Zenith00:18:300 (18300|3) - move to 3
00:18:500 (18500|2) - move to 4
00:18:600 (18600|5) - move to 3
00:18:700 (18700|1) - move to 4
00:21:300 (21300|5) - move to 1
no00:21:400 (21400|1) - move to 6
^00:22:800 (22800|1,22800|6,23000|3,23000|0,23200|1,23200|6,23400|5,23400|1) - there should be jack notes for this section to better emphasizing the rhythm, do some re-patterning
Changed pattern00:26:100 (26100|3) - move to 3
00:26:100 (26100|4) - move to 6
00:26:200 (26200|0) - move to 5
00:26:900 (26900|1,27000|1) - hmm.. suggestion:
I want to keep jacks as it is in this section 00:26:900 - 00:32:40000:26:900 (26900|1) - move to 6
00:27:000 (27000|1) - move to 5
00:27:300 (27300|2) - move to 5
00:27:400 (27400|1) - move to 3
00:27:700 (27700|0,27700|4) - move them 1 time to the right
00:27:900 (27900|2) - move to 5, balance
00:28:500 (28500|2) - move to 5
00:28:800 (28800|6,28800|2) - move them to column 2 and 6 respectively
00:28:900 (28900|1) - move to 5
00:30:200 (30200|4) - move to 3
00:30:300 (30300|6) - move to 1
00:30:400 (30400|4,30400|0) - move them 1 time to the right
00:30:500 (30500|5) - move to 5
00:30:600 (30600|4) - move to 3
00:30:800 (30800|5) - move to 5
ok00:30:900 (30900|3,30900|2) - oo suddenly dual note, feel weird, suggest:
00:30:900 (30900|3,30900|2) - move them to column 2 and 6 respectively
ok00:31:000 (31000|6) - move to 3
ok00:31:100 (31100|5) - move to 4
ok00:31:600 (31600|0,31600|3) - move them to column 3 and 5 respectively
00:31:700 (31700|5) - move to 1
00:34:100 (34100|1) - move to 6, make it consistent like you did with 00:32:500 (32500|2,32500|3,32500|1) -
00:34:200 (34200|0) - move to 2
starting at this timing 00:38:800 (38800|1) - , very dense and over-mapped, ghost notes are everywhere.. consider fix, example of ghost notes:
00:38:866 (38866|3) -
00:38:933 (38933|1) -
00:39:066 (39066|4) -
00:39:133 (39133|1) -
00:39:266 (39266|4) -
00:39:333 (39333|5) -
00:39:466 (39466|5) -
00:39:533 (39533|4) -
00:39:666 (39666|1) -
00:39:733 (39733|2) -
00:39:866 (39866|6) -
00:39:933 (39933|4) -
00:40:066 (40066|1) -
00:40:133 (40133|6) -
and many more, i don't think mapping a stream of ghost notes are good idea- I'll skip this issue for now and move to different issue*
these are not ghost notes http://puu.sh/kDR7j/98ede4541d.png00:53:200 (53200|0) - add 1 more note
no.There is only a previous echo of sound.00:56:400 (56400|3) - same
^00:59:600 (59600|6) -
^01:06:000 (66000|5,66000|0) - suddenly 2 notes, others use 3 01:05:200 (65200|1,65200|0,65200|6,65600|0,65600|3,65600|4) -
^01:09:200 (69200|1,69200|6) -
^01:10:800 (70800|6,70800|4,70800|3) - add 1 more note, loud crash presence
I don't think it needs more.01:12:400 (72400|6,72400|4) - same case
^01:16:400 (76400|1) - delete
no thanks01:34:400 (94400|1) - switch column with this 01:34:600 (94600|2) -
02:03:600 (123600|4,123600|1) - add 1 more note, loud crash presence
It isn't needed in my opinion02:05:200 (125200|4,125200|6) - same
^02:06:000 (126000|4,126000|6) -
^02:09:600 (129600|0) - delete
nope02:10:900 (130900|2,130900|5) - add note
no02:12:000 (132000|6,132000|3) - add note
^02:13:200 (133200|6,133200|3) - same
^02:14:400 (134400|3,134400|4,134400|2) - not that loud, delete 1 note
no02:14:800 (134800|0,134800|6,134800|4) - add note considering you use 3 notes on
no thanks 02:14:700 (134700|5,134700|3,134700|1,134900|5,134900|3,134900|1) - which are underwhelming than the current sound
I think it's fine02:19:300 (139300|0,139300|6,139300|5) - delete 1 note
why02:19:800 (139800|4,139800|6,139800|0) - add 1 more note, same loudness as 02:20:000 (140000|4,140000|2,140000|0,140000|6) -
it is going to be dense, and the pattern is going to be monotonous.02:20:800 (140800|4,140800|5,140800|1,140800|2) - i know the pattern looks beautiful, but the notes density are out of places, consider reduce density by deleting some notes
It's fine as it is now in my opinion02:21:100 (141100|3,141100|1,141100|5) - this on the other hand need 1 more note to emphasis very loud noise
3 notes would be enough02:21:200 (141200|0,141200|2,141200|6) - delete 1 note
there is a loud noise02:27:500 (147500|2) - move to 2
no02:27:600 (147600|0,147600|1) - move them to column 3 and 5 respectively
no02:32:400 (152400|6,152400|5) - add 2 more notes, because you use 4 chords here as well 02:30:800 (150800|6,150800|3,150800|4,150800|5) -
added 1 note- mod ends -
* recheck your notes density, if you're going for rank then you gonna need to avoid ghosting and over-chord the row of notes
* good luck with your map c: