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Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 августа 2010 г. at 21:57:54

Artist: Lunatica
Title: Words Unleashed
Tags: Roddie sadkangaroo claymore teresa clare priscilla laki raki yoma abyssal irene awakening
BPM: 170
Filesize: 21566kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Armageddon (5 stars, 995 notes)
  2. Meteor (5 stars, 504 notes)
  3. Rain (1,9 stars, 57 notes)
  4. Roddie's Storm (3,03 stars, 164 notes)
  5. SK's Catastrophe (4,54 stars, 216 notes)
Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed
Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Armageddon PENDING APPROVAL

Thanks Roddie and SadKangaroo for guest difficulties



Note: Video added for Claymore fans, Please don't download video, be cause it contain spoilers from anime. AMV was taken from You Tube

Enjoy! :D
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 51 times in total.
dkun
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dkun
Armageddon (5 stars, 994 notes)
01:59:757 (1) - Remove this slider? I feel that it's unnecessary.
02:36:992 - Add kiai time here to 02:51:198?
03:57:816 - Spacing on this entire section, what the hell?

Meteor (5 stars, 503 notes)
00:28:522 - Spacing?
00:39:816 - ^
01:17:934 - ^

Rain (1,9 stars, 57 notes)
Nothing too major here.

Side notes
This is one insane map, looking forward to seeing this get ranked.
Take a ★ !~
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Wtf? Delete desktop.ini from your songs folder and full submit! <- I lol'd at this xD
Seriously, what's up with the different ending points in your beatmap? Please map your difficulties full length just like how Armageddon is. Although four minutes is rather long.
I'm not a big fan of how your starting points differ from [Rain]
Armageddon seems cramped. Might want to space it out a bit.

[Rain]
This beatmap is WAY too short compared to your other difficulties. You definitely need to map way more than this.

[Meteor]
Might want to raise circle size by one?
01:04:345 - You broke the flow here. I hated it. Why not just keep continuing what you are doing?

[Armageddon]
For such a long difficulty, there are no breaks. Four minutes of straight playing? What is this? I don't even.
There's nothing wrong with this really.

I wouldn't feel right starring this. There's just things that throw this otherwise good beatmap off.
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Yes
No

Armageddon (5 stars, 994 notes)
01:59:757 (1) - Remove this slider? I feel that it's unnecessary.
02:36:992 - Add kiai time here to 02:51:198?
03:57:816 - Spacing on this entire section, what the hell?
This difficulty is gonna be approved, not ranked. Final part is part of jumps. It's okey.

Meteor (5 stars, 503 notes)
00:28:522 - Spacing?
00:39:816 - ^
01:17:934 - ^
Jumps.



Thanks you very much.

[Rain]
This beatmap is WAY too short compared to your other difficulties. You definitely need to map way more than this.
No. 1 minute is rankable stuff.

[Meteor]
Might want to raise circle size by one?
01:04:345 - You broke the flow here. I hated it. Why not just keep continuing what you are doing?

[Armageddon]
For such a long difficulty, there are no breaks. Four minutes of straight playing? What is this? I don't even.
There's nothing wrong with this really.
PENDING FOR APPROVAL (Only this difficulty). READ DESCRIPTION OF THIS MAP :evil:
Roddie
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Roddie
Hi :3

Overall, I would strongly suggest on Meteor to increase circle size and decrease Over-all Difficulty because Meteor plays a lot like Armageddon but shorter. ._.

I'll make you that Normal I promised.

Star for now!
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Fixed Hyb :3 Thanks ^_~
Bikko
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Bikko
poof!
Roddie
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Roddie
Finished as promised~

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Normal].osu

Rename my difficulty as you wish but keep my name in there. :P

Hope you like it. 8-)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Hybrid's difficulty added :)
Thanks hyb ^_~
Krisom
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Krisom
Modding as requested on queue

Nice song! Reminds me of sonata artica

[Rain]
Uhhh, map it fully? AT least up to the second Kiai time! Any song/diff under 1 minute long is unrankeable (Btw, it's 45 secs of gameplay) so you'll have to make this one longer
01:13:610 - The Kiai Time should always be on a white tick. Move this to 01:13:698.
Nice!

