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Ayana Taketatsu & Yuiko Tatsumi - Balance Kiss

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Selee wrote:

[General]
BG resize ~.~ Omfg i love you

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[Kei-Chan]

Mapset is fine.
Just some suggestions..

  • 00:08:754 (4) - clap Fixed
    00:10:519 (3,5) - Whistle Fixed
    00:31:696 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
    01:11:225 (3) - Rotate -90°? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/34359? I think it's still kinda hard to read now.. Fixed
    01:20:225 (4) - ^ Fixed? (Whistle)
[Ako-nee]

Kiai copy&paste? Maybe you can arrange the notes differently...rather than ctrl+H

  • 00:08:578 (7) - try clap? Fixed
    00:44:401 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
    01:23:931 (1) - I think it's fine to only silence the end since the volume is low.. Fixed


[Riko-nee]
  • 00:34:166 (8) - Whistle? Fixed
    00:51:284 (7) - Delete this note? not fit the rhythm well, also there's a long 1/2 beats after this... Fixed
    01:17:225 (3,5) - clap? Fixed
    01:21:107 (T) - increase the volume for 5%? I can't hear these beats. Fixed
Star~
Thanks :D
kino77
Cute song~ :3

[Kei-Chan]
00:18:460 - What's this timing section for?
01:23:931 (1) - Same as [Ako-nee]?

[Ako-nee]
00:16:696 (1) - End here 00:18:813?
00:33:990 - Add note?
00:34:166 - ^
00:37:343 (8) - New combo?
00:38:754 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:40:166 (3) - New combo?
00:42:460 - Add note?
00:42:637 - ^
00:44:754 - Fill the blank?
00:50:401 - ^
00:54:107 - Volume 70%?
01:02:754 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:12:284 - Add note?
01:23:578 - ^
01:25:166 - Volume 30%?

[Riko-nee]
00:14:048 (7) - 1 grid up?
00:14:401 (8) - 1 grid down?
00:32:578 (1) -
00:33:460 (4) -
00:35:931 (1) -
00:38:754 (1) -
00:47:225 (1) -
01:12:107 (6,7) - Stack them?
01:15:460 (9) -
01:16:872 (1) -
01:17:931 (5) - Clap?
01:25:166 - Volume 30%?

STAR~ :3
Topic Starter
eldnl

kino77 wrote:

Cute song~ :3

[Kei-Chan]
00:18:460 - What's this timing section for? Fixed
01:23:931 (1) - Same as [Ako-nee]? Fixed

[Ako-nee]
00:16:696 (1) - End here 00:18:813? Fixed
00:33:990 - Add note? Fixed
00:34:166 - ^ Fixed
00:37:343 (8) - New combo? Fixed
00:38:754 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
00:40:166 (3) - New combo? Fixed
00:42:460 - Add note? Fixed
00:42:637 - ^ Fixed
00:44:754 - Fill the blank? Nop
00:50:401 - ^ Nop
00:54:107 - Volume 70%? OK
01:02:754 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
01:12:284 - Add note? No
01:23:578 - ^ Fixed
01:25:166 - Volume 30%? 10%

[Riko-nee]
00:14:048 (7) - 1 grid up? Fixed
00:14:401 (8) - 1 grid down? Fixed
00:32:578 (1) - ?
00:33:460 (4) - ?
00:35:931 (1) - ?
00:38:754 (1) - ?
00:47:225 (1) - ?
01:12:107 (6,7) - Stack them? No
01:15:460 (9) - I Remove new Combo
01:16:872 (1) - I Add new Combo
01:17:931 (5) - Clap? Fixed
01:25:166 - Volume 30%? 10%

STAR~ :3
Thanks for mod ^^
DJPop
It'd be better if this map has MV. ;)


- Kei-Chan -
00:11:578 (5) - add clap
00:24:460 (2) - remove clap
00:24:990 (3) - add clap at start and end
00:28:166 (3) - add clap at the end
01:06:637 (4) - add clap
01:09:460 (5) - ^
01:11:225 (3) - add clap at 3rd note
01:12:284 (4) - add clap
01:17:931 (4) - ^
01:20:754 (5) - ^

- Ako-nee -
00:11:578 (5) - add clap
00:14:754 (1) - add clap at 3rd note
00:27:990 (6) - remove clap
00:32:578 (2) - add clap at middle note
01:09:460 (5) - add clap
01:11:225 (3) - add clap at 3rd note
01:20:754 (5) - add clap
01:21:460 (1,3) - ^

- Riko-nee -
00:53:931 (5) - add clap
01:06:460 (8) - add clap at middle note
01:08:754 (6,7) - copy (4,5) and flip horizontal
01:10:166 (2,6) - add clap
00:17:578 (1) - silence the sliderslider and hitsound at the end


+Star
Topic Starter
eldnl

DJPop wrote:

It'd be better if this map has MV. ;)


- Kei-Chan -
00:11:578 (5) - add clap Fixed
00:24:460 (2) - remove clap Fixed
00:24:990 (3) - add clap at start and end Fixed
00:28:166 (3) - add clap at the end Fixed
01:06:637 (4) - add clap Fixed
01:09:460 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:11:225 (3) - add clap at 3rd note Fixed
01:12:284 (4) - add clap Fixed
01:17:931 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:20:754 (5) - ^ Fixed

- Ako-nee -
00:11:578 (5) - add clap Fixed
00:14:754 (1) - add clap at 3rd note Fixed
00:27:990 (6) - remove clap Fixed
00:32:578 (2) - add clap at middle note Fixed
01:09:460 (5) - add clap Fixed
01:11:225 (3) - add clap at 3rd note Fixed
01:20:754 (5) - add clap Fixed
01:21:460 (1,3) - ^ Fixed

- Riko-nee -
00:53:931 (5) - add clap Fixed
01:06:460 (8) - add clap at middle note Fixed
01:08:754 (6,7) - copy (4,5) and flip horizontal Fixed
01:10:166 (2,6) - add clap Fixed
00:17:578 (1) - silence the sliderslider and hitsound at the end Volumen 30%


+Star
Thanks !
Doomsday
Hi :)

  1. Timing looks good to me
  2. You should probably change that background. It's pretty much NSFW, and NSFW Backgrounds are a no-go. Sure, suggestive backgrounds have been in ranked maps before, but this one's too much :|
Just wandering. How do your diff names work? I can see they're character names, but is there a reason why Kei is Normal and Riko is Insane? (Just asking, since if they're just put in randomly, you should just call them Normal/Hard/Insane so they make more sense.)

[KEI-CHAN]

Seems to work fine. It seems a bit hard for the easiest difficulty.
It isn't too tough, but you could still use an Easy. The song's short, so that shouldn't be a problem :)

[AKO-CHAN]

Apart from maybe the part at 00:03:460 - 00:08:754 (and it's copy/paste at 01:01:343 - 01:06:637) not mapping to the music as good as the rest of the map, nothing to report. Very nice

[RIKO-CHAN]

Awesome. I could moan about some tiny jumps, but it's hardly worth talking about. They work fine really. 'tis a fun map.

Heh. I quite like this one. Kei might not be quite as clean as Ako or Riko, all of the difficulties are well made and fun. Good job ;)

Here's a well deserved star
Topic Starter
eldnl

Doomsday wrote:

Hi :)

  1. Timing looks good to me
  2. You should probably change that background. It's pretty much NSFW, and NSFW Backgrounds are a no-go. Sure, suggestive backgrounds have been in ranked maps before, but this one's too much :| Although I do not see the suggestive, as they just drawings, I'm working on changing the background.
Just wandering. How do your diff names work? I can see they're character names, but is there a reason why Kei is Normal and Riko is Insane? (Just asking, since if they're just put in randomly, you should just call them Normal/Hard/Insane so they make more sense.) Yes, is random, I will change that.

[KEI-CHAN]

Seems to work fine. It seems a bit hard for the easiest difficulty. Second time they say that, Okay.
It isn't too tough, but you could still use an Easy. The song's short, so that shouldn't be a problem :)

[AKO-CHAN]

Apart from maybe the part at 00:03:460 - 00:08:754 (and it's copy/paste at 01:01:343 - 01:06:637) not mapping to the music as good as the rest of the map, nothing to report. Very nice Ok

[RIKO-CHAN]

Awesome. I could moan about some tiny jumps, but it's hardly worth talking about. They work fine really. 'tis a fun map. Is well

Heh. I quite like this one. Kei might not be quite as clean as Ako or Riko, all of the difficulties are well made and fun. Good job ;)

Here's a well deserved star
Thanks for mod :)
Selee
Here you are ~ ;)

Topic Starter
eldnl

Selee wrote:

Here you are ~ ;)
Thank you very much !
Verdisphena
Bueno, aqui esta el normal que me pediste, ojala te guste :3
Ah si, cagaste todo el mapa con el nuevo mp3, y otra cosa, use un offset diferente por que suena mejor en mi opinion :o
PD: Si, cagaste todo wn xd, mi diff la estaba haciendo con el otro mp3 ;<

Download: Ayana Taketatsu & Yuiko Tatsumi - Balance KISS (TV Size) (eldnl) [Verdi's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
eldnl

Verdisphena wrote:

Bueno, aqui esta el normal que me pediste, ojala te guste :3
Ah si, cagaste todo el mapa con el nuevo mp3, y otra cosa, use un offset diferente por que suena mejor en mi opinion :o
PD: Si, cagaste todo wn xd, mi diff la estaba haciendo con el otro mp3 ;<
xD Hay que aplicar resnap all notes nomas, si el bpm es el mismo, solo falta buscar un offset, cuando llegue a mi casa veo eso.
Verdisphena

eldnl wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

Bueno, aqui esta el normal que me pediste, ojala te guste :3
Ah si, cagaste todo el mapa con el nuevo mp3, y otra cosa, use un offset diferente por que suena mejor en mi opinion :o
PD: Si, cagaste todo wn xd, mi diff la estaba haciendo con el otro mp3 ;<
xD Hay que aplicar resnap all notes nomas, si el bpm es el mismo, solo falta buscar un offset, cuando llegue a mi casa veo eso.
Descarga el normal po :<
Topic Starter
eldnl

Verdisphena wrote:

Descarga el normal po :<
shiaa calmao loco si recien me meti ahora lo veo ;D
Verdisphena
KSHR
good map!! :)
kissXsisヽ(*´∀`)ノ
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Los detalles del mp3 dicen que tiene 320kbps espero que sea un error, recuerda que el mp3 debe ser de 192kbps ó menos
  2. Agrega "Verdisphena" a los tags y "Verdi" si es necesario.
Easy
  1. Los Combo son demasiado largos para "Easy" intentaré ayudarte con eso:
  2. 00:14:662 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 00:30:191 (5) - ^
  4. 00:37:250 (3) - ^
  5. 00:40:073 (3) - ^
  6. 00:41:485 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  7. 00:48:544 (7) - New Combo.
  8. 00:49:956 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  9. 00:52:073 (2) - New Combo
  10. 00:55:603 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  11. 00:57:015 (1) - ^
  12. 00:59:838 (1) - ^
  13. 01:06:897 (7) - New Combo.
Normal
  1. 00:10:073 (X) - Agrega una nota, se escucha mejor.
  2. 00:31:249 (4) - Muevelo para que no esté debajo del slider anterior.
  3. 01:06:191 (4,5,1,2) - Uh esto se ve muy confuso y el AR no ayuda en nada, intenta esto
  4. 01:18:191 (1) - Recomiendo Unstack.
Hard
  1. 00:14:661 (6) - New Combo
  2. 00:54:191 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Podría usar saltos para estas notas, se vería muy bien.
  3. 01:19:955 (X) - Agrega una nota para que se escuche mejor.
  4. 01:20:485 (X) - ^
Insane
  1. 00:16:072 (5,6) - Necesita más espacio, no se siente bien al momento de jugar.
  2. Genial
Muy buen mapa, Estrella.
Crazy Jay
[Insane]
01:12:013 (6,7) - new combo?

