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• 00:08:754 (4) - clap
  00:10:519 (3,5) - Whistle
  00:31:696 (1,2) - ^
  01:11:225 (3) - Rotate -90°? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/34359? I think it's still kinda hard to read now..
  01:20:225 (4) - ^

• 00:08:578 (7) - try clap?
  00:44:401 (1) - Remove new combo?
  01:23:931 (1) - I think it's fine to only silence the end since the volume is low..

• 00:34:166 (8) - Whistle?
  00:51:284 (7) - Delete this note? not fit the rhythm well, also there's a long 1/2 beats after this...
  01:17:225 (3,5) - clap?
  01:21:107 (T) - increase the volume for 5%? I can't hear these beats.

Selee wrote:

[General]
BG resize ~.~ Omfg i love you

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[Kei-Chan]

Mapset is fine.
Just some suggestions..

• 00:08:754 (4) - clap Fixed
  00:10:519 (3,5) - Whistle Fixed
  00:31:696 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  01:11:225 (3) - Rotate -90°? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/34359? I think it's still kinda hard to read now.. Fixed
  01:20:225 (4) - ^ Fixed? (Whistle)

[Ako-nee]

Kiai copy&paste? Maybe you can arrange the notes differently...rather than ctrl+H

• 00:08:578 (7) - try clap? Fixed
  00:44:401 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
  01:23:931 (1) - I think it's fine to only silence the end since the volume is low.. Fixed

[Riko-nee]

• 00:34:166 (8) - Whistle? Fixed
  00:51:284 (7) - Delete this note? not fit the rhythm well, also there's a long 1/2 beats after this... Fixed
  01:17:225 (3,5) - clap? Fixed
  01:21:107 (T) - increase the volume for 5%? I can't hear these beats. Fixed

Star~

kino77 wrote:

Cute song~ :3

[Kei-Chan]
00:18:460 - What's this timing section for? Fixed
01:23:931 (1) - Same as [Ako-nee]? Fixed

[Ako-nee]
00:16:696 (1) - End here 00:18:813? Fixed
00:33:990 - Add note? Fixed
00:34:166 - ^ Fixed
00:37:343 (8) - New combo? Fixed
00:38:754 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
00:40:166 (3) - New combo? Fixed
00:42:460 - Add note? Fixed
00:42:637 - ^ Fixed
00:44:754 - Fill the blank? Nop
00:50:401 - ^ Nop
00:54:107 - Volume 70%? OK
01:02:754 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
01:12:284 - Add note? No
01:23:578 - ^ Fixed
01:25:166 - Volume 30%? 10%

[Riko-nee]
00:14:048 (7) - 1 grid up? Fixed
00:14:401 (8) - 1 grid down? Fixed
00:32:578 (1) - ?
00:33:460 (4) - ?
00:35:931 (1) - ?
00:38:754 (1) - ?
00:47:225 (1) - ?
01:12:107 (6,7) - Stack them? No
01:15:460 (9) - I Remove new Combo
01:16:872 (1) - I Add new Combo
01:17:931 (5) - Clap? Fixed
01:25:166 - Volume 30%? 10%

STAR~ :3

DJPop wrote:

It'd be better if this map has MV.


- Kei-Chan -
00:11:578 (5) - add clap Fixed
00:24:460 (2) - remove clap Fixed
00:24:990 (3) - add clap at start and end Fixed
00:28:166 (3) - add clap at the end Fixed
01:06:637 (4) - add clap Fixed
01:09:460 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:11:225 (3) - add clap at 3rd note Fixed
01:12:284 (4) - add clap Fixed
01:17:931 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:20:754 (5) - ^ Fixed

- Ako-nee -
00:11:578 (5) - add clap Fixed
00:14:754 (1) - add clap at 3rd note Fixed
00:27:990 (6) - remove clap Fixed
00:32:578 (2) - add clap at middle note Fixed
01:09:460 (5) - add clap Fixed
01:11:225 (3) - add clap at 3rd note Fixed
01:20:754 (5) - add clap Fixed
01:21:460 (1,3) - ^ Fixed

- Riko-nee -
00:53:931 (5) - add clap Fixed
01:06:460 (8) - add clap at middle note Fixed
01:08:754 (6,7) - copy (4,5) and flip horizontal Fixed
01:10:166 (2,6) - add clap Fixed
00:17:578 (1) - silence the sliderslider and hitsound at the end Volumen 30%


+Star

1. Timing looks good to me
2. You should probably change that background. It's pretty much NSFW, and NSFW Backgrounds are a no-go. Sure, suggestive backgrounds have been in ranked maps before, but this one's too much

It isn't too tough, but you could still use an Easy. The song's short, so that shouldn't be a problem

Doomsday wrote:

Hi

1. Timing looks good to me
2. You should probably change that background. It's pretty much NSFW, and NSFW Backgrounds are a no-go. Sure, suggestive backgrounds have been in ranked maps before, but this one's too much Although I do not see the suggestive, as they just drawings, I'm working on changing the background.

Just wandering. How do your diff names work? I can see they're character names, but is there a reason why Kei is Normal and Riko is Insane? (Just asking, since if they're just put in randomly, you should just call them Normal/Hard/Insane so they make more sense.) Yes, is random, I will change that.

[KEI-CHAN]

Seems to work fine. It seems a bit hard for the easiest difficulty. Second time they say that, Okay.
It isn't too tough, but you could still use an Easy. The song's short, so that shouldn't be a problem

[AKO-CHAN]

Apart from maybe the part at 00:03:460 - 00:08:754 (and it's copy/paste at 01:01:343 - 01:06:637) not mapping to the music as good as the rest of the map, nothing to report. Very nice Ok

[RIKO-CHAN]

Awesome. I could moan about some tiny jumps, but it's hardly worth talking about. They work fine really. 'tis a fun map. Is well

Heh. I quite like this one. Kei might not be quite as clean as Ako or Riko, all of the difficulties are well made and fun. Good job

Here's a well deserved star

Selee wrote:

Here you are ~

Verdisphena wrote:

Bueno, aqui esta el normal que me pediste, ojala te guste :3
Ah si, cagaste todo el mapa con el nuevo mp3, y otra cosa, use un offset diferente por que suena mejor en mi opinion
PD: Si, cagaste todo wn xd, mi diff la estaba haciendo con el otro mp3 ;<

eldnl wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

Bueno, aqui esta el normal que me pediste, ojala te guste :3
Ah si, cagaste todo el mapa con el nuevo mp3, y otra cosa, use un offset diferente por que suena mejor en mi opinion
PD: Si, cagaste todo wn xd, mi diff la estaba haciendo con el otro mp3 ;<

xD Hay que aplicar resnap all notes nomas, si el bpm es el mismo, solo falta buscar un offset, cuando llegue a mi casa veo eso.

Verdisphena wrote:

Descarga el normal po :<

1. Los detalles del mp3 dicen que tiene 320kbps espero que sea un error, recuerda que el mp3 debe ser de 192kbps ó menos
2. Agrega "Verdisphena" a los tags y "Verdi" si es necesario.

1. Los Combo son demasiado largos para "Easy" intentaré ayudarte con eso:
2. 00:14:662 (5) - New Combo.
3. 00:30:191 (5) - ^
4. 00:37:250 (3) - ^
5. 00:40:073 (3) - ^
6. 00:41:485 (1) - Remove New Combo.
7. 00:48:544 (7) - New Combo.
8. 00:49:956 (1) - Remove New Combo.
9. 00:52:073 (2) - New Combo
10. 00:55:603 (1) - Remove New Combo.
11. 00:57:015 (1) - ^
12. 00:59:838 (1) - ^
13. 01:06:897 (7) - New Combo.

1. 00:10:073 (X) - Agrega una nota, se escucha mejor.
2. 00:31:249 (4) - Muevelo para que no esté debajo del slider anterior.
3. 01:06:191 (4,5,1,2) - Uh esto se ve muy confuso y el AR no ayuda en nada, intenta esto
4. 01:18:191 (1) - Recomiendo Unstack.

