niconico1 wrote:

Hi, from pm.

[Easy]
*Change slider velocity to 1
00:47:189 (1,2) - make it a slider?

SPOILER

00:58:945 - slider to 00:59:351 -

[Normal]
00:25:702 (1,2,3) - imo a slider is better for this
00:33:405 (2,3,4) - ^
00:38:878 (3) - try to avoid SV changes like this. 00:38:675 (2,3) - ^
00:38:878 - if you want to increase the SV try 1.25 or 1.15.
00:44:756 (3) - try something like this, because its too tricky

SPOILER

00:49:216 (1) - ^
00:50:432 (2) - ^

SPOILER

00:57:324 (3) - ^
01:13:540 - add a note

[Hard]
00:25:499 (3) - try something like this

SPOILER

00:44:553 - add a note
00:53:067 - ^
00:57:729 (1) - try something like this

SPOILER

00:59:553 - add a note
00:59:655 (1) - move the slider to white
01:05:634 - add a note

[Crimmi's Flashlight]
*idk what to say to this diff so... yeah...

Thats all I can do for this.
Good luck
First mod btw

Easy

Normal

Hard

Crimmi's Flashlight

Syine wrote:

Hi.
This is my first modding ._. I just wrote the things that I felt.
And I'm not really good at English! T.T

Easy

1. 00:13:540 (1) - I think this note will be confused for players because this note is next of spinner and located on center. I recommend this one to move somewhere
2. 00:26:918 (2,3,2) - Whistle sound on these sliders is little bit awkward. Remove hitsound or add whistle on 00:31:378 (3)
3. 01:13:945 (1) - How about
   I made start point of spinner fits piano rhythm

Normal

1. 00:50:432 (2) - Too many reverse arrows. How about remove one on this point? It doesn't fit vocal rhythm.

Hard

• Totally, the distance between some notes is not regular. It is difficult to read.

1. 00:12:729 (1,2,3) - Distance of these notes are too long. It could be confused 1/1.
2. 00:18:810 (2,3) - Distance is short about 1/1.
3. 00:28:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't say certainly about this part, but some of players would make complaint because its distance is short.
   
   I recommend you to consider about this part seriously.
   Below points is for my subjectivity.
4. 00:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 00:38:472 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:44:148 (3,1) - ^
8. 00:44:148 (3,1) - ^
9. 01:00:770 (3) ^
10. 01:00:972 (3) - How about change to 01:00:770 (3) ?

Crimmi's Flashlight

1. 01:00:770 (3) - too short distance.
2. 00:06:648 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:12:729 (6) - ^
4. 00:53:472 (5,6) - Why don't you make this note further from previous one?
   There are some obscure parts, but I just think they're individuality of your mapping style.

I wish my mod could help you.
Good luck!

domSaur wrote:

ayy

[Crimmi's Flashlight]
- i recommend changing this to ar8(the note density is makes this hard to read)

00:16:783 - vocal starts here but you've put a end the slider here, why. you can maybe reduce 00:16:378 (1) - into just 1/2
00:17:189 (3) - it would be better if you just made this into a 1/1 slider instead
00:20:432 (4,5) - move this away(form it with a triangle along with 00:20:026 (2,3) 00:21:040 (6) if you want)
-i dunno why at 00:25:297 the sv suddenly went faster since the song isn't really even going fast at all
-either move 00:45:060 (5) away from 00:44:553 (2,3,4) or move 00:45:364 (6) to 00:45:060 (5) -

idk. can you make give the spacing outside the chorus a bit more bigger? :s

[Hard]
00:00:263 (1) - what is this doing here?
00:06:648 - this is a large beat and you've put a tail here, why.
00:09:891 - ^
00:23:472 - there's a vocal here that's being covered by 00:23:270 (1) ;
-make 00:23:270 (1) a 1 1/2 slider instead and put a note(overlap it if you want) on 00:23:270
-distance 00:26:107 (4) by 1.1x to even out with 00:26:310 (1) -
00:26:310 (1) - you may or may not follow this. your call.ctrl+g
00:30:364 (3) - ^
00:39:486 (4,5) - this is pretty hard to read(plus the AR made it even harder so)
01:04:418 (4) - blanket this properly

[Normal]
00:44:756 (3) - maybe turn this into a 1/1 slider instead. this reverse slider plays really fast for a new player.
00:45:972 (1) - i think you can probably remove this. this is kinda breaking the momentum for the next 1/1 slider. or you can add a note on 00:46:276 and blanket 00:46:378 (6) - to it.

the easy looks fine(or at least most of it) to me so i'm leaving it. anyways, i dunno if these are of any help but ye. please review some of your sliders.. they're practically covering dominant beats and vocals(nasasapawan).