[Hard]
00:13:955 (1) - new combo
00:15:720 (5) - ^
00:44:308 (1) -cancel new combo

00:44:485 (2) - new combo
and
00:44:485 (2,3,4,5) - change these notes,they can be better JUMPS


kissxsis ;)
star
Verdisphena

Gonzvlo wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:10:073 (X) - Agrega una nota, se escucha mejor. Ok
  2. 00:31:249 (4) - Muevelo para que no esté debajo del slider anterior. No
  3. 01:06:191 (4,5,1,2) - Uh esto se ve muy confuso y el AR no ayuda en nada, intenta esto
  4. 01:18:191 (1) - Recomiendo Unstack.

Muy buen mapa, Estrella.
Download: Ayana Taketatsu & Yuiko Tatsumi - Balance KISS (TV Size) (eldnl) [Verdi's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
eldnl

Gonzvlo wrote:

General
  1. Los detalles del mp3 dicen que tiene 320kbps espero que sea un error, recuerda que el mp3 debe ser de 192kbps ó menos es de 165kbps
  2. Agrega "Verdisphena" a los tags y "Verdi" si es necesario.Ok


Easy
  1. Los Combo son demasiado largos para "Easy" intentaré ayudarte con eso:
  2. 00:14:662 (5) - New Combo. Fixed
  3. 00:30:191 (5) - ^ Fixed
  4. 00:37:250 (3) - ^ Fixed
  5. 00:40:073 (3) - ^ Fixed
  6. 00:41:485 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  7. 00:48:544 (7) - New Combo. Fixed
  8. 00:49:956 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
  9. 00:52:073 (2) - New Combo Fixed
  10. 00:55:603 (1) - Remove New Combo. no
  11. 00:57:015 (1) - ^ no
  12. 00:59:838 (1) - ^ no
  13. 01:06:897 (7) - New Combo.
Fixed

Normal
  1. 00:10:073 (X) - Agrega una nota, se escucha mejor.
  2. 00:31:249 (4) - Muevelo para que no esté debajo del slider anterior.
  3. 01:06:191 (4,5,1,2) - Uh esto se ve muy confuso y el AR no ayuda en nada, intenta esto
  4. 01:18:191 (1) - Recomiendo Unstack.
Hard
  1. 00:14:661 (6) - New Combo Fixed
  2. 00:54:191 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Podría usar saltos para estas notas, se vería muy bien. no
  3. 01:19:955 (X) - Agrega una nota para que se escuche mejor. no
  4. 01:20:485 (X) - ^ no
Insane
  1. 00:16:072 (5,6) - Necesita más espacio, no se siente bien al momento de jugar. Si lo cambio se vería feo :T
  2. Genial
Muy buen mapa, Estrella.

Crazy Jay wrote:

[Insane]
01:12:013 (6,7) - new combo? Fixed

[Hard]
00:13:955 (1) - new combo no
00:15:720 (5) - ^ no
00:44:308 (1) -cancel new combo Fixed

00:44:485 (2) - new combo Fixed
and
00:44:485 (2,3,4,5) - change these notes,they can be better JUMPS Fixed


kissxsis ;)
star
Thanks !
wmfchris
well... o_o all diff changes lol

[general]
mp3@320kbps? compress it to 128~192

[insane]
0:38:485 (4) right 1 grid (make similar spacing like last combo
1:01:955 (3) up 1 grid

[Verdi's Normal]
fine

and no problem found in the remaining diff.~
Topic Starter
eldnl

wmfchris wrote:

well... o_o all diff changes lol

[general]
mp3@320kbps? compress it to 128~192 ...

