1. !ignore this (5 stars, 514 notes)
2. Easy (2,09 stars, 140 notes)
3. Hard (4,96 stars, 331 notes)
4. Noob Man's Normal+ (4,03 stars, 230 notes)

Feno wrote:

General:
Add a custom palette? The default palette is pretty ugly,but throw some red and white in there,maybe some different shades of red,it really makes the map more enjoyable IMO.

Hard:
01:27:607 (5) - 2 grids to the left?
02:03:045 (5) - One grid down?
02:30:795 (4) - One grid down?

Overall,great xD

#star

Slanox wrote:

Yo !

[Overall]

- Put a preview point in your diffs.
- Delete .osb in your folder.

[Hard]

- 00:08:295(x) : Add circle ?
- 00:10:170(9) : New combo ?
- 00:15:045(7) : ^
- 00:23:482(9) : ^
- 00:27:795(9) : ^
- 00:45:607(7) : ^
- 01:11:670(9) : ^
- 01:15:982(10) : ^
- 01:21:982(10) : ^
- 01:23:670(1) : Add finish ?
- 01:39:420(6) : New combo ?
- 01:46:170(8) : ^
- 01:51:232(6) : ^
- 01:56:482(7) : ^
- 02:03:982(10) : ^
- 02:15:982(10) : ^
- 02:23:107(x) : Add circle ?
- 02:33:607(9) : New combo ?


Okay, that's it.
Pretty map !
Get my star !

JInxyjem wrote:

[Noob Man]
Linear map is Linear.
I'm not going to lie, this map has no errors, but it is pretty boring.

[Hard]
Much much better. I like it a lot.
However, the lack of breaks seems kinda -ish.

Starred for Hard.

kioukiou wrote:

Delete "ZUN - Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle (Fight69).osb" from song folder,it's useless.

What the ?!...I have already deleted it 3 times o.o

offset +10ms (6,805ms) Fix'd

[Normal]

A bit hard for some new players.

Because Normal has a lot of 3/4 beats.

You can ask more players to test it. Ok, I'll do that, if too much people say it's hard, Noob will probably make an easier diff or I'll kill him

[Hard]

02:14:670 (4) -Make it farther from (3), You can make it like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16568 Done


Star. :3 Thank you !

Mystearica wrote:

Use repeat sliders for 3/4 on your Normal, probably remove the 1/4s, it's too high in star rating and looks a bit tough to me for a Normal atm.

I'll do what I've said for kioukiou's post, anyway, thank you for your star !

Noob ! Come on ! You have a lot of work !

Muya wrote:

[General]
Add " hakurei reimu imperishable night " to tags

star

Whoops...I forgot them >.>

Thank you ^^'

(no, I'm not lazy)

AgentYous wrote:

Super map

Star

Merci !

Do you feel it is so loudly?
you can turn the volume less
Timing>Timing Setup Panel>Volume>turn it down？

Let's do it~

I love your map~
star

It's not really loudly for me...
I don't know if I should turn the volume less...

Anyway, thank you for your post ^^

1. OD = 1? it's quite hard to play it with such a OD. I think 4 or 5 will be good.
2. other things are fine

1. 02:26:680 (5,1,2,3,4) - stacks strangely. and this diff stack leniency is different from others. make them the same.

Kurai_ wrote:

PWET

[General]
Ajoute ignorethis dans les tag KOM T NUL !

[Easy]
01:21:430 (1) - New combo Fixayd
kom ell suce ta izi Merci, toi aussi

[Normal de l'homme Noob]
00:57:430 (4) - 1/2 plus tôt avec un reverse en plus Fixayd
01:23:305 (1) - 3/4 plus tôt et rallonge de 3/4 Fixayd

[Hard]
02:23:305 (1) - 3/4 plus tôt et rallonge de 3/4 Fixayd
02:35:305 (1) - ^ Fixayd

[thisisnotinsaneorz]
00:12:242 (1) - New combo?
00:18:055 (7) - ^
02:35:680 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4
rofl

I'll ask ignorethis before doing anything on his diff

Etoile~ Trop nul ton mod, pour la peine, voila un kudosu

Xgor wrote:

02:35:492 (1) - (Suggestion) Make it 1/1 longer, remove the timing section and add a finish on this spinner.

