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Lasse

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Lasse 2015-07-29T12:20:48+00:00

Depths wrote:
From my queue

Normal

00:24:108 (3,4) - better blanket done

00:25:372 (6,1) - ^ done

01:11:792 (2,3) - ^ done

Hard

00:02:634 (1,2) - you seem to this though out, so why stack this 00:05:161 (1,2) - but not the others? they are stacked, just not autostacked, looks better in that case imo

00:23:950 (2,3) - blanket fixed

00:37:371 (1,2) - stack? nah

00:38:003 (1,2) - ^ nah

01:19:371 (2) - ctl+g? fine as is and it would make it hard to find a good spor to place 4 without breaking ds, which i'd like to keep here

01:20:161 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - increase the distance here, this feels strange to play to me it's already one of the hardest parts of the map with the 190bpm singletaps. Increasing it would make a very unnecessarily high difficulty spike AND the music wouldn't justify it

Insane
00:13:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel like the triplets are an unnecessary over map here, an reason for them? fits the vocal (there are also some on the blue ticks) and it plays well

00:33:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - why make this different? its the same thing as 00:13:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - make them the same to make it consistent. why would I make a map that's mainly copy paste? It's typical anime opening, there is much repetition but that doesn't mean the mapping needs to be repetitive

00:48:424 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this straight? personally not a big fan of streams like this looks fine

00:55:371 (2) - clt+g flows better not really

01:00:582 (4,5,6,7,8) - could remove the steam and making a jump pattern to emphasize the start of the kiai time fits the music and there are enough jumps after it. I like mapping this part to the drums, there are enough vocal parts already. Also, a few lines earlier you talked about consistency, this is the same drum pattern as 00:48:424 (1,2,3,4,1)

01:10:845 (5,6,7,1) - spacing could be confusing here to read, increase it? seems fine to me, the ds is fitting and nc for the slider to make it even easier to understand

01:12:582 (8,1) - stack it already is, just manually and downwards

thanks for the mod, but you should really use some formatting for your next mods

GD also updated

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2015-07-29T17:41:36+00:00

HIHI from queue ~

let me mod some on Insane

[General]

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
So maybe delete "(TV sive)" in the title if official album or source didn't add it.
Artist should be Japanese "七森中☆ごらく部"
Don't you want to set guest combo color ?

[Insane]

I think you use tooo much NC in this diff and NC style is some instability , it will make map mess
well , I will sugggest to reduce some NC into "1 NC / two long white stick" (1 NC / one long white stick is ok too , just unite them first)
take a example:
SPOILER
It will be more reasonable in game
after this , then you can especially NC at some speed change slider or some emphasis place you want to point out
Another NC issue
plz don't do NC STROM like 00:13:371 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
it's horrible and confused player ;__;
00:04:845 (5) - Spacing issue , why so close to (4) ?
00:13:371 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Rhythm is very awkward here
the sound is end at 00:13:845 - , but you miss that
also you use 4 same rhythm pattern here , but each of them gap 3/4 beat that's not fit of the muisc and give bad playing feedback too
It will better change rhythm setting into some thing like:
SPOILER
00:18:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - also here ^
00:28:529 (1) - guess your spacing wrong here
SPOILER
00:33:897 (3) - This one isn't overlapping with other similar slider's head , recheck this
00:50:318 (4,5,1) - yeah , I know you want to blanket with each other
but spacing issue again
these three slider are too close to each other
maybe you can re set all 00:50:003 (3,4,5,1,2) - to fixed this issue
SPOILER

if you want to overlapping (5) under 00:49:687 (1) - , you can move (1) together

Good luck ~

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-07-29T19:27:33+00:00

Xinchii wrote:
HIHI from queue ~

let me mod some on Insane

[General]
seems fine , don't you want to set guest combo color ?
[Insane]
I think you use tooo much NC in this diff and NC style is some instability , it will make map mess
well , I will sugggest to reduce some NC into "1 NC / two long white stick" (1 NC / one long white stick is ok too , just unite them first)
take a example:
SPOILER
It will be more reasonable in game
after this , then you can especially NC at some speed change slider or some emphasis place you want to point out
Another NC issue
plz don't do NC STROM like 00:13:371 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
it's horrible and confused player ;__; wow, that was unintentional, mustve hit q before submitting, thanks for pointing it out
00:04:845 (5) - Spacing issue , why so close to (4) ? looks nice, bit I spaced it a bit more
00:13:371 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Rhythm is very awkward here * see end of post
the sound is end at 00:13:845 - , but you miss that
also you use 4 same rhythm pattern here , but each of them gap 3/4 beat that's not fit of the muisc and give bad playing feedback too
It will better change rhythm setting into some thing like:
SPOILER
00:18:424 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - also here ^
00:28:529 (1) - guess your spacing wrong here changed a bit
00:33:897 (3) - This one isn't overlapping with other similar slider's head , recheck this fixed
00:50:318 (4,5,1) - yeah , I know you want to blanket with each other
but spacing issue again (...) remapped that part

Good luck ~

* I've been getting more and more complaints about this part lately, so I decided to remap it, should fit better now

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-07-29T19:37:56+00:00

Xinchii wrote:
[General]
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
So maybe delete "(TV sive)" in the title if official album or source didn't add it.
Artist should be Japanese "七森中☆ごらく部"
Don't you want to set guest combo color ?

You updated your post while I was editing, how mean :'(

Artist title is Japanese now

I remove the "(TV size)" from the title and moved it to metadate, that does seem to be the correct way nowadays

thanks again

-> Please re-download due to major metadate changes

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2015-07-29T19:59:21+00:00

Lasse wrote:
You updated your post while I was editing, how mean :'(

Artist title is Japanese now

I remove the "(TV size)" from the title and moved it to metadate, that does seem to be the correct way nowadays

thanks again

-> Please re-download due to majopr metadate changes

Haha xD

Just find I miss something suddenly , so I plan to add these by editing post before someone note this
/me plan failed xD

sorry if I let you confused ;w;

TheTrueMonk

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TheTrueMonk 2015-07-30T13:37:44+00:00

Hey, the beginning of Normal feels off somehow.
It dosn't match any of the beats and that just feels wrong overall.

Rest is good thought.

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-07-30T18:05:59+00:00

TheTrueMonk wrote:
Hey, the beginning of Normal feels off somehow.
It dosn't match any of the beats and that just feels wrong overall.
Rest is good thought.

I took a quick look at the beginning and I agree, here's an explanation:

00:01:529 (1,2,1) - The rhythm choice is not good for a normal difficultly, first of all the spacing is not even, which is bad enough, then you start the first note on the vocals which start on a red tick, which is mid-beat. The time difference between 1 and 2 is 1.5 beats while the one from 2 and 3 is 2 beats, creates unnecessary odd feeling which should be changed.

My suggestion would be to place the notes (notice that I've added one) like this: http://puu.sh/jj3dX/c73d5909d0.jpg starting from 00:01:687, obviously don't forget about the equal spacings.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-07-30T18:11:58+00:00

Changed the beginning of the normal diff according to those suggestions and fixed the spacing, should feel better now.

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happy30 2015-08-01T16:00:59+00:00

[Easy]
In general 0.70 is a pretty unfortunate distance snap to be working on with an easy. The pacing seems a bit odd.
The spacing is a bit too centered. Try to use the whole mapping field.
Claps should be redone in my opinion. They don't follow a nice pattern and they don't sound good on the downbeat in this song.

00:11:476 (2) - This rhythm feels a bit weird, maybe silence the endpoint of this repeat slider?
00:23:476 - The hitsounds on this part bother me a bit, please don't place claps on downbeat, but use the off-beat instead. (00:24:108 - ) In this song the downbeat is even exaggerated by the "hai, hai" singing.
01:25:371 (1) - I would end the spinner at 01:27:740 -

[Normal]
The rhythm is a mess. (sorry)
00:01:687 (1,2,3) - this rhythm would throw anyone off, move them 1/2 back.
00:04:213 (4) - this feels so weird too. Get rid of (3) before this slider, and move this slider where 3 originally was.
00:06:740 (3) - try moving this 1/2 back and 00:07:055 (4) - 1/2 forth.
01:25:371 (1) - I would end the spinner at 01:27:740 -

[Hard]
hitsounds spam.. reminds me to 2008 lol.
It feels really fast for a hard.
01:13:845 - missed opportunity for a note or slider.
01:25:371 (1) - I would end the spinner at 01:27:740 -

Hard is already overmapped. Looking at even harder difficulties at this point is just silly.

have a nice day.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-01T16:41:56+00:00

happy30 wrote:
[Easy]
In general 0.70 is a pretty unfortunate distance snap to be working on with an easy. The pacing seems a bit odd.
The spacing is a bit too centered. Try to use the whole mapping field. itseems ok
Claps should be redone in my opinion. They don't follow a nice pattern and they don't sound good on the downbeat in this song. redone hitsounds

00:11:476 (2) - This rhythm feels a bit weird, maybe silence the endpoint of this repeat slider? ok
00:23:476 - The hitsounds on this part bother me a bit, please don't place claps on downbeat, but use the off-beat instead. (00:24:108 - ) In this song the downbeat is even exaggerated by the "hai, hai" singing. done
01:25:371 (1) - I would end the spinner at 01:27:740 - done

[Normal]
The rhythm is a mess. (sorry)
00:01:687 (1,2,3) - this rhythm would throw anyone off, move them 1/2 back. fits the background "noise"
00:04:213 (4) - this feels so weird too. Get rid of (3) before this slider, and move this slider where 3 originally was. seems fine
00:06:740 (3) - try moving this 1/2 back and 00:07:055 (4) - 1/2 forth. ^
01:25:371 (1) - I would end the spinner at 01:27:740 - done

[Hard]
hitsounds spam.. reminds me to 2008 lol. removed a few,
It feels really fast for a hard.
01:13:845 - missed opportunity for a note or slider. changed
01:25:371 (1) - I would end the spinner at 01:27:740 - done

Hard is already overmapped. Looking at even harder difficulties at this point is just silly.
have a nice day.

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DeletedUser_3821342 2015-08-02T15:44:11+00:00

Hello. Here for my m4m.

General

Everything looks ok

Easy

Normal

00:01:687 (1,2,3) - Maybe start these at 00:01:529 instead?
00:04:055 (3,4) - If it were me I'd delete these and replace them with something similar to 00:01:687 (1,2,3) Trying to oversimplify rhythms for easier diffs can often make them awkward and confusing to play
00:06:740 (3,4) - ^
00:09:582 (2,3) - These should both be repeat sliders. It would follow the music better and flow with the build up.
00:42:108 (1) - This should be at 00:42:266

Hard

Everything in the Kiai might be a bit too much.

Insane

00:30:424 (5,6) - What the hell are these supposed to be following? Get rid of them
00:55:055 (1,2,3) - The SV is a bit too much here. Also Ctrl+G the 2 and the 3 it will flow much nicer
01:01:687 (3,4) - Same as 00:30:424 (5,6)
01:05:161 (1,2,3) - ^
01:07:055 (1,2) - ^
01:11:476 (1,2) - ^

A's Place

No

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-02T16:45:08+00:00

Yoges wrote:
Hello. Here for my m4m.
General
Everything looks ok

Easy
fixed

Normal
00:01:687 (1,2,3) - Maybe start these at 00:01:529 instead? fit the "background noise"as is and that would make the time distance between 00:02:318 (3,1) - bigger and play weirder
00:04:055 (3,4) - If it were me I'd delete these and replace them with something similar to 00:01:687 (1,2,3) Trying to oversimplify rhythms for easier diffs can often make them awkward and confusing to play changed abit, but not like that
00:06:740 (3,4) - ^ changed
00:09:582 (2,3) - These should both be repeat sliders. It would follow the music better and flow with the build up. changed
00:42:108 (1) - This should be at 00:42:266
fits instrumental

Hard
Everything in the Kiai might be a bit too much.

Insane
00:30:424 (5,6) - What the hell are these supposed to be following? Get rid of them vocals and no
00:55:055 (1,2,3) - The SV is a bit too much here.sv is fine Also Ctrl+G the 2 and the 3 it will flow much nicer changed a bit
01:01:687 (3,4) - Same as 00:30:424 (5,6) pls have mercy on the kicksliders, also they fit the vocals just fine and make it less boring than plain singletap spam
01:05:161 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:07:055 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:11:476 (1,2) - ^ ^

A's Place
No

poltoid

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poltoid 2015-08-02T22:26:26+00:00

Hellu ther don't mind me I'm just visiting from l'old #modreqs, also I'd like to ~~mod~~ quickscope this map because of your ~~generosity~~ dankness to mod my map aswell
Also my first mod :3.

A's Pace
1. 00:00:740 (1,2) - (Optional) Ayy m8 the spacing is weird but you can keep it if you want, it looks like it needs to be more pimp-y imo.
2. 00:07:371 (6,7) - There are more patterns like this , they are pretty hard to ~~quickscope~~ read . I would make it more ~~quickscope-able~~ readable by moving 00:07:529 (7) - a bit to the down left , the same with 00:08:634 (7,8) - , 00:09:897 (3,4) - 00:10:529 (3,4) - , something like this http://puu.sh/jmYzW/ba4a88f149.jpg
3. 00:09:108 (2) - move this a bit down to help ~~quickscopeability~~ readability .
  00:09:108 (2,3,4) - weird flow here maybe increase ~~fast~~ distance between 00:09:266 (3,4) - would bring more doritoes
4. 00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - Lower yet mlg airhorns damnit . ( Lower hitsound volume )
5. 00:17:161 (5,6) - I would replace these with a simple slider or two. there is really no reason for them to repeat .
6. 00:19:529 (7,8,1,2) - This part has ~~really bad flow~~ low amounts of Mountain Dew , I loved the ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew you had earlier but now you destroyed it you monster ;w; , maybe move 00:19:845 (2) - somewhere like this http://puu.sh/jmZ1h/f7e36e1d4c.jpg
7. 00:20:319 (5,6,7,8) - Increase ~~spacing~~ fast the ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew is horrible here.
8. 00:20:950 (1,2,3,4) - MLG airhornes too loud
9. 00:22:213 (5,6) - On what exactly did you put these on I don't understand ;w; , you could just put a normal slider , I'm really sorry if anything I say sounds rude.
10. 00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh boy , you are NOT HanzeR , this stream should be a normal one because the sound doesn't fit this kind of stream.
11. 00:26:318 (2) - maybe tilt this a tad bit down ? Optional.
12. 00:27:108 (4,5,6) - the spacing is a bit too small here and that creates bad ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew , you can do something like this, 00:27:108 (4) - x:216 y:371 , 00:27:266 (5) - the same , 00:27:424 (6) - Drop tactical nuke at x:134 y:213
13. 00:28:213 (1) - nothing bad here I just want to point out how good this slider is <3
14. 00:28:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this puts a bit too much strain on the player , add a few sliders somewhere.
15. 00:35:634 (4,5,6) - I would suggest you either make 00:35:082 (8,1) - and 00:34:450 (4,5) - have a bit of spacing between them or make 00:35:634 (4,5,6) - on the same location. it helps with flow y'know m8...
16. 00:36:424 (1,1) - ~~this is cruel. reduce a bit of the distance~~ 3fast5me
17. 00:37:529 (3) - same as the other ones, a simple slider is enough, form a single slider with these two 00:37:371 (2,3) - since the "Uuuu~" start on 00:37:371 (2) - .
18. 00:38:318 (1,2,3) - the sounds this is mapped on is really really unnoticeable and this makes this pattern cruel, instead of hitcircles use a repeated slider.
19. 00:40:371 (3,4) - Increase spacing
20. 00:42:424 (6,1) - move 00:42:582 (1) - a bit to the up left.
21. 00:47:318 (8,1,2) - increase spacing , 00:47:634 (2,3) - cruel spacing maybe do this ? http://puu.sh/jmZYw/8b8b740806.jpg . 00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - replace with sliders
22. 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 2,4,6,8 a bit so it help with readability
23. 01:00:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove the finish hitsound.
24. 01:00:818 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this turn is really really bad and sudden, it's really really evil, also do not increase the spacing when the song doesn't suggest it , remember you are NOT HanzeR
25. 01:05:318 (2) - bring this out to the left a decent amount , it has better flow imo.
26. 01:06:108 (6,7) - maybe 01:06:108 (6) - Quickscope at x:459 y:246 and 01:06:266 (7) - 360 noscope here x:265 y:366
27. 01:06:897 (4,5,6,7) - form a ~~square~~ double right angled triangle illuminati pattern with these you can do it ~~and it has nice flow~~ so you get more Dew from it. I suggest dropping nukes here 01:06:897 (4) - x:256 y:24 01:07:055 (5) - x:120 y:216 01:07:213 (6) - x:329 y:345 01:07:371 (7) - x:471 y:149
28. 01:07:529 (8,1) - increase spacing because of bad flow m8 and the same for this 01:07:687 (1,2) - maybe 01:07:687 (1) - x:490 y:337 and 01:07:845 (2) - x:207 y:287
29. 01:08:003 (3,4,5,6) - replace some of these with a slider because there is a lot of strain caused by all this jumping.
30. 01:08:318 (5) - also here I noticed a interesting sound... it was (✿◠‿◠) 〜ITSUDEMOO
31. 01:10:213 (3,4,5) - make a slider out of 2 of these.
- Insane
  1. 00:08:950 (1,2) - There is a gap here where there can be some ~~notes~~ quickscopes , you can keep it blank if you are mapping on ~~instrumental~~ airhorns but it doesn't feel right.
  2. 00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - you can make this~~a back and forth~~ anti-Imelevensoshutthefuckup jump since it fits ~~really wel~~ really dank on this song.
  3. 00:18:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you need more ~~diversity~~ dank memes, the map feels really ~~repetitive~~ not dank on this point. Come out with other ~~patterns~~ doritoes maybe.
  4. 00:25:371 (5,6) - I'd rather have these two distanced or as a slider. or make these separate 00:26:476 (3,4) - , diversity boiiii.
  5. 00:28:213 (1) - Aww gawd you and A god damn it , use a simple slider do not over do it.
  6. 00:30:424 (5,6) - there is no 1/4 notes here keep it simple lad. just 2 hitcircles.
  7. 00:33:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I already mentioned this but I like ~~diversity~~ Doritoes in maps.
  8. 00:48:108 (3) - replace this with a stream continuing up until 00:48:424 (1,2,3,4) - it has better ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew. also don't make the stream jaggy keep it normal and a bit curved.
  9. 00:51:266 (2,4) - place a note here.
  10. 00:52:845 (1,2,3) - you can have repeated sliders instead of these they play weird and disrupt ~~flow~~ the Dew
  11. 01:00:740 (6) - keep this in line with the others there is no reason to leave this out.
  12. 00:50:003 (3) - increase snapping from this point until 00:52:529 (6) - ~~this part is too easy~~ this part is too slow15me
  13. 01:01:687 (3,4) - same as 00:30:424 (5,6) -
  14. 01:05:161 (1,2,3) - again there is only 1/2 notes here no 1/4 sliders or notes.
  15. 01:06:740 (4,5) - you had really nice ~~flow~~ Dew until this point.
  16. 01:07:055 (1,2) - again the same as upper
  17. 01:09:582 (1,2,3) - cruel pattern, you are not Hollow Wings nor HanzeR remember that do not try to do this kind of things on normal songs, it doesn't fit imo.
  18. 01:10:687 (4,5,6,7) - this is a weird transition , it will be really hard to hit for some ~~players~~ nooblords so I suggest you replace 01:10:529 (3,4) - with a slider.
  19. 01:11:476 (1,2) - again ... nothing in the map.
  20. 01:12:582 (8) - ~~overlap~~ Drop tactical nuke ~~this~~ under 01:12:740 (1) -
  21. 01:13:687 (4,5) - move 01:13:687 (4) - inbetween 01:13:371 (3,1) - and move 01:13:845 (5) - so it overlaps 01:14:003 (1) - better flow imo
  22. 01:20:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you really hate ~~players~~ nooblords don't you, anyway do normal jumps these are really hard to play.
  23. I highly highly suggest that you remove the kicksliders they seriously do not fit, my pimps will not like this and their b*****s will get ya, prepare some weed just in case.Also instead of having the kicksliders increase diversity on the repetitive patterns I mentioned above maybe.
  Well I can't mod Hard, Normals or Easy diffs because I'm too

~~good~~ bad of a ~~quickscoper~~ mapper to mod them . Good luck getting this ranked ! I really want a normal and proper map of this song.

