) - . Sure~ I keep the note in 01:31:244 (45) to make a bit different from the Intro!!

[ Futsuu]

• 
  Consider HP 6 for this. Sure!!

1. 00:08:936 (23,24) - I'd suggest to move these notes to have the 3/4 rhythm, it'd fit better with the instrument you've been mapping.
   Sure I change the rhythm here~ :3
2. 00:30:283 - Maybe add a don here and make the next note a kat? It'd fit nicely with vocals. Sure add a d~~ But dk would be a bit too hard here IMO!! o_o"
3. 00:35:475 - A note here is missing for vocals. OK sounds nice~ but maybe it's a bit too crowded here?? <w>a
4. 00:39:321 - I'll suggest a rhythm for the beginning of the kiai, since it'd fit better with vocals, what you have now it's fine too, so feel free to keep it. If you do it, remember to do something similar for 00:51:629 - Hmm I prefer now here! owob
   
5. 01:00:475 (104) - Move to 01:00:283 - for vocals? Sure good idea!! :3
6. 01:04:706 (116,117,118) - As it feels you've been focusing on vocals, a break would be better to have here.
   Ya you are right!! I replaced 01:03:936 (116) - with a Slider and end at 01:05:090 - It sounds pretty good now!
7. 01:24:898 (170) - This note would be better being removed, so the emphasis is on the next note alone with the strong beat. Applied!!

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:04:513 (16) - This note could be removed, so you begin the pattern along with a strong beat in the stream. Sure~~~
2. 00:07:590 (30) - ^ Ya fixed!!
3. 00:08:744 (35) - Shouldn't this note be in 00:08:936 - ? looool You are right!!!
4. 00:12:590 (52,53,54,55) - How about making all these big notes? It'd create a nice impact as everything is strong here. Hmm... ya maybe it's better...... I'll consider about this~~ o.oa
5. 00:15:090 (62) - Probably remove to folllow vocals better? www nice~
6. 00:18:167 (74) - ^ Removed~
7. 00:26:244 (110) - ^ Hmm here I wanna keep it!!
8. 00:33:167 (139) - This should be a don. Being a kat breaks a bit how you've been mapping the previous notes. OK~~
9. 00:35:667 (151,152) - Try reversing these notes, it'd fit the vocal tone better, imo. Sure sounds better!! :3
10. 00:38:552 (161,162,163,164) - Probably remove to have consistency with the other diffs? Hmm I wanna make the Inner Oni more speical here, (Inner Oni sometimes some parts are easier than a Muzu because it only focus on the Main and unobvious sound!!) So I'd keep it here~ Just follow the vocal! ww
11. 00:41:436 (175) - Probably remove to folllow vocals better? OK!!~ and I removed 00:40:475 - too~
12. 00:48:744 (208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - Try d k d k k d d? the last note being don would help to do te d K consistent here.
    Ummm I think it sounds pretty cool here now~ it follow the vocal so well... So I prefer to keep it!
13. 00:54:898 (235) - Move this note to 00:54:898 (235) - for vocals. I changed the rhythm here~ It follow the vocal now!
14. 00:55:859 (239) - Move to 00:55:283 - for the same reason. I think it follow the vocal better now here~ lol
15. 01:06:244 (281,282,283,284) - I think a break here would be the best, it'd give a greater impact to the K K K before. You could keep 01:06:629 (284) - tho. Ok~~ Ozzy just wanna me to add it~ xDD well, after conisering for a while I decide to delete them~
16. 01:10:667 (299) - Same as 00:04:513 (16) - Why not :3
17. 01:14:898 (319) - Shouldn't this note be in 01:15:090 - ? lol thx for discovering it~
18. 01:27:206 (372) - Something similar^ ok
19. 01:31:436 - A big don here would complement the pattern nicely. Hmm I think it sounds better now~ only focus on the big Cymbal sound~
20. 01:31:725 (1) - This spinner feels really out of place, since the song ends just with a high impact, not a fade out or held note.
    Hmm.... I don't know shoulld I delete it or not... I'll consider this for a time!

