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nora2r - VISION [OsuMania]

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Sandalphon
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月30日 at 9:04:18

Artist: nora2r
Title: VISION
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC- SDVX FLOOR Marirose III GRAVITY WARS
BPM: 173
Filesize: 5362kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (3.56 stars, 1095 notes)
  2. BASIC - 4Key (1.37 stars, 314 notes)
  3. Marirose's EXHAUST - 4Key (4.52 stars, 1600 notes)
  4. NOVICE - 4Key (2.22 stars, 727 notes)
Download: nora2r - VISION
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Are You Ready?





EXHAUST By Marirose
BG By MeowPaz
Last edited by Sandalphon , edited 66 times in total.
Marirose
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Marirose
http://puu.sh/iwSjH/e5ced1f2da.zip

GD DONE,no sv ver.

SV working..
Marirose
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Marirose
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon

Marirose wrote:

http://puu.sh/iwSjH/e5ced1f2da.zip

GD DONE,no sv ver.

SV working..
Ok, update

Marirose wrote:

不不不，是我
MeowPaz
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MeowPaz
Yahalo.SY
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
Notice: 以下是建议啦。
Open
[BASIC]
00:14:622 - 加一个
00:42:368 (42368|0,42715|2,43062|0,43408|2,43755|0) - 这里换成LN啦。
00:44:102 (44102|2) - 删掉
00:43:755 - 加一个
我的建议是这样：http://puu.sh/iygvv/59b6b77ee1.jpg
00:47:570 (47570|0,47917|2) - 建议摆同一轨(run
01:52:426 - 加一个？
[NOVICE]
00:11:848 - 加一个在1，爽重音啊
00:57:281 (57281|1,57281|3) - 删掉一个吧
00:57:628 - 这里才应该双键吧
01:05:778 - 漏音
01:06:819 - 01:07:166 - 建议抓
01:08:206 (68206|1) - 删掉
[ADVANCED]
01:04:565 (64565|0,64565|1,64565|3,64911|0,64911|2,65085|1) - Ctrl+H
01:32:657 - 这音不继续三键了吗
01:37:686 - 这里好像没音
01:41:848 (101848|1) - 移到3
ADV好玩。
就这么多了。音效有点吵orz
Sandalphon
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MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.SY
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
Notice: 以下是建议啦。
Open
[BASIC]
00:14:622 - 加一个
00:42:368 (42368|0,42715|2,43062|0,43408|2,43755|0) - 这里换成LN啦。
00:44:102 (44102|2) - 删掉
00:43:755 - 加一个 - 改了，不过没有按照下面这个改 Orz
我的建议是这样：http://puu.sh/iygvv/59b6b77ee1.jpg
00:47:570 (47570|0,47917|2) - 建议摆同一轨(run - 不同音高，顺带人性
01:52:426 - 加一个？ - 不，因为前面没抓这个
[NOVICE]
00:11:848 - 加一个在1，爽重音啊 - 加在3
00:57:281 (57281|1,57281|3) - 删掉一个吧
00:57:628 - 这里才应该双键吧 - 保留吧，上面那条删了
01:05:778 - 漏音
01:06:819 - 01:07:166 - 建议抓
01:08:206 (68206|1) - 删掉
[ADVANCED]
01:04:565 (64565|0,64565|1,64565|3,64911|0,64911|2,65085|1) - Ctrl+H
01:32:657 - 这音不继续三键了吗 - 和后面同样的音保持一致双键
01:37:686 - 这里好像没音
01:41:848 (101848|1) - 移到3
ADV好玩。- 射射 /w\
就这么多了。音效有点吵orz
No reply = fix
感谢摸 没有小x的
paperlens
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paperlens
超不仔细的先摸了一下一个难度，太水 no kudos，等考完再来摸

Advanced
00:17:397 - 从这里到00:21:559 - 你确定不跟一下这个类似于clap的这个音么 不跟也没关系就是问问- -

00:33:351 (33351|2,33351|3,33524|1,33524|0,33697|3,33697|2,33871|0,33871|1) - 建议不要一直34/12/34/12，像前面的一样稍微变一变

00:39:247 - add

00:50:345 - add， 同00:03:177 -

00:55:547 (55547|1,55894|2) - Ctrl+H 也是不要一直34/12/34/12

01:01:443 (61443|3) - 这个实在是想要挪到3，pitch

01:08:119 (68119|0,68119|3) - 抓错音了吧，鼓声好像在01:08:033 -

01:54:160 - add

如上
Sandalphon
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paperlens wrote:

超不仔细的先摸了一下一个难度，太水 no kudos，等考完再来摸

Advanced
00:17:397 - 从这里到00:21:559 - 你确定不跟一下这个类似于clap的这个音么 不跟也没关系就是问问- - - 有点毁手感，补了

00:33:351 (33351|2,33351|3,33524|1,33524|0,33697|3,33697|2,33871|0,33871|1) - 建议不要一直34/12/34/12，像前面的一样稍微变一变

00:39:247 - add

00:50:345 - add， 同00:03:177 -

00:55:547 (55547|1,55894|2) - Ctrl+H 也是不要一直34/12/34/12

01:01:443 (61443|3) - 这个实在是想要挪到3，pitch

01:08:119 (68119|0,68119|3) - 抓错音了吧，鼓声好像在01:08:033 -

01:54:160 - add

如上
ok， 感谢
Frostcage
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Frostcage
From modding queue :) t/315448

I will be modding all diffs except exh

1|2|3|4

BASIC
00:17:397 - add note
00:18:784 - ^
00:20:171 - ^
00:20:865 - ^
NOVICE
no problems
ADVANCED
00:02:484 - add note
00:08:033 - ^
00:10:807 - ^
00:11:501 - ^
sorry for short mod, I tried my hardest.. good map :)
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon

Frostcage wrote:

From modding queue :) t/315448

I will be modding all diffs except exh

1|2|3|4

BASIC
00:17:397 - add note
00:18:784 - ^
00:20:171 - ^
00:20:865 - ^
NOVICE
no problems
ADVANCED
00:02:484 - add note
00:08:033 - ^
00:10:807 - ^
00:11:501 - ^
sorry for short mod, I tried my hardest.. good map :)
Thank you for your mod, update later
Icing_wind
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Icing_wind
Mod Request
[ADVANCED]

最重要的一点！ 所有音效声音减少到5% 因为音乐本身就很吵，再这么大就不合适啦！

00:01:096 (1096|1) - 删一个

00:01:790 (1790|1) - 同上（玛德还是算了 看了后边的原来你是要这样抓）

00:02:484 - 加一个

00:05:778 (5778|0) - 这里好像没音 删了

00:18:784 (18784|3,19998|3) - 这一段试一下左右？ （思考）

00:23:813 - 加一个

00:26:588 - 同上

00:29:362 - 同上

00:32:137 - 同上

00:37:079 - 加一个

00:42:368 (42368|2,42368|0,42368|3) - 这一段 你有的加的三个 换下一个同样音的就变两个了 统一

00:44:796 - 加一个

01:29:536 - 加一个到3


太神了 给跪了。。。。
这么水的mod你可见过？ 剩下的我找不到问题了。。。。
总之，加油 :D
Sandalphon
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Icing_wind wrote:

Mod Request
[ADVANCED]

最重要的一点！ 所有音效声音减少到5% 因为音乐本身就很吵，再这么大就不合适啦！OKOK

00:01:096 (1096|1) - 删一个

00:01:790 (1790|1) - 同上（玛德还是算了 看了后边的原来你是要这样抓） - 那就不改了

00:02:484 - 加一个 - 破坏手感，先留着吧

00:05:778 (5778|0) - 这里好像没音 删了 - 长音，从00:05:778 - 到00:05:952 - ，应该不难听出来

00:18:784 (18784|3,19998|3) - 这一段试一下左右？ （思考） - ok

00:23:813 - 加一个

00:26:588 - 同上

00:29:362 - 同上

00:32:137 - 同上

00:37:079 - 加一个 -^这种红线的bass(大概是bass)，我前后都没抓，所以reject >A<

00:42:368 (42368|2,42368|0,42368|3) - 这一段 你有的加的三个 换下一个同样音的就变两个了 统一 - 这里三个是因为有clap的声音，和这个00:43:062 - 00:43:755 - 一样

00:44:796 - 加一个 - ok

01:29:536 - 加一个到3 - ok


太神了 给跪了。。。。
这么水的mod你可见过？ 剩下的我找不到问题了。。。。
总之，加油 :D
射射！
paperlens
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paperlens
主要的科目考完啦 所以来补魔摸一下
按照rank标准来摸啦
Column 1|2|3|4

General
*HP/OD
Basic 7/7
Novice 7.5/7,5
Advanced 8/8
Exhaust 8.5/8.5

*Timing 我觉得第二个Kiai应该在01:54:507 - 结束吧（？）
Advance中的sample栏是'S',而其他难度是'S:C1'；我不知道你之后会不会添加custom音效 以现在的情况应该是全部改成'S' （在Audio栏勾选default）

*tag add Marirose
以及一个不很清楚的地方- -在这里
显示 VISION 的 '原曲出典' 是 'SOUND VOLTEX FLOOR' , 查了一下似乎这首歌是先从SOUND VOLTEX FLOOR上传再导入到SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH的，虽然如此似乎做这首歌的都是以SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH为source，rank之前再问问别人吧

*以及除Basic以外的音效- -
Marirose
以下都是建议 看看就好-w-

*00:01:443 (1443|0) - 或许挪到4比较舒服吧

*00:03:958 (3958|0) - 建议delete，然后把00:03:871 (3871|2) - 换成LN
以及00:06:645 (6645|1) - 这个应该是和上面所说的note是相似的，所以他们的秩相等，迹相等，特征值相同，并且他们的逆矩阵也相似