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-08-03T09:06:14+00:00

pLolz wrote:

Hellu ther don't mind me I'm just visiting from l'old #modreqs, also I'd like to ~~mod~~ quickscope this map because of your ~~generosity~~ dankness to mod my map aswell
Also my first mod :3.

A's Pace
00:00:740 (1,2) - (Optional) Ayy m8 the spacing is weird but you can keep it if you want, it looks like it needs to be more pimp-y imo. It's fine?
00:07:371 (6,7) - There are more patterns like this , they are pretty hard to ~~quickscope~~ read . I would make it more ~~quickscope-able~~ readable by moving 00:07:529 (7) - a bit to the down left , the same with 00:08:634 (7,8) - , 00:09:897 (3,4) - 00:10:529 (3,4) - , something like this http://puu.sh/jmYzW/ba4a88f149.jpg I know they are not that easy to read (especially in the editor), but in game combined with the AR it should be readable for experienced players.
00:09:108 (2) - move this a bit down to help ~~quickscopeability~~ readability . ^
00:09:108 (2,3,4) - weird flow here maybe increase ~~fast~~ distance between 00:09:266 (3,4) - would bring more doritoes Changed spacing slightly.
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - Lower yet mlg airhorns damnit . ( Lower hitsound volume ) They're fine?
00:17:161 (5,6) - I would replace these with a simple slider or two. there is really no reason for them to repeat . Vocals
00:19:529 (7,8,1,2) - This part has ~~really bad flow~~ low amounts of Mountain Dew , I loved the ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew you had earlier but now you destroyed it you monster ;w; , maybe move 00:19:845 (2) - somewhere like this http://puu.sh/jmZ1h/f7e36e1d4c.jpg Should be better now.
00:20:319 (5,6,7,8) - Increase ~~spacing~~ fast the ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew is horrible here. I think it is just fine.. Just a bit irregular but plays great
00:20:950 (1,2,3,4) - MLG airhornes too loud Your set's hitsound probably.
00:22:213 (5,6) - On what exactly did you put these on I don't understand ;w; , you could just put a normal slider , I'm really sorry if anything I say sounds rude.
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh boy , you are NOT HanzeR , this stream should be a normal one because the sound doesn't fit this kind of stream. The stream is really fun to play, fits the difficulty and is just as intense as the music.
00:26:318 (2) - maybe tilt this a tad bit down ? Optional. Why down? At least tell my why.
00:27:108 (4,5,6) - the spacing is a bit too small here and that creates bad ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew , you can do something like this, 00:27:108 (4) - x:216 y:371 , 00:27:266 (5) - the same , 00:27:424 (6) - Drop tactical nuke at x:134 y:213 I really liked this pattern, changed.
00:28:213 (1) - nothing bad here I just want to point out how good this slider is <3
00:28:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this puts a bit too much strain on the player , add a few sliders somewhere. If the player's not being strained just from the vocals he shouldn't play this map at all lol.
00:35:634 (4,5,6) - I would suggest you either make 00:35:082 (8,1) - and 00:34:450 (4,5) - have a bit of spacing between them or make 00:35:634 (4,5,6) - on the same location. it helps with flow y'know m8... It doesn't really change the flow at all, you just want consistency which is not needed becasue the triplet is not with a slider like the previous ones.
00:36:424 (1,1) - ~~this is cruel. reduce a bit of the distance~~ 3fast5me 'tis one is fine
00:37:529 (3) - same as the other ones, a simple slider is enough, form a single slider with these two 00:37:371 (2,3) - since the "Uuuu~" start on 00:37:371 (2) - . I like the held vocals so I want to emphasize them, changed spacings a bit eitherway.
00:38:318 (1,2,3) - the sounds this is mapped on is really really unnoticeable and this makes this pattern cruel, instead of hitcircles use a repeated slider. Yeah, this is really cruel, changed to a slider >.>
00:40:371 (3,4) - Increase spacing Why?
00:42:424 (6,1) - move 00:42:582 (1) - a bit to the up left. That's not my style of mapping.
00:47:318 (8,1,2) - increase spacing , 00:47:634 (2,3) - cruel spacing maybe do this ? http://puu.sh/jmZYw/8b8b740806.jpg . 00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - replace with sliders Good idea.
00:55:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 2,4,6,8 a bit so it help with readability No >.>
01:00:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove the finish hitsound. Re-done hitsounds here
01:00:818 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this turn is really really bad and sudden, it's really really evil, also do not increase the spacing when the song doesn't suggest it , remember you are NOT HanzeR Turn starts with the vocals, stream is really fun to play, I wouldn't touch it.
01:05:318 (2) - bring this out to the left a decent amount , it has better flow imo. Down and left.
01:06:108 (6,7) - maybe 01:06:108 (6) - Quickscope at x:459 y:246 and 01:06:266 (7) - 360 noscope here x:265 y:366
01:06:897 (4,5,6,7) - form a ~~square~~ double right angled triangle illuminati pattern with these you can do it ~~and it has nice flow~~ so you get more Dew from it. I suggest dropping nukes here 01:06:897 (4) - x:256 y:24 01:07:055 (5) - x:120 y:216 01:07:213 (6) - x:329 y:345 01:07:371 (7) - x:471 y:149
01:07:529 (8,1) - increase spacing because of bad flow m8 and the same for this 01:07:687 (1,2) - maybe 01:07:687 (1) - x:490 y:337 and 01:07:845 (2) - x:207 y:287
01:08:003 (3,4,5,6) - replace some of these with a slider because there is a lot of strain caused by all this jumping. Re-done the spacings and placements of the mentioned pattern, so yeah..
01:08:318 (5) - also here I noticed a interesting sound... it was (✿◠‿◠) 〜ITSUDEMOO
01:10:213 (3,4,5) - make a slider out of 2 of these. Why?

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Please stop with those memes

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-03T10:15:27+00:00

pLolz wrote:
Insane
00:08:950 (1,2) - There is a gap here where there can be some ~~notes~~ quickscopes , you can keep it blank if you are mapping on ~~instrumental~~ airhorns but it doesn't feel right. it's fine
00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - you can make this~~a back and forth~~ anti-Imelevensoshutthefuckup jump since it fits ~~really wel~~ really dank on this song. nah
00:18:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you need more ~~diversity~~ dank memes, the map feels really ~~repetitive~~ not dank on this point. Come out with other ~~patterns~~ doritoes maybe. the part is completely the same, it's ok, also that same part appers later and is different there
00:25:371 (5,6) - I'd rather have these two distanced or as a slider. or make these separate 00:26:476 (3,4) - , diversity boiiii. nah
00:28:213 (1) - Aww gawd you and A god damn it , use a simple slider do not over do it. fits vocals perfectly
00:30:424 (5,6) - there is no 1/4 notes here keep it simple lad. just 2 hitcircles. changed
00:33:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I already mentioned this but I like ~~diversity~~ Doritoes in maps. the pattern here is completely different from 00:18:424 but it is consistent in itself, which is fine
00:48:108 (3) - replace this with a stream continuing up until 00:48:424 (1,2,3,4) - it has better ~~flow~~ Mountain Dew. also don't make the stream jaggy keep it normal and a bit curved. changed, but stream stays jaggy
00:51:266 (2,4) - place a note here. no, whole combo is mapped to vocals and it would be weird
00:52:845 (1,2,3) - you can have repeated sliders instead of these they play weird and disrupt ~~flow~~ the Dew there are tons of sliders before and after, would feel weird and boring. It also serves as little "break" before the 1.5x sv part
01:00:740 (6) - keep this in line with the others there is no reason to leave this out. b-but it already is in the middle of the stream, with the same spacing as all other notes
00:50:003 (3) - increase snapping from this point until 00:52:529 (6) - ~~this part is too easy~~ this part is too slow15me nah, the pattern is really nice and it's one of the calmer parts of the song
01:01:687 (3,4) - same as 00:30:424 (5,6) - changed
01:05:161 (1,2,3) - again there is only 1/2 notes here no 1/4 sliders or notes. really put emphasis on the intensity of the song at this part, the only other way to do this would be with ridiculously spaced jumps
01:06:740 (4,5) - you had really nice ~~flow~~ Dew until this point.
01:07:055 (1,2) - again the same as upper changed
01:09:582 (1,2,3) - cruel pattern, you are not Hollow Wings nor HanzeR remember that do not try to do this kind of things on normal songs, it doesn't fit imo. it fits the vocals and is really easy to read/play cause of slider leniency and high ar
01:10:687 (4,5,6,7) - this is a weird transition , it will be really hard to hit for some ~~players~~ nooblords so I suggest you replace 01:10:529 (3,4) - with a slider. perfect ds, not hard to play or anything
01:11:476 (1,2) - again ... nothing in the map. that short jump feels much better with kicksliders, I already removed most of them
01:12:582 (8) - ~~overlap~~ Drop tactical nuke ~~this~~ under 01:12:740 (1) - autostack makes it look ugly and I don't want to lower stack leniency for one one
01:13:687 (4,5) - move 01:13:687 (4) - inbetween 01:13:371 (3,1) - and move 01:13:845 (5) - so it overlaps 01:14:003 (1) - better flow imo nah
01:20:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you really hate ~~players~~ nooblords don't you, anyway do normal jumps these are really hard to play. they shouldn't be hard to hit imo, none of the people I watched testplay it struggled with them, some anti-jumps are fine, especially if they fit the vocals + less repetitive + don't want to end kiai with some either boring or really hard jump pattern.
I highly highly suggest that you remove the kicksliders they seriously do not fit, my pimps will not like this and their b*****s will get ya, prepare some weed just in case.Also instead of having the kicksliders increase diversity on the repetitive patterns I mentioned above maybe I removed lots of kicksliders, but some just have to stay as they are.

Acylica

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Acylica 2015-08-03T11:39:32+00:00

Well, No Combo colors?
try these colors:
combo 1: R/255 G/128 B/192
combo 2: R/169 G/255 B/83
combo 3: R/245 G/218 B/90
combo 4: R/87 G/171 B/255

Insane

00:02:318 (5) - No Reason for Antijump
00:48:108 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion

A's Pace

this diff is generally overmapped so it maybe a problem when you call BN
00:05:161 (1,2) - too overmapped ds
00:46:529 (2) - ^

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-03T13:30:41+00:00

iedesu wrote:
Well, No Combo colors?
try these colors:
combo 1: R/255 G/128 B/192
combo 2: R/169 G/255 B/83
combo 3: R/245 G/218 B/90
combo 4: R/87 G/171 B/255
I will consider it

Insane
00:02:318 (5) - No Reason for Antijump fixed
00:48:108 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion ok

DeletedUser_3886246

DeletedUser_3886246 2015-08-03T15:28:12+00:00

Hey, I'm here for M4M~
Took me a while since my mood is bad~

General

● I'm gonna point out the combo colours, like everyone else does.
● The slider forms in Easy are reaally strange. I don't even want to write them all down.

Easy

● 00:15:897 (5,7) - Slightly overlapping.
● 00:17:161 (7,1) - Proper blanket please~
● 00:28:529 (1,2) - Try to improve that blanket too.
● 00:31:055 (1,2) - You could use copy and paste for symmetry.
● 00:50:634 (4,6) - How about stacking (6) on (4)?
● 00:53:792 (1) - ^ If you stack 6, you've gotta move this slider according to the DS.
● 01:00:108 (3,1) - Proper Blanket please.
● 01:07:687 (1,2) - ^

Normal

● 00:10:213 (3,1) - These are slightly overlapping.
● 00:39:266 (3,1) - Improve blanket please.
● 01:05:161 (3) - This slider looks so squeezed~
● 01:07:055 (4,1) - Improve blanket.
● 01:08:318 (3,1) - I don't like that overlap.
● 01:18:423 (3,1) - ^

Hard

- Improve blanket please.
● 00:25:371 (3,4) - ^
● 00:26:318 (3,4) - ^
● 00:26:634 (4,1) - ^
● 00:30:108 (3,1) - I don't really like overlaps, but please, at least improve it.
● 00:40:371 (2,4) - Improve blanket.
● 00:41:476 (3,4) - ^
● 00:41:792 (4,5) - ^
● 00:48:740 (1,2) - ^
● 00:49:845 (5,1) - ^
● 00:55:371 (2,3) - ^
● 01:09:897 (4,1) - Stack these properly please.
● 01:20:161 (4,2) - Why are these closer to each other, than these - 01:20:476 (2,4) - ?

Insane

● Since this is an insane, you're basically allowed to do every pattern as you please, but please recheck the blankets and try to avoid opverlapping.
● 00:20:476 (2,3,4) - The only thing I wanna say is, that I really dislike these patterns.
● Yes, that's all for Insane~ ".-.

I didn't mod the hardest difficulty, 'cuz "you" requested the M4M mod~

Good luck with ranking your Beatmap! c:

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-03T17:15:44+00:00

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:
Hey, I'm here for M4M~
Took me a while since my mood is bad~

General
● I'm gonna point out the combo colours, like everyone else does. added the ones from iedesu
● The slider forms in Easy are reaally strange. I don't even want to write them all down.

Easy
● 00:15:897 (5,7) - Slightly overlapping. fixed
● 00:17:161 (7,1) - Proper blanket please~ ^
● 00:28:529 (1,2) - Try to improve that blanket too. ^
● 00:31:055 (1,2) - You could use copy and paste for symmetry. ^
● 00:50:634 (4,6) - How about stacking (6) on (4)? done
● 00:53:792 (1) - ^ If you stack 6, you've gotta move this slider according to the DS. ^
● 01:00:108 (3,1) - Proper Blanket please. ^
● 01:07:687 (1,2) - ^^

Normal
● 00:10:213 (3,1) - These are slightly overlapping. fixed
● 00:39:266 (3,1) - Improve blanket please. ^
● 01:05:161 (3) - This slider looks so squeezed~ changed a little, but completely straight it would look worse
● 01:07:055 (4,1) - Improve blanket. done
● 01:08:318 (3,1) - I don't like that overlap. think it's fine
● 01:18:423 (3,1) - ^ ^

Hard
- Improve blanket please.
● 00:25:371 (3,4) - ^ done
● 00:26:318 (3,4) - ^ ^
● 00:26:634 (4,1) - ^ ^
● 00:30:108 (3,1) - I don't really like overlaps, but please, at least improve it. ^
● 00:40:371 (2,4) - Improve blanket. ^
● 00:41:476 (3,4) - ^ ^
● 00:41:792 (4,5) - ^ ^
● 00:48:740 (1,2) - ^ ^
● 00:49:845 (5,1) - ^ ^
● 00:55:371 (2,3) - ^ ^
● 01:09:897 (4,1) - Stack these properly please. ^
● 01:20:161 (4,2) - Why are these closer to each other, than these - 01:20:476 (2,4) - ? perfectly distance snapped, but I changed the alignment a little

Insane
● Since this is an insane, you're basically allowed to do every pattern as you please, but please recheck the blankets and try to avoid opverlapping.
● 00:20:476 (2,3,4) - The only thing I wanna say is, that I really dislike these patterns. I like them
● Yes, that's all for Insane~ ".-.

I didn't mod the hardest difficulty, 'cuz "you" requested the M4M mod~

Good luck with ranking your Beatmap! c:

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-06T16:47:48+00:00

Reworked a pattern and some hitsounds on the insane, should feel better now.

Also lowered HP drain a little sicne it felt very harsh if you missed before the slower 1/2 singletap - slider sections.
Raised OD a little

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-06T21:40:23+00:00

Since the gap between Hard -> Insane was so big I decided to add a Light Insane, re-dl pls

Mikkuri

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Mikkuri 2015-08-06T23:25:45+00:00

from your queue~

[Light's Insane]

00:04:845 (5) - check your ai mod everytime you upload a map
00:21:897 (4,1,2) - the distance is too close. strongly recommend to fix like this or move further away
SPOILER
00:23:476 (1) - you should multiplier to 1.0x here not here 00:23:634
00:24:424 (5) - spacing too close
00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why 0.5x
00:46:213 (1) - stack with 00:44:950 (1) -
00:47:950 (4) - stack this with (3)
00:54:740 (5) - remove nc
01:00:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what a random spacing lol
01:26:950 (6,1) - too close

[A's Pace]recommend to change a diff name to [A's Extra]

00:11:476 (5) - add nc
00:17:318 (6,1) - swap nc
00:22:213 (5) - add nc
00:27:266 (5) - add nc
00:49:055 (5) - remove nc
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:00:108 (7) - add nc
01:00:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - remove (2) and fixed nc. it'll be better
SPOILER
01:02:318 (6,7) - too close
01:10:213 (3,4,5,6) - like this?
SPOILER
01:14:003 (5) - add nc
01:15:582 (3) - move to x:164 y:328 is better
01:20:318 (6) - add nc
01:26:003 (3,5,7) - add nc

honestly do you know where or how to place a hitsound lol
fine more quality modder to improve your mapset, good luck!

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-07T00:14:12+00:00

Mikkuri wrote:
from your queue~

[Light's Insane]
00:04:845 (5) - check your ai mod everytime you upload a map fixed
00:21:897 (4,1,2) - the distance is too close. strongly recommend to fix like this or move further away
SPOILER
fixed
00:23:476 (1) - you should multiplier to 1.0x here not here 00:23:634 fixed
00:24:424 (5) - spacing too close it's 1.3x like the notes before in the same combo ??
00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why 0.5x changed
00:46:213 (1) - stack with 00:44:950 (1) - done
00:47:950 (4) - stack this with (3) done
00:54:740 (5) - remove nc done
01:00:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what a random spacing lol changed
01:26:950 (6,1) - too close
changed

honestly do you know where or how to place a hitsound lol
fine more quality modder to improve your mapset, good luck!

I was tired and copied them from the Insane, I looked through it agai nand changed lots of hitsounding

Mikkuri

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Mikkuri 2015-08-07T01:37:01+00:00

Lasse wrote:
Mikkuri wrote:
00:24:424 (5) - spacing too close it's 1.3x like the notes before in the same combo ?? sorry my mistake!
I mean here 00:21:898 (4,1,2) -

no kds this post

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-07T01:40:33+00:00

You may embed only 2 quotes within each other.

It's 3:40 here, so I'll check it tomorrow, thanks for clarifying

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-08-07T02:02:01+00:00

Applied everything except the thing on 00:56:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -, as for the hitsounds, I know I can improve them a lot, I initially copied them from Lasse's diff but I got lazy and didn't modify them completely lol, I'll get it done tomorrow.

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Morbon

133 posts

Joined August 2011

Morbon 2015-08-08T17:51:47+00:00

Hello, M4M here

[A's Pace]

00:49:055 (1) - remove NC?
01:11:003 (1) - ^, add here 01:11:161 (3)
00:07:687 (1) - you have only normal whistle here, but 00:08:950 (1,2) - here you have 2 normal hits, while music is the same. is it ok?
00:23:792 (2) - you have soft whistle here, you can add more of them, for example 00:24:424 (4) - here or 00:24:424 (4) - here
00:28:845 (3) - and here you don't have any hitsounds at all, while in part later (00:38:634 - 00:47:481 ) you have nice whistles
00:32:318 (1,2,3,1) - and i expected more hitsounds here
00:50:003 (1) - stack with 00:48:897 (4) and 00:50:318 (2) - make blanket with (1) ?
00:53:476 (8,9,10) - stack with 00:53:003 (4) ?
01:01:371 (1) - could be closer to the stream
01:27:740 (1) - very confusing, i broke combo here
Very nice and challenging diff

[Light Insane]

00:11:634 (1) - can't see the point of NC
00:28:529 (2) - NC ?
00:39:266 (1) - remove, add 00:39:897 (3) - here ?
00:40:529 (1) - ^
01:08:318 (1) - ^
00:01:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this DS is a bit low, just a suggestion
00:08:318 (3,4) - better blanket?
00:19:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really a nice star, you can fix it by using "create polygon circles" option
00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think it's too close to the prev. slider
00:24:108 (4,5) - blanket?
00:25:372 (4,5) - and here i think it can be better
00:31:687 (3) - this form could be better
00:32:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close to the prev. slider
00:35:476 (5,1) - don't really like this forms
00:36:108 (1,2,3,4) - how about keeping same DS between 1-3 2-4 ?
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6) - they are too close i think, looking a bit ugly
00:43:371 (1) - stack end with 00:42:582 (2) ?
00:44:950 (1,2,3,4) - could be better diamond
00:51:740 (3,4) - could be better blanket i think
01:05:476 (3,4) - move this a bit lower
01:07:687 (1,2) - how about this form?
01:08:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close
01:08:950 (1,2,3,4) - same DS issue, but i think it's not bad here
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4) - ugh, could be better arc
01:17:476 (1) - stack with 01:16:213 (2) ? and move 01:18:108 (4) too
01:27:582 (2) - stack with the end of slider?