[hybs's]
BREAKS INSIDE A KIAI TIME?!?!?!FFFFFFFFF map those please, it's just plain ugly u.u
...In fact, all your breaks could be removed, I mean, they are so short thatthey doesn't help the player recover during play sections.
There's nothing in terms of gameplay I can point out here, good job.

[Meteor]
01:13:610 - The Kiai Time should always be on a white tick. Move this to 01:13:698.
You lack a Kiai time at 02:03:110 - , The music it's the same than in 01:13:698 - So both places should have a Kiai.
00:50:051 (3) - You can't tell that this is a slider. It's buried by the hitsplash of 00:49:257 (1).
02:14:404 (1) - Why is the repeat silenced? It's like the only slider that does this. Either remove the silence or silence other sliders that follow this note on this diff.
Ok, I think the jumps are REALLY out of place in this diff, other than that (and the avobe mentioned) it's great.

[Armagedon]
Overmapped imo. anyways, I can't play like this yet so I cant mod it. Look out, the Kiai times are also wrong here.



I'd add whistles at the soft part of the song (The intro). Other than that, ncie song. I see a lot of potential (buried by random jumps and different diff lenghts) and goot hitsounding, so I'll star
Roddie
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Roddie

Krisom wrote:

Modding as requested on queue

[hybs's]
BREAKS INSIDE A KIAI TIME?!?!?!FFFFFFFFF map those please, it's just plain ugly u.u
...In fact, all your breaks could be removed, I mean, they are so short thatthey doesn't help the player recover during play sections. ^fixed.
There's nothing in terms of gameplay I can point out here, good job. Thanks. 8-)
Thanks for the mod, Krisom. :P

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb'Storm].osu
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
thanks Krisom.

All fixed
Mianki
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Mianki
Rain:

Felt too short for me. Make it as long as Meteor? (but don't map the intro, if you do)
00:52:522 (3) One grid right
01:29:228 (1) Move the upper part of the slider a bit to the left, so it looks symmetrical

hyb's Storm:

01:05:581 (1.2.1) (1) One grid up. Then (2) and next (1) one grid up and right
01:27:463 (1.2.3.4.5.6) Distance snap these (2 and 6 were a bit off)
01:57:639 (4) One grid left and down
02:05:581 (2) One grid right and down?
02:32:051 (2) One grid down

Meteor:

Reduce HP Drain 1 or 2 ticks?
00:08:757 (1) One grid down?
00:52:169 (3) One grid down? (it makes sense then if there's every other a bit up and down)
01:03:816 (1.2.3.4.5.6) Distance snap (but skip this if you did put those little jumps there on purpose)
01:57:463 (3.4.5) Distance snap

Armageddon:

00:01:698 (1.2.3.4) Distance snap
00:06:639 (1.2.3) ^
00:14:582 (2.3) ^
00:45:110 (1.2) ^
00:46:345 (4.5.6) ^
01:32:934 (5) One grid up?
01:49:169 (2.3.4) Distance snap
02:13:345 (3.4.5) ^ (4 is too close)
02:53:228 (5) Distance snap
03:11:051 (2) ^
03:12:816 (5) ^
03:23:581 (2) ^
03:57:816 Warning sign before these jumps? :D (Not necessary)

Epic map, star~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Thanks for modding
Roddie
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Roddie

Mianki wrote:

hyb's Storm:

01:05:581 (1.2.1) (1) One grid up. Then (2) and next (1) one grid up and right
01:27:463 (1.2.3.4.5.6) Distance snap these (2 and 6 were a bit off)
01:57:639 (4) One grid left and down
02:05:581 (2) One grid right and down?
02:32:051 (2) One grid down

^All fixed.
Thanks for the mod, Mianki. :D

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Storm].osu
Vass_Bass
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Vass_Bass
Привет~

Хорошая песня. понравилась
Не хочешь другие цвета сделать? а то не очень смотрится,особенно зеленый в глаз бьет
По поводу Rain..я считаю что это не очень хорошая сложность, думаю надо либо другую сделать либо совсем убрать,как-то и ни туда, и ни сюда

hyb's Storm
01:15:463 (3) - спейсинг
02:16:169 (3) - ^

Meteor
забавная сложность
00:11:758 (2) - 1 вверх
00:12:640 (2) - 1 вправо
00:11:758 (2), 00:13:170 (4) и т.п.- как-то некрасиво смотрится когда так косовато идет, может сровнять все?
01:18:286 (2) - не по спейсингу
01:18:992 (4) - ^
02:11:581 (1) - сделай посимметричнее