Lizbeth wrote:

Noob Man's Normal
ok map is technically correct.
But I feel some missing notes in a few places, maybe you could add a note in this points:
00:09:805 -
00:15:805 -
00:21:805 -
00:27:805 -
01:40:180 -
01:46:180 -

Others diff are fine with me.
star

-_Kite_- wrote:

great map and song
~star

LKs wrote:

general

Noob_Man : "_" can not be used in Tags. Fix'd

Easy

no issues but this diff isnt very interesting.like a Metronome..maybe you can do something chang of rhythm... Well, it's a Easy, Easy = Boring D:

Noob Man's Normal

[00:09:805] new combo Fix'd
[00:10:180] remove new combo Fix'd
[00:21:805] new combo Fix'd
[00:22:180] remove new combo Fix'd
[00:30:617] finish doesnt fit, try whistle Fix'd
[00:57:242] why not whistle this? Fix'd
[01:40:180] new combo Fix'd
[01:40:555] remove new combo Fix'd

Hard

nice diff

!ignorethis

[00:30:711] add one ? No

star

James2250 wrote:

Easy:
01:23:305 (1,1) - perhaps slightly close for an easy, should be ok though Fix'd
fine for an easy

Noob_Man's Normal:
00:57:242 (1) - add some whistles Fix'd
01:43:555 (5) - new combo Fix'd
02:14:680 (3) - stack on the 1? Fix'd
02:15:242 (1,2) - stack on previous notes Fix'd
02:20:680 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same stacking comments Fix'd
02:35:305 (1) - end at the same point as the other difficulties? Fix'd

Hard:
00:17:492 (5) - new combo Fix'd
00:21:805 (3) - ^ Fix'd
00:37:742 (4) - I would align this with the endpoint of 3 Fix'd
02:05:680 (1,2,3,4) - odd pattern after all the triangle patterns Fix'd

!ignore this:
might want to call this Insane as well or something but ok
(long time since I have see a guest difficulty from you,maybe looking at wrong maps )
nice as always but I feel like there were certain parts that could of used some more hitsounds

I'm too noob in beatmapping, so I'll don't do anything.
I don't want to destroy his diff

*star*

Azu wrote:

[Easy]
This is fine. Expect, I'd replace the very first short break with a spinner. No

[Noob Man's Normal]
I'd map something after the last spinner. That's about it. No

[Hard and Ignorethis]
Same with Easy, add the spinner. No

Overall: It's pretty good and fun to play! Also, if you're not gonna use that last bit, you can cut it and fade out the audio. Yeah, I'll probably do that...if I'm not too lazy ! xD
Like James said, throw ins some whistles and maybe a finish or two.
Starred

Thanks

EvianBubble wrote:

Hello there! Here's my mod

General
No Kiai time? o_O No Kiai Time :3

Easy
00:21:055 (4) - This should be moved one grid right (then maybe move the end down a bit to fix spacing for (1)?) Fix'd
00:41:680 (4) - Add finish? Fix'd
01:25:555 (1) - I think this note is probably too soon after the spinner considering the difficulty, so maybe shorten the spinner a bit (or delete this note or something)? Already fix'd
02:13:180 - Maybe start Kiai time here (if you want it)? No
Nothing much to say, I think this is a pretty solid easy

Noob man's normal
00:09:336 (3) - Not grid snapped? Move a little to the right Fix'd
02:13:180 - Yea, if you want Kiai time ... No
02:25:930 (2) - Small spacing error, move this one grid left Fix'd

Hard
00:38:867 (7) - Move this up one grid
00:40:367 (6 - 9) - Same thing

I've replaced this part with distance snap.

01:15:617 (4 - 8) - Same Fix'd
02:32:305 (4) - Move one grid left Fix'd

!ignorethis is way too hard for me lol X_X Good mapset though, not much to mod I think, haha

+1 star for you!

1. Timing looks good. Maybe you could add -2 offset to the section at 32,700, but its only a small change.
2. Red and white hitcircles on a red and white background isn't a great idea, as it makes the hitcircles somewhat harder to see. It isn't too bad in this case, but maybe you could change them?

Doomsday wrote:

Yo

1. Timing looks good. Maybe you could add -2 offset to the section at 32,700, but its only a small change. Fix'd
2. Red and white hitcircles on a red and white background isn't a great idea, as it makes the hitcircles somewhat harder to see. It isn't too bad in this case, but maybe you could change them? Fix'd, I hope it's not too ugly now...

[EASY]

Seems alright, but it feels a bit too hard to be the easiest difficulty. Most of it is fine, but the parts with a constant stream of beats are what make this too hard imo (such as 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2, etc), 00:06:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5, etc)). If you could put some gaps to break up parts like those, it should work just fine. Otherwise, You could need an even easier diff.

I'll try to fix that

[NOOB MAN'S NORMAL]

No technical issues, but it's pretty boring. It's all straight lines and right angles. The beats that are down are nicely placed, but they need a more interesting layout on the map. Try putting them in different shapes and such. So much as breaking off of the straight lines they are stuck in will make it much more interesting.

I'll talk to Noob_Man about that.

[HARD]

Looks good

[!IGNORETHIS]

And suddenly, jumps, thousands of them.
Yeah. A bit too jumpy for my tastes. A bit too much for the song.

01:31:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was thinking, maybe having this as an all-hitcircle stream rather than putting sliders in too? Feels more natural to me that way.

Fix'd

It's a solid mapset, but not a perfect one. It's nice overall, but the Easier difficulties could use some spice to make them more interesting, and ignore's is a little too much for this song, but that's just me probably.

Starred Thank you !