[ Oni]

1. 00:01:725 (7) - How about moving this note to 00:01:917 - as a kat? I think it'd sound better. OK~ sounds nice, but I think it sounds not bad now too~ :3
2. 00:30:475 - This is a bit inconsistent with the previous section where you use the oo oo patterns ww Nice rhythm~ ^^
   
3. 00:38:552 (208,209,210,211) - Probably remove to have consistency with the other diffs? Same reason as I said in Muzu!
4. 01:07:879 (376) - If you applied the first suggestion, you should move this to 01:08:071 - as a don and remove 01:08:456 (381) - , it'd give the needed emphasis on 01:08:552 (382) - being alone. I deleted 01:08:456 (381) - only~~ I think it sounds nice!
5. 01:09:417 (386) - I'd suggest to move this to 01:09:609 -, it'd sound better while playing. You could make the pattern kkd to make play with the kkdk next. Or something similar to what you did in 00:03:167 - . I wanna make some difference here~ and it sounds fine to me here~ ddk-k-kkdk isn't bad too~ :3
6. 01:31:436 - A don here would play cool to lead to the big note. ok~~ hmm maybe better than only focus on Cymbal lol
7. 01:31:725 (1) - Same as Muzukashii. I'll think about this suggestion...

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:06:917 (47) - You could remove this note, since it's not really in the song itself, it would also allow to put a big note.
   www yes I agree!
2. 00:07:494 (52) - How about moving this to 00:07:590 - and remove 00:07:686 (53) - ? This would allow to begin the stream along with the music. OK sounds fine~
3. 00:09:898 (73) - This note could be removed too, given you're focusing on the synth. OK!
4. 00:50:090 - I'd suggest to do something similar to 00:36:244 - No sorry!! I really like this part I made hahahaha loool ..As a trans-point to second part of Kiai~ I think I have to make some crazy notes here, and it really fit the music!! owo/
5. 01:04:706 (309,314) - The stream here doesn't feel really suitable as the song itself isn't that intense, probably just remove this to fit better the song pace. I deleted 01:04:898 - this note!! and it sounds fit the music now IMO! ww
6. 01:13:071 (380) - As 00:06:917 (47) - Sure~~
7. 01:13:840 (385) - Remove this note, similar reason as 00:07:494 (52) - Ya sounds better~ owo
8. 01:15:283 (398) - A kat would sound nice here. Applied~
9. 01:18:263 (427) - This note could be removed so the streams fits better how the song is.
   Hmm I like this crazy stream >.<" I'll consider it for a while~ If I deleted it maybe it won't be that fun <w>a
10. 01:20:090 (442) - Same as 01:13:840 (385) - Hmm I wanna make it harder as the last part of Outro, so I think it's ok to keep it lol
11. 01:21:629 (456) - ^ ^
12. 01:22:494 - Looks like you're missing a note here. lol no if I add it would be kkdkkdkkdkkdkkdkkdkkdk xDDD You are so crazy... Dake
13. 01:25:283 (486,487,489) - These could be removed too. Similar reason to 00:06:917 (47) - I wanna make it harder (more special) as the last part!! Sorry but it sounds fine to me here~~~
14. 01:26:148 (493) - Same as 01:13:840 (385) - Hmm same reason~ and it sounds nice here!
15. 01:28:359 (513) - As 00:06:917 (47) - ok changed!
16. 01:29:898 (528,529,530,531) - I'd suggest you to map this as dddk, as there's a bigger emphasis on the last note in the music, which doesn't feel nice when playing ddkk. Same for the next 1/6 pattern. OK! Sounds better with dddk~~
    01:31:725 (1) - Same as Muzukashii. Same too!

I already gave my impressions to you before, I think this just needs a few patterns polishment here and there. Overall it's a good mapset.

