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nora2r - VISION [OsuMania]

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Shinzo-
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Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, April 8, 2016 at 3:37:25 PM

Artist: nora2r
Title: VISION
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: SDVX III GRAVITY WARS KAC2012 オリジナル楽曲コンテスト Original Song Contest ULTIMATE MEDLEY HISTORIA Brian_Ex
BPM: 173
Filesize: 6082kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADV - 8Key (3.34 stars, 1111 notes)
  2. BSC - 8Key (1.31 stars, 308 notes)
  3. EXH - 8Key (4.44 stars, 1487 notes)
  4. NOV - 8Key (2.13 stars, 706 notes)
Download: nora2r - VISION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6

by 【GraveChaos】
by <strong>DE-CADE</strong>
BG by Brian_Ex
Last edited by Shinzo- , edited 50 times in total.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
YunoFanatic
EXH and ADV
20:36 YunoFanatic: hey
20:36 YunoFanatic: ashat
20:36 YunoFanatic: wanna start irc-ing
20:37 Shinzo-: ow u want irc
20:37 Shinzo-: hmmm ok then
20:37 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725903 nora2r - VISION [EXHAUST]]
20:37 Shinzo-: btw is Decade checking ur map for bub ?
20:37 YunoFanatic: no
20:38 YunoFanatic: dont expect.
20:38 Shinzo-: owww
20:38 Shinzo-: k then lets start
20:38 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725903 nora2r - VISION [EXHAUST]]
20:38 YunoFanatic: its hard to find a bn who will stick to a map that has 4k and 8k plus has an extra diffs.
20:38 Shinzo-: julie ?
20:38 Shinzo-: blocko tho
20:38 YunoFanatic: 00:04:934 (4934|2) -  im pretty sure the S key is made for this kind of sounds which is special to make a special movement from the fingers.
20:39 YunoFanatic: blocko blocko blocko
20:39 YunoFanatic: i dont know
20:39 Shinzo-: hmmm so what should i do with that ? ._
20:39 YunoFanatic: you move it to the S lmao
20:40 YunoFanatic: 00:14:992 (14992|1) -  this one is good too to have in the S key
20:40 Shinzo-: is S means 2nd column ? -_-
20:40 Shinzo-: S key = the special key ? (1K)
20:41 YunoFanatic: S key
20:41 YunoFanatic: the first column in 8k
20:41 Shinzo-: k then
20:42 YunoFanatic: 00:27:825 (27825|4,27998|4,28171|6,28345|6) -  does this really have to be a mini ln jack thing
20:42 Shinzo-: yeah :D
20:43 YunoFanatic: 00:53:142 (53142|7,53142|0) -  ctrl h its better for the ln to emphasize the sound in the s key
20:44 Shinzo-: hmmm nice one =w=
20:45 YunoFanatic: 01:54:530 (114530|7,114530|6,114530|1) -  really gonna end it with only 3 notes?
20:45 YunoFanatic: LIKE REALLY
20:45 YunoFanatic: LIKE YOURE NOT GOING TO EVEN ADD A NOTE IN THE S KEY TO IMPLIFY THE ENDING
20:45 YunoFanatic: tho its your decision
20:45 YunoFanatic: noice exh
20:45 Shinzo-: waw my bad
20:46 Shinzo-: how can i miss that x_x
20:46 *YunoFanatic slaps shinzo
20:46 Shinzo-: thanks for notice that hahahaha
20:46 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725901 nora2r - VISION [ADVANCED]]
20:46 *Shinzo- crying
20:46 YunoFanatic: 00:04:934 (4934|3) -  same with the exh diff
20:47 YunoFanatic: 00:07:536 (7536|2) -  move to seventh column since it has nothing to do in the 3rd column
20:47 Shinzo-: done
20:47 Shinzo-: pfft moved
20:49 YunoFanatic: 00:33:807 (33807|5,33894|6,33981|7) -  i just noticed. things like this, should be a trill instead of a stair to emphasize the sound youre mapping.
20:49 YunoFanatic: tho the ball is in your court.
20:50 YunoFanatic: 00:53:836 (53836|1) -  change into a ln end it on 00:54:009 (54009|6) -  and place it on the s key
20:50 Shinzo-: hmmm nice idea
20:51 Shinzo-: 01:30:126 -  u mean this ?
20:53 YunoFanatic: maybe idk
20:53 YunoFanatic: ha
20:53 YunoFanatic: well thats all seems your ez diffs are neat
20:53 YunoFanatic: going to save logs
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

YunoFanatic wrote:

EXH and ADV
20:36 YunoFanatic: hey
20:36 YunoFanatic: ashat
20:36 YunoFanatic: wanna start irc-ing
20:37 Shinzo-: ow u want irc
20:37 Shinzo-: hmmm ok then
20:37 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725903 nora2r - VISION [EXHAUST]]
20:37 Shinzo-: btw is Decade checking ur map for bub ?
20:37 YunoFanatic: no
20:38 YunoFanatic: dont expect.
20:38 Shinzo-: owww
20:38 Shinzo-: k then lets start
20:38 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725903 nora2r - VISION [EXHAUST]]
20:38 YunoFanatic: its hard to find a bn who will stick to a map that has 4k and 8k plus has an extra diffs.
20:38 Shinzo-: julie ?
20:38 Shinzo-: blocko tho
20:38 YunoFanatic: 00:04:934 (4934|2) -  im pretty sure the S key is made for this kind of sounds which is special to make a special movement from the fingers.
20:39 YunoFanatic: blocko blocko blocko
20:39 YunoFanatic: i dont know
20:39 Shinzo-: hmmm so what should i do with that ? ._
20:39 YunoFanatic: you move it to the S lmao
20:40 YunoFanatic: 00:14:992 (14992|1) -  this one is good too to have in the S key
20:40 Shinzo-: is S means 2nd column ? -_-
20:40 Shinzo-: S key = the special key ? (1K)
20:41 YunoFanatic: S key
20:41 YunoFanatic: the first column in 8k
20:41 Shinzo-: k then
20:42 YunoFanatic: 00:27:825 (27825|4,27998|4,28171|6,28345|6) -  does this really have to be a mini ln jack thing
20:42 Shinzo-: yeah :D
20:43 YunoFanatic: 00:53:142 (53142|7,53142|0) -  ctrl h its better for the ln to emphasize the sound in the s key
20:44 Shinzo-: hmmm nice one =w=
20:45 YunoFanatic: 01:54:530 (114530|7,114530|6,114530|1) -  really gonna end it with only 3 notes?
20:45 YunoFanatic: LIKE REALLY
20:45 YunoFanatic: LIKE YOURE NOT GOING TO EVEN ADD A NOTE IN THE S KEY TO IMPLIFY THE ENDING
20:45 YunoFanatic: tho its your decision
20:45 YunoFanatic: noice exh
20:45 Shinzo-: waw my bad
20:46 Shinzo-: how can i miss that x_x
20:46 *YunoFanatic slaps shinzo
20:46 Shinzo-: thanks for notice that hahahaha
20:46 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725901 nora2r - VISION [ADVANCED]]
20:46 *Shinzo- crying
20:46 YunoFanatic: 00:04:934 (4934|3) -  same with the exh diff
20:47 YunoFanatic: 00:07:536 (7536|2) -  move to seventh column since it has nothing to do in the 3rd column
20:47 Shinzo-: done
20:47 Shinzo-: pfft moved
20:49 YunoFanatic: 00:33:807 (33807|5,33894|6,33981|7) -  i just noticed. things like this, should be a trill instead of a stair to emphasize the sound youre mapping.
20:49 YunoFanatic: tho the ball is in your court.
20:50 YunoFanatic: 00:53:836 (53836|1) -  change into a ln end it on 00:54:009 (54009|6) -  and place it on the s key
20:50 Shinzo-: hmmm nice idea
20:51 Shinzo-: 01:30:126 -  u mean this ?
20:53 YunoFanatic: maybe idk
20:53 YunoFanatic: ha
20:53 YunoFanatic: well thats all seems your ez diffs are neat
20:53 YunoFanatic: going to save logs
lol thanks for mod yunoo :D :D
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Nivrad00
Hiya

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8
[BASIC]
01:26:784 - patterns like this won't make sense for people who use right scratch instead of left scratch x:
01:01:466 - maybe make this a single note? it sounds almost the same as the other single notes
[NOVICE]
01:21:235 - could add note here for consistency with 01:24:009 -
01:54:530 - you have a note on lane 1 in BASIC and ADVANCED, but not here. maybe add
[ADVANCED]
00:17:420 - add a note? (the next chords have 3 notes but this one only has 2)
00:44:472 (44472|0) - this note doesn't seem to fit because there's no loud noise
01:32:333 - maybe put a note on lane 1 to match 00:22:969 -
[EXHAUST]
00:18:807 - maybe add notes. all the other chords have 4 notes, but this one has 2
00:44:472 (44472|0) - this note doesn't seem to fit because there's no loud noise
00:54:356 - missing a long note?
01:31:640 - this pattern is really heavy on left hand if the player uses left thumb. it looks cramped anyways, maybe shift it to the right a little?
01:32:333 - maybe put a note on lane 1 to match 00:22:969 -
01:52:449 - this is also really heavy for left hand
01:54:530 - you have a note on lane 1 in BASIC and ADVANCED, but not here. maybe add

short mod because your mapping is already great. good luck!
PANDAAAAAAAA
745 posts
Joined September 2012
PANDAAAAAAAA
first time mod 8K.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
HP and OD 7 in BASIC and NOVICE.

