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Kite
great map and song
~star
Topic Starter
Fight69

-_Kite_- wrote:

great map and song
~star
Thank you for your star ! :)
IceBeam
[Easy]
00:22:180 (5) - New Combo?
01:16:180 (6) - ^
01:23:305 (1) - Whistle?
02:04:180 (7) - New Combo?
02:16:180 (5) - ^

Well,I guess you can use even more New Combos.

[Noob Man's Normal]
00:45:242 (4) - New combo.
00:51:242 (4) - ^
00:57:242 (4) - ^
01:03:242 (4) - ^
01:09:242 (4) - ^ oh Geez,well I bet you got it.Do similar changes through all the map,if you followed prev.ones.
01:22:648 (8) - Start this slider at 01:22:742.
02:07:180 (1) - It's too close 02:05:680 (6).That's bad,you know.

[Hard]
00:17:867 (6) - You can make an anti-jump here,by using Reverse Selection.
Also I want more jumps through all the map,not only single circles jumps as you did.

[!ignorethis]
Yeah,ignore this.It's too hard.
Otherwise it's fine.
Ekoro
V'la un ptit mod :)

Les phrases en rouges sont I.N.D.I.S.P.E.N.S.A.B.L.E. ( What? )
Les phrases en oranges sont facultatives.
Les phrases en bleues sont extrêmement facultatives.

[Easy]

Une très bonne Easy. :) Rien a dire d'autre , a moins que :

00:39:805 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:40:180 (2) - New Combo
00:46:180 (5) - New Combo?
01:04:180 (4) - New Combo?
01:10:180 (6) - New Combo?
01:16:180 (6) - New Combo?
01:17:680 (8) - New Combo?
01:23:305 => 01:24:805 (1) - Décale le spin a 01:23:680 => 01:25:180
01:53:680 (6) - New Combo?
02:05:680 (9) - New Combo?
02:17:680 (7) - New Combo?
02:35:305 (1) - Décale le spin a 02:35:680. ( Laisse la fin a 02:37:555 )

[Noob_Man's Normal]

Une très bonne Normal mis a part des petits problèmes ( Vraiment des tout petits problèmes )

00:15:805 (5) - New Combo
00:17:492 (10) - Remove New Combo
00:21:805 (4) - New Combo
00:22:180 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:24:055 () - Remove New Combo
00:25:180 (4) - New Combo

Suite plus tard , flemme de finir now D: Allez y , huez moi ! =D

[!ignorethis]

Rien a dire. Une superbe Insane.

[Hard]

Je modderais quand j'aurai un peu de temps :)
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

Easy:
00:15:055 (4) - Déplace-le une fois (grid lvl 3) vers la gauche, comme ça ça fera une jolie ligne avec la fin de (3) et la prochaine note :>
01:09:055 (4) - Déplace-le une fois en haut et une fois à droite pour qu'il fasse une jolie ligne avec les notes avant et après.
02:13:930 (2) - Rends-le droit.


Noob_Man's Normal:
Certains hitsounds me semblent être complètement aléatoires...
00:18:617 (4,1) - Evite les new combo quand tu stackes des notes, c'est pas très joli. (c'est qu'un détail hein)
01:09:992 (7) - Déplace-le deux fois (grille lvl 3) vers la droite.
01:22:648 (8) - Il devrait commencer 1/2 plus tard.
01:37:180 (1) - *rage* Pas de note au centre de l'écran après un spinner huuurrrrrrr

02:31:930 (2) - Déplace-le une fois vers le haut.
Tu devrais aussi mapper la fin de la musique.

Hard:
J'aime pas trop cette diff, franchement, mais elle est sympa à jouer. Mappe la fin ?

!ignorethis:
soooooo hard x_x
nothing to say though
Topic Starter
Fight69
Généralement, trois mods d'affilé, difficile de tout faire xD

J'ai tenté de faire un "mix" de ces mods, en esperant que c'est pas completement foireux.

Thank you ! :)
Sidramon
star ♥
LKs
general

Noob_Man : "_" can not be used in Tags.

Easy

no issues but this diff isnt very interesting.like a Metronome..maybe you can do something chang of rhythm...

Noob Man's Normal

[00:09:805] new combo
[00:10:180] remove new combo
[00:21:805] new combo
[00:22:180] remove new combo
[00:30:617] finish doesnt fit, try whistle
[00:57:242] why not whistle this?
[01:40:180] new combo
[01:40:555] remove new combo

Hard

nice diff

!ignorethis

[00:30:711] add one ?

star
James2250
Easy:
01:23:305 (1,1) - perhaps slightly close for an easy, should be ok though
fine for an easy

Noob_Man's Normal:
00:57:242 (1) - add some whistles
01:43:555 (5) - new combo
02:14:680 (3) - stack on the 1?
02:15:242 (1,2) - stack on previous notes
02:20:680 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same stacking comments
02:35:305 (1) - end at the same point as the other difficulties?

Hard:
00:17:492 (5) - new combo
00:21:805 (3) - ^
00:37:742 (4) - I would align this with the endpoint of 3
02:05:680 (1,2,3,4) - odd pattern after all the triangle patterns

!ignore this:
might want to call this Insane as well or something but ok
(long time since I have see a guest difficulty from you,maybe looking at wrong maps :P)
nice as always but I feel like there were certain parts that could of used some more hitsounds

*star*
Azu_old
[Easy]
This is fine. Expect, I'd replace the very first short break with a spinner.

[Noob Man's Normal]
I'd map something after the last spinner. That's about it.

[Hard and Ignorethis]
Same with Easy, add the spinner.

Overall: It's pretty good and fun to play! Also, if you're not gonna use that last bit, you can cut it and fade out the audio.
Like James said, throw ins some whistles and maybe a finish or two.
Starred
EvianBubble
Hello there! Here's my mod :)

General
No Kiai time? o_O

Easy
00:21:055 (4) - This should be moved one grid right (then maybe move the end down a bit to fix spacing for (1)?)
00:41:680 (4) - Add finish?
01:25:555 (1) - I think this note is probably too soon after the spinner considering the difficulty, so maybe shorten the spinner a bit (or delete this note or something)?
02:13:180 - Maybe start Kiai time here (if you want it)?
Nothing much to say, I think this is a pretty solid easy

Noob man's normal
00:09:336 (3) - Not grid snapped? Move a little to the right
02:13:180 - Yea, if you want Kiai time ...
02:25:930 (2) - Small spacing error, move this one grid left

Hard
00:38:867 (7) - Move this up one grid
00:40:367 (6 - 9) - Same thing
01:15:617 (4 - 8) - Same
02:32:305 (4) - Move one grid left

!ignorethis is way too hard for me lol X_X Good mapset though, not much to mod I think, haha

+1 star for you! :D
Topic Starter
Fight69

LKs wrote:

general

Noob_Man : "_" can not be used in Tags. Fix'd

Easy

no issues but this diff isnt very interesting.like a Metronome..maybe you can do something chang of rhythm... Well, it's a Easy, Easy = Boring D:

Noob Man's Normal

[00:09:805] new combo Fix'd
[00:10:180] remove new combo Fix'd
[00:21:805] new combo Fix'd
[00:22:180] remove new combo Fix'd
[00:30:617] finish doesnt fit, try whistle Fix'd
[00:57:242] why not whistle this? Fix'd
[01:40:180] new combo Fix'd
[01:40:555] remove new combo Fix'd

Hard

nice diff

!ignorethis

[00:30:711] add one ? No

star
Thank you :)

James2250 wrote:

Easy:
01:23:305 (1,1) - perhaps slightly close for an easy, should be ok though Fix'd
fine for an easy

Noob_Man's Normal:
00:57:242 (1) - add some whistles Fix'd
01:43:555 (5) - new combo Fix'd
02:14:680 (3) - stack on the 1? Fix'd
02:15:242 (1,2) - stack on previous notes Fix'd
02:20:680 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same stacking comments Fix'd
02:35:305 (1) - end at the same point as the other difficulties? Fix'd

Hard:
00:17:492 (5) - new combo Fix'd
00:21:805 (3) - ^ Fix'd
00:37:742 (4) - I would align this with the endpoint of 3 Fix'd
02:05:680 (1,2,3,4) - odd pattern after all the triangle patterns Fix'd

!ignore this:
might want to call this Insane as well or something but ok
(long time since I have see a guest difficulty from you,maybe looking at wrong maps :P)
nice as always but I feel like there were certain parts that could of used some more hitsounds

I'm too noob in beatmapping, so I'll don't do anything.
I don't want to destroy his diff :|

*star*
Thanks ^^

Bu..bu..bubu...but where is my star !? :cry:

Azu wrote:

[Easy]
This is fine. Expect, I'd replace the very first short break with a spinner. No

[Noob Man's Normal]
I'd map something after the last spinner. That's about it. No

[Hard and Ignorethis]
Same with Easy, add the spinner. No

Overall: It's pretty good and fun to play! Also, if you're not gonna use that last bit, you can cut it and fade out the audio. Yeah, I'll probably do that...if I'm not too lazy ! xD
Like James said, throw ins some whistles and maybe a finish or two.
Starred

Thanks

EvianBubble wrote:

Hello there! Here's my mod :)

General
No Kiai time? o_O No Kiai Time :3

Easy
00:21:055 (4) - This should be moved one grid right (then maybe move the end down a bit to fix spacing for (1)?) Fix'd
00:41:680 (4) - Add finish? Fix'd
01:25:555 (1) - I think this note is probably too soon after the spinner considering the difficulty, so maybe shorten the spinner a bit (or delete this note or something)? Already fix'd :P
02:13:180 - Maybe start Kiai time here (if you want it)? No
Nothing much to say, I think this is a pretty solid easy

Noob man's normal
00:09:336 (3) - Not grid snapped? Move a little to the right Fix'd
02:13:180 - Yea, if you want Kiai time ... No
02:25:930 (2) - Small spacing error, move this one grid left Fix'd

Hard
00:38:867 (7) - Move this up one grid
00:40:367 (6 - 9) - Same thing

I've replaced this part with distance snap.

01:15:617 (4 - 8) - Same Fix'd
02:32:305 (4) - Move one grid left Fix'd

!ignorethis is way too hard for me lol X_X Good mapset though, not much to mod I think, haha

+1 star for you! :D
Thank you ! :)
dvorak_old
add bpm 160 // offset 37,200

current osu system don't allow to explain bpm change during 32.305 - 36.???
It become slow down beat by beat here, and suddenly back.
But metronome off bit after this.
Doomsday
Yo

  1. Timing looks good. Maybe you could add -2 offset to the section at 32,700, but its only a small change.
  2. Red and white hitcircles on a red and white background isn't a great idea, as it makes the hitcircles somewhat harder to see. It isn't too bad in this case, but maybe you could change them?
[EASY]

Seems alright, but it feels a bit too hard to be the easiest difficulty. Most of it is fine, but the parts with a constant stream of beats are what make this too hard imo (such as 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2, etc), 00:06:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5, etc)). If you could put some gaps to break up parts like those, it should work just fine. Otherwise, You could need an even easier diff.

[NOOB MAN'S NORMAL]

No technical issues, but it's pretty boring. It's all straight lines and right angles. The beats that are down are nicely placed, but they need a more interesting layout on the map. Try putting them in different shapes and such. So much as breaking off of the straight lines they are stuck in will make it much more interesting.

[HARD]

Looks good

[!IGNORETHIS]


And suddenly, jumps, thousands of them.
Yeah. A bit too jumpy for my tastes. A bit too much for the song.

01:31:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was thinking, maybe having this as an all-hitcircle stream rather than putting sliders in too? Feels more natural to me that way.

It's a solid mapset, but not a perfect one. It's nice overall, but the Easier difficulties could use some spice to make them more interesting, and ignore's is a little too much for this song, but that's just me probably.