1. For all difficulties, look in to your .osu in notepad. Change "AudioLeadIn" to 1000 or 1500. The map is beginning pretty fast in the timeline(0.2%), this is to compensate with it.
2. Check your patterns, they are pretty awkward to play as of now.

1. SV of 0.6 is REALLY SMALL. I know this is a slow song, but considering this is a slow song this should be bigger, something like 1.0?
2. On top of that, 0.9x DS is going to make short-spaced notes really cramped up, change either one of these.
3. 00:00:162 (1,2,1) - So (1) is pointing to the right, then (2) is pointing to the left, but the next (1) is placed to the right, which certainly doesn't feel right. I suggest you copy the first (1) for (2) for flow.
4. 00:06:648 (1,2) - Since the previous sliders were all curved at least once, I suggest you do it for these too, since it is following the same 'part' of the song.
5. 00:09:891 (1,1) - Gap between a spinner and the following note should be 4 beats, because I am pretty sure that is unrankable. Reduce spinner length to 00:12:324.
6. 00:18:810 (1,2) - I suggest you curve this, in order to create a smoother progression to 00:22:053 (1).
7. 00:25:297 (1,2) - I think you rather make these as a 2/1 slider, because this is the calm part, and calm parts should be having more sliders. OR you can delete (2) to make a break for players.
8. 00:37:053 (1) - Like I said earlier, gap between spinner and the following note should be 4 beats long. Either remove this spinner, or you can move it to start at 00:37:053 - then ending it at 00:38:270.
9. 00:42:324 (2,1) - Follow the flow, make these curved.
10. 00:59:351 (2) - ^^ this is for the smooth progression.
11. 01:03:405 (1,2) - In Easy, don't make patterns like this. The end of (1) is pointing to the left, but you started (2) on top of (1), it can confuse beginners. You could :
    1. Curve both of them and place them like this :
    
    
    2. Delete (2), then remove the repeat on (1). Add a new slider like this :
    
    
    This is to match the ending of kiai time sound effects.
    
12. 01:05:026 - Kiai time SHOULD end here, part of the chorus is ending here.

1. Here are some comments on NC :
2. 00:02:189 (1) - Remove NC here then add NC on 00:03:405 (2). Then remove NC at 00:04:216 (1).
3. 00:06:243 (1) - Remove NC here then add NC on 00:06:648 (5). Then remove NC at 00:07:459 (1).
4. 00:09:486 - Add a circle here, there is a piano prominent here.
5. 00:00:162 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't go for a pattern like this, I would rather :
   
   
   This fits with the piano in the background very well.
6. 00:09:891 (1) - In this difficulty too, you should have 4 beats of spacing because I am pretty sure that is unrankable. Decrease length to 00:11:513. This still fits in with the piano.
7. 00:13:134 (1,2,3) - If you are trying to make a triangular pattern, it should be perfect. Move (3) to x=240 y=104.
8. 00:15:567 (2) - Curve this slider, the next slider is currently breaking the flow.
9. 00:16:378 (3) - You should curve this more, again for smooth progression on towards the next note.
10. 00:22:864 (2) - For a long slider, I prefer a curved one, at least just a bit.
11. 00:37:459 (2,3) - Curve (2), progression is awkward towards (3).
12. There are lots of NC inconsistency in the kiai time. If I would list them down :
13. 00:40:702 (1) - Remove NC
14. 00:43:945 (1) - Remove NC, then add NC at 00:45:567 (3).
15. 00:46:378 (1) - Remove NC
16. 00:51:648 (1) - Remove NC, then add NC at 00:52:459 (2).
17. 00:53:270 (1,1) - Remove NC
18. 00:55:702 (6) - Add NC, then remove NC at 00:56:107 (1).
19. 01:01:378 (1) - Remove NC, then add NC at 01:01:783 (1). Then remove (again) NC at 01:02:594 (1).
20. 01:05:026 (1) - Again, spinner gaps. In this case, you need to remove this spinner, instead replacing with a slider.
21. 01:10:702 (1) - Use this spinner for outro :/

1. Keep in mind : Strong beats should be expressed using a clickable note or jump in higher difficulties, or just as a clickable note(circle or slider's head) in easier difficulties.
2. 00:00:567 (2,3) - If you are trying to go in a circle, at least make these curves go smoother like a circle.
3. 00:02:999 (1) - One of the examples, the tail of the slider actually should be clickable, piano is very strong on every big white ticks.
4. 00:04:216 (3,4) - Again, if you are trying to go in a circle, make them curve like a circle.
5. 00:06:243 (1) - Like the example above, tail of this slider should be clickable.
6. 00:09:486 (6) - ^^ and so on.
7. 00:10:297 (1,2,3) - You shouldn't do this in Hard, going back and forth like this arouse confusion for players.
8. 00:11:107 (3,4) - Slider's tails are not perfectly overlapped. Fix them.
9. 00:12:729 - So you used 0.75x SV here, but then you changed back to 1.0x SV at 00:25:297 when they are all the same piano parts. I suggest you should just stick with 1.0x SV.
10. 00:28:134 (1,2) - Again, try to make them look like circles.
11. 00:30:364 (2) - This slider doesn't match the vocals. You could do something like what I did :
    