Good luck with map!

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2015-08-08T18:22:08+00:00

[Light Insane]

00:11:792 (2) - 311|266 for balanced spacing between 00:11:634 (1,3) -
00:34:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the star pattern.
01:01:134 (6,7,8,1) - Stream spacing not balanced
01:27:582 (2) - Stack it properly in the tail of 01:27:740 (3) -
01:10:845 (1,2,3,4) - Remember that this is light insane, I don't hate it, but it's too much imo
00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Use DS for better stream pattern
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[A's Pace]

dunno if I can mod it right
00:27:897 (5) - Fix this blanket with 00:28:213 (1) -
00:36:424 (1,1) - This one really needs NC?
00:41:161 (1) - heading upwards to better flow
01:02:634 (1,2) - maybe better with same slider shape (ofc the other one is rotated)
01:21:266 (1) - remove NC
01:27:424 (1) - Convert it to circles (pretty awkward)

enclosure

30 posts

Joined September 2013

enclosure 2015-08-08T18:36:25+00:00

M4M from queue

Light Insane
00:19:055 (3) - Is dangerously low to being off the play field. Considering this isn't a problem in play mode, this isn't a major issue.
00:22:371 (1,2) - Spacing looks weird with 0.5x, almost as if the stream begins directly after the slider. 1.0x~ feels more natural.
00:35:792 (1) - This looks ugly imo.
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making this stream more even. The arc of it looks odd, but it plays fine.
01:01:213 (7) - The spacing of this within the stream isn't consistent with the others. 1-6 sit at 0.4x, while this is 0.35x and 0.22x. (8)->(1) is also 0.47x
01:12:424 (4) - The end of this slider has a really loud pop. Maybe it's possessed? Or maybe it's intended, I have no idea. It just comes out of nowhere.
As for any spacing issues, I didn't notice any beyond streams.

NC changes -completely subjective-
00:06:266 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:476 (3) - Remove NC
00:35:792 (1) - Remove NC

A's Pace
00:12:897 (3) - Leaving this to follow the previous rhythm leaves the time until 00:13:371 (1) - to feel a bit empty. Perhaps extending to 00:13:213 will help?
00:17:161 (5) - Maybe it's because I'm terrible at this or i just can't read fast enough but these feel like they come out of nowhere. Might just be me. (same comment for all rhythms like this throughout the song)
00:22:845 (1,8) and 00:22:845 (1,8) - streams just aren't reasonable. The first one is passable, but I think getting into 00:22:845 (1,8) - the spacing is just too high.
00:38:318 (6) - The use of 1/6 here doesn't fit the song. (6) is began almost on an empty beat, vocally. (End of the previous Yay!

)
00:43:371 (1) - ctrl+G? It may feel more natural for some. I can't play the jumps before it correctly to notice the difference, but it looks better.

NC changes -completely subjective-
Harder to spot any in this difficulty, as most NC's are used to show SV changes.
00:48:582 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to 00:48:739 (3)
01:11:003 (1) - Remove NC and Add NC to 01:11:161 (3) - This also helps with reading the stacked notes.
01:16:055 (5) - Add NC
01:17:634 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:740 (1) - Remove NC

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-08T19:13:48+00:00

Morbon wrote:
Hello, M4M here

[Light Insane]
00:11:634 (1) - can't see the point of NC removed
00:28:529 (2) - NC ? sure
00:39:266 (1) - remove, add 00:39:897 (3) - here ? sure
00:40:529 (1) - ^ sure
01:08:318 (1) - ^ sure
00:01:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this DS is a bit low, just a suggestion increased a bit
00:08:318 (3,4) - better blanket?done
00:19:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really a nice star, you can fix it by using "create polygon circles" option fixed
00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think it's too close to the prev. slider ds is fine
00:24:108 (4,5) - blanket? fixed
00:25:372 (4,5) - and here i think it can be better ^
00:31:687 (3) - this form could be better ^
00:32:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close to the prev. slider it's just an nc anti-jump
00:35:476 (5,1) - don't really like this forms they are fine
00:36:108 (1,2,3,4) - how about keeping same DS between 1-3 2-4 ? k
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6) - they are too close i think, looking a bit ugly fixed
00:43:371 (1) - stack end with 00:42:582 (2) ? ^
00:44:950 (1,2,3,4) - could be better diamond ^
00:51:740 (3,4) - could be better blanket i think ^
01:05:476 (3,4) - move this a bit lower ^
01:07:687 (1,2) - how about this form? nah
01:08:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close fixed
01:08:950 (1,2,3,4) - same DS issue, but i think it's not bad here chanegd a little bit
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4) - ugh, could be better arc fine as it is
01:17:476 (1) - stack with 01:16:213 (2) ? and move 01:18:108 (4) too nah, they are pretty far apart in time anyways
01:27:582 (2) - stack with the end of slider?sure
Good luck with map!

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-08T19:19:00+00:00

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
[Light Insane]
00:11:792 (2) - 311|266 for balanced spacing between 00:11:634 (1,3) - spacing is fine
00:34:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the star pattern. fixed
01:01:134 (6,7,8,1) - Stream spacing not balanced ^
01:27:582 (2) - Stack it properly in the tail of 01:27:740 (3) - ^
01:10:845 (1,2,3,4) - Remember that this is light insane, I don't hate it, but it's too much imo it might be a light insane, but it's still 4.4* and a lowly spaced 190bpm 4x kicksldier pattern should be fine
00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Use DS for better stream pattern color=#BF4000]spacing is fine[/color]
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-08T19:33:23+00:00

enclosure wrote:
M4M from queue

Light Insane
00:19:055 (3) - Is dangerously low to being off the play field. Considering this isn't a problem in play mode, this isn't a major issue. I still got some space left to move it down, should be fine
00:22:371 (1,2) - Spacing looks weird with 0.5x, almost as if the stream begins directly after the slider. 1.0x~ feels more natural. made it a bit higher
00:35:792 (1) - This looks ugly imo. already changed
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making this stream more even. The arc of it looks odd, but it plays fine. changed
01:01:213 (7) - The spacing of this within the stream isn't consistent with the others. 1-6 sit at 0.4x, while this is 0.35x and 0.22x. (8)->(1) is also 0.47x fixed
01:12:424 (4) - The end of this slider has a really loud pop. Maybe it's possessed? Or maybe it's intended, I have no idea. It just comes out of nowhere. fixed
As for any spacing issues, I didn't notice any beyond streams.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-08T20:17:27+00:00

I will note here that I won't comment to NC and hitsounds changes, hitsounds because I've just redid them (using your suggestions fixed whatever needed), and NC because it seems kinda pointless to say yes / no, I did read everything tho..

Morbon wrote:
Hello, M4M here

[A's Pace]
00:49:055 (1) - remove NC?
01:11:003 (1) - ^, add here 01:11:161 (3)
00:07:687 (1) - you have only normal whistle here, but 00:08:950 (1,2) - here you have 2 normal hits, while music is the same. is it ok?
00:23:792 (2) - you have soft whistle here, you can add more of them, for example 00:24:424 (4) - here or 00:24:424 (4) - here
00:28:845 (3) - and here you don't have any hitsounds at all, while in part later (00:38:634 - 00:47:481 ) you have nice whistles
00:32:318 (1,2,3,1) - and i expected more hitsounds here
00:50:003 (1) - stack with 00:48:897 (4) and 00:50:318 (2) - make blanket with (1) ? Would look better indeed.
00:53:476 (8,9,10) - stack with 00:53:003 (4) ? They are stacked with 4 already?
01:01:371 (1) - could be closer to the stream I've decided to lower the spacing between the stream and the slider, high stream DS is enough.
01:27:740 (1) - very confusing, i broke combo here I like it as it is, I might change it soon.
Very nice and challenging diff
Good luck with map!

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
[A's Pace]
dunno if I can mod it right
00:27:897 (5) - Fix this blanket with 00:28:213 (1) - It's just fine?..
00:36:424 (1,1) - This one really needs NC?
00:41:161 (1) - heading upwards to better flow The current pattern flows great as well without being direct to the other slider.
01:02:634 (1,2) - maybe better with same slider shape (ofc the other one is rotated) Nothing wong neither with your suggestion, nor my pattern, and I prefer mine a bit more, so..
01:21:266 (1) - remove NC
01:27:424 (1) - Convert it to circles (pretty awkward) Nah, 2x slider is the best emphasizition I can give.

enclosure wrote:
M4M from queue

A's Pace
00:12:897 (3) - Leaving this to follow the previous rhythm leaves the time until 00:13:371 (1) - to feel a bit empty. Perhaps extending to 00:13:213 will help? I am following the vocals here, and extending the slider will create odd feeling, the current pattern is fine imo.
00:17:161 (5) - Maybe it's because I'm terrible at this or i just can't read fast enough but these feel like they come out of nowhere. Might just be me. (same comment for all rhythms like this throughout the song) It's fine.
00:22:845 (1,8) and 00:22:845 (1,8) - streams just aren't reasonable. The first one is passable, but I think getting into 00:22:845 (1,8) - the spacing is just too high. You are supposed to play this as a stream as a whole, not just doubles, if you do that it will play really nicely, and how come you mentioned this but not the slider before kiai time?
00:38:318 (6) - The use of 1/6 here doesn't fit the song. (6) is began almost on an empty beat, vocally. (End of the previous Yay! )Not really following vocals here, but I feel like the 1/3 plays here really good, fits the random-ish background sounds.
00:43:371 (1) - ctrl+G? It may feel more natural for some. I can't play the jumps before it correctly to notice the difference, but it looks better. Current pattern plays better and flows better, also looks a bit better in my opinion, so I'll leave it as it is.

NC changes -completely subjective-
Harder to spot any in this difficulty, as most NC's are used to show SV changes.
00:48:582 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to 00:48:739 (3)
01:11:003 (1) - Remove NC and Add NC to 01:11:161 (3) - This also helps with reading the stacked notes.
01:16:055 (5) - Add NC
01:17:634 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:740 (1) - Remove NC

Thank you for your time!

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gregest

809 posts

Joined February 2014

gregest 2015-08-10T11:11:08+00:00

hi, mod as requested

[Light Insane]

00:16:529 (3,4,5) - these don't really play good, anything else would be better than just a straight line

00:22:371 (1,2) - blanket this

00:33:266 (1) - this shape isn't really necessary since it just makes the slider ugly in my opinion

00:58:529 (1) - I would use a double here

01:16:529 (4,5) - blanket

[Insane]

uh boy this diff

00:03:740 (4) - this slider looks ugly

00:06:266 (4) - ^

00:32:318 (2,3,4,5) - I would add finish or clap

00:46:213 (1,2) - blanket

00:58:529 (1,2) - bigger spacing

01:09:582 (1,3) - stack

01:23:161 (3,4) - blanket

[A's Pace]

I can say only one thing about this diff

The difficulty spread between the Insane and this diff is huge, the spacing is a lot bigger, the sv is a lot bigger, everything is a lot bigger

Lasse

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3,644 posts

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Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-10T13:30:47+00:00

CptBlackBird wrote:
hi, mod as requested

[Light Insane]

00:16:529 (3,4,5) - these don't really play good, anything else would be better than just a straight line changed shape

00:22:371 (1,2) - blanket this nah, but I changed the shape

00:33:266 (1) - this shape isn't really necessary since it just makes the slider ugly in my opinion changed shape

00:58:529 (1) - I would use a double here nah

01:16:529 (4,5) - blanket fixed

[Insane]

uh boy this diff

00:03:740 (4) - this slider looks ugly changed

00:06:266 (4) - ^ changed

00:32:318 (2,3,4,5) - I would add finish or clap done

00:46:213 (1,2) - blanket changed shape

00:58:529 (1,2) - bigger spacing spaced the same as the ones afterwards, would feel weird

01:09:582 (1,3) - stack k

01:23:161 (3,4) - blanket fixed

the sv is a lot bigger

huh, it's 1.6 vs 1.96 while we are both using mostly 1.00~1.25~1,50 as multiplier

I already added Light Insane so I could make the Insane way harder (it was ~4.8 before adding a Light Insane), so spread should be fine...

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2015-08-12T12:29:39+00:00

M4M

Insane

Found nothing, really

A's pace

No custom color?
00:00:740 (1,2) - It's kinda overmapped, I would use only 1 slider or spinner on this one
00:07:687 (1,2) - I know you wanna emphasize the note at 00:07:687 (1) - but since 00:07:845 (2) - have no clap on it, i'd think you should put those jumps closer
00:07:687 (1) - Finish
00:08:950 (1,2) - same as 00:07:687 (1,2) -
00:08:950 (1) - Finish
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - 2.0x spacing on 00:15:897 (1,2) - then suddenly 0.5x spacing on 00:16:213 (2,3) - then 1.0x on 00:16:213 (2,3,4) - ???? really? even you like it at least put 00:15:897 (1,2) - closer since it's hard to reach
00:17:161 (5,6) - Remove, no 1/8 notes where heard on this one
00:22:213 (1,2) - ^
00:22:529 (3,1,2) - since 00:22:845 (1,2) - has 0.5x (or 1.0x if you fix the stream as mentioned at the next mod) , i'd prefer to put the tail on 00:22:529 (3) - closer to 00:22:845 (1) - so it flows better
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of stream technique will not work anymore as this kind of speed changes is confusing
00:29:792 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing pattern, replace 00:30:266 (6,7,8) - with zig zag pattern like 00:29:792 (3,4,5) -
00:37:529 (3) - same as 00:00:740 (1,2) -
00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - *sigh* It's confusing since most of the diff is 1/4, besides, i couldn't hear any sounds right there, remove.
00:51:740 (2,1) - There's nothing to emphasize, why put that far away?
00:58:845 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing
01:14:003 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:17:003 (3) - Blanket? 01:16:845 (2) - Is already stacked so it's hard to read 01:17:003 (3) -
01:24:108 (1,2,3) - It's hard to reach, put closer

In conclusion, It just hard to read and it has some kind of confusing, also, try to reduce amount of slider speed change as possible

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-12T17:55:34+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
M4M

Insane
Found nothing, really
A's pace
No custom color? Oh, added.
00:00:740 (1,2) - It's kinda overmapped, I would use only 1 slider or spinner on this one Doesn't really matter imo.
00:07:687 (1,2) - I know you wanna emphasize the note at 00:07:687 (1) - but since 00:07:845 (2) - have no clap on it, i'd think you should put those jumps closer Just because I didn't put a clap doesn't mean I can't emphasize the note, it is not a regular note, I've even added a whistle.
00:07:687 (1) - Finish V
00:08:950 (1,2) - same as 00:07:687 (1,2) - Same.
00:08:950 (1) - Finish V
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - 2.0x spacing on 00:15:897 (1,2) - then suddenly 0.5x spacing on 00:16:213 (2,3) - then 1.0x on 00:16:213 (2,3,4) - ???? really? even you like it at least put 00:15:897 (1,2) - closer since it's hard to reach This is an Extra difficulty, the jumps are according to the "HEY" in the vocals, also this pattern is be visually appealing.

00:17:161 (5,6) - Remove, no 1/8 notes where heard on this one Emphasizes the vocals.
00:22:213 (1,2) - ^ Same
00:22:529 (3,1,2) - since 00:22:845 (1,2) - has 0.5x (or 1.0x if you fix the stream as mentioned at the next mod) , i'd prefer to put the tail on 00:22:529 (3) - closer to 00:22:845 (1) - so it flows better That's a weird statement and I don't think it is necessary.
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of stream technique will not work anymore as this kind of speed changes is confusing Egh come on, what do you want me to say to you? Get good?
00:29:792 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing pattern, replace 00:30:266 (6,7,8) - with zig zag pattern like 00:29:792 (3,4,5) - No, why would I prefer it?
00:37:529 (3) - same as 00:00:740 (1,2) - Same
00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - *sigh* It's confusing since most of the diff is 1/4, besides, i couldn't hear any sounds right there, remove. I never had 1/4 at such spacings, and I think it goes just fine.
00:51:740 (2,1) - There's nothing to emphasize, why put that far away? You are right, changed.
00:58:845 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing What's there to fix?
01:14:003 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ?
01:17:003 (3) - Blanket? 01:16:845 (2) - Is already stacked so it's hard to read 01:17:003 (3) - No..
01:24:108 (1,2,3) - It's hard to reach, put closer I don't want them to overlap, it is just fine.

In conclusion, It just hard to read and it has some kind of confusing, also, try to reduce amount of slider speed change as possible

It is an Extra difficulty, you didn't try to even understand any of my thoughts, I am much more free to do than I am in an Insane / Hard or whatever, some parts are hard to read / aim, because that's how they're supposed to be, but if you play them right, they play well and award you nicely.

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Mortem

694 posts

Joined July 2013

Mortem 2015-08-12T21:00:22+00:00

hi

Easy:
• 00:01:529 (1) - This note is useless in Easy difficulty. Players may have problem to click on that in time, since there isn't strong beat for it.
• 00:17:161 (7,1) - Blanket seems to be off.
• 00:18:424 (1,3) - It's just a minor thing, but I guess if you copy the second mentioned slider and replace the first one, it would look neat + flow would be better.
• 00:22:529 (3,4) - Except these two circles put here a slider. Since Easy players would have problems with it.
• 00:23:476 (1,2) - Same scenario as in 00:18:424 (1,3) - . Believe or not, these two sliders even though they are much alike, they are not the same.
• 00:28:213 (3) - Move it at x:268 y:84 for better flow.
• 00:29:792 (1,1) - Remove new combos due to inconsistency.
• 00:33:897 (2,4) - I'm not actually fan of this slider design. It's just my thing, but I highly suggest to improve the design of these sliders.
• 00:52:529 (6,1) - Blanket seems to be little bit off.
• 00:55:055 (1) - Remove NC. Due to inconsistency.

Normal:
• 00:01:687 (1,2,3) - Again as in Easy difficulty. It's not because it's hard to play, no. It's because it doesn't follow anything, even vocals. If I were you, I would a spinner here.
• 00:07:687 (6) - New combo please //inconsistency.
• 00:17:792 (4) - Remove reverse arrow and put a note on a downbeat. It's more suitable.
• 00:21:582 (2,1) - You could stack the beginning of the slider (2) with the circle.
• 00:39:266 (3,1) - Blanket could be improved.
• 00:40:529 (3,1) - ^
• 01:04:529 (2,3) - ^
• 01:08:318 (3) - Remove one reverse arrow. Suits way more better and players will have time to click on 01:08:950 (1) - .
• 01:11:792 (2,3) - This blanket seems to be little bit off.
• 01:18:423 (3) - Same as 01:08:318 (3) - .
• 01:23:792 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved.
• 01:24:108 (1,2) - ^

Hard:
• 00:41:161 (1,2) - Keep the distance snap same.

Other diffs seems fine to me.
Good Luck!

Lasse

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3,644 posts

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Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-12T22:00:20+00:00

Mortem wrote:
hi

Easy:
• 00:01:529 (1) - This note is useless in Easy difficulty. Players may have problem to click on that in time, since there isn't strong beat for it. removed
• 00:17:161 (7,1) - Blanket seems to be off. fixed
• 00:18:424 (1,3) - It's just a minor thing, but I guess if you copy the second mentioned slider and replace the first one, it would look neat + flow would be better. ok
• 00:22:529 (3,4) - Except these two circles put here a slider. Since Easy players would have problems with it. ok
• 00:23:476 (1,2) - Same scenario as in 00:18:424 (1,3) - . Believe or not, these two sliders even though they are much alike, they are not the same. changed
• 00:28:213 (3) - Move it at x:268 y:84 for better flow. changed part before so this was changed anyways
• 00:29:792 (1,1) - Remove new combos due to inconsistency. k
• 00:33:897 (2,4) - I'm not actually fan of this slider design. It's just my thing, but I highly suggest to improve the design of these sliders. reworked
• 00:52:529 (6,1) - Blanket seems to be little bit off. fixed
• 00:55:055 (1) - Remove NC. Due to inconsistency.dobe

Normal:
• 00:01:687 (1,2,3) - Again as in Easy difficulty. It's not because it's hard to play, no. It's because it doesn't follow anything, even vocals. If I were you, I would a spinner here. spinenr would either be very short or not have enough time after, simply removing it might be the best way
• 00:07:687 (6) - New combo please //inconsistency. k
• 00:17:792 (4) - Remove reverse arrow and put a note on a downbeat. It's more suitable. done
• 00:21:582 (2,1) - You could stack the beginning of the slider (2) with the circle. changed that part
• 00:39:266 (3,1) - Blanket could be improved. done
• 00:40:529 (3,1) - ^ ^
• 01:04:529 (2,3) - ^ ^
• 01:08:318 (3) - Remove one reverse arrow. Suits way more better and players will have time to click on 01:08:950 (1) - . removed
• 01:11:792 (2,3) - This blanket seems to be little bit off. fixed
• 01:18:423 (3) - Same as 01:08:318 (3) - . k
• 01:23:792 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved. fixed
• 01:24:108 (1,2) - ^ fixed

Hard:
• 00:41:161 (1,2) - Keep the distance snap same. fixed

Other diffs seems fine to me.
Good Luck!

Lasse

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Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-13T17:13:00+00:00

Hitsounds reworked for all diffs except A's Pace (going to check with the mapper)
walaowey did most of the new hitsounding
+ added some custom hitsounds so pls redownload

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-08-13T17:23:11+00:00

Hi there o/

did some hitsound mod xD

Hitsound mod xDD

2015-08-13 23:49 walaowey: hi there
2015-08-13 23:49 walaowey: u need help with hitsounding?
2015-08-13 23:50 Lasse: need someone to look over a diff causeI there seem to be some badly placed ones
2015-08-13 23:50 walaowey: u mean hitsound?
2015-08-13 23:50 walaowey: link me your map
2015-08-13 23:50 walaowey: I'll try to look at it
2015-08-13 23:51 ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741949 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - My Pace de Ikimashou [Insane]]
2015-08-13 23:51 Lasse: thanks :)
2015-08-13 23:53 walaowey: irc modding?
2015-08-13 23:54 Lasse: sure, why not
2015-08-13 23:54 walaowey: btw, why not use some custom hitsounding? xD
2015-08-13 23:54 Lasse: i didn't really find any fitting ones
2015-08-13 23:55 walaowey: oo
2015-08-13 23:55 walaowey: 00:03:740 (4) - the whistle is all over the slider
2015-08-13 23:55 walaowey: u add them on purpose?
2015-08-13 23:56 Lasse: no, removed it
2015-08-13 23:56 Lasse: only put it on the start
2015-08-13 23:56 walaowey: o
2015-08-13 23:56 walaowey: 00:12:266 (1,2,3) - here too
2015-08-13 23:57 Lasse: they are only on the sliderstarts there
2015-08-13 23:57 walaowey: but mine is all over the slider :/
2015-08-13 23:57 walaowey: i just download your map lol
2015-08-13 23:58 walaowey: oo..
2015-08-13 23:58 walaowey: now i know why
2015-08-13 23:58 walaowey: its the hitsound of whistle,.. 
2015-08-13 23:58 Lasse: ?
2015-08-13 23:59 walaowey: y dont u try use soft hitsound?
2015-08-13 23:59 Lasse: i'll do that
2015-08-13 23:59 walaowey: try to ctrl+q the sliderhead
2015-08-13 23:59 walaowey: change it back to auto
2015-08-13 23:59 walaowey: the whistle sound is quite annoying
2015-08-14 00:01 Lasse: I added the normal hitwhistle from my skin
2015-08-14 00:01 Lasse: betetr now
2015-08-14 00:01 Lasse: better
2015-08-14 00:01 walaowey: kk..
2015-08-14 00:01 walaowey: for hitsound, i usually add claps every 2nd and 4th white ticks
2015-08-14 00:01 walaowey: try it out..its better
2015-08-14 00:02 walaowey: 00:13:687 (4) - like this, its on the 2nd white tick, replace the whistle with claps
2015-08-14 00:02 walaowey: 00:14:318 (4) - the 4th tick, replace the whistle with claps too
2015-08-14 00:03 walaowey: and so on, try to place claps on 2nd and 4th white ticks
2015-08-14 00:03 Lasse: i'll do that and use a custom hitclap too
2015-08-14 00:03 Lasse: soft
2015-08-14 00:04 walaowey: and finish is usually place on the Big white ticks, but sometimes depends on the song too
2015-08-14 00:04 walaowey: oo..
2015-08-14 00:04 walaowey: want me to help hitsound it? , u can try to use it as reference
2015-08-14 00:04 Lasse: i have most of them on white ticks
2015-08-14 00:04 Lasse: but some might be where tehy shouldnt
2015-08-14 00:04 walaowey: yes, some of them are not suitable
2015-08-14 00:05 walaowey: 00:19:055 (1) - like this, the claps is not suitable to be here
2015-08-14 00:05 walaowey: 00:18:740 (4) - its suppose to be here
2015-08-14 00:06 Lasse: i'm reworking those parts right now with the claps on 2nd/wth thing
2015-08-14 00:06 Lasse: 3th
2015-08-14 00:07 Lasse: 4th
2015-08-14 00:07 Lasse: wtf
2015-08-14 00:07 Lasse: typing is hard
2015-08-14 00:07 walaowey: loll
2015-08-14 00:07 walaowey: haha
2015-08-14 00:07 walaowey: btw, the chorus hitsound is quite mess up too
2015-08-14 00:07 walaowey: u can try to apply the 2nd/4th beats thing
2015-08-14 00:07 walaowey: its useful in most map
2015-08-14 00:10 walaowey: I'll try to hitsound it in a new diff, try to take a look later
2015-08-14 00:11 walaowey: oh ya, u can add silent slider slide too
2015-08-14 00:14 walaowey: 00:32:161 (1,2) - swap NC?
2015-08-14 00:16 Lasse: i thought about that, but it messes up the star and the vocals it's mapped to start on the red tick :/
2015-08-14 00:17 walaowey: mm, then just wait for more modders 
2015-08-14 00:17 walaowey: see what they say about it
2015-08-14 00:18 Lasse: the diff has like 10+ mods already, so it seems to be fine
2015-08-14 00:19 Lasse: i'm adding custom drum sounds to while I'm at it
2015-08-14 00:20 walaowey: oo..ok
2015-08-14 00:20 walaowey: I'll just add soft (whistle,claps,finish)
2015-08-14 00:20 walaowey: try to look at it
2015-08-14 00:30 walaowey: mm
2015-08-14 00:31 walaowey: i hitsound it using your diff
2015-08-14 00:31 walaowey: try it out
2015-08-14 00:31 walaowey: [http://puu.sh/jAdFp/8bed59e52b.txt here]
2015-08-14 00:32 walaowey: thats all from me, xD
2015-08-14 00:32 walaowey: if you have any questions about hitsounding u can find me anytime
2015-08-14 00:32 Lasse: thanks, i'll check it in a sec :)
2015-08-14 00:32 walaowey: i'll be glad to help
2015-08-14 00:33 Lasse: if you need sth modded just link me and i'll check it later
2015-08-14 00:33 walaowey: nvm, xD
2015-08-14 00:33 walaowey: its fine
2015-08-14 00:34 walaowey: I just help out bcoz i have nothing to do xDD
2015-08-14 00:38 Lasse: look good, i'll just make it drum hitsounds on the few parts it's mapped to them
2015-08-14 00:38 Lasse: for the drum streams
2015-08-14 00:38 walaowey: yeah, 
2015-08-14 00:38 walaowey: you can copy the hitsounds to your other diff too if u want
2015-08-14 00:38 walaowey: there's a software to copy hitsound
2015-08-14 00:39 Lasse: i know about that, i'll do that afterwards
2015-08-14 00:39 walaowey: ok :)
2015-08-14 00:40 walaowey: u can always pm me if u have any hitsound problems
2015-08-14 00:40 walaowey: I'll be glad to help u out xD
2015-08-14 01:17 Lasse: you could post the chatlog in the thread if you want. I applied the sounds to all diffs (except the gd, that's avishay's job) and changed the drum parts a bit for the lower ones
2015-08-14 01:17 walaowey: oo..kk
2015-08-14 01:17 walaowey: will post in later
2015-08-14 01:18 Lasse: k

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2015-08-14T00:41:44+00:00

Hi! M4M from your queue
Just suggestions, feel free to ignore xd

[Hard]
00:26:634 (4,1) - better blanket
00:46:371 (2,3) - ^
00:52:213 (4,5) - ^
01:09:897 (4,1) - DS maybe?

[Light Insane]
00:03:740 (1,1) - maybe higher DS
00:07:371 (5,1) - DS
00:09:266 - & 00:09:424 - I think here you should place some notes because of music
00:19:371 (5,1) - DS
00:43:055 (5,1) - ^
00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 4 notes should have less distance to each other and these 00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - to be more separated
00:59:792 (4,1) - DS

[Insane]
00:26:003 (1) - maybe a blanket with (5)
00:43:371 (4,1) - unstack should be better imo.
00:51:740 - I think you're missing a note here.
00:55:055 (1,2,3) - Don't know if this was on purpose, but you could make a better blanket here.
01:01:055 (9) - Maybe replace with a slider because it feels empty 01:01:213 - here.
01:07:371 (3,4) - Maybe try to do the same as 01:06:740 (4,5) - here.
01:07:687 (1,2,3) - same as before, you could improve this blanket.
01:09:424 - Insert a note here? Sounds/plays better imo.
01:10:055 (3) - Just my opinion, but you could unstack this cause I miss-read it when playing
01:12:582 (8,1) - stack
01:15:266 (1,2,3) - You can make this pattern better I think.
01:16:529 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make this jumps a little bit higher since all the other notes have higher jumps

[A's Pace]
00:14:792 (2,3) - Try to have the same distance like in 00:15:424 (5,6) - here. Also you can rotate (3) in 36° for better flow.
00:17:318 (6,1) - ds maybe?
00:22:371 (2,3) - ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - are these fine so?
00:52:529 (3,4) - unstack
01:00:739 (1,2) - maybe unstack?
01:09:582 (1,2) - ^
01:27:740 (1) - 0,5x SV is way too slow, consider 0,7x

Good luck!

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2015-08-14T02:34:53+00:00

[Light Insane]
00:04:845 (5) - fix DS from previous note
00:48:897 (2) - Non-audible almost
01:05:950 (1) - please put a triple here, not replacing the slider but rather 1,2 slider/
01:10:845 (1,2,3,4) - Put closer together + the angle change from 2 to 3 is quite large. Please nerf.

[Insane]
00:53:792 (1) - Why SV change?
01:05:161 (1,2,3) - Could you make these face closer to each other?
01:11:161 (1) - Change position, too close.
01:17:476 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Music theory is not good with this. Change to 1,2 1234
01:27:740 (3) - Slower SV please?

[A's Pace]
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - lol this is hard to play
01:27:424 (1) - Make this point to the next note.

Lasse

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Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-14T11:43:08+00:00

Osuology wrote:
[Light Insane]
00:04:845 (5) - fix DS from previous note fixed
00:48:897 (2) - Non-audible almost huh, the insturmental is audible enough here and thereare vocals too
01:05:950 (1) - please put a triple here, not replacing the slider but rather 1,2 slider/ k
01:10:845 (1,2,3,4) - Put closer together + the angle change from 2 to 3 is quite large. Please nerf. I changed it a little bit, but those are kicksliders and can be played like singletaps with low spacing while still fitting to the drumroll withouth the difficulty of another stream (I think there are enough for a light insane already, especially considering this is 190bpm)

[Insane]
00:53:792 (1) - Why SV change? Having 1.00 for such a long time gets kinda boring, especially on a 5* Insane, also the first sliders with new sv are wobbly which makes it actually quite easy to understand. + the change x1.50 isn't evne that big considering the base SV is only 1.6 + there are only 6 sliders before the kiai which is completely 1.5

And I think it actually fits quite well, especially after those "speeding up" repeat sliders

01:05:161 (1,2,3) - Could you make these face closer to each other? but muh kicksliders. That part can be SSd by just playing them like singletaps with low spacing while fittign the fast vocals better. Seems fine
01:11:161 (1) - Change position, too close. same spacing as the combo before. But I removed the nc
01:17:476 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Music theory is not good with this. Change to 1,2 1234 I reworked that part to 1-2, 1-2, 1-2 to fit hte vocals
01:27:740 (3) - Slower SV please? k

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-14T12:14:40+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue
Just suggestions, feel free to ignore xd

[A's Pace]
00:14:792 (2,3) - Try to have the same distance like in 00:15:424 (5,6) - here. Also you can rotate (3) in 36° for better flow. I like the 36 degrees rotation.
00:17:318 (6,1) - ds maybe? Nah, like it this way.
00:22:371 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - are these fine so? Yeah, it is playable.
00:52:529 (3,4) - unstack -> http://i.imgur.com/mfp7ts8.gif
01:00:739 (1,2) - maybe unstack? Slightly changed.
01:09:582 (1,2) - ^ But why?
01:27:740 (1) - 0,5x SV is way too slow, consider 0,7x I think 0.5 is reasonable too.

Good luck!

Osuology wrote:
[A's Pace]
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - lol this is hard to play I think it is fine tho..
01:27:424 (1) - Make this point to the next note. Made some sort of replacements.

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Thank you.

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-14T13:02:01+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue
Just suggestions, feel free to ignore xd

[Hard]
00:26:634 (4,1) - better blanket done
00:46:371 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:52:213 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:09:897 (4,1) - DS maybe? nah, ruins the pattern

[Light Insane]
00:03:740 (1,1) - maybe higher DS nah, ruins blanket and ds after is around the same too
00:07:371 (5,1) - DS inmcreased distance a bit
00:09:266 - & 00:09:424 - I think here you should place some notes because of music it fits the drums just fine
00:19:371 (5,1) - DS nc is enough, and it would ruin the star and the whole partt after because of the placement
00:43:055 (5,1) - ^ would mess with patterns and flow afterewwards
00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 4 notes should have less distance to each other and these 00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - to be more separated reworked that part
00:59:792 (4,1) - DS no ds, but I incresed the distance a bit

[Insane]
00:26:003 (1) - maybe a blanket with (5) no, ruins whole pattern + blanket after that
00:43:371 (4,1) - unstack should be better imo. plays fine, is not hard to read etc.
00:51:740 - I think you're missing a note here. fixed
00:55:055 (1,2,3) - Don't know if this was on purpose, but you could make a better blanket here. fixed
01:01:055 (9) - Maybe replace with a slider because it feels empty 01:01:213 - here. no, singletap here emphasizes the music much better
01:07:371 (3,4) - Maybe try to do the same as 01:06:740 (4,5) - here. nah, that would be boring and it fits the music anyways
01:07:687 (1,2,3) - same as before, you could improve this blanket. done
01:09:424 - Insert a note here? Sounds/plays better imo. no, woulld ruin the pattern and it fits the vocals nicely right now
01:10:055 (3) - Just my opinion, but you could unstack this cause I miss-read it when playing nah, it's fine right now, the reading required to play the map is low enough right now, espcecially with the high ar. It's a little bit harder to read, but rewarding to hit pattern that fits the vocals
01:12:582 (8,1) - stack I moved it a bit, but auto stacking would look ugly here
01:15:266 (1,2,3) - You can make this pattern better I think. done
01:16:529 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make this jumps a little bit higher since all the other notes have higher jumps increased it a bit

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-08-15T09:05:22+00:00

[A's Pace]

00:16:213 (2) - ctrl+g, better for flow
00:28:213 (1) - imo decelerated too urgent
01:21:266 (1) - ^, it look like 1/4 slider
00:31:687 (1) - i think this slow down is unnecessary
00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - are you sure this snapping?
00:53:003 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this rhythm is better imo
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[Insane]

00:52:845 (1,2,3) - better 1/2 slider
00:53:792 - speed up is unnecessary i think
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - same ds between this 4 note?
00:58:529 (1,2) - stack more fit here
01:00:266 (2,3) - ctrl+g to make better flow
01:00:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm should be like this
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01:11:003 (7,8) - ds?

good luck

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-15T11:52:37+00:00

Rizia wrote:
[A's Pace]
00:16:213 (2) - ctrl+g, better for flow The pattern is like this on purpose
00:28:213 (1) - imo decelerated too urgent I think that's fine, follows the vocals really nicely.
01:21:266 (1) - ^, it look like 1/4 slider Actually here it is really extreme and super misleading, changed.
00:31:687 (1) - i think this slow down is unnecessary Goes really nicely with the vocals.
00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - are you sure this snapping? Yeah, I've seen skystar getting maps ranked with worse stuff, it plays nicely and emphasizes stuff well.
00:53:003 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this rhythm is better imo Nice, I like it, changed
SPOILER

good luck

TY

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Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-15T13:31:03+00:00

Rizia wrote:
[Insane]
00:52:845 (1,2,3) - better 1/2 slider there are lots of 1/2 sliders before and after so I won't make it only 1/2 sliders. But I changed it to a combination of 1/2, singletap and a triplet
00:53:792 - speed up is unnecessary i think seems fair, I removed the 1.5x completely and made the 3 wobbly/curvy ones 1.25x since that feels better on them and the ones afterwards 1.0x
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - same ds between this 4 note? Nah, I think the way it is right now (increasing ds) fits the music very well and is a good way to lead into the build-up part before the kiai time. Changing those also would have 0 impact on readability or difficulty since they are so far apart in time, which also only ever makes two of them visible at the same time.
00:58:529 (1,2) - stack more fit here ok
01:00:266 (2,3) - ctrl+g to make better flow applied
01:00:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm should be like this made it like that BUT I didn't put the 10 there, instead I made 9 (now 5 due to nc) a slider as that seems to fit the music better
01:11:003 (7,8) - ds? fixed

good luck

thanks

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-17T00:52:15+00:00

I noticed some very minor issues with some of the hitsounds (a very minimal delay) and fixed them, so pls donwnload the set again, thanks

Also nerfed that one spaced triple on the Insane (00:20:476 (2,3,4) - ) and fixed some minor blankets erors on the Hard

NewPlayer

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Joined April 2014

NewPlayer 2015-08-19T22:05:34+00:00

Hi! M4M from your queue:

[Easy]

00:10:845 (1) - maybe move it left for better flow and looking, something like this: http://puu.sh/jHl7e/e115125362.jpg, http://puu.sh/jHl8T/612c50c448.jpg. If you apply, you should make some changes on the next objects though
00:21:266 (1) - there are strong notes on downbeats so maybe sliders here? They follows both beats and vocals. Timeline: http://puu.sh/jHlBS/585ee01315.jpg

00:23:476 (1,2,3) - maybe make this more round. Example: http://puu.sh/jHqiC/678c5fa450.jpg. Also you can copy-paste this code into .osu to see how it changes:

SPOILER

196,112,23476,6,0,P|116:96|68:164,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,264,24740,6,0,P|124:319|198:301,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,224,26003,6,0,P|328:168|288:92,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:31:055 (3) - Ctrl+J, then copy-paste and flip it to replace 00:32:318 (4): http://puu.sh/jHmdV/62147181fe.jpg. If you apply, you can try something like this: http://puu.sh/jHmkG/8e85a347fb.jpg
00:36:423 (1) - same as 00:21:266 (1)
00:48:740 (1) - don't really like how it looks, try straight slider: http://puu.sh/jHmBy/d259c99867.jpg
00:50:003 (3) - if you apply previous suggestion, make it symmetrical to ^: http://puu.sh/jHmHu/a9316e6c00.jpg
00:55:055 (3,4) - try to Ctrl+G and Ctrl+J (1,2): http://puu.sh/jHmRY/cb755a4c93.jpg
01:00:108 (3,1) - better blanket. You can remove all white anchors of (3) except one: http://puu.sh/jHn3I/0da86234e7.jpg
01:03:897 (4) - maybe make white middle point to red so the wave looks better
01:17:792 (3) - make it straight slider as 01:20:318 (3) or just copy-paste 01:20:318 (3) so they will be parallel: http://puu.sh/jHnku/a0d94183dd.jpg (changed flow of (1,2) a bit)
01:21:898 (2,3) - idk about their shapes. That's ok though

[Normal]

00:03:266 (2) - move it up for better flow: http://puu.sh/jHntO/f9fe8b0e06.jpg
00:04:371 (4) and forwards - don't really like rhythm here, especially that pause between 00:05:792 (2,3). My suggestion: http://puu.sh/jHo6U/3ad946f33e.jpg (from 00:04:055 (3) to 00:09:108 (1))
00:16:529 (2) - copy-paste and flip (1): http://puu.sh/jHoh9/9372439755.jpg
00:17:792 (4,1) - better blanket
00:28:213 (5) - I think you can stack it with (3)
00:36:739 (2) - copy-paste (1) (or (2), as you like). same as 00:16:529 (2)
00:37:371 (3,4) - idk about overlaps in Normal, maybe they're fine
00:41:161 (1,2) - try to make it 1/1 rhythm, don't see any point for doing it that way
00:44:950 (1,2,3) - try to copy-paste 00:43:687 (1,2,3) and flip it hor. and vert. so it feels as repeating rhythm
00:47:476 (4) - move left a bit
00:51:897 (3) - move right a bit for better flow
00:52:529 (4) - suggesting that: http://puu.sh/jHoVw/a07d7fb13a.jpg or that: http://puu.sh/jHoWA/b07738ace9.jpg
01:13:055 (5) - try to copy-paste and flip (2)
01:16:529 (2) - maybe move it next to the end of (1) so newer players could read it better: http://puu.sh/jHp7t/d296842917.jpg
01:23:160 (3,4) - make it as (1,2) - move (4) left to keep the same distance between (2,4) as between (1,3)

[Hard]

00:01:529 (1,2) - try to do it that way: http://puu.sh/jHpDp/2211735312.jpg
00:02:634 (1,2) - suggesting to stack it properly
00:07:687 (1,2) - ^
00:08:318 (4,5) - ^
00:08:950 (1,2) - ^
00:09:582 (4,5) - ^
00:10:213 (1,2) - ^
^that part since 00:07:687 (1) plays weird with those unstacks as for me. It may be confusing to players, idk
00:38:003 (1,2) - copy-paste those 00:37:371 (1,2) to make them parallel
01:02:003 (4) - move it up for better flow
01:02:634 (1,2) - rotate (2) a bit: http://puu.sh/jHpXK/51b232dc43.jpg
01:09:897 (4,1) - why is spacing changes? There's vocals on the red tick so it may be confusing I think

Won't write about harder diffs since I'm not very experienced modder and can't find any notable issues here. Good luck!

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-20T00:07:10+00:00

NewPlayer wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue:

[Easy]
00:10:845 (1) - maybe move it left for better flow changed the slider before instead
00:21:266 (1) - there are strong notes on downbeats so maybe sliders here? I like focusing completely on the vocals here
00:23:476 (1,2,3) - maybe make this more round. done
00:31:055 (3) - changed a bit and fixed blankets
00:36:423 (1) - same as 00:21:266 (1) again, I prefer emphasizing the vocals and keeping it a bit easier
00:48:740 (1) - don't really like how it looks, try straight slider I like how it looks
00:50:003 (3) - if you apply previous suggestion, make it symmetrical to ^^
00:55:055 (3,4) - try to Ctrl+G and Ctrl+J (1,2) done
01:00:108 (3,1) - better blanket. it's fine right now, hard to make it any better while still keeping consistent ds changed the slider afterwards a little bit though
01:03:897 (4) - maybe make white middle point to red so the wave looks better that slider looks fine, I don't like using red anchors if I don't absolutely have to
01:17:792 (3) - make it straight slider as 01:20:318 (3) done
01:21:898 (2,3) - idk about their shapes. That's ok though well, they are actually really ugly, changed

[Normal]
00:03:266 (2) - move it up for better flow done
00:04:371 (4) and forwards - not applied, but changed the rythm on the second of this part a bit to be consistent with the one before
00:16:529 (2) - copy-paste and flip (1) done
00:17:792 (4,1) - better blanket done
00:28:213 (5) - I think you can stack it with (3) would mess up ds of the following part of which is liek the current positioning very much. also it's a bit easier to read like this, which is good for a normal diff
00:36:739 (2) - copy-paste (1) (or (2), as you like). same as 00:16:529 (2) done
00:37:371 (3,4) - idk about overlaps in Normal, maybe they're fine distance snapped them
00:41:161 (1,2) - try to make it 1/1 rhythm, don't see any point for doing it that way It fits the vocals and brings little variety
00:44:950 (1,2,3) - try to copy-paste 00:43:687 (1,2,3) and flip it hor. and vert. so it feels as repeating rhythm I don't feel like using hte exact same pattern three times in a row, it just gets boring at that point
00:47:476 (4) - move left a bit done
00:51:897 (3) - move right a bit for better flow flows fine as is
00:52:529 (4) - suggesting that: I like having this mapped as one slider to the vocal, it also serves as little "pause" since the part after is one of the hardest
01:13:055 (5) - try to copy-paste and flip (2) done
01:16:529 (2) - maybe move it next to the end of (1) so newer players could read it better: done
01:23:160 (3,4) - make it as (1,2) - done

[Hard]
00:01:529 (1,2) - try to do it that way:would make the next one weird
00:02:634 (1,2) - suggesting to stack it properly
00:07:687 (1,2) - ^
00:08:318 (4,5) - ^
00:08:950 (1,2) - ^
00:09:582 (4,5) - ^
00:10:213 (1,2) - ^
they are fine like that, autostacking makes them look really bad since they are always stacked in the same direction
^that part since 00:07:687 (1) plays weird with those unstacks as for me. It may be confusing to players, idk ^^
00:38:003 (1,2) - copy-paste those 00:37:371 (1,2) to make them parallel done
01:02:003 (4) - move it up for better flow done
01:02:634 (1,2) - rotate (2) a bit: no, but I improved the blanket a bit
01:09:897 (4,1) - why is spacing changes? There's vocals on the red tick so it may be confusing I think added another note here, fits the vocals well and fixes the spacing without ruining the nice pattern afterwards

Won't write about harder diffs since I'm not very experienced modder and can't find any notable issues here. Good luck!

thanks for for the thorough mod

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2015-08-21T09:48:42+00:00

mod4mod more like mod4squad am i right

hahahahahahhaahhaha

Extra:
00:00:740 (1,2) - Man you know what I love? Trying to listen to sound effects that aren't part of the music when no music has been established yet. I'd literally just remove these. Especially since you have the 2nd one starting on an awkward 1/3 tick. It doesn't play well at all.
00:01:529 (1,2,3) - The grouping is really weird here, since it doesn't go with the music. This grouping would make more sense ( http://puu.sh/jJ3oR/76fee29ec1.jpg ). Although personally if it were me, I'd make (2) into 2 notes since the words seem independent enough that they don't need to be linked by a slider. It's also easier to make patterns with 3 notes and 2 sliders than 1 note and 3 sliders.
00:17:161 (5,6) - Like if you're going to do this at least have it go with SOMETHING in the music. Or hitsound it so it has PURPOSE. Because right now it just looks overmapped, and you NEVER want to overmap. My ears are a little clogged atm but I hear nothing indication the neccessity for it (people going ooh isn't a reason for this.)
00:17:792 (2,3) - Hitsound this so it actually follows the drums that you're following.
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These hitsounds are significantly louder than the others and it frightens me a little bit. Go into audacity and even out all of the volumes
00:26:318 (2) - You're gonna wanna avoid overlaps like this. Generally the only time you're gonna wanna overlap is if you can do so while making the map still look clean, and while not overlapping on any of the slider heads. And you just overlapped the slider heads

00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - That sound effect is not definite enough to warrant being mapped like this. Delete pls
01:14:950 (4) - Once again like I can barely see the slider. Please make the map not so cramped. You have so much room to make nice stuff, don't resort to this.

aaaaaa. A lot of this seems overmapped. There are some decent ideas in here but a lot of times it just feels overwhelming. Also, the hitsounding is really off. Follow the drums of the map, don't just have random "BRRNGS" on some of the white ticks.

Insane:
00:02:318 (5) - try again james
00:41:792 (1) - This spacing makes no sense because you have jumps randomly followed by a super close slider
00:46:687 (3) - I literally miss this every time I play it because it's not really super natural to play, and I'm already looking past it, because I need to look ahead to see where I need to throw my cursor. I'm not looking back at (1 to see the random not there.
01:06:740 (4,5) - why

So I didn't say many specifics because I don't want to overload with things but the general issues that come up in this map is that your spacing is really sort of all over the place. And I understand that insanes are insanes and people have the belief that you have to turn off distance snap when mapping an insane but it's generally at least consistent in some way. Take a look at ranked insanes, and see that even though they have lots of jumps, there is a consistent idea of where home plate is. Also, you should have meaning to your patterns. Right now they seem all over the place, and not always with the music.

Light:
00:05:161 (1) - lower this a little bit so the previous slider goes straight into it.
00:14:318 (6) - don't cramp up sliders like this. Sliders don't like to be crammed, they like to be open and pretty owo.

A lot of issues in this diff are similar to the previous diffs, so I didn't go into them too much.

Hard:
00:02:634 (1,2) - If you're going to do your stacks like this, keep it conisstent throughout the diff. Otherwise, it looks like a mistake owo. Same goes for the next one. Either choose slight anti-jumps or stacks.
00:05:634 (3) - So what's your spacing. How do I tell that this is different from the previous notes without having to stare down the hitcircle (Which is never a good thing to do in maps
00:18:424 (1) - ^. An anti-jump really doesn't work as well as you think it does here.
00:53:161 (5) - SPACING MY DEAR SIR LIKE this would be the perfect time for some spaced out little isolated notes but you do this instead and it's making me sad.
01:25:371 (1) - hitsound pls?

Normal:
01:25:529 (1) - same as hard

I'm questioning this spread because this map is super simplistic while hard is pretty much a similar note density to insane

So most things are fine, but the higher diffs could use a lot of work in terms of making sure that the patterns aren't sporadic. Also, you should consider working on the hitsounding following the drumset in the background. Right now it sounds random

yay

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-21T12:10:24+00:00

Reditum wrote:
mod4mod more like mod4squad am i right

Insane:
00:02:318 (5) - try again james kk, remapped a little
00:41:792 (1) - This spacing makes no sense because you have jumps randomly followed by a super close slider changed and also worked a pit on the part after that
00:46:687 (3) - I literally miss this every time I play it because it's not really super natural to play, and I'm already looking past it, because I need to look ahead to see where I need to throw my cursor. I'm not looking back at (1 to see the random not there. You're supposed to miss there :v) nah, I'm kidding obviously, changed that part
01:06:740 (4,5) - why made it a slider instead

So I didn't say many specifics because I don't want to overload with things but the general issues that come up in this map is that your spacing is really sort of all over the place. And I understand that insanes are insanes and people have the belief that you have to turn off distance snap when mapping an insane but it's generally at least consistent in some way. Take a look at ranked insanes, and see that even though they have lots of jumps, there is a consistent idea of where home plate is. Also, you should have meaning to your patterns. Right now they seem all over the place, and not always with the music.
mmmm, there are many parts with consistent spacing, for example the longer jump/singletap sequences in the beginning are all 1.3x
And stuff like this 00:10:845 (1,2,1,2) - really helps the buildup imo, followed by an anti-jump sequence that goes well with the vocals 00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) -

Then this part 00:13:371 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - => 1.5x jump, followed by a 0.5x triple, followed by a 1.85-2.0 jump to the next with the same spacing
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - this is 1.5x-2.0x.-repeating, also like 00:17:476 (2,3) - they are 1 whole beat apart, so a little spacing change doesn't really change anything (besides ruining patterns/blankets)

00:18:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is like before, but this time the spacing of the triples increases every combo
00:23:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2.0x snapped
00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - decreases spacing until stack then increases by same amount
00:26:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - only 2 is off in this combo, but only by 0.1 and it makes for a better pattern
00:28:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok, this is inconsistent, but it's a sacrifice for that slider overlap/stack and the blankets
00:29:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - all 1.5x again
00:31:055 (1,2,3) - 2.1x jump to this combo, which is consistent at 2.0x in itself
00:32:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1.5x to this, which then becomes a ~3.5x star, emphasizing the strong vocals + beat, followed by an antijump/stack
00:32:950 (6,1) - close since it's the only 3/4 slider on the map, makes it better to play
00:34:213 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 2.5x +/- 0.05
00:37:371 (1,2,1,2) - increasing spacing for fits really well here I think
00:38:634 (1,2,3,4) - changed a bit
00:39:266 (1,2,3,4) - 2x anti jump seems fitting here
00:39:897 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is 2.0x except one jump that is 2.3x but it makes the whole thing look better
00:43:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - only the ds of 6 is lower, but it makes the pattern look better
00:44:950 (1,2,3) - changed a bit
- remade most of the part between anyways -
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - second combo has higher spacing, firs well with the changing sound of the drumroll
00:48:740 (1,2,3,4) - k this is a bit incosistent, but it makes some of the stacks possible/better, for example having 00:49:371 (4) - blanketed by 00:50:003 (3) -
00:49:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.9x for singletaps, 1.8x for sliders, looks better that way
00:50:950 (1,2,3,4) - consistent
00:51:897 (1,2,3) - 3 incosistent, makes a better looking blanket
00:52:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - lowered ds for the triple
00:53:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - all 1.7x
2.1x gap to 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - this is all 1.7x again
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - increasing for buildup
00:58:529 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - stack into jump, fits well here I think
01:00:108 (1,2,3,4) - all 2.1
01:00:582 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - lkittle change into 1.3x drumroll stream
01:01:371 (1,2,3,4) - all 1.2
1.4x to NC => 01:02:003 (1,2,3) - all 1.2 again
1.4x to NC which is all 1.4 01:02:634 (1,2,3,4) -
1.25x to 1.35 combo with antijump 01:03:266 (1,2,3,4) -
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4) - incosistent by ~0.1 but makes the sldierblnaket pattern better
01:05:161 (1,2,3,4) - same distance between all sliderstarts
01:05:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - consisetnt in combos, little changes between
01:08:950 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - little increasing sv+jump pattern followed by consistent spacing
01:11:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is inconsitent, but it still plays well and no need to use DS all the time
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - bit relaxing 0.7x pattern
01:15:266 (1,2,1,2) - bit increasinf between combos
01:16:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - incosistency for a nice bblanket and flow is decent too
01:17:476 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - increasing ds nc pattern
01:20:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - antijump pattern that fits well here
01:21:108 (1,2,3) - 1.1x triple
01:21:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all 1.1x except a bit reduced for the triple
01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^same with 1.2x
01:24:108 (1,2,3,4) - all 1.7
01:25:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - increasing spacing nc jumps fit well here
01:27:424 (1,2,3) - low ds makes it much less likely to break on the decellerated slider

So there actually it lots of reasoning and consitency behind the ds, even if it might not look like it at first glance

Also that difff is barely still an Insane and more Extra level, I didn't add the Light Insane for no reason

Light:
00:05:161 (1) - lower this a little bit so the previous slider goes straight into it. would look meh, instead changed the slider before for the same effect without touching the pattern afterwards
00:14:318 (6) - don't cramp up sliders like this. Sliders don't like to be crammed, they like to be open and pretty owo. I think that pattern is fine here

A lot of issues in this diff are similar to the previous diffs, so I didn't go into them too much.
I wrote a whole paragraph about my ds reasoning in this post already

Hard:
00:02:634 (1,2) - If you're going to do your stacks like this, keep it conisstent throughout the diff. Otherwise, it looks like a mistake owo. Same goes for the next one. Either choose slight anti-jumps or stacks.
I looked through all of them and made them all as 0.1x as possible, autostacking the would look really bad here
00:05:634 (3) - So what's your spacing. How do I tell that this is different from the previous notes without having to stare down the hitcircle (Which is never a good thing to do in maps fixed
00:18:424 (1) - ^. An anti-jump really doesn't work as well as you think it does here. I really liked that blanket, but you're right, fixed
00:53:161 (5) - SPACING MY DEAR SIR LIKE this would be the perfect time for some spaced out little isolated notes but you do this instead and it's making me sad. Put some cross screen stars here
nah, I think it is fine as it is, I want to keep it a hard after all and it fits as is
01:25:371 (1) - hitsound pls? I suppose you mean the end of the spinner? Sure

Normal:
01:25:529 (1) - same as hard ^

I'm questioning this spread because this map is super simplistic while hard is pretty much a similar note density to insane
It should be okay since there are two easier diffs, even if there is a 1.45 gap between normal - hard

So most things are fine, but the higher diffs could use a lot of work in terms of making sure that the patterns aren't sporadic.

Also, you should consider working on the hitsounding following the drumset in the background. Right now it sounds random
Huh, the hitsounding is simple, but consistent,
Focusing it mostly on drums would'nt fit imo since it's mostly mapped to vocals and other instruments

yay

thanks for the mod

I hope you can understand the reasoning behind most of the patterns and spacing

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-08-21T14:18:34+00:00

Reditum wrote:
mod4mod more like mod4squad am i right

hahahahahahhaahhaha

Extra:
00:00:740 (1,2) - Man you know what I love? Trying to listen to sound effects that aren't part of the music when no music has been established yet. I'd literally just remove these. Especially since you have the 2nd one starting on an awkward 1/3 tick. It doesn't play well at all. I'll admit the second one is a bit awkward, but I don't really want to remove it, changed to one slider.
00:01:529 (1,2,3) - The grouping is really weird here, since it doesn't go with the music. This grouping would make more sense ( http://puu.sh/jJ3oR/76fee29ec1.jpg ). Although personally if it were me, I'd make (2) into 2 notes since the words seem independent enough that they don't need to be linked by a slider. It's also easier to make patterns with 3 notes and 2 sliders than 1 note and 3 sliders. How come it doesn't go with the music? It follows the vocals just right.
00:17:161 (5,6) - Like if you're going to do this at least have it go with SOMETHING in the music. Or hitsound it so it has PURPOSE. Because right now it just looks overmapped, and you NEVER want to overmap. My ears are a little clogged atm but I hear nothing indication the neccessity for it (people going ooh isn't a reason for this.) ooh.. But I like it with the vocals, and the hitsounds are giving it some purpose, don't they..
00:17:792 (2,3) - Hitsound this so it actually follows the drums that you're following. Ah.. Hitsounding is hard.
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These hitsounds are significantly louder than the others and it frightens me a little bit. Go into audacity and even out all of the volumes I hear them on the same level, but I'll see if there's anything to re-set.
00:26:318 (2) - You're gonna wanna avoid overlaps like this. Generally the only time you're gonna wanna overlap is if you can do so while making the map still look clean, and while not overlapping on any of the slider heads. And you just overlapped the slider heads Generally I'd agree, but on this specific case, this one looks just fine in my opinion :S
00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - That sound effect is not definite enough to warrant being mapped like this. Delete pls I honestly think it goes just fine and I really like the way it plays, added some hitsounds but I won't remove it unless it is completely unranked.
01:14:950 (4) - Once again like I can barely see the slider. Please make the map not so cramped. You have so much room to make nice stuff, don't resort to this. Honestly you'll see it just fine when you play, AR 9.6 is more than enough and I really like the way it plays.

aaaaaa. A lot of this seems overmapped. There are some decent ideas in here but a lot of times it just feels overwhelming. Also, the hitsounding is really off. Follow the drums of the map, don't just have random "BRRNGS" on some of the white ticks.

yay

bbbbb. Oh hey CDFA, I'll go over the hitsounds sometime around, as for the overmapping, some ideas might seem like overmapping but I use whatever suits.