1. 00:14:661 (6) - New Combo
2. 00:54:191 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Podría usar saltos para estas notas, se vería muy bien.
3. 01:19:955 (X) - Agrega una nota para que se escuche mejor.
4. 01:20:485 (X) - ^

1. 00:16:072 (5,6) - Necesita más espacio, no se siente bien al momento de jugar.
2. Genial

Gonzvlo wrote:

Normal

1. 00:10:073 (X) - Agrega una nota, se escucha mejor. Ok
2. 00:31:249 (4) - Muevelo para que no esté debajo del slider anterior. No
3. 01:06:191 (4,5,1,2) - Uh esto se ve muy confuso y el AR no ayuda en nada, intenta esto
4. 01:18:191 (1) - Recomiendo Unstack.

Muy buen mapa, Estrella.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Los detalles del mp3 dicen que tiene 320kbps espero que sea un error, recuerda que el mp3 debe ser de 192kbps ó menos es de 165kbps
2. Agrega "Verdisphena" a los tags y "Verdi" si es necesario.Ok

Easy

1. Los Combo son demasiado largos para "Easy" intentaré ayudarte con eso:
2. 00:14:662 (5) - New Combo. Fixed
3. 00:30:191 (5) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:37:250 (3) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:40:073 (3) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:41:485 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
7. 00:48:544 (7) - New Combo. Fixed
8. 00:49:956 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed
9. 00:52:073 (2) - New Combo Fixed
10. 00:55:603 (1) - Remove New Combo. no
11. 00:57:015 (1) - ^ no
12. 00:59:838 (1) - ^ no
13. 01:06:897 (7) - New Combo.

Fixed

Normal

1. 00:10:073 (X) - Agrega una nota, se escucha mejor.
2. 00:31:249 (4) - Muevelo para que no esté debajo del slider anterior.
3. 01:06:191 (4,5,1,2) - Uh esto se ve muy confuso y el AR no ayuda en nada, intenta esto
4. 01:18:191 (1) - Recomiendo Unstack.

Hard

1. 00:14:661 (6) - New Combo Fixed
2. 00:54:191 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Podría usar saltos para estas notas, se vería muy bien. no
3. 01:19:955 (X) - Agrega una nota para que se escuche mejor. no
4. 01:20:485 (X) - ^ no

Insane

1. 00:16:072 (5,6) - Necesita más espacio, no se siente bien al momento de jugar. Si lo cambio se vería feo :T
2. Genial

Muy buen mapa, Estrella.

Crazy Jay wrote:

[Insane]
01:12:013 (6,7) - new combo? Fixed

[Hard]
00:13:955 (1) - new combo no
00:15:720 (5) - ^ no
00:44:308 (1) -cancel new combo Fixed

00:44:485 (2) - new combo Fixed
and
00:44:485 (2,3,4,5) - change these notes,they can be better JUMPS Fixed


kissxsis
star

wmfchris wrote:

well... o_o all diff changes lol

[general]
mp3@320kbps? compress it to 128~192 ...

[insane]
0:38:485 (4) right 1 grid (make similar spacing like last combo Fixed
1:01:955 (3) up 1 grid Fixed

[Verdi's Normal]
fine

and no problem found in the remaining diff.~

SPOILER

Krisom wrote:

._.

General-
Fix tags on verdi's diff, they are different than the rest Okei
Make the kiai time the same on all diffs? (@ Easy) Fixed

Verdi's Normal-
00:08:661 (4) - Remove finish? Fixed
00:11:485 (4) - ^? Fixed
00:11:838 (1) - Remove the finish at the end? Fixed

Hard-
00:44:308 (7,1) - This spacing is kinda extreme for a hard imo, won't force you to change it though. Fixed

Insane-
00:17:485 (1) - Silence this sliderend like the spinner on the other diffs Fixed

That'd be all, fix and I'll bubble

Alace wrote:

Timing is off
offset should -10ms
move all of your green lines too and resnap all notes
mapset is fine

Verdisphena wrote:

Ranked (?)

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Insane]

00:23:122 (1) ~ 00:31:592 (5) - Where is the volume on this section? Add a green line for make sure to fix this.

Fix and I'll rank.

Krisom wrote:

Well, let me congratulate you for your first rank. This is quite good for a first timer.

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Congtratulations first map most played in 24hr!

eldnl wrote:

Ya me habian dicho xD, gracias weon :B