Good luck!

game rock wrote:

Hi, from PM~

Really sorry for the delay :ccc

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:35:475 - Change to k for to follow the pattern. I think d fit the music better here!
00:59:706 - Change to k for the rhythm in this part. hmm I use dkk previously, so kdd is better than kkd here :3

[ Futsuu]

Nice~

[ Muzukashii]

00:19:129 - Change to k is better for the rhythm and for the pattern. no I follow the drum siound here~
00:57:783 - Change to k because is better the pattern kkk in this diff. No I follow what I made previously~ and it sounds pretty nice with kkd

[ Oni]

Nice Oni ~

[ Inner Oni]

01:27:398 - Change to k for the rhyhtm in this part. Hmm I think it sounds better now o.o

Nice Beatmap, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

MMzz wrote:

M4M. Just some rhythm adjustments I think are necessary. Dake and Ozzy said a lot of the things I wanted to in terms of spread and such.
For the record I don't think the Muzu is that hard, but the Oni is. OK I'll consider to reduce some notes in Oni~~

[Inner Oni]
00:18:359 - Add a kat here to make the pattern kkd. More consistent rhythm after the ddkdd pattern. Hmm I think kd is more rhythmic here, also the short "pause" sounds cool to me~~ sorry!
00:20:763 (145) - Delete this note. Feels a little overdone with all the triplets. Hmm I think it sounds fine here... lol ..It fits the music well, so I would prefer to keep them sorry!! I'll ask other about it~ <w>a
00:22:302 (155) - ^
00:22:686 - Add a kat here to keep the rhythm consistent. Like: 00:21:148 (147,148) - , 00:16:533 (118,119) - , etc. wow Nice!
01:18:263 (424) - Delete this note. Unnecessary for the stream because there isn't any music/beat representing it. ok I deleted T.T I like this crazy stream tho....

[Oni]
00:40:859 (219) - Delete this note then add a don at 00:41:436. Better rhythm reflecting the vocal. Cool~~
00:47:206 (256) - Move this note to 00:47:013. Consistent rhythm with 00:45:763 (248,249) - . ya sounds really good :3
00:52:013 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - Make changes to this rhythm similar to my first suggestion so it is consistent. Sure!

[Muzukashii]
OD5. No reason for it to be 6. lol what it never get 6!!!!!!!! It's alwyas 5...

[Futsuu]
00:02:013 (4,5) - Swap these two notes. I think keeping patterns like 00:00:859 (1,2,3) - single color is better for the difficulty. It is an odd rhythm and new players might have trouble with hitting the rhythm correctly and switching colors. ok I understand~~
01:07:013 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - Make this the same as 00:00:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . Again, to make them single color. fixed
01:19:321 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - ^ ok~
01:30:090 (186,187,188) - Make this either k k k or d d d. changed to k-k-k~

I would also consider lowering the HP on Futsuu and Kantan. I know high HP makes the HP meter more accurate, but these are beginner diffs and I don't think it is necessary for HP to be that strict. Hmm Dake just tell me to set Kantan 7 and Futsuu 6.... I' would keep it now~ but if any BNs or QATs said that too, I'll reduce that~~

Thank you MM chocolate!!~~~ xDDD

Julie wrote:

抱抱你的avatar >///<!

1. 00:40:667 - Add a k, feels empty at the moment.
2. 00:42:013 - ^
3. 00:50:475 - Add d
4. 00:52:783 - 00:52:975 - Add k on one of these.
5. 00:54:129 (91) - Move this forward by 1/2
6. 00:59:513 - Add d

1. 00:05:475 (20,21) - This one is d K 01:11:629 (295,296) - This one is d k 01:23:936 (347,348) - this one is d K, please make them consistent.
2. 01:17:783 (323) - Would be better if you map it normally in my opinion, the drumroll doesn't fit that much.
3. 01:31:725 (1) - Remove this, it doesn't accent anything in the song

1. 00:20:859 (116,117,118,119) - This sudden big note spike doesn't really make sense, there is nothing to emphasize it in the music.
2. 01:31:725 (1) - Remove this, it doesn't accent anything in the song