*00:04:911 - 00:06:299 - 之类，这里也是有音的 真的不抓么 我觉得可以让前面的LN提前结束在这里再放LN...看你的想法啦

*00:08:726 - 这里的不应该是LN么 我不太清楚- -

*00:09:073 - 00:09:767 - 这里开始不应该是两个连点加一个双面条么- -或者是想要让pattern更丰富一些

*00:20:258 (20258|3) - delete，或者00:20:605 - 00:20:952 - 00:21:299 - add。
参照你之后的pattern 00:42:368 - 我觉得应该是add

*00:22:859 (22859|3) - 感觉不对

*00:26:588 (26588|0,26588|2,26674|1,26761|2,26761|3) - 00:23:813 (23813|2,23900|1,23900|0,23986|2,23986|3) - 我觉得都不好，00:29:362 (29362|3,29449|0,29449|2,29536|3,29536|1,29622|0,29709|3,29709|2) - 应该都像这样比较好吧，或者至少把这些地方统一一下pattern
以及这里00:32:137 -

*00:52:426 - 这里有音

*00:53:813 (53813|3) - 建议delete，或者后面的00:54:160 - 00:54:854 - 等地方add

*00:55:200 - add

*01:07:339 - 这里开始的这些 如果是要rank的谱这大概肯定不行吧，三键的地方不是在每个白线上也没有抓clap音也没有抓全部的鼓音

以及小叉能不能帮我查图哇>_<
Advanced
*00:11:501 - 是否考虑add

*00:22:599 - add，否则00:44:796 (44796|0) - delete

*00:59:536 (59536|2,62310|1) - 建议改成LN

*01:06:992 (66992|0) - 挪到2

*01:06:992 (66992|0) - - -这个音我觉得好重 不add么
Novice摸不动
Basic
摸不动了
[Hitsound]
*00:20:865 (20865|0) - add F

*01:07:339 (67339|3) - change to F

*01:21:212 (81212|0) - 我不是很清楚 但是我觉得应该和01:23:986 (83986|0,83986|2) - 等处同音

以上 :)

edit:上次我说了no kudos你还是给了kudosu，这次认真摸了反倒没有了我哭（←所以你究竟是在纠结什么）
Sandalphon
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Topic Starter
Sandalphon

paperlens wrote:

主要的科目考完啦 所以来补魔摸一下
按照rank标准来摸啦
Column 1|2|3|4

General
*HP/OD
Basic 7/7
Novice 7.5/7,5
Advanced 8/8
Exhaust 8.5/8.5

*Timing 我觉得第二个Kiai应该在01:54:507 - 结束吧（？）
Advance中的sample栏是'S',而其他难度是'S:C1'；我不知道你之后会不会添加custom音效 以现在的情况应该是全部改成'S' （在Audio栏勾选default）

*tag add Marirose
以及一个不很清楚的地方- -在这里
显示 VISION 的 '原曲出典' 是 'SOUND VOLTEX FLOOR' , 查了一下似乎这首歌是先从SOUND VOLTEX FLOOR上传再导入到SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH的，虽然如此似乎做这首歌的都是以SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH为source，rank之前再问问别人吧
^改完^

*以及除Basic以外的音效- -
Advanced
*00:11:501 - 是否考虑add

*00:22:599 - add，否则00:44:796 (44796|0) - delete

*00:59:536 (59536|2,62310|1) - 建议改成LN

*01:06:992 (66992|0) - 挪到2

*01:06:992 (66992|0) - - -这个音我觉得好重 不add么 <- 粘贴重复了？已经3个note这里了
Novice摸不动
Basic
摸不动了
[Hitsound]
*00:20:865 (20865|0) - add F

*01:07:339 (67339|3) - change to F

*01:21:212 (81212|0) - 我不是很清楚 但是我觉得应该和01:23:986 (83986|0,83986|2) - 等处同音

以上 :)

edit:上次我说了no kudos你还是给了kudosu，这次认真摸了反倒没有了我哭（←所以你究竟是在纠结什么）
知道你会回来 :3
都ok
paperlens
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paperlens

SanadaYukimura wrote:

*01:06:992 (66992|0) - - -这个音我觉得好重 不add么 <- 粘贴重复了？已经3个note这里了
粘贴重复了 是这里01:09:767 - 顺便射一发
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon

paperlens wrote:

SanadaYukimura wrote:

*01:06:992 (66992|0) - - -这个音我觉得好重 不add么 <- 粘贴重复了？已经3个note这里了
粘贴重复了 是这里01:09:767 - 顺便射一发
不了，一个for drum就行了，而且这样放很有感觉
谢
Rivals_7
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Rivals_7
Hi~ here's the mod as requested
1|2|3|4
Click
[General]

maybe you have to add "SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS" as well to the tags

[Marirose's EXHAUST]

00:07:339 - seems the note here can be changed to 1/4LN (i think)
00:12:195 - Hmm.... here you use triple but on - 00:12:541 - you use double, but the sound remain the same. the same thing goes on and on. this make the pattern doesn't consistent. (Or you following something else(?))
00:27:628 (27628|0,27802|0,27975|0,28148|0,28322|0) - idk about this but this 5 jacknotes can make the players feel uncomfortable. Rearrange this or see my suggest

the pitch is also fit imo

00:28:582 - the pitch is also fit imo
00:29:362 (29362|3) - move this to 2 if you accepted above.
00:29:882 (29882|2,29882|1) - why not move this to left one column?
00:30:750 (30750|0) - to 2 to avoid rapid jack notes press
00:33:524 (33524|3,34218|3) - to 3 ^
00:50:692 (50692|1,50692|3,50778|0,50778|2,50865|1,50865|3) - maybe you can ctrl+h this for pitch relevancy? because this notes - 00:50:778 (50778|0,50778|2) - has higher pitch than the other 2 notes above and under it
01:49:478 (109478|3) - to 1 to avoid rapid jack notes on the right column
01:50:171 (110171|3) - ^ ^
01:51:212 (111212|3) - to 3 to avoid rapid jack notes

hmm... no hitsound yet?


[ADVANCED]

00:00:750 - this has more impact than the others triple notes you use after this. Make it 4 or reduce the other triple to double notes.
00:02:830 (2830|0,2830|3,3177|2,3177|1,3177|3,3524|0) - swap it for pitch relevancy and for easier readibilty
00:04:044 (4044|1,4131|2,4218|0,4304|1,4391|2) - ^
00:05:605 - why not LN like before?
-----------------------------------------------v
00:10:114 (10114|3,10114|2) - swap for pitch.
00:10:460 (10460|0,10634|2,10807|1,10981|3) - make it 4|3|2|1 instead of 1|3|2|4
00:11:154 (11154|0,11328|1,11501|2) - make it 4|3|2
00:11:501 (11501|3) - move to - 00:11:848
-----------------------------------------------^
00:22:599 (22599|0) - I suggest to put this on 4
00:36:299 (36299|3,36472|2) - swap to avoid jack notes
00:56:241 (56241|0,56414|0,56588|0,56761|0) - avoid quad jack notes here so move - 00:56:588 (56588|2,56588|0,56674|1,56761|0) - to right
-------------------------------------------------v
01:03:177 (63177|0,63177|2,63351|2,63351|0,63524|2,63524|0,63697|2,63697|0) - this has a higher pitch than the other rapid-quad double notes you put just after this. so I suggest to put all this notes into 2|4
01:03:871 (63871|3,63871|1,64044|1,64044|3,64218|3,64218|1,64391|1,64391|3) - and this to 1|3
01:04:565 -
suggestion if you apply
---------------------------------------------------^
01:06:645 (66645|0,66819|0) - move all this to col 3 for higher pitch than - 01:06:992 (66992|1,67166|1) -
01:09:767 (69767|1) - Big impact. add one more note
01:53:986 (113986|2,114160|0,114333|1,114507|3) - rearrange to 4|3|2|1 caus in novice you put the ending long notes on column 1.

[NOVICE]

The pitch is good. Nothing I can complain here


Good Luck :) edit: reply my mod and give reason as best as you can if you rejected some :3
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ here's the mod as requested
1|2|3|4
Click
[General]

maybe you have to add "SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS" as well to the tags - done


[ADVANCED]

00:00:750 - this has more impact than the others triple notes you use after this. Make it 4 or reduce the other triple to double notes.
00:02:830 (2830|0,2830|3,3177|2,3177|1,3177|3,3524|0) - swap it for pitch relevancy and for easier readibilty
00:04:044 (4044|1,4131|2,4218|0,4304|1,4391|2) - ^ -Keep this one
00:05:605 - why not LN like before?
-----------------------------------------------v
00:10:114 (10114|3,10114|2) - swap for pitch. -no changed
00:10:460 (10460|0,10634|2,10807|1,10981|3) - make it 4|3|2|1 instead of 1|3|2|4 - no changed
00:11:154 (11154|0,11328|1,11501|2) - make it 4|3|2 - no changed
00:11:501 (11501|3) - move to - 00:11:848 - hardly hear that sound, no changed
-----------------------------------------------^
00:22:599 (22599|0) - I suggest to put this on 4
00:36:299 (36299|3,36472|2) - swap to avoid jack notes - no changed
00:56:241 (56241|0,56414|0,56588|0,56761|0) - avoid quad jack notes here so move - 00:56:588 (56588|2,56588|0,56674|1,56761|0) - to right - no changed, same picth, i will put in the same col
-------------------------------------------------v
01:03:177 (63177|0,63177|2,63351|2,63351|0,63524|2,63524|0,63697|2,63697|0) - this has a higher pitch than the other rapid-quad double notes you put just after this. so I suggest to put all this notes into 2|4
01:03:871 (63871|3,63871|1,64044|1,64044|3,64218|3,64218|1,64391|1,64391|3) - and this to 1|3
01:04:565 -
suggestion if you apply
---------------------------------------------------^
01:06:645 (66645|0,66819|0) - move all this to col 3 for higher pitch than - 01:06:992 (66992|1,67166|1) -
01:09:767 (69767|1) - Big impact. add one more note
01:53:986 (113986|2,114160|0,114333|1,114507|3) - rearrange to 4|3|2|1 caus in novice you put the ending long notes on column 1.

[NOVICE]

The pitch is good. Nothing I can complain here


Good Luck :)
thanks for modding :3
Raediaufar
879 posts
Joined November 2014
Raediaufar
sorry a bit late, pretty busy with irl stuffs

[MARIROSE]
click
00:08:900 (8900|3,8986|2) – remove these notes, because there’s no sound

00:14:622 (14622|2,14622|3,14622|0,14622|1) – remove 4, the additional sound is only cymbal sound so there’s no reason to put 4 notes there

00:17:397 (17397|2,17397|3,17397|0,17397|1) – same thing here, remove 3

00:18:784 (18784|2,18784|3,18784|0,18784|1) – remove 2

00:28:842 (28842|3,28842|1) – this and 00:29:189 (29189|3,29189|1) – has diffenrent pitch, so you may want to make the pattern more vary

00:34:044 (34044|2,34044|3,34044|1,34044|0) – remove 4

00:42:368 (42368|3,42368|0,42368|2,42368|1) – this four notes and 1/4 chord trill afterward is not a good idea, make it triplet

00:43:062 (43062|0,43062|3,43062|2,43062|1) – this as well

00:47:917 (47917|2,47917|3,47917|0,47917|1) – make it triplet

00:49:044 – missing note

00:52:773 (52773|3,52773|0,52773|2,52773|1) – dat 23 jack lol, this is not good, make it triplet

00:53:466 (53466|2,53466|3,53466|0,53466|1) – this too, remove 1

00:55:894 (55894|2) – why you add a single note here but you didn’t do that on - 00:55:547 -?

00:58:322 (58322|3,58322|1,58322|2,58322|0,58669|1,58669|0,58669|2,58669|3,59015|2,59015|3,59015|1,59015|0) – these four notes are just really unnecessarry and will create jacks

01:07:339 (67339|2,67339|3,67339|0,67339|1) – ok this is not good, make it only two because there’s no cymbal as well in here

01:31:183 (91183|0,91270|0) – I don’t see the reason behind these jacks

01:43:408 (103408|3,103408|1,103408|2,103408|0) – make this triplet

01:46:183 (106183|2,106183|3,106183|0,106183|1) - ^
01:48:958 (108958|0,108958|3,108958|2,108958|1) - ^
01:51:732 (111732|0,111732|3,111732|2,111732|1) - ^

01:52:426 (112426|2,112426|3,112426|0,112426|1) – make this one double

01:52:773 (112773|3,112773|2,112773|1) - ^

01:52:426 (112426|2,112426|3,112426|0,112426|1) – this one three
01:53:119 (113119|0,113119|3,113119|2,113119|1) - ^

[BASIC]
click
Why in this part - 00:17:397 – to this - 00:21:559 – you didn’t map the crash sound when in part - 00:39:593 – to - 00:43:755 – you map the crash sound?

00:21:559 – add a note here

00:52:079 (52079|3) – add note here, cymbal

00:52:773 (52773|3) – this as well

00:53:119 (53119|0) – LN till - 00:53:466 – more fit to the sound

00:56:241 (56241|1,56414|2,56588|1,56761|2) – this is not good, use LN instead like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3340439 and also to make it consistent with this LN - 00:56:934 (56934|3) –

00:58:669 (58669|0) – add a note here, cymbal

00:59:015 (59015|3,59015|2) – delete 3

01:10:114 – add a note

01:09:767 (69767|2,69767|0) – delete one note

01:10:114 – add a note here

01:29:536 (89536|3) – this LN is until here - 01:30:923 – because the sound that this LN represent is fading out

01:39:593 (99593|2) - move to 4, this column is rather empty here
Crono
227 posts
Joined April 2014
Crono
Here from modding queue~

Mod
BASIC

01:35:085 (95085|0) - move to 3 to keep impact notes on hand alternate. Prior to this note the section 01:32:310 (92310|2,92657|3,93004|1,93351|2,93697|0,94044|3,94391|1,94738|2) - all had impact note on right hand.
At 01:35:085 (95085|0) your pattern changes impact note to left hand.

01:40:287 (100287|1) - move to 3. Same reason but with left hand

01:41:674 (101674|2) - move to 1

01:51:732 (111732|2) - Perhaps you could make the outro a little more fun? Even Novice players will find the end here very anti climactic

:D
NOVICE
01:17:050 (77050|0,77223|1,77397|2) - move across to 1 2 and 3 for consistency. Or just move 01:17:050 (77050|0,77223|1,77397|2) - to 2 and 3

Other then that it's very nicely done imo

ADVANCED
00:21:559 - add note

I'm pretty confident your gonna rank this so you don't need luck hehe.
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

Raediaufar wrote:

sorry a bit late, pretty busy with irl stuffs

[BASIC]
click
Why in this part - 00:17:397 – to this - 00:21:559 – you didn’t map the crash sound when in part - 00:39:593 – to - 00:43:755 – you map the crash sound? - different part

00:21:559 – add a note here

00:52:079 (52079|3) – add note here, cymbal

00:52:773 (52773|3) – this as well

00:53:119 (53119|0) – LN till - 00:53:466 – more fit to the sound - short LN will the too hard for a E icon diff

00:56:241 (56241|1,56414|2,56588|1,56761|2) – this is not good, use LN instead like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3340439 and also to make it consistent with this LN - 00:56:934 (56934|3) –

00:58:669 (58669|0) – add a note here, cymbal

00:59:015 (59015|3,59015|2) – delete 3

01:10:114 – add a note

01:09:767 (69767|2,69767|0) – delete one note

01:10:114 – add a note here

01:29:536 (89536|3) – this LN is until here - 01:30:923 – because the sound that this LN represent is fading out

01:39:593 (99593|2) - move to 4, this column is rather empty here

Crono wrote:

Here from modding queue~

Mod
BASIC

01:35:085 (95085|0) - move to 3 to keep impact notes on hand alternate. Prior to this note the section 01:32:310 (92310|2,92657|3,93004|1,93351|2,93697|0,94044|3,94391|1,94738|2) - all had impact note on right hand.
At 01:35:085 (95085|0) your pattern changes impact note to left hand.

01:40:287 (100287|1) - move to 3. Same reason but with left hand

01:41:674 (101674|2) - move to 1

01:51:732 (111732|2) - Perhaps you could make the outro a little more fun? Even Novice players will find the end here very anti climactic

:D
NOVICE
01:17:050 (77050|0,77223|1,77397|2) - move across to 1 2 and 3 for consistency. Or just move 01:17:050 (77050|0,77223|1,77397|2) - to 2 and 3

Other then that it's very nicely done imo

ADVANCED
00:21:559 - add note

I'm pretty confident your gonna rank this so you don't need luck hehe.
Thanks you guys, update
sry for i didnt write down what i changed, kinda buzy right now, sorry ;w;
Marirose
1,121 posts
Joined September 2012
Marirose

paperlens wrote:

Marirose
以下都是建议 看看就好-w-

*00:01:443 (1443|0) - 或许挪到4比较舒服吧

*00:03:958 (3958|0) - 建议delete，然后把00:03:871 (3871|2) - 换成LN
以及00:06:645 (6645|1) - 这个应该是和上面所说的note是相似的，所以他们的秩相等，迹相等，特征值相同，并且他们的逆矩阵也相似

*00:04:911 - 00:06:299 - 之类，这里也是有音的 真的不抓么 我觉得可以让前面的LN提前结束在这里再放LN...看你的想法啦

*00:08:726 - 这里的不应该是LN么 我不太清楚- -

*00:09:073 - 00:09:767 - 这里开始不应该是两个连点加一个双面条么- -或者是想要让pattern更丰富一些

*00:20:258 (20258|3) - delete，或者00:20:605 - 00:20:952 - 00:21:299 - add。
参照你之后的pattern 00:42:368 - 我觉得应该是add

*00:22:859 (22859|3) - 感觉不对

*00:26:588 (26588|0,26588|2,26674|1,26761|2,26761|3) - 00:23:813 (23813|2,23900|1,23900|0,23986|2,23986|3) - 我觉得都不好，00:29:362 (29362|3,29449|0,29449|2,29536|3,29536|1,29622|0,29709|3,29709|2) - 应该都像这样比较好吧，或者至少把这些地方统一一下pattern
以及这里00:32:137 -

*00:52:426 - 这里有音

*00:53:813 (53813|3) - 建议delete，或者后面的00:54:160 - 00:54:854 - 等地方add

*00:55:200 - add

*01:07:339 - 这里开始的这些 如果是要rank的谱这大概肯定不行吧，三键的地方不是在每个白线上也没有抓clap音也没有抓全部的鼓音

以及小叉能不能帮我查图哇>_<

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Marirose's EXHAUST]