i think the pattern are little weird and doesn't smooch for press the keys, try my pattern?
[EXHAUST]
00:01:119 - add to 7
00:01:466 (1466|3,1640|3) - move to 6
00:01:813 (1813|5) - move to 7
00:01:986 (1986|5) - move to 4
00:02:160 (2160|7,2333|7) - move to 3
00:02:507 (2507|7) - move to 7
00:02:680 (2680|7) - move to 3
00:02:853 (2853|2) - move to 2
00:03:547 (3547|5) - move to 7
00:03:894 (3894|1) - move to 3
00:04:067 (4067|2,4154|3) - move to 6 and 7
00:04:241 (4241|6) - move to 4
00:04:414 (4414|3) - move to 2
00:04:588 (4588|6,4761|6,4934|6) - move to 3
00:04:674 (4674|5,4848|5) - move to 7
00:04:934 (4934|2) - move to 8
00:05:455 (5455|7) - move to 4
00:06:495 (6495|3) - move to 7
00:06:582 (6582|2) - move to 2
00:06:668 (6668|1) - move to 4
00:06:929 (6929|6) - move to 3
00:07:102 (7102|3) - move to 2
00:07:189 (7189|2) - move to 4
00:07:362 (7362|1) - move to 3
00:07:536 (7536|6) - move to 4
00:07:709 (7709|5,7882|5,8229|5) - move to 2
00:09:096 (9096|3,9183|5) - move to 6 and 7
00:09:270 (9270|6) - move to 2
00:09:443 (9443|1) - move to 4
00:09:616 (9616|6,9703|5) - move to 3 and 8
00:09:790 (9790|6) - move to 2
00:09:877 (9877|2) - move to 6
00:10:483 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411524
00:11:871 (11871|3) - delete
00:12:218 - add to 5
00:11:871 - 00:13:952 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411532
00:13:952 - 00:14:645 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411538
00:14:645 - add to 5
00:14:992 (14992|1) - move to 6
00:14:819 (14819|3) - move to 7
00:14:905 (14905|2) - move to 4
00:14:992 (14992|6) - move to 2
00:15:166 (15166|4,15252|3) - move to 7 and 4
00:15:339 (15339|6,15339|2) - move to 2 and 8
00:15:512 (15512|3,15599|2) - move to 7 and 4
00:15:686 - add 1/2 beat LN to 3
00:15:859 (15859|5,15946|4) - move to 7 and 4
00:16:033 (16033|3) - move to 2
00:16:206 (16206|5,16293|4) - move to 7 and 4
00:16:379 (16379|3) - move to 2
00:16:379 - add 1/2 beat LN to 5
00:16:640 (16640|5) - move to 4
00:16:726 (16726|4,16813|4) - move to 2 and 3
00:16:813 (16813|7) - move to 6
00:16:900 (16900|3,16986|2) - move to 5 and 7
00:17:073 (17073|5) - move to 8
00:17:160 (17160|1,17246|2,17333|3) - move to 654
00:17:420 (17420|4) - move to 6
00:22:969 (22969|5) - release at 00:23:142 this note has 1/2 beat
00:23:316 (23316|2) - 1/2 beat too
00:23:663 (23663|3) - release at 00:23:836
00:23:923 (23923|4) - ^ 00:24:096
00:25:744 (25744|4,26090|2,26437|3,26697|4) - same as above
00:28:518 (28518|6,28865|4,29212|1,29472|3) - ^
00:31:293 (31293|6,31640|6,31986|6,32246|3) - 1/2 beat for them
00:34:067 (34067|6,34414|3,34761|4,35021|5) - ^
00:36:842 (36842|4,37189|1,37536|2,37796|3) - ^
00:39:616 (39616|4,39963|1,40310|2,40570|3) - ^
00:42:391 (42391|3) - release at 00:42:564 and add new LN at 00:42:738
00:43:085 (43085|5,43778|4) - which instruments do you follow?
01:32:333 (92333|5,92680|2,93027|7,93287|4) - 1/2 beat
01:35:108 (95108|4,95455|2,95801|5,96062|4) - ^
01:37:882 (97882|6,98229|4,98576|5,98836|3) - ^
01:43:431 (103431|3) - move to 5
01:43:778 (103778|3,104125|4,104385|5) - 1/2 beat
01:46:900 (106900|2,107160|3) - ^
01:49:674 (109674|6) - release at 01:49:848
01:50:021 (110021|1) - start at 01:49:934

bad mod lol, first time mod 8K :o
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Nivrad00 wrote:

Hiya

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8
[BASIC]
01:26:784 - patterns like this won't make sense for people who use right scratch instead of left scratch x: yea gonna consider that
01:01:466 - maybe make this a single note? it sounds almost the same as the other single notes hmmm okay =w=
[NOVICE]
01:21:235 - could add note here for consistency with 01:24:009 - wow nice catch
01:54:530 - you have a note on lane 1 in BASIC and ADVANCED, but not here. maybe add hehhee yea
[ADVANCED]
00:17:420 - add a note? (the next chords have 3 notes but this one only has 2) aww my bad x_x
00:44:472 (44472|0) - this note doesn't seem to fit because there's no loud noise ahahaha wrong placing, it should be on 00:44:819 - nice catch thanks
01:32:333 - maybe put a note on lane 1 to match 00:22:969 - deleted on 00:22:969 -
[EXHAUST]
00:18:807 - maybe add notes. all the other chords have 4 notes, but this one has 2 hey omg nice catch
00:44:472 (44472|0) - this note doesn't seem to fit because there's no loud noise lol it should be 00:44:819 - thanks for notice that x_x
00:54:356 - missing a long note? oh yeah xD
01:31:640 - this pattern is really heavy on left hand if the player uses left thumb. it looks cramped anyways, maybe shift it to the right a little? i dont think so,but gonna consider that
01:32:333 - maybe put a note on lane 1 to match 00:22:969 - hmmm okok
01:52:449 - this is also really heavy for left hand hmmm looking at the note count, its same xD
01:54:530 - you have a note on lane 1 in BASIC and ADVANCED, but not here. maybe add yep added

short mod because your mapping is already great. good luck!
whoa Very Helpfull mod
Thanks for the mod and star Nivrad >w<

nowsmart wrote:

first time mod 8K.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
HP and OD 7 in BASIC and NOVICE. lol forgot those things

i think the pattern are little weird and doesn't smooch for press the keys, try my pattern?
[EXHAUST]
00:01:119 - add to 7
00:01:466 (1466|3,1640|3) - move to 6
00:01:813 (1813|5) - move to 7
00:01:986 (1986|5) - move to 4
00:02:160 (2160|7,2333|7) - move to 3
00:02:507 (2507|7) - move to 7
00:02:680 (2680|7) - move to 3
00:02:853 (2853|2) - move to 2
00:03:547 (3547|5) - move to 7
00:03:894 (3894|1) - move to 3
00:04:067 (4067|2,4154|3) - move to 6 and 7
00:04:241 (4241|6) - move to 4
00:04:414 (4414|3) - move to 2
00:04:588 (4588|6,4761|6,4934|6) - move to 3
00:04:674 (4674|5,4848|5) - move to 7
00:04:934 (4934|2) - move to 8
00:05:455 (5455|7) - move to 4
00:06:495 (6495|3) - move to 7
00:06:582 (6582|2) - move to 2
00:06:668 (6668|1) - move to 4
00:06:929 (6929|6) - move to 3
00:07:102 (7102|3) - move to 2
00:07:189 (7189|2) - move to 4
00:07:362 (7362|1) - move to 3
00:07:536 (7536|6) - move to 4
00:07:709 (7709|5,7882|5,8229|5) - move to 2
00:09:096 (9096|3,9183|5) - move to 6 and 7
00:09:270 (9270|6) - move to 2
00:09:443 (9443|1) - move to 4
00:09:616 (9616|6,9703|5) - move to 3 and 8
00:09:790 (9790|6) - move to 2
00:09:877 (9877|2) - move to 6
00:10:483 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411524 ummm i dont think so xD
00:11:871 (11871|3) - delete
00:12:218 - add to 5 why ?
00:11:871 - 00:13:952 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411532
00:13:952 - 00:14:645 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411538
00:14:645 - add to 5 noo
00:14:992 (14992|1) - move to 6
00:14:819 (14819|3) - move to 7
00:14:905 (14905|2) - move to 4
00:14:992 (14992|6) - move to 2
00:15:166 (15166|4,15252|3) - move to 7 and 4
00:15:339 (15339|6,15339|2) - move to 2 and 8
00:15:512 (15512|3,15599|2) - move to 7 and 4
00:15:686 - add 1/2 beat LN to 3
00:15:859 (15859|5,15946|4) - move to 7 and 4
00:16:033 (16033|3) - move to 2
00:16:206 (16206|5,16293|4) - move to 7 and 4
00:16:379 (16379|3) - move to 2
00:16:379 - add 1/2 beat LN to 5
00:16:640 (16640|5) - move to 4
00:16:726 (16726|4,16813|4) - move to 2 and 3
00:16:813 (16813|7) - move to 6
00:16:900 (16900|3,16986|2) - move to 5 and 7
00:17:073 (17073|5) - move to 8
00:17:160 (17160|1,17246|2,17333|3) - move to 654
00:17:420 (17420|4) - move to 6
00:22:969 (22969|5) - release at 00:23:142 this note has 1/2 beat
00:23:316 (23316|2) - 1/2 beat too
00:23:663 (23663|3) - release at 00:23:836
00:23:923 (23923|4) - ^ 00:24:096
00:25:744 (25744|4,26090|2,26437|3,26697|4) - same as above
00:28:518 (28518|6,28865|4,29212|1,29472|3) - ^
00:31:293 (31293|6,31640|6,31986|6,32246|3) - 1/2 beat for them
00:34:067 (34067|6,34414|3,34761|4,35021|5) - ^
00:36:842 (36842|4,37189|1,37536|2,37796|3) - ^
00:39:616 (39616|4,39963|1,40310|2,40570|3) - ^
00:42:391 (42391|3) - release at 00:42:564 and add new LN at 00:42:738
00:43:085 (43085|5,43778|4) - which instruments do you follow? hahhaa my bad
01:32:333 (92333|5,92680|2,93027|7,93287|4) - 1/2 beat
01:35:108 (95108|4,95455|2,95801|5,96062|4) - ^
01:37:882 (97882|6,98229|4,98576|5,98836|3) - ^
01:43:431 (103431|3) - move to 5
01:43:778 (103778|3,104125|4,104385|5) - 1/2 beat
01:46:900 (106900|2,107160|3) - ^
01:49:674 (109674|6) - release at 01:49:848
01:50:021 (110021|1) - start at 01:49:934

bad mod lol, first time mod 8K :o
whoa what a mod...
no reply means OK
thanks so much for the mod nowsmart >w< <3
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
Yoossshhhh. Try to mod 8k <(")

