late lol
S|1|2|3...6|7Will focus on playability since PR looks dead as fuck lol
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00:11:871 - Anti-mindblock : 00:12:391 (12391|6,13085|6,13778|6) - Move these to 5
00:15:512 (15512|6) - To 5 for the same reason as above
00:16:206 (16206|6) - ^
00:15:946 (15946|3) - Move this one to 4 to avoid the awkward left hand movement (or even better, to 5 if you don't mind)
00:19:067 (19067|3,19414|3) - You might want to move these to 4 for balance (following what you did previously at 00:17:420 - and 00:18:114 - )
00:27:825 - How about adding 1x-looking SVs to emphasize the glitchy sound effect ? I can do that for you if you wish to do so.
00:32:160 (32160|1,32246|3,32333|4,32333|2,32507|1) - Those notes, along with the Scratch, really feel awkward to play. I suggest doing something like
this to avoid putting everything on the left hand
00:32:680 (32680|2) - Move to 1 and uuuh, 00:32:680 (32680|5) - This one to 4, this way it makes a clean double stairs and you avoid the 1/2 jacking on 2
you currently have.
00:38:923 - Glitchy sounds, SV? You choose, same suggestion as previously.
00:40:744 - and 00:40:917 - Missing notes for the drum roll, you can probably add one on 7 and 5 respectively (right hand gallop).
00:41:177 (41177|1,41177|5) - 2 notes but only one note at 00:41:524 - ?
00:47:940 - For this part, I'll just show you something first :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3934476For me, 1/4 LNs are like normal notes and should play like normal notes to a certain extent. Following my logic, I turned all the 1/4 LNs into normal notes in the beginning of this part, and this is what happens. I don't know for you, but those 1/4 streams suddenly don't look very sexy to play at all.
From here on, I'll consider 1/4 LNs like normal notes for the sake of playability.
00:47:940 (47940|6,48114|5) - Move both notes 1 col to the right
00:48:287 (48287|2) - Move to 1 and 00:48:460 (48460|3) - to 2, 00:48:460 (48460|1) - to 4 and finally, 00:48:547 (48547|2) - to 1
00:48:634 (48634|4,48807|3) - Move 1 col to the left
00:49:327 (49327|3) - Move to 7, and
00:49:501 (49501|2,49501|4,49588|5,49588|1,49674|2,49674|4,49761|5,49848|4,49848|1,49934|2,49934|5) - All of this 1 col to the right
^ and if you do that, move 00:50:021 (50021|6) - to 4, obviously. Trilling using middle finger and index is much better than ring finger and thumb.
00:50:368 (50368|6) - Move to 4 as well due to the previous change
00:50:715 (50715|4) - Move 1 col to the right, and 00:50:715 (50715|2) - this one to 4.
00:51:062 (51062|7) - Move to 6 to avoid repetition with 00:51:235 (51235|7) -
00:51:408 (51408|3) - Move 1 col to the right again, and 00:51:408 (51408|1) - this one to 4 again.
00:52:102 (52102|5) - Move to 1, it's easier to do a [S12] chord than [S2].
00:52:796 (52796|3) - ^
00:53:489 (53489|1) - Extend this LN to the next red line (1/2 LN)
00:53:663 (53663|2,53749|3) - Move both of these 1 col to the right, and 00:53:663 (53663|4) - on 2
00:53:836 (53836|1,53836|0,54009|2) - Awkward
^ 00:53:836 (53836|1) - Move to 6 and 00:54:009 (54009|4) - to 4
00:55:050 -
Feels better to play this way without the 1/2 LNs anchors00:55:917 (55917|3,56264|1) - Swap those notes, 00:56:264 (56264|4) - move to 6 and 00:56:437 (56437|6) - to 4
^ 00:56:611 (56611|5,56784|6) - Ctrl + J and 00:56:957 (56957|5,57044|6,57131|5,57218|6) - Ctrl + J as well
00:57:651 (57651|6,57738|5,57825|6,57911|5,57998|4,58085|3,58171|4,58258|3) - My head uuuuugh
^ if you want to make it complex, it's better
this way01:01:293 (61293|7) - Extend to 1/2 and move 01:01:466 (61466|6,61466|7,61640|5,61813|4) - 1 col to the left
^ 01:01:813 (61813|3) - Move to 7 and 01:01:813 (61813|6) - to 3, then 01:02:333 (62333|6) - to 3 as well
01:02:507 (62507|7,62680|6) - Ctrl + J and 01:02:853 (62853|4) - to 5 and 01:02:853 (62853|7) - to 6
01:06:322 (66322|5,66408|4) - Move 1 col to the left
01:07:362 - RIP left hand heavy pattern
01:07:622 (67622|1,67622|4,67622|0) - should be on the previous red line
01:08:749 (68749|0) - 01:08:749 (68749|2) - No SFX, remove.
^
Pattern suggestion + snap fixpart 201:14:819 (74819|1,74992|3) - Ctrl + J for playability
01:17:246 (77246|1,77420|2) - ^
01:17:767 (77767|2,77940|1) - ^
01:30:946 - glitchy sounds, SV c: ?
01:32:333 (92333|2,92507|3) - Ctrl + J
^ 01:32:680 (92680|1) - to 7 and 01:32:680 (92680|2) - to 1
01:33:200 (93200|5) - to 2 for hand balance
01:34:934 (94934|6) - Move to 2 and then, 01:35:108 (95108|7) - to 3 and 01:35:108 (95108|4) - to 6 or 7.
01:35:975 (95975|6,96148|2) - Swap columns (don't change where they are in the timeline, just the columns)
01:37:189 - glitchy glitchy
01:38:749 (98749|4) - 1 col to the right and 01:38:836 (98836|3,98923|2) - swap the columns.
01:40:830 (100830|6) - Mmmh, move to 2 and 01:41:177 (101177|4) - to 6 (move 01:41:351 (101351|6) - somewhere else, preferably on 3). This to avoid a pseudo 3-notes jacking (hand-switching after 2 notes with my suggestion)
01:42:998 (102998|7,102998|3,103085|2,103085|6,103171|1,103171|5) - How about you swap the 1/4 LNs and 1/4 normal notes ? Keep the same flow but instead of the LNs you put normals, and instead of the normals you put LNs.
01:46:379 (106379|5) - to 6 and then 01:46:726 (106726|6) - to 1
01:48:460 (108460|7) - Move to either 3 or 6 to avoid 01:48:460 (108460|7,108634|7) -
01:50:888 (110888|2,110888|3,111062|3,111062|4,111235|5,111235|4,111408|5,111408|6,111582|6) - honestly not fan, instead I would prefer something like
this to avoid jackshields.
^
How to fix the following patternstoo lazy to do the rest of the diffs for today jej