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ZUN - Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle

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Doomsday
Yo

  1. Timing looks good. Maybe you could add -2 offset to the section at 32,700, but its only a small change.
  2. Red and white hitcircles on a red and white background isn't a great idea, as it makes the hitcircles somewhat harder to see. It isn't too bad in this case, but maybe you could change them?
[EASY]

Seems alright, but it feels a bit too hard to be the easiest difficulty. Most of it is fine, but the parts with a constant stream of beats are what make this too hard imo (such as 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2, etc), 00:06:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5, etc)). If you could put some gaps to break up parts like those, it should work just fine. Otherwise, You could need an even easier diff.

[NOOB MAN'S NORMAL]

No technical issues, but it's pretty boring. It's all straight lines and right angles. The beats that are down are nicely placed, but they need a more interesting layout on the map. Try putting them in different shapes and such. So much as breaking off of the straight lines they are stuck in will make it much more interesting.

[HARD]

Looks good

[!IGNORETHIS]


And suddenly, jumps, thousands of them.
Yeah. A bit too jumpy for my tastes. A bit too much for the song.

01:31:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was thinking, maybe having this as an all-hitcircle stream rather than putting sliders in too? Feels more natural to me that way.

It's a solid mapset, but not a perfect one. It's nice overall, but the Easier difficulties could use some spice to make them more interesting, and ignore's is a little too much for this song, but that's just me probably.

Starred
Topic Starter
Fight69

Doomsday wrote:

Yo

  1. Timing looks good. Maybe you could add -2 offset to the section at 32,700, but its only a small change. Fix'd
  2. Red and white hitcircles on a red and white background isn't a great idea, as it makes the hitcircles somewhat harder to see. It isn't too bad in this case, but maybe you could change them? Fix'd, I hope it's not too ugly now...
[EASY]

Seems alright, but it feels a bit too hard to be the easiest difficulty. Most of it is fine, but the parts with a constant stream of beats are what make this too hard imo (such as 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2, etc), 00:06:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5, etc)). If you could put some gaps to break up parts like those, it should work just fine. Otherwise, You could need an even easier diff.

I'll try to fix that

[NOOB MAN'S NORMAL]

No technical issues, but it's pretty boring. It's all straight lines and right angles. The beats that are down are nicely placed, but they need a more interesting layout on the map. Try putting them in different shapes and such. So much as breaking off of the straight lines they are stuck in will make it much more interesting.

I'll talk to Noob_Man about that.

[HARD]

Looks good

[!IGNORETHIS]


And suddenly, jumps, thousands of them.
Yeah. A bit too jumpy for my tastes. A bit too much for the song.

01:31:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was thinking, maybe having this as an all-hitcircle stream rather than putting sliders in too? Feels more natural to me that way.

Fix'd

It's a solid mapset, but not a perfect one. It's nice overall, but the Easier difficulties could use some spice to make them more interesting, and ignore's is a little too much for this song, but that's just me probably.

Starred Thank you !
AngelHoney
All

Remove Countdown ?

Noob Man's Normal

02:22:010 (4,5) - spacing._.

others is fine ....
Topic Starter
Fight69

AngelHoney wrote:

All

Remove Countdown ? Removed

Noob Man's Normal

02:22:010 (4,5) - spacing._. Fix'd

others is fine ....
Thank you for your mod ! :)
osushi_old
+1 star mon bouchon <3 :)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci ^^
Clemaister
Bien joué Fight ! Star~
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci :)
Pokie
;)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Thanks ! :)
Musty
Good Job Fight69 :o
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci :D
Shinde
General
Should delete .osb and full upload.
As a small note, your background is 1023x767. It's very trivial, but I'd resize it to 1024x768 to retain a 4:3 scale, since you'll already be doing a full upload if you get rid of the .osb.

Easy
A little boring and linear, maybe a tad too hard for an Easy. I noticed everything's on a white tick as well, which I think added to the whole 'boring' thing.

Normal
Same 'A little boring and linear' thing.
01:34:198 (1) - Start a beat later. (End on the same note)

Hard
I liked this diff. I'm glad you used sliders that weren't just horizontal/vertical and straight.
02:26:698 (5,1,2,3,4) - I dunno, I didn't like how these stacked. Maybe do something with this area, but it's not a big deal.
Drain -1 IMO.

!ignore this
I didn't like it. It just felt like nonsensical jumps and anti-spacing, with small circles, random streams, and a bunch of copy paste. I also think it was a bit overmapped. There aren't any technical issues with it, but I don't like the style at all.
01:32:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Plays awkwardly for me. Horrible pattern shape for a 1/4th stream IMO.
Cirno
Nice map, star lol

P.S. in my opinion the 00:59:323 repeating slider in [Hard] is a bit long, doesn't fit the pace of music
Topic Starter
Fight69

Shinde wrote:

General
Should delete .osb and full upload. Fuuuuuuuu, I hate this empty .osb file... :cry:

As a small note, your background is 1023x767. It's very trivial, but I'd resize it to 1024x768 to retain a 4:3 scale, since you'll already be doing a full upload if you get rid of the .osb. Fix'd

Easy
A little boring and linear, maybe a tad too hard for an Easy. I noticed everything's on a white tick as well, which I think added to the whole 'boring' thing.