00:07:339 - seems the note here can be changed to 1/4LN (i think)
00:12:195 - Hmm.... here you use triple but on - 00:12:541 - you use double, but the sound remain the same. the same thing goes on and on. this make the pattern doesn't consistent. (Or you following something else(?))
00:27:628 (27628|0,27802|0,27975|0,28148|0,28322|0) - idk about this but this 5 jacknotes can make the players feel uncomfortable. Rearrange this or see my suggest

the pitch is also fit imo

00:28:582 - the pitch is also fit imo
00:29:362 (29362|3) - move this to 2 if you accepted above.
00:29:882 (29882|2,29882|1) - why not move this to left one column?
00:30:750 (30750|0) - to 2 to avoid rapid jack notes press
00:33:524 (33524|3,34218|3) - to 3 ^
00:50:692 (50692|1,50692|3,50778|0,50778|2,50865|1,50865|3) - maybe you can ctrl+h this for pitch relevancy? because this notes - 00:50:778 (50778|0,50778|2) - has higher pitch than the other 2 notes above and under it
01:49:478 (109478|3) - to 1 to avoid rapid jack notes on the right column
01:50:171 (110171|3) - ^ ^
01:51:212 (111212|3) - to 3 to avoid rapid jack notes

Raediaufar wrote:

[MARIROSE]
click
00:08:900 (8900|3,8986|2) – remove these notes, because there’s no sound

00:14:622 (14622|2,14622|3,14622|0,14622|1) – remove 4, the additional sound is only cymbal sound so there’s no reason to put 4 notes there

00:17:397 (17397|2,17397|3,17397|0,17397|1) – same thing here, remove 3

00:18:784 (18784|2,18784|3,18784|0,18784|1) – remove 2

00:28:842 (28842|3,28842|1) – this and 00:29:189 (29189|3,29189|1) – has diffenrent pitch, so you may want to make the pattern more vary

00:34:044 (34044|2,34044|3,34044|1,34044|0) – remove 4

00:42:368 (42368|3,42368|0,42368|2,42368|1) – this four notes and 1/4 chord trill afterward is not a good idea, make it triplet

00:43:062 (43062|0,43062|3,43062|2,43062|1) – this as well

00:47:917 (47917|2,47917|3,47917|0,47917|1) – make it triplet

00:49:044 – missing note

00:52:773 (52773|3,52773|0,52773|2,52773|1) – dat 23 jack lol, this is not good, make it triplet

00:53:466 (53466|2,53466|3,53466|0,53466|1) – this too, remove 1

00:55:894 (55894|2) – why you add a single note here but you didn’t do that on - 00:55:547 -?

00:58:322 (58322|3,58322|1,58322|2,58322|0,58669|1,58669|0,58669|2,58669|3,59015|2,59015|3,59015|1,59015|0) – these four notes are just really unnecessarry and will create jacks

01:07:339 (67339|2,67339|3,67339|0,67339|1) – ok this is not good, make it only two because there’s no cymbal as well in here

01:31:183 (91183|0,91270|0) – I don’t see the reason behind these jacks

01:43:408 (103408|3,103408|1,103408|2,103408|0) – make this triplet

01:46:183 (106183|2,106183|3,106183|0,106183|1) - ^
01:48:958 (108958|0,108958|3,108958|2,108958|1) - ^
01:51:732 (111732|0,111732|3,111732|2,111732|1) - ^

01:52:426 (112426|2,112426|3,112426|0,112426|1) – make this one double

01:52:773 (112773|3,112773|2,112773|1) - ^

01:52:426 (112426|2,112426|3,112426|0,112426|1) – this one three
01:53:119 (113119|0,113119|3,113119|2,113119|1) - ^
thanks for modding~~ update :)
update
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Spy
2,551 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
Source: SOUND VOLTEX FLOOR，這個是投稿平台
改成SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
-SoraGami-
951 posts
Joined March 2014
-SoraGami-
love this song ^w^)/*
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

Spy wrote:

Source: SOUND VOLTEX FLOOR，這個是投稿平台
改成SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
ok

-SoraGami- wrote:

love this song ^w^)/*
thanks for star
^w^)/
biemote
292 posts
Joined April 2011
biemote
Hi~
Request from QQ 虽然不知道这开头有啥用但总感觉很dio的样子

1234

BASIC
00:00:750 - 到 00:11:848 - 不大清楚开头对的是鼓点还是简化版主音.
鼓点的话 00:02:137 (2137|3) - 00:07:686 (7686|0) - 这两个也太奇怪了吧?
主音的话00:10:460 (10460|3) - 把这个拆了吧....也不会加很多难度.

00:11:848 - 加一个.和后面的 00:14:622 - 相比要多一个重鼓点.
00:17:397 (17397|0,18091|2,18784|3,19478|1) - 老实说,个人不怎么喜欢长条替代1/2.....
00:39:593 - 这里同上.

00:56:934 (56934|3,57281|0) - ctrl + h

01:08:726 - 怎么 00:43:755 - 都抓了这个长条然后这里就没有了....?

00:47:917 - 加一个?

另外建议00:47:917 - 到 01:07:339 - 按照音高再重新排列下.

01:51:385 - 鼓点?

NOVICE
00:44:102 - 这里应该只有一个音吧...?
00:56:241 - 好残忍这里就把鼓点抛弃了

01:01:096 - 加一个
01:05:605 - ^

01:10:114 - 到 01:21:212 - 按照音高重新排列下?


ADVANCE
00:24:333 (24333|0) - 改成单点吧后面的音比这个重
00:25:027 (25027|1,25027|0,25200|2,25200|1,25374|3,25374|2,25547|3,25547|0) - 一股反了方向的既视感
00:27:108 (27108|2) - 这个也是,后面几个也是

01:03:177 (63177|1,63177|2,63351|2,63351|1,63524|2,63524|1,63697|1,63697|2,63871|3,63871|0,64044|0,64044|3,64218|3,64218|0,64391|0,64391|3) - 强烈建议ctrl + h

01:53:986 (113986|0,114160|1,114333|2) - 一股强烈的反音高既视感.

虽然由于轨道限制和玩家手的限制,note摆放不可能完全按照音高,但是一些比较明显的还是建议....
以上

GL~
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Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

SanadaYukimura wrote:

biemote wrote:

Hi~
Request from QQ 虽然不知道这开头有啥用但总感觉很dio的样子

1234

BASIC
00:00:750 - 到 00:11:848 - 不大清楚开头对的是鼓点还是简化版主音. - 主音
鼓点的话 00:02:137 (2137|3) - 00:07:686 (7686|0) - 这两个也太奇怪了吧?
主音的话00:10:460 (10460|3) - 把这个拆了吧....也不会加很多难度. - 我通常不在Easy难度里放太多红线，先保留吧 orz

00:11:848 - 加一个.和后面的 00:14:622 - 相比要多一个重鼓点. - ok
00:17:397 (17397|0,18091|2,18784|3,19478|1) - 老实说,个人不怎么喜欢长条替代1/2.....
00:39:593 - 这里同上. - 两个都保留，理由同上

00:56:934 (56934|3,57281|0) - ctrl + h - ok

01:08:726 - 怎么 00:43:755 - 都抓了这个长条然后这里就没有了....? - ok

00:47:917 - 加一个? - ok

另外建议00:47:917 - 到 01:07:339 - 按照音高再重新排列下. ok

01:51:385 - 鼓点? - ok
NOVICE
00:44:102 - 这里应该只有一个音吧...? - ok
00:56:241 - 好残忍这里就把鼓点抛弃了 - 这里主音会爽

01:01:096 - 加一个 - ok
01:05:605 - ^ - ok

01:10:114 - 到 01:21:212 - 按照音高重新排列下? - ok


ADVANCE
00:24:333 (24333|0) - 改成单点吧后面的音比这个重
00:25:027 (25027|1,25027|0,25200|2,25200|1,25374|3,25374|2,25547|3,25547|0) - 一股反了方向的既视感
00:27:108 (27108|2) - 这个也是,后面几个也是

01:03:177 (63177|1,63177|2,63351|2,63351|1,63524|2,63524|1,63697|1,63697|2,63871|3,63871|0,64044|0,64044|3,64218|3,64218|0,64391|0,64391|3) - 强烈建议ctrl + h

01:53:986 (113986|0,114160|1,114333|2) - 一股强烈的反音高既视感.
ADV全部ok

虽然由于轨道限制和玩家手的限制,note摆放不可能完全按照音高,但是一些比较明显的还是建议.... - 音高的排列我一直很头疼。。。
以上

GL~
感谢
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Verniy_Chan
2,321 posts
Joined May 2014
Verniy_Chan

Hi Sanada-san
NM as requested from ★☭ Верный osu!mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[General]
In taq sound voltex is overlap, please remove some

[BASIC]
00:11:848 - add note, cimbal sounds
00:12:195 - 00:17:050 - over relax pattern (lel) IMO please add note 1/1 more interesting
00:22:252 (22252|3) - if you following long sounds, LN should end here 00:22:946 - or create new LN in here 00:22:599
00:49:998 (49998|0,50345|3) - you can change into low jack for pitch
01:00:403 - add note, since you add note here 00:59:015
01:01:790 - ^
01:21:212 - add note for cymbal? & check that note have 2 HS

[NOVICE]
00:35:085 (35085|1,35432|1,35778|1) - please avoid 3 low jack/arrange for balance
00:53:119 - add note, since you add note here in BASIC
01:42:888 - add note?

[ADVANCED]
00:10:114 - add note, since snare sounds have extra note like 00:08:726
01:00:403 (60403|0) - move to 2
01:09:767 - add note? snare
01:20:692 (80692|1) - move to 4, pitch
01:54:507 - add note again for nice ending, since cimbal too here

[Marirose's EXHAUST]
01:02:137 - add note, since snare sound 3 note
01:23:640 (83640|1,83640|3,83813|0,83813|2) - Ctrl + G, balance
01:26:588 (86588|3) - move to 2 ^
01:43:235 - add note, sounds like 01:43:062 - hard kick maybe

Nice Quality Map
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Sanada-san
NM as requested from ★☭ Верный osu!mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[General]
In taq sound voltex is overlap, please remove some

[BASIC]
00:11:848 - add note, cimbal sounds
00:12:195 - 00:17:050 - over relax pattern (lel) IMO please add note 1/1 more interesting - sry, prefer no changed
00:22:252 (22252|3) - if you following long sounds, LN should end here 00:22:946 - or create new LN in here 00:22:599
00:49:998 (49998|0,50345|3) - you can change into low jack for pitch
01:00:403 - add note, since you add note here 00:59:015
01:01:790 - ^
01:21:212 - add note for cymbal? & check that note have 2 HS

[NOVICE]
00:35:085 (35085|1,35432|1,35778|1) - please avoid 3 low jack/arrange for balance
00:53:119 - add note, since you add note here in BASIC
01:42:888 - add note? - no changed, only follow the drum in this part

[ADVANCED]
00:10:114 - add note, since snare sounds have extra note like 00:08:726
01:00:403 (60403|0) - move to 2
01:09:767 - add note? snare - nah... 1 note is enough
01:20:692 (80692|1) - move to 4, pitch - no changed, different col will be better
01:54:507 - add note again for nice ending, since cimbal too here

Nice Quality Map
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
No reply = Fix
thanks!
AlisceaSparku
704 posts
Joined August 2013
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!
From my mod :p

Here's my mod
|1|2|3|4
mod~
[ADVANCED]
00:21:559 - add note? or you are just following the vocal?
00:45:143 - add note. It's a cymbal sound after all ( i think lol )
00:47:9 17 - ^
00:53:466 - ^

[NOVICE]
00:14:622 (14622|2,14622|1) - make it a [14] than a [23]. Placing the notes apart help emphasize the cymbal sound
01:09:767 - add note. It's a strong beat
01:23:640 (83640|3) - move to 3, reason beneath
01:23:986 (83986|2,83986|1) - make this a [23]. to emphasize cymbalsound

Hope these help :D
Good luck with your map!
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi~!
From my mod :p

Here's my mod
|1|2|3|4
mod~
[ADVANCED]
00:21:559 - add note? or you are just following the vocal?
00:45:143 - add note. It's a cymbal sound after all ( i think lol )
00:47:9 17 - ^
00:53:466 - ^ - not really need add to 3

[NOVICE]
00:14:622 (14622|2,14622|1) - make it a [14] than a [23]. Placing the notes apart help emphasize the cymbal sound
01:09:767 - add note. It's a strong beat - one note is good enough
01:23:640 (83640|3) - move to 3, reason beneath
01:23:986 (83986|2,83986|1) - make this a [23]. to emphasize cymbalsound

Hope these help :D
Good luck with your map!
thanks for modding, update
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
please reply properly if you implement and reject any of my mods. give your arguments and reasoning if you reject my mod, thanks.
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|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

Novice.
00:00:750 - this is not beginner, 3 notes are allowed. add 3 for beginning of a phase and beat emphsis.
00:11:848 - ^^
00:22:946 - ^^^ and so on. you know what i mean.
these are my arguments for utilising 3 notes on those places.
1st. this is not beginner, in normal 3 notes are allowed as long as you have enough justification.
2nd. those 3 notes are only to be put at the beginning of the new phase, or at the end of the phase. this denotes there is a need to emphasise the beat to indeed end a phase, or to begin a new phase.
3rd. the strength and emphasise of the beat is markedly different compared to the rest of the patterning where you utilise 2 notes, thus there should be no reason for you not to follow this.
4th. Novice can in theory be extended up until 2.25 difficulty star rating as per RC suggests. this means that increasing to 3 notes would not actually raise the difficulty that much, hence no reason not to add it.


advanced
00:02:484 - add 1 note to signify that sound you've been following. you were using 3 notes before, should use 2 or 3 here just to emphasise both the beat AND the pitched instrument.
00:08:033 - ^^^
00:10:807 - ^^^
00:11:501 - add 1 more note, keep it consistent.


00:11:848 - new phase, add 1 more note.
00:12:021 (12021|1) - readjust placement, move to 3 to avoid jacking and revamp the pattern after to suit this change.

00:18:437 (18437|2,18437|3,18611|2,18784|3,18958|2,18958|3,19131|2,19304|3,19478|3,19651|2,19998|2,19998|3) - bad patterning, very heavy on right hand, readjust and make it more balanced. the left hand side is practically free there.

if you want to make that jack, make it something like this here 00:17:397 (17397|2,17397|3,17397|0,17570|2,17570|1,17744|1,17744|0,17917|0,17917|3,18091|3,18091|2) - . consistent 2 note jacks for every place in 8/4length


01:10:114 - until 01:20:865 - arrangement ignored PR alltogether, which is illogical and doesn't make any sense, since there are so many spaces available and you only use 2/4 single note stream. recommended to revamp to fit the pitch. current arrangement only cares for handbalance and pattern. you can incorporate PR while still retaining hand balance and pattern.
01:43:062 (103062|1,103062|0) - move to 23, makes much more sense with PR taken into consideration. and also avoid uneccessary jack on 1.
01:48:611 (108611|2,108611|3,108784|2,108784|3) - pitch and emphasis of the beat is even different, there is no reason to jack this. move either of them to 12.
uneccessary jack on 4, too heavy on right hands.
if you follow the pitch of the beat it should be 34 then 12
01:51:385 - should be 3 notes, same emphasis as the other 3 notes, add for consistency
Marirose's Exhaust
00:04:565 (4565|0,4651|1,4738|2,4825|3) - this can be arranged like this here to represent the pitch ascension and descent more accurately
http://puu.sh/iV65M/f591aee6ec.jpg
00:08:640 - should be a note here, add. readjust to avoid jacking as well
00:09:420 - should have 3 notes just like 00:08:033 (8033|1,8033|2,8033|3) - . express them consistently
00:10:981 (10981|0,10981|1,11154|0,11154|2,11328|1,11328|3,11501|0,11501|3,11501|2,11588|1,11674|2,11761|3) - ctrl H is much more appropriate in terms of pitch relevancy.
00:10:807 (10807|2,10807|0,10807|3) - so rearrange here to not jack on 34 too much

00:20:518 - consider this for consistency. http://puu.sh/iV6gJ/5e8542122b.jpg
yes it would raise the difficulty, butimo this is still appropriate. this is not overmapped yet because the beat justifies it.

00:23:293 (23293|3,23293|2,23640|3,23640|2,23986|0,23986|2) - use 3 notes for every white lines. its much more appropriate considering there is that emphasised beat.
00:25:027 (25027|3,25027|0,25200|0,25200|2,25374|3,25374|1,25547|2,25547|3,25721|1,25721|0) - for example here, it doesn't really make much sense to me. if you utilise 3 notes it would be much clearer that you give emphasise on both the beat, as well as the pitched instrument.
do that until 00:33:697 -
00:33:697 (33697|3,33697|0,33697|1) - this is unreasonable to be expressed with 3 notes, louder beat before this only use 2 notes. utilising 2notes are enough here.
00:39:767 (39767|3,39767|0,39940|2,39940|3,39940|1,40114|3,40114|0,40287|2,40287|1,40460|3,40460|0,40634|1,40634|2,40634|0,40807|0,40807|3,40981|0,40981|1,40981|2,40981|3,41154|0,41154|3,41328|2,41328|3,41328|1) - bad pattern variation. you jack too much on 1 and 4, consider revamping your pattern to vary the jack.

00:42:368 (42368|3,42368|2,42368|1,42368|0,42455|1,42455|3,42541|2,42541|0,42628|3,42628|1,42715|2,42715|0,42715|3,42802|0,42802|1,42888|3,42888|2,42975|1,42975|0,43062|0,43062|2,43062|3,43062|1,43148|3,43148|0,43235|1,43235|2,43322|3,43322|0,43408|1,43408|3,43408|0) - really we can jack like this? although the diff is indeed high, idk, but might consider simpler pattern since imo you abuse the jack too much.

00:45:143 (45143|2) - how about using LN here until 00:46:530 - . it seems much better for readability.

00:54:160 (54160|3,54160|1,54854|0,54854|2) - since you give a lot of jack earlier, i see no reason not to use 3 notes here to make it consistent with the rest of the patterning for that 4/4 white line beat. add accordingly.
00:55:547 - add a note, should be the same with 00:55:894 (55894|2) -
00:56:934 (56934|3,56934|0,57021|0,57021|3,57108|0,57108|3,57195|0,57195|3) - better to make it into trill instead of jack.

01:01:443 (61443|2,61443|1,61443|3,62137|3,62137|0) - these are the same, adjust the placement. should be consistent with 3 notes

01:07:339 (67339|3,67339|2,67339|0,67339|1,67426|3,67426|1,67513|0,67513|3,67599|2,67599|0,67686|1,67686|3,67773|3,67773|2,67773|0,67859|3,67859|1,67946|0,67946|2,68033|1,68033|0,68033|3,68119|2,68119|3,68206|1,68206|0,68293|3,68293|2,68293|1,68380|3,68380|0,68466|1,68466|2,68553|0,68553|3,68640|2,68640|1) - not really sure about this... definitely not a fan of this patterning, but if this doesn't break the RC then so be it.

01:23:986 - should be 4, just like 01:21:212 (81212|2,81212|1,81212|0,81212|3) -
01:21:559 (81559|3,81559|1,81906|1,81906|0,82252|0,82252|3) - use 3 notes for every white lines to denote and signify the beat. at themoment it doesnt really make much sense to me.
i.e. 01:21:906 (81906|0,81906|1,82079|3,82079|2,82252|0,82252|3,82426|2,82426|0,82599|1,82599|3,82773|0,82773|1,82946|3,82946|2,83119|3,83119|0,83293|1,83293|2) - there is no emphasis at all to differentiate which lines have beat and pitched instrument, and which one only has pitched instrument sound.
adjust for the whole phase until 01:29:536 -
01:31:270 (91270|0) - uneccessary jack, move to 3

01:52:426 (112426|0,112426|3,112426|2,112426|1,112513|0,112513|1,112599|3,112599|2,112686|0,112686|1,112773|2,112773|3,112773|1,112859|3,112859|0,112946|1,112946|2,113033|0,113033|3,113119|2,113119|1,113119|3,113119|0) - looks like overmapped to me, consider revamping. or just keep it maybe. definitely not a fan of such patterning.

nice map, good luck
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
please reply properly if you implement and reject any of my mods. give your arguments and reasoning if you reject my mod, thanks.
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|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

Novice.
00:00:750 - this is not beginner, 3 notes are allowed. add 3 for beginning of a phase and beat emphsis.
00:11:848 - ^^
00:22:946 - ^^^ and so on. you know what i mean.
these are my arguments for utilising 3 notes on those places.
1st. this is not beginner, in normal 3 notes are allowed as long as you have enough justification.
2nd. those 3 notes are only to be put at the beginning of the new phase, or at the end of the phase. this denotes there is a need to emphasise the beat to indeed end a phase, or to begin a new phase.
3rd. the strength and emphasise of the beat is markedly different compared to the rest of the patterning where you utilise 2 notes, thus there should be no reason for you not to follow this.
4th. Novice can in theory be extended up until 2.25 difficulty star rating as per RC suggests. this means that increasing to 3 notes would not actually raise the difficulty that much, hence no reason not to add it.
Sorry, but i decide not to changed those part, 3 note is not really necessary, since there is already 2 note for the strong beat


advanced
00:02:484 - add 1 note to signify that sound you've been following. you were using 3 notes before, should use 2 or 3 here just to emphasise both the beat AND the pitched instrument.
00:08:033 - ^^^
00:10:807 - ^^^
00:11:501 - add 1 more note, keep it consistent.


00:11:848 - new phase, add 1 more note.- No changed is, 3 note for cymbal in this part
00:12:021 (12021|1) - readjust placement, move to 3 to avoid jacking and revamp the pattern after to suit this change. - ^^

00:18:437 (18437|2,18437|3,18611|2,18784|3,18958|2,18958|3,19131|2,19304|3,19478|3,19651|2,19998|2,19998|3) - bad patterning, very heavy on right hand, readjust and make it more balanced. the left hand side is practically free there.

if you want to make that jack, make it something like this here 00:17:397 (17397|2,17397|3,17397|0,17570|2,17570|1,17744|1,17744|0,17917|0,17917|3,18091|3,18091|2) - . consistent 2 note jacks for every place in 8/4length


01:10:114 - until 01:20:865 - arrangement ignored PR alltogether, which is illogical and doesn't make any sense, since there are so many spaces available and you only use 2/4 single note stream. recommended to revamp to fit the pitch. current arrangement only cares for handbalance and pattern. you can incorporate PR while still retaining hand balance and pattern.
01:43:062 (103062|1,103062|0) - move to 23, makes much more sense with PR taken into consideration. and also avoid uneccessary jack on 1. - no changed, the drum are same with 01:43:235 - , so it is fine with same col
01:48:611 (108611|2,108611|3,108784|2,108784|3) - pitch and emphasis of the beat is even different, there is no reason to jack this. move either of them to 12. - same reason
uneccessary jack on 4, too heavy on right hands.
if you follow the pitch of the beat it should be 34 then 12
01:51:385 - should be 3 notes, same emphasis as the other 3 notes, add for consistency

nice map, good luck
Thanks, no reply means fix
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7


BASIC
00:03:177 (3177|2) - move to 1. same sound as 00:02:830 (2830|0) -
00:03:524 (3524|0) - ^3
00:17:397 (17397|0) - add another note
00:43:062 - add note for cymbal sound
00:55:547 (55547|2) - move to 1
01:01:270 - add note
NOVICE
00:02:137 (2137|0) - move to 2. too many notes in colum 1
00:08:033 (8033|2) - ^2
00:56:241 (56241|1,56588|1) - it will be good if you make it double
01:35:432 (95432|3,95432|2) - move to 1,2
01:54:507 (114507|3,114507|0) - add another note in col. 2


ADVANCED
00:21:559 (21559|3) - change this to LN, end 00:22:252 -
00:21:906 (21906|1) - remove
00:22:426 (22426|3) - move to 2
00:22:599 (22599|2) - ^4

good song with good map
i'm really hope we have std diff :o
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7


BASIC
00:03:177 (3177|2) - move to 1. same sound as 00:02:830 (2830|0) -
00:03:524 (3524|0) - ^3
00:17:397 (17397|0) - add another note
00:43:062 - add note for cymbal sound
00:55:547 (55547|2) - move to 1
01:01:270 - add note - nah... decide not follow the main sound
NOVICE
00:02:137 (2137|0) - move to 2. too many notes in colum 1
00:08:033 (8033|2) - ^2
00:56:241 (56241|1,56588|1) - it will be good if you make it double - too hard for nov diff, also not a strong beat
01:35:432 (95432|3,95432|2) - move to 1,2
01:54:507 (114507|3,114507|0) - add another note in col. 2


ADVANCED
00:21:559 (21559|3) - change this to LN, end 00:22:252 - - prefer not changed this
00:21:906 (21906|1) - remove - for the vocal lol
00:22:426 (22426|3) - move to 2 - keep those pattern
00:22:599 (22599|2) - ^4 - ^

good song with good map
i'm really hope we have std diff :o
other all fix
hmm.... std diff, might be a good idea.
[ A v a l o n ]
2,000 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
Hello Yukimura-san =w=) /
Mod as requested
i'm sorry for being late hue . . ;w;

General song setup : fine
Background resolution : fine
Timing : good
Aimod : no problem
Hitsounds (for below 100ms and 5 ms delayed): well, all fine :3
Metadata : fine =w=)/ https://remywiki.com/VISION

|1|2|3|4|

click ye

  • [BASIC]
  1. 00:05:258 (5258|1) - snap to 00:05:432 - cuz you've already follow this ind of sound start on this 00:02:830 -
  2. 00:08:726 (8726|1) - move to 4, make a jack same as 00:02:830 - . . . more fit imo
  3. 00:20:171 - you've missed a sigle note note here, like 00:18:784 -
  4. 00:22:599 (22599|1,22946|0,23293|1) - try to swap this guy to 1 2 1 column . . . . it's more fine to play imo
  5. ayy the rest is fine . . very nice BASIC diff

    [NOVICE]
  6. 00:31:617 (31617|1) - move to 4 . . to avoid continous jack
  7. 00:53:119 (53119|1) - LN is better for this part . . . cuz this patter is not on the noisy part . . . make a different feel for player
  8. 00:56:934 (56934|0) - make this L to stream . . . it's more fair for this part 00:56:241 - . . .and to make a different to for this section 00:57:281 (57281|2) -
  9. 01:07:339 - hmm, try this ? http://puu.sh/iW3uL/6489518cc5.jpg ;w;
  10. 01:30:923 (90923|3) - suggest to move on another column . . . the sound is start different fro previous pattern

    [ADVANCED]
  11. 00:01:096 - 00:01:790 - 00:03:871 - and so on . . . i think this note is overrated on this part . . . this is still calm part, so i think it's only need 2 note instead for snare . . .
  12. 00:20:171 (20171|1,20865|1) - delete 1 note on that, i know it's cymbal sound . . but hey, it's combined with 1/4 stream pattern and the cymbal sound is too small . . . and on this section is still calm part . . so no need overuse the note on this xD
  13. 00:24:680 (24680|0) - actually there's no long sound
  14. 00:27:455 (27455|2) - same reason as ^
  15. 00:30:229 (30229|3) - ^
  16. 00:33:004 (33004|3) - ^ . . . . a little my opinion, i think for every sound like this, you can start the LN from here 00:33:177 - cuz this LN is unfair 00:32:830 (32830|0) - for this sound 00:32:484 - while has no LN . . . xD . . actually it can be practiced start from here 00:24:507 -
  17. 00:43:755 - delete 1 note on this . .. no contains a kick sound, and the cymbal is too low
  18. 00:44:102 (44102|1) - delete this too . . . only single 1/4 stair is fine i think for this calm part
  19. 00:46:703 (46703|3) - no sound actually . . .look at Mari's diff too :3
  20. 00:55:547 (55547|0) - this LN is ended on 00:55:807 - btw, start this 00:55:547 - LN conflict with Mari's diff i think XD
  21. 00:57:281 (57281|0) - same as ^ ? ? ? xD idk, you need ask other for confirmation
  22. 01:01:790 - reduce 1 note on this, it's not contains drum clap like 01:01:443 (61443|0,61443|1,61443|2) - . . . the sound is similar like 01:00:403 - :3
  23. 01:29:882 - 01:30:229 - 01:30:576 - well, reduce 1 note on that time ? . . . i think it just only need 1/4 single stream imo . . . XD . . make thiis dif more
    playable for newcomer player
  24. well . . need to reduce the density of note on this diff . . . the star is too high for ADV diff imo XD XD XD

Good luck for qualified Yukimura-san =w=)/
Last edited by [ A v a l o n ] , edited 1 time in total.
Sandalphon
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Topic Starter
Sandalphon

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hello Yukimura-san =w=) /
Mod as requested
i'm sorry for being late hue . . ;w;

