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Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Better late than never :P

Emdyion wrote:

EDIT: Dropping OD of Muya's Heavy made it lower than Standard T.T
Then again, Standard feels more like a Heavy rather than a Standard. It might be a good idea to rename Standard to Heavy and just have 2 Heavies. Then It would make sense.

Actually, I would name the difficulties:

Beginner - Light
Light - Standard
Standard - Heavy
Muya's Heavy - Muya's Heavy

considering the difficulty of each map, That makes much more sense to me (yeah, Light feels like a standard to me.)

  1. I got offset: 20
  2. Delete the .osb file? There's a "default" sitting in there. Deleting the .osb should fix it.
[BEGINNER]

Looks good to me

[LIGHT]

Awesome stuff in this one.

[STANDARD]

01:26:685 (1,2) - Maybe having a copy/paste of the slider at 01:25:018 here instead would looks nice and symmetrical. Might be just me though.

[MUYA'S HEAVY]

This difficulty sticks out because for most of it, it's stuck on straight lines, compared to Emdyion's patterns, which is a dull layout. You've done nice layouts in your other maps Muya, so maybe this difficulty could be the same. It'd make it much nicer. It's not bad, it just looks a bit boring.

Apart from the odd jump, nothing bothered me in this one.

This is actually a pretty damn nice map. Nicely mapped, interesting, and fun. After seeing your part in my Nanairo marathon I knew you had promise, and hopefully soon, people will notice. Good job ;)

Starred
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion

Doomsday93 wrote:

Then again, Standard feels more like a Heavy rather than a Standard. It might be a good idea to rename Standard to Heavy and just have 2 Heavies. Then It would make sense.
No it wouldn't. In DDR you only have one of each difficulty: Beginner, Light, Standard, Heavy, and Challenge.

How about I name it Challenge instead (even though Challenge needs to be a bit more challenging).
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb
DDR yay!

STAR! :D
Niva
Global Moderator
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Joined November 2009
Niva
-Random Mod-
Unfortunately, I downloaded this yesterday, and yesterday there was no [Challenge] diff, so I'll just mod all diffs except [Challenge].

[General]
-> Your .osb shows that you uses a file named "default.jpg", but there's no such file named as that.
-> Your current kiai time is unsnapped, snap it (start: 63,351ms, end: 88,351ms)

[Light]
00:13:351 (1) - Place this perfectly below the previous note (hold Shift while placing)
00:40:018 (1,2) - One grid right maybe? It's weird having 00:40:018 (1) placed under 00:38:768 (1)

[Standard]
Nice diff, I found no problem

[Muya's Heavy]
00:10:018 (1) - Move the waypoint one lv3 grid left?

Nice map overall, star!
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion

Nivalis wrote:

-Random Mod-
Unfortunately, I downloaded this yesterday, and yesterday there was no [Challenge] diff, so I'll just mod all diffs except [Challenge].
Challenge= the Standard I placed yesterday.
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[Muya's Heavy]
00:10:018 (1) - Move the waypoint one lv3 grid left?
umm..?
this is not fix.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
Meh

General
Make that white combo colour a light grey and dumb down the other colours a little, the kiai is blinding me


The first two diffs were ridiclously easy. Standard is almost an Easy and light is a Beginner, but then the other two diffs are Hard/Insane, so you need to work on the spread a little. Try and tweak it to more of an E-N-H-I spread if you can

The slowdowns seem unnecesary and do nothing but confuse the player at first and make it stupidly easy after that, get rid of them

But other than that the maps seem fine, if a little uninteresting. Couldn't do much better with the horribly repetetive song though tbh
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [ZLOdeuka's Challenge].osu
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
3 I's......well seeing as this rule seems to mean less and less these days, will just let BAT's decide
Your kiai times aren't placed exactly on the ticks, I would go though and fix all the timing sections so they are placed exactly on the ticks
add ZLOdeuka to tags on all difficulties

Beginner:
00:36:684 (3) - could be made more symmetrical
01:11:685 (3,4) - stacking is veryyy slightly off, but not really a problem
01:18:351 (3) - I would remove whistle from the end of this (I think it sounds better)
01:20:018 (1) - ^
01:21:684 (1) - ^
01:25:018 (3) - ^
01:26:684 (2) - ^

Light:
00:30:018 (1) - too much whistle for me
01:05:018 (3) - remove whistle from the end

Muya's Standard:
This is pretty hard for a standard...
I don't think the combos are completely consistent but its ok
00:11:685 (5) - new combo
00:11:893 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:018 (6,1) - ^

Heavy:
looks good

Challenge:
01:24:18 timing section isn't needed
make sure all timing sections that change the audio are placed 1/4 earlier
need hitsounds during the kiai
alot of random jumps in this difficulty that I just can't follow when playing
00:11:684 (6) - new combo
00:40:434 (2,3) - why have a jump here

*star*
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
Done.

Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [Muya's Standard].osu
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
[Light]
01:31:684 (2) - This slider is useless...

[Heavy]
01:31:685 (1) - ^

[ZLOdeuka]
Too many terrible spacing...

~Nice~
nuisible
555 posts
Joined September 2009
nuisible
star :p
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Beginner]
01:31:684 (1) - 0.5x(2x) BPM Timing Sections in...Beginner? No way.
Just continue this spinner 01:28:768 (1) up to 01:31:268.

[Light]
01:27:101 (1) - There's a whistle on the whole reverse-slider.It hurts my ears.Leave whistles currently on the beats,please.

[Standart]
00:52:934 (5) - 1 grid down.
01:12:518 (5) - 1 grid right.

Others seem fine.
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Beginner]
01:31:684 (1) - 0.5x(2x) BPM Timing Sections in...Beginner? No way. That's at the ending, so it doesn't really matter.
Just continue this spinner 01:28:768 (1) up to 01:31:268. Fixed.

[Light]
01:27:101 (1) - There's a whistle on the whole reverse-slider.It hurts my ears.Leave whistles currently on the beats,please.
Noticed that, Fixed.

[Standart] (It's Standard, check spelling please T.T)
00:52:934 (5) - 1 grid down. Reason for not doing this is because of distance snap.
01:12:518 (5) - 1 grid right. ^
GladiOol
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Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]
  1. Offset 15
Is it just me or does the timing feel a little weird at the ending ¿


[Muya's Bonus Stage]

00:18:348 (6) - Add new combo.
01:10:848 (2) - ^
01:12:723 (6) - ^
01:13:348 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:389 (5) - Add new combo.


[Heavy]

00:27:518 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:29:185 (1) - ^
00:46:268 (6) - Add new combo.
01:08:976 (7) - ^
01:15:018 (7) - ^


[Standard]
  1. Approach Rate +1 please.
00:55:018 (5) - Add new combo.
01:09:184 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:309 (4) - Move one grid level to the left. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:14:393 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Light]
  1. Decrease Approach Rate by one.
  2. Decrease Drain Rate by two.
  3. Decrease Overall Difficulty by two.
00:23:351 (3) - Add new combo.
00:32:934 (2) - ^


[Beginner]

00:38:768 (1) - Remove new combo.


Starred~
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion

GladiOol wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset 15
Is it just me or does the timing feel a little weird at the ending ¿
I thought so too XD
Wonder if the offset/BPM had anything to do with it?
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
hi~★

The skin was completed~!
Tell me if you want me to fix it>w<

good map~★

Download: Kick The Can.zip
Last edited by y u c a , edited 2 times in total.
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion
Not adding skin because of simplicity.

EDIT: Deciding whether or not to use the new skin.
RE-EDIT: Added skin.
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Ok theres not much modding... Hope the map is ranked XD

Heavy:
01:25:015 - (1) move down 4 grid then move right 5 grid [Suggestion]

Everything else seems fine ;)

Starred for awesomeness =D
RemmyX25
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
revived
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
Hey;)
Don't know if You're gonna like my Guest diff, but here he is ;)
Made it cuz You requested it in my mod queue ;) :)


Star!! ^^

Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [ShiroKitty's Kick].osu
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
my diff delete plz
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion
0_o Why?

I'll delete by request T.T
IceBeam
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IceBeam
I think I've modded it already.
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)



ShiroKitty's Challenge

00:08:973 (7,8) - why did you use a slider here...change it into 3 circle just like others
01:22:306 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think some jump here makes more fun than just stacking them

others fine


Heavy

01:22:098 (2) - 1 grid right


Standard

00:26:681 (1) - 1 gird up
00:30:015 (1) - ^
00:54:598 (4) - 1 grid down


Light

00:28:348 (1,3) - reverse them?
01:08:348 (3) - almost out of screen >_<


Beginner

all good here



nice map 8-)
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion

IceBeam wrote:

I think I've modded it already.
Whoops (forgot to check). Sorry for wasting your time :/
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
hey ^^ I moddded my diff ^^
here it is ^^

Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [ShiroKitty's Challenge].osu
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
So I guess you don't need that difficulty from me anymore... oh well, s'what I get for waiting. :P (If you ever do decide you want another one for some reason do remind me, as I actually did start on one)

That said, good mapset. Everything seems fine. So I'll just throw you a star and be on my way~
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Beginner]
00:53:348 (1) - If you can, make this slider look nicer.