Thank you for your time.

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Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-21T15:48:37+00:00

GD updated
also added a new hitsound for the spinnerend on the easier diffs => download again
+ disabled Widescreen Storyboard to make it consistent throughout the diffs (it was still enabled on Light Insane and A's Pace)

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-21T18:06:31+00:00

Major hitsound update for Easy - Insane, added a new soft-hitnormal and made most those parts that are actually mapped to the drums also sound like that.
DL again pls

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-21T19:12:52+00:00

I just saw that the original BG was 1920:1200 (16:10) and got resized to some really bad resolution, so I made a new one, this time in proper 1366x768 and put it in

=> Download again for the third time today

Boruma

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Boruma 2015-08-21T23:01:15+00:00

Light Insane

00:02:792 (2) - This beat seems alright currently, but it is still out of sync with the instrument in the background. With it's current time placement, it doesn't have a beat in the song to represent it. The strum of the acoustic instrument sounds on the blue tick that's closer to the 1st note of the combo.
00:37:371 (1) - The vocals seem to indicate a slider here, so it feels rather weird to play 2 hit circles when the vocals hold on a syllable for half a measure. Instead of the 1 beat being a hit circle, I'd recommend making it a very short slider that goes from the white tick it's already on to the blue tick in between the original two hit circles.
01:15:897 - In the vocals, there's a slight "yuu" sound here. You could put a transitional combo hit circle here, but since the vocal is really soft at that time, it's not necessarily needed.

Insane

00:20:002 (4) - The object's end isn't snapped according to aimod.
01:15:582 (1) - This beat seems rather far from the previous hit circle. Most of your song had a relatively consistent length for their jump segments, but this one for some reason seems to have a greater difference.

A's Pace

Sorry. I'm not very good when it comes to these really fast difficulties.
00:18:740 (2-5) - It might be better to lessen the distance between the 2 hit circle and the streamed slider. It creates a unity effect with consistent repeating segments.
00:19:371 (6-8) - Just a suggestion based on the previous jumps, but maybe shorten the distance a bit on this one as well?
00:34:055 (2) - This might be hard to play if the user doesn't have a more transparent skin.
00:48:739 (1) - This hit circle seems like an excessive circle within that triple.
00:57:266 (4) - Instead of a regular slider, you may want to make it a back-arrow slider to reflect the monotone vocal that's at this part of the song.

I'm not really good at trying to recognize mistakes in this fast of a difficulty, but I hope that helps a bit.

Overall it's a rather good beatmap set, and rather fun to play.

It's well mapped. Sorry I don't know anything about slider velocity multipliers, so I couldn't really help there.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-21T23:18:35+00:00

Boruma wrote:
Light Insane
00:02:792 (2) - This beat seems alright currently, but it is still out of sync with the instrument in the background. With it's current time placement, it doesn't have a beat in the song to represent it. The strum of the acoustic instrument sounds on the blue tick that's closer to the 1st note of the combo. huh? It's mapped to the drums and perfectly fine
00:37:371 (1) - The vocals seem to indicate a slider here, so it feels rather weird to play 2 hit circles when the vocals hold on a syllable for half a measure. Instead of the 1 beat being a hit circle, I'd recommend making it a very short slider that goes from the white tick it's already on to the blue tick in between the original two hit circles. It's not mapped to the vocals but to the instrumental like the same pattern before
01:15:897 - In the vocals, there's a slight "yuu" sound here. You could put a transitional combo hit circle here, but since the vocal is really soft at that time, it's not necessarily needed. that would feel ratehr overmapped and unnecessary, also I don't really hear anything here that would warrant a circle, at maximum a sliderend

Insane
00:20:002 (4) - The object's end isn't snapped according to aimod. fixed
01:15:582 (1) - This beat seems rather far from the previous hit circle. Most of your song had a relatively consistent length for their jump segments, but this one for some reason seems to have a greater difference.it's only 1.7x, but I changed it a bit

Overall it's a rather good beatmap set, and rather fun to play. It's well mapped. Sorry I don't know anything about slider velocity multipliers, so I couldn't really help there.

thanks for the mod, this was a m4m if I'm right?

Post your map and the diffs you prefer modded here Lasse's Standard Queue - GD/M4M/NM so I know what to mod

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-08-22T03:15:36+00:00

Boruma wrote:
A's Pace
Sorry. I'm not very good when it comes to these really fast difficulties.
00:18:740 (2-5) - It might be better to lessen the distance between the 2 hit circle and the streamed slider. It creates a unity effect with consistent repeating segments. I don't feel like it'll have such an effect, the current pattern is completely fine in all terms so I'l stay with it.
00:19:371 (6-8) - Just a suggestion based on the previous jumps, but maybe shorten the distance a bit on this one as well? I think that the current pattern is fine, no real reason to lower the spcaings.
00:34:055 (2) - This might be hard to play if the user doesn't have a more transparent skin. On slider-end circles are really common all around so I don't think that just this one is a problem.
00:48:739 (1) - This hit circle seems like an excessive circle within that triple. Why? I don't think it is.
00:57:266 (4) - Instead of a regular slider, you may want to make it a back-arrow slider to reflect the monotone vocal that's at this part of the song. It will reflect the vocal better indeed, but I want to emphasize the note at 00:57:582 (5) - , and making it pressable is the way of doing it.

I'm not really good at trying to recognize mistakes in this fast of a difficulty, but I hope that helps a bit.

Overall it's a rather good beatmap set, and rather fun to play. It's well mapped. Sorry I don't know anything about slider velocity multipliers, so I couldn't really help there.

Thank you for your time, try to base your suggestions on problems that you can explain, this way I (or the mapper) will be able to understand you better, at the same time try to understand the mapper and his intentions as well.

@Lasse, you didn't update the map from my last post, I didn't make any changes here so please use the diff from my last comment

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Lasse 2015-08-22T08:10:53+00:00

Avishay wrote:
@Lasse, you didn't update the map from my last post, I didn't make any changes here so please use the diff from my last comment

idk how that happened, thought I copied it. Should be fine now.
For the next time you update your diff please disable "Widescreen Support" since there is no storyboard and it is disabled for all other diffs

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-08-23T00:34:04+00:00

Reworked hitsounding for Easy to Insane a bit (drums where they should be + some minor fixes)

Also made those "tiny antijumps" in the beginning of the Hard autostacks and reworked the other parts of the intro a bit too.
+ fixed (hopefully) all the spacing issues for Easy to Hard

Starfall9908

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Starfall9908 2015-08-27T15:35:53+00:00

M4M from your modding queue

[Easy]

00:24:740 - (1,1) - unneccessary NCs?
00:31:055 (3,1) - double blanket better

[Normal]

00:06:897 (4) - how about copy and paste the note after it?
00:28:529 (1,2,3) - how about make a triangle of these 3 notes? It would be more fun to play
00:39:266 (3,1) - blanket better?
01:11:792 (2,3) - ^
01:16:529 (2) - X: 276 Y: 228

[Hard]

00:01:529 (1,2) - Blanket
00:02:161 (3,1,2) - ^
00:04:055 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - Stack
00:09:582 (4,5,6) - blanket
00:30:582 (5,6) - ^
00:43:687 (1,2,3) - ^

This was all I could find. Good luck with ranking ^u^

FCL

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FCL 2015-08-27T16:31:33+00:00

M4M from your queue

[Easy]

00:09:582 (3) - a slight discrepancy in the DS
00:17:161 (7,1) - hm, blanket?
00:24:740 (1) - not see the point in NC, suggest remove
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to make these patterns in the form of a square
01:20:318 (3) - move on 128;272 for better flow

[Normal]

00:09:582 (2,3) - make them parallel
00:40:529 (3,1) - blanket would be good
00:43:371 (3) - move on 384;252 for stack 00:43:687 (1) -
01:00:740 (2,1) - move 01:01:370 (1) - down a bit for best possible flow

[Hard]

00:38:634 (1,2) - stack
01:20:950 (5,1) - better to avoid such overlap

[Light Insane]

01:12:108 (3,5) - stack
01:23:634 (5,2) - ^

[Insane]

00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move on 260;192 for better blanket

[A's Pace]

00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it's a bit difficult to play
01:15:740 (4) - may be better to abandon the slider? Here it is easy to lose combo

Good luck!

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-27T16:32:06+00:00

nadapan wrote:
M4M from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:24:740 - (1,1) - unneccessary NCs?
00:31:055 (3,1) - double blanket better
[Normal]
00:06:897 (4) - how about copy and paste the note after it?
00:28:529 (1,2,3) - how about make a triangle of these 3 notes? It would be more fun to play
00:39:266 (3,1) - blanket better?
01:11:792 (2,3) - ^
01:16:529 (2) - X: 276 Y: 228 used 229 instead of 228, makes ds perfect
[Hard]
00:01:529 (1,2) - Blanket
00:02:161 (3,1,2) - ^
00:04:055 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - Stack
00:09:582 (4,5,6) - blanket
00:30:582 (5,6) - ^ remapped that part a bit
00:43:687 (1,2,3) - ^

This was all I could find. Good luck with ranking ^u^

no reply => fixed
thanks :')

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-27T16:54:33+00:00

FCL wrote:
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
00:09:582 (3) - a slight discrepancy in the DS huh? It's 0.7x +/- 0.05 cause of tiny grid snap
00:17:161 (7,1) - hm, blanket? changed a little bit, but I don't want to make 7/1 completely identical
00:24:740 (1) - not see the point in NC, suggest remove
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to make these patterns in the form of a square I think it's fine this way, don't need to have geometrical patterns all the time, especially with 1/1 distance
01:20:318 (3) - move on 128;272 for better flowtalking about geometry, I made a triangle here

[Normal]
00:09:582 (2,3) - make them parallel
00:40:529 (3,1) - blanket would be good
00:43:371 (3) - move on 384;252 for stack 00:43:687 (1) -
01:00:740 (2,1) - move 01:01:370 (1) - down a bit for best possible flow

[Hard]
00:38:634 (1,2) - stack dunno if you mean with 00:38:950 (2) - => would be weird to play/read
or with 00:40:371 (2) - which hseems rather pointless
01:20:950 (5,1) - better to avoid such overlap It blankets the start of 5 and the overlap is not visible for long, only other option while keeping the ds would be making it straight which would be worse to read and flow badly

[Light Insane]
01:12:108 (3,5) - stack might look better in the editor but if you look how many beats those aare apart it makes no difference while playing and would be completely pointless
01:23:634 (5,2) - ^ done here cuase time distance is lower

[Insane]
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move on 260;192 for better blanket

Good luck!

thanks for the mod
no comment = applied suggestion

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-27T18:34:58+00:00

FCL wrote:
M4M from your queue

[A's Pace]
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it's a bit difficult to play I disagree, it plays just fine, you can play it like a regular stream with this CS.
01:15:740 (4) - may be better to abandon the slider? Here it is easy to lose combo I honestly don't think it is a problem, this slider is just fine..

Good luck!

Thank you eitherway,

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Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-28T15:44:36+00:00

[General]
All clear

[Easy]

00:28:529 (1,3) - Why not stack them?
00:51:266 (5) - NC, the combo goes on for quite a long time

[Normal]

00:04:529 - It feels really weird you skip this beat with the slider. Even though there is no beat, the vocals here are quite strong
00:07:055 - ^^
00:20:950 (1,2) - It would be better if they'd have the same shape (copy paste (1), then ctrl HJ and move to proper place)
00:49:055 (2,3,1) - These sliders all play weird, as they start on a weak beat and end on a strong one

[Hard]

00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing makes this quite awkward
00:16:529 (2,1) - Antijump feels out of place
00:43:371 (1) - This slider feels really out of place and awkward due to the shape. A regular slider plays better

[L. Insane]

00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern is too cluttered, it's really hard to read
01:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The should be all the same shape. So copy paste (1) then Ctrl > and move it etc.
01:27:740 (3) - You're sinecing the whole slider which is unrankable. Both the Slidertick and sliderbody are muted to an inaudible extent making it unrankable

[Insane]
I can't mod it. It seems to random and really unpolished. TBH, This diff needs a lot of work

[A's Pace]
This diff is great
Well done
I love it
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - Are you sure about 1/3?
Same comment for the latest slider

Good luck!

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-28T16:26:09+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:

[General]
All clear

[Easy]
00:28:529 (1,3) - Why not stack them? they are 8 beats apart and I fell the part after that flows betetr the way it is
00:51:266 (5) - NC, the combo goes on for quite a long time k
[Normal]
00:04:529 - It feels really weird you skip this beat with the slider. Even though there is no beat, the vocals here are quite strong
00:07:055 - ^^
I think those drawn out sliders make for a decent buildup up to 00:08:950 (2) -
00:20:950 (1,2) - It would be better if they'd have the same shape (copy paste (1), then ctrl HJ and move to proper place) done
00:49:055 (2,3,1) - These sliders all play weird, as they start on a weak beat and end on a strong one remapped a bit
[Hard]
00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing makes this quite awkward made this 1.0x like the part before
00:16:529 (2,1) - Antijump feels out of place made 1.0x
00:43:371 (1) - This slider feels really out of place and awkward due to the shape. A regular slider plays better changed shape and removed nc
[L. Insane]
00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern is too cluttered, it's really hard to read increased spacing a bit
01:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The should be all the same shape. So copy paste (1) then Ctrl > and move it etc. changed that part to srtraight sliders, plays better anyways
01:27:740 (3) - You're sinecing the whole slider which is unrankable. Both the Slidertick and sliderbody are muted to an inaudible extent making it unrankable fixed
[Insane]
I can't mod it. It seems to random and really unpolished. TBH, This diff needs a lot of work
fixed the unrankable audio of the last slider here too, will do some more work on that diff soon

[A's Pace]
This diff is great
Well done
I love it
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - Are you sure about 1/3?
Same comment for the latest slider

Good luck!

thanks for the mod

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-28T20:20:34+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:

[A's Pace]
This diff is great
Well done
I love it
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - Are you sure about 1/3?
Same comment for the latest slider

Good luck!

Thanks, and yes I am sure about both of those for now. The 1/3 are going nicely in the in-between "refreshing" state, and I think the slider is just fine.

P.S Your name reminds me something, but I can't recall what and why

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-08-28T21:49:26+00:00

M4M Queue

[General]

Better set Preview Point
Audio Lead-In : Hard , Insane , Light Insane : +471 ms.

[Hard]
- Why make a simple slider with many point ? example 00:23:476 (1,3,1)
1. 00:04:371 (2,1,2) - stack well
2. 00:14:003 (3,4,5) - better make same placement pattern like 00:12:266 (1,2,3) -
  00:14:003 (3) - 480|116
  00:14:318 (5) - 328|144
3. 00:14:634 (1) - make this slide same like 00:13:371 (1) - for better.
4. 00:14:634 (1,2) - same spacing like 00:13:371 (1,2) - maybe move 00:14:950 (2) - 132|168 or better placement like that
5. 00:16:529 (2) - Ctrl+G and move to 304|128 for better
6. 00:17:634 - better add a not here
7. 00:23:476 (1) - move this to 384|96 for consistency blanket like 00:23:950 (2,3,4,1)
8. 00:27:740 (4) - move 1 grid (tiny) right - 172|88 . why? because the spacing on 00:27:740 (4,5) - is changing.
9. 00:32:476 (5) - NC here
10. 01:07:687 (3,4) - change to slider better
11. 01:17:003 (3,1) - sounds weird over here if you make to slider
12. For placement it's okay , but need for improvement , Nice Mapset
[Light Insane]
1. 00:12:108 (1) - spinner stop on 00:13:055 - better
2. 00:23:397 (9) - remove
3. 00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - ups .. very weird.. don't like this.. really
4. 00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why need change spacing this? better make same spacing like 00:30:740 (4,1)
5. 00:31:687 (3,1) - stack
6. 00:35:161 (3) - 336|104 better
7. 00:48:424 (5) - no need 2 repeated I think, better make that into 1 repeat it's okay
8. 00:50:318 (2) - 180|120 better
9. 01:11:476 (1) - really break that flow , better move to 292|296 or better placement like that
10. 01:26:161 (4,1) - better stack
[Insane]
1. 00:06:262 - Unsnapped inherit green , snap to 00:06:266
2. 00:04:371 (3,5) - stack
3. 00:10:845 (1,2,1,2,1) - that spacing.. okay then..
4. 00:21:581 (3) - 432|144 (nazi)
5. 00:31:055 (1) - why not put on 328|276 ?
6. 00:39:108 (4) - 200|80 (nazi)
7. 00:57:582 (3,4) - better keep consistency spacing to 00:56:318 (1,2)
8. 01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream , move to 200|248 better
9. 01:12:582 (8,1) - stack
10. 01:17:003 (4,5) - ups the spacing changing
11. 01:15:266 - 01:21:582 - NC spam , please use 1-1 or 1-2 big tick for New Combo
12. 01:21:108 (1,2,3) - better make same stream like 01:22:371 (5,6,7) - and 01:23:634 (5,6,7) - for consistency

Hope help a bit , Good Luck!