Armageddon
00:09:464 (1) - сделай поближе к двойке
01:58:875 (2,3) - 1 вниз
02:11:846 (1,2,3) и 02:12:287 (1,2,3) - как-то по времени не попадают
02:16:522 (2) - 1 вверх и влево и (4) под двойку туда же
02:39:992 (1) - начиная с этого момента... как-то слишком много тройных, может из заменить короткими слайдерами?
03:05:228 (4,5,6) - спейсинг
03:57:816 (х) - жестокий момент
стар
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Roddie
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Vass_Bass wrote:

Привет~

hyb's Storm
01:15:463 (3) - спейсинг
02:16:169 (3) - ^
I'm sorry. I don't understand Russian. :(

But from what Louis told me, it's a spacing problem I have to fix.

Thanks for the mod, Vass. :D

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Storm].osu
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Спасибо :: )

All fixed.
IceBeam
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IRC Modding.

And here comes the worst difficulty osu! ever seen.Enjoy.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [Kangaroos In Disaster].osu
IceBeam
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Edit:
I missed "Edit" button for the post above.

So,sorry for doublepost.
[nAnSi-cHaN]
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[nAnSi-cHaN]
star :333
Curisu
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Curisu
Quite a epic…… :)

[Aramgedoon]
00:44:404 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - put this stream in the centre?

Can't find anything at all so don't give me kd :cry:
Shana
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Shana
Go Stars!!!!!!!!! >A<
maypiano
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maypiano
dafsdf
-maJu
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-maJu
Nice Map!

STAR!! :3
Senobe
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Senobe
Well done. :]
Looks quite solid.

☆ヾ(´･ω･｀)
Mokka_old
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Mokka_old
awesome map -w-
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
Отличная работа!
Педобирская звезда в помощь :3
Nikeho RoCa
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Nikeho RoCa
Star! nice map~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
Quite a epic…… :)

[Aramgedoon]
00:44:404 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - put this stream in the centre?

Can't find anything at all so don't give me kd :cry:
Sry no kudos, bcz nothing changed.
Thanks for stars guys! :: )
Armin
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Good map
Star+KudosuStar
Louis Cyphre
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Thanks a lot <3
Shiro
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Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

General:
I like the skin a lot. I'm stealing your hitcircles for my skin (which will never be uploaded).

Rain:
00:59:228 (2) - Too close to previous object.
01:02:404 (2) - ^
Map the rest ? Some people can bitch about diff lengths not being the same.

Meteor:
I'd say this is an Insane diff.
How about adding some whistles in the beginning stream ?
00:49:257 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner... Move it away.

According to my modding queue rules I will mod those two only.

And I like the song.
Louis Cyphre
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I like the skin a lot. I'm stealing your hitcircles for my skin (which will never be uploaded).
T_T

thanks for modding "and star"
Haneii
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Louis Cyphre wrote:

thanks for modding "and star"
XD



Hiii Louis :D Here's my mod!


~Rain~
Nothing :D

~hyb's Storm~
01:40:522 (3) – Make it straight? (Unless that was done deliberately, can’t really tell :P) And have 4 directly under it?
02:18:639 (1) – Make this a bit curvier maybe?

~SK's Catastrophe~
00:34:169 (1,2) – make them more curvier?

~Meteor~
01:13:698 (1) – silence the repeat
01:24:992 (1) – silence both repeats?
02:03:110 (1) - ^

~Armageddon~
02:39:816 (10) – maybe you can have kiai time start here instead?
02:52:257 – end kiai time here
03:15:110 – insert timing point here and increase volume by 1

Great map set guys!

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Louis Cyphre
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thanks Haneii :3
Vikon
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Vikon
[Rain]
01:00:992 (1) - too close from (5) ?
01:09:286 (1,1) - the slider is too close to the spinner for a [Easy] or [Normal]
01:36:463 - kiai time should start and end with a hitobject, so move this timing section to 01:36:286 ?