Starred
Topic Starter
Fight69

Doomsday wrote:

Yo

  1. Timing looks good. Maybe you could add -2 offset to the section at 32,700, but its only a small change. Fix'd
  2. Red and white hitcircles on a red and white background isn't a great idea, as it makes the hitcircles somewhat harder to see. It isn't too bad in this case, but maybe you could change them? Fix'd, I hope it's not too ugly now...
[EASY]

Seems alright, but it feels a bit too hard to be the easiest difficulty. Most of it is fine, but the parts with a constant stream of beats are what make this too hard imo (such as 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2, etc), 00:06:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5, etc)). If you could put some gaps to break up parts like those, it should work just fine. Otherwise, You could need an even easier diff.

I'll try to fix that

[NOOB MAN'S NORMAL]

No technical issues, but it's pretty boring. It's all straight lines and right angles. The beats that are down are nicely placed, but they need a more interesting layout on the map. Try putting them in different shapes and such. So much as breaking off of the straight lines they are stuck in will make it much more interesting.

I'll talk to Noob_Man about that.

[HARD]

Looks good

[!IGNORETHIS]


And suddenly, jumps, thousands of them.
Yeah. A bit too jumpy for my tastes. A bit too much for the song.

01:31:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was thinking, maybe having this as an all-hitcircle stream rather than putting sliders in too? Feels more natural to me that way.

Fix'd

It's a solid mapset, but not a perfect one. It's nice overall, but the Easier difficulties could use some spice to make them more interesting, and ignore's is a little too much for this song, but that's just me probably.

Starred Thank you !
AngelHoney
All

Remove Countdown ?

Noob Man's Normal

02:22:010 (4,5) - spacing._.

others is fine ....
Topic Starter
Fight69

AngelHoney wrote:

All

Remove Countdown ? Removed

Noob Man's Normal

02:22:010 (4,5) - spacing._. Fix'd

others is fine ....
Thank you for your mod ! :)
osushi_old
+1 star mon bouchon <3 :)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci ^^
Clemaister
Bien joué Fight ! Star~
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci :)
Pokie
;)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Thanks ! :)
Musty
Good Job Fight69 :o
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci :D
Shinde
General
Should delete .osb and full upload.
As a small note, your background is 1023x767. It's very trivial, but I'd resize it to 1024x768 to retain a 4:3 scale, since you'll already be doing a full upload if you get rid of the .osb.

Easy
A little boring and linear, maybe a tad too hard for an Easy. I noticed everything's on a white tick as well, which I think added to the whole 'boring' thing.

Normal
Same 'A little boring and linear' thing.
01:34:198 (1) - Start a beat later. (End on the same note)

Hard
I liked this diff. I'm glad you used sliders that weren't just horizontal/vertical and straight.
02:26:698 (5,1,2,3,4) - I dunno, I didn't like how these stacked. Maybe do something with this area, but it's not a big deal.
Drain -1 IMO.

!ignore this
I didn't like it. It just felt like nonsensical jumps and anti-spacing, with small circles, random streams, and a bunch of copy paste. I also think it was a bit overmapped. There aren't any technical issues with it, but I don't like the style at all.
01:32:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Plays awkwardly for me. Horrible pattern shape for a 1/4th stream IMO.
Cirno
Nice map, star lol

P.S. in my opinion the 00:59:323 repeating slider in [Hard] is a bit long, doesn't fit the pace of music
Topic Starter
Fight69

Shinde wrote:

General
Should delete .osb and full upload. Fuuuuuuuu, I hate this empty .osb file... :cry:

As a small note, your background is 1023x767. It's very trivial, but I'd resize it to 1024x768 to retain a 4:3 scale, since you'll already be doing a full upload if you get rid of the .osb. Fix'd

Easy
A little boring and linear, maybe a tad too hard for an Easy. I noticed everything's on a white tick as well, which I think added to the whole 'boring' thing.