8K=1~8
Click me!
[General]Mungkin karna ini 7K + 1 mungkin leih baik use special keynya di checklist

[EXH]add LN? like as 00:53:836 (53836|0,54009|6,54096|5) - ada suara tet tet tut tut tet tet tet ... playback 50%
00:54:616 - Add LN? ada suara tet tet tet tet ... playback 50%
00:49:067 - ^
00:53:142 (53142|0,53836|0) - sebenernya w bingung. ini 7K + 1 kan? lah ini kok ada LN dimari. kan buat FX harusnya?

[ADV]00:53:142 (53142|0,53836|0) - sama seperti EXH

[NOV]00:10:483 (10483|7,10830|5,11177|3,11524|1) - ini LN mungkin lebih baik dibikin 1/2LN? sama kek adv
00:12:044 - missing?
00:17:073 - ~ 00:20:194 - add di red line? buat flow? dan lagi pula di 00:11:871 - ~ 00:17:073 - ente add di red line
00:49:154 (49154|5) - move to 8? anggap aja same sound sama 00:48:981 (48981|7) -
00:51:235 (51235|4) - ^ ke 4?
00:54:703 (54703|5) - ^ 7

[BASIC]just suggest. add di 00:25:223 - 00:25:570 -.. dbikin hand kiri kanan kiri kanan kiri.
applied ke bagian lagi kalo di apply xD

Well Goodluck =w=)b
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Yoossshhhh. Try to mod 8k <(")

8K=1~8
Click me!
[General]Mungkin karna ini 7K + 1 mungkin leih baik use special keynya di checklist

[EXH]add LN? like as 00:53:836 (53836|0,54009|6,54096|5) - ada suara tet tet tut tut tet tet tet ... playback 50%
00:54:616 - Add LN? ada suara tet tet tet tet ... playback 50% jelek ah
00:49:067 - ^
00:53:142 (53142|0,53836|0) - sebenernya w bingung. ini 7K + 1 kan? lah ini kok ada LN dimari. kan buat FX harusnya? iya itu kan ada whosh nya coba di denger lagi.l.. terus yg satuny lagi kan termasuk FX

[ADV]00:53:142 (53142|0,53836|0) - sama seperti EXH sama seperti EXH

[NOV]00:10:483 (10483|7,10830|5,11177|3,11524|1) - ini LN mungkin lebih baik dibikin 1/2LN? sama kek adv nggk ah :P
00:12:044 - missing? oiya
00:17:073 - ~ 00:20:194 - add di red line? buat flow? dan lagi pula di 00:11:871 - ~ 00:17:073 - ente add di red line susah coeg
00:49:154 (49154|5) - move to 8? anggap aja same sound sama 00:48:981 (48981|7) - boleh boleh
00:51:235 (51235|4) - ^ ke 4? ^
00:54:703 (54703|5) - ^ 7 ^

[BASIC]just suggest. add di 00:25:223 - 00:25:570 -.. dbikin hand kiri kanan kiri kanan kiri. rada susah :(
applied ke bagian lagi kalo di apply xD

Well Goodluck =w=)b
thanks mod nya Amiiiiiii~
[-Star_Lenz-]
583 posts
Joined September 2014
[-Star_Lenz-]
Hi Shin-san >w<
You req mod for chat :>
Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

BASIC
00:17:420 (17420|4) - move col 7
00:18:807 (18807|3) - ^ col 5
00:25:744 (25744|2) - ^ col 1 for balanced
00:57:304 (57304|7) - move col 7
01:42:218 (102218|6,102564|5,102738|4) - Geser kekiri 1 col

NOVICE
00:21:408 (21408|6,21582|7) - ctrl+g
00:30:946 - add note 00:30:599 (30599|7,30599|4,31293|7,31293|4) - same here
00:33:720 (33720|5,33894|6) - ctrl+g
00:36:148 (36148|6) - move col 8 ?
00:36:495 - add note
00:45:166 (45166|7,45166|0) - Why ? tidak di jadikan LN :/ make to LN 00:45:166 (45166|7,45166|0) - stop LN 00:46:553 -
01:03:374 - add note col 1 & 01:03:720 - add note col 2
01:34:761 - add note

ADVANCED
00:03:547 - add note
00:05:975 (5975|2) - move col 4
00:06:322 - add note
00:09:096 - ^
00:22:622 - add note
00:56:351 (56351|3) - move col 7
01:06:842 - & 01:07:189 - add note ?

bad mod lol, first time mod 8K :o

Good luck shin-san >w<
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi Shin-san >w<
You req mod for chat :>
Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

BASIC
00:17:420 (17420|4) - move col 7 ok
00:18:807 (18807|3) - ^ col 5 ok
00:25:744 (25744|2) - ^ col 1 for balanced column 1 is for FX (whoosh whoosh)
00:57:304 (57304|7) - move col 7 ok
01:42:218 (102218|6,102564|5,102738|4) - Geser kekiri 1 col nice

NOVICE
00:21:408 (21408|6,21582|7) - ctrl+g ok also re-arranged
00:30:946 - add note 00:30:599 (30599|7,30599|4,31293|7,31293|4) - same here no its hard
00:33:720 (33720|5,33894|6) - ctrl+g ok
00:36:148 (36148|6) - move col 8 ? ok
00:36:495 - add note noo
00:45:166 (45166|7,45166|0) - Why ? tidak di jadikan LN :/ make to LN 00:45:166 (45166|7,45166|0) - stop LN 00:46:553 - hmmm w pikir pikir dulu
01:03:374 - add note col 1 & 01:03:720 - add note col 2 susah ih :V
01:34:761 - add note no

ADVANCED
00:03:547 - add note no
00:05:975 (5975|2) - move col 4 nice
00:06:322 - add note same
00:09:096 - ^ same
00:22:622 - add note ntar w pikir pikir dulu wkwkkw
00:56:351 (56351|3) - move col 7 re-arranged
01:06:842 - & 01:07:189 - add note ? ok

bad mod lol, first time mod 8K :o

Good luck shin-san >w<
ayyy thanks for mod Lenzzz >w<
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Hi there Shin
hope it will help :3
How I do mod
My mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappyness
Nyaho
Collumn 8K = X/1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[NOVICE]
00:01:119 (1119|7,1813|7,2507|7) - you follow that drum sound so i suggest 00:04:588 (4588|1) - remove this note or move to another collumn since it's not the same sound
01:08:056 (68056|5,68229|1,68316|3) - rythm could be abit too hard here just an opinion
01:29:732 (89732|6) - move to 2 ( remenber that the first collumn is X not 1 ) also doing this move cause this pattern would look super nice in 2 in my opinion
01:54:530 (114530|5) - you could move this one to 6 for pattern
[BASIC]
01:05:975 (65975|4,66322|3,66668|5,67015|2) - Ctrl+H to hand balance here : 01:05:628 (65628|6,65975|4) -
01:07:362 (67362|6) - if you move above you might change this LN into a left hand collumn
01:37:189 (97189|5) - I suggest moving this LN to 01:37:362 (97362|5) - then add a note here : 01:37:189 (97189|7) - sounds more accurate to your pattern and the song itself I think

Sorry for really short mod ;w; take a star desu
Good Luck , Have a nice day Shin~ ^^/
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Shin
hope it will help :3
How I do mod
My mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappyness
Nyaho
Collumn 8K = X/1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[NOVICE]
00:01:119 (1119|7,1813|7,2507|7) - you follow that drum sound so i suggest 00:04:588 (4588|1) - remove this note or move to another collumn since it's not the same sound okay moved to another column
01:08:056 (68056|5,68229|1,68316|3) - rythm could be abit too hard here just an opinion hahaha fixed
01:29:732 (89732|6) - move to 2 ( remenber that the first collumn is X not 1 ) also doing this move cause this pattern would look super nice in 2 in my opinion wow yeah super nice thanks >w<
01:54:530 (114530|5) - you could move this one to 6 for pattern ok
[BASIC]
01:05:975 (65975|4,66322|3,66668|5,67015|2) - Ctrl+H to hand balance here : 01:05:628 (65628|6,65975|4) - ahh nice
01:07:362 (67362|6) - if you move above you might change this LN into a left hand collumn okay
01:37:189 (97189|5) - I suggest moving this LN to 01:37:362 (97362|5) - then add a note here : 01:37:189 (97189|7) - sounds more accurate to your pattern and the song itself I think wat ? noo

Sorry for really short mod ;w; take a star desu
Good Luck , Have a nice day Shin~ ^^/
thanks for mod and star eter <3 >w<
Jinjin
886 posts
Joined September 2013
Jinjin
Sorry for late mod ;w;

but here we go~

|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[BASIC]
Sightread playtest and I got an SS, which is good =w=
My only worry is that this might be biased for people who uses the left scratch. For the right scratch people, they have to press two notes in the same hand a lot.

