Croove & Mr. Funky - OUT LAW : Reborn · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-07-21T12:20:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 8월 17일 화요일 at 오전 1:08:18

Artist: Croove & Mr. Funky
Title: OUT LAW : Reborn
Source: DJMAX
Tags: TECHNIKA 2 JC D
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3754kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.97 stars, 128 notes)
Hard (4.71 stars, 247 notes)
Maximum (5 stars, 409 notes)
Normal (3.72 stars, 167 notes)
Taiko (4.83 stars, 612 notes)

Download: Croove & Mr. Funky - OUT LAW : Reborn
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 35th beatmap, Completed

Nu Skull Breakz song in DJMAX TECHNIKA 2

Composed by Croove
Remixed by Mr. Funky
Rap feat. by JC
Visualized by D

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-08-16T16:09:07+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Nyan

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Joined September 2008

Nyan 2010-07-31T15:25:53+00:00

^w^ Finally
듬트2맵이군요!

bmin11

5,438 posts

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2010-07-31T15:48:17+00:00

[Hard]
00:04:044 (1) - 슬라이더 끝에 박수 추가
00:31:736 (1) - ^
00:32:659 (3) - 슬라이더 시작에 박수 추가
00:44:659 (1) - 2번 슬라이더랑 조금 겹치네요. 냅둬도 그만 고치셔도 그만
01:06:813 (1) - 슬라이더 모양이 더 좋았을수도 있겠네요

[Easy]
00:26:198 (1) - 슬라이더 끝에 박수 추가
00:28:044 (4) - 슬라이더 틱에 소리를 추가하실수도 있겠지만 패스
00:35:428 (1) - 읭
00:46:505 (3) - 각도가 묘하게 다르네요. 고치실꺼면 오른쪽으로 한칸 이동

스타일이 확실히 바뀌셧네요

banvi

1,793 posts

Joined June 2009

banvi 2010-07-31T19:54:44+00:00

hello

Hard
00:50:198 (1,2) 1 grid down
Maximum
00:00:813 (3) 1 grid right?
00:01:736 (6) 1 grid left?
00:19:736 (4,5,6) look better 1 grid left

no big problem. great! star~

Zetsubou Sensei

295 posts

Joined December 2009

Zetsubou Sensei 2010-07-31T23:59:48+00:00

Hey.

[Easy]
00:26:198 (1) - move 2 grids left ...then resnap
00:44:198 (6) - this slider is to short for easy, remove the repeat and extend it to the same ending time
01:39:352 (2) - ^ same thing. I think you should replace this with a note at 01:39:582 or 2 notes just replacing it.
01:41:198 (4) - ^ same thing
01:43:004 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Seems fine.

[Hard]
AIMOD detects 2 spacing problems...fix them
Seems fine.

[Taiko]
I dont mod taiko's...sorry

[Maximum]
Check your spacing...
Seems fine.

Overall...The map is good. Lol The song...its got a good beat, but kinda random lyrics

~STAR GOOD LUCK

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-08-01T06:51:39+00:00

[NM]
01:52:736 (1) - Move to 01:52:621 and extend 1/4 beat

[HD]
Add some 1/4 stream?

Great map!

Sorry I can't help you much.Don't give me kd……

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-01T09:38:12+00:00

banvi wrote:
hello
Hard
00:50:198 (1,2) 1 grid down
- i think they are okay :3

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:
Hey.

[Easy]
00:44:198 (6) - this slider is to short for easy, remove the repeat and extend it to the same ending time
01:39:352 (2) - ^ same thing. I think you should replace this with a note at 01:39:582 or 2 notes just replacing it.
01:41:198 (4) - ^ same thing
01:43:004 (2) - ^
- i think they are okay, already many maper use 1/2 sliders.

[Hard]
AIMOD detects 2 spacing problems...fix them
- they are jumps.

[Maximum]
Check your spacing...
- they are jumps too. don't belive AImod

yangzd88 wrote:
[NM]
01:52:736 (1) - Move to 01:52:621 and extend 1/4 beat
- i think that is okay becuz this is normal diff :3

[HD]
Add some 1/4 stream?
- i think they are okay now.

others all fixed, thanks for modding

aabc271

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2009

aabc271 2010-08-02T03:33:36+00:00

Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Taiko]
Nothing found~ Great job!

Actually i like your style of taiko mapping

Star and good luck~

Mashley

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Joined September 2008

Mashley 2010-08-03T11:42:18+00:00

Pretty much nothing wrong here

Hard
01:23:890 (3) - These sorts of sliders are way better if they're storyboarded with something. Go do it!
01:27:581 (2) - ^
01:31:503 (4) - ^

Tatsuo

575 posts

Joined January 2009

Tatsuo 2010-08-03T22:52:34+00:00

I can never find anything wrong with your beatmaps MoonFragrance
*star*

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-04T16:26:33+00:00

Mashley wrote:
Hard
01:23:890 (3) - These sorts of sliders are way better if they're storyboarded with something. Go do it!
01:27:581 (2) - ^
01:31:503 (4) - ^

Maybe i should do it, but i don't know how to do it

But your modding was helpful, so kudosu for you :3

Kotone

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Joined August 2008

Kotone 2010-08-12T08:35:10+00:00

Easy
00:13:275(3,4)-1 grid right?
00:55:275(4,1)-1 grid up?

Normal
01:21:352(4)-1 grid up?
01:40:044(4)- 1 grid left?

Hard
Maximum

find~

Don't mod taiko

STARミ★

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-12T14:45:29+00:00

fixed :3

thank you

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-08-12T16:03:57+00:00

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-08-13T16:56:26+00:00

Normal;

01:28:967 (1,2,3) - Line these up a bit better?
Last spinner has a different hitsound to all the other diffs. :3

Takuma

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Takuma 2010-08-14T21:54:58+00:00

Offset: 365 ms.

Feels better to me this way.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-08-15T05:43:14+00:00

Takuma wrote:
Offset: 365 ms.

I realized offset was a bit late, but i think 365ms is too late <_<
you can hear clap sound is unsynchronized when offset is 365 ms.

so i fixed offset to everage.

thank you for modding

La Valse

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Joined February 2009

La Valse 2010-08-15T10:05:56+00:00

내가 별셔틀이냐 !

Takuma

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Takuma 2010-08-16T16:29:26+00:00

Unsnapped notes in Taiko and Maximum.

ohkay herez da buble

yaya