I hope it's better now

Normal
Same 'A little boring and linear' thing.
01:34:198 (1) - Start a beat later. (End on the same note) I think it's fixed now

Hard
I liked this diff. I'm glad you used sliders that weren't just horizontal/vertical and straight.
02:26:698 (5,1,2,3,4) - I dunno, I didn't like how these stacked. Maybe do something with this area, but it's not a big deal. I think I will dont do anything here
Drain -1 IMO. Fix'd

!ignore this
I didn't like it. It just felt like nonsensical jumps and anti-spacing, with small circles, random streams, and a bunch of copy paste. I also think it was a bit overmapped. There aren't any technical issues with it, but I don't like the style at all.

Eggpaaaaaaaaain ! D:
(Alace-sensei has learned me that word yesterday xD)

01:32:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Plays awkwardly for me. Horrible pattern shape for a 1/4th stream IMO. Should be better now, I've stacked everything
Thank you for your mod ! :)

timpks wrote:

Nice map, star lol

P.S. in my opinion the 00:59:323 repeating slider in [Hard] is a bit long, doesn't fit the pace of music

This slider looks fine for me
Thank you ! :)
Selee
;)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Thank you for the star :)
Fraolinch
:)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci ! :)
orioncomet
[General]
- brown combo color a bit hard to see on some part of BG to me >_<!

[Easy]
02:01:198 (5) - shouldn't new combo here? x-x

[Noob Man's Normal]
- Too hard for a Normal.. *a Normal like this making kitty madd, grrrrrr*

[Hard]
nice silder ~ xD!

[!ignorethis]
- resnap all notes
lol crazy >_<
Topic Starter
Fight69

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- brown combo color a bit hard to see on some part of BG to me >_<! Should be fine now...I think

[Easy]
02:01:198 (5) - shouldn't new combo here? x-x I've never noticed xD...fixed anyway

[Noob Man's Normal]
- Too hard for a Normal.. *a Normal like this making kitty madd, grrrrrr* D:

[Hard]
nice silder ~ xD! Thank you :P

[!ignorethis]
- resnap all notes Whoops, should be fixed now
lol crazy >_<
Everything should be fixed, for Noob Man's Normal, I'll try to catch him IG

Thank you for your mod ! :)
Andrea
[Easy]

00:57:448 (4) - New combo.
02:01:198 (5) - ^
02:02:698 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:04:198 (5) - New combo.


[Noob Man's Normal]

02:27:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too much for a normal, fix it or rename the difficulty to Normal+.
02:33:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^


[Hard]

02:27:073 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:27:260 (2) - New combo.


[!ignorethis]

Circle size +1 at least, it would be more fun and nice.


01:31:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why different spacing between (7) & (8) and (10) & (11)?
02:15:260 (7) - New combo.
02:15:448 (1) - Remove new combo.


EDIT: Bubbled~
Ekoro
Wouah , Bubbled ! GG !!
ignorethis
added a few new combos and changed the dif name (there's usually a space in it when i name my guest difs)

Download: ZUN - Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle (Fight69) [!ignore this].osu
Alace
I had an IRC modding with IGN (new combo stuffs)
please upload his diff and contract me
Topic Starter
Fight69
Okay

btw, I've fixed the timing and the combo colors in his diff
Serval
Star :)
Alace
Alright
Mafiamaster
Remove countdown from ignorethis or enable it on all.

Ranked!
dNextGen
gratz ;)
Sondow_old
:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
James2250

Sondow wrote:

:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
Maybe a BAT can change this? D:
Hakeru
ah finally ~

neko miko reimu ~ <3
Ekoro


/me says : OH EM GEE

GG pour la 1ere place du most played !!!!!!! =DD
Alice
Moi je dis pas GG, je dis merci. Merci pour tout. =W=
Kurai
Olol, No, Thank you détroné :33
Sa rox du ponay >.<
Zekira

James2250 wrote:

Sondow wrote:

:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
Maybe a BAT can change this? D:
inb4CycloneRaeg
Topic Starter
Fight69

dNextGen wrote:

gratz ;)
Thanks ^^

_LRJ_ wrote:



/me says : OH EM GEE

GG pour la 1ere place du most played !!!!!!! =DD
OMG !

That was completely unexpected xD

Sondow wrote:

:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
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