Hendrix89

40 posts

Joined February 2013

Hendrix89 2015-08-28T22:40:48+00:00

Hi there from mod queue,

Easy:

01:00:108 (3) - extend slider by a note

Normal:

00:02:634 (1,2) - These sliders feel really weird and out of sync with the song, consider changing them
00:05:161 (1,2) - ^

Hard:

00:21:424 - add a not at the end of the slider
00:22:055 - ^
00:50:476 - add note
00:51:108 - add note

Light Insane:

00:33:740 (2,3) - stack
00:34:371 (2,3) - ^

Insane:

00:03:108 (1,2) - ctrl G, feels funner
00:24:897 (2,3) - ^
00:25:529 (6,7) - ^
00:39:266 (1,3) - stack under the start of the slider
01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - increase the spacing to 1.6x
01:09:266 (2) - turn this note into a 1/2 note slider

A's Pace:

00:07:213 (5,7) - stack
00:08:476 (6,8) - stack
00:22:924 (2,3) - make the spacing between these 1.05x, it would be very hard with hard rock
00:23:082 (4,5) - ^
00:23:240 (6,7) - ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - is there a reason for the 1/3 stream here? I would delete note 7 and 8 and add a note at 00:38:476
00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - this part seems extremely hard for no reason, why not just make it a stream by adding a note at 00:48:266
01:00:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - really great stream, pretty hard but very fun

Your map is really well done so there wasn't too much I could find. Hopefully it was still helpful.
Good luck, you should have no problems getting it ranked

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-28T23:35:34+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
M4M Queue

[General]
Better set Preview Point huh, there is one at the start of the lead into the chorus
Audio Lead-In : Hard , Insane , Light Insane : +471 ms. 0 seems fine

[Hard]

Why make a simple slider with many point ? example 00:23:476 (1,3,1)
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - stack well this is where autostacking puts it
00:14:003 (3,4,5) - better make same placement pattern like 00:12:266 (1,2,3) - fine the way it is
00:14:003 (3) - 480|116
00:14:318 (5) - 328|144
00:14:634 (1) - make this slide same like 00:13:371 (1) - for better. changed a bit
00:14:634 (1,2) - same spacing like 00:13:371 (1,2) - maybe move 00:14:950 (2) - 132|168 or better placement like that [color=#8040FF? it's all 1.0x[/color]
00:16:529 (2) - Ctrl+G and move to 304|128 for better
00:17:634 - better add a not here I think it plays nicely this way and emphasized this "uhh~" better
00:23:476 (1) - move this to 384|96 for consistency blanket like 00:23:950 (2,3,4,1) ruins thw whole pattern afterwards
00:27:740 (4) - move 1 grid (tiny) right - 172|88 . why? because the spacing on 00:27:740 (4,5) - is changing.
00:32:476 (5) - NC here
01:07:687 (3,4) - change to slider better nah, that's boring and won't change a whole lot, still fits vocals
01:17:003 (3,1) - sounds weird over here if you make to slider remapped that part a bit, cause the red-tick slliders weren't fitting
For placement it's okay , but need for improvement , Nice Mapset
[Light Insane]
00:12:108 (1) - spinner stop on 00:13:055 - better fits well with the backgound "noise" the way it is
00:23:397 (9) - remove it plays way better this way
00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - ups .. very weird.. don't like this.. really what's weirtd about that, 00:26:634 (4,5,1) - makes a triangle which flows into a star at 00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - fits vocals and drums well this way imo
00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why need change spacing this? better make same spacing like 00:30:740 (4,1) changed a bit, spacing in combos is constistent now and it changes from 1.5x -> 1.4x between them
00:31:687 (3,1) - stack
00:35:161 (3) - 336|104 better
00:48:424 (5) - no need 2 repeated I think, better make that into 1 repeat it's okay
00:50:318 (2) - 180|120 better it's fine as it is right now
01:11:476 (1) - really break that flow , better move to 292|296 or better placement like that remapped a bit
01:26:161 (4,1) - better stack
[Insane]
00:04:371 (3,5) - stack this does nothing but breaking blankets and ds
00:10:845 (1,2,1,2,1) - that spacing.. okay then.. emphasizes the strong vocal+drum buildup nicely
00:21:581 (3) - 432|144 (nazi)
00:31:055 (1) - why not put on 328|276 ? flows nicely and looks nice as is
00:39:108 (4) - 200|80 (nazi)
00:57:582 (3,4) - better keep consistency spacing to 00:56:318 (1,2)
01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream , move to 200|248 better changed that part a bit
01:12:582 (8,1) - stack
01:17:003 (4,5) - ups the spacing changing still easily readable and makes the patterns afterwards way better
01:15:266 - 01:21:582 - NC spam , please use 1-1 or 1-2 big tick for New Combo makes it much better to read and still goes with the vocals
01:21:108 (1,2,3) - better make same stream like 01:22:371 (5,6,7) - and 01:23:634 (5,6,7) - for consistency
they don't need to be. first one leads into chorus while second one is the chorus, there should be a difference
Hope help a bit , Good Luck!

no reply = fixed
thanks

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-28T23:52:44+00:00

Hendrix89 wrote:
Hi there from mod queue,

Easy:

01:00:108 (3) - extend slider by a note the next set of vocals iwould start there which would make it weird

Normal:

00:02:634 (1,2) - These sliders feel really weird and out of sync with the song, consider changing them
00:05:161 (1,2) - ^
fit the instrumental just fine

Hard:

00:21:424 - add a not at the end of the slider
00:22:055 - ^
00:50:476 - add note
00:51:108 - add note
there is nothing to justify notes at those places

Light Insane:

00:33:740 (2,3) - stack
00:34:371 (2,3) - ^
sorry, but that doesn't make any sense

Insane:

00:03:108 (1,2) - ctrl G, feels funner
ruins ds + worse flow
00:24:897 (2,3) - ^
00:25:529 (6,7) - ^
the way it is right now fits the vocals way better and flows nicely http://lasse.s-ul.eu/96nMm4HJ
00:39:266 (1,3) - stack under the start of the slider would play worse + much harder to read
01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - increase the spacing to 1.6x that would be a ridiculous diffspike and completely unjustified
01:09:266 (2) - turn this note into a 1/2 note slider wouldn't really fit, also the 2 already continues the "my" from 1, doesn't need to be held any longer

A's Pace:

00:07:213 (5,7) - stack
00:08:476 (6,8) - stack
00:22:924 (2,3) - make the spacing between these 1.05x, it would be very hard with hard rock
00:23:082 (4,5) - ^
00:23:240 (6,7) - ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - is there a reason for the 1/3 stream here? I would delete note 7 and 8 and add a note at 00:38:476
00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - this part seems extremely hard for no reason, why not just make it a stream by adding a note at 00:48:266
01:00:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - really great stream, pretty hard but very fun

Your map is really well done so there wasn't too much I could find. Hopefully it was still helpful.
Good luck, you should have no problems getting it ranked

thanks for your input

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-29T08:18:58+00:00

Hendrix89 wrote:
Hi there from mod queue,

A's Pace:

00:07:213 (5,7) - stack Why?
00:08:476 (6,8) - stack Why?
00:22:924 (2,3) - make the spacing between these 1.05x, it would be very hard with hard rock I am not mapping for Hard Rock, but for the map itself, good players will play it just fine with Hard Rock too.
00:23:082 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:240 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - is there a reason for the 1/3 stream here? I would delete note 7 and 8 and add a note at 00:38:476 I just feel that it is right, look at my previous responses.
00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - this part seems extremely hard for no reason, why not just make it a stream by adding a note at 00:48:266 That's not extremely hard? I am following the music.
01:00:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - really great stream, pretty hard but very fun Thanks.

Good luck, you should have no problems getting it ranked

Erm, thank you for your time

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-30T10:06:31+00:00

Avishay wrote:
P.S Your name reminds me something, but I can't recall what and why

You're making me curious
Perhaps Remember Me (with your deleted diff

)?

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-30T12:51:29+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Avishay wrote:
P.S Your name reminds me something, but I can't recall what and why
You're making me curious
Perhaps Remember Me (with your deleted diff )?

Holy fuck, I just remembered, I'm soooo sorry for the inconvenience back then, but believe me, my diff was probably complete shit.

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-30T12:53:55+00:00

LOOOOOOL
It's already circled
Still pending after 2 years, still not ranked ;w;

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-30T16:26:57+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
LOOOOOOL
It's already circled
Still pending after 2 years, still not ranked ;w;

Hah, don't make start talking about Rolling star ;_;

Also, I've modified the 1/3 part (less cancer) and removed some hitsound problems, I might modify the doubles part half way through the map, not sure.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56318
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
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DistanceSpacing: 1.15
BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:マイペースでいきましょう
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Lasse
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Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-31T10:31:56+00:00

Added the GD changes
also worked a bit on the Insane, especially the first 30 seconds, should be much better now

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-31T11:13:51+00:00

Sorry for the frequent posts lol, I've went thorugh all of the hitsounds and changed those that I weren't satisfied with, along with a pattern or two.

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Kbuns

91 posts

Joined July 2014

Kbuns 2015-09-02T01:13:31+00:00

Hi there, m4m from your queue: p/4473426#p4473426

Easy

00:02:634 (1,2) - These slider could do a better job representing the music. Additionally, they don't look very good :'( maybe consider this: http://puu.sh/jWR61/67ae4eb318.jpg
00:07:687 (1) - Consider extending this slider. To end here: 00:08:318 - it makes the rhythm build up in the next section feel much more prominent.
00:17:161 (7,1) - Improve blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRgK/0bbaea5482.jpg
00:19:371 (2) - Move this circle slightly to the left. This makes the pattern slightly more interesting because it's not just a straight line.
00:28:529 (1,2) - Fix blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRkM/0713918857.jpg
00:37:371 (3) - Consider this form: http://puu.sh/jWRpn/aec6f0f40d.jpg
00:58:845 (1) - Curve so that it flows better: http://puu.sh/jWRvG/0180ab4659.jpg
01:00:108 (3,1) - This blanket needs works. Very noticeable.
01:03:897 (4) - Improve this slider's form
01:03:897 (4,1) - Recommend blanketing this.
01:23:161 (3) - Fix slider form. Looks really bad.
01:21:897 (2) - ^
Diff needs some polishing.

Normal

00:04:055 (3,4) - I honestly can't tell what rhythm you're following in the music. Needs revision
00:06:582 (3,4) - ^
00:15:897 (1,2) - Fix blanket (Slider end of (1) and curve of (2)
00:25:371 (6) - Copy 00:24:108 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+shft+r (-15) and reposition for a better blanket.
00:40:529 (3,1) - Blanket http://puu.sh/jWS15/7c824eeefe.jpg
00:52:529 (4) - Remove a slider bone. Looks bad b/c it's uneven.
01:05:161 (3) - Slider looks bad. Consider removing the curve.
01:24:108 (1,2) - Blanket?

Hard

00:01:845 (2,1,2) - Slight overlap. Recommend spacing out (1,2)
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - ^
00:12:266 (1,2,3,1) - Transition feels empty. Consider adding a circle here: 00:13:213 -
00:23:161 (4,1) - This blanket is a lot tighter than the other blankets in the map and it looks out of place because of this.
00:27:266 - Needs clickable object here
00:31:687 (3,1) - I was under the impression that sliders like this were unrankable because they change the speed of the slider with slider bones. I might be wrong, you should double check
00:46:371 (2,3) - Blanket
01:15:266 (1,2,3,4) - This is my only issue in the kiai time. I think that you should space these more. I don't understand why this pattern would have a higher DS outside of kiai time like you did here: 01:00:108 (1,2,3,4) -
01:24:108 (1) - Missed flow
Best diff so far.

Light Insane

00:03:740 (1) - Should not be a slider. Well defined rest on this beat: 00:03:897 -
00:05:161 (1,3) - Disagree with these reverse arrows. Consider removal
00:11:476 (3,4,5,6) - Absolutely space this out. It doesn't make sense for the build-up to have a higher DS (1.5) than the part that should be emphasized. (1.2)
00:17:161 (1) - Really good slider here, gj
00:17:792 (1) - This one, not so much, haha. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/jWSWu/6a3a50ab98.jpg Definitely remove the reverse arrow on this slider though.
00:23:476 (1) - If you can, try to make this slider follow the curve of the stream better.
00:24:740 (1) - Clean up this slider's form
00:28:213 (1) - ^
00:31:687 (3,1) - Nice slider, but you should space out (1) to make it more interesting to play.
00:46:213 (1) - This slider is really out of place. Either give it a proper wave or make it straight. Looks really bad in this pattern.
01:13:371 (5,6) - Make parallel or curve (6)
01:27:740 (3) - Fix blanket
01:27:740 - Other diffs end here - Keep it consistent please.
Pretty good diff.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-02T11:47:11+00:00

Kbuns wrote:
Hi there, m4m from your queue: p/4473426#p4473426

Easy
00:02:634 (1,2) - These slider could do a better job representing the music. Additionally, they don't look very good :'( maybe consider this: http://puu.sh/jWR61/67ae4eb318.jpg they look just fine
00:07:687 (1) - Consider extending this slider. To end here: 00:08:318 - it makes the rhythm build up in the next section feel much more prominent. fits the vocals better as is
00:17:161 (7,1) - Improve blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRgK/0bbaea5482.jpg 1 blankets the end of 7 as good as possible. TO have both parts blanketed they would have to look the same and then I'd use the same slider 3 times in a row in 2 different combos, no thanks
00:19:371 (2) - Move this circle slightly to the left. This makes the pattern slightly more interesting because it's not just a straight line. straight line looks better and plays fine here
00:28:529 (1,2) - Fix blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRkM/0713918857.jpg huh? http://i.imgur.com/QrkAqhh.jpg it's fine that way
00:37:371 (3) - Consider this form: http://puu.sh/jWRpn/aec6f0f40d.jpg way worse flow as it doesn't lead to the next note and puts your hand in a sligh downwards motion eve nthough the next not is above
00:58:845 (1) - Curve so that it flows better: http://puu.sh/jWRvG/0180ab4659.jpg k
01:00:108 (3,1) - This blanket needs works. Very noticeable. very noticeable = two pixels on a sldier that disappears way before you have to hit the blanketed one? Hard to make it any better without breaking ds or making the slideritself worse
01:03:897 (4) - Improve this slider's form it flows nicely the way it is
01:03:897 (4,1) - Recommend blanketing this. nah
01:23:161 (3) - Fix slider form. Looks really bad. done
01:21:897 (2) - ^done
Diff needs some polishing.

Normal
00:04:055 (3,4) - I honestly can't tell what rhythm you're following in the music. Needs revision
00:06:582 (3,4) - ^
Since so many modders seem to dislike the way it is now (followed some barely audible background noise I changed those parts and remapped the rest accordingly up until the small "break"
00:15:897 (1,2) - Fix blanket (Slider end of (1) and curve of (2) seems fine, distance bat the left edge = distance at right edge, it's just not the same distance for the whole circle
00:25:371 (6) - Copy 00:24:108 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+shft+r (-15) and reposition for a better blanket. blanket is fine
00:40:529 (3,1) - Blanket http://puu.sh/jWS15/7c824eeefe.jpg changed a bit
00:52:529 (4) - Remove a slider bone. Looks bad b/c it's uneven. fixed
01:05:161 (3) - Slider looks bad. Consider removing the curve. looks and flows better this way
01:24:108 (1,2) - Blanket? fixed

Hard
00:01:845 (2,1,2) - Slight overlap. Recommend spacing out (1,2)
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - ^
those are not visible during gameplay and the blankets are better this way

00:12:266 (1,2,3,1) - Transition feels empty. Consider adding a circle here: 00:13:213 - that would mean either extending the prev. slider, which would mess the mapping to vocals up and look bad, or adding circle which would feel really overmapped
00:23:161 (4,1) - This blanket is a lot tighter than the other blankets in the map and it looks out of place because of this. looks fine without messing with the shape or the ds to keep the blanket
00:27:266 - Needs clickable object here changed that part a little
00:31:687 (3,1) - I was under the impression that sliders like this were unrankable because they change the speed of the slider with slider bones. I might be wrong, you should double check the change is like a few percent at max and easily visible. Also I already had two BN modding this diff with excatly the same slider and not one mentioned it, so it should be fine. Also #modhelp seems to agree
00:46:371 (2,3) - Blanket fixed
01:15:266 (1,2,3,4) - This is my only issue in the kiai time. I think that you should space these more. I don't understand why this pattern would have a higher DS outside of kiai time like you did here: 01:00:108 (1,2,3,4) - made ds 1.0x
01:24:108 (1) - Missed flow fixed
Best diff so far.

Light Insane
00:03:740 (1) - Should not be a slider. Well defined rest on this beat: 00:03:897 - ? fits the vocal "yay" perfectly
00:05:161 (1,3) - Disagree with these reverse arrows. Consider removal plays nicely and doesn't feel overmapped or anything
00:11:476 (3,4,5,6) - Absolutely space this out. It doesn't make sense for the build-up to have a higher DS (1.5) than the part that should be emphasized. (1.2) it does. having the spacing lower takes away some of the aiming and puts more focus on the tapping which is exactly what I want here
00:17:161 (1) - Really good slider here, gj
00:17:792 (1) - This one, not so much, haha. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/jWSWu/6a3a50ab98.jpg Definitely remove the reverse arrow on this slider though.
applied something similar
00:23:476 (1) - If you can, try to make this slider follow the curve of the stream better. flows just fine
00:24:740 (1) - Clean up this slider's form done
00:28:213 (1) - ^ done

00:31:687 (3,1) - Nice slider, but you should space out (1) to make it more interesting to play. plays fine this way
00:46:213 (1) - This slider is really out of place. Either give it a proper wave or make it straight. Looks really bad in this pattern. remapped that part a little
01:13:371 (5,6) - Make parallel or curve (6) done
01:27:740 (3) - Fix blanket done
01:27:740 - Other diffs end here - Keep it consistent please.
Pretty good diff.

SPOILER

well whatever

Kbuns

91 posts

Joined July 2014

Kbuns 2015-09-02T12:13:55+00:00

SPOILER

well whatever

Should have said something in game then. Why would I read the rules of your queue when the request was made in game?
[/quote]

melon boy

278 posts

Joined August 2013

melon boy 2015-09-03T15:14:33+00:00

Hello! M4M from your modding queue!

A's Pace

00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders look pretty bland with the overlaps and such and don't play too well either. I'd suggest curving them a bit more and moving them further apart, kind of like this:
image
Furthermore, I'd suggest completely removing the repeat sliders at 00:17:161 if you have any intention of getting this ranked, since it's severely overmapped. Even if it were to get qualified, QAT would definitely have something to say about it. I'd suggest extending 00:16:845 (4) and placing a normal hit circle at 00:17:318, preferably under (4)'s end. As for the pattern, here's a suggestion, building on the previously mentioned:
image
00:21:897 (4) - The pattern is good enough here, just do the same as before, removing the repeat sliders and extending (4).
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Umm... Okay. This may or may not also be suicide. But if you insist on keeping it, I'll just wish you good luck.
00:37:529 (3,5) - Same here as above. You might be able to get about the same effect with a couple of 1/1 sliders.[
00:39:897 (1) - This hit sound is extremely jarring. Both because it's a snare placed on a downbeat, and also because it's too damn loud compared to in comparison to the music and the rest of the hitsounds. Remove or change it.
00:41:161 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:55:055 (1,3,5,7) - You can keep the doubles, but they are definitely too close to each other. Increase the spacing.
00:57:582 (5,7) - Why not keep the same hit sound as 00:56:318 (1,3) ?
01:01:371 - Get a stronger soft-hitfinish for the chorus.
01:11:161 (1) - I'd suggest that you don't start a downbeat with a slider end.
That's all I'll say. Overall interesting map with nice jump and slider patterns, but it definitely still needs some work on the flow and aesthetics. Good luck.

Insane

00:08:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part feels a bit too linear and doesn't flow well. Try going with something a bit more back and forth.
00:11:950 (4,1) - I'm not a big fan of these tiny overlaps. Either you make a distinct overlap, or you get some space between the two objects.
00:24:108 (5,6) - Watch out for the curves. If your basic small sliders get too curvy they'll look really bad. Like these. Straighten them out, and make sure they have the same curve, since they are right after each other. Same for your other sliders, such as 00:26:003 (1).
00:28:213 (1) - However this one is okay, since it's a special unique slider.
00:34:529 (3,3,3) - Same with these, however I'm not a fan of this pattern, because of the way the sliders overlap. You might want to reposition them.
00:52:529 (3) - Ctrl + G for better flow.
01:01:371 - Same as with A's Pace: A stronger soft-hitfinish would really make this section feel a lot better.
01:10:213 (1,2) - Ctrl + G here as 01:10:529 (3,4) here. It makes the change in instrument a lot more apparent. Additionally, it might be nice to move 01:10:213 (1,2,3,4) down a bit as well for better emphasis.
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing suddenly drops a lot without any change in the music. Consider completely changing the pattern here.
Otherwise a really solid map with nice hit sounds. Good luck.

That is all I'll do. I'm not too good at modding easier difficulties, but if you don't feel like it's enough for you to mod the entirety of my map, then feel free to send me a message, and I might be able to say something about another difficulty or two. Anyhow, Best of luck with the map!

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-03T16:20:54+00:00

Fuccho wrote:
Insane
00:08:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part feels a bit too linear and doesn't flow well. Try going with something a bit more back and forth. remapped it a little, kept the 1.8-1.2 alternating snap cause it fits really nice, should flow much better now
00:11:950 (4,1) - I'm not a big fan of these tiny overlaps. Either you make a distinct overlap, or you get some space between the two objects. increased ds on the sldiers a little to get rid of that
00:24:108 (5,6) - Watch out for the curves. If your basic small sliders get too curvy they'll look really bad. Like these. Straighten them out, and make sure they have the same curve, since they are right after each other. I changed that part anyways cause the flow seemed kinda bad. Also made them less curved while at it

Same for your other sliders, such as 00:26:003 (1). this one is fine
00:28:213 (1) - However this one is okay, since it's a special unique slider.
00:34:529 (3,3,3) - Same with these, however I'm not a fan of this pattern, because of the way the sliders overlap. You might want to reposition them. that's the whole point of the pattern, is is rotating while the slliders are getting more curved. And the only way to see thsoe overlaps would be by playing EZ
00:52:529 (3) - Ctrl + G for better flow. it flows fine? and this way the transition to the next notes is better (and it looks better) CHanged shape a bit though
01:01:371 - Same as with A's Pace: A stronger soft-hitfinish would really make this section feel a lot better.
01:10:213 (1,2) - Ctrl + G here as 01:10:529 (3,4) here. It makes the change in instrument a lot more apparent.
Additionally, it might be nice to move 01:10:213 (1,2,3,4) down a bit as well for better emphasis.
hitsound + nc are fine for that, also that would make the spacing really weird
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing suddenly drops a lot without any change in the music. Consider completely changing the pattern here.might look into that

Otherwise a really solid map with nice hit sounds. Good luck.
That is all I'll do. I'm not too good at modding easier difficulties, but if you don't feel like it's enough for you to mod the entirety of my map, then feel free to send me a message, and I might be able to say something about another difficulty or two. Anyhow, Best of luck with the map!

thanks

Last edited by Lasse 2015-09-03T17:22:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-03T17:22:03+00:00

Fuccho wrote:
[*]01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing suddenly drops a lot without any change in the music. Consider completely changing the pattern here.

I reworked the first part so it fits much better and kept 01:14:003 (1) - as is (moved a bit) to serve as a little "break" after this kinda hard new jump sequence, also the lowly spaced 1/2 sliders there fit really well with the drawn out vocals

Tarrasky

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Tarrasky 2015-09-03T17:37:13+00:00

Insane mod ´º`

about NC

00:03:108 (1) - I prefer the newcombo in 00:03:266 (2) - if you listen to music, you notice the sound change is there
00:05:634 (1,2) - /\
00:11:161 (1) - maybe nc is unnecessary
00:30:424 (1) - /\
00:39:266 (1) - /\
00:41:792 (1) - /\ 00:42:740 (1) - /\ 00:45:582 (1) - /\ 00:46:845 (1) - /\ and a lot

00:07:055 (4,5) - why this sliders is so "wub"? you can make normal sliders like 00:02:003 (4,5) - 00:04:529 (4,5) -, I see no reason to be this way
00:13:608 (3) -00:14:871 (3) - 00:18:661 (3) - 00:19:924 (3) - ... ) overmap?
00:23:397 - you can add a circle here, and change this from a 1/2 slider 00:23:476 (1) -, same in 00:23:792 (3) - and change this for 1/2 circle jumps 00:24:108 (5,6) -, seems more playable, it makes more sense with the sound and doesn't miss a sound
00:31:687 (3) - maybe 1/1 slider?
00:52:529 (3) - ctrl + g seems better flow
soft-hitfinish.wav It sounds as weak for finish beat

hope i help ^^

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-03T18:45:37+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
Insane mod ´º`

about NC
00:03:108 (1) - I prefer the newcombo in 00:03:266 (2) - if you listen to music, you notice the sound change is there
00:05:634 (1,2) - /\
the nc for those pattern is consistent though and it makes the mway betetr to read and play

00:11:161 (1) - maybe nc is unnecessary removed and changed the pattern a bit
00:30:424 (1) - /\ removed
00:39:266 (1) - /\ removed
00:41:792 (1) - /\ removed
00:42:740 (1) - /\removed
00:45:582 (1) - /\ 00:46:845 (1) - /\ and a lot
also did some other nc changes

00:07:055 (4,5) - why this sliders is so "wub"? you can make normal sliders like 00:02:003 (4,5) - 00:04:529 (4,5) -, I see no reason to be this way
I think they're fine here

00:13:608 (3) -00:14:871 (3) - 00:18:661 (3) - 00:19:924 (3) - ... ) overmap? it's not really severe and it would get extremely boring without those cause that musical pattern happen quite a few times, I think it's still intuitive to play.

00:23:397 - you can add a circle here, and change this from a 1/2 slider 00:23:476 (1) -, same in 00:23:792 (3) - and change this for 1/2 circle jumps
00:24:108 (5,6) -, seems more playable, it makes more sense with the sound and doesn't miss a sound
the drumroll ends on 00:23:318 (7) - which seems to get emphasized fine the way it is. I could make 00:23:318 (7) - a kickslider, but then the transition to the jumps would play awful

00:31:687 (3) - maybe 1/1 slider? the repeating slider repeats on a beat of the instrumental and still goes nicely with the vocal, I think it's fine
00:52:529 (3) - ctrl + g seems better flow I changed the part before a little and used ctrl+g on 1 and 2, does the same for the flow of this and kepps the transition to 00:52:845 (1) - better
soft-hitfinish.wav It sounds as weak for finish beat

hope i help ^^ sure

thanks for the mod

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-09-03T20:06:21+00:00

Fuccho wrote:
Hello! M4M from your modding queue!
A's Pace
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders look pretty bland with the overlaps and such and don't play too well either. I'd suggest curving them a bit more and moving them further apart, kind of like this:
image
They play just fine imo, and I like the way they slightly overlap now, I don't want to have open spacings with them.
Furthermore, I'd suggest completely removing the repeat sliders at 00:17:161 if you have any intention of getting this ranked, since it's severely overmapped. Even if it were to get qualified, QAT would definitely have something to say about it. I'd suggest extending 00:16:845 (4) and placing a normal hit circle at 00:17:318, preferably under (4)'s end. As for the pattern, here's a suggestion, building on the previously mentioned:
image
I'll have to disagree, this is an Extra difficulty, I like to be creative and this pattern resembles the vocals and their strength just like I wanted, I will keep it.
00:21:897 (4) - The pattern is good enough here, just do the same as before, removing the repeat sliders and extending (4). ^
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Umm... Okay. This may or may not also be suicide. But if you insist on keeping it, I'll just wish you good luck.
00:37:529 (3,5) - Same here as above. You might be able to get about the same effect with a couple of 1/1 sliders. I do not wish using 1/1 sliders here.
00:39:897 (1) - This hit sound is extremely jarring. Both because it's a snare placed on a downbeat, and also because it's too damn loud compared to in comparison to the music and the rest of the hitsounds. Remove or change it. I agree, changed to the regular whistle, I might add custom hitsounds soon, in addition to Lasse's.
00:41:161 (1,1,1,1) - ^ V
00:55:055 (1,3,5,7) - You can keep the doubles, but they are definitely too close to each other. Increase the spacing. They are just fine.. The intention was to slow down the pace a bit with the vocals.
00:57:582 (5,7) - Why not keep the same hit sound as 00:56:318 (1,3) ? Because nothing is mandatory with hitsounding.
01:01:371 - Get a stronger soft-hitfinish for the chorus. I need to find something ehm..
01:11:161 (1) - I'd suggest that you don't start a downbeat with a slider end. I agree, changed.
That's all I'll say. Overall interesting map with nice jump and slider patterns, but it definitely still needs some work on the flow and aesthetics. Good luck.

Try to get more into my head, I might be a bit unorthodox but I think I am allowed to, thank you for the mod.

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-09-04T01:49:30+00:00

[A's Pace]

00:03:108 (3,4,5) - You don't find all these kick sliders over the top? I think just 00:02:634 (1,2) - are good enough. Making everything kick-sliders will easily come across as mapping for the same of difficulty. You could cut down on some of the kickslider usage in this intro imo.
00:05:634 (3,4,5) - ^
00:07:371 (6,7) - I really dislike stacks that occur between jump patterns. They break momentum because you force the player to stop all motion before basically doing a vertical screen jump. It's uncomfortable to play. Just use a smaller jump so there is still movement.
00:08:634 (7,8) - ^
00:15:897 (1,2) - These are 3/4 sliders, i hope you're aware <___<
00:20:003 (2,3) - This is so irregular compared to your spacing for 00:18:740 (2,3) - 00:19:371 (6,7) - right after the "Hai"
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You are not Hanzer
01:01:054 (5,6) - I guess, if you want to change DS you should change on a white tick, right now the DS increases after 6 which is a blue tick. Having a DS increase begin on a white tick makes it more straightforward.
01:25:055 (4) - Might as well Ctrl+G this because the flow is pretty damn nice when Ctrl+G'ed. I'll overlook the sheer amount of jumps you're forcing lol.
01:25:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Im surprised there's no DS increase to match the pitch change.

[Insane]

00:06:262 - wouldn't hurt to snap this green line
00:07:687 (1) - This should really be two circles for the drums.
00:25:845 (8,1) - You sould have a jump here for emphasis onto the downbeat (1). 00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You map a jump to every white tick so you should continue that pattern into the next combo.
00:53:792 (1,2) - These sliders just feel really random. The SV doesn't fit the music because there is a pitch increase onto 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - but you use a lower SV and simpler shapes :S.
01:19:213 - There are clear beats on the red ticks too. Suddenly shifting to 1/1 rhythm makes this section feel really empty. if not circles, 1/2 sliders work too.

[Light Insane]

00:07:687 (1) - These should be two circles too, or at least map a larger jump to them for better emphasis. You map the same drum hits to circles later on so its weird to use a slider here.
00:13:371 (1) - Change the combo color to something else. On the Default spinner the blue combo color becomes really difficult to read.
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6,1) - You spam the same star-jump pattern a lot in this diff, Try using other combinations or jump patterns .
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4) - Awkward, same reason as Insane. There are beats on red ticks, even if you don't want to make them clickable and focus on vocals, using 1/2 sliders will benefit this section by not making it feel so empty and different in intensity from the jumps before/after
01:26:476 (5,6) - The song is growing in intensity, why the sliders? if anything you should use the at the beginning and transition to circles as the pitch goes up with intensity.

[Hard]

00:23:476 (1,2,3) - Weird flow here. 1>2 is nice and then you have to make a sharp movement into 3.
00:24:582 (4,1) - ^
00:33:266 (1) - Slider-end is a strong beat though... Make this 3/4 or something so 00:33:582 - can be clicked.
01:01:371 - Why do you randomly have 1.20x SV for like 4 seconds before going back to 1.00 lol

The gap from Hard to Normal is way too large. You use 1.60 base SV on Hard which is extremely high, and then 0.95x on Normal. This results in a huge difficulty spike even though rhythmically theres a decent progression from 1/1's and 1/2 rhythms in Normal to 1/2 rhythms on Hard.

Good luck

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-09-04T01:58:32+00:00

I'll look at the mod after getting some sleep

So maybe I should remap the normal nearly the same but based on sth like 1.2sv?
I think I've seen quite some maps with similar gaps between normal and hard getting ranked this year , but idk how the SV on those was.

Would you classify the current NH gap more as 'meh' or 'unrankable levels of meh'?
Since your post reads like the 1/1 - 1/2 progression for those is fine but the SV on normal is a bit low

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-09-04T08:58:02+00:00

Imo it's unrankable because SV gap is too large, so base DS will also be a huge spike. You could make another diff in between with 1.25x Base SV and Simple stuff, call it an Advanced maybe. Remapping for SV... you might as well just make another diff really.

For me, i like using 0.7-0.9x for Easy, 0.9-1.1 for Normal, 1.1-1.4 for Hard. 1.5-1.8 for Insane and 1.9+ for Extra's. Different people have different preferences, but right now a 0.65x SV just makes the overall difficulty jump too big.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-09-04T11:15:28+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[A's Pace]

00:03:108 (3,4,5) - You don't find all these kick sliders over the top? I think just 00:02:634 (1,2) - are good enough. Making everything kick-sliders will easily come across as mapping for the same of difficulty. You could cut down on some of the kickslider usage in this intro imo. Not really
00:05:634 (3,4,5) - ^
00:07:371 (6,7) - I really dislike stacks that occur between jump patterns. They break momentum because you force the player to stop all motion before basically doing a vertical screen jump. It's uncomfortable to play. Just use a smaller jump so there is still movement. Changed.
00:08:634 (7,8) - ^
00:15:897 (1,2) - These are 3/4 sliders, i hope you're aware <___< Yes I am..
00:20:003 (2,3) - This is so irregular compared to your spacing for 00:18:740 (2,3) - 00:19:371 (6,7) - right after the "Hai" Changed a bit.
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You are not Hanzer But it still plays well and I like it.
01:01:054 (5,6) - I guess, if you want to change DS you should change on a white tick, right now the DS increases after 6 which is a blue tick. Having a DS increase begin on a white tick makes it more straightforward. I think that's unnecessary, there's nothing to significant on the white tick compared to the whole stream.
01:25:055 (4) - Might as well Ctrl+G this because the flow is pretty damn nice when Ctrl+G'ed. I'll overlook the sheer amount of jumps you're forcing lol. I LIKE THIS SO MUCH, CHANGED.
01:25:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Im surprised there's no DS increase to match the pitch change. Uhm, I think the pattern is a bit underwhelming actually, changed it to use some sliders and it should be nicer now.
Good luck

Thank you monstrata :3

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Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-04T11:43:56+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Insane]

00:06:262 - wouldn't hurt to snap this green line fixed
00:07:687 (1) - This should really be two circles for the drums. I have the 1/2 slider here for the vocals like the two times this happens before. I know about the drums here, but I think this just fits better for consistency But I put drum hitsounds on the slliderend too
00:25:845 (8,1) - You sould have a jump here for emphasis onto the downbeat (1). 00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You map a jump to every white tick so you should continue that pattern into the next combo. changed position of 8 a bit to make for a 2x jump like before
00:53:792 (1,2) - These sliders just feel really random. The SV doesn't fit the music because there is a pitch increase onto 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - but you use a lower SV and simpler shapes :S. Yeah, reduced sv to 1x for first half, now second half is 1.2 and changed the sliders
01:19:213 - There are clear beats on the red ticks too. Suddenly shifting to 1/1 rhythm makes this section feel really empty. if not circles, 1/2 sliders work too. Circles would take away too much emphasis from the vocals imo. Made 1/2 sliders that can be played like singletaps
[Light Insane]

00:07:687 (1) - These should be two circles too, or at least map a larger jump to them for better emphasis. You map the same drum hits to circles later on so its weird to use a slider here. I already explained my reasoning on the Insane and I think it's fine since that slider+ds type pattern appears only 3 time, namely for the shouted vocals in the intro.
00:13:371 (1) - Change the combo color to something else. On the Default spinner the blue combo color becomes really difficult to read. I fit one more nc before it, should be fine now
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6,1) - You spam the same star-jump pattern a lot in this diff, Try using other combinations or jump patterns .
I'll look into that
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4) - Awkward, same reason as Insane. There are beats on red ticks, even if you don't want to make them clickable and focus on vocals, using 1/2 sliders will benefit this section by not making it feel so empty and different in intensity from the jumps before/after changed here too
01:26:476 (5,6) - The song is growing in intensity, why the sliders? if anything you should use the at the beginning and transition to circles as the pitch goes up with intensity made them small jumps instead + nc so the transition from stack to jump is clearer.
As for the stars oraoraora
I remapped some of them
00:19:687 - now a close-far alternating pattern
00:27:266 (1) - zigzag
00:28:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stays the same since it's really satisfying to play and it's not "only" a star
00:32:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - stays too, fits really well here
00:34:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - made back and forth, with increasing ds for 3, emphasizes the "hai" rellay well (still aligned like a star but play completely different)
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - stays with 00:42:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - cause it's nicely consitent with 00:28:529 // 00:32:318
01:08:003 (2,1,2,3,4) - first star since ~30 seconds (not counting 00:58:845 (1,2,3,4) - since one point is missing and it's 1/1) and it fits well here so it stays, also first and only star during kiai
Star count: 7 (Old) -> -3 (removed => 4
that shouldn't be too much for a 1:30 map now

[Hard]

00:23:476 (1,2,3) - Weird flow here. 1>2 is nice and then you have to make a sharp movement into 3. I think it's fine here, as it plays like a small triangle
00:24:582 (4,1) - ^ here too, I think it plays nicely even without that "circular" flow but it just plays a bit more like small tirangular jumps
00:33:266 (1) - Slider-end is a strong beat though... Make this 3/4 or something so 00:33:582 - can be clicked. Didn't really wnant to put a 3/4 slider -> singletap on a hard but if it's fine then I'll do it
01:01:371 - Why do you randomly have 1.20x SV for like 4 seconds before going back to 1.00 lol ugh, ummmm I don't even know anymore, made that part 1x too
The gap from Hard to Normal is way too large. You use 1.60 base SV on Hard which is extremely high, and then 0.95x on Normal. This results in a huge difficulty spike even though rhythmically theres a decent progression from 1/1's and 1/2 rhythms in Normal to 1/2 rhythms on Hard.

Good luck

thanks

A's Pace updated

As for the N-H spread, I'll look into it as I said before

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-04T14:42:11+00:00

I had some ideas anyway that would've been to hard to put on that normal but too easy for the hard, so making another diff inbetween was easier than expected.

Added new "Advanced" difficulty => redownload

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-09-04T15:29:29+00:00

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232,24,68634,2,0,B|218:78|218:78|224:120|224:120|204:184,1,147.000005607605,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,348,68950,6,0,P|68:352|52:232,1,183.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,69266,2,0,P|324:253|288:137,1,183.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,69582,6,0,P|128:116|168:228,1,294.00001121521,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
197,213,70055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,70213,5,4,1:3:0:0:
316,120,70371,1,4,1:3:0:0:
248,360,70529,1,4,1:3:0:0:
444,208,70687,1,4,1:3:0:0:
197,213,70845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
169,191,70923,1,0,3:0:0:0:
149,162,71002,1,8,3:0:0:0:
140,128,71081,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,92,71161,2,0,B|73:75|71:91|69:108|-1:95,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,92,71476,6,0,B|439:75|441:91|443:108|513:95,1,147.000005607605,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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212,68,72108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,188,72266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,64,72424,1,8,1:0:0:0:
197,213,72582,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,104,72740,6,0,B|436:64|436:64|468:188,1,147.000005607605,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,222,73055,2,0,B|487:262|487:262|461:162,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,162,73371,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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104,228,73687,1,8,1:0:0:0:
372,224,73845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,217,74634,2,0,B|220:265|220:265|184:193|232:81,1,220.500008411408
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104,228,75266,5,6,1:0:0:0:
176,164,75424,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,328,75582,1,8,1:0:0:0:
28,236,75740,2,0,B|24:76|-52:156|-48:216|100:188|112:100,1,220.500008411408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,76055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,216,76213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,96,76371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,76529,6,0,B|188:320|188:320|112:348,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,76845,1,8,1:0:0:0:
145,335,77003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,360,77161,2,0,P|384:256|420:192,2,147.000005607605,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,77634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,88,77792,5,8,1:0:0:0:
281,122,77950,2,0,P|177:118|113:82,2,147.000005607605,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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363,29,81107,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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444,32,81266,6,0,L|460:112,1,78.4,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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259,352,81740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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231,316,82213,5,2,0:0:0:0:
82,360,82371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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276,40,82845,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,172,83003,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,20,83161,2,0,P|132:24|84:56,1,98,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,83476,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,324,83634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,172,83792,2,0,P|104:176|56:208,1,98,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,248,84424,2,0,L|320:256,1,183.75,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,172,84740,2,0,L|247:178,1,183.75,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,64,85529,5,8,3:0:0:0:
308,340,85687,2,0,P|392:332|440:312,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,86003,5,8,3:0:0:0:
204,340,86161,2,0,P|120:332|72:312,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,11,86476,5,8,3:0:0:0:
128,232,86634,2,0,B|83:233|83:233|44:248|8:254,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,11,86950,5,8,3:0:0:0:
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96,64,87740,6,0,B|80:128|112:180|112:180|152:144|148:96,1,196,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

I've decided to redesign some patterns in the beginning because idk, I stopped liking how they look, even though they placed just fine ><

KASUM1

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KASUM1 2015-09-05T16:33:35+00:00

Hello~!

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01:05:792 - add a note here , I think sounds better

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-05T16:45:33+00:00

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~!

small suggestion

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01:05:792 - add a note here , I think sounds better

In general I would agree for this spot, a note would fit and not feel overmapped. But since that whole part
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - etc is mapped to go with the vocals on this diff it feels fiine without the note
also having it like this makes it consistent with other similar parts such as 01:15:740 (4,1) - that are mapped to vocals mainly.

Also it's a bit easier to play this way while it doesn't really feel like something is missing

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