1. 01:25:763 (486) - Move this back 1/4 to fit the melody better.
2. 01:19:321 - This slider velocity change doesn't help anything, there is no difference in the way the song plays or the way the map plays, so changing SV just simply makes this more confusing to read even though nothing actually calls for such change.
3. 01:31:725 (1) - Remove this, it doesn't accent anything in the song

Priti wrote:

Futsuu

1. 00:40:667 - Add a k, feels empty at the moment. no It sounds fine to me here. The pause fits the music well.
2. 00:42:013 - ^
3. 00:50:475 - Add d No I think it sounds better with K--K--K-D.
4. 00:52:783 - 00:52:975 - Add k on one of these. The Rhythm is fine here with the short pause IMO.
5. 00:54:129 (91) - Move this forward by 1/2 Nope, I wanna keep consistent with 00:52:398 (86,87) - also it sounds nice now.
6. 00:59:513 - Add d I only wanna follow the high vocal here, if I add it I feel a bit weird. sorry.

Muzukashii

1. 00:05:475 (20,21) - This one is d K 01:11:629 (295,296) - This one is d k 01:23:936 (347,348) - this one is d K, please make them consistent. Nice catch. fixed.
2. 01:17:783 (323) - Would be better if you map it normally in my opinion, the drumroll doesn't fit that much. Maybe... But I think it's fine and I wanna make a Slider here to follow the electronic sounds, and this Slider could be a trans-point to the last part of Kiai Time. I'll consider about this.
3. 01:31:725 (1) - Remove this, it doesn't accent anything in the song ok.

Oni

1. 00:20:859 (116,117,118,119) - This sudden big note spike doesn't really make sense, there is nothing to emphasize it in the music. I wanna emphasize her vocal here, I think it's fine? If this is really too Overemphasized to get Qulifield... I'll change that part.
2. 01:31:725 (1) - Remove this, it doesn't accent anything in the song ok.

Inner Oni

1. 01:25:763 (486) - Move this back 1/4 to fit the melody better. No, I prefer now, the doubles sounds nice here.
2. 01:19:321 - This slider velocity change doesn't help anything, there is no difference in the way the song plays or the way the map plays, so changing SV just simply makes this more confusing to read even though nothing actually calls for such change. Although it don't have any change in the music, I wanna emphasize the last kiai time. Besides, I wanna be creative here, the SV change make the map more fun IMO. sorry. Unless this issue will get DQ or I won't change it.
3. 01:31:725 (1) - Remove this, it doesn't accent anything in the song ok.

I actually agree with most modders, the gap between Muzukashii and Oni is massive and won't go through.

Raiden wrote:

First of all you should stop considering SR as a difficulty measure considering how retardedly broken it is on Taiko.

And second BARRY you don't have to excuse yourself to make an Oni hard just because the Inner is REALLY hard. The Oni must fit the spread below it, not above. The Inner can be as much difficult as you want, but the Oni is the one which needs to fit the spread.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as promised.