General song setup : fine
Background resolution : fine
Timing : good
Aimod : no problem
Hitsounds (for below 100ms and 5 ms delayed): well, all fine :3
Metadatada : fine =w=)/ https://remywiki.com/VISION

|1|2|3|4|

click ye

  • [BASIC]
  1. 00:05:258 (5258|1) - snap to 00:05:432 - cuz you've already follow this ind of sound start on this 00:02:830 -
  2. 00:08:726 (8726|1) - move to 4, make a jack same as 00:02:830 - . . . more fit imo
  3. 00:20:171 - you've missed a sigle note note here, like 00:18:784 -
  4. 00:22:599 (22599|1,22946|0,23293|1) - try to swap this guy to 1 2 1 column . . . . it's more fine to play imo
  5. ayy the rest is fine . . very nice BASIC diff

    [NOVICE]
  6. 00:31:617 (31617|1) - move to 4 . . to avoid continous jack
  7. 00:53:119 (53119|1) - LN is better for this part . . . cuz this patter is not on the noisy part . . . make a different feel for player
  8. 00:56:934 (56934|0) - make this L to stream . . . it's more fair for this part 00:56:241 - . . .and to make a different to for this section 00:57:281 (57281|2) -
  9. 01:07:339 - hmm, try this ? http://puu.sh/iW3uL/6489518cc5.jpg ;w;
  10. 01:30:923 (90923|3) - suggest to move on another column . . . the sound is start different fro previous pattern

    [ADVANCED]
  11. 00:01:096 - 00:01:790 - 00:03:871 - and so on . . . i think this note is overrated on this part . . . this is still calm part, so i think it's only need 2 note instead for snare . . .
  12. 00:20:171 (20171|1,20865|1) - delete 1 note on that, i know it's cymbal sound . . but hey, it's combined with 1/4 stream pattern and the cymbal sound is too small . . . and on this section is still calm part . . so no need overuse the note on this xD
  13. 00:24:680 (24680|0) - actually there's no long sound
  14. 00:27:455 (27455|2) - same reason as ^
  15. 00:30:229 (30229|3) - ^
  16. 00:33:004 (33004|3) - ^ . . . . a little my opinion, i think for every sound like this, you can start the LN from here 00:33:177 - cuz this LN is unfair 00:32:830 (32830|0) - for this sound 00:32:484 - while has no LN . . . xD . . actually it can be practiced start from here 00:24:507 -
  17. 00:43:755 - delete 1 note on this . .. no contains a kick sound, and the cymbal is too low
  18. 00:44:102 (44102|1) - delete this too . . . only single 1/4 stair is fine i think for this calm part - keep this
  19. 00:46:703 (46703|3) - no sound actually . . .look at Mari's diff too :3
  20. 00:55:547 (55547|0) - this LN is ended on 00:55:807 - btw, start this 00:55:547 - LN conflict with Mari's diff i think XD
  21. 00:57:281 (57281|0) - same as ^ ? ? ? xD idk, you need ask other for confirmation
  22. 01:01:790 - reduce 1 note on this, it's not contains drum clap like 01:01:443 (61443|0,61443|1,61443|2) - . . . the sound is similar like 01:00:403 - :3
  23. 01:29:882 - 01:30:229 - 01:30:576 - well, reduce 1 note on that time ? . . . i think it just only need 1/4 single stream imo . . . XD . . make thiis dif more
    playable for newcomer player
  24. well . . need to reduce the density of note on this diff . . . the star is too high for ADV diff imo XD XD XD

Good luck for qualified Yukimura-san =w=)/
Almost all fix, very nice mod
Thanks!
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL
poi
Last edited by NlHIL , edited 1 time in total.
RuberusuScarlet
1,476 posts
Joined April 2013
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's Normal modding


from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

  • [ADV]
    00:21:906 (21906|1) - vocal note? I think 00:21:848 - is fit (1/6)

    00:50:345 - one note delete(not LN). as 00:55:894 -

    00:53:466 - add note and finish or 00:53:466 (53466|1) - add finish. cymbal sound

    01:01:790 - one note delete (not LN). as 00:55:894 -

    01:06:992 (66992|3) - delete. no cymbal sound

    [NOV]
    01:29:536 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3395261 . LN=drum sound

    01:42:888 - add note. main sound
    01:48:437 - ^
good luck
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

NlHIL wrote:

EZ
01:42:723 - add
01:44:174 - ^
01:44:271 - ^
01:50:368 - ^
01:50:465 - ^
NM
00:09:335 - add
00:41:077 - ^
00:41:852 - ^
00:42:626 - ^
00:43:400 - ^
00:44:174 - ^
00:44:561 - ^
00:44:976 - ^
00:45:335 - ^
00:45:723 - ^
00:46:104 - ^
00:46:497 - ^
01:21:335 - ^

your HD seems perfect... :)

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's Normal modding


from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

  • [ADV]
    00:21:906 (21906|1) - vocal note? I think 00:21:848 - is fit (1/6)

    00:50:345 - one note delete(not LN). as 00:55:894 -

    00:53:466 - add note and finish or 00:53:466 (53466|1) - add finish. cymbal sound

    01:01:790 - one note delete (not LN). as 00:55:894 -

    01:06:992 (66992|3) - delete. no cymbal sound

    [NOV]
    01:29:536 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3395261 . LN=drum sound

    01:42:888 - add note. main sound
    01:48:437 - ^
good luck
Thanks, all ok
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
yo幸村 抱歉来晚了 其实前几天有mod过但是不小心关掉了网页
那么开始咯
1 2 3 4
[BASIC]
这个难度主打的是加强 因为看过了你的Novice之后发现就是Easy差不多跳到Hard-了
00:02:137 (2137|3) - 这根Hold我建议你还是拆成Note抓主音算了 违和感有点大

00:05:258 (5258|0) - 如果选择跟了这个音 那么必须全部抓齐 这边算窜音了 建议删去

00:07:686 (7686|0) - ^上面提到过的

00:10:460 (10460|3) - ^

00:22:252 (22252|3) - ^ 如果不想把这里变成Note请在 00:22:946 - 删去一个

kiai没什么好说的 如果要说建议我只能说很单调

00:49:304 (49304|2) - ^前面提到过的

00:52:599 - 加一个Note 这里要主音跟完全

00:54:854 (54854|3) - ^

00:57:628 (57628|2) - 和Novice一样变成Hold也不错哦

00:58:322 - 这一段开始抓音不太懂了 你先是抓了Bass重音+主音的双键 之后莫名其妙开始动词大慈了 我不太能理解>.> 到01:07:339 -为止

01:03:177 (63177|1,63871|3) - 这边建议你还是用Note诠释鼓点比较好

之后的kiai持续动词大慈 嗯这个难度就结束了

[NOVICE]
00:00:923 - 开头漏音了哦>.>

00:03:177 - 至少选一个音放到第二轨 缘由是根据你前面的24连打

00:08:726 - ^

00:17:397 - 严格来说这里的音就和上面的一样了

00:18:784 - ^

00:20:171 - 这个是和下面的一样

00:33:351 (33351|3) - 这是啥啊/.\

00:42:368 (42368|0,43755|3) - 这俩又是啥/.\

00:42:368 - ~ 00:45:143 - 有重音鼓点的地方1/1双键 其实是1/4音的地方做1/2 好好再考虑一下如何

00:49:131 - 加个Note在2 这边是漏音了 而且和之前的音是一样的所以推荐你加在2了

00:52:599 - 和BASIC一样的建议

00:54:680 - ^加个Note 你换位置也没问题只要有1/2连点就可以

00:56:241 - 取舍问题
1.00:57:628 - 这边也1/4满上
2.00:56:241 - 这里开始的3排楼梯全部做短条 好比 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3397969 这样的

00:59:536 - 漏音了

01:01:270 (61270|2) - 这个是和前面的音完全一样的 所以需要放在同个轨道 具体哪个你开心就好

01:02:310 - 漏音了

01:05:085 - .^

01:05:605 - .^

01:06:819 (66819|2,67166|1) - ..^

01:07:339 - 真的不考虑下用Hold带过去嘛 NOVICE这样子好意思嘛

第二个kiai..嗯我有点懒了抱歉 根据上面的Mod自己捉捉虫找出漏掉的音好嘛

[ADVANCED]
00:03:958 - 漏音了

00:07:339 (7339|0) - 这根抓错了 实际是停在 00:07:426 - 但是我建议你干脆在蓝线加个Note

之后你抓的短条简短的说一下
1.第一种肯定就是全抓咯 像你这样写的话一半一半的有些奇怪
2.抓最重点的..嗯..就是这样吧 删去 00:24:160 (24160|3,24507|3) - 然后在 00:25:721 - 加上一个Hold 这就是最主要的几个了

如果采纳的话后面都自行修改
然后我看完了后面的kiai 发现你条子怎么就做一小段的··你要用不同的感觉做我推荐你以1个kiai time为单位来区分比较好

00:44:796 - 其实连打在这里停哦··虽然我知道你是为了简化但是这种的不行呢

01:32:137 (92137|3) - 既然你前面的时候连打没抓主音那么这里这个不能加的

01:50:345 - ~ 01:51:559 - 明显偷懒了 这儿明显都不是一样的音>.>

01:53:293 (113293|2,113640|0) - 这两处其实也需要做成条子

那么就这样啦 有特别需要再让我摸xiaox的吧
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

Simple_Star wrote:

yo幸村 抱歉来晚了 其实前几天有mod过但是不小心关掉了网页 - 幸苦了
那么开始咯
1 2 3 4
[BASIC]
这个难度主打的是加强 因为看过了你的Novice之后发现就是Easy差不多跳到Hard-了
00:02:137 (2137|3) - 这根Hold我建议你还是拆成Note抓主音算了 违和感有点大