[Light]
00:30:015 (1) - If you can, make this slider look nicer.

[Standard]
01:31:681 (1) - Maybe add a New Combo here.

[Heavy]
01:22:098 (2) - Move the by 1 to the right on level 3 grid ( so its not touching the previous slider)

[ShiroKitty's Challenge]
Nothing noticed here.

Everything else seems fine here.

Overall, the mapset looks pretty good. Nothing wrong with the hitsounds. Custom Skin is good.

Starr'd
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Revived.
Fight69
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Joined January 2010
Fight69
Hello there o/

[ShiroKitty's Challenge]

01:31:265 (7) - Delete a reverse arrow, looks weird when you are still on the slider while the song is over

[Heavy]

01:31:681 (1) - Delete it, for the same reason than ShiroKitty's Challenge

[Standard]

01:31:681 (9) - Again~

[Light]

01:31:681 (1) - Again this slider, delete it

[Beginner]

01:31:681 (1) - Agaaiiiiin~ :cry:

Well, that's all
Really nice mapset !

~Star !
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion

Fight69 wrote:

Hello there o/

[ShiroKitty's Challenge]

01:31:265 (7) - Delete a reverse arrow, looks weird when you are still on the slider while the song is over

[Heavy]

01:31:681 (1) - Delete it, for the same reason than ShiroKitty's Challenge

[Standard]

01:31:681 (9) - Again~

[Light]

01:31:681 (1) - Again this slider, delete it

[Beginner]

01:31:681 (1) - Agaaiiiiin~ :cry:

Well, that's all
Really nice mapset !

~Star !
I understand what you are saying, but I thought it would be good to put that for that sound at the end ^_^
I will notify ShiroKitty, and we'll decide on what to do.
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
Hey, sorry for late reply.. :/
I think, Fight69 has right, and what about U Emdyion? :)
Emdyion
292 posts
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Topic Starter
Emdyion

ShiroKitty wrote:

Hey, sorry for late reply.. :/
I think, Fight69 has right, and what about U Emdyion? :)
It is agreed then. The final slider in each difficulty will be removed :D
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
Awesome map!

Beginner: 00:45:015 (3,4,5,6) - Scoot this stack up one space. If you do this, you might want to adjust 00:46:681 (1,1).
00:52:515 (2,3,1) - These notes are awfully low.

Light: 01:08:348 (3) - This is really low. Since distance snap isn't reasonable here, you might want to cheat a little and bump this slider up two or three spaces.

Standard: 00:49:598 (5) - This looks kind of silly if you ask me. You might want to lower this note so that it's more obvious that the notes are in a triangle pattern.
00:52:931 (5) - See above. ^

Heavy: 00:11:056 (6,7,8) - These notes are following the same pattern as 00:17:723 (6,7,8), except that note (7) is hidden underneath the slider instead of hanging below. You might want to move 00:11:265 (7) out.
00:46:265 (1) - Move this note two spaces down to cover 00:47:098 (2).

ShiroKitty's Challenge: I don't feel comfortable modding this.

*WARNING*: I'm pretty sure that those sliders like 00:56:681 (1,3) and 00:58:348 (1,3) are not rankable

I'm really loving the song and the map. Starred.
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi

theMikeAG wrote:

Awesome map!

Beginner: 00:45:015 (3,4,5,6) - Scoot this stack up one space. If you do this, you might want to adjust 00:46:681 (1,1).
00:52:515 (2,3,1) - These notes are awfully low. it's not so bad :O try to test the beatmap..

Light: 01:08:348 (3) - This is really low. Since distance snap isn't reasonable here, you might want to cheat a little and bump this slider up two or three spaces. Hmmm.. it's really low in Edit mode, but in the test and osu! standard mode it's reachable :P

Standard: 00:49:598 (5) - This looks kind of silly if you ask me. You might want to lower this note so that it's more obvious that the notes are in a triangle pattern. huh??;OO I don't understand why it is silly ;O
00:52:931 (5) - See above. ^ "See above" :)

Heavy: 00:11:056 (6,7,8) - These notes are following the same pattern as 00:17:723 (6,7,8), except that note (7) is hidden underneath the slider instead of hanging below. You might want to move 00:11:265 (7) out. yyyymmm... It's... yyyhhh.. not just those notes are repeating.. look more carefully and You'll see what I mean :O a ut.. it's not unrankable when something is repeating a few times...
00:46:265 (1) - Move this note two spaces down to cover 00:47:098 (2).

ShiroKitty's Challenge: I don't feel comfortable modding this. Yyyyh, it's too hard to mod? :D

*WARNING*: I'm pretty sure that those sliders like 00:56:681 (1,3) and 00:58:348 (1,3) are not rankable I don't think so.. there is just given and O,5x section.. so it makes the sliders shorter..