[NOVICE]
00:17:073 (17073|2) - move to 6 and 00:17:246 (17246|5) - to 2 to continue the pattern that you did at 00:14:299 (14299|6,14472|4,14645|2) -

01:03:027 (63027|5) - because it's the same pitch, I'd move this to 2

01:03:200 (63200|7,63200|4,63374|1,63547|7,63547|5,63720|2,63894|4,63894|6,64067|3,64241|7,64241|2,64414|6) - Suggested pattern: http://puu.sh/jruPT/ad65a34c6a.png (it feels really nice to play with the rhythm / pitch here. If you think this inflates the sr a bit, then you can delete one note from each of the second beat)

01:06:668 (66668|6,66668|3,66842|6,67015|2,67015|5,67189|5) - Maybe put one of those minijacks on the left hand cuz it's really focused on the right hand atm?

01:20:541 (80541|0,80715|0,80888|0,81062|0) - I find the scratch minijacks here to be a bit too challenging for novice diff, maybe it's just me xD

[ADVANCED]
00:40:310 (40310|2,40310|3,40483|4,40570|3,40657|1,40657|5,40830|2,40830|4) - might be too focused on the left hand? (Especially for those people who use left hand spacebar). Maybe you can move 00:40:310 (40310|3,40483|4,40657|5) - these one column to the right

01:10:137 - This part of the music where you use the scratch key + 2 note chords on the right hand - again biased favoringly to the left hand scratch users xD might wanna move some of those chords to the left hand so it balances out

[EXHAUST]
01:31:640 (91640|4,91640|3,91726|5,91726|2,91813|4,91813|3,91900|5,91900|2) - Biased against the left hand spacebar users xp maybe make this whole section symmetrical respect to the spacebar column?

01:48:981 - This part is reeeeeeeeeeeaaaally hard to play (uncomfortable patterns ;-;) Try changing the LN placement a bit

Good luck >w<
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

iJinjin wrote:

Sorry for late mod ;w;

but here we go~

|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[BASIC]
Sightread playtest and I got an SS, which is good =w=
My only worry is that this might be biased for people who uses the left scratch. For the right scratch people, they have to press two notes in the same hand a lot.

[NOVICE]
00:17:073 (17073|2) - move to 6 and 00:17:246 (17246|5) - to 2 to continue the pattern that you did at 00:14:299 (14299|6,14472|4,14645|2) -

01:03:027 (63027|5) - because it's the same pitch, I'd move this to 2

01:03:200 (63200|7,63200|4,63374|1,63547|7,63547|5,63720|2,63894|4,63894|6,64067|3,64241|7,64241|2,64414|6) - Suggested pattern: http://puu.sh/jruPT/ad65a34c6a.png (it feels really nice to play with the rhythm / pitch here. If you think this inflates the sr a bit, then you can delete one note from each of the second beat) ok followed the pic

01:06:668 (66668|6,66668|3,66842|6,67015|2,67015|5,67189|5) - Maybe put one of those minijacks on the left hand cuz it's really focused on the right hand atm? hmmm yeah

01:20:541 (80541|0,80715|0,80888|0,81062|0) - I find the scratch minijacks here to be a bit too challenging for novice diff, maybe it's just me xD fine then :3 re-arranged

[ADVANCED]
00:40:310 (40310|2,40310|3,40483|4,40570|3,40657|1,40657|5,40830|2,40830|4) - might be too focused on the left hand? (Especially for those people who use left hand spacebar). Maybe you can move 00:40:310 (40310|3,40483|4,40657|5) - these one column to the right nice

01:10:137 - This part of the music where you use the scratch key + 2 note chords on the right hand - again biased favoringly to the left hand scratch users xD might wanna move some of those chords to the left hand so it balances out ok then

[EXHAUST]
01:31:640 (91640|4,91640|3,91726|5,91726|2,91813|4,91813|3,91900|5,91900|2) - Biased against the left hand spacebar users xp maybe make this whole section symmetrical respect to the spacebar column? re-arranged xD

01:48:981 - This part is reeeeeeeeeeeaaaally hard to play (uncomfortable patterns ;-;) Try changing the LN placement a bit ahh yeah ill try to re-arrange this part

Good luck >w<
Thanks for mod Jin :D <3
very helfull >w<
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Hi Ken
Balesan M4M
Sorry segini doang ._.

nora2r - VISION



Column
|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[EXH]
Mods
  1. 00:02:507 (2507|1) - Move to |2|. It sounds like that. And check 00:07:709 (7709|1,7882|1,8056|1,8229|1)
  2. 00:11:351 - Make LN from here until 00:11:871 for the Frequency change. Check 00:14:992 (14992|5,15686|2) to get the gist of what I mean here. Suggestion on the pattern around here:
    1. 00:11:177 (11177|3,11351|3) - Move this to |5|
    2. 00:11:177 (11177|2,11351|2) - Move this to |3|
    3. 00:11:871 (11871|3) - Move to |1|
    4. 00:11:524 (11524|2,11524|1) - Move one column to the right.
      Fits more (4 LNs Jack)
  3. 00:31:640 - Create LN from here until 00:32:680 for the frequency-change sound. Like 00:14:992 (14992|5,15686|2) . Anywhere is okay.
  4. 00:33:720 - Maybe you can try pattern like http://puu.sh/juxxC/870156a804.png since it sounds like that.
  5. 00:40:570 - There's a snare sound here, so add one more note. Add on |6| and switch the 00:40:657 (40657|1,40830|2) column are more encouraged for the symmetry.
  6. 00:43:778 (43778|4,43865|5,43952|6,44038|3,44125|4,44212|5) - Move one column to the right. Plays better, actually.
  7. 00:44:645 - Create one LN from here until 00:44:819 for the frequency-change sound. On |2| aer encouraged.

[ADV]
Mods
  1. 00:14:385 (14385|5,16813|3,17160|6) - Hmm. consider these Jacks pls. EXH don't have these.
  2. 00:31:293 (31293|6,31640|6,31986|6) - Hmm IDK, but this kind of LNs proved to be harder than the EXH one. Suggest to make it same as EXH.
  3. 01:54:183 (114183|6,114183|0) - Switch the Hitsound. To balancing the Hitsound placement (S for the Frequency Impulse)

Good
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Ken
Balesan M4M
Sorry segini doang ._.

nora2r - VISION



Column
|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[EXH]
Mods
  1. 00:02:507 (2507|1) - Move to |2|. It sounds like that. And check 00:07:709 (7709|1,7882|1,8056|1,8229|1)
  2. 00:11:351 - Make LN from here until 00:11:871 for the Frequency change. Check 00:14:992 (14992|5,15686|2) to get the gist of what I mean here. Suggestion on the pattern around here:
    1. 00:11:177 (11177|3,11351|3) - Move this to |5|
    2. 00:11:177 (11177|2,11351|2) - Move this to |3|
    3. 00:11:871 (11871|3) - Move to |1|
    4. 00:11:524 (11524|2,11524|1) - Move one column to the right.
      Fits more (4 LNs Jack)
      sorry but i dont know why, i dont really like it xD
  3. 00:31:640 - Create LN from here until 00:32:680 for the frequency-change sound. Like 00:14:992 (14992|5,15686|2) . Anywhere is okay.
  4. 00:33:720 - Maybe you can try pattern like http://puu.sh/juxxC/870156a804.png since it sounds like that.
  5. 00:40:570 - There's a snare sound here, so add one more note. Add on |6| and switch the 00:40:657 (40657|1,40830|2) column are more encouraged for the symmetry.
  6. 00:43:778 (43778|4,43865|5,43952|6,44038|3,44125|4,44212|5) - Move one column to the right. Plays better, actually.
  7. 00:44:645 - Create one LN from here until 00:44:819 for the frequency-change sound. On |2| aer encouraged. ill keep it for now

[ADV]
Mods
  1. 00:14:385 (14385|5,16813|3,17160|6) - Hmm. consider these Jacks pls. EXH don't have these.
  2. 00:31:293 (31293|6,31640|6,31986|6) - Hmm IDK, but this kind of LNs proved to be harder than the EXH one. Suggest to make it same as EXH.
  3. 01:54:183 (114183|6,114183|0) - Switch the Hitsound. To balancing the Hitsound placement (S for the Frequency Impulse)

Good
No reply means OK
Thanks Nin:V
-SoraGami-
951 posts
Joined March 2014
-SoraGami-
Aaaaaaaa!!! the song and the patterns <3

nevermind me, just shooting stars hihi
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

-SoraGami- wrote:

Aaaaaaaa!!! the song and the patterns <3

nevermind me, just shooting stars hihi
omg 3 star ?
thank you sora >w<
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
hi...
too hard..
can't find mistake~
Reyzra
739 posts
Joined May 2013
Reyzra
hi shinzo :D
comin for m4m mod that i req~

this is just some suggestion feel free to ignore it ;)
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

BSC
00:26:090 (26090|2,26437|4,26697|5,26957|6,27304|6) - move 1 col to left, judging from this 00:23:663 (23663|2,23923|4,24183|5,24530|5) -
00:43:778 (43778|0) - move to col 2
00:58:345 (58345|0,58345|7,58692|5,58692|0,59038|0,59038|3) - is this same pitch? how about putting it in same col? your choice though lol
00:58:345 (58345|7,58692|5,58692|0,59038|3,59038|0,114183|0,114530|4) - move 1 col to the right
seems pretty neat note here dont find any further problem

