Please note the following:
1. Everything here is a recommendation. Feel free to ignore whatever you feel is unnecessary.
2. Stuff marked in blue are very minor things that I only put here because of my OCD, and that probably won't make a drastic change.
3. Stuff marked in red are crucial.
Some of the tags either appear twice (this includes the title and source) or are inappropriate. Use these instead:
aliens proph nobster mazziv sings los del rio macarena
00:00:927 (4) - Try to make this slider straight, then shape it up a bit, like here:
00:04:126 (1) - Remove NC
00:04:708 (2) - NC
00:11:688 (5) - NC
00:12:124 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:996 (1) - This slider is way to close to 00:12:851 (6) - in comparison to the pattern before. Try increasing the spacing between these two.
00:14:596 (3) - Rotate this 7 degrees clockwise in place (to match the previous slider's rotation).
00:15:760 (2) - Rotate this 7 degrees anti-clockwise in place (to match the previous slider's rotation).
00:21:722 (1) - Since the notes before this are placed back and forth, it makes this note confusing to hit the way it's placed. Moving it below 00:21:576 (5) - and ___ 00:21:867 (2) - while keeping the DS would make more sense.
00:21:722 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:158 (1) - NC
00:24:485 (5) - NC
00:27:975 (3) - NC
00:28:411 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:937 (7,1) - Try increasing the spacing between these two.
00:36:264 (6,1) - ^
00:00:636 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:02:381 (4) - NC
00:07:616 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+G
00:21:722 (1,2) - Try increasing the spacing between these two.
00:26:521 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:828 (3,4,5,6) - Even for an insane diff, these jumps don't fit well. Try decreasing the spacing between these.
You'll need to change the diffname to a more appropriate one (e.g Mz's Insane ayyy).
Change Ar to 9.1 (?)
00:02:672 (2) - NC
00:04:708 (1,2,3) - The distance between these doesn't match their timing at all. You'll probably need to heavily increase the spacing.
00:07:035 (1,2) - ^
00:06:453 (6,1) - Add a note between these two (Perhaps to stack on 00:07:035 (1) - ).
00:14:015 (8) - NC
00:14:306 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:668 (3) - NC
00:21:722 (4,1) - The jump between these two notes is way too big. You'll probably need to heavily decrease the spacing.
00:23:322 (6) - NC
In general - the increase in SV at 00:16:051 doesn't make any sense. You should probably change the SV to a lower one, then trim the sliders (and perhaps the jumps as well).
The problems here occurred mostly due to the spacing, in relation to the timing.
00:01:800 (3,1) - Increase the spacing between these two.
00:04:126 (5,1) - ^
00:06:453 (3,4) - Decrease the spacing between these two.
00:06:598 (4,1) - ^
00:14:015 (4) - NC
00:14:306 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:104 (2,3) - Increase the spacing between these two.
00:23:176 (1) - Remove NC
00:23:321 (2) - NC
00:23:176 (1,2) - Decrease the spacing between these two.
This got longer than I expected it to
Hopefully this won't be too painful to read.
Good luck!
1. Everything here is a recommendation. Feel free to ignore whatever you feel is unnecessary.
2. Stuff marked in blue are very minor things that I only put here because of my OCD, and that probably won't make a drastic change.
3. Stuff marked in red are crucial.
Metadata
Some of the tags either appear twice (this includes the title and source) or are inappropriate. Use these instead:
aliens proph nobster mazziv sings los del rio macarena
Ayylien Invasion
00:00:927 (4) - Try to make this slider straight, then shape it up a bit, like here:
00:04:126 (1) - Remove NC
00:04:708 (2) - NC
00:11:688 (5) - NC
00:12:124 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:996 (1) - This slider is way to close to 00:12:851 (6) - in comparison to the pattern before. Try increasing the spacing between these two.
00:14:596 (3) - Rotate this 7 degrees clockwise in place (to match the previous slider's rotation).
00:15:760 (2) - Rotate this 7 degrees anti-clockwise in place (to match the previous slider's rotation).
00:21:722 (1) - Since the notes before this are placed back and forth, it makes this note confusing to hit the way it's placed. Moving it below 00:21:576 (5) - and ___ 00:21:867 (2) - while keeping the DS would make more sense.
00:21:722 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:158 (1) - NC
00:24:485 (5) - NC
00:27:975 (3) - NC
00:28:411 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:937 (7,1) - Try increasing the spacing between these two.
00:36:264 (6,1) - ^
Ayy Insane
00:00:636 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:02:381 (4) - NC
00:07:616 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+G
00:21:722 (1,2) - Try increasing the spacing between these two.
00:26:521 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:828 (3,4,5,6) - Even for an insane diff, these jumps don't fit well. Try decreasing the spacing between these.
Mz's ayyy
You'll need to change the diffname to a more appropriate one (e.g Mz's Insane ayyy).
Change Ar to 9.1 (?)
00:02:672 (2) - NC
00:04:708 (1,2,3) - The distance between these doesn't match their timing at all. You'll probably need to heavily increase the spacing.
00:07:035 (1,2) - ^
00:06:453 (6,1) - Add a note between these two (Perhaps to stack on 00:07:035 (1) - ).
00:14:015 (8) - NC
00:14:306 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:668 (3) - NC
00:21:722 (4,1) - The jump between these two notes is way too big. You'll probably need to heavily decrease the spacing.
00:23:322 (6) - NC
In general - the increase in SV at 00:16:051 doesn't make any sense. You should probably change the SV to a lower one, then trim the sliders (and perhaps the jumps as well).
Hard Ayy
The problems here occurred mostly due to the spacing, in relation to the timing.
00:01:800 (3,1) - Increase the spacing between these two.
00:04:126 (5,1) - ^
00:06:453 (3,4) - Decrease the spacing between these two.
00:06:598 (4,1) - ^
00:14:015 (4) - NC
00:14:306 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:104 (2,3) - Increase the spacing between these two.
00:23:176 (1) - Remove NC
00:23:321 (2) - NC
00:23:176 (1,2) - Decrease the spacing between these two.
This got longer than I expected it to
Hopefully this won't be too painful to read.
Good luck!