[insane]
0:38:485 (4) right 1 grid (make similar spacing like last combo Fixed
1:01:955 (3) up 1 grid Fixed

[Verdi's Normal]
fine

and no problem found in the remaining diff.~
MP3 165kbps


Thanks
Krisom
._.

General-
Fix tags on verdi's diff, they are different than the rest
Make the kiai time the same on all diffs? (@ Easy)

Verdi's Normal-
00:08:661 (4) - Remove finish?
00:11:485 (4) - ^?
00:11:838 (1) - Remove the finish at the end?

Hard-
00:44:308 (7,1) - This spacing is kinda extreme for a hard imo, won't force you to change it though.

Insane-
00:17:485 (1) - Silence this sliderend like the spinner on the other diffs

That'd be all, fix and I'll bubble
Topic Starter
eldnl

Krisom wrote:

._.

General-
Fix tags on verdi's diff, they are different than the rest Okei
Make the kiai time the same on all diffs? (@ Easy) Fixed

Verdi's Normal-
00:08:661 (4) - Remove finish? Fixed
00:11:485 (4) - ^? Fixed
00:11:838 (1) - Remove the finish at the end? Fixed

Hard-
00:44:308 (7,1) - This spacing is kinda extreme for a hard imo, won't force you to change it though. Fixed

Insane-
00:17:485 (1) - Silence this sliderend like the spinner on the other diffs Fixed

That'd be all, fix and I'll bubble
Gracias you very much :)
Krisom
Good luck then~
Alace
Timing is off
offset should -10ms
move all of your green lines too and resnap all notes
mapset is fine
Topic Starter
eldnl

Alace wrote:

Timing is off
offset should -10ms
move all of your green lines too and resnap all notes
mapset is fine
Okei thank you very much

Edit.- Okay, all is done ~
nanin_old
asdada :B
Foster Don
strellaso, :D
Guerra
star ^^
Jhackus
o.o. star~~
DJ Angel
nice map ^-^

star ~
Hyguys
star xd
Astom
me salto el mod pq nanin me dijo :<
RageTH
Sutaa desu.
nanin_old
Astom = Grandiosoo <3
nico97
star :D
Topic Starter
eldnl
wtf, random stars o.o

Alace, i fix the map :)
No more stars please :< but thanks ;)
Alace
OK rebubble
Verdisphena

Ranked (?)
Topic Starter
eldnl

Verdisphena wrote:


Ranked (?)
Hopefully :)
Andrea
[Insane]

00:23:122 (1) ~ 00:31:592 (5) - Where is the volume on this section? Add a green line for make sure to fix this.

Fix and I'll rank.
Topic Starter
eldnl

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Insane]

00:23:122 (1) ~ 00:31:592 (5) - Where is the volume on this section? Add a green line for make sure to fix this.

Fix and I'll rank.
Fixed, It was a mistake to mute the previous slider. Thanks!
Verdisphena
Weon con cuea >w<
Andrea
Hi, I'm saying that this map is now...

Ranked~
Krisom
Well, let me congratulate you for your first rank. This is quite good for a first timer.
Topic Starter
eldnl

Krisom wrote:

Well, let me congratulate you for your first rank. This is quite good for a first timer.
Thanks :3
Verdisphena
Bad sb is bad
Andrea
Heart fixed.
Cristian

Congtratulations first map most played in 24hr!
Topic Starter
eldnl

Kurisuchianu wrote:


Congtratulations first map most played in 24hr!
Ya me habian dicho xD, gracias weon :B
Cristian

eldnl wrote:

Ya me habian dicho xD, gracias weon :B
.-. okay
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