I'm really loving the song and the map. Starred.Yeah. The song is great :D



It's just my opinion, so make as U want Emdyion :)

Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [ShiroKitty's Challenge].osu
Antu Villegas
242 posts
Joined December 2009
Antu Villegas
Hi :)

Standard:

01:16:265 (4,5): It will be better if you put a slider there, at the end of it, decrease the volume.

Like this:



Nice song to map :)
Good job, Star ^^
laport
1,240 posts
Joined June 2010
laport
Heavy map feels more like 4.5 stars imo but star 8-)
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion
BUMP
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
- Rche -
oh awesome!!!!!!!
it looks perfect to me.
(ashamed)

+star.

EDIT: oh browser problems LOL.
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Hello!

Light:
0:38:348 (3,4) - 3 should repeat only 3times, then make 4 twice the lenght don't repeat it.
1:03:348 - Dosn't go with the beat. Don't repeat it, put a circle at 1:04:181 instead. Sounds and plays better!
1:11:681 - Switch them around so that the slider comes first, the circle goes last
1:31:265 - just a little bit quiet sound please..?

Standard:
0:07:098 - Remove please, if you need this sound, make a slider be note 1 ending there
0:15:015 - This bit is... very weird. Definitly 3 should be repeated once.
0:49:598 - Move 1 Tiny grid up
0:52:931 - Move 1 Tiny grid down

Found nothing in Beginner and Heavy to be a problem for myself. Good Good~
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
DISCLAIMER: First draft. Might need some modding!
DISCLAIMER: I still have the old background image so change my map to use the new one I guess?
DISCLAIMER: I will try to pay attention to this thread in case my map gets modded/picked on/"ugh what is this pile of shit" but feel free to PM me if you need me to swing by. Also feel free to change my map as you see fit for minor mods. I won't be offended. :)
DISCLAIMER: Having three "insanes" is unrankable, I think. Not sure if what you have already is two or one... that's more for the BAT-types to decide.
DISCLAIMER: here we go here we go here we go here we go here we go
DISCLAIMER: disclaimer

Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [Soapr's Challenge].osu
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion
I don't know if that can be rankable...
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Well i thank you for being understanding as to why i didnt give you my diff :|

Song Folder Check:

Everything seems correct in da folder.

Storyboard Check:

Why do you have the BG storyboarded throughout the map, i see no reason for that, just insert as background.

General:

Try 11 as your offset? thats what i was getting

Beginner:

00:45:015 (3,4,5,6) - no real problem here but maybe spread out this stack?

Light:

The SV is kinda fast for a Easy diff but ok

00:46:681 (1) - why not just apply the slider the whistle hitsound as one note instead of seperatly on the return parts

00:50:015 (1) - ^^

00:53:348 (1) - ^^

01:08:348 (3) - its kinda low on the screen.

Soaprs challenge:

Holy hell i thought i was staring at a James map

00:19:598 (6) - you should SB a warning of speed up.

00:46:265 (1) - ^

01:31:265 (2) - no real reason for the beginning of this slider to be silent.

Nothing really to much wrong with the mapset.

Its a bit far from bubble status but i think you may make it there.

Have a star.
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
Emdyion: what's unrankable about it? If it were for my own mapset I wouldn't care (I think I'm done pushing mapsets to approval) but it's a guest map so I kind of do want to conform! If there's anything in it you want me to change, I am open to it. If the entire thing isn't to your liking, then I guess throw it out? Either way, it doesn't bother me.

I am also open to the possibility of mapping an easier difficulty instead. In case you want to do two "normals" or something.

Zelos: Alright, I can storyboard in some warnings. And I'll un-silent that slider beginning you pointed out too. Nothing until I work out the rest of the map with Emdyion though I guess! Thanks for modding my map anyway though. I'm kudosuing you in spirit. (If you ever want a mod request from me, just bother me however you wish~)
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
Alright. I updated the map with the hitsound thing and the warnings. Beware: extremely ghetto storyboarding. I've hardly ever touched the storyboarding features...

Download: Bus Stop - Kick The Can (Emdyion) [Soapr's Challenge].osu

Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
Wow! :D Many diffs, heh^^ :))
Emdyion, I think it IS rankable, we just need to work on it ^^
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion
BUMP~
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Emdyion
BUMP AGAIN~

I'm thinking of remaking the map difficulties, because I think I can do way better than what I've done now :D
Yusu Aoi
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Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
All difficulties, or just You mean Your diffs? :P
Cygnus
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Cygnus
Get this fixed please. <3
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