NOV
00:21:235 (21235|1) - move to 3
00:21:408 (21408|7,21582|5) - move 2 col to the left
00:22:622 (22622|4,22622|7) - move 1 col to the left
00:28:171 (28171|3) - move to col 3
^if this apply, 00:28:345 (28345|2) - move to col 5
00:30:773 (30773|1,30946|2) - CTRL + G
00:33:894 (33894|5,34067|1,34067|3) - Move 1 col to the left
00:42:564 (42564|4) - Move 1 col to the left
00:43:085 (43085|7,43085|2) - del one of these notes?
00:43:431 add note?
00:57:651 (57651|4,57998|5) - move 1 col to the left
01:05:975 (65975|3,65975|1) - move 1 col to the right
01:42:391 (102391|3) - move to 5
and dont find any after this

ADV
00:14:385 (14385|1) - move to col 6? just like this 00:16:726 (16726|3,16813|3,17073|6,17160|6) -
00:50:368 (50368|4) - move to 6?
00:59:385 add note col 4
01:01:466 (61466|6) - move to col 4
01:31:986 (91986|2) - move to col 4
01:37:189 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3527163
done for this diff, dont find any problem

EXH
00:20:801 (20801|1) - move to 6?
00:22:622 add 1 more note here?
00:41:004 i heard a finish here add note?
00:42:911 (42911|1,42998|2,43085|3) - CTRL + G
00:44:472 i still hear stream hit until 00:45:166 maybe adding note?
and done~
nice map shinzo keep it up~ :)
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Reyzra wrote:

hi shinzo :D
comin for m4m mod that i req~

this is just some suggestion feel free to ignore it ;)
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

BSC
00:26:090 (26090|2,26437|4,26697|5,26957|6,27304|6) - move 1 col to left, judging from this 00:23:663 (23663|2,23923|4,24183|5,24530|5) -
00:43:778 (43778|0) - move to col 2 ok
00:58:345 (58345|0,58345|7,58692|5,58692|0,59038|0,59038|3) - is this same pitch? how about putting it in same col? your choice though lol its will be hard for me :V lol xD
00:58:345 (58345|7,58692|5,58692|0,59038|3,59038|0,114183|0,114530|4) - move 1 col to the right
seems pretty neat note here dont find any further problem stuck :V

NOV
00:21:235 (21235|1) - move to 3 ok
00:21:408 (21408|7,21582|5) - move 2 col to the left ok
00:22:622 (22622|4,22622|7) - move 1 col to the left ok
00:28:171 (28171|3) - move to col 3 ok
^if this apply, 00:28:345 (28345|2) - move to col 5 i choose 4
00:30:773 (30773|1,30946|2) - CTRL + G ok
00:33:894 (33894|5,34067|1,34067|3) - Move 1 col to the left ok
00:42:564 (42564|4) - Move 1 col to the left ok
00:43:085 (43085|7,43085|2) - del one of these notes? oh yeah xD
00:43:431 add note? no
00:57:651 (57651|4,57998|5) - move 1 col to the left no
01:05:975 (65975|3,65975|1) - move 1 col to the right ok
01:42:391 (102391|3) - move to 5 ok
and dont find any after this

ADV
00:14:385 (14385|1) - move to col 6? just like this 00:16:726 (16726|3,16813|3,17073|6,17160|6) - oh yeah
00:50:368 (50368|4) - move to 6? ok
00:59:385 add note col 4 no ><
01:01:466 (61466|6) - move to col 4 susah deng
01:31:986 (91986|2) - move to col 4
01:37:189 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3527163 aa... i doont think so since the sound is like.... dont know how to say it hahaha xD
done for this diff, dont find any problem

EXH
00:20:801 (20801|1) - move to 6? re-arranged
00:22:622 add 1 more note here? no
00:41:004 i heard a finish here add note? oh nice catch
00:42:911 (42911|1,42998|2,43085|3) - CTRL + G nice >w<
00:44:472 i still hear stream hit until 00:45:166 maybe adding note? oh okay nice xD
and done~
nice map shinzo keep it up~ :)
thanks for mod Reyzra >w< so helpfull <3
Ibrahim
1,191 posts
Joined July 2013
Ibrahim
shin sorry telat ;-;

BS
01:12:218 (72218|5) - ini delete aja sama ko suaranya.. but terserah sih
01:14:992 (74992|5) - sama
01:17:767 (77767|5) - ^

FAK ken it's awesome .. i can't mod other diff -_-"
ambil aja star gue deh :'v
OK good luck KenShouta ~
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[Baim] wrote:

shin sorry telat ;-;

BS
01:12:218 (72218|5) - ini delete aja sama ko suaranya.. but terserah sih
01:14:992 (74992|5) - sama
01:17:767 (77767|5) - ^