I hope it's better now

Normal
Same 'A little boring and linear' thing.
01:34:198 (1) - Start a beat later. (End on the same note) I think it's fixed now

Hard
I liked this diff. I'm glad you used sliders that weren't just horizontal/vertical and straight.
02:26:698 (5,1,2,3,4) - I dunno, I didn't like how these stacked. Maybe do something with this area, but it's not a big deal. I think I will dont do anything here
Drain -1 IMO. Fix'd

!ignore this
I didn't like it. It just felt like nonsensical jumps and anti-spacing, with small circles, random streams, and a bunch of copy paste. I also think it was a bit overmapped. There aren't any technical issues with it, but I don't like the style at all.

Eggpaaaaaaaaain ! D:
(Alace-sensei has learned me that word yesterday xD)

01:32:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Plays awkwardly for me. Horrible pattern shape for a 1/4th stream IMO. Should be better now, I've stacked everything
Thank you for your mod ! :)

timpks wrote:

Nice map, star lol

P.S. in my opinion the 00:59:323 repeating slider in [Hard] is a bit long, doesn't fit the pace of music

This slider looks fine for me
Thank you ! :)
Selee
;)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Thank you for the star :)
Fraolinch
:)
Topic Starter
Fight69
Merci ! :)
orioncomet
[General]
- brown combo color a bit hard to see on some part of BG to me >_<!

[Easy]
02:01:198 (5) - shouldn't new combo here? x-x

[Noob Man's Normal]
- Too hard for a Normal.. *a Normal like this making kitty madd, grrrrrr*

[Hard]
nice silder ~ xD!

[!ignorethis]
- resnap all notes
lol crazy >_<
Topic Starter
Fight69

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- brown combo color a bit hard to see on some part of BG to me >_<! Should be fine now...I think

[Easy]
02:01:198 (5) - shouldn't new combo here? x-x I've never noticed xD...fixed anyway

[Noob Man's Normal]
- Too hard for a Normal.. *a Normal like this making kitty madd, grrrrrr* D:

[Hard]
nice silder ~ xD! Thank you :P

[!ignorethis]
- resnap all notes Whoops, should be fixed now
lol crazy >_<
Everything should be fixed, for Noob Man's Normal, I'll try to catch him IG

Thank you for your mod ! :)
Andrea
[Easy]

00:57:448 (4) - New combo.
02:01:198 (5) - ^
02:02:698 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:04:198 (5) - New combo.


[Noob Man's Normal]

02:27:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too much for a normal, fix it or rename the difficulty to Normal+.
02:33:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^


[Hard]

02:27:073 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:27:260 (2) - New combo.


[!ignorethis]

Circle size +1 at least, it would be more fun and nice.


01:31:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why different spacing between (7) & (8) and (10) & (11)?
02:15:260 (7) - New combo.
02:15:448 (1) - Remove new combo.


EDIT: Bubbled~
Ekoro
Wouah , Bubbled ! GG !!
ignorethis
added a few new combos and changed the dif name (there's usually a space in it when i name my guest difs)

Download: ZUN - Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle (Fight69) [!ignore this].osu
Alace
I had an IRC modding with IGN (new combo stuffs)
please upload his diff and contract me
Topic Starter
Fight69
Okay

btw, I've fixed the timing and the combo colors in his diff
Serval
Star :)
Alace
Alright
Mafiamaster
Remove countdown from ignorethis or enable it on all.

Ranked!
dNextGen
gratz ;)
Sondow_old
:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
James2250

Sondow wrote:

:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
Maybe a BAT can change this? D:
Hakeru
ah finally ~

neko miko reimu ~ <3
Ekoro


/me says : OH EM GEE

GG pour la 1ere place du most played !!!!!!! =DD
Alice
Moi je dis pas GG, je dis merci. Merci pour tout. =W=
Kurai
Olol, No, Thank you détroné :33
Sa rox du ponay >.<
Zekira

James2250 wrote:

Sondow wrote:

:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
Maybe a BAT can change this? D:
inb4CycloneRaeg
Topic Starter
Fight69

dNextGen wrote:

gratz ;)
Thanks ^^

_LRJ_ wrote:



/me says : OH EM GEE

GG pour la 1ere place du most played !!!!!!! =DD
OMG !

That was completely unexpected xD

Sondow wrote:

:o More ZUN maps, yay

However, it's spelled Capriccio. I'm surprised no one caught that.
Whoops...
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