IRC mod with Dino99, Sep 1, 2015

01:29 Dino99: 嘿~~ 我們的M4M呢?? lol
01:31 Nardoxyribonucleic: p/4469678
01:31 Nardoxyribonucleic: 感覺可以從這些方面改善 再多找些mod吧
01:32 Dino99: ...都找了18個mod了
01:33 Dino99: TNA跟M4M是分開的阿 ;w;
01:34 Dino99: 那我不po文你還會來幫我看
01:34 Nardoxyribonucleic: 那就先自己改一下吧 因為TNA的關係我應該沒什麼時間看...
01:35 Nardoxyribonucleic: 主要是consistency跟spread的問題
01:36 Dino99: 可是Dake也說fine阿... ozzy說muzu難 MM又說Oni難 priti是直接放棄
01:36 Dino99: 真的感覺很挫敗又不知到底怎改
01:37 Dino99: 好像大家太主觀了
01:38 Nardoxyribonucleic: 那我再簡單的給一下意見吧
01:38 Dino99: 要恆定的話kantan和futsuu複製貼上就好啦:(
01:38 Dino99: 恩...
01:39 Dino99: 好像spread超爛一樣
01:39 Dino99: 我覺得真的還好阿=3=
01:39 Nardoxyribonucleic: 首先Muzu需要多些2/1 breaks
01:40 Nardoxyribonucleic: 由00:38:552 - 開始直到01:31:629 - 都沒有break
01:40 Nardoxyribonucleic: 有點寫得太密了
01:41 Dino99: 可以一直有段阿
01:41 Dino99: 大概都4~7個1/2一組
01:41 Dino99: 穿插一些14/
01:41 Dino99: 1/4
01:41 Nardoxyribonucleic: 1/1嚴格來說不是break
01:41 Dino99: 我知道muzu不能太密
01:42 Dino99: hmm....
01:42 Dino99: 可是bpm不快
01:42 Nardoxyribonucleic: 需要的是00:38:167 - 這種長度
01:43 Dino99: 副歌很難有那種長度..
01:43 Nardoxyribonucleic: 這個和BPM無關 無論高低也是需要的
01:43 Dino99: 01:06:052 (274,275) - 這裡有一個
01:43 Dino99: 好吧
01:44 Nardoxyribonucleic: 要下Break其實不難, 例如可以把01:06:629 (275) - 刪掉
01:46 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:45:475 (188) - 簡單起見這個改成k吧 1/2 + 1/4 kkd 有點難
01:46 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:57:782 (243) - 這個也是
01:47 Dino99: 恩我再想想看
01:47 Dino99: 畢竟kkd不是unranked =3=
01:47 Dino99: 我是覺得還可以
01:47 Dino99: 因為也不是接再1/2跟1/2中間
01:48 Nardoxyribonucleic: (其實是我用過而又曾經被DQ過
01:48 Dino99: lol
01:48 Dino99: 真假....
01:48 Dino99: 還好吧...
01:49 Nardoxyribonucleic: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/260563 這首的Muzu
01:49 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:16:065 (242,243,244) - 這個原來是kkd的
01:50 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/642645 TRUSTRICK - FLYING FAFNIR (Anime OP Version) [Nardo's Muzukashii]]
01:50 Dino99: ........
01:50 Nardoxyribonucleic: BPM比你的還低...
01:51 Dino99: ono根本就也沒很懂 "本家圖"不少歌都有kkd/ddk阿
01:51 Dino99: 哪會多難
01:51 Dino99: 最基本的三連
01:51 Dino99: 你看你那裡改kkk就怪怪的了
01:51 Dino99: <.<
01:52 Nardoxyribonucleic: 所以ddk或kkd 最好不要用太多 要用附近也要有足夠的break
01:52 Nardoxyribonucleic: Muzu來說
01:53 Dino99: 可以說是"難的muzu" 但沒必要到DQ吧... 唉唉真嚴格
01:53 Dino99: 恩...
01:53 Dino99: 我暫時先keep 我有問過mm他說可以 反正被DQ就被DQ
01:54 Dino99: 哼哼
01:55 Nardoxyribonucleic: 被DQ的話 負責的BN也會遭殃的(BN score)
01:55 Dino99: 這樣阿...
01:55 Dino99: 不果最近也有歌是 muzu有 kkd/ddk的吧~
01:55 Dino99: 我職接問ono吧 下次
01:56 Dino99: 每次問他都說I'm do my own business......
01:56 Dino99: doing
01:56 Dino99: Dake MM都看過拉
01:58 Dino99: 我就是看"big" hole很傷心失望 應該spread沒那麼差... Q.Q
01:58 Dino99: "big
02:00 Nardoxyribonucleic: 感覺Muzu跟Oni可以改簡單一點點
02:01 Dino99: ok~
02:01 Dino99: 我試試摟
02:01 Dino99: 我是怕inner會太突出@@
02:02 Dino99: 所已有稍微做的難一點 但絕對不是"很難" lol
02:02 Dino99: muzu 和 oni ww
02:02 Nardoxyribonucleic: Inner大圓的下法可以幫檢查一下 有部分感覺不必要
02:03 Nardoxyribonucleic: 檢查一下*
02:04 Dino99: 我看看
02:06 Dino99: 有一些本來是沒加的拉.. 只是ozzy和dake有建議就改了 =w=
02:06 Dino99: 太鼓本來就是主觀的東西.... 吧~~ <w>a
02:06 Nardoxyribonucleic: 可以試試只跟重音下大圓 然後就是Kantan要下多些4/1 break Futsuu也要下2/1 break
02:06 Nardoxyribonucleic: 我先幫到這裡了... 有點睏啦
02:07 Dino99: 恩~ 謝摟
02:07 Dino99: ;w;