FAK ken it's awesome .. i can't mod other diff -_-"
ambil aja star gue deh :'v
OK good luck KenShouta ~
all fixed :3
thanks for mod Baimaho >w<
thanks for star tho
Rido
812 posts
Joined April 2014
Rido
a
22:07 Rido: ken
22:07 Rido: mau irc mod ga
22:13 Rido: oi
22:13 Shinzo-: opo ?
22:14 Rido: mau irc mod ga
22:14 Shinzo-: kagak
22:14 Shinzo-: boleh aja sih awkawkawkawkwak
22:14 Shinzo-: masalahnya gabisa update
22:14 Shinzo-: jadi post aja :>
22:14 Rido: tai
22:18 Shinzo-: paan sih
22:18 Shinzo-: post aja susha bgt
22:18 Rido: mlz
22:18 Shinzo-: yha ><
22:18 Shinzo-: jaad amat
22:18 Rido: kalo bisa irc knp ga irc
22:18 Rido: ==a
22:18 Rido: prefer irc
22:19 Shinzo-: yaudah ayok
22:19 Rido: YEEEAY
22:19 Rido: LAH 
22:19 Rido: RE DL DULU
22:20 Shinzo-: cepet ><
22:20 Shinzo-: CEPEEEEEEET
22:20 Rido: downloading
22:20 Rido: SABAR
22:20 Rido: itu jhlee bilang ke lu?
22:21 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/757895 nora2r - VISION [EXH]]
22:21 Shinzo-: ngga
22:21 Shinzo-: bilang ke map nnya
22:21 Rido: iya itu maksud w
22:21 Rido: sempak lucifer
22:21 Shinzo-: njeng
22:21 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/757895 nora2r - VISION [EXH]]
22:22 Rido: 00:03:547 (3547|6,3634|3) - jadiin satu kolom?
22:22 Rido: same pitch
22:23 Shinzo-: nanti jelek patternnya :V
22:23 Shinzo-: 00:01:986 (1986|3,2073|6) -  kek ini, ini kan same pitch juga
22:23 Shinzo-: masih awal juga xD
22:23 Rido: oiya
22:23 Rido: yaudah
22:24 Rido: 00:10:483 (10483|6,10483|7,10657|6,10657|7) - actually different sound imo
22:25 Shinzo-: yep :V
22:25 Rido: "yep :V"
22:25 Rido: SEMPAK LUCIFER
22:26 Rido: 00:11:351 - tambah LN di 6?
22:26 Shinzo-: paan
22:26 Rido: buat kasih effect "siuuung"
22:26 Shinzo-: emang tapi kan paternnya jadi lawak gan
22:26 Rido: btw kolomnya 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
22:26 Rido: cih
22:27 Shinzo-: ok then :V
22:27 Shinzo-: walaupun jadi rada jelek ;w;
22:27 Shinzo-: jelek ah gamau ><
22:27 Rido: k
22:28 Rido: 00:34:067 - tambah satu note
22:28 Rido: ada cymbal
22:28 Shinzo-: ok added
22:28 Rido: 00:40:744 - ada snare tuh
22:29 Shinzo-: ngaco lu -_-
22:29 Rido: ada njing
22:30 Shinzo-: kaga ada x_x
22:30 Rido: serah de
22:31 Shinzo-: yaoloh
22:31 Shinzo-: kaga ada x_x
22:31 Rido: yha
22:32 Rido: 00:53:836 (53836|0) - knp gak dipanjangin
22:32 Rido: spm sini 00:54:009 - 
22:33 Shinzo-: oiya boleh bole
22:33 Rido: 00:56:611 - 
22:33 Rido: tambah satu note?
22:33 Rido: buat ngecover kick
22:34 Rido: meskipun lu di bagian itu emphasize FX si
22:34 Shinzo-: actually missing hahahah
22:35 Rido: 00:59:038 - tambah note
22:35 Rido: suaranya agak keras dibandingin bagian sebelumnya w
22:35 Shinzo-: nice catch >w<
22:36 Rido: 01:37:536 (97536|6,97709|6,97882|6) - LNnya pindahin ke kolom lain pls
22:37 Rido: beda pitch
22:37 Shinzo-: test
22:38 Rido: oi
22:38 Rido: udh w kasih mod
22:38 Rido: w ulang ya
22:38 Rido: 01:37:536 (97536|6,97709|6,97882|6) - LNnya pindahin ke kolom lain pls
22:38 Rido: beda pitch
22:39 Shinzo-: jelek ah :P
22:39 Rido: k
22:39 Rido: 01:46:206 - add note
22:39 Rido: cymbal
22:40 Shinzo-: ok moved
22:40 Shinzo-: to
22:40 Shinzo-: another
22:40 Shinzo-: column
22:40 Rido: labil y
22:40 Rido: k lanjut
22:41 Shinzo-: ok added
22:42 Rido: done
22:42 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725901 nora2r - VISION [ADV]]
22:42 Shinzo-: :3
22:42 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725901 nora2r - VISION [ADV]]
22:44 Rido: 00:08:403 (8403|7,8403|2,8403|0,8749|7,8749|0,8749|5) - 
22:44 Rido: jadiin sama
22:44 Rido: kok beda w
22:44 Rido: same sound
22:44 Rido: 00:02:853 (2853|0,2853|2,2853|7,3200|6,3200|0,3200|1) - ini juga
22:44 Shinzo-: ok then
22:45 Rido: 00:04:588 (4588|6,4761|4) - same pitch too
22:45 Shinzo-: 00:02:853 -  yg ini juga
22:45 Shinzo-: iya
22:45 Shinzo-: hmmm nice nice
22:46 Rido: 00:22:969 (22969|5,23316|2) - kenapa panjangnya beda sama LN yg lain
22:46 Shinzo-: karna ini adv :P
22:47 Rido: lol wut
22:48 Shinzo-: au ah map laen juga gitu kok ><
22:48 Shinzo-: gapapah :V
22:48 Rido: 00:28:171 (28171|6,28345|6,28518|6) - same issue as hardest diff
22:48 Rido: yaudah
22:49 Shinzo-: moved
22:49 Rido: 00:39:270 (39270|4,39443|4,39616|4) - 
22:51 Shinzo-: udah di fix duluan tadi :p wkwkwk
22:51 Rido: shit
22:51 Shinzo-: lanjut deng
22:51 Shinzo-: cepet ah ><
22:51 Rido: 00:39:616 (39616|6,39790|7,39963|6,40137|7,40310|6) - ganti jadi 76567?
22:51 Rido: biar lebih nyaman aja
22:52 Shinzo-: hmmm boleh juga :V
22:52 Shinzo-: thanks
22:52 Rido: 00:41:004 (41004|3) - pindah ke 1
22:52 Rido: biar ga tabrakan patternnya sama next kick sound
22:52 Rido: 00:41:004 (41004|3,41004|7,41351|7,41351|3) - 
22:53 Shinzo-: ok also re-arranged yg sbelumny
22:53 Shinzo-: udah ah udah di re-arrange itu
22:54 Rido: okok
22:54 Rido: 00:53:836 (53836|0) - same issue
22:54 Rido: eh ga deng
22:54 Shinzo-: issue apaan ? -_- udah di red line itu end nya
22:54 Rido: iya iya udh bener
22:55 Rido: 00:53:836 (53836|4,53836|7,53836|5,54009|6,54096|5,54183|3,54183|7,54183|1,54270|4,54356|6,54530|5,54530|2,54530|7,54703|6,54790|5) - WOW
22:55 Rido: right hand biased gan
22:55 Rido: rearrange pls
22:56 Shinzo-: ok done
22:56 Rido: 00:56:264 (56264|4,56264|1,56264|2,56611|2) - same kick sound, different pattern, eh?
22:56 Rido: :3
22:58 Rido: oi
22:58 Rido: OI
22:58 Shinzo-: ok re-arranged
23:00 Rido: 01:48:981 (108981|4,110368|4) - it's really hard around this part for ADV
23:00 Rido: imo
23:00 Rido: bcz it has LN
23:00 Shinzo-: UDAH
23:00 Shinzo-: RE_ARRANGED
23:00 Rido: done
23:00 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725904 nora2r - VISION [NOV]]
23:01 Shinzo-: ya cause the EXH is very hard ;w;
23:02 Shinzo-: cepet ah
23:02 Rido: 01:07:362 - tambah satu note
23:02 Rido: SABAR SEMPAK
23:03 Shinzo-: gamau ah
23:03 Rido: yaudah
23:03 Rido: 01:39:270 (99270|1,99270|6,99616|1,99616|6) - rearrange
23:04 Rido: 01:48:287 (108287|1,108287|6,108981|6,108981|1) - ^
23:04 Rido: NOV done
23:04 Shinzo-: done
23:04 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725902 nora2r - VISION [BSC]]
23:04 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725902 nora2r - VISION [BSC]]
23:04 Rido: 00:17:420 - astaga special keynya
23:05 Rido: jgn banyak2 om
23:06 Rido: 01:17:073 - sini juga
23:07 Rido: 01:26:784 (86784|0) - ini ngapain
23:08 Rido: oi
23:08 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725902 nora2r - VISION [BSC]]
23:09 Shinzo-: CEEPT
23:09 Shinzo-: *CEPET
23:10 Rido: LAH W UDH MOD TADI
23:10 Rido: sialan
23:11 Shinzo-: GA MASUK wkawkawkwak
23:11 Rido: 00:17:420 - astaga special keynya
23:11 Rido: jgn banyak2 om
23:11 Rido: 01:17:073 - sini juga
23:11 Rido: 01:26:784 (86784|0) - ini ngapain
23:11 Shinzo-: CEPET AH ><
23:12 Rido: UDAH
23:12 Rido: capek w
23:12 Shinzo-: buat suaranya yg increasing itu om
23:12 Rido: nyesel irc mod sama elu
23:12 Shinzo-: ok w juga capek nunggu mod lu :V
23:12 Rido: wkawkakwa
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Rido wrote:

a
22:07 Rido: ken
22:07 Rido: mau irc mod ga
22:13 Rido: oi
22:13 Shinzo-: opo ?
22:14 Rido: mau irc mod ga
22:14 Shinzo-: kagak
22:14 Shinzo-: boleh aja sih awkawkawkawkwak
22:14 Shinzo-: masalahnya gabisa update
22:14 Shinzo-: jadi post aja :>
22:14 Rido: tai
22:18 Shinzo-: paan sih
22:18 Shinzo-: post aja susha bgt
22:18 Rido: mlz
22:18 Shinzo-: yha ><
22:18 Shinzo-: jaad amat
22:18 Rido: kalo bisa irc knp ga irc
22:18 Rido: ==a
22:18 Rido: prefer irc
22:19 Shinzo-: yaudah ayok
22:19 Rido: YEEEAY
22:19 Rido: LAH 
22:19 Rido: RE DL DULU
22:20 Shinzo-: cepet ><
22:20 Shinzo-: CEPEEEEEEET
22:20 Rido: downloading
22:20 Rido: SABAR
22:20 Rido: itu jhlee bilang ke lu?
22:21 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/757895 nora2r - VISION [EXH]]
22:21 Shinzo-: ngga
22:21 Shinzo-: bilang ke map nnya
22:21 Rido: iya itu maksud w
22:21 Rido: sempak lucifer
22:21 Shinzo-: njeng
22:21 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/757895 nora2r - VISION [EXH]]
22:22 Rido: 00:03:547 (3547|6,3634|3) - jadiin satu kolom?
22:22 Rido: same pitch
22:23 Shinzo-: nanti jelek patternnya :V
22:23 Shinzo-: 00:01:986 (1986|3,2073|6) -  kek ini, ini kan same pitch juga
22:23 Shinzo-: masih awal juga xD
22:23 Rido: oiya
22:23 Rido: yaudah
22:24 Rido: 00:10:483 (10483|6,10483|7,10657|6,10657|7) - actually different sound imo
22:25 Shinzo-: yep :V
22:25 Rido: "yep :V"
22:25 Rido: SEMPAK LUCIFER
22:26 Rido: 00:11:351 - tambah LN di 6?
22:26 Shinzo-: paan
22:26 Rido: buat kasih effect "siuuung"
22:26 Shinzo-: emang tapi kan paternnya jadi lawak gan
22:26 Rido: btw kolomnya 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
22:26 Rido: cih
22:27 Shinzo-: ok then :V
22:27 Shinzo-: walaupun jadi rada jelek ;w;
22:27 Shinzo-: jelek ah gamau ><
22:27 Rido: k
22:28 Rido: 00:34:067 - tambah satu note
22:28 Rido: ada cymbal
22:28 Shinzo-: ok added
22:28 Rido: 00:40:744 - ada snare tuh
22:29 Shinzo-: ngaco lu -_-
22:29 Rido: ada njing
22:30 Shinzo-: kaga ada x_x
22:30 Rido: serah de
22:31 Shinzo-: yaoloh
22:31 Shinzo-: kaga ada x_x
22:31 Rido: yha
22:32 Rido: 00:53:836 (53836|0) - knp gak dipanjangin
22:32 Rido: spm sini 00:54:009 - 
22:33 Shinzo-: oiya boleh bole
22:33 Rido: 00:56:611 - 
22:33 Rido: tambah satu note?
22:33 Rido: buat ngecover kick
22:34 Rido: meskipun lu di bagian itu emphasize FX si
22:34 Shinzo-: actually missing hahahah
22:35 Rido: 00:59:038 - tambah note
22:35 Rido: suaranya agak keras dibandingin bagian sebelumnya w
22:35 Shinzo-: nice catch >w<
22:36 Rido: 01:37:536 (97536|6,97709|6,97882|6) - LNnya pindahin ke kolom lain pls
22:37 Rido: beda pitch
22:37 Shinzo-: test
22:38 Rido: oi
22:38 Rido: udh w kasih mod
22:38 Rido: w ulang ya
22:38 Rido: 01:37:536 (97536|6,97709|6,97882|6) - LNnya pindahin ke kolom lain pls
22:38 Rido: beda pitch
22:39 Shinzo-: jelek ah :P
22:39 Rido: k
22:39 Rido: 01:46:206 - add note
22:39 Rido: cymbal
22:40 Shinzo-: ok moved
22:40 Shinzo-: to
22:40 Shinzo-: another
22:40 Shinzo-: column
22:40 Rido: labil y
22:40 Rido: k lanjut
22:41 Shinzo-: ok added
22:42 Rido: done
22:42 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725901 nora2r - VISION [ADV]]
22:42 Shinzo-: :3
22:42 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725901 nora2r - VISION [ADV]]
22:44 Rido: 00:08:403 (8403|7,8403|2,8403|0,8749|7,8749|0,8749|5) - 
22:44 Rido: jadiin sama
22:44 Rido: kok beda w
22:44 Rido: same sound
22:44 Rido: 00:02:853 (2853|0,2853|2,2853|7,3200|6,3200|0,3200|1) - ini juga
22:44 Shinzo-: ok then
22:45 Rido: 00:04:588 (4588|6,4761|4) - same pitch too
22:45 Shinzo-: 00:02:853 -  yg ini juga
22:45 Shinzo-: iya
22:45 Shinzo-: hmmm nice nice
22:46 Rido: 00:22:969 (22969|5,23316|2) - kenapa panjangnya beda sama LN yg lain
22:46 Shinzo-: karna ini adv :P
22:47 Rido: lol wut
22:48 Shinzo-: au ah map laen juga gitu kok ><
22:48 Shinzo-: gapapah :V
22:48 Rido: 00:28:171 (28171|6,28345|6,28518|6) - same issue as hardest diff
22:48 Rido: yaudah
22:49 Shinzo-: moved
22:49 Rido: 00:39:270 (39270|4,39443|4,39616|4) - 
22:51 Shinzo-: udah di fix duluan tadi :p wkwkwk
22:51 Rido: shit
22:51 Shinzo-: lanjut deng
22:51 Shinzo-: cepet ah ><
22:51 Rido: 00:39:616 (39616|6,39790|7,39963|6,40137|7,40310|6) - ganti jadi 76567?
22:51 Rido: biar lebih nyaman aja
22:52 Shinzo-: hmmm boleh juga :V
22:52 Shinzo-: thanks
22:52 Rido: 00:41:004 (41004|3) - pindah ke 1
22:52 Rido: biar ga tabrakan patternnya sama next kick sound
22:52 Rido: 00:41:004 (41004|3,41004|7,41351|7,41351|3) - 
22:53 Shinzo-: ok also re-arranged yg sbelumny
22:53 Shinzo-: udah ah udah di re-arrange itu
22:54 Rido: okok
22:54 Rido: 00:53:836 (53836|0) - same issue
22:54 Rido: eh ga deng
22:54 Shinzo-: issue apaan ? -_- udah di red line itu end nya
22:54 Rido: iya iya udh bener
22:55 Rido: 00:53:836 (53836|4,53836|7,53836|5,54009|6,54096|5,54183|3,54183|7,54183|1,54270|4,54356|6,54530|5,54530|2,54530|7,54703|6,54790|5) - WOW
22:55 Rido: right hand biased gan
22:55 Rido: rearrange pls
22:56 Shinzo-: ok done
22:56 Rido: 00:56:264 (56264|4,56264|1,56264|2,56611|2) - same kick sound, different pattern, eh?
22:56 Rido: :3
22:58 Rido: oi
22:58 Rido: OI
22:58 Shinzo-: ok re-arranged
23:00 Rido: 01:48:981 (108981|4,110368|4) - it's really hard around this part for ADV
23:00 Rido: imo
23:00 Rido: bcz it has LN
23:00 Shinzo-: UDAH
23:00 Shinzo-: RE_ARRANGED
23:00 Rido: done
23:00 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725904 nora2r - VISION [NOV]]
23:01 Shinzo-: ya cause the EXH is very hard ;w;
23:02 Shinzo-: cepet ah
23:02 Rido: 01:07:362 - tambah satu note
23:02 Rido: SABAR SEMPAK
23:03 Shinzo-: gamau ah
23:03 Rido: yaudah
23:03 Rido: 01:39:270 (99270|1,99270|6,99616|1,99616|6) - rearrange
23:04 Rido: 01:48:287 (108287|1,108287|6,108981|6,108981|1) - ^
23:04 Rido: NOV done
23:04 Shinzo-: done
23:04 *Rido is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725902 nora2r - VISION [BSC]]
23:04 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725902 nora2r - VISION [BSC]]
23:04 Rido: 00:17:420 - astaga special keynya
23:05 Rido: jgn banyak2 om
23:06 Rido: 01:17:073 - sini juga
23:07 Rido: 01:26:784 (86784|0) - ini ngapain
23:08 Rido: oi
23:08 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725902 nora2r - VISION [BSC]]
23:09 Shinzo-: CEEPT
23:09 Shinzo-: *CEPET
23:10 Rido: LAH W UDH MOD TADI
23:10 Rido: sialan
23:11 Shinzo-: GA MASUK wkawkawkwak
23:11 Rido: 00:17:420 - astaga special keynya
23:11 Rido: jgn banyak2 om
23:11 Rido: 01:17:073 - sini juga
23:11 Rido: 01:26:784 (86784|0) - ini ngapain
23:11 Shinzo-: CEPET AH ><
23:12 Rido: UDAH
23:12 Rido: capek w
23:12 Shinzo-: buat suaranya yg increasing itu om
23:12 Rido: nyesel irc mod sama elu
23:12 Shinzo-: ok w juga capek nunggu mod lu :V
23:12 Rido: wkawkakwa
b
ok thanks for mod rido ^^
Aphrodena
299 posts
Joined January 2014
Aphrodena
I know you just asked me... but I'm really terrible at 8k so I can't really give you a fair mod...

Sorry D:
SReisen
905 posts
Joined October 2011
SReisen
im really sorry...

column : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
open it
[BSC]

00:00:773 (773|4) - add note to 0
00:33:027 (33027|1) - move to 4 or 6
00:52:102 - add note to 0
00:57:304 - ^
01:07:362 - ^
01:21:235 - add note to 0?
01:40:830 (100830|3,101177|1) - ctrl+j? , different pitch

[NOV]

00:22:622 (22622|6,22796|5,22969|4) - drag -> 1clm to right , seems more nicer , idk .. :v
00:36:842 (36842|6) - move to 7?
00:44:819 (44819|1) - move to 0?
00:51:929 - add note?
01:07:362 - add note to 0? and - 01:07:362 (67362|1) - move this to 5 or 7?
01:20:715 (80715|2) - move to 0 and - 01:20:541 - add note to 7 - 01:20:715 - to 6? , suggest
01:21:235 (81235|4) - move to 0?

[ADV]

00:01:986 (1986|3) - move to 2 then ... - 00:02:160 (2160|4,2333|1,2507|4,2680|1) - drag -> 2 times clm to right .. ehh
00:49:501 (49501|7,49588|6,49674|7) - drag <-- 2 times clm to the left? ehe
00:55:310 (55310|4) - move to 5 , make it not connect
01:07:622 - add?
01:21:062 (81062|0) - not sdvx sound i think move to 4
01:21:235 (81235|1) - move to 0

[EXH]

00:22:622 - add note to 7 had loud sound
01:21:062 (81062|0,81235|1) - ctrl+j
01:46:206 - add note to 1 , cymbal

hope these help
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

im really sorry...

column : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
open it
[BSC]

00:00:773 (773|4) - add note to 0 its already in 0 lol
00:33:027 (33027|1) - move to 4 or 6 no for balance
00:52:102 - add note to 0 ok
00:57:304 - ^ ok
01:07:362 - ^ ok
01:21:235 - add note to 0? no ><
01:40:830 (100830|3,101177|1) - ctrl+j? , different pitch oh yeah

[NOV]

00:22:622 (22622|6,22796|5,22969|4) - drag -> 1clm to right , seems more nicer , idk .. :v wow nice catch
00:36:842 (36842|6) - move to 7? nice
00:44:819 (44819|1) - move to 0? ok nice
00:51:929 - add note? no hehe
01:07:362 - add note to 0? and - 01:07:362 (67362|1) - move this to 5 or 7? no sorry
01:20:715 (80715|2) - move to 0 and - 01:20:541 - add note to 7 - 01:20:715 - to 6? , suggest aaa no
01:21:235 (81235|4) - move to 0? sorry no xD

[ADV]

00:01:986 (1986|3) - move to 2 then ... - 00:02:160 (2160|4,2333|1,2507|4,2680|1) - drag -> 2 times clm to right .. ehh hmmmn nice one
00:49:501 (49501|7,49588|6,49674|7) - drag <-- 2 times clm to the left? ehe i chose 1 times xD
00:55:310 (55310|4) - move to 5 , make it not connect good
01:07:622 - add? no
01:21:062 (81062|0) - not sdvx sound i think move to 4 hmmm gonna consider that
01:21:235 (81235|1) - move to 0 no

[EXH]

00:22:622 - add note to 7 had loud sound okay then
01:21:062 (81062|0,81235|1) - ctrl+j no again hehe
01:46:206 - add note to 1 , cymbal already a note there hahaa xD

hope these help
wow thanks so much for mod shiki >w<
and for your time.. :oops: :oops:
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
Mark
[AyanoTatemaya]
1,090 posts
Joined June 2013
[AyanoTatemaya]
marked.
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Shinzo-
revived

let's wait again
Rido
812 posts
Joined April 2014
Rido
O
DrawdeX
786 posts
Joined December 2012
DrawdeX
hi shin
mod as requested via pm
too lazy to design this post lel

8K = |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Everything modded
[BSC]
• 00:52:796 (52796|3) - Move to 5 or 7, for hand balance
• 01:11:871 (71871|1) - Move to 5, to make use of right hand
• 01:14:992 (74992|1) - Move to 5 or 6, ^
• 01:17:420 (77420|1) - Move to 5, ^