    
12. 00:34:013 (7,1,2,3,4) - They are way too cramped to make a square-ish pattern. Don't do this, you can instead go for more sliders.
13. Aaand so on with the flow problems. For calm songs like this, use more sliders than circles.
14. These are some problems I found, try to find more of these as well as some of the problems similar like Easy and Normal and earlier parts of Hard, as the problems are literally recurring.
15. 00:39:486 (4) - Why did you do this? This does not fit... The place where you placed your finish should be a clickable note, you know it is a strong beat.
16. 00:49:621 (1) - Don't backtrack, again can arouse confusion.
17. 00:52:256 (2) - This 1/4 slider with a repeat does not fit. You can make sure by listening at 50% playback rate. (At the bottom right of your screen)
18. 00:55:905 (1,2) - Don't do this, in Hard you want to be just following the direction the previous slider was heading towards.
19. 01:02:594 - This place definitely has a strong beat, make this a clickable note.
20. You can see now that the problems are recurring. Fix them, do some self-mod will be also good.

- Castaway - wrote:

Mod request D (kinda M4M)

General
sry...was lazy and didn't make url links D:...just copy and PASTAA
when i say same shape i mean copy and paste
please blanket properly i didnt point them all out..
the straight sliders should be angled abit to help the flow of the map


Hard

00:01:378 (4) - I know this is a bit meh...but it would look better the same shape as 00:00:567 (2) -
00:05:837 (2) - same shape as 00:05:026 (5) -
00:06:445 (3,4,5) - when you play this part it feels weird cuz they are the same sounds and same beat apart but the distances are different. A jump doesn't fit here, try:http://puu.sh/iKCqX/7e2fe7fe0f.JPG
01:11:716 (1,2,3) - ^
00:15:567 (5,1) - blanket properly
00:21:851 (4) - why is this so far away D:
00:21:243 (3) - try keep it consistent with 00:23:472 (3,4) - i like the jump here. ur choice tho.
00:39:486 (1) - why repeats here...no beats there. this is better:http://puu.sh/iKCNO/865d17f358.JPG
00:45:364 (3) - not everything must be stacked...
00:11:918 (4) - ^, i will leave it up to u to decide on the positions...there are many good ones
00:11:107 (2,4) - same shape..ctrl+c, ctrl+v please and rotate...looks better
00:58:540 (1) - ctrl+j feels better
00:57:324 (3,4,5) - straight sliders don't have to be horizontal or vertical all the time...here it feels better on an angle like this:http://puu.sh/iKD71/6a0781cfb4.JPG
01:13:134 (1,2,3) - ^
00:50:432 (1) - ^
00:44:756 (2) - ^
00:27:324 (4) - ^
00:16:378 (2) - rotate 20 degrees is better
i could ask u to rotate like every straight slider...making it vertical and horizontal all the time makes the flow really weird. I think u could play the map and find the errors so keep in mind i havent listed them all.
00:16:783 (3,4) - more beautiful D (ask me if u don't know how to make it more beautiful D)
00:59:351 (3,4) - ^
00:37:459 (1,2,3,4) - looks nice but the flow is weird
00:48:202 (5) - the flow is weird...its directly above the last slider :\
00:52:864 (1,2) - more beautiful blanket/slider
01:07:053 (2,3) - ^

Normal

same thing as hard...straight sliders

00:07:459 (1) - better blanket
00:39:891 (2,2) - same shape
00:42:729 (1,2,3,1,2) - woah...weird maybe move 00:43:134 (2) - to x:324 y:112
00:45:567 (3,4) - ^
00:47:189 (2,4) - same shape please
00:41:107 (2,3) - same shape
00:53:270 (1,2) - more beautiful D
01:13:945 (1,2,3) - consistent shapes just rotated please

Crimmi's Flashlight

00:11:716 - note here??
00:11:107 (4,5,6,1) - Distances makes this really difficult to read fix this please
00:44:553 (2,3,4) - fix the triplet please
00:53:270 - u could have a note here as well, make a jump
00:57:121 (4,5,1) - don't understand this rhythm
00:05:432 (6) - move to x:256 y:272
00:21:040 (6) - make more beautiful D
00:49:621 (3,5) - same shape

could improve and hope i helped GL~