[hyb's Storm]
01:09:992 (1,1) the slider is too close to the spinner for a [Normal]
01:26:757 (3) - too close from (2) ?
01:36:463 (1,1) - slider too close to spinner
01:59:404 (1,1) - ^
02:08:934 (1,1) - ^
02:20:228 (1,1) - ^
02:22:610 - kiai time should end with a hitobject, so move this timing section to 02:22:522 ?
02:31:345 (1) - too close from (5) ?
02:38:581 (1,1) - slider too close to spinner

[SK's Catastrophe]
so many big jumps in [Hard]..... BUT I think it's fine :3

[Meteor]
01:38:051 kiai time should end with a hitobject, so move this timing section to 01:38:139

[Armageddon]
this diff may need to go to aprroval because of the score.
01:13:610 - kiai time should start and end with a hitobject, so move it to 01:13:698
01:38:051 - ^, so move this timing section to 01:38;139.
02:38:846 - ^, move to 02:38:934 (1)

star
Louis Cyphre
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this diff may need to go to aprroval because of the score.
Obvious. Captain obvious XD Read description dude.

Thanks for modding :3
Roddie
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Sorry for the delay, Louis. :(

Haneii wrote:

~hyb's Storm~
01:40:522 (3) – Make it straight? (Unless that was done deliberately, can’t really tell :P) And have 4 directly under it? No. ._.
02:18:639 (1) – Make this a bit curvier maybe? Fixed.
Thanks for the mod, Haneii. <3

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Storm].osu
LaunchedthousandShip
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LaunchedthousandShip
map is good :D star
pete2528
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pete2528
wow very good map :)

[Meteor]
01:17:934 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(1) those distance notes are very hard to play :twisted:
01:23:228 (3)(4)(1) ^
01:24:286 (2)(3) ^

[armageddon]
lol this map very fun but you should put some break time in this diff 1 or 2 time (Ex. every 1 min)
and use another color too

star :lol:
Mizu_banned
Mizu_banned
Звезда! =^-^=
Louis Cyphre
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01:17:934 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(1) those distance notes are very hard to play :twisted:
01:23:228 (3)(4)(1) ^
01:24:286 (2)(3) ^
It is jumps man. I won't delete them

lol this map very fun but you should put some break time in this diff 1 or 2 time (Ex. every 1 min)
and use another color too
It's pending approval. So...

Thanks for stars :3
Lunah_old
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adasdfds<
Louis Cyphre
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XDDDD
Mashley
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Mashley
Offset might be a few ms late?

Rain
Why so short? Just looks like laziness to me. Map some more of it.

hyb's Storm
01:48:286 (1,1) - I can understand why these are quieter, but maybe they're a little too quiet?
02:43:875 (1,1) - Don't have a note so soon after the spinner

SK's Catastrophe
Really not liking the overuse of slowdowns, I think they just make the map boring :
01:15:110 (1,2,1,2) - These jumps don't make sense and I didn't see them coming. There's nothing in the song to suggest that
01:41:934 (2) - Vertically flip this, it looks nicer.
01:49:345 (2) - This slowdown is even worse than the rest... WHY?

Meteor
00:43:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - These don't fit the music at all.
01:22:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Wtf? Really confusing jumps
Combos are weird bot, okay.

Armageddon
Why are the combo colours different? Keep them consistent. These ones blend in too much.
00:34:875 (1) - I don't think any player will see this coming, change it.
01:11:934 (1) - Why a one note combo? Remove this new combo.
01:12:816 (1) - ^
01:39:463 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I dislike this pattern. It's long, cramped and boring.
01:49:698 (1) - Another one note combo.
IceBeam
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Mashley wrote:

SK's Catastrophe
Really not liking the overuse of slowdowns, I think they just make the map boring :
01:15:110 (1,2,1,2) - These jumps don't make sense and I didn't see them coming. There's nothing in the song to suggest that It's the same as 01:26:404 (1).So no.
01:41:934 (2) - Vertically flip this, it looks nicer. It looks usual.
01:49:345 (2) - This slowdown is even worse than the rest... WHY?Have no idea.
Thanks.
Louis Cyphre
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Why are the combo colours different? Keep them consistent. These ones blend in too much.
It's pending approval. So i want something special =P

Thanks for modding.
IceBeam
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Some changes made,please update.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [SK's Catastrophe].osu
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