I think more breaks can be used in lower difficulties (Kantan~Muzukashii) and the spread from Futsuu to Oni can still be improved by slightly reducing the use of 1/4 in Muzukashii and Oni. Good luck~

Tasha wrote:

Just popping in after looking at the mapset.

No idea why most of the BN here think the spread for this is anywhere near an unrankable state. Spread was fine between Kantan/Futsuu/Muzu/Oni. Muzu/Oni spread is slightly larger but still within more than acceptable boundaries in its current state. There may be some other smaller issues with the map but spread is most certainly not a big one here.

[Inner Oni]
01:18:456 (425) - Would recommend deleting this, synth comes in at 01:18:552 - and this overpowers it imo.
01:19:225 - Highly recommend adding a don here to complete the synth. 01:19:321 (433) - is still fine as a kat finisher and is allowed with current ranking criteria if you're worried about breaking a rule here.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

lol yeah 1/4 finishers are rankable but they're also ugly and flow awfully with the snapping movement they force xP

this map is nice ever since my last mod :B so many BNs and colored names lolol

shionelove wrote:

EZ recheck

[Futsuu]
00:40:859 (59) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3617935 imo follow the vocal?? nice idea!! I do something similar!!~ lol
00:53:167 (91) - do same as above(plz consistent) ya changed too~
01:31:052 (195,196) - K d i think Hmm I prefer d k... :/
[Muzu]
01:31:052 (377,378) - same as Futsuu(K d) Sorry I think it's d k here~~ x)
[Oni]
00:29:898 (162,163,164) - kkd imo OK~
01:06:436 (361) - why not ddkkddkkd I wanna a short break here~ and the pause fits this part IMO!!~ :3

that's all
come on

自分が完璧で誰から見ても明白な難易度のバランスを知っているわけでもないのに他人に押し付けるのはやめようね
うちはできないからこうやって人の考えを尊重してるし自分がmappingするときの参考にしてるんだよ

Dino99 wrote:

and what do you say?? I can't read Japanese... xD

shionelove wrote:

EZ bubbled

Dino99 wrote:

and what do you say?? I can't read Japanese... xD

English ver:no one can make perfect difficult spread everyone agrees so we shouldn't force you to change because you has own diff spread
on the other hand i learn from your map how to map.the more i get ideas the better map i can make of course

Julie wrote:

抱抱你的狗 >w<

[General]

- Since you are adding the other game name for this song in tags, might as well add their full name.
Add "13", for IIDX 13 and pop'n 13 (2 number still work searching in-game).
Add "DistorteD", for IIDX 13 DistorteD.
Add "SuperNOVA", for DanceDanceRevolution SuperNOVA., source fix on irc xD.
Add "カーニバル" and "Carnival" (english), for pop'n music 13 カーニバル. All fixed!! thx!!

[Kantan]

- 01:12:398 (10) - Change it to d, huge difference of pitch with 01:12:013 (9) - . Hmm yes it is a lower sound than 01:12:013 (9) -

But I still wanna follow the electronic sound here~~ also I make dkk too at 00:05:475 (8,9,10) - lol... to keep constant~ I prefer keep this as k~~

- 01:17:783 (20,21) - ctrl+g here, 01:17:783 - should follow 01:17:398 - , isntead of being the same as 01:16:244 (16,18) - .