[NOV]
• 00:04:934 - Add a note on 0? For the voltex sound
• 00:11:871 ~ 00:16:726 - Dunno for this part, but I suggest spreading the notes instead of repeating the pattern, for novice players
• 00:25:397 - Add a note, for the loud sound
• 00:28:171 - ^
• 00:30:946 - ^
• 00:36:495 - ^
• 01:34:761 - ^
• 01:40:310 - ^
• 01:45:859 - ^
• 01:48:634 - ^

[ADV]
• 00:05:628 (5628|1) - Move to 7, to make it seem balanced on 00:05:975 -
• 00:54:877 (54877|4) - Move to 6 or 7, for hand balance
• 01:53:142 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound

[EXH]
• I suggest adding HP and OD with +0.5, since it's a bit "insane" on 8k
• 00:01:293 - I'm pretty sure there's a sound here, add a note?
• 00:05:628 (5628|1) - Move to 7, to make it more balance with 00:05:975 -
• 00:08:749 (8749|1) - Dunno, felt awkward when comparing with 00:08:403 (8403|5,8403|6) - . So how about moving this to 5 or 6? For hand balance
• 00:09:096 (9096|4) - Idk which instrument you're following with this one, but I think the sound stops at 00:10:483 - since 00:10:483 (10483|7,10483|6,10657|6,10657|7,10830|5,10830|6,11004|6,11004|5,11177|2,11177|3,11351|3,11351|2) - only these babies, err LNs, started making the noise
• 00:10:830 (10830|6,10830|5,11004|6,11004|5) - As for this one, if you applied the mod above ^, why not move them to 4 and 5? To avoid quad LNs 00:10:483 (10483|6,10657|6,10830|6,11004|6) -
• 00:17:160 - Add a note? Same loud sound with 00:16:813 - (nah i dont think so, but eh)
• 00:43:778 (43778|1) - Move to 2, to make it seem spreadish notes
• 01:06:322 (66322|3) - Move to 5, for following the pitch sound
• 01:15:339 (75339|1) - Move to 3? For hand balance
• 01:17:073 (77073|6) - Move to 7, to make a similar pattern on 01:18:114 - also, for follow-up on this 01:16:726 (76726|7) -

Good luck :)
Steins
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Steins



General
* Timing : ok
* Kiai : ok
* AImod : ok
* BG/Audio : ok
* Metada : ok
* Diffspread : ok
* OD/HP : 7.5/7.5 at ADV diff ?

Other
* Column : 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7



BSC
  1. 00:05:628 (5628|5) - move to 6 ?
  2. 00:12:218 (12218|7) - sound is a bit different than 00:12:564 (12564|7,12911|7) - maybe just start this part here 00:12:218 (12218|7) -
  3. 00:22:622 (22622|0) - maybe it's better if u don't use 0| here, you used this column for 00:21:582 (21582|0,21929|0) - try to keep the same sound for this column, maybe it will more simple to play for "BSC"
  4. 00:27:825 (27825|3,28171|5,28518|4) - i don't agree with LN maybe try this
    00:28:518 (28518|4) - this, sound like finish, so maybe add note ~
  5. 00:38:923 (38923|2,39270|6) - ^
  6. 00:49:327 (49327|4) - move to 3 ?
  7. 00:57:304 (57304|0) - maybe remove ? i think just starting with LN is good
  8. 00:59:385 (59385|7) - it's a drum here, maybe add one note or something else, we need to understand wich sound is different between 00:59:038 (59038|0,59038|3) - /00:59:385 (59385|7) - / 00:59:732 (59732|1) -
  9. 01:04:934 (64934|7) - drum here
  10. 01:07:362 (67362|3,68749|0) - finish here 01:09:009 (69009|0) - ? sound better
  11. 01:26:784 (86784|0) - finish here 01:27:304 (87304|2) -
  12. 01:27:478 (87478|1) - ^ 01:27:998 (87998|3) -
  13. 01:28:171 (88171|2) - ^ 01:28:692 (88692|4) -
  14. 01:28:865 (88865|3) - ^ 01:29:385 (89385|5) -
  15. 01:33:287 (93287|2) - here 01:33:374 (93374|2) - ?
  16. 01:36:062 (96062|5) - here 01:36:148 (96148|5) - ?
    it's BSC diff so try to use 1/2 as posssible
  17. 01:44:385 (104385|3) - here 01:44:472 (104472|3) - ?
  18. 01:47:160 (107160|7) - here 01:47:246 (107246|7) - ?
  19. 01:48:981 (108981|1) - add note for high sound ?

NOV
  1. 00:09:616 (9616|6) - you can maybe add note
  2. 00:10:137 (10137|6) - this note it's for wich sound ? you use it for 00:09:443 (9443|1) - but i can't heard the same sound at this place
  3. 00:12:391 (12391|2) - delete start this part 00:12:564 (12564|6) - and add note 00:12:218 (12218|6) - for high sound. Maybe it will be better like this
  4. 00:33:027 (33027|1) - maybe add note here
  5. 00:42:738 (42738|1) - ^
  6. 00:52:622 (52622|2) - i don't think you need to add this note here, same for pitch, just LN is good (i think)
  7. 00:57:304 (57304|6) - i think LN sound finish here 00:57:998 (57998|5) -
  8. 00:59:385 (59385|3,59385|5) - remove maybe try to focus only this sound 00:59:038 (59038|0,59038|7) - / 00:59:559 (59559|1,59732|2,59732|6) -
  9. 01:07:536 (67536|3,67796|7) - you follow high sound but what about this 01:08:056 (68056|5,68229|1) - i can heard the same here 01:08:403 (68403|4) -
  10. 01:08:749 (68749|0,68749|5) - seems a bit strange imo


ADV
  1. 00:04:934 (4934|0) - i don't think it's a good place for this LN
  2. 00:09:963 (9963|2) - move to 1 ?
  3. 00:12:218 (12218|6) - add note
  4. 00:12:391 (12391|5,12478|6) - very down sound >.<
  5. 00:21:929 (21929|7) - move to 5 ?
  6. 00:31:986 (31986|6,32246|3,32333|4,32333|2,32507|5) - mhmm like this will be better
  7. 00:34:414 (34414|1) - LN finish here 00:34:588 (34588|0) - ?
  8. 00:36:842 (36842|4) - LN finish here 00:37:015 (37015|6) - ?
  9. 00:37:189 (37189|1) - LN finish here 00:37:362 (37362|6) - ?
  10. 00:39:616 (39616|4) - ^ 00:39:790 (39790|5) -
  11. 00:39:963 (39963|1) - ^ 00:40:137 (40137|7) -
  12. 00:50:801 (50801|3,50888|2) - move here 00:50:888 (50888|2) -
  13. 00:54:183 (54183|1,54183|3,54183|7) - maybe delete one note ? it's not like 00:54:530 (54530|7,54530|5,54530|2) - / 00:54:877 (54877|2,54877|3,54877|4) -
  14. 00:57:478 (57478|4,57651|3,57651|1,57651|6) - same thing it's not like 00:57:304 (57304|0,57304|2,57304|3) - and it's not finish sound
  15. 00:59:038 (59038|2,59385|1,59385|6) - you can add one note
  16. 01:01:813 (61813|4,61813|2) - high sound ^
  17. 01:07:362 (67362|0,67622|0,67796|0,68056|0,68316|0,68576|0) - hard focus mhmm try just to add note at 0| when this sound 01:07:536 (67536|2) - / 01:07:796 (67796|0) - is here. Also is not bad but maybe it can be better ~
  18. 01:32:680 (92680|2) - 01:33:027 (93027|7) - 01:35:108 (95108|4) - 01:35:455 (95455|2) - 01:37:882 (97882|6) - 01:38:229 (98229|4) - same thing as before, finish at red line

EXH
  1. 00:02:853 (2853|5,3200|2) - finish red line i think ^.^
  2. 00:04:934 (4934|0) - 2 notes will be better i think
  3. 00:05:628 (5628|2) - red line ~
  4. 00:08:403 (8403|3,8749|2) - ^
  5. 00:10:483 (10483|6,10657|6,10830|6,11004|6) - maybe a bit hard
  6. 00:14:992 (14992|5) - finish here 00:15:166 (15166|6) - ?
  7. 00:15:686 (15686|2) - finish here 00:15:859 (15859|6) - ?
  8. 00:31:640 (31640|0) - start here 00:31:813 (31813|3) - ?
  9. 01:07:622 (67622|4,67622|0,67622|1,67796|0,67796|2,67796|3,68056|0,68056|4,68056|2,68229|3,68316|2,68316|0,68316|4,68576|0,68576|1,68576|3,68749|2,68749|4,68749|0) - maybe a bit overmapped ~
  10. 01:27:304 (87304|4) - maybe remove and finish this 01:26:784 (86784|1) - here 01:27:304 (87304|0) -
  11. 01:27:998 (87998|4) - ^
  12. 01:28:692 (88692|2) - ^
  13. 01:29:385 (89385|4) - ^
  14. 01:30:946 (90946|7,91033|5,91119|7,91206|5,91293|7,91379|5,91466|7,91553|5) - even if it's good why not use simple note like 01:31:033 (91033|3,91119|1,91206|3,91293|1,91379|3,91466|1,91553|3) - for focus little LN with this sound 01:31:640 (91640|1,91726|3,91813|1,91900|3) -
  15. 01:42:564 (102564|6) - move to 5 ?
  16. 01:48:634 (108634|1) - add one note
  17. 01:48:634 (108634|7,108720|6,108720|2,108807|3,108807|5,108894|6,108894|2) - here you use LN + notes for the same sound, so why not use only one kind of pattern for the same sound ?
  18. 01:53:142 (113142|7,113142|5) - maybe add one note ?

Good luck ~
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