00:05:258 (5258|0) - 如果选择跟了这个音 那么必须全部抓齐 这边算窜音了 建议删去

00:07:686 (7686|0) - ^上面提到过的

00:10:460 (10460|3) - ^

00:22:252 (22252|3) - ^ 如果不想把这里变成Note请在 00:22:946 - 删去一个

kiai没什么好说的 如果要说建议我只能说很单调

00:49:304 (49304|2) - ^前面提到过的

00:52:599 - 加一个Note 这里要主音跟完全

00:54:854 (54854|3) - ^

00:57:628 (57628|2) - 和Novice一样变成Hold也不错哦

00:58:322 - 这一段开始抓音不太懂了 你先是抓了Bass重音+主音的双键 之后莫名其妙开始动词大慈了 我不太能理解>.> 到01:07:339 -为止

01:03:177 (63177|1,63871|3) - 这边建议你还是用Note诠释鼓点比较好

之后的kiai持续动词大慈 嗯这个难度就结束了 - 不太敢放开手做Basic qwq

[NOVICE]
00:00:923 - 开头漏音了哦>.>

00:03:177 - 至少选一个音放到第二轨 缘由是根据你前面的24连打

00:08:726 - ^

00:17:397 - 严格来说这里的音就和上面的一样了

00:18:784 - ^

00:20:171 - 这个是和下面的一样

00:33:351 (33351|3) - 这是啥啊/.\ - 抓主音的LN，这么一看好像有点多余

00:42:368 (42368|0,43755|3) - 这俩又是啥/.\

00:42:368 - ~ 00:45:143 - 有重音鼓点的地方1/1双键 其实是1/4音的地方做1/2 好好再考虑一下如何

00:49:131 - 加个Note在2 这边是漏音了 而且和之前的音是一样的所以推荐你加在2了

00:52:599 - 和BASIC一样的建议

00:54:680 - ^加个Note 你换位置也没问题只要有1/2连点就可以

00:56:241 - 取舍问题
1.00:57:628 - 这边也1/4满上
2.00:56:241 - 这里开始的3排楼梯全部做短条 好比 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3397969 这样的

00:59:536 - 漏音了

01:01:270 (61270|2) - 这个是和前面的音完全一样的 所以需要放在同个轨道 具体哪个你开心就好

01:02:310 - 漏音了

01:05:085 - .^

01:05:605 - .^

01:06:819 (66819|2,67166|1) - ..^

01:07:339 - 真的不考虑下用Hold带过去嘛 NOVICE这样子好意思嘛 - 这个保留吧

第二个kiai..嗯我有点懒了抱歉 根据上面的Mod自己捉捉虫找出漏掉的音好嘛

[ADVANCED]
00:03:958 - 漏音了

00:07:339 (7339|0) - 这根抓错了 实际是停在 00:07:426 - 但是我建议你干脆在蓝线加个Note

之后你抓的短条简短的说一下
1.第一种肯定就是全抓咯 像你这样写的话一半一半的有些奇怪
2.抓最重点的..嗯..就是这样吧 删去 00:24:160 (24160|3,24507|3) - 然后在 00:25:721 - 加上一个Hold 这就是最主要的几个了

如果采纳的话后面都自行修改
然后我看完了后面的kiai 发现你条子怎么就做一小段的··你要用不同的感觉做我推荐你以1个kiai time为单位来区分比较好

00:44:796 - 其实连打在这里停哦··虽然我知道你是为了简化但是这种的不行呢

01:32:137 (92137|3) - 既然你前面的时候连打没抓主音那么这里这个不能加的

01:50:345 - ~ 01:51:559 - 明显偷懒了 这儿明显都不是一样的音>.>

01:53:293 (113293|2,113640|0) - 这两处其实也需要做成条子

那么就这样啦 有特别需要再让我摸xiaox的吧
其他全部OK ;w;
感谢小星
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL
Sorry for bad modding.

I shot 3 Kudosu.

Good Luck!
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

NlHIL wrote:

Sorry for bad modding.

I shot 3 Kudosu.

Good Luck!
Thanks, and try to give a reason next when you modding map rather than just write down "add, move deleted"
So mapper can understand your point
Spy
2,551 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
這個EXH很多地方略卡手，說直一點，也許歌做的很爽，不過你也要讓打的人打起來也爽，才是真正一張爽圖
而且說實在很多地方都有點overnote，我的意思是，有些地方其實都要做刪減
Ayachi-
2,261 posts
Joined November 2013
Ayachi-
Requested from queue

壹貳叁肆

這BG看起來就像別人用過的

[BASIC]
00:17:397 (17397|1) - 建議移到第四，比較好打
01:06:645 - 到01:07:339 - 應該會想放滿1/2吧 和00:55:027 - 這種差不多

[NOVICE]
00:40:547 - 這音不抓嗎
01:30:923 (90923|1) - 移到3比較好打吧
KIAI有些抓有些沒抓感覺怪怪的

[ADV]
00:00:750 - 這裡3個音就夠了吧
00:11:501 (11501|3,11501|2,11848|3) - 對新手來說頗難打
00:21:848 (21848|1) - 這個還是放在00:21:906 - 這好吧，因為YOU音重的地方還是在白線上
00:30:923 (30923|0) - 移到四比較好打吧
00:31:096 - 漏音嗎
01:01:790 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3428210 試試
01:09:767 - LN 這結束吧
01:34:565 - 第一KIAI放LN 第二KIAI電子音不試試2NOTES嗎

8-)
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Requested from queue

壹貳叁肆

這BG看起來就像別人用過的 - @MeowPaz

[BASIC]
00:17:397 (17397|1) - 建議移到第四，比較好打 - ok
01:06:645 - 到01:07:339 - 應該會想放滿1/2吧 和00:55:027 - 這種差不多

[NOVICE]
00:40:547 - 這音不抓嗎 - 行
01:30:923 (90923|1) - 移到3比較好打吧 - 改
KIAI有些抓有些沒抓感覺怪怪的 - 是想有选择的抓一些主音，没有抓完，个人感觉还不错（？

[ADV]
00:00:750 - 這裡3個音就夠了吧 - 4个会爽 改了
00:11:501 (11501|3,11501|2,11848|3) - 對新手來說頗難打 - CTRL+H，改成中指Hold应该会好很多
00:21:848 (21848|1) - 這個還是放在00:21:906 - 這好吧，因為YOU音重的地方還是在白線上 - 啊干我记得谁和我说这个Vocal是1/6，改了
00:30:923 (30923|0) - 移到四比較好打吧 - 这个保留
00:31:096 - 漏音嗎 - 补
01:01:790 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3428210 試試 - 可以
01:09:767 - LN 這結束吧 - 没，这个音的确有这么长
01:34:565 - 第一KIAI放LN 第二KIAI電子音不試試2NOTES嗎 - 试试

8-)
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Ayachi-
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Ayachi-

SanadaYukimura wrote:

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Requested from queue

壹貳叁肆

這BG看起來就像別人用過的 - @MeowPaz

[BASIC]
00:17:397 (17397|1) - 建議移到第四，比較好打 - ok
01:06:645 - 到01:07:339 - 應該會想放滿1/2吧 和00:55:027 - 這種差不多

[NOVICE]
00:40:547 - 這音不抓嗎 - 行
01:30:923 (90923|1) - 移到3比較好打吧 - 改
KIAI有些抓有些沒抓感覺怪怪的 - 是想有选择的抓一些主音，没有抓完，个人感觉还不错（？

[ADV]
00:00:750 - 這裡3個音就夠了吧 - 4个会爽 改了
00:11:501 (11501|3,11501|2,11848|3) - 對新手來說頗難打 - CTRL+H，改成中指Hold应该会好很多
00:21:848 (21848|1) - 這個還是放在00:21:906 - 這好吧，因為YOU音重的地方還是在白線上 - 啊干我记得谁和我说这个Vocal是1/6，改了
00:30:923 (30923|0) - 移到四比較好打吧 - 这个保留
00:31:096 - 漏音嗎 - 补
01:01:790 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3428210 試試 - 可以
01:09:767 - LN 這結束吧 - 没，这个音的确有这么长
01:34:565 - 第一KIAI放LN 第二KIAI電子音不試試2NOTES嗎 - 试试

8-)
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01:09:767 - http://puu.sh/j9W1P/87a4787603.jpg
左NOV右ADV
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Sandalphon

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

01:09:767 - http://puu.sh/j9W1P/87a4787603.jpg
左NOV右ADV
改了NOV
感谢recheck
Aphrodena
299 posts
Joined January 2014
Aphrodena
Hi, from queue, col 1234

[BASIC]
00:14:969 (14969|2,15663|2,16356|2,17050|2) - Move to col 2 for hand balance, especially in EZ diff
00:46:530 - (optional) add LN for the fill

[NOVICE]
00:11:501 (11501|0) - Add note for clap, you did it for the other ones in the opening section
01:54:507 (114507|0) - LN sounds like it should end much later than where it is now

[ADVANCED]
00:20:171 (20171|0) - Add note col 2 for cymbal hit (you did this for 00:17:397 (17397|2) and 00:18:784 (18784|1) )
01:09:767 (69767|1) - (optional) add note for really strong sound
01:22:773 + 01:23:119 + 01:24:160 + 01:24:507 + 01:25:547 + 01:25:894 (85894|1) - There's a lower-pitch/quiet synth here, so optional to add note
01:43:062 (103062|1) - Move to col 3, plays better
01:48:611 (108611|2) - ^ but move to 2
01:54:507 (114507|3) - LN sounds like it should end much later than where it is now

GL with ranked! (and sorry for the poor mod >.>)
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