Hmm as you can hear too here~~ the electronic sound is a lower 01:17:783 (20) - ?? maybe...?? orz

But d-k-d-k-d---k is fit the music more IMO! >~<a ~~It sounds like low-high-low-high-low---high~~ So I would keep it too~ sorry!! owo"

- 01:24:706 (31) - Change to d, to have this effect 01:16:244 (16,17,18,19) - Here I wanna make a bit different from 01:11:629 (8,9,10) -

So I decide to make it d-k-k-k-d... If I make d-k-d-k-d~~ then this part would be same as 01:28:552 (38,39,40,41,42,43) -

But the two part sound different~~ hmm I think it's fine now! <w>a

[Futsuu]

- 01:22:783 - Shouldn't it be something like this 01:10:859 - ? It flow much better @.@, and it fit the synth better as well. Ahh...

I wanna make a bit different as a last Kiai Time... But it seems break the constant??

Actually I consider to change this part too... Q.Q ~~alright then fixed!!

- 01:23:359 (173) - move to 01:23:167 - , the synth there is really way more loud and more important. YES You are right!!~

- 01:28:552 - to 01:28:936 - shouldn't it be the exact same thing as 01:29:321 - to 01:29:706 - . ughhh yes~~

it sound the same but... As you can see~

I make 01:16:244 (154,155,156,157,158) - here too @.@ ..and it fit the music IMO~ d-k-ddk ;w;

[Muzukashii]

- 00:21:436 (85) - Change to k to match the vocal pitch, should feel different then this 00:19:705 (78,79) - ww sounds nice!

- 00:29:898 (122) - Change to k to follow the vocal pitch here 00:29:706 - . niceeeeeee~~

- 00:49:898 (206) - Change to d, it should follow this 00:49:706 - , like this 00:49:513 (204) - following this 00:49:321 (203) - .

Sure~ sounds better IMO ^^

[Oni]

- 00:29:514 (160) - This one is really tricky, is unsnap by 1ms and is not detect by AImod, you can try going on that line one 1/4 it will say 00:29:514 instead of 00:29:513. Really tricky, and hard to see it xD. OMG =w=a.... wtf and fixed!! xD

- 00:30:956 (169) - Move to 00:30:859 - for the vocal, also the easier pattern for oni level xD. Yes maybe its a bit hard here lol

But I wanna follow the "rhythm" here >.<.. If I move it to Move to 00:30:859 - .. It sounds not that good IMO~~ so.. I prefer now sorry!!...

- 00:54:033 (292) - Change it to k, it have the same sound as this 00:53:936 (291) - except without drum.

Ahhh here I wanna make the tone gradaully up~ so I make kdd here and kkd at 00:54:513 (295,296,297) - I think it sounds fine!! orz

- 00:55:283 (300) - Change it to k for the vocal pitch, higher then 00:55:475 - . yes... but it sounds better now IMO... owo"""""""

- 01:05:283 (355,356,357,358) - Probably really not suggest putting a 1/6 out of nowhere, because this is the only spot 1/6 stream while in Inner Oni, you kept it consistent. It might be a bit to hard for an Oni, even if you just put it once, it might mess up a lots of Oni player.

Ughh but no one complain that before xD... everyone is so pro hahaha! yes it is a bit hard here.... but I still wanna keep it >.<

The 1/6 could be a Challenge for some player IMO~ also I put some 1/6 in Inner Oni.. I think this one is.... acceptable?? =w=a

- 01:07:398 (369,370) - Ctrl+g? Hmm aren't you supose to match the pitch like you did here 01:08:936 (379,380) - , you also did it on Inner Oni.

OK fixed!!!! :3

- 01:20:956 (454) - Change it into k, same pitch as 01:20:859 (453) - , and usually your bass for d, and there is a bass here 01:20:859 - , so you probably

follow the synth. Hmm I wanna make a bit different from the intro here~ also maybe it sound better to only follow the...

highest electronic sound here? So... I wanna keep it <.>a//

- 01:31:244 (518) - Change it to d, should follow the pitch here 01:31:052 (516,517) - , also because this is an Oni, and you been putting some nice Oni pattern, and a lots of Oni player still have trouble doing kddk, so missing near the end will really make some people rage XD.

and give me red vote?? xDD.... Yes I'm evil~~~ owo/ But I don't wanna change it~

You can hear the high electronic sound at 01:31:244 (518) - so I think it should be a kat~~ sorry!! lol

[Inner Oni]

- 00:02:494 (14) - change it into k, so is different from 00:02:975 (17,18) - , the synth here is really high pitch. OK fixed!!

- 00:09:417 (65) - move it to 00:09:321 - , the sound is here is pretty much more important and louder then here 00:09:417 - , the synth sound is also there.

It sounds better now to me lol... sorry!! I prefer the Rhythm now~ ;w;

- 00:12:109 (90) - remove, this is like a ghost note, there no new sound in here, you probably want to keep these double consistent, but if your trying to match the song, it should have a different feeling then this 00:11:821 (88,89) - . OK I deleted it~ owob

- 00:31:629 (65) - Probably why you didn't put a finish because of this note 00:31:533 (64) - , remove this 00:31:533 (64) - to put finish there? The cymbal is really loud, and you been putting finisher on these cymbal sound except that 1/6 stream.

Hmm but if I remove~ it sounds not that good IMO... >.>a

I think it's fine to foillow the rhythm here~ by ignoring the cymbal lol.....

- 00:37:590 (106,107,108) - I really can't find out which instrument your trying to match for those 1/6 stream ><, the bass is really clear here 00:37:494 - , 00:37:590 - , 00:37:686 - , since you only put d, I thought maybe your matching the drum? OHH I wanna follow the electronic sound ;w;

OK I change it to dddk because of the high sound at 00:37:783 (109) - @.@"""

- 01:09:802 (355) - Change to k, the pitch is pretty high like here 01:09:706 - Sure sounds pretty cool!!~

- 01:10:090 (358,359) - These two should be the same if your matching the synth. Hmm IMO the music sounds higher at

01:10:090 (358) - & 01:10:379 (361) - so I wanna keep kddk here!! It sounds nice to me ~ ^^

- 01:15:380 (396) - This one is really tricky, is unsnap by 1ms and is not detect by AImod, you can try going on that line one 1/4 it will say 01:15:379 instead of 01:15:380. Really tricky, and hard to see it xD. I wonder how could you find.... xDDDDDDDD

- 01:15:571 (398) - Move it to here 01:15:667 - , the synth and drum are there. Yes~ But I wanna follow the rhythm here~

I think these two 4-hit stream fit the music here, instead of triplet or 5-hit stream~ sorry! lol

- 01:20:956 (447) - Change to k, for the high pitch and also like you did here 01:08:552 (344,345) - . Ahh I wanna make it a bit different

as a last part of outro!! So here I wanna only follow the highest sound ---> 01:20:859 (446) - and it sounds fine now to me!

- 01:22:590 (461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473) - This is pretty repetetive, while the music here don't really repeat the chord here. For example, since this pattern kept repeating, player can't really feel the effect of these sound 01:23:167 - 01:23:263 - . Unlike here 01:28:552 (509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522) - you can actually feel it, which is pretty cool >w<.

OK I changed the rhythm here!! Hope it is fine now! owo

- 01:27:879 (504) - move to 01:27:783 - , you been mapping this sound, and is really clear to hear.

hmm I changed the beat here too!!

it fits the music IMO~ also can be the differece as the last part of the outro~~ ww

- 01:30:570 (531,534) - Delete these 2 to match more the music, by following the synth? Hmm I think it fits the music better now!!

kddkddkdd is fits the Cymbal pretty well~ and I like "last kill" as an Inner Oni!! xD